pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 5 ( ek duje ke vaaste)

Hello guys!! πŸ˜€
Maria here wid d 5 prt of my ff hope u lyk it…!!

Khushi tells d truth to sumo dat shr cheated shr ask fr a kiss n sumo deny….
——-PART 5——–

S:plzzz yr kuch or mangle na…!!!
Shr thinks….,.
Shr:ummmm……..no
S:go to hell…..!!
……She goes frm there…..

…..Sumo reaches her home preeti is present there….
Sumo Ws damm happy to c preeti so does preeti…..
S:hyyyyy!!!! (They hug eaChOther tightly) how r u dear…!!
P: m fyn di…..how r u….,??
S:fyn shyn…! N mom……………(she saw kartik is sitting on sofa reading newspaper…….)
—–she gets sad——
S: how is mom?? (slowly)……
P: she is fyn di….bt she is missing u….
—sumo sighs—-
S:I will cm tommorow to meet her…
—preeti gets happy—-
P: dad!!!………….nai aain gai,………(sumo nods no)
—-preeti gets a call—–
P:acha di m going u must come tommorow okyyyyy!!
S:ok byyy…..

NXT DAY…….
Sumo is ready she cms sown stairs her dad (kartik) is busy in meeting wid sm woman
……After meeting kartik cms to breakfast table…..
….He kisses sumo on forehead….
S: good morning dad….
K:good morning princess….(he notice smthing) hey wat happend ??
S: nothin……
K: sumo….?????
S: this woman WS flirting wid u dad…..
K: hahhahah so?? Personality….!!!
S: dad……wo toh theek hai pr…..
K:I knw beta u think ke I will leave u never…….u r my daughter…
S: so that means…..
K: yes yes that means nothin she is just a business partners or there is only one woman in my lyf n that’s pri…….. ( he stops) (sumo looks on)
K: Oky beta m going by……( he leaves fr office here sumo is sad)
S: dad do u still love mom??? If yes so y r living separate…….?

After smtym…….
—-sumo reaches shr place—-
Everybody WS present there…..
Khush: thank god u came…….
Adi: cm sit game is almost start…..
—–They all sit——
Ayesh spines bottle…..
It stops on rohit….
—–Ayesha laughs——
Shr: ok Bata truth or dare….
R: dare…
S: ok ur dare is sing a romantic song fr ayesha….
——evrybody cheers——
He sings ( Mai hoon hero tera )…..Aankhon ke panno pe
Maine likha tha sau dafaa
Lafzon mein jo ishq tha
Hua naa hothon se bayaan

Khud se naraaz hoon
Kyun be-aawaaz hoon
Meri khamoshiyan hain sazaa
Dil hai yeh sochta
Phir bhi nahi pataa
Kis haq se kahun bataa
–He sits on his knees—-

Ke Main Hoon Hero Tera (x4)

(Main hoon hero hero tera)

—–Khushi spins d bottle—–
——it stopes on smone——

—–SCREEN FREEZES——-

Precap: game continue n shr goes closer to sumo……

ACHA GUYS IS KE BAAD I DO U WANT N OS IF YES THEN KIS TYPE KA??
Emotional-romantic
Romance hi romance……
Plzzzz plzzzz ans this…..

So guys how WS d ep… ???
Sorry guys it I bored u cause I knw there r less shraman scenes bt guys family ke baare Mai Bhi Batana zaroori tha….
Sooorrryyyy plzzz is ke liay mujhe chappals ya tomatoes mardena magar no rotten eggs yuckkkkkk uski smell bht buri hoti hai….!!
Hahahhahah so agar ap LOGON ko Aj ka ep pasand aaya then plzz plzz cmmnt guys I really want it…..!!
N silent readers u toooooo cmmnts plzzz..!!

Love u all…..!!

27 comments

  1. Lily

    Nice epi…. And I would like to read a
    Os which is

    πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ romance romance πŸ’šπŸ’š

  2. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Ep was fantabulous!!! I luv it 😊😊😊 … nd OS I think it should be emotionally romantic … romance hi romance zyada hi bonga ho jata hy … so it’s my opinion .. the decision is up to u .. BTW try to post veryyyyy sooooooon … will b waitin’eagerly !!!
    Thanks!!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awwww thank u thank u soooo much dear….!!
      And thank u so much fr ur valuable ans dear….!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
      I will post ASAP….!! πŸ˜‰

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awwww thank u thank u soooo much dear….!!
      And thank u so much fr ur valuable ans dear….!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
      I will post ASAP….!! πŸ˜‰
      Lots of luv πŸ˜€

  3. Naina

    Yup todays epi was good but i wish i would b long and yeah i want an os and that should be romance hi romance ok take care love u maro bye

    • Marie

      |Author

      Ok dear thanks alot fr telling me i will mske nxt 1 long πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      n thank u so much fr ur valuable ans dear…….
      U too take care dear…….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Love u toooo πŸ™‚
      Byy

    • WeirdSister

      |Registered Member

      Hey naina… R u angry wid me or something…?…coz u r not reading my ff nowadays…at first I thought u r busy…but then..I saw that u r reading everybody else’s ff….except mine….plz tell if there’s a prblm….!!

      Sry maria for using ur comment section…I hope u dont mind…!…I couldn’t connect to her by any other way…..😒😒

  4. ufaq

    Hi love
    Hahaha chappals
    No I like the epi that was amazing I like sumu preeti bonding
    I liked epi but song…………..
    Ahhhh leave it anyway
    Love u
    Take care

  5. Marie

    |Author

    Hy api..!! πŸ˜€
    hehehe thank u so much fr sweet cmmnt api….. πŸ™‚
    Bs us waqt jo dimagh mai aaya likh dia song…….
    Love u toooooooooooo <3
    Take cate….

  6. LovelyLady

    |Registered Member

    sry fr late cmmnt….
    actually maine kl hi cmmnt post kr diya tha bt netwrk prblm bahut jyada tha….
    send hone ka intezar krte krte mai kb so gyi pta hi ni chala…….
    epi was goodd… family k bare me batana jaruri tha bt … next epi me shraman romance pkkaaaa chahiye….
    serial me bhi itna serious chal rha h ki dimag kharab ho gya h….
    ab to mai isi weak tk serial dekh paungi…. πŸ™
    post asap…

    • Marie

      |Author

      Why r u saying sorry di……lateness does nr matter cmmnt matters πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ Han Han mil jai ga Lekin bharpooooor nai mile ga kyun ke they r frnds na…..
      Hahahah serial Mai toh sacchi Mai hi bht serious chal raha hai…..
      Kyun di hostel Mai tv nai hoga Lekin internet toh hoga na…….
      I will try to post ASAP…! πŸ™‚

  7. Nandu

    Really good maria dear aur haan please next time isko thora lamba likhna. Please. And yes we def want an os. The theme, i mean the genre- i leave it on you. Keep writing and haan most important baat. Fur suspense. Chalo suspense nahi but itna exciting kyu rakhti ho. No offences.

    Lots and lots of love.

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot fr such a sweet cmmnt nandini dear….!!
      Ok dear Mai lamba likho gi nxt tym…… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Aww thanks a lot fr ur valuable ans dear…!! <3
      Hahahah suspense ok dear…….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ bs suspense khul hi jai ga dear… πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

      Love u toooooooo dear…! πŸ˜€

  8. pretty preeti

    Wow wow maro what an damakedar epi the song I was singing it with reading nice song also I m very excited for ur os also gud epi and precap it was very exciting will waiting for next ff epi and os post both soon
    Sorry for late commenting so sorry
    Its me only
    Ur preeto

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awwww preeto don’t say sorry yr….!! Lateness doesn’t matters cmmnt matters..! πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚
      Well m soooo happy to c ur sweet sa cmmnt dear…! I will try to post both ep n OS soon ..! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Lots of love dear…!

  9. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    It was damn amazing.. Loved it.. And about the OS I want romance n romance.. Bhot time se aise nahi padhe’.. Waiting for your OS n the next time

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