PRICE OF SAYING NO!!!!! (OS)

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Hey guys….its ARS……sorry for not posting STILL I LOVE YOU season 2…..finally my classes are over….but ……real game starts now……series of exams till neet final exam.so I’m gonna be too busy in that…..and now the main part… 🙂 ……the story went completely out of mind….so…..now in short I’m stuck not knowing what to do….. Now……. I’m here with a one shot……pls support and share ur views….
Sorry in advance for the mistakes……..
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We can see a many people pacing around in tension…..some were shocked….some were sad….some couldn’t express their feelings…….. Among these…..there is a man in mid forties with a man in mid twenties sitting with welled eyes..tension clearly visible on their faces…. Two women…one in early forties and one mid twenties was there all broken……old woman was staring at the door of Intensive Care Unit while the other was sitting there in the support of one man in same age of her……
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Unknown pov……

Life is so unexpected na…..we never know what is stored for us……we don’t even know what will happen the next minute in our life…… Life is an ocean….. Ocean of deep secrets…… we will never win in finding them……. Hmmmm….but all know human beings have one thing in common……we will fly too high as if we have discovered everything hidden in the deep trenches even if we haven’t found a small pebble……
Oh….sorry……. I didn’t say about myself na….. Hello everyone….I’m Swara Gadodia….

20 yrs old….now doing medicine..my dream since I’ve started to understand things…..
Ok I guess that much self intro is enough……so…about my family…… it’s my small world… My sweet papa Shekhar Gadodia….working in the revenue dept….my dear maa…. Sharmistha Gadodia…..a strict but sweet teacher….. My sister and my brother….our little happy world…… I’m papas princess….maas’s shona….ragu di’s chotu and bhai’s kiddo….well….u have got it….I’m the youngest…… Being youngest gives u a lot…..and my fav hobby….pulling dees and bhais legs…tease them to death……haaa……and of course….fight with them…..but…I’m so clever…. Maa and papa wont scold me…..”I’m a kid na…”…a cute innocent pout melts them…. For them I’m angel…but for bhai….I’m devil…..well…..even if we fight like anything…..we can’t think of being away from each other…..

So….this is my life….oppsss…..guys…its prayer time….sorry….wait for sometime…..I’ve to thank my kannaji……..
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🙂 hey…miss me????…no…haa..ok… So….guys…hey wait….what’s that sound….someone fighting????…….oh…leave it…it’s usual now a days…. But guys don’t think that much ok. ..it’s my mom and di…well….reason???..marriage!!!!…let me peep there….hmm…situation under control….so lets come back….. Maa want di to get married….but di don’t want….ufff…after all they are my Parents!!!!..too stubborn….
Di asks bhai to get married first…after all they are twins….same age..same stubbornness u know…. Bhai has said clearly that he’ll marry only when he feels….maa papa agreed…but……dee has to marry now…she’s just 24 u see…is that a big age????

Well….my maa papa are not like those with 18th century thinking….but… I don’t understand why are they too stubborn in this matter….about bhai….maa says that hes a boy…..he can marry in 30s also…..huhhh…then why can’t dee?????….maa says…. A girl needs a support…cant be alone lifetime…..and bla bla bla….uff…..stupid society guys….

In my view …..support….that is necessary….but…..when men can enjoy their life max….and can do whatever they want….why cant we girls too so that….oh…doing whatever means not without any licence…..
and about marriage……we can so that when we feel a need a of support…..and….why a girl need that married label for respect….but guys when lI say this to support dee….they says I’m a kid 🙁 …..but….I’m 20….I’m abig babygirl 😛 ….
When I asked de about her disapproval….she said that”…I just don’t know chotu….I’m not saying all boys are bad….but….how can we identify their character….it’s too difficult to believe someone these days….we may fail to find the cunning face of people……I’m just afraid…..”
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Hmmm…..it’s true…..now a days it’s too difficult to find a perfect guy…….ahh…I forgot….next week is my di’s marriage….shocked???…she herself chose one for her.and….maa papa found him good…(secret investigations of course….they are parents…)…..so….agreed…
ohhh….it’s late….I’ve classes tomorrow…..ok bye…
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She takes her blanket and moves out of her room????…. She enters a room…..
“Papa….throw her out……it’s my place”she said angrily seeing ragini lying near sharmishta hugging her and shekhar who is on the other side……
Sharmishta:(laughing)…shekhar…….I said na…..
Shekhar:….hmmmmm…(smiles)…
“Oiii kiddo….I told u naa….they love us more than u…that’s why she is in ur place….”

Swara:(fumes)….aghhhhhh….I’ll kill u dee….move….
Ragini sticks her tongue out and lye there itself…..
Swara looks at her and within a moment climbs into their middle….and hugs sumi….while all laughs at her jealousy…..
(Even I get jealous seeing my elder sister sleeping with them ….but…..I’m matured na… 😛 I won’t say anything….)
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Our sweet Swara is coming…….laughing….teasing….. giggling…….spreading happiness all around…..She’s the pet of teachers…well…..not only teachers…..but whole college…..she’s one of the excellent students in the college…..
Suddenly….. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA” a cry ecohed in the campus and all saw a girl falling down from the 5th floor……..all got froze not knowing what happened……the girl who fell landed on the floor badly and is lying in the pool of blood……
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Back to scene 1…..
Media person 1:…well…till now the doctors had said nothing about her codition…..
Media person 2:…according to the reports police had arrested the culprit….
Media person 3:….from the evidences and from the students we got to know that the accused had claimed to be in love with the victim and as she rejected the proposal…accused had planned this in revenge….

Media person 1:…doctors confirmed that conditions of the students who were injured by the accused while trying to save the girl has been stable……
Media person 3:….by the latest info from the authorities….it’s too sad to inform you that…. She has left the world……

The loud cries echoes making the atmosphere miserable….
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Swaras pov………
Is it a sin to say no?????…. Why girls should not say a no if they are not interested…????…. Is it compulsory that one would come….say I LOVE YOU….and we have to say nothing but only yes????? Why can’t we say no???? Why don’t they get it if we say no means it is a no…….. Is it that simple for someone to take others life?????….. Guys I’m not saying all are like this….but there are some who think girls have no right to say no…..she have no right to oppose something even if it’s against her wish…….

He said he love her….wow….what a love……. Is this his love that he pushed her from the fifth floor of the college just bcuz she said NO ??????
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It’s time……now….I Swara Gadodia is standing in the garden of our house……….
near MY GRAVE…….
Oh God…it’s raining…..maa…papa….di….bhai….go inside…..u’ll fall ill….its raining…..go inside…..

Yes….now my eyes are filled…..tears are flowing….bcuz of my helplessness…..I wish I could hug you all tight….love u all so much……
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A star appears crying looking down at this broken parents and siblings sitting near the freshly digged grave not considering the surroundings…….

The screen freezes………….
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So guys…..now share ur views…..
Well…this is based on a real incident happened last day….
May that sister rest in peace…..
With prayers its ARS bidding bye to all………

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30 Comments
  1. Ahhh so sad…y would someone do that..stupid fellows …..may she rest in Peace now…

  2. Simin

    Very emotional dear

  3. Its similar to that happen in kerala naa. Its cruel yaar agar hum haa m
    Nahi bol diya toh mardungi are they are animals

    1. ARs

      Yes….. I’m so frustrated hearing the news…..feeling so sad for her family too…..but….all I could do is to pray for lakshmi…..

  4. Simi

    Emotional..

  5. Shreeyu

    Very true dear…. Superb

  6. Anniya

    It’s superb…
    I don’t know why always girls need to suffer….

  7. Emotional and really correct

  8. Really sad of her…
    As u said all are not same…But there are some people who claim to be in love but is it any love where you kill them….
    I think this is similar to Kerala incident …
    Rip to her..

  9. mindblowing writing dr, u were superb d way u had given msg through ur story it was heart touching. really couldnt understand why we girls cant say no?

  10. Tamil

    so emotional and true dear

  11. Arshaanya

    Emotional….
    Dun knw how to react aftr knwng it hpnd last day as u said…
    may her soul rest in peace

  12. Praju

    Agree with u … and so emotional os

  13. Mica

    uugghhh, may her soul rest in peace dear!
    well about girl, age and marriage, i love to pursue my dream first, but i don’t blame society to give boundary to girl and her ages regarding to marriage.
    We should know that girl/woman have a gift to carry babies on their bodies…
    older they get pregnant, more risk for their health..

    and for this story, he wasn’t a lover, only a maniac,
    and we need to change society mindset regarding a girl choice..

    1. Mica

      ups i mean the ideal of pregnancy is 20-30 years old, out of that limit, not good for the mothers and the babies.

      1. ARs

        Yeah that’s true….I agree….

  14. Such a heart touching story
    U explained it very well

    1. ARs

      This is not just a story dear…but a harsh reality of our society…… I hope there won’t be anymore victims like her ……all we could do is just pray….

  15. Abirsha

    Very true dr…. Now a days its happening a lot…. If a girl doesn’t accept his love why the f**k that boy doesn’t leave her…. Does he won’t get any other girl…. Idiot…. The boys like this has to be punished severely….

  16. This is the reality girls always considered as a material or any kind of show peace who always been restricted do this not do this u r girl don’t go there sala hamari feelings hi nai hot I

  17. Mynalove

    this was sooo sad

  18. Oh.. No.. So emotional… Don’t know what to say.. My eyes are watering..
    May her soul rest in pease..

  19. AnuAnn

    Really heart touching dear… Oh god y this is happening to me.. 3rd os I’m reading today every stories make me cry

  20. Seebu_s

    emotional dear…

  21. I loved the ending twist!!! I didn’t expect it to be swara…!!! It’s was an amazing work…!! It pricked my heart…when I was reading…last lines..’near my grave!!! I want to hug them…thay might get sick!!’
    May that girl rest in peace…and wish that psycho to get punished for his deeds!!!

    1. ARs

      What punishment…???? That one too died without getting punished……he did suicide…….so police closed the case….

  22. Good one

  23. Shifa96

    Emotional..
    May her soul rest in peace.

  24. Vyshu10

    so emotional…may her soul find peace

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