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pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff ( ek duje ke vaaste) part 1

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Hello my lovely frnds…..!! 😀
Maria here wid d vryy frst prt of my new ff “pyaar dosti hai”
Hope u lyk it guys….!! 🙂 🙂

—–PRT 01——-

—a beautiful house is shown—
«««« in a living room two boys were playing table tennis»»»»
«««« two girls r talking to eachothr»»»»»»
«««« n one boys is is doing smthng wid tv»»»»

Suddenty i voice hear…..frm d kitchen—-
Voice over: d cake is ready!! 😀
One girl (khushi) : o my god! 😮 sumk is cming
2nd girl (ayesha) : no..no…nt again yr….
—–yes guys they all r talking abt sumo—-

when sumo came out frm d kitchen evrybdy act to be dead— 😀
but one boy who is near d tv cant get tym to move so she act if having a heart attack…….. haha 😀 😀

sumo cms n c’s evrybdy—-
S: hawwwwww…!! 😮 so mean yr…… i just made it wid so much luv…n….
—–suddenly her eyes stuck on d dramebaaz boy near d tv—–

S: n u…… (angrily) nautanki baaz ek num ke……. u will nvr get change na..?
—–d boy still acting—–
Sumo also strts her act…— 😀
aahhh ahh…..my foot….ahhhh
—–d boys sddenty leave all his nautanki n cares fr her—–
Boy: wat happen..?? 😮 let me c….
Sumo: hahahahah….. ( he realizes) shr dont do nautanki if canf do… 😀
—-yes guys d dramebaaz boy is our hero shr—- 😉

Sum: c’mon evry1 enough…….wake up now….
(evry bdy wakes up)
Adi: yr plzzz…..i beg u…nt dis cake again…..
Rohit: han yr….
Sumo: no its good look….
—-she shows dem—-
Khush: but d prev 1 ws more good frm d outside n when we taste it….
(all laughs)
—khush givs a high five to ayesha—–
Shr: yr enough…it ws nt evn her mistake is she mistakenly mix salt…..
Wat we an do..?? (he also laughs)
Sumo: ooyyyy wat can i do if salt n powder suger r same……
Khush: u can taste…..
Shr: acha bs bs……
Adi: shr is taking her side tooo much let him taste…. 😀
—-shr gives him a killer look—-
All cheer up fr him….he cuts d cake n taste it….. darr darrr ke 😀
shr: wowww…its good..!!

—evrybdy strts eating—-
When eating sumo apply a piece of cake on shr face—-
Shr: oyyy !! sumo ki bacchi…! 😀 now u will….pay fr it….
—-he runs behind her—-
Sumo: no…oyyy.nooo 😀
—he ws abt to apply cake on sumk face—-

Sumo: ooy my eye…..
—-shr cares fr her—-
Shr: hey hey……let me check….
—-he checks hr eye n they have a small eyelock—-
—bt sumk breaks d eyelock pinches him n runs away—
Sumo: hahha u cant catct me…
—-shr smiles—-

SCREEN FREEZES….

precap: all frnds are enjoying movie….
ayesha: sumo yr i think u should also love……… (she stops)
sumo gets up n goes to othr room sadly……
rohit: yr i told u many times ayesha not to ask or force her to love smone…….u knw d truth….

So guys how ws d frst ep..!! 😀
wid full on masti… 😉 😉
Did u lyk it…??
If so……then plzzz cmmt…. 🙂
N silent readers dont saty silent u tooo cmmnt cause i realy need it… 🙂

By guys….
LOVE U ALL…..!! 🙂

37 Comments
  1. Marie

    Guys one question i fogot to ask….
    —–wat do u think y sumo gets sad by d name of luv——
    Any guesses…??? 😉 😉 😉
    Socho socho…..
    Ans bhi dena…! 🙂

    1. Koi bewafa ishq vishk.ka.chakkar hoag. Maybe

      1. Marie

        Hahahhahah thanks atone fr ur abs dear…..! 😀

    2. Nishu

      May b uske parents ka past hoga

      1. Marie

        Ri8 nishu di I posted it !

  2. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Ahhhh !!!!!!! Finally u posted the first part ? … it was fantabulously awwwwesome?? … nd the ShraMan fight was way tooooooooooooo cute yr ?? … first ep ny hi chhakky maar dye hn … i guess upcoming story b phr amazing hogi ??? … luved it to the core girl ? … keep up the gud work going ☺ … eagerlyyyyyy waiting for the next part … post ASAP ASAP ASAP plzzzz ..
    Thank u ???

    1. Marie

      AWWW 🙂 🙂 thank u sooo soo much fr such a lovely n sweet cmmnt dear…..
      M really glad u lyk it…! 😀
      ok dear…i will try to post asap..! 😉

  3. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Question mene baad me dekha … so I think suman ka b koi luv shuv ka chakkar hoga past me r larrky ny ussko cheat kiya hoga … ummmmmm may b ????

    1. Marie

      Okkkk dear well thanks a tone fr ur ans… 😉 😉
      Lets c wat will happen! 😀

  4. Nikita

    Amazing.. It was great.. Good to have you back.. ShraMan scenes were adorable.. I guess Sumo has a past maybe.. Post soon

    1. Marie

      Aww thank u sooo much nikki dear…! 😉
      Thnks alot fr such a lovely cmmnt!
      Okkkk thanks a tone fr ur ans we’ll c wat will happen…. 😉 🙂 🙂

  5. So finally ur epi came its wonderful really really great awesome love it ❤❤❤❤

    1. Marie

      Hahahah finally….!! 😀 tanks alot naina dear fr such a lovely cmmnt….!! 🙂 🙂

  6. I think a previous heart break…. or her very closed one suffered something due to love….. we can jus guess…. this epi was an osm start Maria…. waiting for the next part… post soon….??

    1. Marie

      Thanks alot anamika dear….! 🙂 🙂
      N yeah also thanks a tone fr ur ans we’ll c wat will happen….. 😉
      I will try to post asap…!

  7. Anyways it was a vry good strt maria dear.

    1. Marie

      Thanks alot nandu dear……!! 🙂 🙂

  8. WeirdSister

    Wow maria….it was so so good…..!!!
    Loved it…yeah even I think that she had a past…wid a guy….whom she loved but something must hve happened…!!

    1. Marie

      Thank u so much weird sis fr such a lovely cmmnt…..!!
      N thanks atone fr ur ans….! 😀 😀

  9. So Sweet epi…

    1. Marie

      Thanks a lot yr…! 🙂

  10. It was amazing maria … Liked it a lot.. N I don’t know what’s up wid sumo .. Let’s see… N
    Khush! Thanks yaar saw ur comments u have put my name everywhere.. U r a sweetheart.. Keep doing dat for me coz I don’t know if I would be a blue to comment… ???

    1. Marie

      Thank u sooo much sumo di…!!! Thanks fr such a lovely cmmnt…!! 🙂 🙂

  11. No..idea..about sumos reaction..but episode was so nice?☺☺☺

    1. Marie

      Ok no prob di….!! But thanks a lot fr such a lovely cmmnt…! 🙂 🙂

  12. Hey I am a silent reader this is my first comment u people do a awesome job I think because sumo parents serpreted she does not believe in love keep writing

    1. Marie

      Awww than u soooo much dear m so happy that u cmmnt…..!! 😀
      N yr I will be very obliged to c ur cmmnt on next part also..! 🙂

  13. I think sumo’s parents divorced that is why she doesn’t believe in love maybe her parents had love marriege

    1. Marie

      Oohk well thanks a tone fr ur ans my dear…..!! 😀
      We’ll c wat will happen…! 😉

  14. RANdomfANCreationz

    Shraman scenes r so nice keep it up dear keep writing 🙂

    1. Marie

      Thank u so much fatarajo !! Fr ur lovely cmmnt..! 🙂 🙂 🙂

  15. Khushi

    Oh my god Maria…. It was just amazing… Loved it….loved it…loved it…..
    Haha sumo ko khana banana nhi aata??i loved the way everyone was teasing her…i it made me remember my friends…. They also tease me like this only though I cook quite good??
    I loved shravan yr he is so sweet…..tease bhi kar rha hai care bhi kar rha hai….
    Sab ke sab nautanki…..???
    I was laughing so hard….that I got a cramp in my stomach…. Kamaal kar diya tune…
    And yes I m so happy to c myself that m iimagining me in the scenes…..

    And about the guess I agree with kaira… Maybe her parents got separated and USKA vishwash utth gya pyaar se…..☺☺

    Loved it yr….jiyo meri Maria…..love u dear

    1. Marie

      Awww!!! Thank u…..thank u…..fr such a wonderful n amazing cmmnt my dear…!!
      Hehehehehehehe…..! 😀
      Oohk thanks a tone fr ur ans my dear…! We’ll c wat will happen…! 🙂
      Thank u so much fr ur sweet wishes also yr……..
      Tu Bhi ji hazaaaron saal 😀
      Love u toooo dear…!

  16. Prettypreeti

    Maro kya likha hai yaar itna acha yaar sorry late comment kr rhi hoon mai kam kr rhi this sorry but now I read it and I am mad hmari sumo bechari salty cake bana diya koi baat nhi sikh jai gi maro I think sumo ke sath kuch hoya hoga jis se shayad WO kisi se waja se bat nhi krti pyaar me bare me

    1. Marie

      No prob yr tune cmmnt toh Kia na…!! It’s enough fr me… !! Thank us so much yr fr such a lovely n amazing cmmnt!! 😉 🙂
      Oohk thanks a tone fr ur ans we’ll c wat will happen….! 🙂 🙂

  17. Nishu

    i gusse im late to cmnt but maria…….. This is seriously tooo loving….. Friendship bonding, love angles, romance, nok jhok ol in one package…….. I ttly loved this story line……. N abt our que, may be sumo’s parents did love merrage & thn got separated……. Love ur ff dea….. Keep writting

  18. Marie

    No prob u r nt late….!! 😀
    its enough fr me dat u cmmnt…!! 🙂 🙂
    m so happy to knw dat u loved it thanks alottttttt……..!!!!
    Keep loving n cmmnting di…!!
    N yes ur ans is ri8

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