Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 14 ( ek duje ke vaaste )

Hello guys….!!
Thank u so much to all fr cmmnting on prev part…!!!
M so glad dat u r lyking d track….. πŸ™‚
Ok some of u asked me in prev parts abt the Yort…..well guys Yort is a ship…a private..ship u c in many movies…..

Well here is prt 14…..
Hope u lyk it too….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

——–PART 14———-

(Continue frm prev part)
S: Yort papers….
(Shr Luk on in surprise)
S: wat (she shows him) don’t u knw abt these…????
Shr: u get them now…???
S nods……in confusion….
Shr: wat…?? (He strts counting days on his fingers) omfg…u got them now…? After two months hell….!
S: I thought dat u will be shock….!
Shr: of I m ……u got them now……n…….
S cuts him: no I though dat u will be shocked abt d papers…..I mean how could u named these papers to me…??
Shr: don’t u knw wat u said…..I though it’s ur wish…..
S: so wat…..?? If I have said dat I lyk effiel tower…?? Wat will u do…??? Us ko Bhi mere naam kardete….???
Shr after thinking: maybe….

S gets hell shocked: shr…!!!!!!!!! M taking here on a serious note n tumhe mazak duje raha hai….!!!!!
Shr: who said mazak sujh raha hai…! M also talking on a serious note…!!
S: I think u have gone crazy……
Shr: chalo…..Luk who is saying…….
S: shr…!!!! Ahhhhh (she gets irritated n goes……..shr smiles)

Priya n kartik cms in hall where everybody is sitting,standing…or doing smthing else…..
(They r holding hands)
Preeti luks at kartik: Luk dad……!!!!!….n mom….? (She saw them holding hands)
P to sumo: di………
S: yes Bol……
P: Luk….(she makes sumo luks at their parents who r holding hands n coming towards them….both sumo n preeti r shocked)
S: hain…?????
Kariya cms to them…….
P: mom…dad…..
S: u both….
(Kariya smiles….n luks at EACHOTHR)
S has tears in her eyes n everyone stand in happiness….
Sumo n preeti hug their parents happily……
Priya: m so sorry my daughters I always keep u away frm EACHOTHR……
K: it’s my mistake too…….I knew dat u both love EACHOTHR so much but….I….
S: no papa it’s ok…..
P: mom m. Sooooo happy…
(Shr n everyone gets supere happy….seeing them reconcile)
(Everyone claps on family hug)

Kartik kisses on both sumo’s n preeti’s forehead….
K: my precious daughters……(Priya smiles)

Gang high5 EACHOTHR cause finally there plan got succeed plan or reconciling them……….(all r so happy)

Ram: is pr to party BANTI hain…..
(Everyone laughs)

It’s evening…..n party time……
Everyone gather near a beautiful hall outside d hotel…..decorated wid pink n white flowers….
Sumo cms there wearing beautiful purple n white….. gown……wid light makeup n earrings only…..
She have opened her hairs in curls in is luking extremely gorgeous…..
While shr cms there wearing black shirt with white blazer…..n is luking ufff so handsome……

Sumo is as always busy wid her earrings cause they r heavy…….
She collides wid ayesh….
S: sorry…..sorry…..
A: wat happened….
S: yr these earring (she is still trying to set one earring)
A: I think u should change ur earring….wat say…??
S: no…no it’s Oky…(she fixes d earring) Luk……(she happily says)
A: hmmm ok…!!! Chal let’s enjoy
(They both go)

—–Sumo while drinking juice….luks at shr……….who winks at her n sighs her dat she is luking so so……..while sumo signs him dat he is luking bandar (monkey)——-

Party is going on…..
Sumo is talking to sm guests…….
When Khush cms to her…
K: wai sumo u didn’t tell me dat 1 earring fashion has cm πŸ˜€ ??
S is confused: wat….??
K sighs her to check her left ear…….sumo does so…..n d earring got missing….
S: where is it…..?? (She strts to check here n there) OMG….nai not again!!!
K: haddd hai sumo u didn’t even care abt ur earring …..
S: yr it was loose but I…….
K: but our sumo is sumo tried to it….through u knw dat it WS loose…!
S: acha acha bs no more taunts…..I will find it…..u also…..
(Khush nods)

N they strt finding it……
Sumo goes to preeti who is busy in laughing wid friends…..
S: preeto……
P: yep di…??
S: ye actually my earring got missing Luk….(she shows her d othr one) it’s lyk dis….
P: so…??
S: so if u find or c any type of earring Luk dis…..just pick kt up n give it to me…cause I have lost my earring….n Han find it quickly…
P: Han Han okyyyy……
(Sumo goes…….while shr watches n listens d whole convo frm a distance)
(He starts finding d earring…….n finally finds it….)
Shr: now I will it to sumo…..she will get happy….!
(He goes to sumo……he strts to give her bt she ignores him thinks that he will again taunt her on her appearance so she goes away ignoring him…..shr gets confuse n angry)

Shr: wats d prob wid dis girl……khair…..(he saws preeti n goes to her)
Shr: preeti…..
P didn’t notice…..
Shr: preeti ????
(Again didn’t busy in laughing n masti)
Shr shakes her: preeti…!!!!!
P: Han Han….!!!! Bolo shr bhaiya…..
Shr: ye erring………
P cuts him: kis ka hai…???
Shr: don’t u knw…???
P nods no….
Shr: achwwwww?????? KISI ka erring missing hoa hai…???
P: nai I have my both earrings n KISI ka Bhi earring missing nai hoa hai…..
(Actually guys she was so busy in masti that wat sumo said to her….she didn’t even listen wid concentration n she doesn’t even listen to him wid concentration)
Shr: r u sure….?
P: yup….!
Shr: ok then….( he goes)

Sumo is still searching her earring….
When Priya cms to her wid different earrings….
P: beta here…..wear them…..
S: but mom…..those r my fav….
P: wear them fr now we will find them soon…..ok
(Both smiles……n sumo chages her earrings)

At morning….shr cms to same place n sees sumo is still searching her earring…..
(Shr cms to her)
Shr: sumo…………….
(Sumo while finding): yep…….
Shr: look at me…….
S: can’t u c m searching fr smthing……..
Shr: I knw….d thing u r searching fr is in my hands……
(Sumo luks at him in surprise n then her earring)
(She gets up happily)
S: hey…!!! Where did u find it…? (She tries to take frm his hand but he doesn’t give her)
S: oyyy….shr give me …!!

Shr: no…! Say thank u Frst…
S: y…???
Shr: cause I m giving u this….
S: ooo hello shut up n give me…..wait btw when did u find it..?
Shr: last ni8 in party….
S: wat…??? Why didn’t u give me ?? Shr..!!
Shr: I came to u…..but I guess u just wanted to ignore me….
(Sumo remembers how she ignored him)
S: ooho that I though….kairrrr leave it….u can give it to smone else…
Shr: I went to preeti also….
S: so y didn’t u give her…????
Shr: I asked her but she clearly said that she don’t knw Abt that earring…
(Sumo gets shocked)

——-SCREEN FREEZES———-

Precap: all frnds to go fr shopping n masti….

So guys how was it….??
Kuch baad ke liay Bhi chod dete hain…nai..??
Hahah anyways guys do cmmnt if u love this…. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
N silent readers u toooo cmmnt (don’t stay silent) πŸ˜‰

Thank u so much fr reading it….
By by
Love u all…!

48 comments

  1. Angel20

    Angel20

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    Wow it was amazing! I loved your story as well as this episode! The missing eatingπŸ˜‰
    Update the next part soon!
    Love you❀❀

  2. Ruchi

    Ruchi

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    Hey Maria..
    kesi ho sissi..??
    How r ur studies going?
    Amazing epi..
    try to post next epi soon..
    take care..
    Lots of Love..
    Ruchi.. πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hey Ruchi di….!!
      M fyn πŸ™‚ how r u…?? All fyn shine…?? How r studies going…!? πŸ˜€
      Yep my studies r going great…..
      Thank u so much glad that u liked the ep…… Will try to post nxt part ASAP πŸ™‚
      U too take care
      Love u too…!!
      Frm ur sisoooo
      Maria πŸ˜‰

  3. Nikita

    Nikita

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    Aww di..
    Very sweet epiode.. Kariya <33
    And ShraMan scenes were good to..
    Shravan ne yort kya, apna dil bhi sumo ke naaam kar diya hai.. Hehe.. Justjoking..
    Amazing episode !!
    Loved it loads..
    Next part is gonna be the 15 th part.. Aren't you excited for it? Chalo bye
    Take care,
    Loads of love,
    Nikko <333

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hey my nikko….!! How r u dear…!! ?? πŸ˜€
      Hey m so so happy that u cmmnted n liking the track……
      Hahah ur cmmnts made me glad….always…cause they r so cutoooo n sweeto like u my dear….!!!
      Hahahah Wah Wah shr ne abhi sirf Yort hi kari hai πŸ˜€ dil Bhi kar hi dega serial Mai toh confess kare pehle,,,,,
      Haah yr πŸ˜€ m so excited abt the ep….!!
      But m confused weather to post OS nxt or ep……
      Love u so much yr
      Take care
      By by

  4. pretty preeti

    Maro interesting
    Shraman so sweet
    Loved it from core
    Nice
    Shravo so cute
    Loved
    Post soon
    Bye
    Love u

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hey preeto..!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u so much fr cmmnting yr….!
      M glad u liked it πŸ˜‰
      Will post ASAP
      By by
      Love u so much
      Take care…!

  5. WeirdSister

    WeirdSister

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    Maria maria…!!
    Don’t write so short epis… Coz I really want to read more everytime……
    Love u…
    Post soon!!😊😊😊

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hey my dear…..!!
      Hahahah but itna likhti hi my hands started hurt…. πŸ˜€
      Aww but that’s so sweet of u dear…..!!
      Love u too!!!
      Will post ASAP πŸ™‚

  6. Ufaaq

    Ufaaq

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    Hey love what’s up ????
    Kese ho all gud????
    Weather still baqwas????
    OK OK the epi was superb sumu is dumb love I wanna see sumu confessing her lobe so plz make it go quick anyway ur story ur thinking just go with it
    I really loved the epi
    Ahhh my brothers r irritating machines BT still love them
    Lobe u too
    Take care
    Bye

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hey API…!!
      M perfectly fyn alhamdullillah !! πŸ˜€
      Weather….haha ri8 still bakwaas πŸ˜€
      Thank u so much fr cmmnting…..hahah sumo Bhi confess Karni degi kabhi na kabhi πŸ˜‰
      But abhi nai abhi kardia toh drama hi khatam….. Hahahah
      Thank u so much
      Hehehehehehehe
      Love u 3,4,5,6,7……infinityyyyyyyy
      U too take care
      By by

  7. Sriya

    Sriya

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    dear i have not read will read this episode and i know my di will always give us a jhakasssssss fabulous episode as usual and di there is a good news for it is
    …..
    …….
    ………….

    …..
    the good news is a suspence u will see it soon !!!!!!!!!! love u lotssssssssssssss di why don’t write another os as i have givenu a gift i want a return gift too and that is your 12th os on shraman post asap post asap post asap please di write another os love u lotssssssssssss di stay happy take care !
    – sriyu sissy

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Awww thank u sooo sooo sooo much fr giving such a wonderful cmmnt my dear……!!!
      M really happy that u liked d ep….. πŸ™‚ OMG hahahah ok ok I will write another OS for sure kab ye nahi pata bt ab tumne Bol dia na I will surely try to write it ASAP πŸ™‚ but abhi thoda busy hoon in my studies cause 10 class has a tough syllabus…..Lekin phir Bhi I will try my best…..!!!
      Love u so much my dear……..!!!
      Take care….!!!
      By by!!

  8. sona

    😊😊😊😊😊😊
    So happy with the union of kariya..
    And ya..total ff part went well..without any argues..peacefully…

  9. Deotima

    wawa kya bat hey !!! lovely epi. even i had lost my fav earring in a puja pandal and realised when i came back home. i am a little confused about d yort papers so can u clear my confusions by just describing what had happened previously

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hey deotima darling…..!!! So good to c ur cmmnt after a long long tym I guess…..!
      πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ ok dear I can explain u
      Previously:
      Shravan named his Yort (a ship) to sumo….u can say it’s a gift…..n she was shocked cause preeti gave her that papers….n it is revealed..dat shr named these pares to her on d day of bet…..then we watch Priya (sumo mother) n kartik (sumo father) r regretting on leaving eaChOther n the realize their mistake n then reconcile…..
      Then later sumo goes to shr….n ask him abt the papers Yort papers cause she was so shocked by his this action…..hope u understand….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Lots of luv dear….!
      Keep cmmnting

  10. Angel_pari

    Angel_pari

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    Awwwww it was shoooo cute….. Aryyyy sumo ko nh pta shrvu uske liye yacht to kya jan b hazr krde nh??!?

    Sharman are soooo adorable loved them love u too my princess πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Awww thank u sooo much API….!! Hahahah shravu!! πŸ˜€

      Really glad that u r liking it….,!!
      Love u tooooooooooooo n much more API…!!
      Take care

  11. Neeti

    Neeti

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    sry I’m late again,after all I ur Leeti (late + Neeti)…..πŸ˜†πŸ˜œ
    very cute epi bechari Sumo, Shravu use earring de raha tha bt usne use hi ignore kar diya… hahahaha….apni Preeti bhi na hr jagha bechari gadhi hi he…hahahaha
    plsss pst soon
    luv u apse bhi zyada(same thing apne mujhe bola tha)- Neeti

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hahahah m m late more than u…..!!! To replying….. πŸ˜€
      Hahahahah sumo ignorance πŸ˜€ yahan preeti ko Gandhi banana must hai serial Mai she will be playing a major role I think πŸ™‚
      Hahahah I will try to post ASAP πŸ™‚
      Love u us se Bhi ziada bht bht bht hi ziada πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      My neeto!!!!!
      Take care

      • Neeti

        Neeti

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        nai me us se bhi 1000000000000 guna zaida pyaar karti hu apko, nai nai nai..😭 me zyada pyaar karti hu, 😭

      • Marie

        Marie

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        Hahhhaha awwwww haddd hai……. πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ acha acha acha i give up khush….maria kisi ke saamne giveup nai karti lekin yahan haar gai…tum jeeti khushhhh lekin iska ye bilkul mtlb nai ke mai pyaar nai karti…..
        muahhhhhh
        love u uncountable hahaa

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hy Fatima….!!! How r u dear ?? πŸ˜€
      Thank u so much dear…!!
      Glad u liked d ep…!!
      Will try to post ASAP
      U to take care…!
      Love ya….!

  12. Ariana

    Ariana

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    Oho Maria wht an epi!!! Wonderful. Suman thinks Shravan is a monkey!!! I die on tht guy. Lol let’s say Sumo to give me Shravu. Jk Ekdam masti epi. Loved it a lotttttttttt. Beyond words. Post next part soooooon.
    Love u
    muuuuaaaaah.

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Aww aru yr…!! Thank u so much fr ur lovely n sweeto sa cmmnt…!!
      Hahahah glad that u liked d ep….!! Also funny parts πŸ˜€
      Thank u so much yr…!! Really happy to c ur cmmnt!!
      Will try to post nxt prt ASAP πŸ™‚
      Love u so much yr….
      Muah
      Take care!

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hey kaya dear…!!!
      Thank u so much
      Glad that u r liking it
      N ur interest is increasing…..!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ keep cmmnting dear
      Lots of luv…!!
      Frm maria
      Take care

  13. Anamika

    First of all soooo sorry for being toooo late
    Busy tha thodu sa
    Coming to the epi
    Superb yr
    The interest is increasing day by day
    Post the nxt part asap plz
    Love uh maro

    • Anamika

      Btw just gotta kno its ur bday
      Happy bday sweety
      God bless uh
      Hope all ur dreams and desires get fulfilled
      Have a grt yr ahead party hard…
      Luv uh😘

      • Marie

        Marie

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        Awww thank u so so so much fr cmmnting n fr ur sweet wishe my lovely Api…..!!
        Thank u so much love u so much…!!
        Hahah u can call me anything
        MARO Marie maria mario….anything u like..!

    • Marie

      Marie

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      Hey anna API….!!
      No..no…no plzz don’t say sorry fr lateness ur….cmmnt matters not lateness…!!
      Haha I can understand isiliay no sorry…!!
      Haha thank u soo so so much fr ur cmmnt I always wait fr ur cmmnt API…!!
      Really thank u!!
      Will try to post ASAP ASAP πŸ™‚
      Love u too API…!!

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