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PREM YAA PAHELI #KAANCHI #OS #Last SHOT by ANEE

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Hi guys so sorry for being sooooooooooo late I waits you lot….but now finally i write and post it….now you can read it complete the story….hope you will like it..
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The man was none other than Kabir…..He was giving punishment to himself…and he was reminicing some…flashbacks…where he was seeing…a young girl slaped him she was weeping badly infront of him…….
Scene shifted to Laal MEHal….
Where Yuvrani..Saanchi were walking in corridor wd his friends..Ishaka and Pragya…Just she saw kabir is coming towards them…btw he was in his thoughts..he wasn’t saw them and just coming to them..Yuvrani sanchi was also walking…..Ishaka and Pragaya were smiled to saw him..after that to yuvrani saanchi…They tried to tease her…Btw saanchi wasn’t heard them..
Ishaka: Look at her Pragya…..R u understand something….
Prgaya: Kiya tum bhi wahi soch rahi ho jo hum soch rahain hain…R U Thinking that like me?
Ishaka nods and smiled too.
Ishaka: Humen lagta hai Yuvrani ko yeh Yuvak(Guy) Bhaane(Like) laga hai…Dekho toh sahi In ke naitr(EYES) hi nahi hat rahain hain inn se.
Both Smiled.
They were coming towards each other at the same time some servants went from there wd Some buckets of flowers and seeing him… Kabir was reached near to Yuvrani saanchita…then they servants bumped wd each other…they flowers flew in air then put down on them they stoped there and starring to each other…..servants…ishaka and pragya go far from there…Servants heads down..while ishaka and pragya were seeing eachother….Yuvrani saanchi and kabir were lost in each others eyes….then suddenly saanchi realizes that…they Eyes she was saw somewhere..then kabir was abashed an instantly leaved from there….Sanchita..turned to see him.
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Satya gadh’s Mahel shown
Where Raja/king was walking in his room…where rani/queen Jaya prabha came….and said.
Jaya prabha: Maharaj hum aap se ek vinati/request karne aaye hain…aap Raj kumari saanchita ko wapis mahel bulwaye….Humey anuman/guess horaha hai ke Rajkumari ne ab tak toh Yuvraj veersingh ko parakh liya hoga..app unehen sheergra/fastly hi yahn bulwayie…
King: App uchit keh rahin hain Maha rani….parantu/but vey kah kar gayin thi ke vey khud sandesh bhijvayengi…Humen chinta karne ki awashkta/need nahi hai..
Queen: Prantu humen chinta horahi hai Hum Maa hain unn ki…(SENTI DIALOGUE U KNOW) .aap kuch kijye Maharaj. (she pleads)
King: Maharani calm down ok I do arrangements for go to Lal mahel….We all are going there…Now be relaxe.
OK….jesa aap ko uchit lage Maharaj..Said Rani.
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@ Vijay Gadh palace
Maharani Savitri Devi was Sat in her room where Chhoti Rani Gyatri came and told her that…..Jiji Rani sahiba…Hum yeh chahte hain ke humari Rijkumari Riyana Bhi badi horahin hain…Humen unn ke Vivah ke Vishay main Kuch Vichar karna chehiye……………Rani ji Our Lil pricess Riyana is growing up we should have to think about her marraige.
Savitri Devi: Choti Rani gytri Devi…Riyana abhi Vivah ke yogya nahi hain ve abhi kuchh krna chahatin hain apne jeevan main ap un ki chinta na karen ve humari bhi putri hain…..aur ek bar Yuvraj Veersingh ka Vivah hojaye…uss ke prishchaat hum vichar karenge Rijkumari Ke Vivah ke vishey main………..Choti rani RIYANA is also my duaghter she want to do something in her life and don’y worry about she is also my daughter…once veersingh get married then we will surely think about her marraige.
Gytri Devi was not happy at all but She smiled in front of her..Bcoz she was Chhoti Rani.
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Kabir in his Room was thinking about how to kill her….This was night….she heard from some one that Yuvrani was sleeping alone in her Kaksh/Room….And wants to do not disturb her….kabir had planned to kill her….so he decided to go her room…he came out from his room….searching yuvrani sanchita’s Room…after lots of search finally he got success…there what he two gaurds were standing on the door took swords in thier hands….Now kabir was thinking…how to enter in the room…first he tried to go straight by himself…..he goes…gaurds stoped him at the door and said….Rajkumari ji ne kissi ko bhi andar aane se manna kiya hai…..kabir said Rajkumari ji send me sandesh/massage to come Bcos she have important work…Guards looking to each other …then said….Humen shama karen mohdiya…Kabir smirked…then Gaurds said..prantu Hum aap ko andra prevesh nahi karne de sakte…humen nahi pata ke Yuvrani ji aap ko kab sandesh bheja tha…she recently told us…ke kisi ko bhi andr na aane dena……Kabir got angry on them and leaved…but not easily…he stood behind pillar and peeping also thinking how to enter in the Room…..then suddenly..he saw a big vase ..he pushed the vase and sounded like Cat “meaaon”…Guards were shocked and worried…and came here see wat happen…. Taking advantage of the spot…he goes in her room…and saw dark shadow was in the room….but he saw one girl was sat besids the pool moonlight came through window..he saw her back then came to her…he keep hand on her waist…girl feel his touch and blushes…he made him front..he saw her face she is rajkumari Saanchita…she is looking damm damm hot and gorgious…kabir jzt lost in her she tooo…kabir carrassing on her cheeks in loving mannar…they are about to liplock…but his dream was ruined by…guards again came on the door and talked wd each other…he jerked head..and thought wht was that???Not it can’t happen to me…no never..he tried to console himself and focus on his mission to kill Yuvrani saanchita…He saw yuvrani saanchita was sleeping on the bed..he came near to her…he got shocked…to see her during sleeping she was looking like….Apsara/Angle …jannat ki pari….he was not able to kill her.. and left from there..wd empty hand.
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A eagle flying in the air it came for kabir..kabir land it his arms and took out latter from her leg it was latter from Maha raja Hamir singh….kabir read the latter and wrote something on it…tied on eagle’s leg ..and grant permissoin to go….after that …Kabir was walking n corridor he heard something he peeped it was Veersingh’s Kaksh/Room….Veer singh was reading a latter And got tansed..he put latter on the Sandook…Went out side the room..kabir who was stood behind the pillar went in his room and took out the latter he was awstruck….Scene was paused on his face…
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All were reached at Laal Mahel..means Satya Gagh Waasi..and Vijay gadh waasi too including MAHARAJA ANAND SINGH WD HIS TWO WIVES MAHARANI SAVITRI DEVI AND GYTRI DEVI WD HIS DAUGHTER RIYANA.
All reached peacefully Yuvrani got extremly happy to see them here…meets wd them very nicely…She did pranaam to every one..all were smiled on the gathering and enterd in the Mahal…
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MAHaraja Sunil shekher singh to his duaghter Yuvrani Saanchita ….Yuvrani hum aap ka Nrnaya/Decision jan’na chahte hain aap ne kiya socha hai Yuvraj veersingh ke vishay/About main….
(GYS THEY WERE ALONE IN THIER APARTMENT and TALKED WD EACH OTHER)
Saanchi: Pita shree Hum ne koi Decision nahi liya yet….if you are hurreid then I’m putting one condition in front of you…
Maha sunilSS: Condition kiya???
Jaya prabha Enterd she said Hume batate hai…Yuvrani saanchita ka swamber organise karne ka decision liya hai hum ne..
Flashback:
When saanchita met wd her mother in her room then Jayaprabha asked her about her feelings..she said in confusion…Maa hum nahi jan’te ke humen kon adhik pasand hai…I mean Yuvraj veersingh is a brave worrior but I couldn’t feel any connection wd him…I felt so much strange wd him…the way of talking wd is very casual..I wanna feel something…I couldn’t found any feelings towards him…and u know maa..I saw same eyes..that were I saw in my dreams remember I was told you.
Jayaprabha : humare paas ek upaaye hai aap ki uljhan suljhane ka aur unn magical naitron/eyes wale Manushiye ko dhundhne ka…
Saanchi n Jaya looks and each other smiled.
Flashback ends.
Maharaj: iss ki kiya awashta/need hai…Yuvraj Veer singh ek kushal yodha hain…unn ki priksha /test lene ki kiya awashkta hai?
Saanchi: Pitashree If he is very kushal worrior so definantly he will win…No need to get worry about him….aur hum kiya kehte hain unehn toh pransata/happiness honi chahiye yeh jaan kar ke koi unn ki shakti ko dekhna chahta…unhen ek afsar pradhaan kiya ja raha hai apni kushalata sidh karne ka…hum sahi keh rahen hain maa?
Jayaprabha: uchit keh rahin hain Yuvrani maharaj app Swamber ki arrangements kijey.
(U KNOW GUYS JESE TESSE KARKE SWAMBER KI ARRANGEMENTS KI GAYIN>>>LOTS OF KINDOM’S YUVRAJ WERE CAME TO HEAR YUVRANI SAANCHITA’S SWAMBER…..SO LET’S SEE WAT HAPPEN IN THE SWAMBER)
A GRAND Ground was shown……………All Kings were sat on thier seats respectively…..Yuvrani saanchita came wd Ishaka And Pragaya…she wore White royal Outfit….She sat…all Yuvraj were starring at her…she was looking so beautifull…her eyes were finding the same eyes that she was saw in the dreams…well…All yuvraj came here wd thier horses…Mantri …Adarsh annouced that Ap sab ka Satya gadh ki YUVrani Maharaja SSS ki Putri…Yuvrani saanchita ke swamber main swagat hai….hum aap sab kushal yodhayon se nivadhan/request karte hain ke..kirpya/plz aap iss ghoshna/announcement ko ghor se sune…Yeh Yuvrani saanchita ka Dupatta hai …yuvrani saanchita iss ko teer se baandh kar Door nishana lagayengi aap main se koi udte hue teer ko pakr kar yeh dupatta yuvrani saanchita ko laake pehayega…ve vijeta kehlayega….aur Yuvrani saanchita ka vivah unn se tey kiya jayega…we aasha /hope that all are understand verywell.
Come yuvrani sanchita and throw arrow in the air….saanchi came…veersingh’s Pov…Yuvrani Dupatta toh hum hi laayenge…ap bhi dekh lijey ga…
Saanchi throws arrow in the air…arrow was flying in the air speedingly….All worriors went behind arrow..jzt then Saanchi sees the same white horse join them in the mid way..the same white shirt…his face coverd wd white piece of cloth….he is ridding on the horse…. running behind the dupatta….veer tries to hits him…but… he defeated by him ….he catch the arrow he turned back….holding arrow in is hand dupatta was flying in air…..All are starting looking at him..they were confused at all…..
(GUYS I KNOW YOU ALL ARE REMEMBERING THE TALEGU MOVIE “MAGHADHEERA “BANGOLI VERSION “YODHA” THE REMAKE OF MAGHADHEERA)
The white horse is coming towards them…he reached in the ground he came to Yuvrani saanchita they were starring to each other….then he took dupatta and tried to wearing her…then Aadrash attacked on him wd sword but…suddenly he turned back stoped him….he attacked back on him …the dupatta was flied then came on her….he was fighting wd him crucially…
(GUYS IMAGINE WORRIORS WAR BETWEEN THEM)

Men pushed to aadarsh he fell down…Then someone else attack him from behind…he turned back thier swords collided wd eachother….then his face shown he is none other than Veersingh….men fought wd him….he also pushed him back he fell down…his sword leaved from his hand…veersingh was looking to his sword but sword was so far from him he lied on the earth…men came near to him..he took sword in his neck……and asked by Maha raj Aanand singh “MAHARAJ Aap satya batyaenge yaa main aap ke putra ko is jeevan se mukt kardoon?” R u telling the truth otherwise I relief ur son from life.
MAHARAJ Anand singh: What are you saying?? Kon sa satya/Truth?
Then Saanchita stands asked “WHO ARE YOU??”
Men removed piece of cloth…….all are shocked to see him….black n white screen feezed on thier faces…RIYANA…got faint..after saw him…Somehow CHHOTI RANT Gytri handled her.
Screen was rounding..his face is shown..he is none other Kabir….Saanchita got well shocked to see him.
Anand singh: Who are you and what you want?
Kabir: Hum Uday gadh ke Yuvraj “YUVRAJ KABIR SING” Suputra/son of Maharaj Hamir singh…Kuch gyath/Remember hua aap ko? Now its time to tell truth to every one widout wasting of time speak truth infront of them other wise I will kill ur son.
Anand singh: No ….Stop kesa sach putra/son?
Kabir Singh: yahi ke 14 warsh/years purva/before what was happened in the engagement ceremoney? Tell otherwise…He shown sword.
All are looking to anand in confusion and asked
Sunilshekher singh what about he is telling?
Anand ok i will telling you …

Flashback
A big mehal is shown here engagement ceremoney is going on…all are seeing happy wd smiling face..Princess came downstaires from she is none other than Princess Priyanshala Sister of Yuvraj kabirSingh…her engegemnet fix satya Gadh ke yuvraj Sanket singh…both really loves each other but anyone else who keep eyeing on thier beautiful lovestory..yes who is none other Rival kindom’s Yuvraj Vikrant singh…he is Chooti Raani Gytri’s brother..he is madly loving to Rajkumari Priyanshala…who was send proposal for marring her but priyanshala Rejects his proposal…and agreed to marry wd Sanket singh…now this is thier engegment day..then suddenly…Amargadh attack on them thier Soldiers begin to kill in the palace….all lights went off…ladies running every where gents are fighting wd them…all side blood is blood…When lights came…all are shocked saanchi came near to kabir and slaped him…she is weeping badly…tears rolling from his eyes…he was holding blo*dy sword…and he is standing jzt infront of sanket…..and the half piece of sword in sanket tummy…. he was dumdstuck on it…don’t understood wat was that?…priyanshala..turned she was screamed…sanket…take same sword and killed herself on the spot…she too die…on that day …..kabir is thinking that jzt bcoz of her worlds her sister attempt suicide in front of him….he lost his sistr….after that day the both kingdom are rivals and became enemy to eachother….it was Uday Gadh’ palace so maharaj sunilshikharsingh along wd yuvrani saanchita they left from there…. After that they kabir promised himself to get revange from Satya Gadh…..he was not guilty…coz he knows that he didn’t killed yuvraj sanket Singh… So he wants to take revenge from her sister’s death from SatyaGadh…to kill Satya Gadh’s Rajkumari.
After some days….Anand Singh got married to Chhoti Rani Gytri devi…maharaj Amar Singh along wd yuvraj vikrant Singh were sitting together and talking wd eachother.., they remincing that how theywere gathered and was planed to attacked on UdayGadh.

Flashback

Maharaj Anand was went to AmarGadh to do deal wd them coz he loved to Gytri Amar gadh’s princess…that is y he offered to them he will confer Gytri’s hand to in his than he will helping them to attack on Udaygadh for ruined engagement ceremony of sanket and priya coz he knows as very well that yuvraj vikrant is very cruel and madly loved to priyanshala….so very cleverly he put condition in front of them….(toh kiya tha they agreed to do this… And on the engagement day wat was happened as u see).

Both flash backs ends to gather…

All are in awestruck on his conforntation…..tears rolling from saanchi’s eyes…..she wasn’t able to say anything and ran to upstairs… While.. Kabir leaved veersingh…veersingh stands and asked from his father…. Y dad y did u that jzt bcoz u wants marry wd chhoti rani maa..unbelievable dad…kabir was my friend since childhood you snatched her sister my friend his love everything coz of ur bad deeds…I hate u dad I hate u….I never spare u for this…don’t show me ur face again… He turned face from him after knowing her evil face..

Beta one more reason I had for doing this it was uu…said anand

Me but how? He asked as well as shock too.

Coz I observed that u also liked yuvrani saanchita…

But I knows as very well that yuvrani saanchita and kabir got engaged since childhood… So how I can think like that. Said veer

Then maharaja Hamir Singh reached their coz kabir was send him later to came here after read veer’s later….then they met wd eachother emotionally.. Anand regrets for his mistakes and apologized from them wd teary eyed…then they forgive him to think that..Guzri ko yaad karke kiya faida….Guzri ko bhul jaana hi behtar hai.

Sanchi was in her room weeping badly…remincing all scenes wd him that they are playing wd each other then all remembered scene where how he saved him from tiger….tears rolling from her cheeks… She wiped tears and said he was innocent he didn’t killed yuvraj Sanket….in fact he was saving to him from attack he was tried to keep outside sword from his tummy…and wdout knowing anything i was slaped him….but she was not understand what she feels about him….then someone taped on her shoulder from behind she turned and saw she was khamoshi….yes she appeared there…and said close your eyes then complete ur remained dream…she closed eyes and seeming same horse coming towards her she is going to see his face then suddenly opened eyes…..tears rolling from her eyes in joyness he sees kabir was standing in front of her….she ws over whelmed to him..coz she was kabir’s face in the dream… tears also rolling from kabir’s eyes….kabir head down in front of her….offered sword from both hand and said…,main shama ke yogya nahi hun….yeh lo talwar…or kàato humara betukka guroor…kiun ab him tumare bina ek aur pal jee nahi payenge….said kabir

Hum tumara guroor todte hain toh humara guroor kon todega him toh tumare saamne khade rehne ke nhi yogya nahi hain….toh him kon saa tumare bin jee payenge…said saanchi.

He heads up sword fell down…he bents down..,sanchi too bent down…kabir raised hands puts them in her face..then said…ab se him likhenge Prem ki ek nahi daastan…..jiyenge saath marenge saath….har janam…rahenge saath saath….kiun yeah paheli nahi Prem hai….sanchi nods….then they hugged each other….tightly.

HAPPY ENDING.
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So Guys this was it?
How was that?
Hope u like it…
If yes then plz leave ur comments below
I know I bored u very much..
But plzzz don’t eggs on me as you know very well that i’m vegitarian…
I’m eagerly waiting for ur comments.
Regards ur
Anosha (Anee).

14 Comments
  1. Moonlight25

    Anee dear…it was an amazing update just like you..just loved the ending….superb job dear….love you loads 😘😘😘❤❤❤

  2. Dhruti

    superbbbbbbb os i just enjoyed a lot because you describe all situation and scenes so nicely and perfectly i just loved this os………………….come back with next ff/fs/os……till then tc…………….love you……………………

  3. Neha7873

    Amazing update .. simply superb

  4. RuCh23

    😍😍😍 Anee saw eerie no words to discribe this 😀😀😀 suppppperbbb 😘😘😘😘

  5. Priyanshipp

    Awesome dear. I have no words how to express my feelings. Gr8 dear

  6. Niyaaa

    Hey anee mindblowing supeerb os nd dear what a twist.. Awsome ending lovv u sweety came bacl with new one till than tc bye

  7. Khamoshi

    Anosha yaar… i have no words left to praise u dear..u r such a brilliant writer .what to say now.. u nailed it dear..and Thank u so much for making me a wonderful part of ur story..i am so lucky to have u in my life ..u have given me such a gr8 gift .. Thank u again.
    LOTS OF HUGS AND KISSES TO U IN PLACE OF ROTTEN TOMATOES as u don’t deserve it dear..u deserve a grand showering of beautiful rose petals in ur honour dear. SALUTE & RESPECT to u

  8. Riyarocks

    Anee mohtarma, aapki likhaawat hamare dil ko bhaa gai….aapse anurodh hai ki aap isi prakar aage bhi hamara manoranjan karti rahein…..aapke iss katha ko padhkar hum atyant prasann hue……haha…….dear, itna hi bata sakti hoon ki u r too good & so was ur os…….luv u dherr saara……nahi…….hum aapse atyant prem karte hain……yuvrani Anosha…..haha…..

  9. Trisha139

    Awesome too good yr

  10. Anosha…..u rocked again dear……u make me speechless , so better if i closed my mouth……..Plzzzzz come back with another OS or FF . It’s a request from me….. lots of love to u & a big hug to u sweetie.

  11. Sajnana900

    Hum mon hi rahen gay
    Kadachit hum kuch kahengay to yeh aap k or aap k os ki insult/toheen/ ( urdu main to toheen kehte hai par hindi main nhn aatA)
    Hogi
    Aap se ye hi anurodh hai k issi tarah or b likhty rhen

  12. Ur story was amazing…….. Loved it very much…. Sorry for the late reply was really busy…… And abt the movie i haven’t watched it yet but will soon

  13. Abhilasha

    Ye ati sunder katha thi …….him mantrmughdh ho gaye hai apki is anmol peshkash se ……..apne hamara hridya jeet lia h priya …….ye katha atyant rochak tatha bhinn thi aur sada hamre hridya me vaas kregi ….mapko hamari taraf se dher Sara pyaar !!

  14. Jessicca

    You nailed it girl… It was beyond amazing… Superb .. Outstanding… Brilliant…

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