pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff ( ek duje ke vaaste) part 1

Hello my lovely frnds…..!! ๐Ÿ˜€
Maria here wid d vryy frst prt of my new ff “pyaar dosti hai”
Hope u lyk it guys….!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

—–PRT 01——-

—a beautiful house is shown—
ยซยซยซยซ in a living room two boys were playing table tennisยปยปยปยป
ยซยซยซยซ two girls r talking to eachothrยปยปยปยปยปยป
ยซยซยซยซ n one boys is is doing smthng wid tvยปยปยปยป

Suddenty i voice hear…..frm d kitchen—-
Voice over: d cake is ready!! ๐Ÿ˜€
One girl (khushi) : o my god! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ sumk is cming
2nd girl (ayesha) : no..no…nt again yr….
—–yes guys they all r talking abt sumo—-

when sumo came out frm d kitchen evrybdy act to be dead— ๐Ÿ˜€
but one boy who is near d tv cant get tym to move so she act if having a heart attack…….. haha ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

sumo cms n c’s evrybdy—-
S: hawwwwww…!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ so mean yr…… i just made it wid so much luv…n….
—–suddenly her eyes stuck on d dramebaaz boy near d tv—–

S: n u…… (angrily) nautanki baaz ek num ke……. u will nvr get change na..?
—–d boy still acting—–
Sumo also strts her act…— ๐Ÿ˜€
aahhh ahh…..my foot….ahhhh
—–d boys sddenty leave all his nautanki n cares fr her—–
Boy: wat happen..?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ let me c….
Sumo: hahahahah….. ( he realizes) shr dont do nautanki if canf do… ๐Ÿ˜€
—-yes guys d dramebaaz boy is our hero shr—- ๐Ÿ˜‰

Sum: c’mon evry1 enough…….wake up now….
(evry bdy wakes up)
Adi: yr plzzz…..i beg u…nt dis cake again…..
Rohit: han yr….
Sumo: no its good look….
—-she shows dem—-
Khush: but d prev 1 ws more good frm d outside n when we taste it….
(all laughs)
—khush givs a high five to ayesha—–
Shr: yr enough…it ws nt evn her mistake is she mistakenly mix salt…..
Wat we an do..?? (he also laughs)
Sumo: ooyyyy wat can i do if salt n powder suger r same……
Khush: u can taste…..
Shr: acha bs bs……
Adi: shr is taking her side tooo much let him taste…. ๐Ÿ˜€
—-shr gives him a killer look—-
All cheer up fr him….he cuts d cake n taste it….. darr darrr ke ๐Ÿ˜€
shr: wowww…its good..!!

—evrybdy strts eating—-
When eating sumo apply a piece of cake on shr face—-
Shr: oyyy !! sumo ki bacchi…! ๐Ÿ˜€ now u will….pay fr it….
—-he runs behind her—-
Sumo: no…oyyy.nooo ๐Ÿ˜€
—he ws abt to apply cake on sumk face—-

Sumo: ooy my eye…..
—-shr cares fr her—-
Shr: hey hey……let me check….
—-he checks hr eye n they have a small eyelock—-
—bt sumk breaks d eyelock pinches him n runs away—
Sumo: hahha u cant catct me…
—-shr smiles—-

SCREEN FREEZES….

precap: all frnds are enjoying movie….
ayesha: sumo yr i think u should also love……… (she stops)
sumo gets up n goes to othr room sadly……
rohit: yr i told u many times ayesha not to ask or force her to love smone…….u knw d truth….

So guys how ws d frst ep..!! ๐Ÿ˜€
wid full on masti… ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Did u lyk it…??
If so……then plzzz cmmt…. ๐Ÿ™‚
N silent readers dont saty silent u tooo cmmnt cause i realy need it… ๐Ÿ™‚

By guys….
LOVE U ALL…..!! ๐Ÿ™‚

37 comments

  1. Marie

    |Author

    Guys one question i fogot to ask….
    —–wat do u think y sumo gets sad by d name of luv——
    Any guesses…??? ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Socho socho…..
    Ans bhi dena…! ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Ahhhh !!!!!!! Finally u posted the first part ? … it was fantabulously awwwwesome?? … nd the ShraMan fight was way tooooooooooooo cute yr ?? … first ep ny hi chhakky maar dye hn … i guess upcoming story b phr amazing hogi ??? … luved it to the core girl ? … keep up the gud work going โ˜บ … eagerlyyyyyy waiting for the next part … post ASAP ASAP ASAP plzzzz ..
    Thank u ???

    • Marie

      |Author

      AWWW ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ thank u sooo soo much fr such a lovely n sweet cmmnt dear…..
      M really glad u lyk it…! ๐Ÿ˜€
      ok dear…i will try to post asap..! ๐Ÿ˜‰

  3. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Question mene baad me dekha … so I think suman ka b koi luv shuv ka chakkar hoga past me r larrky ny ussko cheat kiya hoga … ummmmmm may b ????

  4. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Amazing.. It was great.. Good to have you back.. ShraMan scenes were adorable.. I guess Sumo has a past maybe.. Post soon

    • Marie

      |Author

      Aww thank u sooo much nikki dear…! ๐Ÿ˜‰
      Thnks alot fr such a lovely cmmnt!
      Okkkk thanks a tone fr ur ans we’ll c wat will happen…. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Naina

    So finally ur epi came its wonderful really really great awesome love it โคโคโคโค

  6. Anamika

    I think a previous heart break…. or her very closed one suffered something due to love….. we can jus guess…. this epi was an osm start Maria…. waiting for the next part… post soon….??

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thanks alot anamika dear….! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      N yeah also thanks a tone fr ur ans we’ll c wat will happen….. ๐Ÿ˜‰
      I will try to post asap…!

  7. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Wow maria….it was so so good…..!!!
    Loved it…yeah even I think that she had a past…wid a guy….whom she loved but something must hve happened…!!

  8. sumo

    It was amazing maria … Liked it a lot.. N I don’t know what’s up wid sumo .. Let’s see… N
    Khush! Thanks yaar saw ur comments u have put my name everywhere.. U r a sweetheart.. Keep doing dat for me coz I don’t know if I would be a blue to comment… ???

  9. Kaira

    Hey I am a silent reader this is my first comment u people do a awesome job I think because sumo parents serpreted she does not believe in love keep writing

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww than u soooo much dear m so happy that u cmmnt…..!! ๐Ÿ˜€
      N yr I will be very obliged to c ur cmmnt on next part also..! ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. Kaira

    I think sumo’s parents divorced that is why she doesn’t believe in love maybe her parents had love marriege

  11. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god Maria…. It was just amazing… Loved it….loved it…loved it…..
    Haha sumo ko khana banana nhi aata??i loved the way everyone was teasing her…i it made me remember my friends…. They also tease me like this only though I cook quite good??
    I loved shravan yr he is so sweet…..tease bhi kar rha hai care bhi kar rha hai….
    Sab ke sab nautanki…..???
    I was laughing so hard….that I got a cramp in my stomach…. Kamaal kar diya tune…
    And yes I m so happy to c myself that m iimagining me in the scenes…..

    And about the guess I agree with kaira… Maybe her parents got separated and USKA vishwash utth gya pyaar se…..โ˜บโ˜บ

    Loved it yr….jiyo meri Maria…..love u dear

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww!!! Thank u…..thank u…..fr such a wonderful n amazing cmmnt my dear…!!
      Hehehehehehehe…..! ๐Ÿ˜€
      Oohk thanks a tone fr ur ans my dear…! We’ll c wat will happen…! ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thank u so much fr ur sweet wishes also yr……..
      Tu Bhi ji hazaaaron saal ๐Ÿ˜€
      Love u toooo dear…!

  12. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Maro kya likha hai yaar itna acha yaar sorry late comment kr rhi hoon mai kam kr rhi this sorry but now I read it and I am mad hmari sumo bechari salty cake bana diya koi baat nhi sikh jai gi maro I think sumo ke sath kuch hoya hoga jis se shayad WO kisi se waja se bat nhi krti pyaar me bare me

    • Marie

      |Author

      No prob yr tune cmmnt toh Kia na…!! It’s enough fr me… !! Thank us so much yr fr such a lovely n amazing cmmnt!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Oohk thanks a tone fr ur ans we’ll c wat will happen….! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  13. Nishu

    |Registered Member

    i gusse im late to cmnt but maria…….. This is seriously tooo loving….. Friendship bonding, love angles, romance, nok jhok ol in one package…….. I ttly loved this story line……. N abt our que, may be sumo’s parents did love merrage & thn got separated……. Love ur ff dea….. Keep writting

  14. Marie

    |Author

    No prob u r nt late….!! ๐Ÿ˜€
    its enough fr me dat u cmmnt…!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
    m so happy to knw dat u loved it thanks alottttttt……..!!!!
    Keep loving n cmmnting di…!!
    N yes ur ans is ri8

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