Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 15 ( ek duje ke vaaste )

Hyyy guys…!
Frst of all toh thank u so much fr ur best ever wishes who made my day…..special…no..no..no more than special…!!! I cant wish fr more….i year back i dont have any sis…..i was n only child…..on my bday….it was only my friends or family members who wished me……i never ever wishes to have a sis…but deep inside there was a blank space in my heart……..but now……..the space is filled wid too many beautiful fairies….i have too many sweet loving sisters….!!! Who wished me…..n made me happy so happy…….who r so loving n supporting……..

N today Is 15 part of my ff…..so guys wid out ur love n support I won’t be able to reach here…..

THANK U SO MUCH GUYS…..!!!

Now enough of my talk….before i get senti….lets cm to 15 prt….
Hope u like this……. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

——-PART 15———
Continue………
(Sumo gets shock)
S: no preeti knew dat my earring got missing how can she……….
(She saw preeti passing nearby…..she angrily call her)
S: preeti…!!!!!!
P: ji di….
S: come here…!
(Preeti cms)
P: yes di…..
S: did u find my earring

(while luking at shr)
P: no di I tried to find it but failed……
(Sumo raises her eyebrows)
S: acha…??? Really try to remember kahin dekha ho…???
P thinks: nai di……
(Shr shows her earring)
P happily: yay di….!! Luk earring mil Gaya…!!
(She notices dat both shr n sumo r serious)
P: wat happened….?? Aren’t u happy…?
Shr: preeti…..do u remember dat I came to u last ni8 n ask abt d earring…?
P: acha…? I was busy didn’t notice……
S holds her ears: kuch yaad aaya…?
P: pouch ouch oowwwww di…!!!!!
(Sumo leaves her seeing her in pain…….)
S: he came to u last ni8 n asked abt it….y didn’t u take d earring….???
P: sorry di I didn’t notice him nor earring…..hehehe sorry….
S: uffff go ….!
(Preeti goes)

Sumo to shr: now give it back.,.,
Shr: no I won’t….
S gets irked: then keep it with u…
Shr: wat will I do..wid dis? m a boy…
S: so give it back na…!!!!
Shr: no I mean give me d second pair so I can give d complete set to my girlfriend…
(Sumo gets shocked n angry……while shr smirks)
S: u cheapster…!!!!!
(She strts to hit him)
S: no I won’t give u d second pair go to hell….give this only to ur gf….!!
Shr: acha acha sorry baba…..!!! I was joking …!!!
S: hmmmm better….

Shr: so ….. Wats d plan…??
S: abt wat…??
Shr: aray! Don’t u knw we r ging fr masti…today…
S: ooh yeah I fogot…..
Shr: huffffff……
S: so I think we should get ready cause we have only half n hour….I already wasted my tym…..
Shr: acha ji…????
S: ji……
(She snatches her earring frm shr n runs)
Shr: sumo…!!!!!
(He smiles)
(Sumo luks back)
S: thank u…………….(she goes)
(Shr smiles again)

Scene changes to shopping mall…..where all frnds r choosing different dresses…..
Khush: adi I think u should try dis…
Adi: no yr I will Luk bandar (monkey) in this…..
K: hahaha wats new wid this…..tell me smthing new….
Adi: oyy (makes a pout face while Khush kisses him on cheeks)
K: mera bandar….(she laughs)

Ayesh n rohit both at d same tym: ayesha/rohit
Both laughs
Ayesh: pehle tum bolo…
R: no no u Frst…..
A: no u….,
R: no u…..
A: okyyy….Luk wat I got ?
(She shows him a dress)
R: wow excellent choice…!!!
(He shows her his choice n she also praises it…..)
K to adi: look…!!! That’s called a true love….they both r praising eachother’s choice…& look at us…!!
Adi: bcz they engaged two days ago……8 months hone do hamari tarhaan Mai Bhi dekhta hoon kitna pyaar rehta hai…..
(Shr,sumo n adi laughs……while Khush gets irked n rohit ayesh gets angry)
Rohit: shut up…..
Ayesh: bakwaas nai adi…!! Rohit is very sweet…..
Adi: y…..is he d market of sugar…???
K: shut up now…!!!
(They all strts to select again)

Shr notices dat sumo having difficulties of choosing clothes…..he goes to her….
Shr: wat happened…??
S while trying to choose: I…I can’t decide wat to choice this one or this….
(She shows his both)
Shr: I think d pink one…..
S luks at d dress: no I have many pink dresses….
Shr: so…second one blue…
S: yeah……..but it will not gud on me….
Shr: ohhh god u have prob wid both…do one thing…..buy both…
S: no….no I have already shop much….Luk..
.(she makes him Luk at d counter..where 6-7 shopping bags r already placed)
(Shr mouth gets open in shock)
Shr: wat d hell…!!! Y did u shop tooooo much…!!???
S: it’s nt only my dresses but also famliy’s….
Shr: ooho acha……so u should choose both…
S: no I think d pink one is better…..I will buy…
Shr: ufff okkkk….

RESTAURANT:
All r selecting….wat to eat….
Ayesh: pizza is ok na rohit…?
R: hmm I love pizza…!!
Shr: u became round like pizza !!
R: wat…(he strts to scheme himself) where where…haww m I moto!??
Adi: ooo tension ki dukaan he is just joking !!
(Rohit luks at shr….who was laughing…he threw a handkerchief on him)
S also laughs….
Shr n sumo hig 5……
They crack jokes…..n laughs…..
(Then sumo notices a cute little girl who was standing outside d restaurant watching each n every food…..through d glass…..)
S: guys I’ll come in a sec…..
(She goes to girl n ask…her….abt her…n she tells her that she is so poor her parents can’t afford…..1 time food……)
Sumo heart gets melted…..

S: awww….. Don’t worry darling….!! We will eat…
(She cms inside wid d girl)
S: the resturant is all urs sweetheart…….go n buy whatever u want…..
(G chooses her favourite food……with so much happiness……)
Sumo cms wid girl on d table……
Khush aid ayesh: lo agai……?? Sumo…???
Shr: who is she….???
S: she is our new frnd!! Wat is ur name baby sorry I forgot……
G: rose….
..(she was a Not n Indian girl cause they r in Paris remember guys….?)
All talks sweetly with her…!!
Shr: u r as beautiful as rose my dear….!!!
She sits wid them n eats….sumo was DAMM happy….n shr was lurking at sumo lovingly…….
Shr in mind: that’s y u r special fr me sumo…..that’s y……
. (He smiles)

Then sumo n all cms out of d restaurant n go to girl parents….sumo said that she will take full responsibility….of her education….frm now on…!!
She heart melted more fr sumo…….
(He smiles at her lovingily)
All frnds agree to give fund to d poor family……..

Then They reach hotel…back…..
Now sumo n everyone r talking abt dresses…..
Sumo gives dresses to all….which she bought fr them…..
S: Luk mom….how’s my pinkyyy pooooh (her pink dress)
Priya: beta it’s wonderful….
Preeti: di…don’t u have already many pink dresses…..
S: yes….but…(she tells her abt d blue 1)
Preeti: wow di….I think d blue one was better….
A gets sad—–
Priya: aray no prob…..u can bought it next tym…..
——–S luks at shr in sadness…..he smiles n she gets confused—–
(She goes to him….)
S: y r u smiling mr….??

Shr: cause m seeing that sumo is such a pagal ladki…!!
S: hey don’t call me pagal….!!
Shr: so…?? Mad crazy….!!
S gets irked…
S: shut up if u can’t help me then don’t even disturbed me na…!! M already very sad….
(Shr mimics her sad face n laughs…..)
S: shr u r impossible…!!!

Sumo goes to her room….
S: I should bought d blue one….it will Luk better on me…why didn’t I buy it…..
—she sits on bed in sadness—
(Suddenly she notices a purple shopping bag)
She wonders how purple bag came here…….
She strts counting d bags…n purple WS extra 1
S: I think Khush…ya ayesha ka hoga……but is Mai hai kya….
(She checks it n find d same blue dress)
—she jumps in happiness—
S: yes !!!! Yes!!! Who oohoooo..!!!!!
(She notices a chit….she picks it up n reads….
“I know u better than u”
Sumo smiles: shr…….!!!
(She again strts jump in happiness)
S: thank u thank u soooooo much shr…..!!!!!!

Shr is watching all this frm outside…..
He smiles….
Shr: pagal larki……..
(He goes)

———SCREEN FREEZES——-

Precap:Khush: finally our plan got succeed…!
Adi: so wats nxt….??
Ayesha: n khush: luks at each other: plan ‘B’
(Someone listens all this n is totally shocked)

So frnds how’s it….??? Liked it or not….??
Do tell me via cmmnts…..
Question:
Wat do u think who listened their plan…??
Socho socho n tell ! πŸ˜€

Till then by by
Love u all…..!!

25 comments

  1. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    Hey love what’s up thek ho na???
    Happy birthday love
    Where is the cake??? U know putting cake on the face of birthday girl is my favorite hobbyhahHa crazy gains???
    Ya the epi was ammmmaaazzzziinnnnggggg it was too gud like my love
    It was awesome I liked the color part my wardrobe is also filled with pink still I bought lpink dress last week and my mother was like much nae ho skta tmhara hahahaha
    Sorry love for not wishing u Yar some problems on my home and my bros hoooo god
    Acha love kese rahi bd all gud???
    Weather still garmi????
    Love I wrote sth for u I knw its boring Bt if u get time read it ok
    Love u mostest se b mostest
    Take care

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey API….!!! How r u…!!??? πŸ˜€ Naha nothin impor bs abhi abhi free hoi hoon party arrage ki thi girls gang ne….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ of my bday…..hahahah cake toh hai pr doon kaise….??? Hahaha or Jahan tak cake laga ne wali baat hai wo mere saath already ho chuka hai….hahaha I love to put cake on others face like u but I hate when smone do it wid me….but khair Mai aj victim thi haha….

      Thank u so much API….!!! M really glad that u liked it……!!!!!
      Hahahah same wid me meri cupboard bhi pink dresses se hi bhari hai….hahaha same same again…!!!
      Aahaaaaa not a prob yr Api….!!! Bday went sooooo bud even abhi tak chal rahi thi!
      Hahah weather ka na poocho yr API….!! Of course garmi yr….!!!!
      Love u itna itna ke no one can ever think abt it…..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
      Yep yep Mai ne OS padh Kia n comment bhi Kia lamba wala…..!!!!!!!
      U too take care….!!!!!

  2. sona

    Hey..its so lovely…😊😊😊😊
    How cute shravan..u brought it for her..so sweet of u…real life mey ksun karts hai a is a…?πŸ˜πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

  3. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Di !! I’m so in love with you !!
    This was so damn amzing !!
    Hayy Shravan !! So cute !!
    And Sumo’s just a sweettiiee.. The way she helped that girl..
    Jaise Shravan ke liye Sumo special hai, waise hi is NIKKO ye liye aap special ho !!
    Loved it so so much !
    “Mera Bandar” part was adorable!!
    Enjoyed ur day??
    Anyways, PLAN B?
    Wahh yaar
    Maybe Shravan or Suman or Priya Kathik.. IDK..post soon,
    Loads and loads of love, hugs and kisses,
    Nikko !!

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww my Nikko❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u soooo much yr….!!! Ur cmmnts made me so happy !!!
      N I feel so special…..!!! Aww u r also so SO so special fr me my darling😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
      M so happy that u liked the ep….!!!
      Hahaha I enjoy my day yes my frnds threw a party fr me……
      Hmm u will get to knw plan b in upcoming ep……
      Hmmmm Nikki ki bachi sab ka Nama le lia…!! Hahahah hmmm next ep nai pata chal jai ga…. πŸ˜‰
      Love u too darling….!!!
      Lots of kisses n hugs frm my side too!!

  4. Kaya.........

    |Registered Member

    Nice……just awesome……. loved it……… shravan is so sweet……and the precap……it is damm interesting………. please…… please….. please….. please… please….. please……. please……post soon……. eagerly waiting……..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey kaya…..!!!! Thank u so much fr cmmnting yr…..!!! M so glad…that u liked d ep…..!!!
      Haha thank u so much fr being excited…!😘😘😘😘😘
      Awww ok ok I will try to post ASAP ASAP ASAP πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Thank u so much fr waiting…!

  5. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    D epi was so sweettttt…!!
    This time it was…sweetness overloaded….!
    Loved loved loved it…!!
    Love you..
    Post soon..😊😊

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww thank u so much my dear….!!!!!
      M really glad that u liked d ep…!!πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œβ€β€β€
      Love u too dear…..!!!
      Will try to post ASAP πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Take care my dear …….!!!!

  6. Zainab

    Mariaaaaaaa it was amazing.
    I was so tired but this episode brought a smile on my face. Loved it.
    Shravan was so cute 😍
    Post soon.
    Love you 😘 Take care πŸ’œ

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u so much API……!!!!!!πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ
      Awww m so happy that I made u smile wid this ep……πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž
      He is really cute…!!!!
      I will try to post ASAP
      U too take care n
      LOVE U TOO!!!!❀❀❀❀

  7. pretty preeti

    Ufff my maro it was so nice I was completely lost in it
    It made my day once again
    I m so happy to read it
    Post soon
    I will be waiting
    Lots of love

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey my Preeto…..!!!!!!
      Aww thank u so much fr such a sweet cmmnt my darling πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ
      M so happy that u liked it…..!!!
      Will try to post ASAP πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž
      Thanks fr waiting…..!
      Love u too……!!!!!!!❀❀❀

  8. Anamika

    Wow wow wow… Super
    I love shraman
    Hehe everyone does😁😁
    Kisne suna hogya kuch ni pta
    Eagerly waiting
    Post asap sweety
    Love uh

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u thank u thank u anni API……!!!!πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž
      M really happy that u liked it…!!!
      Aww no prob u will get to knw in nxt ep….!
      Thanks a lot fr waiting…..πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ
      Will try to post ASAP πŸ™‚
      Love u toooooooooooooooo❀❀

  9. Angel_pari

    This was superb cutiee pie

    i loved it….

    Sorry i cant cmnt long coz i,m in hurry but i loved it and love u……take care my lil fairy tata

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u so much API…….!!!!!!!
      M glad that u liked it….! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      Aww not a prob…..!!πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œβ€β€β€β€πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž
      LOVE U TOOOOOOOOOOO………….!!!!!!!!
      U too take care n cm back soon……my sweetheart….!❀❀❀

  10. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Maria yeh kya tha? Mujhe marneka solid planning huh? If u keep on writing so good then I’ll die in lack ok qxygen coz I can’t breathe peacefully until I finish the whole epi. Nd now the precap. Yaar itnaaaaaaaaaaaaa acha kyu? Nd sos much suspense. Post soooooooon. Not just sooon but ASAP.
    And a belated birthday again.
    Lots of love, hugs and kisses..
    muuuuaaaahhh
    Take care

  11. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    hehehehehehe pagal ladki….
    of course Shravu will know Sumo itnee acchee se after all he loves her
    bt oh no who heard dem…

    me bohot ghabra rahi hu kahi S ya Shr ne to nai na noo.

    plss pst asap Maro di
    urs always – Leeti

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hahah thank u so much neeti…..!!!! Hah sai kaha sumo is pagl…!!

      Aww this will reveal in nxt chapyyy
      I will try to post ASAPπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ
      Love u my dear……!!!!!β€β€β€πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

  12. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    OMG !!!! this ep was a BOMB πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’£
    Totally filled with awesomeness
    Was enjoying it till the end .. πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    U r just rockinnggg yar ..
    Nd I guess .. that person would be Shravan .. let’s hope for the best ..
    Post very soon ..
    Take care ..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww thank u so much yr….!!!!!πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œβ€β€β€β€πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž u liked it this much m so grateful to u fr ur lovely cmmnt my dear…..!!!❀❀❀n m really glad that u liked it……!!! Thank u so much !!
      Thanks a lot fr ur precious ans…..!! We will c in nxt ep…… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      I will try to post ASAP πŸ™‚
      U too take care,……..πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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