Prem Charitra (Episode 4)

Thank you my dear friends for ur support…. Today Sunday… So extra large episode for u… Don’t forget to comment what u feel… I value your comments…

The episode starts with shocked face of Radha and Krishna…. When a heared a familiar threatening voice… Their smile disappeared….
It’s none other than their old house maid mannorama…

Manoramma – it’s seems both husband and wife are enjoying their life a lot….

Krishna – why u have came here?

Radha – can’t u leave us to live peacefully….

Manoramma – I’m living life like a hell… How can I leave u culprits… Or shall I say kidnappers

Radha – how much u want we Will give u but don’t ever show ur face again….

Manoramma – I just need one crore…

Both Radha and Krishna get shocked ..

Krishna – till now we giving u 10 lakhs monthly …. Y u need that much money now … We won’t give…

Manoramma – I Just wanna to buy one flat in my son’s name and soon going to get him married .. I know u will give for sure…. Because I’m the only person who knows about your 23 years old secret …about you lovely kidnapped daughter Brinda… If u don’t fulfill my wishes I can ask ur daughter Brinda…? I know she is so sweet and can do anything for this mano aunty….

Radha – please don’t do like that if she knows… Saying so she started crying and sat on the sofa helpless…

Krishna – we won’t live if she walk out of our life…. She is our blessings… She is our happiness… She is our priceless property… Plz don’t do like that… Within a week I’ll give…. It’s time… She will come leave from here…. Even I’ll Pay u 2 crores but this should be ur last time here…. We don’t want to see ur face again in our life…

Manoramma – okay… That’s a fair deal… I’ll go now and after one week I’ll become a crorepathy….

Brinda and Prem are on the way…

Brinda – why u are laughing while driving…

Prem – for the first time I feel someone continuously staring at another frequently….

Brinda – I know what u are talking…

Prem – Then say me… From childhood… U are sharing everything with me…. And I too sharing everything with you… What happened now? Wanna to hide something from me….

Brinda – hey Prem.. What you are talking….

Prem – I’m talking what I saw… A change… Something that turned ur voice so soft than before….. And even ur every actions speaks…

Brinda – I don’t know what happening to me… I feel some estrange relationship exits between me and….

Prem – Arjun… Even I like him very much… We become friends in one day… When u gone out with Natasha…. We talk so much….

Flash back *

In department,

Niranjan – Natasha u accompanie Brinda and go to Ratsheswar Coloney… And collect information regarding the building traces of ancient period there… We have one month to submit the information before that Dhusandhan….

Brinda – I Will return in evening.. Then pick me to home Prem…. Bye….

Prem – okay…

Arjun arrives there…. Seeing Brinda said – I got a information about some person from our place giving information to Dhusandhan…. So be careful …

Natasha smirks…. Both leaves….

Arjun – Prem I have a doubt on Natasha…. I just heared that last time Dusandhan company got best private research and archeology award by presenting our gathered information..

Prem – yes. .. The watchmen who worked here was dushandhan’s person… But why are u doubting Natasha… She is working here for more than 5 years… She doesn’t behave well with others except Brinda and Me…

Arjun – but how can a watchmen knows this much information…
What file and Also it kept in locker which is assessable only by Brinda and Natasha…

Prem – why didn’t u doubt Brinda… She is working here from last year… ( said with unexpressed smile ?)

Arjun – after seeing her eyes I don’t… I mean she is not looking like that… And why do u ask… Like that about your girlfriend…. ( changed the topic… Ha Ha Ha ??)

Prem thinking oh he Thought wrongly that,… Brinda is my girlfriend…

I have to clear this misunderstanding….
Prem – she is not my girlfriend… Much more than that…

Arjun felt bad.. Little anger too. .

Prem – she is my next Mom and my first frnd and my very best Frnd in my life…. Every men need a girl as his frnd to share their feelings… Worries… Happiness…. Sorrows and so does the girl needs a boy as her friend….

When I was studying standard one… She born… She is my neighbour… Her mom and dad didn’t get any children till 12 years of marriage… So they consider me as their own child and helped to support my family… Krishna Pappa shared his business with my father… Radha Mamma is my father’s own sister… Then both worked hard to develope the business .. I used to eat and sleep there. They cared me more than my own mom and dad….After that with god blessings Brinda was born as a Angel… Who make them proud… Away from their family taunts… When one day I came from school to Brinda’s home… She was crying… Mom was taking care of pappa who is not well.. So I gone near her… Such a cute lovely face…. Really an angel… I don’t know what to do… I just take my fingers near her… She caught my fingers and started laughing ?…. I have a new feeling… When she started talking…. the word she spoke…. Is Pr… mmm … My name… The first time I like someone who called my name wrongly… . Which makes me to accompany her till my last breath.. The first step she made in her life… By holding my fingers…. I promised myself that I should never let anything to happen her at any cost… … After that I had a one sweet Sister named Sagunthala…. Dad and Mom along with sister gone to London for higher studies but I don’t want to leave Brinda alone…

Dad and Mom want me to Marry Brinda…. U know what sometimes In my dream…I see… Me and Brinda getting married…. But I couldn’t feel like her though her face resembles same… My inner feelings says it’s someone whom I love… Who looks like my Brinda….

He recalls Natasha saying…

Flashback –

Natasha – I got this statue which seems to be a girl… But face is not clear…

Brinda – Dhusandhan said it’s of no use to do with this statue…

Flashback ends…

Arjun cleaned all over… But sees something scribbled at the foot base… But didn’t recognize anything… I have to ask prem… He might know…

Brinda – I forgot to give this file to Prem I have to give this… Both Brinda and Prem coming on each side… Some sweet sitara musics ? plays…. ( note this musical instruments carefully…. It relates to story)

While stepping inside Brinda slips and Arjun hold her little finger… Yes just that finger… ( I’ll tell u about this little finger matter latter… Just say guys what u know About a Men holding a women’s little finger / small finger / last finger)

She keep the other hand on door knob… All the papers in the file flew in Air… They saw into each others eyes… Same Fľäšhèš reflects through their eyes… This time it was Natasha to break their eye bond…

Natasha – what have you done Brinda… These and all very important papers… Even Sir didn’t hand over this to me but to you… How u be so careless…

Both came to reality…

Brinda – sorry… I just slipped… Don’t worry I’ll collect…

Both three started collecting the papers… Arjun sees Natasha taking some papers with her and shoots that in his mobile without her knowledge…

And signals to Brinda… She too sees but didn’t show it to Natasha…

Natasha – I’m getting a call… So excuse me guys… Saying so she left….

Arjun – I said yesterday itself that someone here is helping Dhusandhan…

Brinda – yes…how can she goes to such cheap level to defame someone …Thank you very much… Atleast now I understood her…

Arjun – u are welcome… I have to meet Prem…

Brinda – even I have to meet Prem …

Prem – guys… I’m here… Say what u want to say… Ladies first…

Arjun smiles… Seeing Brinda… And ask her to ahead…

Brinda – I came to give u these files and said everything…

Prem – even Arjun said about this… We have to be very careful… We should not let her know this…

Okay said chorusly by Brinda and Arjun…

Brinda… As usual said Creech give me chocolate… It was her childhood habit…

Brinda … Said sorry it’s habitual….

Arjun – don’t feel sorry I’ll give u chocolate… U both have to come to my house tomorrow evening at 7..
Only Niranjan uncle and you are the persons I know… So u both should come definitely…

Prem- wow! instead of chocolate we are getting treat Brinda … We will come definitely don’t worry…

Brinda smiles… And leaves…

Arjun was seeing her going…

Prem – Arjun…. Arjun….. Arrrrjunn… He turned… What happened… Why u came… U can call me instead ..

Arjun – sorry… Actually while cleaning the statue I saw some marks on her foot… I didn’t get anything so I called you…

Prem – I’ll check… Niranjan sir has called you… U go I’ll check…

In the store room – He feels something… Don’t know how to express the unique Feel …
Seeing the statue… He starts

Arjun – you are making me to feel something special… I don’t know y… Saying so he touched her hand… The dust which covered the hand fell down … And he sits down to look the feet and says to himself.

It is a mole I think… Maybe the man who made this might have loved her a lot.. even he gave importance to a mole which cannot be easily identified without turning the statute upside down… He again make it back to the same position… A ring falls from the middle finger of that statue…

Prem gets some Flashes .

Fľäšhèš :

1. A girl coming the back of the statute and makes him afraid…

2. Someone removing the prick in her right leg and sees the mole..

3. The same girl seems to fall in the pool of blood..

And shouts… Udhay… aaa… And a drop of tear fell of her eyes…

Episode ends with Prem came back to senses when he hear a knock on the door…

Precap –

Niranjan saying its Ratheshwar Coloney…
In News… Worlds most aged lady lives in Ratheshwar Coloney… Brinda said she knows her…

Hope u enjoyed the episode… I just need some suggestions… For whom to put as the old lady… The one whose powerful words make the world shake…

Waiting for ur comments … Dear silent readers please break silence… And help ur Frnd to choose the character …. And thank you all guys… For ur support … ??? and New peoples are also welcome….

Credit to: Mìťhřåbŕîñđâ

11 comments

  1. Mithrabrinda

    Sorry guys while doing copy paste..
    I forgot to insert one part… I’ll update it as soon as possible

    • Mithrabrinda

      Thank you sanju.??…. I don’t know about watt pad…someone Plz explain… Or Sanju if see this reply please explain it dear…

      • Sanju

        Wattpad is an app
        And world over people like u post stories like this and get a lot of fans and are able to improve their writing and I have seen stories like us too in watt pad mythological characters in today’s world
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        Try it out sis
        God bless u
        If u still want help don’t hesitate to ask if not here I will ask ww di to join u in fan site of skr which she created so I can help u better only if this is not enough
        But I am quite serious ur story will get a lot of fans there

  2. Sanju

    Not even app u can just use site also I will guide u through it if u want to post or read stories will share links
    Don’t hesitate to ask
    Except tu may take ur patience away by the time it posts comment

    • Mithrabrinda

      Thank you very much… I like to have your gudieness… I’ll do it definitely.

      Just guide me.. ?

  3. Sanju

    I have written lot of analysis on skr and ff too but ur genre is new am loving it but this kind of stories is not my cup of tea I guess
    And u know what in indiaforums there is series of stories ram in kaliyug you will like it and it broaden ur spectrum if u want I will share links
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    But am sorry I won’t be visiting this page pls ask in tonight update page
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