Precious (Shivaay and Anika) Episode 1

Hi everyone. Thanks a lot for your love and support. I really didn’t expect such a good response on my prologue! But you guys made my day! Love you all. And I hope I live up to your expectations. I’ll try to post it regularly.
This post is written with Anika’s point of view,and I’ll try to write with Shivaay’s point of view too as I love the complex yet simple and innocent side of his character. So, let’s begin. I hope you guys like this one too.
Episode 1: Precious

I entered the Oberoi Mansion exactly on time. And immediately my eyes were searching for him. “Who are you searching for?” My heart lurched at the sound of his voice, and unknowingly I admitted, “You!” The shock on his face didn’t really hide that look in his light blue eyes, as if someone had given him Aladin’s lamp or something even more precious than that. I modified my reply, “You haven’t left for the office already?” “Go and work Anika”, he said, narrowing his eyes. Am I a kid that he’s asking me to go study! I made my way to Dadi’s room with a fixed pout on my face. All throughout the day I noticed something weird about all those security guys. They just weren’t letting me out of their sight! Anyways let’s just get on with work and try to go back home as soon as possible, which was my usual goal of the day. The day passed smoothly with six appearances from Billuji, each one of them leaving me equally confused, and the usual fun that I have with everyone else. My work was finished by 5:30, so I thought of leaving early. I informed Dadi and left Oberoi Mansion. Sahil will be so happy today!

And from today I know that Mumbai’s crime charts were on a climb for me exclusively! As soon as I enter the auto, someone pressed the traditional handkerchief with chloroform under my nose and the last thing I remember is Billuji’s face that I saw when I closed my eyes and the trademark evil laugh of villain’s in movies.

“The roads here are so bad! It’s good that Billuji isn’t here, otherwise he would have cursed all those who made it. What exactly is rocking me to sleep? My head feels like I have drunk two bottles of Rudra’s punch. Lots of voices woke me up. It seemed like they were fighting. Why can’t they let me sleep quietly? ‘Ladai ladai maaf kro, Gandhiji ko yaad kro’!” I mumbled in my sleep.

Where am I? Why am I here?
Waiting for your comments 

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  1. Ruksy

    Amazing please update soon.

    1. Samm

      Thanks Rusky ?

  2. Nansshivika

    Plz make its lengthier. Its superb but too short waiting for shivay coming and rescuing next one asap

    1. Samm

      Sure nans. And thank you ?

  3. Priyanka_22

    Thrilling n Existing
    Excited to know how her billuji ll rescue her
    Awesome samm
    Try to make it bit lengthy and plz add some shivay’s pov in next epi
    M dying to know his reaction on his paanika’s kidnapping
    And plz update soon 🙂

    1. Samm

      Sure Priyanka, and thank you ?

  4. Akshaya

    Make it long. Waiting for your episode

    1. Samm

      Sure Akshaya. And thanks ?

  5. Superb

    1. Samm

      Thanks Namrata

  6. Yaashi

    Update the next part soon… Lots of suspense yaar….

    1. Samm

      Sure yaashi ??

  7. Awesome…

    1. Samm

      Thanks ?

  8. Priyali

    Too much suspense… post next asap

    1. Samm

      Sure Priyali ?

    1. Samm

      Thanks Vincy ?

  9. Shivu

    wow nice….starting but plz make it lengthier…waiting for the next

    1. Samm

      Thanks Shivu, I’m working on it now. ?

  10. Tulasi

    Nyc one sammm….waitng for billuji to rescue anika…..lovelyy

    1. Samm

      Thanks Tulasi ?

  11. awesome and could you make it long. ..Please

    1. Samm

      Sure Elle. And thanks ?

  12. HarSHaN

    NYC One Samm..I n Surprising now after seeing Ur prologue n new Epi.. I saw my Style again aftr 2nd Time..Like the Bees around Flying Daffodil Basket U made a Triangular Level of

    1. Samm

      thanks harshan. But i didn’t really understand your comment about triangular level of episode. could you clear it please?

      1. HarSHaN

        Simply Luv,SlowMaking of Suspenses n Crime..

      2. HarSHaN

        FlyingFlowerBasket-Maybe by throwing or something happened to the holder-Crime..
        Bees-Y Bees coming?Suspense

      3. Samm

        Oh, I get it now. Thanks ?

  13. Fanficoholic

    Hey samm. Loved the epi yaar. Bt unable to bear the suspense. Plz make the episode a bit lengthier. Otherwise everything is perfect. Love u loads❤️❤️❤️

    1. Samm

      Thanks ?

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