Preekar…..a realisation of love….part 3

Hi friends!
Thank you….thank you so much for your lovely comments and love. Guys you can call me Pihu and I feel like I am the most senior one here but never mind I always enjoy juniors company in both professional and personal life.
Recap: Tiwari ji and Ramnath conversation. Sumo in coma.

Part 3
Ramnath reach home after dropping Tiwari ji at their place. Ramnath in deep thought. Yamini comes to talk him but he requests her to go as he wants to be alone at this moment.
In hospital,
Doctors shifted sumo to room. Sharvan ask mama ji to allow him to sit near sumo. Preeti nods mama ji to allow him. He allowed him. Doctor asks for bringing blood for sumo. Pushkar said he will go but mama ji said you stay here I’ll go. You need to handle three persons here Sharvan is not in senses. Pushkar nods.
Pushkar sit outside room preeti comes out of room. Pushkar ask is Sumo fine? She nods and said I can’t see didi like this and cries. Pushkar thought to hold her and console her but stops thinking preeti’s word that don’t ever try to come close to me. Pushkar take step back. Preeti notice this and thought that she has to explain Pushkar about her feelings.
By the time mama ji reach there and said he doesn’t find sumo’s matching blood in this hospital they need to ask in other hospitals. Pushkar request mama ji to stay in hospital and he’ll go in search of blood. Preeti asks his father can he accompany pushkar as he has not slept yesterday night, it’s risky for him to drive alone in this state. He nods in agreement.
Preeti and Pushkar left hospital. They were in car.

Pushkar: Seriously there is no need to come with me, I can manage.
Preeti: I can’t let you go alone in this state.
Pu: In this state..
Pr: yes in this state.
Pu: I am fine preeti
Pr: u r not
Pu: ok! I am not but why you care about it
Pr: because I……I……
Pu: I…What?
Pr: I am your friend.
Pu: oh friend…really
Pr:…yes do you have any doubt?

Pushkar stops the car and turns to preeti and said, “yes, I have doubt…I have big doubt…nobody put such allegation on their friends. If we are friends you can ask for explanation but you won’t doubt me.”
Preeti: Oh really Mr Pushkar Manhotra….you know what if friends don’t doubt they even don’t kiss.
Preeti let her anger out in her speech but then realises what she said and feels little embarrassed.
Pushkar: that…that happen because I don’t consider you as my friend. I love you and..
Pushkar wants to say something but stops.
Preeti: and what pushkar?
Pu: Nothing. We are getting late. I think we should go.
Pushkar and preeti reach at hospital with blood. Mama ji feels little dizziness. Pushkar advise him to go home and get some rest. In this way he will also get ill and can’t take care of the family. Pushkar and preeti sits outside.
Pr: I just go and check didi.
Pushkar nods.

Preeti went inside to see sumo.
Sharvan sitting next to sumo holding her hand and staring Sumo like A child saw any magic.
Sharvan you know what sumo I resists myself…my feelings a lot but now I couldn’t. You know why? Because I love you not from today but since the day I saw you. I promised you na that I’ll never let you fall. Believe me I’ll never because I love you more than anything else in this world. I loved you I never wanted to go London and leave you alone here but that day in prom night it’s you who choose someone else over me. I felt bad I feel like you also ditched me like mom. I left Delhi in anger and decided not to come back and when I come I used to hate you for the same reason. But as everyone says love never fades you. I thought I have moved on but believe I have never. I don’t have that much courage to move on or maybe I have never wanted. That’s why I started avoiding you as the heart again starts beating and I don’t know that what you feel for me. I was afraid of rejection so I am running from you or I would say from my life but not anymore now. You know I came to confess my feelings to you, the day you brought that lady….I was angry with you; you know I got hurt when you bring her in front of me. Dad was upset he feels like he will lose me but that is not the case.
Sharvan wipe his tears and again said, “but now I can understand why you do so? You want to reduce my pain you want me to not hate this world anymore you want to show the difference between her and you. Sumo I love you..I love you….you do so much for me and what I gave you…just anger. I promise you sumo that I’ll never go away from you I’ll never fight with you I’ll just love you and just love you.”
Preeti is all emotional and left the room without saying anything. She came out and sits on the bench next to Pushkar. She is crying.

Precap: Sumo regains consciousness.

I hope you guys like the episode. Thankx to all for your love.


  1. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    omgg sharvan confess his love…… Loved it preekar argue was cute……….
    U write with perfections di,..,,, keep writing

  2. Maria

    It’s fantastic pihu di !! Emotional moments!! Everything was amazing di!! 🙂 waiting fr next part post next 1 ASAP…..

  3. Shalini Naicker

    It was awesome. Really love you Pihu di. I am waiting for the next episode. Please update it soon.

  4. shraman

    Beautiful.. Imsorry I read your other 2 eps. But did not get the time to comment.. I hope this happens in the show.. Writers pls read this.. Amazing..:)

  5. sona

    U knw..wt pihu..even we hope and expect the same from the show..but☺?else..
    But …due to ur ffs I feel like..reading the real written update of serial..
    And I’m glad that ur thoughts..are mine..related to the show..
    Love ur thoughts..pihu..☺???

    • Preekarfan


      thank you sona…thank you so much…
      i feel very blessed that you guys are comparing my ff with the professional writers…
      I am so happy….right now on cloud 9.
      🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  6. Lado_mishi

    |Registered Member

    Awesome pihu di…..u r too good….m just wondering that how can u write so good…kaash jaisa aapne likha hai vaisa hi hota serial mein…..keep it up di and post the next part soon

    • Preekarfan


      thanku Lado…

      u know my nanu used to call me Ladoo….

      mai to sirf likh leti hu..acha vo tb hota hai jb aap sbko pasand aata hai..

      :* :* :*

  7. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Wow di….khushi ki taraf se aapko standing ovation and a salute for ur mast ff and ur out of the world imagination…. Love u loads ….and post the next part soon..
    And sorry for being late

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