Prem Charitra (Episode 4) ( left part included)

So sorry guys… Forgot to insert a para…

The episode starts with shocked face of Radha and Krishna…. When a heared a familiar threatening voice… Their smile disappeared….
It’s none other than their old house maid mannorama…

Manoramma – it’s seems both husband and wife are enjoying their life a lot….

Krishna – why u have came here?

Radha – can’t u leave us to live peacefully….

Manoramma – I’m living life like a hell… How can I leave u culprits… Or shall I say kidnappers

Radha – how much u want we Will give u but don’t ever show ur face again….

Manoramma – I just need one crore…

Both Radha and Krishna get shocked ..

Krishna – till now we giving u 10 lakhs monthly …. Y u need that much money now … We won’t give…

Manoramma – I Just wanna to buy one flat in my son’s name and soon going to get him married .. I know u will give for sure…. Because I’m the only person who knows about your 23 years old secret …about you lovely kidnapped daughter Brinda… If u don’t fulfill my wishes I can ask ur daughter Brinda…? I know she is so sweet and can do anything for this mano aunty….

Radha – please don’t do like that if she knows… Saying so she started crying and sat on the sofa helpless…

Krishna – we won’t live if she walk out of our life…. She is our blessings… She is our happiness… She is our priceless property… Plz don’t do like that… Within a week I’ll give…. It’s time… She will come leave from here…. Even I’ll Pay u 2 crores but this should be ur last time here…. We don’t want to see ur face again in our life…

Manoramma – okay… That’s a fair deal… I’ll go now and after one week I’ll become a crorepathy….

Brinda and Prem are on the way…

Brinda – why u are laughing while driving…

Prem – for the first time I feel someone continuously staring at another frequently….

Brinda – I know what u are talking…

Prem – Then say me… From childhood… U are sharing everything with me…. And I too sharing everything with you… What happened now? Wanna to hide something from me….

Brinda – hey Prem.. What you are talking….

Prem – I’m talking what I saw… A change… Something that turned ur voice so soft than before….. And even ur every actions speaks…

Brinda – I don’t know what happening to me… I feel some estrange relationship exits between me and….

Prem – Arjun… Even I like him very much… We become friends in one day… When u gone out with Natasha…. We talk so much….

Flash back *

In department,

Niranjan – Natasha u accompany Brinda and go to Ratsheswar Coloney… And collect information regarding the building traces of ancient period there… We have one month to submit the information before that Dhusandhan….

Brinda – I Will return in evening.. Then pick me to home Prem…. Bye….

Prem – okay…

Arjun arrives there…. Seeing Brinda said – I got a information about some person from our place giving information to Dhusandhan…. So be careful …

Natasha smirks…. Both leaves….

Arjun – Prem I have a doubt on Natasha…. I just heared that last time Dusandhan company got best private research and archeology award by presenting our gathered information..

Prem – yes. .. The watchmen who worked here was dushandhan’s person… But why are u doubting Natasha… She is working here for more than 5 years… She doesn’t behave well with others except Brinda and Me…

Arjun – but how can a watchmen knows this much information…
What file and Also it kept in locker which is assessable only by Brinda and Natasha…

Prem – why didn’t u doubt Brinda… She is working here from last year… ( said with unexpressed smile ?)

Arjun – after seeing her eyes I don’t… I mean she is not looking like that… And why do u ask… Like that about your girlfriend…. ( changed the topic… Ha Ha Ha ??)

Prem thinking oh he Thought wrongly that,… Brinda is my girlfriend…

I have to clear this misunderstanding….
Prem – she is not my girlfriend… Much more than that…

Arjun felt bad.. Little anger too. .

Prem – she is my next Mom and my first frnd and my very best Frnd in my life…. Every men need a girl as his frnd to share their feelings… Worries… Happiness…. Sorrows and so does the girl needs a boy as her friend….
When I was studying standard one… She born… She is my neighbour… Her mom and dad didn’t get any children till 12 years of marriage… So they consider me as their own child and helped to support my family… Krishna Pappa shared his business with my father… Radha Mamma is my father’s own sister… Then both worked hard to develope the business .. I used to eat and sleep there. They cared me more than my own mom and dad….After that with god blessings Brinda was born as a Angel… Who make them proud… Away from their family taunts… When one day I came from school to Brinda’s home… She was crying… Mom was taking care of pappa who is not well.. So I gone near her… Such a cute lovely face…. Really an angel… I don’t know what to do… I just take my fingers near her… She caught my fingers and started laughing ?…. I have a new feeling… When she started talking…. the word she spoke…. Is Pr… mmm … My name… The first time I like someone who called my name wrongly… . Which makes me to accompany her till my last breath.. The first step she made in her life… By holding my fingers…. I promised myself that I should never let anything to happen her at any cost… … After that I had a one sweet Sister named Sagunthala…. Dad and Mom along with sister gone to London for higher studies but I don’t want to leave Brinda alone… So I stayed with her and ma .. Pa..

Dad and Mom want me to Marry Brinda…. U know what sometimes In my dream…I see… Me and Brinda getting married…. But I couldn’t feel like her though her face resembles same… My inner feelings says it’s someone whom I love… Who looks like my Brinda….

Arjun looks confused and Prem realised that and continued…

Prem – she is my best friend and always be..

Arjun now looks relived….

Prem.- Hmmm… I said almost everything about u… It’s ur turn…

Arjun – my Dad Ajay who done entrepreneur course in India… With help of his school best Frnd Niranjan joined a top company Blue sky… Owned by my grandpa in UK. My grandpa is the one and only business King that time in UK. he married his Childhood friend that’s my cute granny in India… Both settled in UK then… And they had a sweet daughter Nirosha… And two yonger siblings… One Uncle died in an Accident and other is Niranjan uncle … Mom is chief executive in our company … Father work sincerely and dedicated towards work and also his love… My grandpa and granny accepted thier relationship… At that time Both my Father and mother’s love ended in marriage… And their loves gift was me and I have one naughty brother Rathesh… Though he is my maternal uncles son… After the death of my uncle and aunt in a flight crash.. Ma took care of him… And raised as her own son… Parents treat me and my brother equally.. No partiality is shown in their love… Which makes our brothers relationship much stronger… He done his Banking Management course in India… Now he is with Mom and Dad… And after my research analysist training Niranjan uncle called me here… Then I’m here. . That’s it…

Prem – then you both came back to department…. End of the story…

Brinda – this much u have talked ah..?
In Brinda’s home..

Manoramma – okay okay…. I’m leaving… Even I don’t wish to see ur faces again .. Saying so she left… Brinda is getting down from car… And talking to prem to come quickly… In the meantime…. Manoramma coming out of the house and leaving… While Brinda turned… She just saw some lady’s shade … For a second… She turned and saw a lady going………

Brinda – ma who’s that lady…

Both Radha and Krishna get shocked. …

Brinda – I didn’t see her face… While crossing the I saw her..

Krishna – May be some outsider…

Brinda – okay pa… I just go and Fresh up… Prem is talking to sagu… He asked to serve breakfast…. He will come….

Saying so she left to freshen up…

Brinda to herself – I saw that lady leaving from my house… Then why ma and pa said like that… I have to figure it out…

Brinda came to dinning hall and pick up an apple and said… Pa I’m not feeling hungry… Myself and Natasha have food in a restaurant near Ratheshwar Coloney .. I just have apple if I feel hungry later… Okay good night… Pa and ma… I’m very tired today… I just go and sleep… Bye… Dears … Saying so she placed a cute kisses on their cheeks… And left do sleep..

Both looked tense… Seeing each other… And shared their fear of losing their daughter… through eyes…

Prem says good night Rathesh and enters… Both Radhakrishna came to senses…

Prem… Ma I’m hungry …

Radha – come dear … Brinda gone to sleep… She said she didn’t feel hungry and feels tired…

Prem – she didn’t ate anything…

Krishna – she ate food in resturant… With Natasha she said… She didn’t say this to u ah… Unbelievable

Prem thinks – something is wrong..
No pa… We were talking someother thing while coming… So we didn’t talk else…

Every One sits to eat… After dinner they go for sleep…

Radha – after settling her… We will be happy forever…

Krishna – truth will come out someday… We should prepare for it….

Both thinking about this and slept… All this was watching by Prem… Who is standing with a glass of milk and small knife…

Prem then entered into Brinda’s room. . She acted like sleeping…

Prem – it’s me… She opened her eyes and sits on the bed … Prem gives her a glass of milk… And Show her knife… Give me the apple ? … Both said in chorus I want to say you something….

Brinda – first I’ll say… I saw a lady going out from our house… But Mom and Dad lied to me…

Prem listening her while cutting apple…

Prem – I heared something while crossing Mom and Dad’s room… He said everything… Saying so he feeding her apple slices…

Brinda – something is wrong… We have to find out… Who’s is that lady… What pa and ma hiding from me…

Prem – why they have to settle money… Everything will be found if we found that lady… Don’t worry we will find drink the Milk.. He makes her drink milk… And wipes her mouth the few drops left over on her upper lips… Then he threw the apple seeds and left over in dustbin… Sees her sleeping… He silently kissed her forehead and cover her with blanket and without any noise… Took the glass and knife and clossed the room noiselessly…

He went to kitchen and while washing the glass… He thinks he have to find out who’s that lady…

Next day morning… As usual… They four had breakfast and after that Brinda and Prem bid bye to pa and ma…

Krishna – don’t worry everything will be fine .. I’m not going to office today. .. I’m going to meet our bank manager and come .. Saying so he too left after giving a hug to Radha ..

In Niranjans Office ..

Prem seems disgusing something to Niranjan in his cabin…
All other person gone for lunch break…

Arjun Is in store room… Wearing cover over face and having sponge cloth to clean the soil and dust part from one statue which was taken from Ratheshwar Coloney… …

He recalls Natasha saying…

Flashback –

Natasha – I got this statue which seems to be a girl… But face is not clear…

Brinda – Dhusandhan said it’s of no use to do with this statue…

Flashback ends…

Arjun cleaned all over… But sees something scribbled at the foot base… But didn’t recognize anything… I have to ask prem… He might know…

Brinda – I forgot to give this file to Prem I have to give this… Both Brinda and Prem coming on each side… Some sweet sitara musics ? plays…. ( note this musical instruments carefully…. It relates to story)

While stepping inside Brinda slips and Arjun hold her little finger… Yes just that finger… ( I’ll tell u about this little finger matter latter… Just say guys what u know About a Men holding a women’s little finger / small finger / last finger)

She keep the other hand on door knob… All the papers in the file flew in Air… They saw into each others eyes… Same Fľäšhèš reflects through their eyes… This time it was Natasha to break their eye bond…

Natasha – what have you done Brinda… These and all very important papers… Even Sir didn’t hand over this to me but to you… How u be so careless…

Both came to reality…

Brinda – sorry… I just slipped… Don’t worry I’ll collect…

Both three started collecting the papers… Arjun sees Natasha taking some papers with her and shoots that in his mobile without her knowledge…

And signals to Brinda… She too sees but didn’t show it to Natasha…

Natasha – I’m getting a call… So excuse me guys… Saying so she left….

Arjun – I said yesterday itself that someone here is helping Dhusandhan…

Brinda – yes…how can she goes to such cheap level to defame someone …Thank you very much… Atleast now I understood her…

Arjun – u are welcome… I have to meet Prem…

Brinda – even I have to meet Prem …

Prem – guys… I’m here… Say what u want to say… Ladies first…

Arjun smiles… Seeing Brinda… And ask her to ahead…

Brinda – I came to give u these files and said everything…

Prem – even Arjun said about this… We have to be very careful… We should not let her know this…

Okay said chorusly by Brinda and Arjun…

Brinda… As usual said Creech give me chocolate… It was her childhood habit…

Brinda … Said sorry it’s habitual….

Arjun – don’t feel sorry I’ll give u chocolate… U both have to come to my house tomorrow evening at 7..
Only Niranjan uncle and you are the persons I know… So u both should come definitely…

Prem- wow! instead of chocolate we are getting treat Brinda … We will come definitely don’t worry…

Brinda smiles… And leaves…

Arjun was seeing her going…

Prem – Arjun…. Arjun….. Arrrrjunn… He turned… What happened… Why u came… U can call me instead ..

Arjun – sorry… Actually while cleaning the statue I saw some marks on her foot… I didn’t get anything so I called you…

Prem – I’ll check… Niranjan sir has called you… U go I’ll check…

In the store room – He feels something… Don’t know how to express the unique Feel …
Seeing the statue… He starts

Arjun – you are making me to feel something special… I don’t know y… Saying so he touched her hand… The dust which covered the hand fell down … And he sits down to look the feet and says to himself.

It is a mole I think… Maybe the man who made this might have loved her a lot.. even he gave importance to a mole which cannot be easily identified without turning the statute upside down… He again make it back to the same position… A ring falls from the middle finger of that statue…

Prem gets some Flashes .

Fľäšhèš :

1. A girl coming the back of the statute and makes him afraid…

2. Someone removing the prick in her right leg and sees the mole..

3. The same girl seems to fall in the pool of blood..
And shouts… Udhay… aaa… And a drop of tear fell of her eyes…

Episode ends with Prem came back to senses when he hear a knock on the door…

Precap –

Niranjan saying its Ratheshwar Coloney…
In News… Worlds most aged lady lives in Ratheshwar Coloney… Brinda said she knows her…

Hope u enjoyed the episode… I just need some suggestions… For whom to put as the old lady… The one whose powerful words make the world shake…

Waiting for ur comments … Dear silent readers please break silence… And help ur Frnd to choose the character …. And thank you all guys… For ur support … ??? and New peoples are also welcome….

Credit to: Mìťhřåbŕîñđâ

27 comments

  1. Mithrabrinda

    Frnds… Guess the new entry Rathesh…
    Arjun’s uncle’s son ..

    Give some idea whom to put as old lady from Ratheshwar Coloney.. Her character is one of most important character in this story. She is lady of strong firm good Nature ? please reply dear frnds….

  2. Deepe

    Men hold ladies little finger during marriage ceremony I think so! And I will suggest that old lady character can be played by old grandma who played a character in Tamil serial “Manvasanai”.I think she will be good for that character.It is just a suggestion only sister!

  3. Deepe

    Sister I suggest that the old lady character can be played by Surekha Sikri. Your story is superb. Waiting for next episode.

  4. krishnai aka ww

    hey mithra sry didnt get time to comment.,

    i know u would have waitted for my comment sry for making u to wait…..

    i have lots to tell……..

    1st superb epi……. yesterday ven i read i was confused didnt understand anything but only after reading this got clear……….

    in the 3rd epi u posted links for character photos right???

    i was unable to view MANORAMA pic alone…….

    u forgot to post NATASH’A PHOTO……..

    AND MY SUGGESTION LET BRINDA BE DRAUPADI…. FOR POOJA SHARMA LOOKS PERFEST FOR BOTH SHAHEER N AHAM………..

  5. krishnai aka ww

    is it okay if draupadi s mithrabrindha????

    next i want to tell u that there s a mistake in the update… u had wrote arjun FOR PREM in the last part where he feels a strange connection…….

    next its dinner we have at night not breakfast…. i think in hurry u would have made this ,mistake but its okay………

    ur s always fantastic…….. i visit tu only for ur ffs now a days………. n sry for talking so much……. actually i wanted to tell u thats why pointed out ur mistakes……

    i seriously love ur ff.. i m crazy like brindha character to know more about history n researches all such things…….

    waiting for ur next epi eagerly………

  6. krishnai aka ww

    and about that old lady as deepe said balika vadhu Kalyani Devi Dharamveer Singh / Dadisa AKA Surekha Sikri……..

    and who is going to play the role of RAthesh???????? quit curious to know……

  7. krishnai aka ww

    forgot…… as depe said when a girl gets married her husband holds her last finger which symbols their love….. athma bandha for next 7 births……

  8. Mithrabrinda

    Thank you very much krishnai ?
    I have a extraordinary surprise for draupadi aka pooja sharma’s character .. As a warrior queen… Given much more importance…. Then everyone…. And I choose sita from siya ke ram as Mithra and Brinda character….

    Wait for super surprise of the old lady and Rathesh character… Manoramma and Natasha character link I’ll post it in next episode….

    Frnds helps each others to rectify their mistakes… So u are always welcome with Warm heartedly….

    Then I always like you way of commenting… So comment more… I don’t mind if you are talkitive….

    That holding of little finger … What u deepe said is right… But I’ll say more about it… Waiting till next episode …

    And meghna in my episode there is character… Little special…. She will be named as Meghna…. ?

    Guys plz suggest some names with meaning… Both Hindu and mughal history related story… So need names….

    Stay tuned ?

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