PRISONER OF LOVE PART-3 by manu

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Really sorry guys… I am updating after such a long long time… but finally I have posted it…
Hope to get good reviews…If the episode turns out to be boring inform me… I will try to make it better from next time…
Thank you in advance…

*****it’s morning time****
*****jail*****
The girl comes back..
She finds om’s cell empty…
Girl asks policemen and she is informed that om has gone to another portion of the jail for cleaning that area… she sits there and waits for him… when he comes back she notices him covering his face with a cloth..
Girl: mr. oberoi…
He ignores her completely and enters into his cell and policemen closes the door…

Girl: Mr. oberoi..

She gets no response from the other side…

Girl: Mr. Oberoi I am here to help you… you don’t have to do this… this cleaning and all…

After a few hours of silence… he finally speaks up…

Omkara: Why don’t you just leave me alone?
Girl: I am here to help you…
Omkara: did I ask you for help?? I don’t need any help… I am happy here…
Girl: no one can be happy in jail Mr. oberoi
Omkara again goes into his silence mode… after an hour he again speaks up…

Omkara: what will you do miss if you were a murderer? Murderer of your own…wi… wife… murderer of your brother’s wife…? (His voice started to crack) Will you be able to live in a palace after killing your own un…un…unborn kid??? Will you be living happily after snatching everything from your family…?? Will you be happy when the brother you cared the most hate you… when the brother who loved you the most lost his reason of living because of you…??

After listening to what Om said the girl goes numb… she was able to feel the pain inside his voice… she could sense how hurt he was… how guilty he was…
Sensing the impact that his sentence made on her he again speaks up…
Omkara: no one can do that… when every minute of your life becomes a burden on you… when every breath you take fills your heart with guilt… when every morning brings pain rather than hope… when..

He goes silent again…
Girl (in a crying tone): when?
Omkara prefers to not respond for few more minutes..
Omkara (after few minutes): when the person you loved the most died because of you…

Girl: you are right Mr. Omkara… but you have spent five years in jail… away from your family… away from the world… at least now… please…
Omkara (shouts): are you leaving or shall I call the policemen… when I say I don’t want to be out… why don’t you understand??
Girl: but…
Omkara(calls out): anyone throw this girl out…
Girl: but listen to me once…

But before she could say something else… guards come and say “madam go now… else I will lose my job…”
She bows her head down… a tear rolls down from her cheek… and she leaves…

****evening (temple)****

A man… in his mid twenties is seen sitting draped in a shawl… shawl with many holes…
He has beard… face is covered with dust…
He is seen sitting on the temple stairs… devotees passing by giving him something to eat…

It’s been hours since he is sitting there… he takes out a photograph from his shirt’s pocket…
And tears start to make their way … and he is whispering something…
“I am sorry… I am so sorry… I shouldn’t have done that… I am sorry..”
And he keeps murmuring that….

The sun sets… and he stands up and starts walking..
He ends up at some night-shelter…
Takes the blanket kept over there and sleeps on the floor…

******new York*****
Somya: now eat your breakfast quickly… you are getting late for school…
Kid: but maa… I want to talk to dadi first.. then…
Somya: beta it’s morning here… that means in india dadi must have been asleep now…
Kid: but ma…
Rudra: arre, for once listen listen to what your maa says …
Kid: okay fine…

They finish the breakfast…
Rudra picks up his office bag and lifts the kid..
Both the father and the son kiss on their beloved lady’s cheek and say
Both: bye…
Somya: bye…

After finishing her household chores somya goes to the hospital…

She looks from the window…
Somya: please… come out of this condition… we need you… we all need you… our family needs your support… please…
And suddenly she feels a warm hand on her shoulder… she turns and finds Rudra standing there…

Rudra wipes the tears that were twinkling on her cheeks under hospital lights…

Rudra wraps his arms around her…

Rudra: somu…
Somya (looking in his eyes): hmm?
Rudra: pushpa… I hate tears re…
Somya (smiles): stop flirting..
Rudra: Emma is much better than you… at least she replies positively when I flirt….
Somya (makes angry face): emma?
Rudra: yes, the nurse…
Somya (punches Rudra): of course, you know every nurse over here… are you not ashamed to look at other girls when you have a wife and a son…
Rudra: what’s there to be ashamed of? When wife stops being romantic… I have to find romance somewhere…
Somya( holds his collar): so do it with me…

Rudra (smiles seeing her jealous): u sure?
Somya: what’s there in this to be sure about?
Rudra (holds her by waist): so let’s head to home… let’s plan for a daughter…
Somya (blushing): stop it Rudra…
Rudra looks at her wife… who was now red as tomato..

Rudra: my sweet little tamatar… always keep smiling… I don’t want tears in your eyes anymore…
Somya (smiling): yes… everything is getting okay now…
Rudra (kisses on her forehead): everything will be alright… and yes… I don’t look at other women when I have such a cutie-pie in my arms…

Both look into each other’s eyes and smile…

******school gate******

Somya and Rudra wait for their son to come out…

Somya: look there he is….
Kid: ma… let’s go fast… I am very hungry…
Rudra: yes boss…

As soon as they sit in the car… someone calls out…

“sahil… you forgot your notebook in the class”
[[[so yes guys it’s our sahil… anika’s brother… after anika dies Rudra and somya adopted him]]]

They drive towards their home….

Precap: revelation of the lady in the hospital…

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manu

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38 Comments
    1. Manu24

      thank you 🙂

  1. Shivika

    Amazing

    1. Manu24

      thank you 🙂

  2. Its awesome…. Loved it….. But plzzz update nxt part asap!!!! cant wait for it….?

    1. Manu24

      thank you bhavana…
      and yes will try to post soon…

  3. Orchid

    Anika died really? Anyway ep was awesome can’t wait for the next one post asap.

    1. Manu24

      thank you orchid..

      will post soon…

  4. Fabulous

    1. Manu24

      thank you..

  5. Awesome waiting for next part

    1. Manu24

      thank you..

  6. Lisaaa

    superb manu… waiting for ur faster update 😉

    1. Manu24

      thank you lisaaa..
      i am too lazy 🙂

  7. Superb….sounds very intresting…Keep Going on dear…desperately waiting for next part…

    1. Manu24

      thank you adhya…

  8. Yashu

    It was fab

    1. Manu24

      thank you…

  9. JanviSingh

    It’s awsm yr….
    Update soon…???

    1. Manu24

      thank you so much….

  10. Superb

    1. Manu24

      thank you…

  11. amazing
    post soon u take toooooooooooooo much time

    1. Manu24

      thank you..
      and so sorry for the delays

  12. Khushilovesroumya

    I ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ it.it was so good.waiting for next one.

    1. Manu24

      Thank u khushi…
      Tysm 🙂
      Will post tomorrow…

  13. That was so touching… Please update this series faster than the others.. i can’t see om like this and really want to know who the lady is and why om is in jail dying of guilt when im sure he hadn’t done anything. And who is that girl who is trying to help him? Ufh this mystery is filling my mind with questions! Waiting for the next!!

    O and btw… you seriously are an amazing writer! 🙂
    __
    Awestruck!

    1. Manu24

      your questions will be answered… just wait for some time…

      amd thank you very much…

  14. Amazing episode… loved it…

    1. Manu24

      thank you ankita…

  15. Awesome episode manu

    1. Manu24

      thanks…

  16. Luna

    Hey Dear, your ff is really good. I’m impressed with it. The story is very interesting, full of mystery and suspense. I want to know, who the lawyer is and why Om is in prison, Rumya scenes are cute, but why are they in New York. Did Om really killed Anika??? plz post fast yaar.

    1. Manu24

      thank you luna…

      will try to post soon…

      i am kinda busy these days due to some house work…

      will be revealing everything soon…

  17. Full of mystery… Lovely… Plz update soon

    1. Manu24

      thank you…

  18. Bismiyabasheer1998

    Superb. ..I love your ffs very much. …pld post next part ASAP. ..

    1. Manu24

      Thank u so much bismiya..

      Will post tomorrow..
      Tysm 🙂

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