Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 20 ( ek duje ke vaaste ) “special one”

Hey guys!!
Wats up??? πŸ˜€

So happy today…..!!! Cause it’s my 20th ep my previous ff “hate to love” ended on 19th ep it’s just bcz of ur love my sisters that I m able to reach here……..
THANK U SO MUCH !!

Thank u thank u so much for commenting on previous part…!!
So so so sorry that I didn’t reply even of one comment…..but guys believe me I m he’ll busy these days it so hard fr me to take time n to write mine……but guys it all for u fr ur happiness…….my practical so going to strt soon then my mids…n these r so important fr me….cause m in 10 class n it’s so hard….
But I want to thank indivisually to everyone…!!

Thank u so much ufaq API!!
Thank u so much Ruksar API !!
Thank u so much Ariana darling !!
Thank u so much Nikko (nikita)
Thank u so much Fatima!
Thank u so much thank u so much niyati (weird sis)
Thank u so much Preeto (pretty preeti)
Thank u so much RUCHI API…!!
Thank u so much sona di!
Thank u so much loga Megan
Thank u so much Shreela
Thank u so much Anjali
Thank u so much angel API…!! (Angel-pari)
Thank u so much zainab api
Thank u so much deotima
Thank u so much ananya98 πŸ™‚

Hope I didn’t miss anyone if yes then I apologize n I knw that these thank u aren’t enough fr ur sweetest n lovely comments cause ur comment r boosters fr me….!!
I again started comment on everyone’s ff…..jinke ff par nai Kia sorry guys but I read them they were amazingggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!

Really happy that u r liking the track…..!!!
So let’s strt our part 20
Hope u like this also πŸ˜‰

Previously: sumo is drunken she comes close to shr……he closes his eyes…..

——————–PART 20——————-
Continue….
MORNING:
Sumo wakes up and finds herself under bed sheet……she get up n is feeling headache……
S: ahhhh this headache……(she gets confused….seeing things around herself…..)
She goes to mirror…..n finds herself in a nighty…..
S: ye Mai……Kya….wats happening…;
Meanwhile…
Shr coms in room with breakfast…….
Shr: hey u woke up….???
S: nai I m sleeping……!!!!! Can’t u see….duffer
Shr: okay oky….chill baby….!!!
S: acha tell me I m feeling pain…in my head n this……
Shr gives a guilt look……
S understands somthing……
She turns around n finds his coat in the bed…..
S shocked: shr did somthing happens last ni8????
No answer—–
S: shr!!!!!!!!! I m asking smthing…!!!!!!!!
Shr: sumo……………plz listen to me…………..
S: shr….???!!!!
(He makes her sit on the bed…)
Shr: plzz listen carefully wat I m going to tell u…..
S in shock: Han….??
Shr: u n me were…………..and last ni8……..u were drunk….n we…both……
S gets more shock: shr…!!!!!! Plzzz say it clearly…,!!!!
Shr: ummm wo Mai kaise batao mujhe sharam……..
S eyes widen in shocked……..
S: why didn’t u stop me…???????!!!!!!!!!!!
Shr: I tried but…!!! I m a boy na…..so…..
(She strts crying…..)
S: no!!!! It’s not true….
Shr gets shock by her reaction…!!!
Shr: oky y r u crying….Aray…..!!!!
S: Nahi get lost…!!! (She pushes him) get lost…!!!! Wat did I do…!!
Shr: Aray I was joking…!!!!
(S gets shocked n luks at him…..he start laughing)
Shr: hadh hai sumo…!!!!! Hahahahahahha tum Kia Kia Sochi ho…!!
S: u r joking then this nighty………
Shr: Aray yr…..

FALSHBACK (LAST NI8):
Sumo is coming closer n closer to him…..Making him uncomfortable…..
Shr: plzzzz plzzz no no…………
(Suddenly she vomits…..)
Shr: thank god…..!!!!
(He calls khush n ayesh n they change sumo clothes)
He goes out….
Shr: thank god is at Bachhh gai….(he laughs)

PRESENT:
S: oooooohhhhhh so this happened………!!!!
Shr: ooo ki bachi !! U were out of control last ni8…!!! Who told u to drunk…???? Merii is at ka toh Sochti…!!!!!!
S: sorry yr I didn’t know it was wine……Badtameez !!! (She hits him hard)
Shr: ooyyy……!!!!!!!!!!!!now drink this…..for ur headache…..
S pulls his cheeks: awww u r so sweet….!!!!
Shr: oooyyyyy don’t do that I don’t like it….!!!!!
S: Hahahah shravu baby is angry…!!
Shr: hahaha n were crying seconds ago…!!!!
S: shut up…!!!
Shr: hawwww shameless how can I up my shirt…????
S: huh…!!???
Shr: u also said same last ni8….!!!!
S: haye….!!!! I’ve done so many things last ni8!!
Shr: hahaha yes…!! But u trust me whatever I said…!!! Pagal…!!!
S: I was scared yr….!!!
Shr: chal koi nai…!!!
(They both high-5)

Khush was watching all this…..she gets happy…..
K: Hahahah beta cm closer more closer…..!!! It will make my plan easier…!!

SCENE 2:
Khush ayesh n sumo are sitting in resturant talking…..
K laughs: shr is so mean….!!!!!!!
S: he is….!!!! Badtameez he scared me yr….!!!!
Ayesh: haye n u believed..??
S: he was saying in such a serious tone yr….!!
K: but he is so sweet I mean he could tha ke advantage of urs……!!
(S gets lost……….in deep thoughts…..)
K: he will never….n he will never let anyone kyun ayesh….???
S: Matlab….???
A: Aray don’t u knw…??? He saved u from some boys last ni8….!!
(She tell sumo whole dancing part…how he came in between in danced wid her)

S: really I don’t remember n he also didn’t tell me……!!
K: but he is really a hero….!!!!
S: wow I should thank him yr….!!!!! He saved my life….!!!!
(Meanwhile she gets a call)
S: hello dad…??? Wat…!!!! Ohhhh fish….!!!!! Sorry sorry….!!! Bs I m going sorry dad….!!!!
(She gets up…)
K: Aray where r u going…??
S: Aray yr….!!! We r going back na…!!! (K n ayesh gets confused) INDIA!!!!! Aray only 1 week left….!!! I have to go for booking the tickets….!!!!!
K realizes: OMG …….!!!!
(Sumo goes….)
A: ooh wow we r going back….
(She sees k tensed…)
A: wat happened…..???
K: no no…..no…..we can’t go….!!! Now…!!!!!
A: hmm I also don’t want to go I mean we r enjoying….
K: no,.no…no…I m saying that we can’t go…!!! Wat abt plan!! We can’t execute it in India…..!!!
Ayesh: bt y..?? Y can’t we execute it in India…?
K: cause sumo won’t go to India wid us she has some work in London she will go there ATLEST fr a month !! Aur we can’t wait fr that long pata nai phir halal kaise hona ? Nai nai….!!!!!! Ayesh…!!!! Call the gang….!!
(Ayesha does so)

SCENE 2:
Gang present….
(Adi,rohit,Preeti,ayesh,khush)
Adi: wat…???? Now how….!!????
R: Han yr u said ke 3-4 days ke bad
K: Han Han I knw I knw……!!! But we didn’t have much time ….! We have to execute it now…..!!!!!!!!
(All gets agree….)
K: so shall we go…???
All nods positive…..

SCENE 3:
Sumo coms hotel all r sitting in launch…..
S: sorry guys today the office was closed I was late….so…I will book d tickets TOMMOROW ………
Ram: no beta postpone the tickets…..we r nt going after 1 week……
Kartik: we will stay here another month……ab toh sab Kaam kar hi kar Jain gai hum
(They laughs)
Nir: but y didn’t u tell us sumo….???
(Sumo is socked n confused of wats happening…??)
S: I can’t understand aunty….
(Group cms there…..shr also cms n stands next to sumo)
Preeti gets a call n gets tensed…
Preeti to gang: guys I cam after a sec……
(She picks up the call n goes)

Shr: ooyyy have u booked d tickets……?????
S: how can I…???? Cause………
Ram: cause we postpone it…..!
(Shr also gets confused)
Kariya..giggles…..
S: wat the hell is happening…..?????
(All starts laughs…..)
S: y r u all laughing…!!!!!!!!!
She luks at shr……who gives her a confused look…….

Priya: bacche confuse horaha Hain…….
Ram: Chalo then let me say it clearly…..kartik….
K: hmm bolo ram….Mai sun raha hoon (with a smile)
Ram: Mai apne bΓͺte shr ke liay tumhare bethi Nahi Nahi hamari beti SUMAN ka hath mangne chahta hoon……
(All gets happy….)
While shraman luks at eachother in the biggest shock ever……!!!

……………….SCREEN FREEZES——————–
So that was the surprise of today’s ep….actually I want to tell u all this surprise in net ep….but this ep is special one na…..so here is the surprise…

Precap: aise kaise bata doon…??

How was the ep guys…..!!!?? πŸ˜€
Liked it or not….???
Let me knw through cmmnts….!
Ques: will shraman say yes…?? How a sudden marriage…??? Was it khush plan..?? Wat happened to Preeti…?

next episode will be after EID !! …I will read ur ff’s n will try to cmmnt also…!
HAPPY EID MUBARAK IN ADVANCE….!!

Guys I will definately reply ur cmmnts this tym cause it’s my 20th ep the special one so plzzz shower ur love….!!

See u soon
Till then by by guys

LOVE U ALL…..!!!!!

33 comments

  1. Anjali

    hey marie …thanks God i just checked ur next part πŸ™‚ God it was funny…shraman nok jhok ….lovely…
    who made the plan? n who called preeti? she got scared y? ah so many questions …sorry…loved it… waiting for next part πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Anjali…..!!! Aww thank u so much fr waiting n shorryyyyyyy fr making u wait dear…!
      Hahahahah yeah so many questions …!! I will try to post ASAP πŸ˜‰

      • Anjali

        yep dear waiting for next part πŸ™‚
        love u…take care n update next part soon please πŸ™‚
        n u can call me anjo or anju if u want…in tu group ppl call me that…
        in which class do u study? will you be my friend??

  2. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    post next asap post next asap post next asap jaldi plz
    coming to chappy
    it was incredible
    marvelous
    out of the world
    tremendous
    stupendous
    fabulous
    fantabulous
    omg i m blushing right now shraman marriage woahhh jhinga lala ho ho jhinga lala ho ho maria di love u a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttt se bhi bahot ziada my love di take care..! posted a os today on shraman will get posted by evening do read that…! love u loads and post asap plz…! do shraman love each other or not? ramnath serial maine ravan aur hiya ram..! rofl lol kidding but serial surely ravan…! bye bye love u loads take care see you soon stay blessed and be happy…!

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey sriya darling Aray yr so so so happy to c ur cmmnt……!!!!!!!!!!!
      Haye itna acha cmmnt meri Jaan lo gi Kya…..?????πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      So much my love really happy that u liked the ep…….!!!hahahahahahah now I think ye shadi track acha hai…….cause u all r happy thank god…..!!! Hahahaha let’s nacho……!!
      Awww my love I love u toooooo itna ke koi soch na sake……!!!!!!!!yes my dear I will definately read n try to cmmnt also….!! Lmao ram ravan!!!! Hahahaha
      By by darling c u soon love u so much
      Take care muahhh

      • Sriya

        |Registered Member

        oh i also love my maro di episodes they are fantabulous as usual..! hahaha rofl my love ohhh i m on cloud9 or 18th now muahhhh love u soo much maro di take care..!

  3. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    WHAT? Ye kya tha..di!
    Elll…!!
    ShraMan shaadi? Kaise ? Kaha ? Kyu?
    Di!
    Naii.. Abhi post karo episode!
    The episode was lovely..
    Shravan ne kya mazaak kiya tha re..
    I’m laughing..
    But the ending killed me..
    *DEAD*
    Post soonnn
    Love you loads!
    Nikita

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey my Nikko……!!!!
      Hahahah thank u so so SO much my darling πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•
      Really happy that u liked it…..!!!!! Hahahahah abhi…??!!!!! Aray Maine ek word bhi nai likha abhi kaise but will surely ASAP πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u so much
      Hahahaha glad the u liked the end…..!!!!! Hahahaha shadi track…..maybe…..!!!!!!
      Love u too sweeto…..!!!
      Mu ahhhπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  4. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Mario !!!!
    Yr this one was really very special one ..
    Great tha yar ..
    Nd a sudden proposal .. ohhhhhh don’t know what would be their answer ..
    Bt m really excited ..
    Can’t wait πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘
    Nd u too Eid Mubarak in advance πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽŠπŸŽ‡πŸŽ‰βœ¨βœ¨πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽŠπŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡βœ¨
    Post soon..
    Take care ..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Fatima !!!! Aww thank u so much fr such a sweet n lovely cmmnts yrrrrr
      M really happy that u liked the ep πŸ™‚
      Hahahah thank. U so much fr being excited….!! Will try to post ASAP πŸ™‚
      U too take careπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  5. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    Awwwww shrvan sooooo sweet…… Loved the way shar tease her…..

    Yipeeee shrman ki shadiiiiiiii

    post soon

    lov u

    eid mubarak in adavance

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey pari api……!!
      Hahahaha thank u so much fr cmmnting API

      Really happy that u liked the ep….!! Will try to post ASAP πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•
      Love u toooooooo

  6. pretty preeti

    Hey maro first of all thnx for mentioning my name and then amazing epi
    It ws superb
    Preeti ko kya hoya I m also thinking
    Khush hi hogi iske piche
    I loved the epi
    Congo for 20 epi congrats
    Enjoy
    Eid Mubarak in advance
    Love u
    Take care

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey my Preeto oyyy behna ko thanks na bolne…..!!!!
      Thank u dear….!!!!!!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•
      Hahah Socho Socho
      Thanks alt fr the ans we’ll c in nxt chap….. πŸ˜‰
      Thank u
      Thank u dear
      Love u so much darling
      U too take care
      God bless u…..!!!!!!?? Muahhhhhhhhh

  7. LogaMegan

    |Registered Member

    Hey marie awesome ep dr loved it
    Congrats for 20 th ep
    Eagerly waiting for the next part
    We think shraman will say yes for marriage
    Love u
    Bye Tc

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey loga hey Megan…..!!!
      Thank u so much fr cmmnting both of u…..!!!!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•
      Thank u so much u both really happy that u liked it…..
      Ok thanks alt fr ur ans we’ll c in nxt chap….. πŸ™‚
      Love u toooooπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’ž
      By by
      Take care both of u…..!!!

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey niyati hahah thank u so much fr cmmnting my love really glad that u liked it………hahaha my thoughts r different…..!! πŸ˜€
      Love u took darling

      Take careπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  8. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    heyyyyyy love
    naraz h api bht naraz
    u dnt have right to thank ur sister
    anyway u r always welcome
    congratulations on completing 20 epi congo
    party to banti h………..
    opps 10 oh fishhhh lanat h ese parhai pe jo hamara din ka chain r ratoon ki nend cheen len
    abhi to party shuru hoi h love agae aage dekho hota h kya
    kash tmhari bio hoti lag pta jana tha ahhahaha
    physics baji b kisi se kam nahin ehtram un ka ehtaram lanti physics i hate it more than i love my self
    ohk ohk so the epi was ammmmmaazzzziiinnnng
    awesome fantastic
    fabolus
    awesom
    like maraq me and u
    ohk it was too gud loved it
    best of luck for ur exams oh bete kimere b hone wale hain pray yar pray
    my prayers r always with u
    love u more than i love myself
    take care
    lots of love
    maria ki ufaq api

    • Marie

      |Author

      Heyyyyy API…..!!!!!!!!!!!!
      Nahi Nahi Mai or maras ho hi nai sakta not possible at all……..!!!!
      Hahahahah awww thank u so much Api heheheh yep yep party toh Banti hai….!!!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•
      Heye API ASAP toh padh aai se bht tangggg aai hoi ho…..hahaha waise same with me physics I hate but miss is very nice so padhleti hoon…….I hate language sub…….ufffff ratta cause un Mai hai……..
      Well tension ki koi baat hi nai API…..I knw Jo ladki 95% la sakti hai wo Kuch bhi kar sakti hai kyun haina…..????? Maine to sab ko bataya hai ke meri behn 95 percent lai hai n I m proud to be her sisooooooo
      HeyπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•haye itni tareef mujhe mar daalne ka irda hai Kya apka………?? Hahahahahahha I m flying !!!!!
      Thank u thank u
      Thank u thank u !!!
      Aww thank u so much fr ur sweeto wishe really need them cause nxt pares r going to strt soon …….
      Aray API Kaisi abt karte ho ap my prayers r always wid u ap bolo na bolo so just chillooooo
      πŸ˜€
      Aww love u itna itna ke khatam hi na ho……!!!!!!!!!!!
      U too take care my Jaan API……!!!!!!!!!!!
      Ufaq API ki chotu Mario πŸ˜‰

  9. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    K I’m done. Fushhhhhhhhh…my heart flied away. 1stly the way u built tension I was like what happened last night? *_* then the suspended plan nd finally SHraMan marriage proposal. Like one after the another bombs were exploding. Really excited. Nd the precap!!! Not fair…no hints? K I’m waiting…. tic…toc…tic…toc…
    post ASAP but study 1st so take time
    Love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
    take care my sweet elder twin

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Aru…..!!! OMG hahahaha thank u so much fr cmmnting darling really happy that u liked the ep this much my love…….!!!!!!! Hahahaha yes ek ke baad ek bombs…..!! Thanks fr being excited Aray yr precap kaise deti agar dedeta to excitement kaha jata……??
      Socho ke will they say yes or no….??? Ans tumne pata hi hoga πŸ˜‰
      Hahahahah I will try to post ASAP ASAP!!!!!!!! Thank u so much fr understanding my love…!!
      Love u toooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
      MuuahhhhhhπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  10. sona

    Shraman marriage ..😱😱😱😱
    Na story depends on sumos yes or no..
    Vaisey hamara shravan tho sumonki ha mey ha..
    Aur sumo ki na mey hi na..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Sweetest boy..in the universe😊😊😍😍😘😘

  11. Zainab

    Yayyy you posted. 😘
    Loved this episode a lot. πŸ’œ
    You wrote so amazingly beautiful. 😍
    Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. πŸ’•
    And Khair Mubarak sweetie 😘
    Loads of love. Take care <3

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hahahahhaha yep….!!!!!
      Thank u so much zainab API…….!!!
      M really glad that u liked the ep!!!!
      πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Love u too API!!!
      Enjoy EID!!
      N take care u too!

      • Zainab

        Heyyy. I miss you.
        How are you? How was your eid?
        Eid khatam ho gaye tu episode bhi post kar do. xD
        I really can’t wait anymore.
        Do you watch movies? If yes did you watch any of the Pakistani movies released on eid?
        Love you loads. Take care 😘😘

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