Promise of love- Episode 1

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Hello friends. I m up with the next part of my FF. I hope you liked the intro. Thank you to everyone who have commented on it. It means a lot to me. I never expected all that comments. Thank you very much for it.
Here the link for the intro if you didnt read it
intro
I hope you will like this part too. And please dont throw chamelis at me after reading this??

Enough of my bak-bak. So here goes the episode.

Next day
Shivay- Have they come rahul, she is coming?
Rahul- Yes shivay. But this is wrong na you dont know SRK and taking revenge from her(laughing)

Shivay- Youuuu
Rahul- See she is coming(pointing towards shivay’s back)

Shivay turns quickly and asks- Where?
Rahul laughs out loudly.
Rahul- Shivay you are too desperate to see her. She has not come yet(laughing)

Shivay- I will not leave you
A voice- Hmmm hmmm hmm hmmahmma…..( hyming of a song)

Shivay- See she has come
Rahul- Yeahh! Yeah! I can see her. Dont be that desperate.

Some time later
Splash
Shivay- How dare you throw water on me?
Anika- Ohh really Mr. Cheap and what did you do?
Shivay- What did i do?

Again splash
Shivay- How dare you again throw water on me?
Anika- Dont react like you dont know anything.

Some time before
Anika- Hmmmm hmmmm hmmmammmammm ( hyming a song)

Some boys come over there
One of them- Hlo janeman. All alone! Do you want some company?
Other one- No not company, i think she wants us
And they start laughing

Anika- Get off my way.
Shivay is seeing all this
Shivay’s POV
Joking on me, right? Now see what i can do? I never wanted to do this. But i am not that bad too. Just a joke foe you,for you love jokes na. Tit for Tat.

Rahul- Shivay i think its wrong.
Shivay- Just chill rahul! Its just a joke. They will leave her once she gets much troubled.

Meanwhile
One of the boys- No. Not your way our way baby.
Anika- Oye hello! Will you yourselfget off my way or i have to to make you go off.

One of them- Bro, she has much tadi in her lets take out that tadi from her today.
All of them start torturing her.
Anika- Just leave me

And anika pushes them.
But they get even more angry and hold her tightly.
Anika screams in pain.

Shivay cant just see this anymore.
Shivay- I told them to leave her after troubling her. What the hell are they doing?
Rahul- Shivay stop them. this wasnot a part of our plan.

Shivay runs to saves Anika.
Anika was there too much nervous and scared. Shivay felt guilty for what he did. He beated up the goons. And as soon as it was finished he found two hands around his chest. They were ofcourse of our fearful Anika back hugging her. Shivay gets astonished but enjoys it. Realising her position she releases the hug.

Anika- Thank u.
Shivay turns around and sees that she has ran away.
Shivay’s POV
What did i do? It was ofcourse wrong. I shouldn’t have done this. It was all my mistake. And i will make it up. But how? Should i say her sorry. No i will never. And how will she ever know that i did this? It is better that i end it right now.

After some time
Shivay was talking with his friends when suddenly Anika came and
Splash

Then “some time later” as mentioned above.

Precap- Shivika friendship

Okk please dont chamelis at me for showing shivay cheap??. I hope you liked it. I will try to post it regularly ,i.e., leaving one day as it would not be possible for me to post everyday. Please do comment if you liked it. It means a lot to me. A word will also work.

And yeah wanted to ask one think from my ff readers would you like me to ask some questions or say something about the current going track of IB and DBO at the end of each of the episode of my ff??

And yeah i am really sorry for not being able to reply to the comments of some of my readers. I m really sorry(holding my ears). Actually i am not well. So i was not able to reply. I hope you will forgive me.

Thank u to all who commented in intro, i.e., Rhea di, kanfi di, ruksy di, rufi di, neha di, thedreamsoul, candy di, anu, arwa qubuddin, arya, savera, sofiya, somya, lilly, arthi, niriha, anu, crazygirls, bhavna, purva, mani, asthwathy, alhekikha and banita(i hope i mentioned all). Thank u soo much.

Love you all,
Deepika.

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66 Comments
  1. It was again awsome episode.plz update the next part soon.

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii. I will post the next one soon

  2. Niriha

    Awesome…update next part soon

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shooo much dii. Will post next one soon

  3. It was nice dear.Pls update the next part asap.

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii. Will post soon

  4. Chameli

    1. Deepika12

      ????thank u for commenting???superbb comment

  5. Jerry_36

    Marvelous di?

    1. Deepika12

      thank u soo much diii. I m smaller to u. I m just 14

      1. Jerry_36

        Oh my god di !!! I am 14 in class 9th. Don’t call me di?

    2. Deepika12

      OHHHH KKKKK. Soo no one will call di. Fine????

  6. Nice one!!!

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii

  7. Savera

    Nice one

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii

  8. Awesome episode deepika?…
    Splaaassh! Paanika is back!?????…..
    Waiting for shivika’s friendship ?
    Post soon ?…

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii. Yeahhh paanika is back. Will post soon

  9. Nikita_jai29

    It is nice one dear

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii

  10. Amazing. Please post soon.

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u sho much dii. Will post next one soon

  11. Neha_Pheonix

    Ohh marvellous…!!!! Questions or say something about the current going track of IB and DBO at the end of each of the episode of my ff??..Sure go ahead!
    Shivaay deserved this Splassh! Haha
    Take care dear!
    I like the way you use some time later as shown in serial. That creates inquistiveness.
    Amazing
    Love ya!

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoooo muchhhhhhhhhhhh Diiiii. Love uuu??

  12. Alekhika20

    Superb start

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shooo muchh dii

  13. Haridhra

    Hey sweety that’s way too awsm u know I luved the intro as well as tis one..???. ..N sry I didn’t notice this before else I would have commented on the prev one itself .. Post the next Asap I’m waiting..??

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoooo much diii. And no problem. Love uuuu

  14. Amazing epi dr….. Luv it….

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much diiiiii

  15. Deepika. ,please don’t call me di. I am just 12

    1. Deepika12

      Ohh okkk. So what shld i call u??

  16. Kanfi

    Hey deepu,..
    Again a dhinchak,,khidkitod episodd’–
    Yaa do add that,,,it’ll be intrsting to share our thoughts’.

    Post soon

    1. Deepika12

      thank u shoo muchh diii for the complimentt. And i will surely add. Will post soonn

  17. Diiiiii u wanted one word Na so the one word is diiii just kidding awesome Depu.panika is in form to splash water on my bhai.hmm looking forward for the next epi.n one help Pls send me links Depu because I won’t be online often so there is a chance that I miss some epi.n this one is amazing

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u soo muchhh diiii. I will post next one son. And will give you the link too?

  18. Deepika di you can call me dwet that is my name.

  19. Arthi

    This was superb dr….I just love shivay….

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u soo muchh dii. Mee too love shivayy???

  20. khidki thod darwaaza thod ff tera tujhe pata he me na teri frnd ki frnd hu isse mujhe na ek dialog yaad aaya me tere baap ka baap hu
    sach me yaar kya khidki tod likti he tu
    mujhe pehchana arre mujhe tv pe nahi dekha
    accha chod me uss trolls.ib ki pyari dost hu

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much diii. Aur aapko ek baat bolu. Aapki frnd na pagal h. Dhe is really crazy. Mujhe nhi laga tha woh sachi mein link bhej degi

      1. tume bhi lagta he na ki woh pagal he lekin woh manti nahi
        maine kaha kaha mental hospital me join karna chaha lekin ek ne accept nahi kiya
        bolte he itne bade pagal ko hum nahi rak sakte agar pagal ke saath rehkar hum pagal ho gaye toh aisa bolte he doctors
        tum na kuch zyada hi sweet ho tujhe mental hospital pata he toh pls bol dost ka sawal he
        aur agli baar se me khud padhlngi kisi pagal se link nahi lungi

    2. Deepika12

      ????????????????????????kya karu di. India ke well known, bade bade mental hospitals bhi unhe lene se mana kar rahe. Kitni sweet tarike se baat karti hu. Lekin ek baar baat karte hi ya phir bina dekhe pehle ke details dekhte hi reject kar dete h. Ab pata nhi kya hoga. maaf karna di. Main aapko nhi bacha saki. Bas those din aur sahen kar lo. Thode international hospitals mein bhi try karte h. Tab tak sahen karlo.
      Aur ha thank uuuuu

      1. kuch zyada nahi ho raha???

      2. Deepika12

        Pehle laga tha but ab. Nhi bilkul nhi. I think yeh kam h?????

  21. its really nice to see creativity in u

    1. Deepika12

      thank u shoo muchh diii

  22. promise me u will regurly post promise
    u write really good i suggest wattpad for u
    its good

    1. Deepika12

      Promsie di. And i m on Wattpad. I will post this stry soon. Thank u

  23. according to me the title is good and story is nice but if u make frndship so early then…
    give some nok jhok too like in this
    i am candy frnd

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u dii. Actually nok jhok will be there. I want to show shivika after some years later so i m doing it fast. And there’s a suspence in it. Soo i hope u will wait for it

  24. its good, u r bhak bhak is more than ff

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u di.???????kya karu adat h??

  25. i wont watch serials but swathi was eating my head so i read and u r wrting forced mr to comment

    1. Deepika12

      Awwww shoo shweet of u dii. Thank u

  26. epi was marvellous
    i hope u know me i was a member of tu once

    1. Deepika12

      thank u shoo much. And yeah i remember you. I can never forget my friends

  27. chal deepu tu achha likti he arre ye kya abhi tak mere ek bhi frnd ne comment nahi kiya
    likh deepu
    fantabolous

    1. Deepika12

      Aapke frnds ne aapse pehle comment kiya di. Aur ha thank u. Aap mahan ho. Aapki jai jai kar karni chahiyeee

  28. hi sad tu toh bade nakre marti thi ki tu serial nahi dekhti chal theres always a beginning
    deepika aap nahi pata ki itna accha likhna mana he

    1. Deepika12

      ????yeah thers always a beginning. Kya?? Mana h??????? Phir toh main jaan bujhkar karungi??
      Btw thanks for the compliment

      1. maine sad ko kaha serial dekhne ke liye sad matlad srija anurAGINI deshambonia

  29. Superb update..

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii

  30. Chandini

    Amazing episode anika hugging shivaay????but what he did was wrong hope he will realise it soon

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