THE PROMISE MADE BY HER… Os (TwiNj) by Purvi

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Hi guys, an idea popped up in my mind just a while ago and I thought to share it with you all. So I just penned it down. I hope you enjoy this.
Firstly I want to tell that this is about promise day. I am posting it on Promise Day on 11th February & I don’t know when TU will publish it.? So please pardon me if it publish on 12th February.

So let’s start with the os

A PROMISE MADE BY HER
• • • • • •
(KUNJ)
I, Kunj Sarna loves Twinkle a lot. She is my love my life my everything. No one can take her place and only she ruled my heart. She is the queen of my Kingdom. And I love her without any expectation without any conditions. She is the best thing ever happened to me.
My thoughts were disturbed by a knock. “You don’t need to take permission for entering my room.!” I said because I know who was there. “Kunj how do you always know that I m here.?” “Because I Love You Baby..!” he said “Ufff just stop it Kunj! I am serious!” she said getting angry. I made her sit beside me on the bed and holds her hand. “Twinkle, because whenever you come near me na, or you are around me. Everything on this earth indicate and tell me that you are here.” She smiled. I pointed towards moon from the open window “This moon, this is the witness of our love and when we are together this moon shines brightly. Because it also knows that How much I love you, that even death can’t part us away..!Our love is so much strong ke maut ko bhi hamaray pyaar se pyaar hojaye ga!” I said and she kept her hand on my mouth.
“Kunj never, never talk about death.! Kuch bhi bolty ho..!” She said childishly.
“Vo toh me ne is liye kaha tha ke meri khud ki nazar na lag jaaye!” I replied and she hugged me.
I hugged her even more tighter.
“Twinkle?” I said grabbing her attention. “Hmm?” she spoke. “I want to say something!” I said, “Say it?”
I stood up from the bed and holds my perfume as a mike.
KABHI SOCHA NA THA
TUJHE DEKHNA
MERI HAR KHUSHI BAN JAYE GI
TUJHE SOCHNA
MERI ZINDAGI BAN JAYE GI
I finished and she smiled. “Awwww…. That’s so sweet Mr.Kunj Sarna..! You love me this much?” she asked cutely
“More than my life, Mrs. Twinkle would be Sarna” I said and she turned dark shade of crimson.
“Yarr Twinkle don’t blush this much? How would I control myself. Pehly hi itni mushkil se control kiya hua hai…!” I bit my tongue as I saw Maa entering with a mug.
Twinkle was laughing. I was embarrassed and looked down.
“Ohh.., continue Mr.Sarna.! Sorry if I disturbed your romance! I came with a coffee for Twinkle..!” Maa said
“Array Mummyji what was the need for that? Me khud bana leti agar mujhy zaroorat hoti!” Twinkle replied her
“Tumhe ye chodta toh tum kuch banati na..! Or wesy bhi I m not that type of mum-in-law who taunts their DIL..! After marriage or before marriage!” Maa said smilingly and again I was left embarrassed. And this Twinkle she is laughing. She have to pay for it! Be ready Ms.Taneja for your punishment!
“Mummy ji but you are elder than me toh you shouldn’t do this.” Twinkle said. She love my mom just like she loves her mom. I love her for her everything.
“Arrray Twinkle don’t argue na.. I m saying take it! Shaadi ke baad toh tumhe hi kaam kerna hai.!” Maa said and Twinkle took the mug from her hands
“Sorry Kunj beta for disturbing your romance!” She said giggling and I saw twinkle laughing at me.
Maa left the room and I quickly bolted the door.
“What?” she asked from me as I advanced towards her.
She moved back on the bed.
“You have to bear the punishment!” I said
“For what?” she asked being scared
“For laughing at me!” I said
“Kunj please sorry.. plsss stay away..!” she pleaded
I held her wrist and pulled her towards me. She lands up on my chest.
I holds her waist. She rest her hands on my chest.
“So ready Ms.Taneja?” I asked and she just nodded her head.
I captured her lips and soon we were fighting for the dominance.
After about 10 mnts we part away due to lack of oxygen.
“I LOVE YOU!” She said resting her head on my chest.
“I LOVE YOU TOO BABY!” I said kissing her hairs.
Few Days Later
The mansion was shown decorated beautifully with many lights flowers nd ballons.
In the hall there were many guests. Just then an announcement was heard.
“Hello everyone, As you all know that today is the engagement of the biggest enemies of our college. KUNJ SARNA & TWINKLE TANEJA! Strange na! But its true they hated each other. They were the biggest enemies of each other in college. And now they are marrying each other! So a very huge round of applause for our TwiNj.
They both came on stage. Both looking extremely breath taking.
There families were standing at back.
Twinkle’s mother gave ring to her and she made him wear that! All clapped.
Then Kunj made her wear the ring! The ceremony was completed.
All left for their houses.
Next Day
(KUNJ)
Today is Promise Day and my birthday too. Last year on promise day twinkle promised me that she will always celebrate my birthday with me.
I was decorating the place lost in my thoughts.
Flashback – (flashback is in third person’s voice)
Twinj were shown holding hands.
T – “Kunj today is your birthday and promise day too.!”
K – “So?”
T – (cupping his face) “So, I promise you today that I will always be there with you on your birthday, no matter what happens!”
He kissed her forehead.
K – “That’s why I love you! You always made me feel special that I mean something to someone!”
T – “Kunj you mean everything to me!” she said with a spark in her eyes.
And they both hugged each other!
Flashback ends
I came back to the real world when I realized Twinkle had arrived.
She was wearing a full white anarkali with white dupatta looking extremely beautiful.
She came to me and kissed my cheeks.
I kissed her lips.
Then we both cut the cake. And feed each other.
She said, “Kunj I m in a hurry.”
“What’s the hurry baby?”
I was sitting down when I received a call. It was of Twinkle’s mother.
I received the call. I could hear her sobbings.
“Maa what happened??” I asked
“Kunj puttar, Twinkle was coming to you when she met with an accident and died. She is no more Kunj..!”
As long as you love me
As long as you love me
As long as you love me

We’re under pressure,
seven billion people in the world trying to fit in.
Keep it together,
smile on your face even though your heart is frowning
But hey now, you know girl,
We both know it’s a cruel world
But I will take my chances
As long as you love me
We could be starving, we could be homeless, we could be broke
As long as you love me
I’ll be your platinum, I’ll be your silver, I’ll be your gold
As long as you love, love me, love me
As long as you love, love me, love me

My phone dropped from my hand. I looked up and saw her walking. Her dupatta was fluttering in the air.
She turned around, “I completed My promise Kunj! I LOVE YOU AND WILL ALWAYS DO..!” A tear escaped from her eye and she disappeared.
Tears made their way through my eyes.
“Yes Twinkle you completed your promise!” I said with a shaking voice and fell unconscious.
I’ll be your soldier, fighting every second of the day for your dreams girl
I’ll be your whole world, you can be my Destiny’s Child on a scene girl
So don’t stress, don’t cry, we don’t need no wings to fly
Just take my hand

I don’t know if this makes sense but,you’re my Hallelujah
Give me a time and place,I’ll rendezvous it,i’ll fly you to it,
I’ll beat you there
Girl you know I got you
Us, trust…
A couple of things I can’t spell without you
Now we are on top of the world, ’cause that’s just how we do (do)
Used to tell me sky’s the limit, now the sky’s is our point of view (view)
Man now we stepping out like Whoa! (Oh God)
Camera’s point and shoot,
Ask me what’s my best side, I stand back and point at you you you
The one that I’ve argue with, I feel like I need a new girl to be bother with,
But the grass ain’t always greener on the other side,
It’s green where you water it
So I know,we got issues baby true true true
But I’d rather work on this with you
Than go ahead and start with someone new
As long as you love me
As long as you love me
We could be starving, we could be homeless, we could be broke
As long as you love me
I’ll be your platinum, I’ll be your silver, I’ll be your gold
As long as you love, love me, love me
As long as you love, love me, love me
I’ll be your silver, I’ll be your gold
love me, love me, love me
As long as you love, love me, love me
As long as you love, love me, love me
As long as you love me

THE END ……..

How was it? Do tell me your views ?
Lots of love?❤?????

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17 Comments
  1. Sohi

    Yaar purvi it was sweet lovely and emotional
    Os was really beautiful
    Plz keep writing such adorable stories
    Do continue

  2. Beautiful

  3. SidMin23

    It was wonderful and emotional at the end and two biggest enemies love each other and married too.

  4. purvi y u always made me cry u know this os was so heart touching loved it to the core..
    luv u..
    byee

  5. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing

  6. Awatif_Rahman

    Omg purvi this was so emotional God u made me cry but it was fab
    Lots of love

  7. Mia12

    Tuje pata hai ab mai apni tears control nai karpa rai hu,,… it just hard to stop,,… I just cant,,… r8 now m really serious,,… feeling very sad,,… Can’t control my emotions,,… I m crying hard,,… And also my heart is aching very much,,… I cried about 16 mnts,,… And though I didn’t like sad ending,,… But I really love ur writing,,… Its very heart breaking n touching story,,… Really very gudd job,,… Keep going,,…
    Love you soo much meri candy crush,,…

  8. Simiyy

    Hey Purvi
    It was beautiful
    Your ideas are amazing
    Loads of love

  9. Presha

    Hey purvi its so emotional dear just loved it mujhe rula diya tune yaar burnt I just loved it dear my sweetepieee

  10. Beautiful os purvi I loved it

  11. RUTU.....

    Hey Purvi
    It’s so emotional story just loved it and twinj seen are the best as always
    Love you ???

  12. Kruti

    Indeed a heart touching one….loved it

  13. SidMin

    Hey that was just so emotional …. Really heart touching …. True lovers always keep their promise 🙂
    Loved it 🙂 Keep writing 🙂

  14. SiyappaQUEEN

    Haayee yaar maar dala with this os… Love you to the core. Sad ending thi but I didn’t had idea aisa hoga at last. But it is amazing os. Do write more.???

  15. Ramya

    Purvi
    Awesome amazing
    Heart touching
    Bass itna pyaari ki words nahi hai
    I loved it to core
    Emotional tha I have tears in my eyes
    Kitni pyaari
    But ek baat bolu
    I hate sad ending I always happy ending
    Bcoz sad ending always makes us cry na n I hate tears in everyone eyes I wanted all to be always smiling
    Love u keep smiling

  16. Baby

    ohhhhh god purvi yaar……..
    sooooo emotional sooo cute sooo adorable
    srsly ughhhh………..m crying……..
    lods of love♥♥♥
    loved it☺:D☺:D☺:D☺

  17. Aanya_pandey

    Emotional one it was dear.. but loved it..

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