Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 10 “friendship special” ( ek duje ke vaaste )

Hello guys ! πŸ™‚
Thanks a lot fr cmmnting on prev part m so obliged….! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

N GUYS MANY OF U WANTED THIS PART ASAP…….
N also today is a very special day fr me
1) friendship day….so “HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY TO ALL MY FRNDS KUM FAMILY”
Guys I must say u all r not only great n helpful friends but also a loving n supportive family of mine……I have no brother n no sis….no.no.no. I have many sisters…..u …!!
Thank u fr always being there fr me……!!
Thank u soooooo much……

N SECOND) I reach my 10 prt of my ff…..
Here is 10 part…. Ooohhhh god I’ve reach on 10 prt can’t believe thank u sooo much fr ur love n support wid out them I won’t be able to reach here…..
Thank u soooo soooo much…!!
Tight hug n lots of kisses frm me to all…! πŸ™‚

So it’s a give of friendship day frm me to all…..hahaha a fast update… πŸ˜€
Well let’s strt our 10 prt here it is….hope u lyk it….

——-PART 10———-
Continue frm prev prt…..
Shr is walking in anger suddenly dhamm he collides wid adi……
Adi: ooh Bhai… Where r u lost bro….??
Shr: sum….(he realizes) nothin…
Adi: acha tell me one thing wat happened on table was it……
Shr: yes it’s true…..
Adi: so u both patch up??
Shr: yep….
Adi: bt wat abt love letter..?? U love….
Shr: no I don’t love her….I WS a teenager then….n it WS attraction nothing more….
Adi: bt……….
Shr cuts him: acha m going to take shower phir Jana Bhi hai wapis….
—-he leaves—

Khush n ayesh were watching d whole convo frm a distance…..
(They Luk at eaChOther)
A: or we were thinking to unite them……
K: as lovers……..(she luks down in disappointment)

Shr cms to his room…
—he slams d door in anger—–
Shr: wat is happening to me…??? Y m I keep thinking abt her…..why…????
(He holds his head ) uffff……
Shr: no sumo u did wrong….very wrong…. After seeing that letter u didn’t care abt my feelings…..you’ve just………ditched me….u want tym no u take enough tym….I don’t love u anymore….bt yeah I knw u r wrong abt love n u r wrong abt me….u don’t hate luv u just hate the ego of ur parents…..n one day u will realize..it…n I will wait fr that day………frm now on I will be only ur FRND….I knw u can’t love me I already lost u as my my love but not this tym I will not lose u as my FRND……..
(He gets sad)

Ayesh Who is just standing outside listens all this….(she goes to Khush n tell her abt it)
K: really…
A: yes..!
K: that means there is still hope…..shr is trying to move on but we have to do smthing…..
A: bt wat..??
(K calls preeti)
Preeti picks up…
P: hello..??
K: sumo is coming home after two or three hours u have to give it final touch… πŸ˜‰ baqi ka kaam kal kar lia tha na…
P: ..all is done my dear……..bt I have a confusion agar dad ne mera checkup KISI aur doc se karwa lia toh???? I mean hum ne dr harshad ko toh khareed lia bt…
K: don’t worry…….!!

It’s afternoon n all reached to their respective places……
Sumo WS taking to Khush n ayesh on phone….
K: so u r going to paris after two days…fr a trip?
Ayesh: hmmmm when will u cm back??
S: ufff yr pehle chali toh Jaon…
K: bt so sudden how..??
S: yr I don’t knw either when I cam pe home preeti tell me n give me tickets…bt yr the most shocking news is that mom n dad r going together How is that possible… Is preeti ne kya kuch Kia hai…..I mean they got agree very easily ca u believe mere jaate hi aaisa kya ho Gaya…??
K: aray nai yr tu ghalat soch rai hai……acha tu na enjoy kar….bs enjoy…acha shr…..
S: yr I can’t think……I don’t knw wat should I do…should I believe him….or…
K: sumo listen to me…..u both r besties…ok…so there is a thin line b/w best frndship n love…..he didn’t cross that line…..but I think he moved on now…he said it by himself na……..he WS just a teenager so it was only attraction I think….n now he is a mature person…I think u should believe him……
S: hmmmmmmmm

The there chit chat fr sm tym n then hanged up…
Sumo cms to preeti: hey wat have u done??
P: wat have I done?? (Innocently)
Sumo holds preeti’s ears
P: acha acha di batati hoon plzzzz chod do na..
S: tell Frst…(bt she leaves her ears)
P: wo Maine aisa Kia ke….

FLASHBACK:
Preeti: mom!!! Don’t get near me I swear I will cut my nerve..
Priya: wat happened to u have u lost it….
P: mom I want only ans r u going with us or nt…if nt then I will…
Pri: preeti pagal ho gai ho kya sirf trip ke liay ye bachoan jaise harkatain…,
P: it’s fr di…!!!
Pri: sumo kahan se Aagai in sab ke beech Mai…
–they fight fr a long tym and finally our preeti won—

PRESENT:
P: n I did same wid dad…!!
S: bt y…????? Have u lost it….y this trip…
P: di I want us…all of us to spent smtym together as a family….
S: oooho so suddenly after 6 years….!
P: let it go….jao ap packing strt karo….jab mom n dad nai Bol rahe toh ap ko kya ho raha hai….??
—preeti goes n Sumo confused—-
S: pagal larki…..

At ni8:
Sumo cms to her room…..
(She is still thinking abt shr….his words)
S: wat happened to him……..? Y his behaviour chaged so sudden….?
(She then realizes her words when she find out that shr loved her….)
S: did I over reacted that day…?? Maybe a little bit…but ho can he love……..
(She remembers him saying….”that he don’t love her anymore)
S: is he saying truth…??
She goes n opens her cupboard n take out a box……
(She opens it n takes out many pics of her n shr…..)
In one pic….they luked at EACHOTHR in funny expression….
(She laughs slightly)
Then she takes out a CD…
It’s KHUSHI’s 20 bday….party…
She watches d video…
All r having fun…..shraman r playing…she applies cake on sumo..
S: shr ke bache tu tuk…!!
(She runs behind him)

Sumo saws this n smiles…..
S: u never made me feel in those 6 years dat u loved me…..maybe u r saying truth dat u moved on….
(She sees all photographs)
S: I dont think I will be able to lose u…..able to hate u…..cause our bond is so strong we r besties……..

1 DAY BEFORE GOING:
Shr cms to sumo room…….
Shr: why didn’t u tell me…???
S: wat??
Shr: yr abt going to goa….??
S: ooohoooo wait wait y would I tell u..??
Shr: ufff cause m ur best FRND….(sumo raises her eyebrow)
Shr: uff pehle toh ye Batao ye plan kis ka hai jaane ka..?
S: preeti’s ……
Shr: n why she made..dat plan….??
S: I don’t knw go ask her……
Shr: hadddd hai…..
(Shr gets sad)
S: uff m going only fr one month….wat d big deal wid that…
Shr: it’s a big deal fr me…..
(Sumo luks at him)
Shr: I mean I will miss u yr…. (He makes a puppy face)
S: ufff daramebaaazi….,
Shr: no seriously….
(Sumo luks on)

S: shr I think I need it….spending tym wid my whole family…maybe it’s good fr me..
Shr: yes ofcourse…. U should…..u must be thinking why I m changing so sudden I m sorry abt yesterday I shouted on u….n……..(he luks at her) I was afraid…afraid of losing a FRND lyk u…….I just want a chance…I want us to strt a new beginning…n forget everything that has happend…can u forget…??….can I have that chance??

( sumo emotionally nods yes)
—shr smiles—
S: I also think abt that whole way…I think me too over reacted at that moment…….
I don’t believe that u move on…..
(Shr luks down)

Shr: acha I brought smthng fr u…….want to c??
Sumo: yep….
—-Shr takes out a diamond locket of “S” with half heart…..
Shr: this….(he gives it to her)
S: wowwww so pretty….but (she sees half heart) it’s only half….where is d other half??
—-shr shows n other locket of “S” wid the half one—-
Shr: here….
Shr: one fr u n one fr me…..(he takes d locket frm her) look.. There r magnet in these half heart…(he joins both hearts n they make one) c………
S: wow it’s so beautiful…..
Shr: no as u my bestie….. (He gives her locket to her) here…is ur…n I will keep mine……….it’s best frndship love…..
—sumo wears it shr also wears it—-
Shr: sumo….promise me…u will never take it off….
S: on one condition….
Shr nods—–
S: if u promise d same…..
(Shr nods wid a smile)
S: me too promise….

–shr leans forward—
S: shr……….
(Bt instead of kiss on her lips he kisses her forhead)
Shr: travel safe….
(Sumo luks at him in surprise )
Shr laughs: hahah u think m going to kiss….ufff sumo!!
S: no…no……I WS nt thinking…..
Shr: haha liar…uff why u always hers sacred bheee m yr bestie n bestie don’t kiss eaChOther…..
S: haha I knw…kanjoos if u have win….u won’t give me ur Yort in knw that….or ai bade kiss Karne wale…..
—shr smiles—
Shr: acha there Is smthing on ur hair….
S: where….
Shr: wait let me help…..
—-he messes her hair—
Shr: Hahahahah
S: shr ke bache!!!!!
Shr runs frm there……
S: ruk…..
(She runs after him)
—both have a cute fight—-
Shraman fight wid pillow n runs behind eaChOther……
S: shr ke bache wapis aaa……
…..Shr shows her tongue……
Shr: I will not cm……
Both thinks in mind:
“Hah!! Finally got my bestie back after so much drama”

Scene changes after one day where sumo is traveling….
—-she smiles remembering abt shr—–
Shr thinks: kitna ajeeb hai ye insaan kab phi acha kabhi angry young man bt finally have my bestie back…..
(She remembers everything)
She touches her locket——n remembers abt promise…..
S: hah! Delhi drama toh hogaya….now 1 month in paris (she sighs) hope yahan kuch na ho……..
—she luks outside frm window—
Paris…..here I cm………..!!

—-SCREEN FREEZES—–

Precap: surprise……

So guys how WS the ep..??
Hope I didn’t bored u guys….
If so then plzzzz cmmnt…..n support me…
N silent readers plzzz u too cmmnt….
Plzzz cmmnt cause it’s a really special day n ep fr me……
Plzz guys pray fr me I m having tests ……..

Next ep will be on paris drama !! πŸ˜€ excited??

Ok guys till then by by….
Love u all!!

49 comments

  1. Nandini aka Nandu

    Excited… Nope….. Am damn excited.pls post tomorrow itself. Pls Mario.. Love u😍😍 lots of love dear. Loved the cute fight between them. Happy friend ships day to u too dear. May god bless u.

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awwww thank u sooo much darling……!!!
      Yr kal toh possible hi nai cause I vare test tomorrow n ek lafz tak nai likha nxt chpyy ka.. πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
      So I will try to write it tomorrow if possible….warna 2-3 days ……maximum….
      M so so so happy dat u r loving
      May god keeps u always happy….!!! N god bless u tooooooo πŸ™‚

  2. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    hi di..
    first of all,
    happy friendship dayy!!
    and thank you for such a wonderful episode!!
    i loved it!!
    kya likhte ho yaar app!!
    finally patch-up.. accha hua..
    i loved each shraman scene.. locket wala part was amazing..
    post soon..
    love ,
    your choti si behen,
    nikko

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hyeee my dear…!
      How r u..?
      Hahaha happy frndship day to u toooooooo….!!!!!! πŸ˜€
      Awww frndship Mai no thank u my love πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Thank u
      Thank u soooo much fr such a lovelyyyy cmmnt yr…
      M so glad that u r loving d current track…n scenes…
      I will try to post ASAP.. πŸ™‚
      Love u toooo…..!!!!!
      Ur badi sisoooo
      Maria πŸ˜‰

  3. Kaya

    Lovely….update…love it….you are an awesome writer…….update soon ……..I am super excited for the next part….post soon….. please…. waiting for the next update…….

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww thank u soo soo sooo much fr such a sweet n pyara pyara sa cmmnt my dear….!! πŸ˜€
      Sure I will try to post ASAP πŸ˜‰
      Thanks a tone fr waiting n fr ur excitement πŸ™‚
      Love ya..

  4. Heena

    Happy friendship day to all…
    superb episode… i loved it…plsss next part bhi jaldi se upload kr dena….
    i think ab ek ladki ki new entry honi chahiye shravan k liye but but only temporary….taki shravan ko uss ladki k sath dekh kr suman jealous feel kre…aur suman ko bhi pyar ka ehsaas ho….

    • Marie

      |Author

      Happy friendship day to u toooo dear…!! Haha thank u so so much fr such a lovely cmmnt n thank u so much fr ur suggetion i will definaltlyy think abt it πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Yeah dear i will try to post nxt 1 asap… πŸ™‚
      Love u….

  5. pretty preeti

    Happy friendship day mamato
    It was amazing
    Super cool
    Loved IG
    Post next one soon
    Bye
    Loved u and ur ff
    Stay blessed
    My amazing writer

    • Marie

      |Author

      Happy frndship day cutooooo
      thank u
      thank u
      thank u
      sooooooo much fr such a..
      Lovely ….
      N sweet sa cmmnt πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Thank u so much fr loving it yr……
      May god always keeps happy….. πŸ™‚
      Love u soooooo much my sweeto

  6. sona

    Voh..
    Surprise..surprise..surprise..surprise..surprise…surprise..surprise….πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    I’m really excited to travel in Paris with shraman…pls…jaldi aa jao..maria him Sab ko pick up karney..terey saath le jaaney..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚β˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜Ί
    All the best..dear.. Our wishes will b always with u..😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘

    • Marie

      |Author

      Heeheehh yes yes….yes…yes..!!! πŸ˜€
      awww thank u so so so much fr. such a sweet cmmnt πŸ™‚ sona di πŸ™‚
      hahahh zaroor di…..i m cming so sooon to pick u all…. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

      aww thank u so much fr ur wishes
      may god bless u….!!
      Love u soooooooooo much πŸ™‚

  7. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    heya.. maria.. loved it.. after so much of misunderstanding .. finally dey r back ..
    u r such great writer.. so much of fun.. loved it.. 😊😊😊😍😍😍

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hyyy di….!!
      How r u..???
      Yeah finally they r back. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Yahan pr hi sahi….cause serial mai toh………….
      Awww thank u so so much fr such a lovely cmmnt di….!!
      Love u so much πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  8. Zainab

    Okay first of all I tried replying on the previous episode but it didn’t happen .-. Anyway I’m from Sahiwal, you?
    Okay now coming to this episode, IT WAS AWESOME πŸ‘ Loved every bit of it. Keep up writing this amazingly girl. πŸ’œ
    By the way in which grade are you?

    • Marie

      |Author

      Ooohooo no prob at all….zainab api. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Ooh wow saiwal. πŸ˜€ well m frm karacho πŸ™‚
      Hah thank u so so so much fr such an amazinggggg cmmnt api…!!
      M in grade 10 api n u…?? U must be in college i think… πŸ™‚
      Love u soooo much
      take care

      • Zainab

        I’m in a levels final year πŸ™‚
        And I love karachi πŸ’œ
        In which school do you go to?
        You’re so sweet. Love you too 😘 Take care πŸ™‚

      • Marie

        |Author

        Wow level finals..? But I don’t knw wat is it…I meant u have completed college..??or in final year…?
        Hahah if u love karachi then u should cm here fr a visit….n whenever u came plzz tell me cause I despretlyyyyy want to meet everybody…include u πŸ˜€
        I go to AYESHA ACADEMY πŸ™‚
        Awwww thank u so much hahah itni tareeef…. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
        U r also tooooo sweet my API…
        Love u so much
        May god bless u πŸ™‚

  9. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hello !!!! This ep … Ahhhh !!! Amazing awwwwesome as always .. there is no doubt that u write sooo gud .. keep going ..
    Nd post sooooooon ..
    Waitingggggggg ..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hello ji…..!!! How r u my dear…? How r studies going…?? πŸ˜€
      Well thank u so much yr bht tareef kardi now m blushing…..!!
      Ok ok i will tru to post asap asap πŸ™‚
      Thanks a tone fr waiting…
      Love u so much

  10. Anamika

    Awesome awesome awesome…..
    Haye m in love with shravu…😜
    So cute he is when it is about his bestie..
    U r going awesome with the story
    Keep writing more n more
    N ya wishing u all a very happy frienships day
    Feels awesome to have u guys as frnds😘

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u
      thank u
      thank u….soooo much ann di.. (can i call u dis if u dont mind πŸ™‚ )
      Hahah i also love d shr of dis story πŸ˜‰

      Yrrr di itni tareef hahah dil garden garden ho gaya πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
      me too feeling so lucky to have such great sisters lyk u all……
      Thank u so much fr cmimg in my life…
      Love u sooooo much!

  11. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Happy Friendship day!!!! Now tht uk we both r 14 so i guess di se twin ya fir frnds ho gaye. Abt the epi…….Wht was it again? I’m still shocked. I need to get over it. The locket….uhhhhhhh!! Y so good yaar? If u post soooo much jaanleva epis then I’ll die soon b4 reading ur complete ff. Don’t kill me. And y so many surprises? I want precap!!!! Now I’m dying in excitement. Post asap
    Love x infinity
    Ariana

    • Marie

      |Author

      Happy frndship day to my friend kum twin sis…!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
      Hahaha we r of same age wow….!!!!! No no no twin sis is good !! Hahaha
      Hahah itni tareeef ufff mama ko koi bulao meri πŸ˜€ wo Bhi dekhain ke itni tareeef ho rai hai meri…..!!
      Hahaha why would I lyk to kill yr mere baare Mai toh soch lo Ariana mera kya hoga…???? Agr tum chali gai toh……??
      Ooohooooo dekho ye jaanleva wali baatein kar Bhi kon raha hai Ariana madam… Jo khud itni janleva ep post karti hain πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
      Hahahaha ok my dear but paris drama toh abhi strt hoa hai Precap Bhi mil jai ga πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Ok ok I will try to post ASAP Khush….?? πŸ˜€
      Hahahah plz don’t die yr….!!
      Love u more than u πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Acha Ariana yr I have a quest.. That is Ariana ur real name..?? Or where r u frm..?

  12. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    Lo Maine aha bhi xmnt nahi kiya…
    sry di bt epi was soo nice…
    pr ab to surprise mat rakho
    mere bare main to koi sochtai nahi…
    choti hu to meri mange kya nahi hhai
    abhi konsa Paris drama hoga…. Phir se ShraMan ka jagra to nahi hoga no pls don’t do dis…
    ab philhal by nind a rahi he shubha 10 bajeπŸ˜‹…
    love,emotions,aur surprise Na rakhne Ki iccha-Neeti

    • Marie

      |Author

      Ahhaha no prob my sweetheart….!!
      Awww surprise nai toh maza kaisa huh…? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
      Awww meri neeto ki mange salakhon pr hain…!!!! Jab surprise khulte ga toh maza Bhi tumko hi aai ga beti ji……!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
      Hahahah paris drama toh paris Mai jaane ke baad hi pata chale ga na… πŸ™‚

      Hahaha ok ji good ni8 sweet dreams bt abhi afternoon hai kyun ke I just saw ur cmmnt :p :p
      Hahah ok ok my dear….!!!
      Love u soooo soo sooo infinityyyyyyyyy
      Frms ur sisooooo maria

      • Neeti

        |Registered Member

        Main uthi hi hu 2:57(India ke 2:27pm) mein
        ghar pe koi nahi Tha aur main school bhi nai gayi…
        main 10 baje so kar 11 baje uthi aur phir 12 baje ke aspas so gayi,,.
        puri rat jag ke ff par rahi Thi cake bana rahi Thi phone charge kar rahi Thi so din me hi sona para…
        ab main baki ff par ne jati Hu…
        kabhi alvida Na kehna Marie di ah ahah-Neeti

  13. Zainab

    Hey Maria. Tried replying to that comment but it didn’t happen again .-. anyway alevels is like fsc, not in studies though only grade wise. Both of them are of two years and counted as 12th grade but before alevels we do olevels which is of three years so we go to colleges a year later than fsc students. So after this year I’ll go to college IA πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      No..no..not a prob at all……
      Oooohhhhh wow zainab API…….!!!! That’s so great ! : d πŸ˜€
      Well I completely understand now……n all d best fr ur future n studies my prayers r always wid u……!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Btw any chances to cm karachi in future…? πŸ˜‰
      Take care api…..!!
      May Allah bless u…..!!
      Love u So much se Bhi ziada…!! Muahhhhh

      • Zainab

        Thank you 😘 Best of luck to you too for your future πŸ™‚ I don’t have any plans to come to karachi yet.. My khala and mamu lived in Karachi. Khala’s family moved to Dubai and Mamu moved to Canada with his family.. so it’s been a long time since I’ve visited karachi. For studies I’ll probably go to Lahore or multan or maybe abroad. Nothing final yet.
        Take care.
        Oh btw when will you post the next episode??

  14. HarSHaN

    |Registered Member

    Nyc epi Marie…Reading “TokTok” in book..as first line in ur FF ..while.at the end epis..of the ff..After that,tiz Spl epi10..Gud epi n well describing moments..Keep continue..

      • HarSHaN

        |Registered Member

        mm..S..I don’t mind..I m 22?!An artie luv to draw,n write stories n Frm TamilN,India.πŸ™‚.n U?I got an intro already!! A gud writer..

      • Marie

        |Author

        Woah…..!!! 22 n india great..!?
        M maria 14 years old frm karachi Pakistan πŸ™‚
        Well r u a boy or a girl m confused
        Should o call u di or bro hahaha plzzz clear my confusion πŸ˜€

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