Price of Ignorance (character sketch and episode 1)

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Hii friends KitKat here…. I m old silent reader of TU but no decided to write an os so here we go…….

Character sketch:-
Laksh Maheshwari:- a boy from middle class family. MBA goldmedalist of his college. currently works for a MNC. love his family very much.
Ragini Maheshwari:- wife of laksh. was classmate of laksh during his Mba. from a high class family. but left her dreams for marring laksh. mother of ansh.
AP:- laksh’s mother a typical mother in law. was against raglak marriage but accepted it for the sake of laksh. Ansh is her life. but she don’t like ragini.
Ansh Maheshwari:- 3 yrs son of raglak. sweet n bubbly. raglaks life.
Raglak had been married since 5 years all was going well.. some nook-zook between AP n her were common now so laksh won’t minded it much.
He was busy n stressed due to year end workload of office….

he used to be late at night n went office in rush as he used to wakeup late…… oneday during dinner ragini vomited but she said laksh to ignore it as food poisoning n laksh to ignored it but day by day ragini got bad stomach ache so she said about it to AP but AP labeled it as her drama for not doing work. she managed to hide it from laksh but use to cry in pain when alone her best friend suggested her to go to doctor but so ragini assured her that she would go with laksh when he gets time….. some days later raginis condition got worse n she told about it to laksh….. but he said that we would go on Sunday but it was 4 days away…. next day morning Ansh went to school n ragini went to her room as she again got pain. AP asked her to prepare lunch but she said that she was not in a condition to work so AP scolded her n even complained about it to laksh when he came back at night framing ragini as culprit n how she miss treated her…..

laksh was already stressed and this resulted his anger to go on peak….. he fought with ragini, scolded her n even beat her…… Ansh was hell scared with this…… he ran to AP who was enjoying all this…. she pacified him n made him sleep….. ragini cried whole night while wincing in pain n laksh slept in anger….. next morning laksh woke up late but still ragini was asleep….. he was having guilt of hurting her so he kissed her on forehead n found it cold….. he got suspicious but ignored it n let her sleep….. Ansh was already in school as AP made him ready send him as ragini didn’t woke up still. even during breakfast she was brabelling against ragini which made him furious now n said her to stop at that instant…….

laksh again went back to room n saw ragini still sleeping…. he got tense now n tried to wake her up but she collapsed on ground after he hold her. laksh was shocked n hugged her tightly trying to wake her up but it was too late. his ragini left him last night itself after the torture n pain she suffered given by her loved once n for her loved once…… the medical reports of her said she died to ignorance towards her stomach alsar….. AP was in guilt later of not caring for ragini n blaming herself for her death n laksh was in depression for years due to not caring n trusting his love….. but it was too late….. Ansh still hate his father n grandmother after many years due to the memories n flashes n screems of his mother of night before her death are still with him……. all are facing the intrest on price of ignorance which proved too expensive for them……

Every story don’t have a happy ending but a lot to learning through it….. life is not predictable….. so always try to respect n understand your loved ones………

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35 Comments
  1. Astra

    this is not just a story. but, this is a real life scenario which some girls are facing still. Ignorence..! it’s really painful. really my eyes got wet. if husband himself doesn’t understand who will understand..? and saas should be mother but if she is also cruel..?? this is very much sad.. but thanks for this. yes..never ignore loved ones

    1. Kitkat

      astra???? I m crazy fan of ur ffs specially my married life n thanks for ur comment…… n ya I wrote it with an intention of showing society’s cruel reality…… bocoz writers shouldnt b always for entertainment of reades but also reality mirror for them……

  2. Superb… Its true… Sometimes ignorance made our life to hell.. Keep writing more raglak stories… Keep rocking

    1. Kitkat

      thanks dear n yes will soon post a ff too…

  3. Awesome and also emotional dear

    1. Kitkat

      thanks dear

  4. IQRA222

    awesome and emotional

    1. Kitkat

      if I m not wrong u r iqra writer of junoon from raglak page on fb right????

    2. IQRA222

      no i am not iqra writer of junoon ff she is another one i am just a reader

  5. I have already read it on a facebook page. Plz write a new one.

    1. Kitkat

      ya I only wrote it on 2 fb pages of raglak….

  6. Fairy

    Dis is an os…..I think I read it somewhere ….hve u already posted it here or in Facebook??? Well wtever,it ws reallly fabuloussss ……one should learn from dis for sure…. Thnx a lot for writng somethng lyk dis…it ws reallly emotionalll…….keeep rockng n stay blessssed sweeety??????

    1. Kitkat

      ya I on wrote it on 2 fb pages of raglak….

  7. Kitkat

    thank you dear…….????

  8. This is fabulous and truly emitional yaar. You have just pen down the reality.

  9. Asra

    fabulous dear…..it’s too emotional….what can I say yar….absolutely correct mintu dear….ignorance make our life hell….
    how can husband didn’t care for our wife….it’s so cruel dear….but in our society some of people r like that only….laksh and Ap ignorance only separate one son and mom….ansh so sad for him…..
    plz write another one dear….waiting for you.
    .tkcr dear….

    1. Kandipa dear… Ipidiyum nama society la innum irukanga…innum sila cruel incident nadanthutu dhn iruku…naney ungaluku msg pananum nu nenaichn dear darshu ff la..kitkat made a awesome work to think our society cruelty..!!!

      1. Asra

        ya kitkat correct society ku eatha oru story ya write panirkanga….mintu yeapadi irukenga….
        kitkat ur name so sweet…

    2. Kitkat

      thanks so much sweety….. I will b posting a new ff soon…..

    3. Nala iruken da..nenga??

  10. Meethi

    Welcome Kitkat❤…and this was a master piece…so emotional..so good..well written..i loved it..do continue with ur works…will be waiting..take care??

    1. Kitkat

      thanks dear…. so sweet of u…???

  11. nice superb plzz try to post raglak ff plzzz

  12. aww so much frustated seeing so many swasan ff and very few raglak actually it feel me bad that even now raglak fan didnt support them and yaa and helly fan till now bashing tejesswi. over ang laga de song see in raglak page plzz try to write more and be regular the main difference of swaragini popularity is tejesswi acting and then when ragini get his love than CVS did injustice with jabardasti Ka swasan track in raglak track like raglak unite so sudden and faltu swara memory loss lost the charm of swaragini
    raglak didnt get fan support what happened to raglak writer and their love bcoz now swasan ff is increaseing and raglak ff is one or two in no plzzzzzzz try to give more ff plzzzzz now its so less in number plzz try to write more bcoz now days raglak ff is decreasing as compare to swasan bcoz raglak ff os ss ts plzz give more and don’t stop in bcoz many writer are stop in middle and some end sudden plzzz guys prove that raglak fandom is not less plzz guys give some new one try to regular plzz give some new raglak ff and yaa plzz write more at least 100 episode bcoz many swasan ff reached 100 but none raglak ff reach plzz write more guys for raglak its a request by raglak fan

  13. SRSL

    I cried?omg….not fair…raguuu mera bachha…

  14. Superb yaar too emotional…

  15. Awesome & Emotional One….

  16. Fats

    This was a really emotional OS. I like how it conveyed a very important message about ignorance because unfortunately this situation is a reality for some. Thank you for writing this OS ?

  17. very emotional and awesome

  18. Asw

    Nice this is truth of the society keep going

  19. Loved it sooo much…!!! It’s soo emotional…!!

  20. Jazzy

    omg yaar sooo amazingg yaar tune toh emotional kar diya and u gave such a beautiful msg at the end

  21. A.xx

    Amazing and love the message u conveyed xx

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