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Home»Fan Fiction»pyaar aur takraar..ishqbaazi…ss..part 1
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

pyaar aur takraar..ishqbaazi…ss..part 1

sarindBy sarindMarch 17, 201753 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hie everyone..
Myself sarind…I m a big fan of IB and haan a silent reader of all the ffs of tu…so can u all accept me in this amazing family if IB?…
So here I m with my first ever piece of writing on IB…
Hope u all like it..
So before I begin.a
character intro…
Shivay Singh oberoi :- son of shakti nd pinki oberoi.a renowned entrepreneur.. CEO of oberoi empire..married to anika.
Anika:- wife of shivaay..
Omkara Singh oberoi:- a renowned artist..son of tej and jahanvi oberoi.married to ishana.
Ishana:-wife of omkara.
Rudra:- youngest son of tej and jahanvi.he is married to soumya.
Soumya:- wife of rudra.
Priyanka :- daughter if tej and jahanvi.married to ranveer.
Ranveer:-husband of Priyanka.
Tej and Jahanvi parents if Om,rudra,Priyanka.
Shakti and pinky parents of shivaay.

Dadi mother of tej and shakti.
Plot :- Shivaay and Anika have confessed their love for each other and have consummated their marriage too…
So now my SS begins…
A room is shown with a couple sleeping on bed in each other’s embrace. (Omg aise toh ek dusre se jhagde bina reh nhi sakte and abhi itna chipak ke so rhe hai…wah re inka pyaar??).suddenly anika wakes up..and rushes to the washroom..
After some time..
Anika:- pata nhi kya ulta seedha kha liya hai Maine ..subah se vomitings Hui ja rhi hai…acche se so bhi nhi skti hu…chalo nimbu pani bana k hi pi leti hu..
And she goes to the kitchen..prepares nimbu pani and drinks it..and comes back to her room..
Suddenly she sees shivaay…
Self talk..
Wah mere pati kitne handsome hai..puri Mumbai mein lantern le ke ghumoge phir bhi mere pati jaisa pati nhi milega.lekin pata nhi ye handsome pati sirf neend mein hi itna cute kyu lagta hai..baaki time bhagad billa kyu bana rehta hai…kyu????..jitna weight nhi hai utna ego le ke ghumte hai..phir bhi cute hai..and I love him.she hugs him and sleeps …
Morning…

Shivaay was sleeping suddenly sun rays wake him up..he goes to close the curtains…and when he comes back.he sees his beloved wife…
He goes to her and sits besides her and admires her…
Anika…naam hi kitna sundar hai..wah..aur sote hue ye kitni sundar lagti hai..ekdum swarg Ki apsaron jaisi…lekin ye sirf utne samay k lie jitne der ye so rhi rehti hai..vrna toh..bhagwan bachaye..itna gussa..itna tashan…baapre …aisa lagta hai isko bhagwan ne naak saans lene k lie nhi di hai..balki us naak pe gussa rakhne k lie di hai…and most commendable…iski baatein..Jo aakashwani ki tarah 24×7 chalti hi rehti hai…but jaisi bhi hai..Mrs.SSO hai .and meri life hai..saying dis he goes towards anika ..kisses her cheeks and lays down to sleep..
As soon as he closes his eyes…the alarm clock starts ringing ..he says…oh god…biwi ki tareef krne k chakkar mein neend haram ho gayi…ab vo hi as usual boring schedules and dat meetings…and he goes to switch the alarm off…
Wait if I m awake how can my better half sleep..and he smirks…
He goes out of the room without switching it off…
Here anika..gets irritated with the sound .
Anika:- shivaay!shivaay pls alarm band kro na ..mujhe sona hai…and she turns towards other side of the bed.
But shivaay is not in his room….anika doesn’t know about it…
Anika:- shivaay this is d last time I m telling u to switch it off
And covers her ears by the pillow..
But again no response..so now anika could not control her anger..she takes the alarm clock in her hand…and thadak……throws it on ground…
As soon as she throws it the alarm clock breaks so the sound stopped…
Anika:- ha ha ha mogambo khus hua!!!

And gives an evil smirk..and sleeps again….
To be continued….
So kaisa laga…???
Pls comment haan….
And one more thing can I be ur Frnd too??
So next epi will be posted as soon as possible …

Precap:- anika ……..
Suspense!!!!

Last mein one shayari fr u all…
Sharifon mein koi chor nhi hota…kauvon mein koi mor nhi hota…
Naye palang ko koi dor nhi hora..aur yaroon humse Jo dosti kre..vo kbhi bore nhi hora….
Wah wah wah!!!!
Bye!!!!
And haa thanks fr reading!!!…
☺?❤

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    53 Comments

    1. shivikajkmn on March 17, 2017 7:34 am

      Nyc update sarind.

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:00 pm

        Thanks shiv
        Hope u liked ur name
        So Frnds☺☺

    2. Anju on March 17, 2017 7:53 am

      Superb

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:02 pm

        Anju thanks fr d comment ..
        Happy u liked it

    3. Aisha on March 17, 2017 7:57 am

      Nice

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:03 pm

        Thanks for d comment buddy…

    4. Shikha on March 17, 2017 7:58 am

      Awesome

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:04 pm

        THank u shikha….

    5. Tiaa on March 17, 2017 7:58 am

      Loved it

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:05 pm

        Happy u loved it…BTW nice name…☺

    6. lisaaa on March 17, 2017 9:18 am

      awesome.. plz in english

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:07 pm

        No I won’t write…
        Y did u say plz…
        Frnds never say plz…
        Say it as a Frnd..says..next epi..in English too..
        Promise .☺?

    7. jane on March 17, 2017 9:18 am

      Nice one..please write in English I don’t understand Hindi Hehe.. Update the next part soon waiting

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:08 pm

        No pls please ..?
        I will surely write in english …
        Keep commenting ….

    8. ally on March 17, 2017 9:19 am

      Nice update fast interesting..

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:10 pm

        Thanks for it ally….
        Hope u like d next part too?

    9. shivika on March 17, 2017 9:25 am

      Awesome

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:09 pm

        Thanks fr commenting …
        Happy u liked it…
        Can we b Frnds??

      • shivika on March 17, 2017 2:19 pm

        Of course

    10. Arya on March 17, 2017 9:57 am

      Nice one

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:11 pm

        Thank u aru….
        Hope u liked d name…..
        dont forget to read the next part

    11. Shivika on March 17, 2017 10:18 am

      Awesome…

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:12 pm

        Thank u…??
        Next part waits for ur comment ?

    12. Ahaana on March 17, 2017 10:34 am

      superb ..

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:14 pm

        Thank u ahana….
        Feeling sperb after seeing ur comment ?
        Read d next part too

      • Ahaana on March 17, 2017 12:24 pm

        post kr diya kya ??

      • sarind on March 18, 2017 12:46 am

        No madam…Kal bio paper hai..so after coming back I will post ☺?

      • Ahaana on March 18, 2017 10:58 am

        Ahhh ok…

      • Ahaana on March 18, 2017 10:58 am

        Ahhh ok… All the best …

    13. shabnam on March 17, 2017 10:56 am

      Superb waiting for next update ya we are frnds

      • sarind on March 17, 2017 12:15 pm

        Thank u shabnam..fr being my Frnd…
        Sure. The next part waits fr ur comment too ?

    14. alekhika20 on March 17, 2017 11:24 am

      Superb

    15. Lilly on March 17, 2017 11:39 am

      Awesome

    16. sarind on March 17, 2017 12:15 pm

      Thank u shabnam..fr being my Frnd…
      Sure. The next part waits fr ur comment too ?

    17. Archisha on March 17, 2017 12:26 pm

      Bocambo khush hua ???. Nice one, update soon

    18. shuklarashi on March 17, 2017 12:47 pm

      Awesome

    19. nikitajai on March 17, 2017 1:02 pm

      It is awesome dear… Waiting for the next update please post ASAP….

    20. Shrutika on March 17, 2017 1:05 pm

      Awesome one Sarind! And yes,welcome to TU!

    21. Shivika1233 on March 17, 2017 1:21 pm

      Superbbbbbb fantastic please post next part soon

    22. KAN on March 17, 2017 1:27 pm

      Fantastic… I m also a huge fan of shivila … Thx a lot …update soon

    23. KAN on March 17, 2017 1:31 pm

      True lover just like shivika ko jitna ladta g unme pyar b utni h gharai se hota hai…

    24. KAN on March 17, 2017 1:37 pm

      I think anika is pregnant..

    25. Sanjana on March 17, 2017 1:43 pm

      Lovely ??

    26. Awestruck on March 17, 2017 1:59 pm

      ???????? Wow! I simply loved the episode! The humor was perfectly awesome! Friends? Is that even a question? Hame friends banna pardhega! I need someone with a good level of sense of humor like me ?. You know… you seriously have a talent. I can’t seem to properly weave humor in my writing whereas here you have done it perfectly! Great work! 🙂

      —
      Awestruck!

    27. Arthi on March 17, 2017 3:02 pm

      Nice dear if you don’t mind can you write it translate in English please………

    28. Bhavana on March 17, 2017 3:20 pm

      Awesome…loved it..waiting 4 the nxt

    29. Surbhi Sharma on March 17, 2017 3:45 pm

      Amazing

    30. Kehkasha on March 17, 2017 3:54 pm

      Hi sarind…..
      Fantastic dear…..
      And I read ur update and comments as well……
      But i didn’t get one thing…..friendship and question…….both didn’t fit together with each other…….right…..

      So be like a good friend and stop asking for everyone’s friendship…….directly make them……..and us ur friends……. Did u get that……coz itne shareef friends achche nahi lagte……

      Anyways I literally liked ur update…..and try to post soon….. I won’t say plz……coz as I said earlier I read ur comments too……

      And BTW friends from now…….. Do tell me what ur name means…..and from where do u belong…….??
      Tc…

    31. Ankita on March 17, 2017 8:53 pm

      Great start… Waiting for next update…

    32. vincy on March 17, 2017 9:30 pm

      Nice dear

    33. Mrunal on March 17, 2017 11:38 pm

      abhi maine update bhi pada and comments pe tumhare replies bhi….

      toh muze tumhe 2 baate bolani hai…

      pehale dosti kabhi puch ke nahi hoti..
      bas ho jati hai….
      so no need to ask…..

      dusari baat…. u r fabulous in writing..
      specifically in humor…. just loved ur ff…

      waiting for next one……

    34. Shivanika on March 18, 2017 12:31 pm

      Next pat soon plzzz. Liked it….

    35. Jerry_36 on March 18, 2017 8:54 pm

      Awesome update n yup we r friends..☺

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