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PREM YA PAHELI #KAANCHI #OS #DEDICATED TO KHAMOSHI by ANEE

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Hello Friends…Good morning to all of you…..I know Ri….I took long gape Sorry yaar……Today my this OS is dedicated to My One of the Favourite Writer….My Mitu…..Hey Mitali this Os is for you….I know you are surprised bt Dear…..this is your first achievement Award that I want to give you For my Happiness….You know wat… in a very short Time you Got great success in Our group…on TU….So I decided to awarded you….Ya..ya I know I have no authority to awarding you…Bt Jo mera dil chahta hai Main wahi karti hun So Mera dill ne kaha khamoshi ko Award milna chahiye toh bus….I come here to dedicate this to you…Hope you will like it….My friend..You are appre
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Hey guys Plzzz Pray for our Abhilasha….she get well soon….She is jaan of our kaanchi family….I really missing her.
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I know this is very very different concept….Don’t knows..How many of you will like it….btw dear don’t take me wrong and don’t Laughs on me……I know I’m little silly girl….Btw wat I do…Dimag main ideas aate hain wants to share wd you Bcoz you are reading this giving response on it..so I couldn’t control my self from writing…plz guys bear me if does any mistake in it…Wdout hasitation…just burstout…Luv you all.
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A Big Raj Mehal is Shown a girl standing in her Room’s belcony……….she wore long royal attires…The maang teeka is shown on her head………heavy jewallry is shown on her….she is thinking about her life partner…..she was in deep thoughts…..just then someone taped her from behind she turned back and saw an angle…..she Sees her…..And ask….Who are u?

Angle……….Ppl called me as an angle but i’m khamoshi ……anywhere confusion occur I reached to solve confusion…..coz I’m dreamer I appeared in your dearms to find myself and make them true….Any where need of positivty i appeared there….R are confused in ur heart and mind…..u are waiting for ur Real and true love…..So Close ur Eyes….take long breathe……………Forget everything ………….feel like you are not in the world………..feel that you flying in the air like free birds………….feel that air is touching you…… peeps in your heart………….And see wat you are thinking….see what are u feeling….which whom face are occuring in front of your eyes??

A forest is shown …..a white horse is coming towards me ….A young man sit on the horse….he is coming towards me…..now i’m going see his face…..then suddenly she opens her eyes….and sees khamoshi was disappeared from there…..she glared around her self but no any one there…actually she was disturbed by someone who is none other then…her friend Pragya.

Pragya: Rajkumari Saanchita…..Satya gadh ke Maharaj ne aap ka ismarannn kiya hai. (Princess saanchita the king of satya gadh was rememberd you)

AUTHOR NOTE: (SO MY BEST BUDDIES YOU WERE BETTER UNDERSTOOD MY STORY’S PLOT SO HERE OUR SAANCHI IS A PRINCESS OF SATYA GADH).

Rajkumari saanchi wd her two friends Ishaka & prgaya reached in the Raj Darbar…Where Maharaja Sunil shekhar Singh Was waiting for her….Pranaam Pitashree said by Saanchi…And touched his feets.

Jeeti rahye….Yuvrani saanchita….Said by King.

Pitashree….App ne humara ismanrann kiya….Awashaye hi kuch Mahetpurnn Kaarye hoga….Henaa pitashree Asked by saanchi

(Dad you rememberd me surely you called me for some impartant work..Isn’t it?)

Yes..Yuvrani Saanchi… Hum chahte hain hain ke app humare padosi Aur mitra rajye ke Yuvraj veer sing se vivah karen….Humare mitra Maharaj Anand singh ne aap ke aur Yuvraj veer sing ke vivah ka prastao rakha hai humare samkash….yadi yeh vivah hojayega toh Satya gadh Aur Vijaygadh Ve donon rajya Mil kar ek Vishal Rajya ban kar Udaygadh Ka Muqabla Kar payenge…

Yes YUVRANI Saanchi …I want that you get married wd our naghbour and friends kindom’s Prince Veersingh Coz King Anand singh send me your and Prince veerSingh’s marraige Proposal….after your wedding….We both Kingdom will united and will be one Empire…Then we will be able to defeat Uday gadh…

Pranyu Pitashree…Hum vivah Nahi karna Chahte….aur Yuvraj veer singh se toh Kada bhi nai.

But Dad I won’t want to get marraige….and wd Prince veer singh…no never…..Said by Saanchita.

Putri…..Kiya Hum Kaaran Jan sakte hain..said King.

Ji pitashree….Hum Aap ko abhi nahi Bata skte…Prantu hum Aap ko chhod kar nahi jaana chahte.

Yes dad….I cannot tell you yet….But i can’t go leave you…Said saanchi

Yuvrani…ek anurodh hai humara ap se….Kiya aap ek bar yuvraj veersingh se mil len toh…

Yuvrani…It’s request…If you meet wd prince veer singh once….King pleads.

Pita shree…ap humen lajit kar rahen hain….Dad you are abashing me please Ok as you want i’m doing like that…now tell me where i have to meet wd him…said Yuvrani.

Aap satya keh rahi hain Yuvrani..he gets Delight to hear this from her.

Ji pitashree…..hum aaj hi vaijay gadh ki or prasthaan karte hain..Yes dad..Ok today we r going towards Vijay gadh…..Replied Yuvrani saanchi.

Utam ati utam….Prantu Yuvrani Maharaj Anad was told me that Yuvraj Veer singh is not in Vijaygadh he is in Lal mehal….kiunke Lal mehal par per Kisi anye rajya ne aakramann Kar liya hai…Toh as a Friend kingdom he goes there to helps her…as you know very well that prince Veer singh is very Adhbudh Yodha…

Koi baat nahi pita shree….Hum ne laal mehal jaane ka nrnaye leliya hai….hum yahan jaake apne naitron se prakhna chahte hain yuvraj veer singh ko hum unn ki veerta apni aankhon se dekhna chahte hain…it’s ok dad…I decided to go Lal mehal..i want to see him to my eyes….i want to see his bravery..through my own eyes…said Yuvrani saanchi.

But beta ….in the way of Laal mehal there is lots of dangerous animals are living in the forest..aur bhi kai prakar ke pashu pakshi bhi hain….No no i won’t grant you go there…Said king wd wrried expressions.

Pita shree…Hum app ki putri hain satya gadh ke maharaj..Sunilshekher ki Putri…Ap ko kiya lagta hai…Tuchh Pashu pakshi humara kuchh bigardh sakte hain….Dad I’m your dughter….A king of satya gadh sunilshekhar’s daughter..r u thinking tht there some little animals are harmfull for me…said Yuvrani saanchi.

Uchit hai putri….Humara aisa koi udaish nahi tha…aap kal hi Laal mehal ki or prathaan kar sakti hain….Right daughter…My intensions is not like tht….you can go ahead Laal mehal by tommrow…but i will send you wd full security….My senapati Ashok will also going wd you..Said king.

Ji pita shree..Dhanyavaad…(Thankyou) ..She gets really happy….hum chalte hain pranaam..pitashree.

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(SO GUYS YOU ARE UNDERSTAND THIER CONVERSATIONS>>>GUYS THIS IS OS>>>OS I WANT RUNNIG IT FAST SO HOPE YOU DON’T MIND AND NOW YUVRANI SAANCHI WD ISHAKA, PRAGYYA AND HA..HA..HA….OFF-COURSE SENAPATI ASHOK THEY ARE GOING TOWARDS LAAL MEHAL>>>LET’S WAT’SHAPPENS IN THEY MID WAY…)
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They are reach at dark forest….where they are stay some time for rest…Where Yuvrani said to Ishaka and Pragaya..that she want to see…water pond and deer here…

Ishaka: Nai Yuvrani ji…If kale kalutey Senapati Ashok ne aap ko yun jaate hue dekh liya toh hum phass jayenge?

YUV Saanchi: How he gets to know about me…who will tells him…you?..she fingers points to pragya..You? Pragya nods negatively…Me? hum nahi batayenge aap nahi batayengi toh unhen kon batayega aur wese bhi ve abhi vishraam (rest) kar rahen hain…us ke prishchaat(After that) bhojan(Food) karenge…samey (time) toh lag hi jayenga tab tak hum wapis bhi aajayenge…she runs from there.

Ishaka and pragya…worried about her.

Ishaka: Pragya hope she will returns soon..

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Saanchita Reached besids pond..she was extremely happy to see pond…she leaned for drink water from pond through palms…then suddenly she heard voice of tiger…she scared….stood up..then got big shock..a hungry tiger is coming to her….she tried to ran from there..but she wasn’t able to move..tiger gradually coming to her….she shouted Ahhhhhhhhhh….then suddenly some one pulled her up and rides on the horse…she sees a man on the white horse….she was in his arms..her eyes were time by time closed and opened…she sees his eyes a beautiful…Magical…eyes were shown coz a man’s whole face coverd throgh piece of white cloth…then she fainted…they were reached so far from that place and from tiger….A man pulled her down..and sat her wd the support of tree…For sometime he lost in her beauty…he took back her hairs from her cheeks…he moved for go then saanchita holded his hand in unconciousness …he moved and saw her…smile little but was appread on his face….just then he heard someone were calling her wd the name of Yuvrani saanchita…the man got shocked…as well as somewhere happy to see her…but on the same his eyes were red in anger…he leaved own hand from her…went from the place.

All were reached to Saanchi….they thrown water on her face…she got concious..and asked where is he??

Ishaka: Yuvrani R you ok?? Y were you screamed? We all were got worried about you…Let’s go Yuvrani wd us.

Saanchi goes wd then but her mind was just in his thoughts.
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They reached Laal Mehal..Where Yuvraj Veer singh welcomed her…

Yuvraj Veer singh: Pranaam Rajkumari Ji Jaisa aap ke vishay(about) main suna tha app Bilkul vaisin hi hain.

Saanchi: suna To hum ne bhi adhik(enough) hain ap ke vishay Ab Dekhna chahty hain ke Veh satya hai yaa…she entered in the Laal mehal.

Garv singh (friend of veer singh) to Veer singh…lagta hai it’s not going easy to impress her…But bro I’m impressed wd her..Veer singh gave deadly glare to him…he remained Quite.

Veersingh: POV;Bachpan se chahte hain hum aap ko aap ko paane kelye kiya kuchh nahi kiya aur kiya nahi karwaya..

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Luxrious Room was shown Yuvrani saanchi was lying on the bed..her eyes were closed she seeing blashbacks of the same eyes…white horse…Two kids were playing in the mehal..they were running behind eachother…a blo*dy sword in the boy’s hand… she opened eyes and waked up….and gasping

Pragya: Rajkumari ji wat happen to you..R u saw bad dream?

Saanchi: prgaya I saw the same dream again.

Ishaka: raj kumari ji aap inn sab main k vishay main adhik mat sochiye…acha aisa karte hain hum aap ko khuley wata warnn(Environment) main le jaate hain…hosakta hai aap ko aanand mille.

Saanchi: uchit hai (That’s better).

Then they trio went out side the Laal mehal…where they saw so many beautiful parks…Rivers vallies hills…but in the mid wat ishaka and pragya saprated from saanchi…saanchi reached at peak of the high hill…She turnd back then her foot sliped she is about fall from the cliff she appox went slipt..a hand is holded her hand…and pulled her back she got up then hugged him..she closed eyes…Rajsi Romantic music played in background….

After sometimes they broke thier hug….Saanchi sees his face he is very charming Handsome Hunk..was stood in front of her…He weard White Royal attire but his sirt was white colored…

Handsome Hunk: tum apni suraksha(safty) nahi kar sakti? Har daffa hum nahi aayenge tumari raksha karne.

Saanchi : toh hum ne kab aap ka aawaahn(called) kiya tha?

Then Ishaka and pragya reached there….Raj kumari ji ap surkshit toh hain na? Humen aap ki boht chinta(tension) horahi thi aap kahan thi?…Aur vay manushaye(Man) kon hain? inhen pehle toh kabhi nahi dekha

Saanchi: Ishaka pragya Inohon ne humari jaan humari jevan(life) ki raksha ki hai..apitu (If) yeh hani hoty toh aap hum aap ke samksh(Infront) khade nahi hote..hum aap ko dhanvaad (thanked) karna chahte hain…She moved to him and shocked he was disappeared from there.

Arrey yeh Mohdiye (Mr.) kahan gupt hogye? Asked by saanchi

Ishaka: Chalye rajkumari ji mehal laut chalen.sab humari pritksha(waits) kar rahen honge?

They reached Mehel where they ate dinnar wd Yuvraj Veer singh..

(SORRY GUYS I REMINDING U THAT THIS IS OS SO I WON’T SHOW U FULL CONVERSATIONS OF THEM BUT I’M TRYING TO SHOW YOU GLIMPE OF SOME SCENE>>>>>HOPE U UNDERSTAND…OK LET SEE WAT HAPPEN NEXT)

Next day veer singh came to Yuvrani Saanchi and told her that meet wd my new Friend…..Kabir …He told her full story that how they were met.

VeerSingh: Hum Shikar karne gaye the ……I was went for hunting …aur hum par jangly aadivasiun (aboriginals) ne dawa bol liya hum kaafi lare unn se parntu ve hum se bhi adhik shaktishaali the…..where some Aboriginals attacked on me ….I was fought them enough…btw they are much powerfull than me….they thrown Poison arrow on my neck..I was fell on earth…they are came close to me…they brought me themselves..on that time Someone came on the white horse and rescued me from them…btw the poison was effected on my body then he took me in cave…did remedies me from some harbal things…..when I came in concious then i saw him ….he is none other than….Kabir…and I took him here he is my guest…

Yuvrani saanchita seeing him and gets happy…..

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A dark cave is Shown

A man is doing practice wd his sword…………….His eyes are red in anger……………..his body is clothless…he is sweating……..he is telling to himself…………”No..No….Hum uss ki sundarta se aakarshitt nahi hosakte….Hum yahan uss ko Mirtun pradhhan karne aayen hain….Nirdaye Mirtun…No..No…I can’t attracted wd her beauty i come here to kill her….Dishearted death..

TO BE CONTINUED……………….

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So Guys I know wat is Running in your minds……you are remembering something Isn’t it?? plz tell me….wat are you Remembering???And Also Tell me how was that???
IN THE NEXT PART KHAMOSHI ANOTHER SURPRISE IS WAITING FOR YOU SO BE READY.
PIC CREDIT GOES TO ME…..Do YOU LIKE THAT ALSO TELL ME….THROUGH COMMENTS.
I’M EAGERLY WAITING FOR YOUR COMMENTS…….
REGARDS
ANOSHA (ANEE)

44 Comments
  1. Neha7873

    I tolaly loved the concept .. mein to fida ho gayi .. it’s awesome .. Kanchi Royal avatar !!!

    1. Anee

      Thank you so much Neha…Dear….So happy that liked it….

  2. Trisha139

    Hey that was awesome a totally different concept !! Just too excited for next part post soon dear
    Love uh loads

    1. Anee

      Thank you so much Dear….Really happy that you liked..it….And I’ll try to post soon..luv you swettie.

  3. Yaashi23

    Super se uper wala os. Sabse alag concept.. jaldi se next part post karo.. wait nahi hota ab

    1. Anee

      Aww Yaashi dear thanku So much….For liking it…..And Yaa swettie I’ll try to post soon.

  4. OMG Anosha kaha se lati ho itne jhakkas idea….hehe…loved it so much…..different storyline & concept….amazing….can’t have words to describe sweetie…..I always pray for Abhilasha di , Anu & Inara……guys, plzz get well soon….humari kachi family adhuri lagti hai tumhare bina….annie, she say to me that she back with her os …miss her too….Mitu/ Khamoshi really deserve a award & u too for beautiful stories…..luv u sweetie….excited for next part.

    1. Abhilasha

      Niyu dear I m fine now…..thanks for ur wishes …so sweet of u that u care for me so much…luv uh!!

      1. luv u too didu.

    2. Anee

      Awwww thankyou so much Niyu My sweet lil sis…..your words really makes me happy….Feeling glad that you are liking this concept and story line….Luv uh loads lil sis…..Ohh bhul gai In frienship no sorry no thankyou….M i right?

      1. Ya, u are right sweetie….no thanks in friendhip…..never say again thamks warna main naraaz ho jaungi.

  5. Abhilasa tum jal se jal thik ho jao we are all need you dost……..tumara bina hum or kanchi ka story adhara hae…….get up soon yaar☺☺☺☺

    1. Abhilasha

      Anu dear I m fine now….luv uh and really happy that u care for me this much!!

  6. Anonymousaa

    The title is best dear.I remembered prem ya paheli chandrakanta though I didn’t watch it.
    Oh gosh I loved the names very much.So royal type yaar.Veer Singh, Yuvraani Sanchita, Ishaka like Vishakha.
    I found Garv’s one of the dialogue quite flirty type like today’s boys would be.
    So is Kabir prince of the rival kingdom???
    What a pure type hindi u have written.I was feeling awesome reading the words.
    Plz post next shot asap.

    1. Anee

      Hahah….glad that you liked my hindi…Hey Anony thanku so much dear……glad that you liked it…Yaa the title carried out from there…coz i loved this title…Pehali yaa paheli …but here only PREM YAA PAHELI…well Kabir has very special role here…in the next shot it will revealed….And i’ll try to post soon…..Luv you loads dear.

  7. RuCh23

    Woah 😍😍😍 royal kanchi 😍😍😍awesome!!! Amazing dear 😀😀😀

    1. Anee

      Thank you so much dear….Ruwani glad that you liked it…

  8. Niyaaa

    Hey anee as ur os title mujhe chandrakanta seriel ki yaad aayi life ok per aata tha btw anee amazingly u portray the story i loved it nd i really enjoy the royal lovv story… Nd hope so veer negative na ho seriel m mujhe naam yaad nahi h uska jisse pehle chandrakanta ki shadi hone wali thi.. Well done sweety post nxt asap lovvv u

    1. Anee

      Hey thank u so much niyaa dear….yes in chandrakanta his name was shivdut jis’se chandrakanta ki shaadi hone wali thi…BTW dear don’t worry..about veer….luv you loads swettie.

  9. Wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more.waiting for next part. Love you loads

    1. Anee

      Thank you so much ashu dear….glad that you liked it….love u to swettie.

  10. Khamoshi

    Anosha dear…how to tell you THANK YOU to u…this is such a small word in front of your love dear..your surprise really touched my heart dear….i am so happy that u wrote this OS for me…inspite of that u don’t know Typical Hindi..i know u know Urdu but seriously dear u nailed it in HINDI too.. i am so blessed to have u all and especially you..who gave me the best gift of my life today.. love u so much and lots of hugs and kisses.
    Now coming to the episode.. dear i just fell in love with it..such a unique concept..i loved the way u brought twist in the story.
    Hmm i think i am remembering VEER movie of Salman Khan..hope so i am not wrong.
    And dear i am a big fan of Salman..so double thank u for the surprise.. u didn’t made my day but u made my life dear…u made me feel so special that i am speechless (fir bhi itni bakbak ki 😉😂).
    THANK U THANK U THANK U (Infinite times)

    1. Khamoshi

      And dear forgot to mention.. Thanks for the Achievement award… but my real and big achievement is not my writing progress…but YOU ALL.. i got a really big family in form of u all..i am so blessed to have u all as my friends & family. 😙😙😙😙 lots of kisses to u and a big teddy hug to u

    2. Anee

      Hey mitu glad that you liked it…
      U don’t know BTW you too gave me my life’s best gift…which is priceless…. So…infact…I have no words to thanks you…BTW ant main itna hi kehna chahungi…..luv you loads dear….tight teddy hug to you.

  11. Riyarocks

    haan Mitu dear, I also thought abt movie Veer for once……..&&& Mitu as angel…wow…main toh abhi se imagine karnelagi hoon hamare Mitu ko uss jagah & Anee dear……kya kahoon tumhe….mere har lafz kam padjayenge tumhare iss plot ke tareef main…too good dear……ek dum khidkitod, darwazatod…etc.etc……matlab, rajasthani track, uske baad ye rajsi thaat baath……..wow……..hats off to u sweetieeeeeee…………..

    1. Anee

      Hey Ri thank u so much dear……for liked it……hahaha…tumen abhi bhi Rajasthani track yaad hai.,..really happy to know that…. Luv uh ri…so much.

      1. Riyarocks

        of course dear…….main apne saare doston ke track ko kaise bhool sakti hoon……& after all, without any doubt, I can say, tumne Rajasthani track ke liye bohut mehnat ki hogi, like this rajsi track…..how can I forget or let go of my frnd’s hard work……luv u sweetieeeeee & gud nt dear…….

  12. Zhakaas. I just loved it 😍 😍 Nd ya I m also missing abhi.

    1. Abhilasha

      I m back priyanshi dear!!

    2. Anee

      Thanks a lot….priyanshi…..luv u swettie.

  13. Sajnana900

    Wooowwww aneee dear
    Not a single mistake in hindi jzt pure hindi i too know hindi wo b pure but not like u
    I luv historic serials so i used to watch chandra nandani
    Jodha Akbar
    SIYA K RAM
    amd all of this language that i can learn hindi
    But u surprised me
    Like that this is ur own language that u wrote as freely no mistake in it
    Wooowww spr spr hit
    I jzt luv it
    Excited to read further

    1. Anee

      Hehehe….sanju dear intni prasanta na karo humari hum…sharma rahain gain….look at me…he he…jzt kidding dear….tysm glad that you liked it……luv you dear.

      1. Sajnana900

        Pleasure is all mine dear…..

        AAP PRASANATA K PATRA HAIN
        AAP NE UTAM ATI UTAM KAAM KIA HAI
        PERANTU AFSOS HUM RAJKUMARI MITU KI PRASANTA DEKHNE KE LIYE WAHAN UPASTHIT NHN THHEY 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
        how was my hindi

      2. Anee

        Fab….mindblowing….and many more…..Luv uh…

  14. Dhruti

    superb os with pure hindi……………
    when i read your os i remember life ok show “chandrakanta”………….it was superb show but star bharat k baad un logo ne us show ko telecast hi nahi kiya……just live it back to your os ……………..wow what a story with different idea i love your idea…………..please update soon……..

    1. Anee

      Hey dhruti dear thank you so much glad that you liked it….I’ll try to post soon as possible.., luv you loads dear.

  15. Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode lovely update soon can’t wait

    1. Anee

      Tysm divya dear..,glad that u liked it….I’ll try to post soon as possible…. Luv u loads dear.

  16. Amazing dear…. Update soon

    1. Anee

      Hey amnaa tysm dear….yaa I’ll trying to post soon as possible… Luv you my sis.

  17. Abhilasha

    Anee dear first of all really I m filled with tears seeing ur love for me……and now coming to os ….it was mind blowimg…..fantastic…..fabulus……i m speechless ………really i m gr8 fan of royal fantasies …….loved it to value of 1/0 …infinity ki bi infinity……i think i should visit pakistan and give u a tight hug. Love uh!!

  18. Anee

    So kab aarahi ho Pakistan….in fact… I wants to meet wd you…..and really happy to see that you are fine and back…welcome…. My…luv.. My…inspiration…, I wants to hug you…..and thank you so much for like this….. Luv you loads swettie… And jab Pakistan visit ho ek call kardena pick krne aajaungi Jinnah airport at Karachi…..hmm?

  19. Jessicca

    You nailed it girl… Iggy was amazing… Superb… Outstanding… Brilliant .. Truly fabulous… Loved it

    1. Anee

      tyso much jess….

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