Latest Indian TV Serials Written Episode Updates, News, Reviews, and much more!

PriVeer OS : Tum Thi Toh…Tum Nahi Toh “SHOW SOME ISHQ” BY Nish & Fenu

29

Another Title : Silsila Dosti Se Pyaar Tak Ka

Ranveer’s Pov

Aaj bhi wo mere ruh main aise basi hai jaise dil me dhadkan. Uski har wo baat, uski khilkhilahat mere kaano me aaj bhi gunjti hai. Maana khata ho gayi humse ke wo aise khafa hoke yu chale gaye. Kuch suna bhi nahi aur nazro se dur ho gaye. Ek baar mere dil se to puch liya hota ki mein kya chahta hu.

“Tum thi to meri zindagi mehek ti thi
Tum thi to meri saasein chalti thi…

Tum thi to har wo lamha humara tha
Tum thi to pyaar ka ye aashiyana tha…

Tum thi to waqt ke saath chalna tha
Tum thi to zindagi jeene ka bahana tha..

Tum thi to dil ko ek sukun tha
Tum thi to sab kuch saath tha…

Tum thi to.. Tum nahi to… par aaj bhi tum waisi ho
Meri in saason me.. in dhadkano me aaj bhi dhadakti ho…”

( Poem : Google Daddu )

Past:

It was just been 3 months for Ranveer and Priyanka’s marriage but they were not husband and wife in real sense. It was just for Priyanka’s Dad they have been married.

Ranveer and Priyanka were Best friends in college. Ranveer was in love with Anjali. All use to say they are made of each other. Priyanka use to admire their love and she was happy because her Ranveer was happy. Yes she was in love with Ranveer but knowing Ranveer loves someone else she never raised her feelings. It was there last year of college. Ranveer and Anjali has decided to get married after their exams ends. But then destiny was having some other plan for three of them.

It was just another day in college when Priyanka got a call from home. She was horrified listening the news. Her Dad had heart attack. Ranveer immediately took Priyanka to the hospital. When they reached her Dad was in worst condition.

Dad: (Looking at Ranveer ) Beta yaha mere paas aao. Ranveer goes near him and sits at corner of bed.Tum aur Priyanka best friends ho. Ek dusre ko samajhte ho. Mere baad tum uska khayal rakhoge na’?? Kya tum meri beti se shadi karoge beta..??? Har pita ka ek sapna hota hai ke wo uski beti ko khushi khushi vida kare par mere paas itna waqt nahi hai. Mein bas tum pe bharosa kar sakta hu. Mein jaanta hu tum Priyanka ko khush rakhoge.. humesha. Bolo beta’???

Priyanka tried to interrupt as she knows Ranveer loves Anjali more than anything and he won’t be able to accept her. But she was shocked at Ranveer’s reply.

Ranveer: Ha Dad mein Priyanka se shadi karunga.

Dad: Mein tumhara bahaut shukra gujar hu beta. Ab mein chain se apni ankhein band kar sakta hu.

Priyanka broke down and run to his side and hugs him. She was sobbing badly. She was saying not to leave her but then he was gone. Ranveer took Priyanka in his arms and let her cry. All the rituals were done by Ranveer as Priyanka had no one in this world other than her Dad and her friend Ranveer.

It has been a week and Priyanka tried to protest for marriage saying that Ranveer loves Anjali. But then Ranveer’s dadima and Ranveer didn’t agree to her and finally their marriage took place. Ranveer did this to fulfill last wish of Priyanka’s Dad. Both were uncomfortable due to this sudden change in relationships. Ranveer was going through worst. Anjali though understood everything but then she loved Ranveer and she was not able to see him with anyone else. She left to London. Before going she told Ranveer to move on and keep his promise and not to worry about her. But Then for him it was difficult. Ranveer was keeping distance from Priyanka. He tried to avoid her in every possible way. He know in emotions and respect to Dad he had said yes but it was difficult for him to accept Priyanka. They shared one room but not in actual sense.

On other side Priyanka started to take care of his everything. She used to prepare breakfast, lunch, dinner, Cleaning his room, Keeping files in order.. Etc. She was happy to be with Ranveer but then her heart cried to see him in worst state as she knows what pain is in love. Ranveer use to notice her every day talking with dadima or servants, Giggling with them. Sometimes he use to get lost in her. But then he use to scold himself to loose his control.

Days were passing by and Ranveer was keeping more busy in his work. And then he was in dilemma of his feelings towards Priyanka. He use to remember Anjali and do his tai-chi sessions vigoursly but strange in this last whole month he didn’t remember Anjali. He was now getting started to like Priyanka, Her taking care of everything of him. But to hide his feelings he never came in front of Priyanka. He would just make a excuse of work and use to go in study to calm himself and work. On other side Priyanka thought that Ranveer was remembering Anjali and she took his indifference and avoidance in wrong way and thus she decided to leave him.

One evening when Ranveer came back he found house was calm. He was used to hear her voice whenever he was in mansion. But found No sound of Priyanka’s giggle or anything else. He thought she must be busy in kitchen and went to his room. There he found a letter and a packet on side table. He started to read it thinking who must have send it. He was shocked and surprised to know it was from Priyanka.

Dear Ranveer,

You must be wondering why I m writing this letter instead of talking to you directly as we live in same house. Haina..??? And we were best friends also, but then this marriage made us uncomfortable and we lost our friendship’s comfortableness. Aur fir mein kya karu mujh mein itni himmat nahi ke tumhare saamne aake ye bolu ki mein humesha ke liye aapse dur ja rahi hu. ( Ranveer was shocked to read it ) Ha jab tak aapko ye letter milega mein aapse bahaut dur ja chuki hongi. Jaanti hu mein ke aapne mujhse shadi sirf Dad ke khatir ki thi. Par mein ye bhi jaanti hu ki aapke dil main sirf Anjali hai. Aap uski jagah kisi aur ko nahi de sakte. Aur in 3 mahino main meine aapko uske liye tadapta dekha hai. Aapne mujhse shadi to kar li par pyaar nahi kar sakte. Har roz aap khud ko busy rakhte the taki mujhse saamna na ho. Taki aap apne dard ko kam kar sako. Par mein aapko yu tadapte nahi dekh sakti. Is packet main divorce papers hai jo meine sign kar diye hai. Aapko mein is bandhan se aazad karti hu. Aapki khushi Anjali main hai. Use apne pass bula lijiye. Mein aapko uske saath khush dekhna chahti hu. Apna khayal rakhiega Ranveer. Pata nahi ye kehne ka haq hai bhi ya nahi par fir bhi keh rahi hu.

Yours & only yours Priyanka

Ranveer was having tears in his eyes. His avoidance and not saying anything has laid Priyanka to take this step. He was becoming angry on himself for not showing his feelings. If he would have accepted his feelings and told her then they would have been a happiest couple in this world. He knew that Priyanka loved him as her care and affection to him has said it all, but he failed to raise his feelings. He can understand Priyanka but then he was lil angry ki how can she leave him without talking with him. At least once she would have spoken to him. He was shattered completely.

End of Past

Its been six months now that Priyanka has left him. He tried to search her but failed miserably. He was being aloof from everyone now, and kept himself busy in his work in day time. But at night he use to remember Priyanka and his nights were sleepless from when Priyanka has left him.

( Listen to this song please while you will read next. It will make you feel. Please listen else you will miss the real point of this story. Yahi song is OS ka main theme hai so would request you to listen the song please..”Yeh Kahan Aa gaye hum” film: Silsila )

One Day when he was in Bangalore for one of his meeting. He spotted Priyanka in the market from the glass window of the hotel. He immediately went to search her but then she was not there. He thought it to be his imagination, and left for his hotel room leaving meeting incomplete.

“Main aur meri tanhaai aksar yeh baatein karte hain
Tum hoti to kaisa hota, tum yeh kehti, tum voh kehti
Tum is baat pe hairaan hoti, tum us baat pe kitni hansti
Tum hoti to aisa hota, tum hoti to vaisa hota
Main aur meri tanhaai aksar yeh baatein karte hain”

Here When Priyanka saw Ranveer coming out of the hotel she hide behind the wall. She was not able to face him. She just watched him from there hiding herself. She didn’t know Ranveer has moved on or not and then meeting him would bring the memories back which she doesn’t want and She thought by meeting her he may feel guilty again to see her in this state.

“Yeh kahan aa gaye hum
Yunhi saath saath chalte
Teri baahon mein hai jaanam
Mere jism-o-jaan pighalte
Yeh kahan aa gaye hum
Yunhi saath saath chalet”

She saw Ranveer leaving from there and came out. She left for her place thinking of Ranveer. She was madly in love with him and was not able to move on. In these six months not a single day went that she didn’t remembered Ranveer.

Here Ranveer was in same state. He was feeling restlessness after seeing Priyanka there in market. First he thought to be his imagination but then his heart was telling it can’t be his imagination. He came near window and opened it. Cool breeze were touching his face and just stood there watching stars and moon. He closed his eyes to feel the cool breeze and imagined Priyanka to be his side hugging him.

“Yeh raat hai, yeh tumhaari zulfein khuli hui hai
Hai chaandni ya tumhaari nazrein se meri raatein dhuli hui hai
Yeh chaand hai ya tumhaara kangan
Sitaarein hai ya tumhaara aanchal
Hawa ka jhonka hai ya tumhaare badan ki khushboo
Yeh pattiyon ki hai sarsaraahat ke tumne chupke se kuch kaha hai
Yeh sochta hoon main kab se gumsum
Ke jab ki mujhko bhi yeh khabar hai
Ke tum nahin ho, kahin nahin ho
Magar yeh dil hai ke keh raha hai
Ke tum yahin ho, yahin kahin ho”

Priyanka’s state was no less. She was too standing near the window and admiring the moon and stars. She thought how lucky they are, being far yet close that they share one sky. She closed her eyes suddenly as cool breeze hit her face. And when she opened her eyes, saw Ranveer standing in front of her. She smiled seeing him there and cupped his face and hugged him tightly.

“O, tu badan hai main hoon chhaaya
Tu na ho to main kahan hoon
Mujhe pyaar karne waale
Tu jahan hai main vahan hoon
Hamein milna hi tha hamdam
Issi raah pe nikalte
Yeh kahan aa gaye hum
Yunhi saath saath chalet”

The sound of window closing broke her trance and she opened her eyes. She was smiling like every day. She has imagined Ranveer today also hugging her closely.

“Mm, meri saans saans maheke
Koi bheena bheena chandan
Tera pyaar chaandni hai
Mera dil hai jaise aangan
Koi aur bhi mulaayam
Meri shaam dhalte dhalte
Yeh kahan aa gaye hum
Yunhi saath saath chalet”

Here Ranveer was frustrated on himself. He was not able to find her. He was eagerly waiting for her to tell her that he loves her. Uski har dhadkan mein wo basti hai. Har saans pe bas uska haq hai. Par ye haalat aise hai wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta sivay intazar ke.

“Majboor yeh haalaat, idhar bhi hai udhar bhi
Tanhaai ki ek raat, idhar bhi hai udhar bhi
Kehne ko bahut kuch hai, magar kisse kahe hum
Kab tak yunhi khaamosh rahe aur sahe hum
Dil kehta hai duniya ki har ek rasm utha de
Deevaar jo hum dono mein hai, aaj gira de
Kyoon dil mein sulagte rahe, logon ko bata de
Haan humko mohabbat hai, mohabbat hai, mohabbat
Ab dil mein yehi baat, idhar bhi hai udhar bhi”

Both were in thought of each other and went to bed but then sleep was far away from them. Both were having different determinations for tomorrow.

“Yeh kahan aa gaye hum
Yunhi saath saath chalte
Yeh kahan aa gaye hum”

Next Day Ranveer called his detectives and told that he has seen Priyanka in Bangalore and within an hour he want all the details of her where she is staying now. That one hour was like hell for him. He was continuously looking at his mobile hoping it would ring soon. After an hour he got call from his detective telling him where his angel live. Without wasting a single second Ranveer zoomed in his car to meet his angel. His heart has won finally and he was going to meet her soon. After sometime he stopped near small house. It was looking beautiful from outside and it had a small garden in front of it. He smiled knowing how much Priyanka loved to nourish plants. He went near a rose plant and plucks a red rose from it.

Ranveer: Sorry Priyanka bina bataye tumhare paudhe se phul tod raha hu. Par abhi mere pass yahi ek cheez hai jo mein tumhe de sakta hu.

He ringed the bell and was waiting for Priyanka to open the door. He was continuously ringing it till she opened the door.

Priyanka was cleaning her hands to her dress and didn’t saw whose there Without seeing blasted on him

Ye kya tarika hai bell bajane ka. Mein kya tumhe behri lagti hu jo itni der se bell baja reh ho. Intazar Nahi kar and she stopped in middle as she saw Ranveer standing there with red rose in his hand and smiling at her. She was shocked to see him there.

Ranveer: Wahi to Priyanka. Intazar hi to nahi kar sakta na mein ab. Bahaut intazar karwaya hai tumne is din ka.

Priyanka: Ranveer’.

Ranveer: Andar nahi bulaogi mujhe’???

Priyanka: haan.. ohh aao na andar. Baitho mein coffee laati hu tumhare liye’

Ranveer: Nahi Priyanka mujhe kuch nahi chahiye. Tum bas yaha baitho aur baatein karo. He smiled at her.

Priyanka: she was feeling lil awkward Wo Ranveer aap kaise ho..?? Anjali kaisi hai’???

Ranveer: Mein thik hu Priyanka aur Anjali bhi. Pata hai tumhare jaane ke baad humne shadi kar li.

Tears formed in Priyanka’s eyes listening to Ranveer. Though she left him but then was happy to know he has moved on yet there was pain in her heart. Ranveer was observing her expressions very clearly when he mentioned about Anjali.

Ranveer: Kya hua Priyanka..?? Itni chup kyu ho..??? Kuch bologi nahi’?? Tum khush nahi ho kya ye sun kar’???

Priyanka: Nahi Ranveer aisi koi baat nahi.. Mein khush hu..

Ranveer got up and went near her and made her stand holding her both arms.

Ranveer: Kyu Priyanka..??? Kyu jhoot bol rahi ho abhi bhi mujhse..?? Kya tum sach main khush ho..???

She was not understanding what Ranveer was trying to say..

Ranveer: Bas Priyanka bahaut ho gaya. Kab tak is dil ko dhoka deti rahogi. Kab tak ise samjhati rahogi. Kabhi to iski suno Priyanka. Kabhi to apne dil ki kaho. Kyu chod kar aayi mujhe aise jab mujhse itna pyaar karti ho..??? Kyu Priyanka..???

Priyanka was shocked to hear all this from Ranveer. She was not getting words to say and tears were flowing from her eyes.

Ranveer: tumhe kya laga tha Priyanka ke mein nahi jaan paunga ye. Priyanka tumhari ye aankhein sab keh deti hai. Aur fir tumhara mere liye care and affection sab keh gaya. Wo 3 mahine bhale hi humne baat nahi ki. Aisi yaadein bhi nahi jo hum yaad kar sake par fir bhi tumhari wo muskan tumhara mere liye fikar karna mere dil main ghar kar gaya. Mein tumhe pasand karne laga par darta tha tumse ye kaise kahu aur isiliye tumse dur rehne laga par tumne iska galat matlab nikal liya aur chali gayi. Ek baar bhi nahi pucha mujhse ke mein kya chahta hu..?? Tumhare jaane ke baad wo ghar jaise mujhe kaatne ko daudta tha.. Meine kaha kaha nahi dhunda tumhe. Kaha thi Priyanka’??? Kyu chali aayi yaha..??? Kyu nahi kaha kuch mujhse..???

Priyanka: Ranveer.. Mein kya kehti thi..??? aapko us tarah tadapta dekh mera dil bhi tadap raha tha. Mujhe aapki wo muskurahat wapas lani thi par wo mein nahi Anjali la sakti thi. Isliye meine aapko chodne ka faisla kiya. Aur mein aapse mili nahi kyu ki aapse baat karti to shayad khud ko rok nahi paati aur mere dil ki baat aapke saamne aati. Mein nahi chahti thi ki mere jaane baad aapko guilty feel ho. Isiliye aapse bina mile yaha chali aayi.

Ranveer: Priyanka kya tum mera ek sapna pura karogi..???

Priyanka: sapna..??? boliye Ranveer kya hai.. mein karungi..

Ranveer kneeled on his knees and raised his hand to give her a rose and spoke

Ranveer: Priyanka Mein tumse beinteha mohabbat karta hu. Pata nahi kab ye dil tumhara hua. Kab ye tumhare liye dhadakne laga. Ab to bas in dhadkano me ek hi naam sunayi deta hai “Priyanka”. Kya tum mujhse firse shadi karogi’??? Kya tum apni saari zindagi mere saath bitana chahogi’??? Kya tum mera ye Sapna pura karogi’???

Priyanka: Par Anjali’???

Ranveer: Uff Priyanka ab ye Anjali kaun hai..??? He winked at her.

She understood the hidden meaning of his words’

Priyanka: She smiled amidst of the tears, took rose and nodded in yes. Ha Ranveer mein aapse shadi karungi. Aapke saath zindagi ka har pal, har lamha bitaungi.

He got up and hugged her tight as if holding his life’s best possession in his arms never to leave her again. She was crying and he was patting her back to make her calm. And then said

Ranveer: sshhh Priyanka ab aur nahi. She broke the hug and looked at him.

Priyanka: I love you Ranveer. I love you so much.

Ranveer: hugged her again and said I love you too Priyanka.

Priyanka: Ranveer mein aapko kuch kahu..???

Ranveer: Priyanka ye kaisa sawal hai..??? Pehle to kabhi permission nahi li bolne ke liye.. ab kyu..?? Bolo jo bolne hai. Ye banda aapki khidmadat me haazir hai.

Priyanka: Wacked him on his arm and smiled Wo Ranveer main aapse pyaar shadi ke baad se nahi karne lagi. Jab se hum college main saath the mein tabse aapse pyaar karti hu. Par keh nahi paayi and fir aapko aur Anjali ko saath dekh kar bas yahi dua karti thi ki aapko aapka pyaar mil jaaye aur humesha aap khush raho. Mujhe tab nahi pata tha ki ye dua meine mere liye hi ki thi.

Ranveer was shocked at her revelation. His respect for her increased and he just crushed her in his arms so tightly that not air was able to pass through them. He promised her that he will love her till eternity.

Ranveer: Mrs.Randhawa waise irada kya hai’??? Yahi rehna hai ya ghar bhi chalna hai’???

Priyanka: Mr.Randhawa aap kahe to yahi ruk jaaye kuch din..???

Ranveer: Sure Mrs.Randhawa Ur wish my command. After all joru ka gulaam jo ban na hai’ He winked at her.

Priyanka: Haaww Ranveer. This is so not fair. Aap jaisa khadus aur joru ka gulaam’??? She giggled and said koi humare college ke friends ne suna na to gadbad ho jaayegi.. Sochenge ise achanak se kya ho gaya’???

Ranveer: Ohh hello.. Samajh raha hu mein kya kehna chahti ho tum..??

Priyanka: Acha’ Mr. Randhawa to chaliye ye ghar saaf kijiye.. and she started running

First Ranveer was shocked then understood her words and he also started running behind her.

Ranveer: Priyanka’ Badmash rukoo.. Abhi dikhata hu tumhe..

This was just the start of their new journey of love and with this confession they got back their friendship as well. It is said that “Love dosen’t knock the door of ur heart, it just enters your life to make it Beautiful and memorable. ”

Ranveer and Priyanka got married after going back. They were not just husband and wife now but they shared the relation of love and Friendship, which every couple dream to have with them. Indeed both were lucky to have each other. They just promised to blossom their love more as the days pass by and till eternity.

Kise pata tha ke ye rishta pyaar main badal jaayega
Dur jaane ke bawajood do tadapte dilo ko fir ek kar dega..

Ye silsila jo dosti se shuru hua tha pyaar pe khatam hua
Pyaar ne uske pyaar ko uski taraf khichne pe majbur kiya’

Wo to bina kisi aas ke uski ibadat kar rahi thi
Usi ibadat se ise pyaar ki wo aahat mehsus huyi thi’

Dur jab wo chali gayi to usko pane ke liye jahan ek kar diya
Mile to dil ki baton ko in labzo ke jariye sab kuch keh diya’

Kehte hai inke pyaar ka silsila janmo janmo tak yuhi chalta rahega
Jab mohabbat ka izhaar hoga Ranveer Priyanka ka naam humesha liya jaayega

~~~THE END~~~

Hello Friends !! This is Fenil & Nisha with PriVeer OS !! Hope you liked it !!
Press Like/Dislikes Button and do comments !!
Keep Loving PriVeer !!

29 Comments
  1. Aarti32

    OS se zyada pyari to ye lines h last wali..
    Superb OS

    1. Fenil

      Ohhh good to hear u.
      Thanks aaru

  2. Lauren

    It was fab bhai ….. loved it… do post nxt soon….

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much !!

  3. Muniya

    It was so so nice Bhai…
    Awesome…
    And I too agree with Aarti…last lines r fantastic…all the lines r awesome
    Google Daddu’s poem is also superb…Liked another title too…

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much.
      Your each words means a lot.
      Glad that you loved it.

  4. Naina0411

    Loved it Bhaiya! 😍
    I am so happy you’re writing on PriVeer! I love this couple so much! 😘
    PriVeer’s conversation was so amazing!

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Naina.
      Glad that you loved it.

  5. Komal

    Beautiful os yaar.. Very well written.. Aur itni perfect hindi mai likha hai… Really enjoyed reading it.. Lovely os.. Aur poems were like cherry on cake.. It literally gave feels while reading it.. Aur ye Nisha kon hai?? Tell her to join tu na?? She writes so well.. And it was an awesome work from both of u..

    1. Komal

      And one more thing.. Aapne itne saare parts post kar diye hai.. Kal tak read karlugi saare parts.. And so sorry for delay.. I am actually busy these days coz my sisters wedding is there.. Issiliye abhi tak nahi read kiye..

    2. Fenil

      Thank you so much Komal.
      Glad that you loved it.
      Your each appreciation means a lot.
      Nisha Soni is my Rakhi sis….she doesn’t want to join.
      Yaa I published more parts no problem take your time no hurry.
      Congratulations to your sister !!

  6. Aashi9

    Too much sappy and romantic but I liked it.👌👍👍❤

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Aashi !!

  7. Medha

    Wonderful Os Bhaiya…….
    Awesome from Google Baba…….
    Proposal part was so lovely

    😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
    Keep rocking Bhaiya…….

    1. Medha

      Oops Typo error!!! Awesome poem for google Baba…….

      1. Fenil

        Thank you so much Medha !!

  8. Niyati

    Woe…it’s lovely bhai…..loved it….awesome as always .

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much niyu !!

  9. Ashwinee

    Fabulous update Bhai

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Ashwinee.

  10. Banita

    Fantastic OS bhayu…. Badly missing priveer…

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Bani !!
      Yaa missing them !!

  11. Lauren

    Wonderful Os bhai… juzz nailed it… really it was too good…. loved it….. n thanks for the links bhai..

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much !!
      Glad that you loved it !!

  12. Nikita_jai29

    it is lovely….

  13. ReihanaThamiz

    Amazing OS..lovable song

    1. Fenil

      Thank you !!

  14. Awesome OS

Leave A Reply

Your email address will not be published.

Yes No