PRIDEV FF : IMMORTAL UNCONDITIONAL LOVE (Part 3) BY RENIMA ISHQIE

Hai Ishqies….well I think most of you are not happy with this pridev pairing…But guys I want to say the way pridev track was shown actually has put lot of questions before the viewers…. As I felt the way prinku show her concern to dev even after Shivaay rejected the proposal made me to write this ff. But I really don’t know what cv’s have planned for prinku, dev and ranveer….Sorry if I hurt any one as I just expressed my view only…
And ishqies since I started it as a pridev ff please try to understand it…..Sorry for the inconvenience
But ishqies….i really need your comments and opinions. Hope you won’t disappoint me…

Scene-3 { @ Art Hub}
{ Its morning and Omkara was all set to make a sculpture. Dev arrives there and greets him…..Omkara was surprised to see him}
Dev : Hi Om bhaiya…….
Omkara : Hi Dev….What a pleasant surprise ? I am so happy to see you here….
Dev : Om bhaiya….How are you ?
Omkara : Am good and you ?
Dev : Am also…..{He just pretends to be fine with a smile and Om realize it}
Omkara : Dev….I think you are really hurt….with what all occurred yesterday…..Sorry….
Dev : Om bhaiya….Am alright….Well bhaiya… Rihan told me that you are a good artist and you have an art hub also…But trust me am not an artist….. In fact am not able to draw a straight line with pencil and scale…..when I returns from school @ evening and will be ready with my copies to draw lines with scale and pencil….. I will just try….but …..either it would be like a pillar or it would be very lean or very long……and….{smiles} bhaiya….i used to rub those lines with eraser……and many days I will fall asleep on copies and when I will wake up I find some one has draw the lines so neat and perfect….And my mom will say lines are drawn by angel…. {emotional}
Omkara : Dev…..i can understand that you are missing your mother…..
Dev : But bhaiya…..am lucky to have Mrs. Chaya Chabra as my mother……And bhaiya she always take care of me…..But still paapa….i mean all of a sudden he decided to announce me as his son and really I am not able to understand him…..
Omkara : Dev…This is life….We expect a commitment, an affection, care and love from our beloved ones and will think that they will be sincere always…But when we find they are not able to fulfill them and they have just offered pain really we feel that they never considered and valued our feelings and emotions….But one day the same people will start to show concern towards every one…….Dev….it is hard to realize what destiny has planned for us….
Dev : You are right bhaiya…..Actually I just want to ask you…..some thing ? Shall I ?
Omkara : Sure….dev….
Dev : Bhaiya….if you don’t mind then can you do me a favor ?
Omkara : Dev…..you have called me as bhaiya…. So as your big brother am always ready to help you….
Dev : Well bhaiya…..Actually this is not the right time to ask you……I will tell you that when …..{dev gets a phone call and he gets tensed}…..bhaiya…I had to leave…..see you later {he left the spot in a rush}
[Omkara gets confused]

Scene-4 [ @ Loyola College Library]
{Priyanka was sitting in the library and she was trying to turn pages of the book…But her mind was full of Dev…..She recollected the moments with Dev….Suddenly she saw that Dev was standing in front of the librarian….She thought it was just her dream only…..She just pinched her elbow to know whether it was a dream or not…..And she find that it was not a dream…. prinku gets shocked….She stood up from the chair and moved from there in a rush…..Dev was talking to librarian and prinku was not able to hear what actually they are saying….After some time Dev left the library and Prinku was curious to know why Dev came there…She also left the library and followed him….. }
Outside the library
Priyanka : Dev……
Dev : Priyanka…..
Priyanka : Dev….why are you….{suddenly dev holded her hand tightly and asked her to keep quite…..and started running with her…..Prinku didn’t understand any thing……Dev take prinku to a corner of the college ground and both of them started breathing so fast and stared @ each other…..}

PRECAP : Sisbromance ……

That’s all for today guys….actually I portrayed prinku as a college going girl in this ff as per shows she is younger than her brothers….Hope you don’t mind…..please comment on it…ishqies…..

10 comments

  1. varshu

    Actually I like both pridev and priveer by looks.But I feel prinku needs a daring n dashing partner like randhawa.I hope dev’s role is not ended and he will come back some time.

  2. shilpasraja

    I should say that the thought is different. A ff portraying priyanka’s love life. Good episode. Waiting eagerly for the next one. Keep going.

    • Renimarenju

      |Author

      Thanks shilpa…yaar i reached home just 1 hour before only…and my health is really troubling me….well just now i tried and submitted the next one….tu will post it by tonight….but yaar…..next update is really not possible….sorry

  3. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    Life opens the new chapters for all like IB opened new chapter for priyanka and ranjhawa will I guess will reach its aim love but the previous on dev and it was incomplete I mean the way he went he will come back I guess … But I always love your way of description in any ff …. I am happy and you don’t be sad sometimes a small change in the plot makes it more unique… My emotional Queen don’t act as per your nickname …
    Ur writing is always a treat…
    How is ur leg pain RU fine di ??

    • Renimarenju

      |Author

      Thanks for the inspiring comment…welll…dear am bit sensitive in nature….and yaar i reached home an hour before from hospital….and pain has increased only…..i hope it will be fine before diwali

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