Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 13 ( ek duje ke vaaste )

Hello guys…..!!
Frst of all toh thank u so so much fr cmmnting on prev part n loving it…!!!
N also fr ur prayers……!!! Result aagaya tests ka n I got highest mark in all subject so thank u soooooo much fr ur wishes love u all to d core really thank u so much….!!
M so happy….!!!
Well here is d part 13….
Hope u lyk this also….. πŸ™‚

———PART 13———–
Continue frm prev part……
Shraman share an eye lock which break by shr…..
Shr: sumo………
(Sumo is still lost in his eyes)
Shr: sumo..!!!
S cms to her senses: ye…yes….wat happened….
Shr: stand straight…..everybody is watching…..
(Sumo then realizes dat she is still in shr arms….she stands n both feels little bit awkward)

Khush..announces—-
So guys if dance completed so let’s start engagement ceremony….. πŸ˜€
All claps…
(Ayesh n rohit goes to stage n stand infront of EACHOTHR)
Both makes EACHOTHR wears ring…..
(Everyone claps)
Adi notices rohit is still holding ayesh hand…..
Adi slowly in his ears: beta engagement ho gai……
Rohit: Han toh……
—shr slaps his hand—
Toh bhabi ji ka hath chor de…..
(Everyone laughs….n ayesha blushes)
Sumo luks at shr who is smiling…..(she remembers how he saved her frm falling)

ITS NI8…..n everyone r in their respective rooms…..
Sumo is in room working on laptop….
Smone knocks at d door….
S sees d tym….
S: is tym kon..?? Aahhhh dam shr toh nai…
(She goes n opens d door bt it’s preeti sumo sighs in relief)
P: wat happened di..??
S: nothin nothin cm in……
(They both cm in)
S: smthin impor…..this tym…?
P: yeah di…(she shows sm papers to sumo) actually I want to give u these….
(Sumo takes d papers n reads)
(She gets shocks while reading it)
Sumo: wat d…….shr ke……Yort papers…???
(She luks at preeti)
Who give u these…???
P: shr bhaiya….
S: when….????
P: he gave them to me…ahh……days ago…may be months..he came to me n said to give u these…u won sm bet….
(S left shock hearing this….she again reads it….)
P: acha di m going to sleep (she yawns) byy good ni8….
S: good ni8…
(She reads d papers)
S: ye date toh us din ki hai jab hum ne bet lagai thi…..but shr ko toh pata Bhi nai tha kon jeene ga….??
(She remembers how he said to her dat “why didn’t she tell him before” n she replied “so kya tum mere naam kardete…??”)
(These words continuously echoes in her mind)
S: he named his Yort to me that day……..then why this kiss thing….?? Uffff wat he is upto now….!!! This boy…!!!

Morning:
Everybody gather in restaurant fr breakfast……
Shr notices dat sumo is yawning……
(He sees d tym)
Shr in mind: she slept 10 hours still yawning ???

After d breakfast…..
Kartik is sitting near window while everybody is busy in selecting photos of engagement…..
S: no this one….
P: no……!!!!! This one
S: acha wat so special in this…..
P: mom n dad r both in this…….
Kartik luks at Priya who has tears in her eyes…….
(Priya gets up n goes)
(Kartik luks sad)

Sumo is walking wid sm photos when she dhamm collides wid shr….
(All pics fall on floor)
S: sor…..(she sees shr is standing) u…!!!
Shr: ooooo bheee dekh kar chalo…..
S: u….!! (She luks down) c all d pics fall just cause of u…
(Shr sees d pics one pis WS of him n sumo only….he picks it up….)
(But sumo snatches it frm him)
Shr: sumo….!
S: ek toh pics gira di n ghor ghor kar dekh rai ho…!
Shr: wat d ??? U were nt luking while walking….
S: so don’t u have eyes also……????
(Sumo yawns again)
Shr: didn’t u take sleep ????
S irked: no I WS reading sm papers whole ni8……
Shr gets confused: watever now….complete wat u said…
S: wat..???
Shr: wahi….
S: Kia..??
Shr: sorry…..
S: hah it’s okyyyy….jao maaf Kia
Shr: ooooo hello I m nt saying sorry I want u to say sorry….!!
S: konsi khushi Mai…???
Shr: u collide wid me….!!
S: so mistake is frm both sides…
Shr: so…??
S: so u should also say…..that.,..
Shr: wat d…….I already said …..
S: no it WS by mistake….
Shr: uuffff no u Frst then I will…
S: no I will not….
Shr: then I will also not…
S: ok no prob waise Bhi u already said that……(she smiles n goes)

Sumo rocked shr shocked hahahah

Kartik cms in room he sees Priya sitting near window…….
He goes near her but she WS crying silently….
Kartik in concern: Priya….??
(He goes near her n sits besides her)
K: hey r u okyy…? Wat happened….??
P: jab se yahan aaai hoon….I feel every moment that it was mt big mistake to leave u…….
K gets shock….,
P: like everyone us trying to make me feel regret….fr my decision….
K rubs her tears: no need to cry….cause m also in d same situation….
(Priya luks at him)
Priya crying: we loved EACHOTHR kartik…..We take promise to live wid EACHOTHR forever…….then wat happened y we strt fough….?? Y we got separated…
(Kartik has now tears in his eyes n he can’t control himself….he hugs Priya tightly…..Priya who is bit shocked frm his dis action….can’t denied cause she feels safe in her husband arms…….hugs him back)
After a moment both realize…..n break d hug….
K: I…I am …sorryyy…..
P: it’s….Oky…
K: m so sorry Priya I shouldn’t have leave u…..
P: it’s my mistake too….
K: all these years I didn’t even realize dat how mush I need u….
P: n I WS also become tooo selfish dat didn’t even think once abt our daughters…..
K: I never moved on……
P: I knw me toooo……
K: our ego….passion of work…won that tym….but now our love will win…
P smiles: ofcourse…..thank u fr coming again in my lyf….
(He kisses on her forhead)
K; finally got my wife back…..
P: should we tell dis good new to sumo n preeti..!??
K: y not…..
(They goes)

Shr is playing games on his phone……
Nir cms to him…..
Nir: uuuuffffff this boy what should I do to u shr….!!!
Shr: wat have I don’t now..??
N: u always plaupy games beta if u r this free then y don’t u join ur dad’s business..??
(On hearing d name business shr strt making faces)
N: god….!! M not asking u tooo cut ur nerve…or to jump frm cliff….
Shr: I think that’s a better idea…(he laughs)
(Nir gets irritated…..bt suddenly sumo cms behind)
S: u said well aunty….(luks at shr) shr….y don’t u join ur dad’s company…I mean why don’t u handle his business…..
(Shr gives her a killer look n signs her to shut up)
(Sumo smirks)
Nir: yes sumo m also saying same but be…….(hips he luks at shr who again gets busy in playing games)
N: haddd hai….sumo plz do smthing ..(she goes)

S sits near him…..
Shr: who told u to cm in bw in put ur nose in my matter…??
S: ohhhh hello….!!! Shut up na…!!! Or Han ur matter..??? Hahaha funny kab se tumhara matter ho Gaya…??
Shr: y don’t u join ur family business…??? U have also completed ur studies na..?
S: I m confused bw my dad’s n mom’s business bt u u r not confused so join…!
(Shr gives a fake smile)
Shr: zaroor……..
S: wat ever…..I came here to talk to u….
Shr: wat….
S: abt papers
Shr: wat papers…??
S: Yort papers……
(Shr luks on)

——SCREEN FREEZES——–

Precap: guys want a promo or ep hi post kardoon……I will go wid d majority….

So guys how was it ???
Was it good…?? Ok ok….ya bad…???
Cmmnt guys cmmnt……n share ur views πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
Wat do u think will be shr reaction…??

Ans this through cmmnts….
N silent readers (don’t stay silent)

Chalo guys….by by
C u soon….!
Love u all…!

56 comments

  1. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    Hi love open the door
    Kese ho ???? Api jese ????
    The epi was a super duper hit it was fantabulus spectaculus amazing awesome wonderful cute like me hahahah
    It was t9o gud
    I really really liked it
    Tm na epi post krdo chor do promo dafa karo
    Ohk one shot to do yar based on ur and mine relation. With our names Marie and ufaq so api ki request accepted???
    And ya Congo for ur result treat do mjhe Jo main tm se mang chuki hn aj hi post karo kal se I will be busy jaldi likho r post karo
    Take care
    Love u lots se b lots

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy API….!!!
      Hahah m fyn yep Bilkul API jaisi beautiful hahahah……but API is most beautiful!!
      OMG OMG OMG thank u so so so much fr such a lovely sweet sa cmmnt API…..!!!
      M really glad dat u liked it…..!!!
      Hahahah ok chalo phir ep hi post kardete hain…..
      API ki request accepted ho gai I posted ab dekho TU wale kab post karte hain πŸ™‚ aisa ho Sakta hai Kia API kuch kahan or maria na mane never ever…..!!
      Hahahahah thank u so much API….!!! Hahaha Maine de di treat hope it gets posted soon…
      U tooo take care API,…!!!
      Love u mostest se Bhi bht bht ziada
      Stay blessed !!!

  2. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria !!!! This ep was just awwwwesome fantastic awwwwdorable fantabulous .. nd han u plzzzz post the ep .. promo ko chhorro .. nd well Congratulationzzzzzzzzz πŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽˆπŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽˆ for ur success .. May Allah grant u success in all the years to come .. 😊😊 ..
    Post very sooooooon ..
    Take care .. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy fati dear…..!!! Aww thank u soooo sooo sooo much yr…!!
      Hahaha ok I will post ep πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Yr thank u so much fr such a sweet n lovely wishes fr me….!! U r so sweet…..!!!
      I will try to post ASAP….!!
      U too take care….! May god bless u!

  3. Nandini aka Nandu

    Hi Marie. Yaar congrats and congrats for being the topper✌✌✌😎😎 lots of love. Keep writing. Yaar I tao want the episode only, I can’t handle the suspense u know. Keep writing dear. And the epi was fab.

    P.S. -THIS IS FOR EVERYONE!!!!!!
    guys I have come across a link, so pls pls vote for namik and MUTIPLE VOTING IS ALLOWED. here’s the link
    http://youthbuzzbiz.blogspot.in/2016/08/vote-for-your-favourite-tv-personality.html?m=1

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy nandini…..!!awww thank u so much Nandu darling….!! I love u toooo my dear….! Ok dear I will post episode nxt if u all want it…..!!
      Thank u so much again…!!
      Love u so much!

  4. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Hey di!
    The episode was damn amazing !!
    Loved it like usual..
    But di.. Woh papers ka kuch samajh nahi aaya.. What is YORT? Thoda samjhado..I’m small na didi *-*
    Waise the episode was amazing!!
    Priya and Kartik united !! Wow…
    Unki engagement bhi bohot cute thi..
    Weel promo post karo.. Because they make me excited..
    Loads of love,
    Nikko
    Do explain me about the paper *-*

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey nikko…!!
      Awww thank u so much dear…..!! M glad u liked it…!!
      Sorry fr late replying yr acha so abt the Yort papers……Yort is kind of ship a private ship…….u c bang bang movie us Mai Bhi hai…..
      I hope ab samajh aagaya ho I think I did sm typo mistake……in ep….anyways
      Thank u again my dear happy that u r loving d track….!!
      Love u soooo much
      Stay blessed
      N take care…..!!!
      Frm yr badi behen…!!

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey nikko…!!
      Awww thank u so much dear…..!! M glad u liked it…!!
      Sorry fr late replying yr acha so abt the Yort papers……Yort is kind of ship a private ship…….u c bang bang movie us Mai Bhi hai…..
      I hope ab samajh aagaya ho I think I did sm typo mistake……in ep….anyways
      Thank u again my dear happy that u r loving d track….!!
      Love u soooo much
      Stay blessed
      N take care…..!!!
      Frm yr badi behen…!!

  5. sona

    Wowww..
    Kartik..Priya.ek hogaye hai..
    I’m so happy…
    Promo hoba chahiye..maja aayega😊😊

  6. HarSHaN

    |Registered Member

    Marie!!!Congratzz!! !I m 5n…Hw r U??Epiii…writing is nyccc n shrumo seems very welll here….waitingg to read epiiiii soon…..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey bro….!! M also fyn…. πŸ™‚
      Awww thank u so much fr such a swwet cmmnt bhai…..i will try to post asap…….
      Take care bro…..!!!

  7. Kaya

    Hey……….. lovely update………… awesome…… really interesting………..you write really well……… loved it…………and yes I want an episode…….ASAP………. it’s really interesting…………… eagerly waiting for the next update………….. update soon……

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hyy kaya…yr thank u sooo much dear really glad dat u liked it…..!!
      Haha ok i will post ep nxt then…..cause everybody is asking fr this onlyyyy πŸ™‚
      Yes dear i will try to post asap
      take care lots of luv……. πŸ™‚

  8. Rukhsar

    |Registered Member

    Wow wow wow what a great epi eik dum super duper hit dhanso epi finally priya and kartik together now there us a ray of hope that sumo and shr will also unite …..ohhhh i m so excited for the upcoming epi but plz tell me one thing what is a yort and yeah plz post the epi soon i dont want a promo i want epi bcz i m so excited

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey api……. omg omg omg thank u sooooo much yrrrr i m really glad dat u liked it !!
      Hahahahha keh sakte hain ke shraman ke liay hope hai…….
      Hehe thanks fr being excited ok now abt d yort api yort is kind of a ship….private ship……i think i did a typo mistake in ep…….
      Ok then i will post ep….n asap πŸ™‚
      Hope u will like it……
      Love u api
      take care

  9. Anamika

    Marie yr u always rock
    What an epic epi
    Reunion of kartik n priya was wow
    N obvio shraman…. Haye jus loved the epi
    N btw congo for ur results… Keep it up
    N ya obvio epi no more auapence plzz hehe
    Bue luv uh

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u so much anna di…..!!
      M really glad that u liked it……!! Hahaha ok now i will post n ep n will asap asap πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰
      Thanks a lot fr ur wishes di…!!
      Love u so much !!
      By by take care

  10. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    even I didn’t understand wat is Yort paper…
    sabse pehle epi chaihe epi chaihe epi chaihe…warna rooth jaungi….
    dusra…epi was fabulous, it was so awesome dat ab mujhe apke sath chocolate share karne ka man kr raha he…mai kisi se apna chocolate share nai karti, alag se kharid ke dungi bt share nai karungi..
    tishra….di jante ho me sabse puch rai hu ki unhone Dream Girl dekha ki nai jis ne dekha usse age ki stry line jan lungi aur apko bhi bataoungi…
    kaisa laga mera idea..ha ha, bolo bolo
    luv u ki ap soch na sake- Neeti

    • Marie

      |Author

      Ok neeto darling yort is kind of a ship…..a private ship….hope u get it now πŸ™‚
      Hahahah ok ok ok ok dear di ko tumhara roorhna manzoor nai isiliayyyy ep hi hoga khush….!! πŸ˜€
      Awwww thank u sooo soo sooo much my sweetheart….!!!! U r being so sweeto yrrrrrrr
      hahaha great idea jis se bhi pata chale mujhe zaroor batana okkkk

    • Marie

      |Author

      Ok neeto darling yort is kind of a ship…..a private ship….hope u get it now πŸ™‚
      Hahahah ok ok ok ok dear di ko tumhara roorhna manzoor nai isiliayyyy ep hi hoga khush….!! πŸ˜€
      Awwww thank u sooo soo sooo much my sweetheart….!!!! U r being so sweeto yrrrrrrr
      love u sooooooo much yr
      Take care my love…….!!!
      hahaha great idea jis se bhi pata chale mujhe zaroor batana okkkk

      • Neeti

        |Registered Member

        And congratulation for your success Api (Main apko Api Bulao to ap maro ge to nai, Kya ha idhar bhi Api, Apu a sab bolte he behen ko) Idhar yani Bangladesh me …..by by Tata baki sab latest epi me

      • Marie

        |Author

        Yo I don’t really eat chocolates but I will sure only fr u my love….!! Hahah thank u so so so much OMG really u surely can call me API apu everything..!!!
        Cause Pakistan (yahan pr) API hi most common hai ya phir baji (used fr badiiiiiiiiiiiiiii behen) n u can call me apu anything my dear…..!!!
        Hahah ok baqi prt 14 Mai πŸ˜‰

  11. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria meri cute si sissi..
    Congrats for ur superb performance in ur tests..
    How r u??
    Epi was amazing as always..
    shraman nok jhok part was gud..
    u nailed it..
    try to post next epi soon…
    take care..
    Lots of luv
    Ruchi.. πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hyyy my sweetoooooo si api…!!!
      M fyn how r u….?? πŸ˜€
      awww thank u so much api
      thank u
      thank u so much
      m really glad dat u liked it…!!
      I will try to post asap…..!!
      Tale care di….!!
      Love u tooooooooooooooooo!!

  12. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    A promo will kill me so better save my life with an epi. Post sooooooooooooooooooooooon. I’m waiting. Btw this epi was fabulous. WONDERFUL.
    Love x infinity

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hahaah i tooo dont want u to die so i will post ep. …….. πŸ˜€
      Thank u so so much fr cmmnting aru glad u liked it….!!
      I will try to post asap….!!
      Take care darlinggg
      love u..!!

  13. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria.. Same name☺☺
    Vaise I don’t watch edkv but while I was scrolling through telly updates page I saw your name so thought to give it a try and I read this episode!! I liked it.. Actually loved it. But I exactly don’t know the storystory so can you please brief me the story??
    And congratulations for your resultsπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ in which standard you are??
    Pls reply…

    • Marie

      |Author

      Omg hey maria…..!!! So happy haha same same….!!
      Yr m soooo happy that u cmmnted n liked d ep….. M reallg obliged my dear….. !!yes y not the story is abt two besr friends shravan n suman…..they dont believe in love but actual mai shr loves sumo…….but later she knws abt it…..n gets angry cause she thinks dat her parents separated bcz of love…….n shr tells her that he moved on cause he loved her but now she is only his frnd……n sumo forgives him……but now u can c that sumo parents reconcile now…….n they r in paris now…sumo still dont loves shr……
      Hope u get it phir bhi nai then i can send u links πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Btw m in class 10 n m 14 yers old wat abt u….whre r u frm…?? How old r u…?? In which class u study…??
      Can we friends….??? πŸ˜€
      take care yrrrr love u…!!
      Keep cmmnting πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

      • Maria

        |Registered Member

        Ohh nice story… I will definitely read it.. I live in India, Mumbai.. I am 16 and in 11th now.. I guess you will turn 15 this year??
        Of course we can be friends… And from where are you??
        Love you too..❀

      • Marie

        |Author

        OMG 16 Kia baat hai n mumbai that’s one of my fav cities…..!!
        M frm Karachi Pakistan ….
        Haha u guessed ri8 I will be 15 very very soon…. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
        Yay….!!! Frnds…!!!
        Love u 3-4-5–6 many many more !!

  14. Anjali

    hey Marie …m Anjali …read all episodes of ur ff n read ur another one also hate to love…both are awsm dear…upload the next part soon dear πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Anjali!!
      OMG really u read….npboth thanks a lot dear….I really loved my prev one it was so special fr me …….. Thanks a lot lot n lot dear……. M really happy to c ur cmmnt
      I will try to post nxt 1 very soon…… πŸ™‚
      Love u dear…..!!
      Keep loving n keep cmmnting

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