PRISONER OF LOVE (PART-4) by MANU

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PRISONER OF LOVE PART-4
Okay… guys… there are 4 dream sequences here… all of them happening simultaneously..
Do read my apology note at the end…
But first… let’s get to the episode…

(night)
Episode starts with jail…
SCENE-1
Omkara is seen sleeping on the ground… without any blanket… on the bare ground… on that dirty floor… which wasn’t cleaned from 5 years… because he never liked anyone entering into his cell… and he himself thought he deserved this kind of punishment…

**into his dreams**
He is seen talking to someone… a girl… her face not visible… everything is blur…
Omkara: I thought u were different… but no… like all poor people.. you too turned out to of the same category… money-minded and cheap and characterless…
Girl: have u lost it?? U can’t blame me like this…
She raises her hand… but he holds her hand…
Omkara: Doesn’t u dare… I hate u… u… u are the biggest mistake of life… I wish to have never met u… u are not a girl but material who comes with a price tag…
After saying this he pushes her… she falls on the ground and hits bed post… her head starts to bleed…
Girl (screams): ahh…

Om turns to see her… tries to go near… holds her face into his hand…
And suddenly leaves her face… grabs her hair forcefully… and in utmost anger and yells
Omkara: you deserve this wound Mrs. Oberoi
Saying this he leaves her hair… and walks off…
Without even looking at her… he leaves…

***back to reality****
He is seen talking in his dreams… and sweating terribly… the floor is unable to absorb the tears of guilt that were flowing from omkara’s eyes… the tears of pain… while his mind was asleep… his eyes were wet…

SCENE-2
Scene starts with night shelter…
Focus is on the man who is sleeping with a photograph… photograph of him and some lady…

****in his dreams****
H e is seen talking to someone… some girl…

Him (shouting): how dare you… how dare you think to harm my family….?
Girl (shouting in the same pitch): what do you mean?
Him: don’t try to fool me… I have seen u… with him… I know you were behind all this misunderstanding… behind all those planning…
Girl: what? With who?
Him: I trusted u… I married u going against my family… my brothers… what do I get in return?? Betrayal… I was a fool who thought that a girl like u can change… I thought u were bad because your circumstances made u like that… but no… u are like this because u chose to be like that… u love all this… I hate u… I hate myself to have trusted a person like u…
Girl: but listen… you are misunderstanding me…

But before she could speak further… he angrily walks off…
She runs behind him trying to explain… when he in rage bangs the door with full force causing her fingers to get pressed between door and door frame…
Girl (screams in pain): ahhhh…

He turns and runs towards her and takes her hand in his hand… and suddenly he realizes what he was doing… she squeezes her fingers increasing her pain and says…
“You deserve every bit of this pain my dear wife”

And leaves her there…. Crying… without even turning back….

****back to reality***

The man is seen sweating … the moon light was clearly highlighting the tears that were falling down from his eyes… even in sleep the tears of regret…. Tears of hurt were unstoppable…
He is seen murmuring…
“I love u…” and “sorry”

SCENE-3
Scene starts with a house…

A girl is seen sleeping…

****in her dreams***
It’s a jail cell… dark…
The girl goes near the cell and shouts…
“bhaiya??”
Someone from inside comes close to the bars and says…
“choti?? U here??”
Choti: yes bhaiya… as soon as I got the news of you being in prison I came running to see u…
Man (keeping his hand on her head): I am fine now… after seeing my little sister’s face…
Choti: but… how come you are here? You were fine last time we had a chat…what happened in just a week’s time that u are here?
Man: the girl I loved cheated on me choti… I loved her to the core… I thought I will make her my queen… but that bi*ch… she is the cause of me being here…
Choti: but what just happened??
She touches her brother’s hands and finds his bruises… his entire body had marks of the torture that her brother was going through… so many injuries….
****back to reality****

She wakes up shouting…
“bhaiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”
She realizes it was a dream… she touches her forehead and finds herself sweating…. Sweating badly…
Her breathing was not normal… she was breathing from her mouth… that too at a fast pace… she tries to wipe off the sweat only to realize that in dream… watching her only brother in such a bad state her eyes were shedding tears in reality…
She closes her eyes… and tries to sleep again….

SCENE-4
It’s the hospital room… focus is set on the girl lying on the bed… with multiple wires attached to her body…
****in her mind****
She is standing on a mountain… far from the edge though…
She is shouting while crying “no… just don’t… don’t do that…”
“please… please… leave her… you are not doing right”
Standing on either side of her are few more men and women… everyone is saying something…

On the cliff edge… three persons are seen…
Two women and a man…
Man with a knife in his hand and he has kept it on the neck of one of the girls…

Everyone is shouting… pleading… the voices are getting mixed… nothing can be heard clearly…

When suddenly… sound of a bullet being fired is heard…
One of the girls fall off the cliff slowly… calling out a name….
“sh…sh…sh…shivayyyy…”

****back to hospital room****

The machine starts to beep… indicating her increasing heart rate… her breathing becomes fast… her fingers start to move… the machine shows her heart and pulse rate reaching at a dangerous mark…

The doctors and nurses come running into her room listening to machine’s sound…

They get a shock…something like this has happened earlier also… but this time was different…
Her condition was becoming worse… like her heart will just burst out… her nerves were visible now… something was happening to her…
Doctor out of fear calls up Rudra…
Doctor: Mr. Rudra…
Rudra: yes?
Doctor: something is happening to her… she is… she is critical…
Rudra (shocked): what?
Doctor: see… she is critical… come soon please… we are not sure if she can survive or not…
Rudra drops the phone in shock…. Tears starts to flow from his eyes…
Somya and sahil come running from behind…
Somya: Rudra what happened? Why are you crying?

Rudra doesn’t speak a word…

Sahil shakes him…
“dad what just happened… please us”

All Rudra managed to speak was
“she… critical”

This was enough for somya and Rudra to understand what was the matter…
They both control their tears and hold Rudra and drive to hospital…

Outside the room….
Rudra stands in shock… his eyes were flowing… but he wasn’t moving… he wasn’t speaking… he was just looking at the girl in the room… and her condition…
Somya and sahil too were crying looking at their superhero… the person who became their support in all their tough times… was now broken himself… the rudra who was always scared… who was always crying was coming back…

Doctor comes outside and says… “Something is happening…. We don’t know how to calm her down… nothing is working”

Looking at her… sahil speaks up….
“Dad… do something… you know her so well… please calm her down… do something please… you can’t let her die… you can’t stand here… go… go do something”

Rudra looks at sahil…
Sahil: please…

Rudra runs into the room…. Keeps his hand on her hand… takes her hand close to his face…
His tears fall on her hands… and… her condition starts to improve…

Rudra holds her hands even more tightly and in a cracking voice calls out…
“PRINKU”

*******the end***********

So, okay!
Really sorry… because I am super late… I know…
But guys… my brother’s marriage is on 18th.. yayyyy…
So I am hell busy in work… shopping… preparation… and lots of stuff…
That is why was not getting enough time to write…
Finally posting this episode… was writing 10 12 lines each day 😛

Sorry ahaana… I told u that I’ll be posting on 4th or 5th.. but wasn’t able to… sorry…

!!!!Please…please comment below!!!!
!!!!Mistakes.. if found… ignore… kindly..Please ignore guys!!!!
!!!!i really wanted to make this episode better… but I am short on time!!!
!!!!thank you….!!!!
!!!!manu !!!!

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14 Comments
  1. Lisaaa

    interesting

  2. Yashu

    Awesome

  3. Shivika

    Superbbb

  4. Samm

    congrats and best wishes for your brother’s wedding… and this episode was superb. loved it 🙂

  5. Akshaya

    Oh bête ki. Too much suspenses

  6. JanviSingh

    Hey dear….
    Congratulations for ur brother’s wedding…..
    N thanks for updating in a such busy schedule….???

  7. Ahaana

    its ok manu
    and episode was really awesome with khidki tod suspenses

  8. A lot of suspense… Keep it up dear… Congratulations for your brother’s marriage… Plz update soon.

  9. cool post next asap

  10. Mindblowing epi….loved it…

  11. Awesome amazing episode

  12. Bismiyabasheer1998

    Superb.. So many suspense.. I waiting for the next episode eagerly.

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