Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 23 “ONE MOTH GAP AND A SAD NEWS FOR U ALL” (ek duje ke vaaste)

Hey guys….
Ur sis maria here hope u all didn’t forget me ………….
Frst of all toH…………

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I know I promised to all that I will be available fr this week but I m hell busy n it’s was so SO so hard fr me….to take tym n write this but it’s fr u all my sisters or brother or di’s……,,,,,,
I m really sorry if I did somthing to hurt u……cause I have an important msg in last please read it……hope it will not hurt u all………
N guys I m really not happy today cause as u all heard our beloved show
“EK DUJE KE VAASTE IS GOING OFF AIR ON 7 OCT 2016”

PLEASE READ THE MSG AT THE END………….
Noe enough of my talks let’s come to ep……….
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Prev:Previously: shraman alliance fixed….they are shocked but said yes……
Recap: khush confession of doing everything, sumo heard everything before engagement…..later….sumo n shr r standing on stange in front go eachother with rings in their hands……she luks at shr…….n makes him wear rings all claps…..

Today:Precap: sumo to have a fight with shr n he gets angry….she gets shocked Hear that he didn’t do anything….later she finds out….about Preeti’s prob….n gets tensed

Continue:
Preeti comes on stage n announces that it’s tym for a romantic dance of our couple……
Sumo feels awkward…..a bit but dances with shr…….on song tere sang yaara….
They dance so romantically….
Shr: sumo………..r u oky……
S: hmmmm
Shr: well I don’t think so………
S: if u don’t think so then y r u asking….???
Shr surprised: wat happened to u…?? R u oky…??
S tearly eyed: m I looking???
Shr shocked: come with me……
(He takes her to n empty room)

Shr wat happened…..
He comes near her but she pushes him
S: don’t come near me…..u liar u cheater….!!!
(She gets a big shock )
Shr: wat r u saying wat sis I do???
S: ooohhhh wow!!!!! Really u r asking me!!!????? Wat did u do????!!!!!
(She claps)
S: wow mr shr malhotra don’t know wat he has done…!!!
Shr: enough sumo tell me frst what did I do…!!
S: ask ur Mind…!!!
(She strts to go but he holds her hand frm back n pins her to the wall)
Shr: enough is enough u said I heard but I won’t let u leave until u tell me wat did I do???!
S: Oooh really then hear….!!!
(She tells him everything wat she heard in the room)
Shr: god!!!!!! Really n u think I did this all??!!!!
S: no no….!!!! U r not alsone even my frnds are with u wow!!!!!! It was all ur plan shr…!!!!
Shr: u knw that I will never ever break ur trust !!!! N still u r..!!!
S: Han still I m!!! Cause u lied!!
Shr: listen to me now!!! U only heard half things let me tell u full!!
(He tells her everything n she gets shocked)

S: wat…!??? U didn’t………..?
Shr: yes I also got to know when she told me before ENGAGMENT !! I decided to tell u but Priya aunty didn’t let me go to ur room!!!
Khush along with the gang enters in the room…..
K: wat happened y did u two leave the dance in bw…??
S: y did u do that….??
K: what…??
Shr: no need to do dis drama anymore I told her everything…….
All gets shocked…..
K: sumo listen to me…….
S: SHUT THE HELL UP!!!!!!!!!!!
(Khush gets scared)
S: NO NO NO…!!!!!!!! I WARNED U SO MANY TYMS…. Not to do did all but u !!! U NEVER LISTNED TO ME!!!!!! U ALWAYS DO WAT U WANT…!!! Y DID U INTERFERE IN MY LIFE!!!!! U GET ME ENGAGED TO SHR…..U KNEW THAT I DONT HAVE FEELINGS FR HIM BUT U DID THIS!!!!!!
(Sumo was shouting)
K also shouts : no u r wrong!!!!!! WAT I DID WAS RI8 FR U!!!! SHR IS THE ONLY BOY WHO CAN UNDERSTAND U MORE THAN ANYONE WHO CAN TOLERATE U!! UR ANGER!!!! UR CHILDISH DEEDS!!!!!!!!!! HE IS BEST FOR U AND WAT WERE U SAYING ABOUT LOVE???? IT WILL DEFINATELY HAPPENS AFTER MARRIAGE!!!

S was about to slp khush but stopped
S: I can’t even also u!!!! Ahhhhhhhh
K: sumo wat I did was just for ur best….!!!!
S: no u didn’t!!!!
K: u will realize one day
(Saying this she left from there all followed her…..)
Now it’s only shr n sumo in the room…….
S: I….I m sorry….for not believing u…..
Shr: no need……
(He takes off his ring n goes…..leaving sumo totally shocked)
…..she breaks down n cries……….

Next day:
Sumo is in her room…….sleeping when Priya comes to her……to wake her up….
P: beta sumo…….wake up it’s 10:00
Sumo wakes up……
Priya gets shocked see her swollen eyes..,..
P: sumo u cried last ni8!!!!
S: no…mom……..!!
P: don’t lie…..
S lies: yes mom I was think after my marriage i will have to leave u all….
(N she says other emotions family stories…../it’s just a lie/)
P hugs her……
P: I love u beta
S: I love u too mom…….
P: ok now get ready…..n come down……
S: acha mom where is Preeti…??
P: I didn’t saw her frm last ni8 maybe in her room…..
S: ok

HALF AN HOUR:
Shr comes to the washroom…….
She sits on the bed…..remebring everything……
She also looks at the ring of shr…………which he took off last ni8…….
Sumo cries………
S: I m sorry shr……..

AFTER SOMETYM:
Sumo comes to Preeti room n finds her sitting on the floor…..
S shouts Preeti!!!!
Yes Preeti is crying badly……but on hearing sumo’s shouts she stops crying….
S: wat happened !!??
P: nothing di……
(She strts to go n gets up but sumo stops her )
S: Preeti plzz bata !!!
Preeti breaks down again…n hugs sumo…….
Sumo thinks that it’s abt last ni8 cause Preeti was also with the gang…..

P while crying badly: di I m doomed!!!!!!! Di save me please…..!!!!!
S: wat happened dear!!! (While caressing her hairs)
P: di he will not leave me…..
(Sumo gets shocked…..)
S: who…..???!!!!
P: Rahul!!
S: who Rahul!!!????
P: my ex friend….!!!….boy friend…..!!
S gets shock: wat?!!?!!!!!!!!
P: he made my mms
S can’t believe p words now: wat the hell r u saying…???!!!!! When did this happened…..!!!!!
P: when we come to Paris I met him in a library….then we strts talking n became friends……n one day he said that he love me….I believed him…..we went for shopping…..he said to me to kiss him I refused……I went to changing room…for trying clothes……n he made my mms…………
S: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P hugs sumo: please di do somthing now he is demanding for money !
S: wat…!!!! No no no please don’t cry we will do smthing…….
P: thank u so much di……….I m really scared……..please please forgive ke di…!!!! I didn’t tell u…!!!!!
S hugs her again: shh nothing will happen……..
S: Chalo now sleep……u r looking tired……
P: but di…..
S: nothing will happen…..
P: please do don’t tell mom n dad they will kill me….
S: no no no I will not……..
She makes Preeti sleep………

Sumo comes to her room………
She comes to main hall……..
S: wat to do now….I can’t tell mom and dad that will….kill! Preeti!! So….group no…..!!!
(She checks her mob…..n finds shr name on the top….)
S: shr……………………………

…………SCREEN FREEZES…………

PRECAP: no precap.

Ques: wat u think will shr forgive sumo like u all forgive me….?? Foe not believing him….????
Will he help her…..???

So guys I will not ask how was this cause I know it was bad no it was actually worst……but believe me u tried to put all the charm in it I have ri8 now……
N guys I n mentally not in my senses after listening this devastating news which u all also have heard……
“EDKV IS GOING OFF AIR ON 7 OCTUBAR 2016”
N guys it’s confirmed……by namik Paul the main lead by other cast members producers n directors also……….

My papers have been strting soon….so i will not be able to comment on everyone post……but I wills surely reply u all one last tym….
I will be un available from TOMMOROW to 20 OCTUBAR…….
I know i know it’s a long tym..,…… And I M SO SO SO SORRY FOR THAT GUYS……

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But I have a most important question…..guys WHEN I come back edkv will be ended…..so I want to ask that if u all r liking my ff….??? I Will post my next ep after 20 or on 20 but I want to ask that do u liking it or want me to stop forever…….
Please that important…..no ans means I will stop…….
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THIS DRAMA IS SO CLOSE TO ME I M CRYING RI8 NOW CAUSE ITS GOING TO END VERY SOON…..GUYS THIS DRAMA IS CLOSE TO ME CAUSE IT GAVE ME AMZING SISTERS LIKE U…..I WAS NOT A WRITER N TRUST ME I M WORST WRITER ON THIS PAGE I KNOW THAT…..BIT THANK U SO MUCH FOR ACCPTING MY BAKWASS TOLERATING MY PAGAL PANTI……..ALL…….I LOVE U ALL TO THE CENTER OF MY HEART…..
THANK U SO MUCH FOR ACCEPTING ME AS I M
“GUYS P,EASE PROMISE ME WE WILL NEVER EVER BE SEPERATE”
GONNA MISS U ALL IN THIS ONE MONTH……….
I WILL TRY TO COME FOR SOME TYM OR TRY TO POST IF POSSIBLE BUT 95% CHANCES ARE THAT I WILL NOT COME BACK FOR ONE MONTH……….
LOVE U ALL N WILL MISS U ALL
DONT FOR GET ME …….
UR PAGAL SISTER MARIA……..

18 comments

  1. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    Hey Marie love ur ff as always and loved shraman dance Tera Sang Yaara is one of my fav song u r amazing
    Ya EDKV is ending 😭 I will miss it a lot

  2. Anushika

    |Registered Member

    HEY Marie,Loved this part,Waiting for it …
    Guys,Why not continue posting Shraman FF ‘s on this pg and continue this friendship on the pg…
    Hope CV’s will change their decision

  3. sona

    😐😐😐😐😐😢😢😢😕😕😕😕😕😕
    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    We will miss ur ff and edkv hardly…after 7thoct…
    But..we will b here waiting for you…☺☺😊😊😊😊

  4. Ruchi

    Hey my dear sissi…
    itna dhamakedar epi ke liye tum aisa kese keh skti ho…
    The news that edkv is ending broke my heart…
    Hope that the news that edkv turn out to be a fake one…
    it was mind blowing epi…
    i think Shraman would team up for Preeti…
    eagerly waiting for next epi…
    take care…
    come back soon…
    Love u…
    Ruchi… 😉

  5. Aishani Purkayastha

    Loved it Marie dii😘
    But shocked to know that EDKV is ending😭😭 but why..?? It was my fav. Serial and TRP was osum!! Whts d reason then??

  6. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Hey maria…
    It was not bad at all….!!
    I loved it..
    U hve really stopped it at a point where I will die of suspense…
    Loved it..
    😊😊😊😊
    I m gonna miss u like hell….!!!😢😢😢😢😢
    All dbest for ur exams…
    Hope to c u back soon…
    😊😊😊
    Love u loads..
    😊😊😆

  7. Deotima

    di even i am in a total shock. pls pray to d almighty.. this is d only way left.. have u signed d petition ?? if not do it soon..
    well epi was a dhamaka.. i think preeti is lying and its d plan of the gang..
    best of luck for ur exams..

  8. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Mario!!! U seriously made me cry now. I’m crying since a day or two over it. 1stly the epi was awesome!!! U ended with so much suspense…..I’m super excited.
    Now all the best for ur paper. Study is always 1st. A good news is as many fans r requesting Sony board, PH nd CVs, there r hopes of continuation but idk much. Sony is a jerk busy with their TRP. Hate them. Just praying so tht it continues.
    And y won’t someone enjoy such a bombed up ff like this. Yes u must continue or u’ll disappoint ur twin. Idk whether the EDKV corner will b there on TU after the show ends or will it b removed so can u PM me if possible after ur nxt epi is up so tht I don’t miss it.
    All the best for ur exams
    take care
    loads of love nd best wishes
    keep rocking
    love u sooooooooooooooooo much
    pls come back soon, I miss u

  9. Ishitasen

    |Registered Member

    hey. I m new to this website.plz can anyone tell me how to get older parts of any story with out going through all the back pages of website. I want all parts at one place like other ff websites

    • Marie

      |Author

      We really didn’t post any parts on one place so all u have to do is to find them in pages 🙁 sadly I also can’t dm u cause I have my tab n the link is not copying in it…….
      But thank u so much fr ur comment !

    • Maria

      |Registered Member

      You can type the name of the story in the search column up there and all the parts of that story will be found in that place☺

  10. Zainab

    Loved this episode. 💕
    Best of luck for your exams. 👍
    Waiting for 20th Oct now.
    Love you 😘 Take care <3

  11. aishana

    hey plz try to post soon
    it was fab…loved it
    and even I hope the news prove to be fake
    I think all ours prayers will be answered In positive
    u concentrate on ur xams ……all d best

  12. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    Sry sry mai late ho gai, actually parne mai nai likhne me. Jab ye epi pst huya tha usi wakt maine par liya bt I was crying na. U know I cried almost till 3am. I slept with much difficulty.
    Nd it was really nice. Mai samajh sakti hu kiku even I was nt in senses bt the Khraiji(crazy) fans did a magic, luv them. Hope Sony get some sense.
    Hai re, is Preeti ne to khandan ki nak katwa di :-P. Yeh kya hua kaise hua, kab hua kiu hua? Shravan got angry. Sumomma (Sumo+amma) ruined evrything.
    Crying, CRYING, CRYING, CRYING di pls cme back soon, now I dont even hve a fb acnt where I can talk with u! Pls cme back soon. Best of luck di. VijayVawa:-P. Di Aliza Swift di ko jara bolna mere create kiye hua group me aur photos dalne, I will cme back soon nd this time no 1 should be dhili:-P.
    Luv u, tc, all the best, come back soon- Neeti, Leeti, Sadti (sad+Neeti), Cryti (cry+Neeti)

  13. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Mariaaaaa do you remember me affa di… How are you baby… I missed you lot…. And ur ff.. Fantastic epi u rocked once again…. Mind blowing… I loved it a lot…. Maria ur sooooooo sweet.. How is ur studies… Keep rocking like this…love you lots

  14. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    Loveeeeeeeeee
    Where r u going????
    How dare u to leave a pi ????
    R itne lambs exams????
    PhD k hain kya???
    Love ki bachi wapis aja warna m tmhara dhum tanna Nana chin dhin kr dn ge chalo wapis come on
    Epi was damn gud
    Sorry for being late
    And ya come back
    A pi will be waiting
    Love u
    Best of luck for or exams
    Take care

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