Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 16 ( ek duje ke vaaste )

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How r u all….??
Well thank u baad wala much fr commenting on prev prt….m so glad dat u r loving it…..keep supporting guys…. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
Here is d 16 prt…..hope u lyk n enjoy it too….. ๐Ÿ™‚

————–PART 16—————-
Shr passes by adi n Khush’s room….but he saw that d room is open n hears sm laughing voices….
—he opens d door slowly….n sees everyone except sumo is laughing n talking—–
Frnds n preeti r so happy that there plan got succeed….plan of “reconciling Priya n kartik”
K: finally our plan got succeed…!
Ayesh: yr I can’t believe it….!!! Uncle n aunty looks so good together nai…?
(All nods in a positive way)
P: yay…!!!
Rohit: hahaha m so happy fr both…!!
P: haha finally I tell mom n dad abt my plan of being mental…Haah
(All laughs)
Adi: so wats next…????
(Ayesha n Khush luks at EACHOTHR)
Both: plan ‘B’ n smiles……
(Shr listens all this n is totally shocked)
Shr: it was their plan but y…..?? N wats d plan b…???
………….Shr strts to go in room to ask them but stops………….
Shr: no……they won’t tell beta shr they r ur frnds….u knw them better they will never tell their motive behind this…….I will ask them later….
(He goes)

Scenes changes……
Sumo is at restaurant drinking coffee…..Khush n ayesha cms to her….
Both: hey sumo….!!!
S: hy… Cm sit….
Ayesh: haha tu na Bhi bolti toh hum ne Bethne hi tha…..
(They laughs)
K: so wats d plan….??
S: plan..?? Wat plan..?
A: no Khush means that…..everything is fine now n……
S: n…???
K: n b/w u n shr everything…….
S: wait…wait….wait…..wat do u want to say…?? Say it clearly…
A: i m talking abt shr….n that diar…….
S cuts her: we r just frnds nothin more…..
K: but sumo everything is alright now….so wats d prob…???
S: Luk Khush…plzzz it’s just not abt mom dad or anyone it’s abt….we r…friends..nothing more…he is my best frnd…I never think that abt him..nevr feel that abt him….n I will never….
K: but sumo pyaar dosti hai……
S: matlab…???
K: matlab ye ke….u r besties frm childhood shr n u share everything wid EACHOTHR….n he started to love u….Luk sumo…their is a very thin line b/w love n frndship….n no one know who cross this line n when…..
S: but I don’t love him….wait did he say smthing to u…..
K: no no…..no he didn’t it’s me who is asking……
A: but…….
S cuts her: he also moved on….!
K n ayesh both angrily: y r u keep cutting while we r talking…
S shouting: cause u r talking nonsense..!!
S realizes that she was a little bit loud :sorry I…I didn’t mean to
(Saying this she gets up)
K: wait…..(sumo luks) will u cm fr d trip…???
A:plzzz yr…..(sumo nods n goes)
K: is ladki ka kuch Karna pade ga…..uffff

Scene changed to trip…..
Trio r visiting different places……..enjoying
Sumo is still in deep thinking…….
She luks at shr…..who is busy in clicking pics….
–he luks at her…..n ask in signal wat happened n she too says in signal nothing…—
S in mind: whenever I Luk at him I feel lyk he is hiding smthing…….
She luks at Khush n then d convo b/w her ayesh n Khush…..
S: is khush correct…..???? Is he moved on or……wat no no no wat m I thinking….he moved on…..
Shr cms to her……
Shr: sumo…….
S: huh….?
Shr: is evrything alright u seem tensed…..
S: yes yes evrything is perfectly fine (she smiles)
Shr: then y r u standing here….cm on all r there n u…..(he holds her hand to take her…but feel sit too hot….)
Shr: sumo….ur hand it’s burning….
He touches her forehead…..
Shr: OMG u have fever….high fever…..
S: no…m fyn…
Shr: r u crazy….?!! How can u be fyn….?? We r going back now….no need to enjoy more u need rest…….
(He tells that to everyone……sumo insists to stay but cause of her health all decided to go back)

At hotel…..
Sumo is taking rest…..while shr is sitting besides her……reading a book….
Shr luks at her n thinks……
How can she have so high fever….he remembers she was tensed…..
N she was tensed…..wat happend…..? Smthing is fishy…..
He suddenly remembers abt d frnds plan b….
Shr: I forgot to talk to them……
He c’s sumo sleeping…
Shr: she is sleeping I think I should…gi that’s d chance…..

He gets up n goes to Khush room….
Where she n adi r already present…..
Shr: I wanna talk to u guys……
K: wat happened…???
Shr: wat is d plan b…???
Adi n Khush gets shock n luks at EACHOTHR…..
A: k…kya ?? Wat r u talking abt buddy ye plan kya hota hai…..we don’t knw any plan….who is he….???
Shr: don’t act over smart adi….tameez se bata de Kia khichdii paka rahe ho sab…!!
Rohit n ayesha enters in room….wid a cheerful mood……
They didn’t notice shr….
Ayesh in loud tone….: now we strts plan b…!!!!
Rohit: love will be in the air…!

(They gets shocked when they c shr……Khush hits her head……adi signs her that they r gone now……)
(Shr glares them……)
Shr: wat were u talking abt….????
K: wo we were……….
Preeti enters the room singing
“Mummy daddy patch up plan got succeed,mummy dad day patch up plan got succeed,we r succeed ,we r………………..”
Shr gets shocked……preeti c’s shr n also gets shocked……
She luks at d group who gives her a killer Luk…….
Shr: tum Bhi…!!!!!! (Preeti luks down)
Khushi in mind: do namoonon ne toh akar sirf plan ka bataya or is pagl ne AAKAR toh plan hi batadia…..!!!!!
Shr: ooohoooo (angrily) so that was d plan…!!!! Plan of reconciling uncle-aunty.,,,!!!!!
All luks down….
Shr: n wat is d plan b..?????? (Angrily)
K signs everyone not to tell him…..everyone does so…..
Shr luks at preeto…..
Shr: if u don’t tell me i will tell ur sis abt ur plan…….
N our preeto is our preeto….Khush signs her not to but she tells him….
P: plan b is to reconciling u n di…….
Shr gets shocked n luks at everyone……..he gives them a killer Luk…..
Shr: have u all gone crazy…!!!!

Here sumo gets up she is completely fyn now…….
She luks here n there…..
S: I think shr was here…..yes he was but where is he now……
(She gets up n goes out…..)
S: where to find him..,.???aahaaa I think he will be in Khush’s room……Han I will go there……
(She goes to khush room)

——-SCREEN FREEZES——

Precap: Sumo feels weak n abt to fall when someone holds her….yes it is shr…..
(They share n eyelock)

So giys how was it…..?? So sorry If I make u bored….
But thank u so much fr reading it..

Ques:
Wat do u think will sumo find out everything….???
Socho socho…..??
N do share ur views n ans via cmmnts…..
Till then by by
Love h all….,!!!!!!Hy guys…!!!
How r u all….??
Well thank u baad wala much fr commenting on prev prt….m so glad dat u r loving it…..keep supporting guys…. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
Here is d 16 prt…..hope u lyk n enjoy it too….. ๐Ÿ™‚

22 comments

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey API…..!!! thank u so much ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’— m glad u liked it
      Lots of love
      Mariaโคโคโค

  1. Anamika

    Hey maro
    How r u??
    U r saying it was boring??
    I think u have gone crazy
    Hehe jokes apart
    Loved the epi
    Superb
    I dun think k sumo will get to kno all this
    Bt i dun kno actually kuch bhi ho skta hai
    Excited i m
    Post the next part asap
    Luv uj

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Anna API…..!!
      M fyn how r u…?? ๐Ÿ™‚
      Hahahahah I think that u will not like it…..but glad that u liked it ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—
      Thank u
      Thank u so much API…….!!!
      Hahah thank u so much fr ur ans……u will get to knw in nxt chapyyy…….
      Haha๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ thanks fr being excited API !
      I will try to post ASAP ๐Ÿ™‚
      Love u tooโคโคโค
      Take care

  2. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    Hey love kese ho????
    Epi was ammmmaaaaazzzzzziiiiiiinnnnnnggggg loved it to the core
    It was amazing
    Inka group to gya hahaha
    I heard yesterday it rained there enjoyed????
    It rained here also I enjoyed alot
    Ok ok battery low
    Take care
    Love u

  3. Kaya.........

    |Registered Member

    Wow…… just amazing…..loved the update…it was awesome
    Mind blowing
    Fabulous
    Perfect
    Fantastic
    Marvellous
    Wonderful
    Superb
    Interesting
    Please
    Please
    Please
    Please
    Please
    Post ASAP
    ASAP
    ASAP
    Love you
    Take care

  4. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria my cute sis..
    How r u? all gud.. ?
    Awsum epi..
    Bechara khush and gang ..he he
    Preeti ne to phasa diya unhe..
    May be No.. according to me..
    he he galat bhi ho sakti hu m…
    take care
    post soon..
    Love you..
    Ruchi.. ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. sona

    Maria..
    I think sumo may not find the truth..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
    Well…its day by day..increasing our heart beat..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    Keep the gud work gng on๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey riya thank u so much my dear๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—โคโคโค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey niyati….!!
      Hahaha Kya…!!! Short ๐Ÿ˜ฎ omg I though it is big…..wow…..glad u liked it๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—โคโคโค
      Will try to post ASAP
      Love u too dear……..!!
      U too take care
      ๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

  6. pretty preeti

    Marooo kya likha tune loved it as always
    I m really happy
    Tune bhi chota likha air agar mai likhti noon toh naraaj ho jati hai merit sis lekin mei nhi hoyi
    Chotu and chotu barabar
    Loved the epi
    Tera ques difficult
    No answer
    Able epi me bta dena
    Loved it
    Loveu
    Post zoon

  7. Zainab

    Loved this so much.
    The gang got caught ๐Ÿ˜‚
    Waiting for your next episode.
    Post soon. ๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey zainab API……!! Thank u so much !! ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—โคโคโค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
      Will try to post ASAP
      Love u toooooooo
      Take care๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

  8. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    hey my Queeny api, hw r u… I’m fine
    sry I’m late…kya hena tab me apko msg kar rahi thi aur mera data khatam, abhi bhi me free data chalarahi hu….
    it was soo sad Sumo is sick just like me….
    ohh hoo ye Preeti bhi na kabhi control nai kar sakti kya…
    nai nai Sumo ko pata nai chalna chahiye di is bimar lachar princess ke liye toh Sumo ko unka plan mat sunao….
    jaldi pst kariye nai nai jaldi nai abhi pst kariye…apni bimar lachar princess ke liye…
    luv u sabse jyada aur ab me give up nai karungi meri Queeny api – apki Princess Neeti

  9. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Seriously girl? The epi……AWESOME….BRILLIANT…WONDERFUL…..all r less than the epi. U rock sweetie. Always planting BOMB while posting them nd it bursts whenever I read it. I’ll die someday! But worth dying. Post next epi really soooooooon. I’m super duper excited. Precap is killing me
    Lots of love nd huggies
    Take care

  10. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Didi !! It was amazing..
    Amazing
    Superb
    Fantabulous..
    ShraMan are so cute..
    Arre Preeti! Ye kya kar diya??
    Shravan bichara.. Ab toh Suman bol hi do!
    Bhot pyaara episode tha. Loved it..
    Aur mujhe kahi jana hai, toh mei zyada bol nahi paungi, but aap jante ho that I loved it
    Chalo bye
    Love you,
    Nikko

  11. Deotima

    wooooooow what an epi!!! di u rocked !!! CONFUSIONSSSSSS just waiting 4 shravu`s reaction!!! post asap

  12. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Wohooooooooooo !!! Yr u rockedddd again .. this ep was just out of all the compliments .. just .. ummmmmm what to say abt ur writing talent .. don’t hv words .. seriously !!! hv no words … bt kya karen tareef to krni henaa .. this ep was awwwwdorable fantabulous fantastic awwwwesome … umm r kch .. ahaaan yess nd it was spectaculous .. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    U r brilliant girl ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    Seriously !!! m in love with this ff .. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Post next part sooooooon sooner soonest ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
    Take care ..

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