Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 7 (ek duje ke vaaste)

Hello guys….!! ๐Ÿ˜€

M again wid prt 7 of my ff……
Thanks a lot fr ur precious cmmnts on prev prt….
Keep cmmnting n loving… <3
Hope u lyk this also….!
Well so sorry fr late update actually net prob in my iPad or ep Bhi iPad Mai hi tha…thank fully….I can post it today…. ๐Ÿ™‚

Prev: truth n dare game sm masti, romance…sumo goes to shr room…
Shr cms in his room n is shocked to c sumo…
——-PART 7———–
Continue….

Sumo is standing in shocked….shr is also shocked bcz he sees diary in her hand…
Tears rolls down frm her face…
Shr slightly: sumo………….
—she luks at him in deep shock—-
S: u……….love me??

(SUSPENSE KHUL GAYA ๐Ÿ˜‰ )

(Smone of u were correct) ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

Shr: no…..no…..I.,,I…..
S: how can u……love…….u knw I……..hate love……u….(she remembers abt game)
In game…..u said….abt love…..it WS me…….ri8?
Shr nods…….
(She realizes smthing)
I understand ……….Ooh that's y…..u…made d bet…
—-Shr gets a double shock bcz she is misunderstanding him—–
Shr: no….no
S: that's y u….asked abt kiss….u want to take this frndship on dat level…
Shr: no….no….yr u r misunderstanding me….that's not lyk it…..
S: how can u love…..(she cries) u knw my parents separated bcz of this….
Shr: no sumo…..I knw……I don't love u…
S: how can u lie…!! (She shows him diary) I have this proof….n u r still lying??
Shr: look sumo……it it's 2010 diary see….when we were 18…..I came to u…that day……..

FLASHBACK:
2010:
It's sumo's 18 birthday…
Shr: today I will tell her how much I love her I knw……she will accept me after all I m her childhood FRND…..
—he takes out a diary (same diary) n a red rose—-
Shr: I will give her this diary….this special diary…n this red rose after I propose her…
—he happily reaches her home—
Bt he finds her sitting on couch in shock n sadness…..
—-he gets shock—- n goes to her…
Shr: sumo!! Wat happend???
S: I got my bday gift…..
Shr: wat happend….
S: mom got preeti's custody n dad got mine……….mom is leaving tonight….
—shr gets shocked—-
(She cries)
S: shr!!!!!! I got my bday gift!!! (She cries hard)…….
Shr: it's okyyy (he consoles her) shhh….everything's gonna be okyy
S: no…nothin is gonna be okyy……
—-she coldly says—-
Love ki koi value nai hoti………(she luks at her parents wedding pic) sirf ego ki value hoti hai………Frm now on now I hate love….I hate…..love….I….
(she strts cry again)
—shr gets a double shock—-
—he hugs her—
Sumo plzz don't cry…….
S: I do t want to lose a best FRND lyk u…….
Shr is very sad bt try to control his sadness:
Shr: yes……..I will be always there fr u……………..as a FRND..
S: thank u……
—he crushes d red rose n puts it into his pocket—

PRESENT:
S: why didn't u tell me???
Shr: I came to tell u….bt u….were nt in ur senses…..u were keep saying u hate love….how can I…….
Sumo picks up the same rose frm diary……..
S: this WS d rose u want to give me ri8???
—shr sadly nods…..
—–she puts it back—-
S: u should told me y u kept it a secret in all these years…..
Shr: cause I don't want to lose a FRND lyk u…….
S: FRND or luv…..??
Shr: plzz believe me I've moved on…..all these years I treated u as my best FRND u tell…me……kabhi tumhe aisa LAGA Mai tumse pyaar karta hoon…??
S: u said u loved me….saccha pyaar itni aasani se nahi bhula ya jata shr…
Shr: I m sorry………plzzzz I don't want to lose u I already lost my love once now I don't want to lose my bestie also………
S: no……u doesn't lose ur bestie………
(a smile papers on shr face)
S: u…r my best….FRND…..n will always be….I will not end my relationship wid u bcz u had help me a lot in my hard days…..
.bt maybe frm now on our relationship Won't be lyk before……..
Shr: plzz don't say this……
S: plz don't meet me fr sm days I don't want to c u…..
Shr: plzzz……..
S: shr I need tym……plzzz stay away fr sm days…….
—-shr don't want her to go—–
S: good by shr………
—she leaves n he breaks down n sits on knees—-

Here all frnds (Khush,adi,ayesh,rohit are listening this)
——they all r shocked—–
They cm inside……
Adi: shr………
Shr: I want smtym alone…..plzzz
—Khush sign everyone to leave—-
—-Khush pats on shr shoulder—-
Ro: we will cm tommorow bro…..
They all leave include Khush….
OUTSIDE…
Ayesh: so as we all knw abt d situation here….
K: we must help them…..
Ro: bt how????
Adi thinks smthing……
A: hey Khush give me ur phone….
(He takes her phone n dials preeti's num)
Ayesh: y r u dialling preeti's num…
—Khush understands smthing—-
K: cause prob ki jarrrr theek Karna zaroori hai…..
(She smiles)

—all r confused except Khush n adi—

—-preeti picks up call——
Preeti in shock: wat..?? Shr n di..!!?? How ??

Sumo cms home…she straight goes to her room sits on bed n cries…..
S: y didn't u told me once……u lied to me all these 6 years….(she holds her head)
Whenever I want to get rid of love….it cms again n stands in front of me…..
She remembers all her moments wid shr…..
How they used to fight wid eaChOther on small things……
(She smiles)

Then she remembers d bet abt kiss…..
—-she gets into thinking—–
S: y kiss…?? If u don't love me……anymore..

Then she remember d last thing abt game..where khushi asked shr did he ever love anyone……..
N shr said yes…..
The ques echoes in her mind…..
(She holds her head)
S: uffffff……….wats happening to me……
She is irritated n lyes on her bed…..
She thinks….
"Shr is my best FRND I shared everything wid him…..bt now…?? "

Shr in the other side is in his room….
Shr: I knw……she will nt forgive me….
(He sits on his bed n takes out a pic frm his drawer)
—-it's his n sumo's pic ——
Shr: I m so sorry sumo………plz forgive me……
.(he remembers the incident)
Or will u break all her relationship wid me??
(He gets concerned n scared)
no…….shr u r fool Jo baat 6 year se chup I hoi thi….Aj usne kaise diary dekhli…….
6 years before I lost my love n now after 6 years I lost my best FRND also……
He gets sad……
Nai Mai aisa nai hone de Sakta…….

Preeti cms near her room she saws sumo…..
She is talking on phone wid Gang (Khush ,adi,rohit,ayesh)
—guys she only came to meet her dad n sumo di other wise she lives separate Wid priya (their mum)—–
P: don't u have to worry abt di….I understand all plan….I can give my lyf fr di….n this is tooo small…..
(she smiles n cuts d call)
P thinks: don't worry di…….u always helped me..fr d Frst tym I get a chance to help u….n trust me I will nt let go this opportunity….
……I will make everything perfect as ever……
(She smiles)

NXT MORNING……

Sumo cms to breakfast table….
Preeti n kartik r already present there……
S: good morning dad….
(she saws preeti)
S: hyyyyy
(they hug eaChOther)
P: hy di!!! ๐Ÿ˜€
S: tu yahan??
P: haawwww I can't cm??
S: hahaha no buddhu u can its ur house…..
K: sumo madam ko congratulations karo……she finally graduated….
—sumo looks at preeti in surprise n shock—-
S: preeti..??!!!! Wat graduated ho gai tu…???
(sumo is dammmm happy)
P: Hehehehehehehe finally
(They hug eaChOther in happiness..)
P: I came to take u…….(sumo give her a surprised expression) oo hooo di don't u remember u were suppose to cm yesterday….to meet mom….(sumo looks down remembering) bt u didn't…..cm we r going today at mom's house….mom is missing u…….
(Kartik looks on)
(Sumo luks at kartik)
(He again gets busy in reding news paper)
P: ahhh papa u too…..
(kartik luks on surprised)
P: papa u have to cm wid us…..
(sumo signs preeti nt to ask bt preeti is preeti…… ๐Ÿ˜€ )
P: plzzzz papa plzzzz plzzzz….papa I want I family dinner as my gift plzz (Kartik thinks bt then says yes only fr her daughter sake..,,,n sumo is very much surprised)
K: okkk m going to my room…preeti..?
P: after lunch……..
(N smiles)
—-kartik nods n goes—–
—-sumo is damm surprised——
S: wow preeto must say tu kamal hai yr u forced dad n he agree……wow…..mom n dad face to face…it will be…………(She remembers everything yesterday's incident abt love…..)……..awesome…….
P: woh to Mai hooon….(she notices) di…??? Where have u lost….??
S: aaa Han…??? Nai kuch nai….I think I should take rest…..
P: ok ok…..bt plz be ready…..it will be a grand dinner…..
Sumo smiles n leaves fr her room…..

While stepping on stairs sumo thinks..
'No I should nt thinks abt this shr chap………(she luks at preeti who is busy in mob……n is sooo happy….) I should concentrate on this…..my family…my sis…she is happy…..I m suppose to be happy…….'
—sumo goes—-

Preeti thinks:
'I knw di…..wat r u thinking…..I knw it will be hard fr u to stay away frm ur bestie….to fake a smile fr my……our family sake… Bt trust me di……I will try my best..
(She luks at a pic of her shr n sumo in her mob) ……….of making everything Oky……it's ur sis promise….'

Preeti smiles….

—–SCREEN FREEZES ON PREETI'S SMILING FACE——–

Precap; dinner at priya (sumo's mom house) sumo gets a call frm Khush……n is shocked……
Sumo: wat….???!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

So guys how WS d ep….?? ๐Ÿ˜€
Tooo emotional……
I made it little longer cause I posted late…..
sorry if I bored u all……,

Hhaha finally suspense khul Gaya….

So here is d ques: wat do u think wat Khush told sumo That she is sooo shocked??
Wat will be sumo's next move toward's shr after this incident…???

Ok now most important ques…..
Guys plzz plzz tell me now….when I ask abt kiss bw them, toh many of u asked me that they r frnds na…..so they r not frnds now…n m asking again…..

DO U GUYS WANT A KISS SEQUENCE OR NOT…….??

Plzz ans carefully u all knw the situation….so ans is really needed plzz after this I will decide whether to put it in ff or nt….don't forget to give ur ans…
N I will go wid majority…. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Ok guys…agar if u lyk this ep itto sa Bhi then plzz cmmnt n give ur feedbacks…
Silent readers plzzz cmmnts r really needed……

N YES AN "OS" IS ON D WAY………EXCITED…?? ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Ok guys till then byyyy byyyy…..
LOVE U ALL…!

44 comments

  1. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Aoa buddy !!!! This ep was fab .. u left me speechless though I guessed right bt phr b this ep kamaal dhamaal amazing … nd the question.. ummmmmm I think there would be a drama of accident of sharavan that will bring ShraMan close nd that’s y suman will left shock after Khush’s call … nd KISS ..
    umm ,, honestly I don’t wanna kiss
    sequence bcz if there is a kiss then now on the track will absurd ,,as sumo will misunderstand sharavan nd BLAH BLAH … bt u go wid majority ..
    OK now post very soon as m really very excited about the next part ..!!
    Stay healthy..!!!
    Stay blessed ..!!!!

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hyyyy my dear…!! ๐Ÿ˜€
      How r u….??
      Hahaha ๐Ÿ˜€ thank u sooo sooo sooo much fr such a sweet cmmnt yr…… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thanks a tone fr ur ans abt Precap……. ๐Ÿ™‚
      Ok thanks a lot fr ur ans……n kiss sequence tum Bilkul correct ho dear…..abhi ki situation Mai toh kiss abhi nai sakti…….agar aaati hai toh…itni jaldi nai aaigi…pehle story ko us level pr le kar Jana pade ga……so it’s not nw..
      Ok dear….. I will try to post ASAP ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Thanks a tone fr sweet wishes…..
      May god bless u to….. ๐Ÿ™‚
      Love u…!!! <3
      Wid lots of luv
      Maria…..

  2. sona

    Very..spcl episode of this ff..
    Suspense khul gaya…๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šโ˜บโ˜บ
    Aur..ha..abh Jo chaho..vo….likho..kiss..ya hug..ur wish…we will enjoy it nw…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ
    Aur about phone call..pakka khushi..shravu k Bary mey boot kaha hoga..badawala๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hello sona di…! ๐Ÿ˜€
      Thank u soooo much fr ur special sa cmmnt ;)๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
      Hahaha thank u so much fr ur ans abt d sequence n๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ abt d Precap…..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
      We’ll c wat will happen in nxt ep….. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Nandini aka Nandu

      Btw sona di how old are you? Well u amy find it a little quirky because we never talk ti each kther. But trust me, i read ur comments and so just asked. Hope u dont mind it. And us ur real name sona too?

  3. Nandini aka Nandu

    Haanji suspense toa gaya par aap apni aadato se baaz nahi aayi precap mai fir suspense. I think ki shayad shravu kahi jaa raha hai (u know leaving the place and all stuff) ya fir most commonly uska accident ho gaya and maybe yeh sab jhoot kaha hoga to trap sumo. Abhi mera dimaag isse zaaa nahi chal sakta. And yes, really excited for the os. Well, i dont vote for a kiss aage as per ur wish. Aur waise, kya haalchaal??
    Lots of love, keep writing and posting. And bhagwan kare sab ke electronics sahi rahe.aaj kal pata nahi kyu sab ke kharab ho rahe hai. How are studies going???

    • Marie

      |Author

      ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚Hhahaha nadini yahi toh meri speciality hai “suspense rakh na”๐Ÿ˜‚
      Ok dear thank u so much fr ur ans……
      We’ll c wat will happen in nxt chappy……….๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
      Hmm ok thanks fr ur ans abt kiss……..
      Haahahahah ok….
      M fyn yr…..bs busy in studies….specially wid maths n physics….
      N tum kaisi ho…???? ๐Ÿ˜€ all okyyyy??
      Hahahah ye baat Bilkul sahi kahi hai sab ke electronics theek hi Rahen…..
      Studies r going well bss tests will be going to strt soon.,…

      Love u tooooooooo…!! ๐Ÿ˜˜
      Wod lots of luv
      Maria….

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Haanji yeh tao bilkul pata chal gaya.- apki speciality.. welcs for the answer.same haal with me- maths but not luckily physics.mai bhi fine-fine. Yes , all okay. Luck for ur tests. Wish me for mine too!

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Its great. Thank god and am glad ki mai bachi hui hai. Touch wood! Lots of love aur haan pls batao when r u gonna post it? Pleasee.

        P.S. – lots of love for u again.

      • Marie

        |Author

        Hhahaha ๐Ÿ˜€ yep Congo u r safe….
        Awww thank u so much my dear…
        I love u toooo much se Bhi ziada…! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
        Umm I will post n OS nxt after that I will post nxt chappy….
        So I will post an OS maybe tomorrow or d day after tomorrow n after 1 or two days I will post nxt chappy… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Neeti

    Bhaoo….. Maria di it’s me, Neeti. How are you? Phir se suspense. I also think khudh shravu ke bare me bol rahi hi. But don’t know kya bola. Aur itni si bacchi ke samne kiss scene mat rakho to mera jabab no he, baki apki marzi. Bye Maria di

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hyy my neeto (can i call u this if u dont mind ๐Ÿ™‚
      M fyn dear
      how r u……??
      Ok dear thank u soooooo much fr ur ans abt everything…
      N thanks a tone fr cmmnting here… ๐Ÿ˜€
      Love u dear……
      Byy.. ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Mariaโ€ฆ
    how r u??
    wowโ€ฆ It was amazing yrโ€ฆ
    really xcited for nxt epi nd for the Os as wellโ€ฆ
    Lots of Love
    Ruchi ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. Anamika

    Hey maria baby sorry to e late
    Ans no 1- may be somthing happened to shravu n khushi informed this to sumo
    Ans no 2- sumo will run to shravu n check wht happened to him
    Ans no 3- kiss sequence will be gud if confession takes place first or a sudden kiss may be..,
    Hehe juada hogya na
    N the epi was osm dear
    Jldi se nxt part post kro

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hello di…..! ๐Ÿ™‚
      Aww plz don’t say sorry…..it’s never late fr me……only ur sweet word matter…. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Ok thank u so so much fr ur all ans….
      Fr ans 1,2 we’ll c in nxt chappy weather u r ri8 or nt….
      N yeah abt ans 3…..don’t worry dear…..agar koi aaisa scene aaya Bhi toh itni jaldi aai ga hi nai…..pehle story us level tak jai gi…..then… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Hahaha ๐Ÿ˜€
      Okkk I will post nxt chappy ASAP….
      Lots of luv
      Maria ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Maro mai sahi this yipeee hurray
    I knew it
    Wow
    Superb
    Bs but hogi khush an Teri ff ki turn
    U mutlrdered me
    Itna aacha kon likhta hai very bad
    Just kidding
    It was awesome
    Lekin sorry papers aa rhe hai is lkye tere ques ka no ans
    And kiss wala scene teri marji tu kya chahati hai
    Byee
    Love from me

    • Marie

      |Author

      Haha Congo my dear u were ri8…! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      So much fr ur sweet cmmnt yr…..!!
      No prob yr……
      Thanks fr ur ans abt sequence….! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      N study hard
      All d best fr that…! ๐Ÿ˜‰
      Love u tooooooooooo….
      Bye..

  8. ufaq

    Knock knock love
    Epi was full on mast I lovrd it
    It was soooooo gud I liked it
    Cant post r comments bc my tab blew off due to high voltage
    Soooo take care
    Love u
    Apiii

    • Marie

      |Author

      Opening door…………………..
      Thank u soooo
      Sooo much fr such a sweet cmmnt API… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Oooohhhh god tab blew off !!!?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
      Jaldi se sai karwalo API……plz
      U toooo take care…
      Love u too much se Bhi ziada…
      Frm ur choti sis ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. Naina

    Hi maro how r u?????? Kitna bolti ho hamy to bolny ka moqa hi nahi dety btw epi was really amazing mujhy to pata hi nahi chala k itna long ha at the end i thought itna chota kyun but seriously mujhy bht maza aata ha parhny ma and kiss wala sequence abhi mat dalo bcz they r friends….. Yeah yeah i know that shr loves sumo since 6 years but sumo doesn’t love him right now and yeah one more thing post the epi asap and take care…… Lots of love bye

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy naina….m fyn dear how r u??? ๐Ÿ™‚ u knw wat m so happy to c ur cmmnt today cause u didn’t cmmnt on last 2 ep…haha ๐Ÿ˜€ mujhe Bolne ki bht adat hai or u can say bak bak Karne ki ๐Ÿ˜€
      thank u sooo sooo sooo much yr fr such a lovely cmmnt!! ๐Ÿ™‚
      Ok dear thanks a tone fr ur ans abt sequence….n don’t worry yr kiss sequence itni jaldi aai gi Bhi nai……
      N yes I will try to post ASAP…! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Take care…
      Love u toooooo!

  10. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    I’m fine and you can call me anything,like-apne bola neeto,niku,nits and naw. Naw because mera nam Nawshin bhi he. Lots of love post soon

    • Marie

      |Author

      Emetic I have a question yr can u tell me in which class u r studying in (if u don’t mind) ๐Ÿ™‚
      N frm where u r…..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy Anjali how r u my dear…?
      Thank u soo much fr ur precious cmmnt! ๐Ÿ™‚
      I will post my nxt prt tomorrow ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    marie it was fabulous dear can you give link for its introduction…!!!!!! love u loads sisso can i call you that???

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