Do Premiyon Kee Durghatana (Episode 3)

Do Premiyon Kee Durghatana

The crash of two lovers- Yuvraaj and Suhani

Previous Episode:
Episode 2

Song:

Tear in my heart

Author’s note: Just comment please; yh I have mock exams till May- so I need motivation to write I also need to revise etc. and I don’t want to make you all wait till May/June till my finals are over- that is just cruel! I also am loving the SSEL track now- call me weird, but I actually love the new mysterious character of Sayyam! And is it me or is he really good looking! Karan- you are rocking this role!
SO Please do comment x It is your support that helps me x

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Episode 3 | Yuvraaj

The radio tunes are quite ridiculous at this time, some random screaming and really squeaky voices- so to occupy my mind I decide to pick up the second letter on the table- Yes I did order them chronologically- I was that uninterested.

As I pick up the letter, I see this one is slightly decorated with a small drawing of a heart in the corner- with a little tear in it. This makes my mind ponder on the weird thoughts that corrupted the girl to draw such a random picture… I hear the music while my eyes scan the paper- it was about something that said “she’s a tear in my heart”- is this a coincidence?

| “Hey Sadu,

I know I am writing another letter- why don’t I just text you or why don’t I just leave voicemails or speak to you? I don’t know Yuvraaj- I feel writing letters just make everything seem clique- like our meeting. I just want to rewind to the past- so I feel writing lets me transport back to the 1800’s- weird right?
I was listening to this absolute ludicrous song- “Tear in my heart” and the irony in the first two sentences had got me addicted; “Sometimes you gotta bleed to know / That you’re alive and have a soul” I just instantly remembered the pool of blood you were in and you were lifeless! And this song just reminds me of you- it is on repeat in my mind, it might be a few years old, but I related so much to it- I felt it was my type of music…

Ah rubbish- the tears won’t stop flowing… It also reminded me of our first meeting- remember in the park? So does that turn some of your rusty brain clogs? So do you remember the first day we met? Well, let me just tell you anyway:

It was in January, I was obviously minding my own business, when I was running away from my little nephews wanting to catch me- but you obviously had to be jamming to your rock music while going on a jog- and unfortunately you were running near the river and guess who fell in… YOU DID!

I remember your nose magically growing while I couldn’t control my laughs- then my little nephew ended up pushing me in- enjoying the entertainment!
You ended up laughing and I got my lovely vibrant yellow Salwar muddy! That was when I pushed you in again- deeper into the muddy thing!
And before you knew it dragged me down with you- that poor Salwar was never in the same state ever again…
*cue the sighs*

When we finally got out, we had an argument about who was more careless. It was obviously you! I was entertaining the poor children wanting to add a sparkle of fun into their clueless lives!

I remember you saying “If you weren’t so fat I would’ve caught you instead and neither of us would’ve fallen in!”
Then I said something like: “Oh if you weren’t so weak like a stick maybe then, I am not fat- I am average for a woman!” Then I remember holding onto my stomach- showing you my ‘nonexistent’ belly fat. “This is muscle” I proudly showed off- you bellowed sending shivers down my spine which then caused you to say “I see nothing but fat- are you pregnant?” Which did tick me off!

I still couldn’t believe you called me pregnant! I am hardly overweight!
Then do you remember what I did?
I punched you in the arm causing you to squeal like a girl and I stormed off. We both stormed off from each other- soggy. Absolutely waterlogged.
It was kind of sad- because we both left with a certain temper- forgetting our manners to exchange our names! Like how could we forget the most important thing! Like what happens if we never met each other again!

*cue the shivers*
But I was guessing it was astral’s influence as I couldn’t stop picturing your charismatic smile- no wonder your name means prince. I also couldn’t stop replaying you laugh in my head- it was a melody to my head- like a piano riff.
Little did I know I was falling for the sadu.
Little did I know you would be the other half of me…

I guess I have to go now- Pratima Maa is absolutely distraught, I need to comfort her x

Love,
Your Pagal Ladki” |

Cheeeee! A river! I fell in a dirty river! I cannot believe that!

I am still contemplating on who this peculiar girl is, is she my girlfriend? Is she my school friend? Is she my wife?
Ha no.

I never want to get married. I am Yuvraaj- I was known as the playboy and I can never settle down… This beautiful face of mine is meant to be shared with many..

| Third Person |

Yuvraaj just lays there giggling to himself while rereading the letter- smiling profusely at the his unique encounter- he was falling in love with her again through the letters without knowing… It was unfortunate she wasn’t there anymore…

Precap: “Our encounters after that were just as funny!”

Hope you lot enjoyed this episode!
I put one of my favourite band’s songs in this episode as to me this episode was really special- Suhani still distraught trying to remember her Sadu Kumar x
Hopefully she would get better through-out the letters x

Love you all x
Aqsaah x

23 comments

  1. radha

    i dont have any have any words to say about ur ff.one thing was right i just cant wait till may fr ur ff.its just impossible.i have addicted to this and yuvani first meeting.it was very cute and funny.i like the concept of expressing love through letters.it was very romantic.ur ff is becoming better and better.i became fida fr ur ff.i am waiting to see yuvani meeting.pls try to update it regularly eventhough it will be short.no problem.but i just want it.

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      Thank you so much, Radha dear! I am forever in debt to your mood lifting comments!
      I will try to update as frequently as possible- I just have to finish writing my revision notes and I would be free at the end of some days x
      And I am forever glad that you enjoy reading my fanfics- as they do transport me as well when writing them x
      Thank you ever so much, my beautiful and warm-hearted di x
      I love you lots x

  2. radha

    i have no words to say about ur ff.one thing was right i just cant wait till may fr ur ff.its just impossible.i have addicted to this and yuvani first meeting.it was very cute and funny.i like the concept of expressing love through letters.it was very romantic.ur ff is becoming better and better.i became fida fr ur ff.i am waiting to see yuvani meeting.pls try to update it regularly eventhough it will be short.no problem.but i just want it.

  3. AFANFICWRITER

    |Registered Member

    Aqsaah… di… how amazing is this!? I loved loved loved it! She isnt there? Is this the mystery, you said its not going to be a sad ending… didnt you? I wouldnt mind. It just confused me. but wah how cute are these letters! Im obsessed… good luck with your mocks!!! I hope you find time to updat and read my epis (ive got one that will upload in a few hours) because i feel like ive found a real friend in you… and your ff’s brighten up my day… xxx

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      Shreya Di, you are my inspiration literally x
      Thank you for the heart lifting comment- and I will try to work at my mocks XD I just can’t be bothered ;p
      And no she isn’t there 😉 You will find out why like many episodes soon. It would be a very long FF- aiming for 100 epis

  4. Nithu

    |Registered Member

    Aqsaah…how amazing you write your ff…its lovely dear…eagerly waiting for yuvani..meeting dear love u n ua ff…and aqsaah i think whn we bcame frnds we had a big frnds gang right…im missing evry1…who are not there…

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      I remember our Tigers gang- it was really amazing- it was when the track when all haiku everyone left slowly I am glad you are still here x
      And YuvAni meeting won’t be till late in my FF- probably half way- as Yuvraaj is still in hospital for a few months- the time he would meet her if he is out!
      😉 I didn’t want to give too much

  5. Neethu

    It was just marvelous!! U have potrayed each of their feelings with so much compassion. And you’ve described suhani’s passionate love for yuvraj in one single episode❤ You are simply awesome aqsaah!! Sorry for not commenting on your previous posts.. I hope u still remember me..

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