Please Forgive Me (ShraMan os) – by Alina

Please forgive me !! an os -by Alina
⁃ Hi guys!! I’m Alina, I know many of u don’t know me except wu page members I miss u all my friends (Anjali do,Sona di,Bjagya do, Fatarjo,Ireena,Kittu,Arti!,Sonai,Smile,Beas,pretty,Priya everyone I’m missing u all badlyπŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜­πŸ˜)) But I know many of u..Khushi,Angel,wierdsister,ufaq Nikita,Maria,Ariana,Marie,Neeti,fati… Naz of your ffs…sorry I hav not ever commented on your ff the reason is not that ,I’m silent reader reason is I’m late reader. I was not aware of this world I was not knowing telly update..n when I joined I got small family here 😊😊..n slowly n gradually I got to know about ff’s n I started reading it when edkv ended.. I don’t hav experience of writing any story..I’m writing my first OS on Shraman..pls do tell u like it or not I know I will not b upto your all’s level but I’m trying ok..pls give ur feedbacks accha ya bura…ok?? So enough of my talks let’s begin..
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Shravan-A politician.
Suman- A college student ( 2nd year)
Shaurya- suman’s brother (also in politics n in opposition of Shravan). Rohit- Shravan’s friend Khushi-suman’s friend Choti- an orphan girl nd also can’t speak ,12 yrs,lives near Shravan’s house. So here the story begins… Jeetega Bhai Jeetega Hamara Shravan Jeetega !! Yes this sounds is coming from the rally on Delhi Road..from another side also sound is coming. Jeetega Bhai Jeetega Hamara shaurya Jeetega… Nd now they r in front of each other Shaurya- Arre tu kitni bhi koshish kr le mai hi jeetne wala hoon😠😠. Shravan- ha q nhi, who to waqt hi batayege thoda sabr rkh year,hav some patience 😎😎😎. N after this they went on their way..Rohit comes to Shravan n says .. Rohit- Yaar mere pass ek plan hai.. Maine Suns hai ki is Khadoos shaurya ki ek behen hai.. Shravan-To mai kya Karu. Rohit- tu use pata le.. Shravan- Arre tu pagal Ho gya hai kya..mai ladki Khojne nhi nikla hoo just leave this mujhe abhi Kaam pe concentrate krna hai.. Rohit- Bhai phle poori baat to sun le..shaurya ki jaan basti hai us ki behen mein…u r getting me na what I’m trying to say?? Shravan- Ha boht acche se..he smiled evely. (Guys he is not a bad boy..he is just hard from outside n hav very soft heart inside ). Shravan-Rohit..to tu ek Kaam kr uski behen ka bio data pata kr or mujhe inform kr..ok?? Rohit- ok Bhai samjho Kaam Ho gya. Next morning Rohit comes with full info about shaurya’s sister to Shravan ‘s house. Rohit-Gud morning bro..I hav collected some info about shaurya ‘s sister ..her name is Suman Tiwari n BTech student..doing her studies in Xyz college..see this is her pic.. Shravan- (seeing her pic) Beautiful .. Rohit- oh kya kaha tmne Shravan- Yahi Kehna hai na jb usse Milna hai?? Rohit- ya..not bad u r nice actor also dude. Shravan-Thanks Rohit.. U r the best. Rohit- ok bye!!
Shravan (in his mind ) now I hav to do something to make u fall in love with me miss Suman..I’m coming. [On same day he went to that college i mean he is outside the college. Nd its break tym]. old lady(begging)- beta kuch khane ko dedo boht dino se kuch nhi kya. Boy1- Arre hutt budhiya..mera din kharab kr diya apni shakal dikha k., Boy2- Mere se to door hi Rehna u cheap people. Shravan- How dare u both to talk her like this ??
Boy1- q ?? Teri maa lagti hai kya??Boy2- Nhi yaar ye iski girlfriend hai..hahaha
Old lady to Shravan- chirp beta Jane doπŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯
Boy1 – ha dekh Teri gf be keh diya to chor sari baat ko..(pointing toward that old lady ) pata nhi kaha kaha Se log chale aate hai?? Middle class!!
Boy2- Middile class??bhai inka to koi class hi nhi Hota..
Saying all this nonsense they both started laughing
Shravan lost his patience and start hitting both and showed them who he is..
Shravan- Shravan Malhotra..Naam to Suna hi hoga
Both boys- ha Bhai ..sorry galti Ho gyi
Shravan-ok..age Se aisa mt krna
[They leave nd Shravan went to that old lady n give her 500β‚Ή n took blessing from her]
This all was noticed by Suman
Suman to Khushi- Khushi??duniya mein aise log bhi hai kya jo doosre ki help kare??
Khushi- pata nhi but kuch to hoge hi na??πŸ™‚πŸ™‚
[Then then they went for their classes as break is over now..Suman was thinking about Shravan whole day and when classes get over on her way]
Suman- hey Khushi..he is the same guy na??
Khushi-Yup..lets go n talk
Suman- hmm
Suman to Shravan- Hey..u r very generous man!!
Shravan-I didn’t get u??
Suman- I saw u in afternoon,how u helped that lady..u know what ask kl is world mein kuch hi log aise hai jo doosre ki help krte h
Shravan- hmm…Thanks..
Suman- Btw..what’s your name??
Shravan- Shravan Malhotra…urs??
Suman-Suman…Suman Tiwari
So friends??
(They shakes their hands n became friends..they started meeting each other..Suman starts feeling something for him..days passed)
[Now it’s one day before Shravan’s birthday ]
Suman calls Shravan (it’s 11:57 pm n Shravan is sleeping)
Suman- hello
Shravan- yes!! Say why u called me at this time yaar
Suman- umm..(seeing time again n again) umm..
Shravan- umm umm krne k liye phn ki Ho kya??
Suman- Arre do min wait nhi kr Skte kya ??
Shravan-Accha to mai ab tumhara umm aah sunne k liye jaga Rahuu??
I m cutting the call
Suman- wait wait..hogya
(It’s 12 now)
Shravan- kya ??
Suman- Happy birthday to u.. Shravan
Shravan- Thank you so much !! Now I going to sleep bye
Suman- wait wait !! I called u to tell u to cancel all your meetings ,plans,whatever..I will b spending whole day with u😊😊
Shravan-Ohk.. But ur college ??
Suman- No college only u n me
Shravan- y ??
Suman- sb baat phn pe hi krna hai kya?? Soo jao ab good night!!

It’s morning now..
Suman calls Shravan to a cafe..
Shravan- so what’s ur plan..
Suman- Shravan to mujhe choti k bare me bata rhe the na??
Shravan- hmm..
Suman- so we will go to meet her with cake.. I hav ordered here..we will enjoy with her and then we will go to…
Shravan- ha bolo kaha??
Suman- itni jaldi kya hai?? Hav some patience na..I will tell u afterward
Shravan- ok miss sumo…so let’s go..

They went to choti’ s place..Suman got emotional after seeing choti’ condition she got touched with her ..
Choti-by her actions (as she can not speak) don’t b upset dii I m happy..don’t b emotional let’s enjoy my world’s best Bhai’s birthday!!
Suman-(wiping her tears ) ok no Rona dhona let’s cut the cake

They cut cake n enjoyed a lot there..now it’s 5:00 pm
Shravan- so Suman ..what’s ur next plan..ghar chale ya kuch or hi iraada hai??
Suman-ha abhi ghar jate h bt big surprise abhi baki hai..I will text u the address..will meet there ok??byee I m going now see u soon!!
Shravan- ok..tym to Batati jao
Suman(from far)-haaa…. I will text u that also..byee

Now it’s 7:00, Shravan reached the place..that was beautifully decorated, there was a round table with two chairs , red n white balloons perfect for romantic date..

Shravan was going to call Suman
Just then Suman reached..
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Shravan’s eyes got stuck on her she was looking gorgeous in red simple saare with silver sleeveless blouse she was looking damn hot!!
Suman moves hand in front of Shravan’s face
Suman- what??
Shravan gets into his sense..
Shravan- oh nothing
Suman- how I m looking??
Shravan-I hav no words !! I r looking beautiful..
[ suman was not able to walk properly bcz she was not habitual of sarees n all..this is noticed by Shravan]
Shravan- agr saree sambhalti nhi to ku peha?? C sumo no need to change yourself for me..Tom jaisi Ho waise Ho mujhe acchi lagti Ho
Suman- Shravan tmhe apna special gift nhi chahiye??
[saying this she went close to him n stood on a stool which was lying very near to Shravan..she is going to kiss him..Shravan was not willing but he also can’t control himself..he hold her from her waist and they share a passionate kiss😍😍]
Now it’s next morning nd sumo in college..
Suman to Khushi- Khushi u know I m in love..!!
Khushi-Lkn tune mujhe bataya nhi kabhi ??kon hai wo ,kaha ka h, kya krta hai??
Suman- Arre Arre stop your questions yaar…listen
She tell her about Shravan
Khushi-but Suman what will happen if your brother will know this??
Suman- before he will get to know from outside..I will tell him
[On other side Shravan n Rohit r talking in his office ]
Rohit-what’s up Shravan??
Shravan is little tensed
Shravan- yaar mujhse ye nhi Ho Skta …I can’t play with her emotions yaar
Rohit- no no no no u can’t say this man v r much close to our mission shaurya definitely have to choose either leadership or his sister’s happiness..
Meanwhile Shravan gets a call it was suman’s call
Shravan-Hello…
Suman- Shravan I want to meet u pls to my place at evening..
Shravan-ok
Suman- ok I m in college..will talk to u afterwards..byee..love u
[ Now it’s evening.. Shravan reached suman’s house]
Suman- Come inside
They went inside..
Shravan- q bulaya ?? Wo bhi ghar pr??
Suman- to kya Bhai Se tmhare bare me road pe baat krti kya??
[Shravan was shocked…he was not getting what to do now..either he should tell her truth or not..at last he decided to tell truth]
Shravan- Dekho sumo aisa hamare beech kuch bhi nhi h..
Suman was left shocked
Suman-what?? Shravan pls mazak mt karo
Shravan-no sumo..I m not joking
[He told everything to her..listening all Suman cried badly her eyes become all red]
Shravan-sumo…(putting his hand on her shoulder)
Suman- (removing his hand) don’t..don’t speak a single word!!
Shravan- sumo…listen to me once..
Suman-don’t take my name..just leaveeeee(she shouted )
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[Shravan left..he was feeling guilty]
(Days passed.. Many a times they came across each other but Suman was not ready to listen anything..)
As Shravan was guilty he decided to sucide ..
Shravan in his room..
Shravan to himself
I can’t forgive myself nd don’t hav guts to face u sumo
[ this all is heard by choti..she suddenly run to suman’s house and tell her about him by gesture and this time Suman understand her gestures quickly.. She left for Shravan’s house]
At Shravan’s place he is trying to tie a rope from ceiling..but then he heard a very soft voice from his door
“How dare you ” Himmat kaise hui tmhari mere cheez ko haath lagane ki..Marne ki??
Shravan turned back and saw Suman standing there..
Suman ran toward her and hugged him tightly
Suman-Tm aisa kaise kr Sakte Ho??(her eyes was swelled up bcz she had cried aloottt)
Shravan- To tm mujhse abhi b love krti Ho??
Suman-to kya pyaar kuch pal ke liye Hota h kya..
Shravan- sumo…Please forgive me.. I love you ..love u so much
He lift her up..
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Suman- I love you too..
-The End-
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Sorry guys I wrote little lengthy ..I not good in precise writing..pls do tell how’s it..I hav written this first time and Happy Diwali to all
Alina

20 comments

  1. Beas

    |Registered Member

    It’s damn amazing di. Loved it. Fantabulous 😊❀
    U write pretty well. Plz keep posting os like this. And yeah I m also missing u 😞 all badly 😭 especially Kittu and Anjali di😭. And Happy Diwali 😡

    • Alina

      |Author

      Thanks Beas..Ya I m also missing them badly…Yesterday I talked with kittu but I don’t know where is our Anjali dii, she is not coming on desitvbox Page tooπŸ˜•

  2. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Aluu my pataka pehla attempt that too successful not success full more than successful.πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
    Kabhi kuch seekh liya mujhse.
    Just joking just coz of ur sharp mind and shramsn dreams.
    Too good.
    Keep writing.
    Love u

    • Alina

      |Author

      Thank u soooo muchhhh dear😘😘
      Ha tmse hi seekha hai meri preeti..
      Yes I will try more..
      Love u..
      Take care!!

  3. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Awwwwwwww Alina, 1stly welcome to TU EDKV Family. Ik u r already a part of it but since u showed up just thought of giving a warm hi. Don’t b guilty for not being there when EDKV aired nd showing up late. I mean u r here now, y worry abt the past?
    Coming to the os….r u kidding me? Is that ur first write up? Girl u r amazing!!!! I loooovvvvveeeeedddd the story. Bte logically Shravan wouldn’t have managed hanging himself coz he is too tall to hit the wall πŸ˜‚
    Pls make more shots. I wanna read moooorrrreee from u.
    Love u dear
    take care
    btw call me Aru

    • Alina

      |Author

      Haha πŸ˜‚ Shravan is soooo tall yaar how he he will manage hangingπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      BTW thanks alloottt Aru ..i m glad u liked it
      Sorry I hav written above that you don’t know me.. U know what happened ..i wrote this os 3days back and just copied and submitted the article without doing the change…That I know you …vaise bhi kl hi to hamari mulakaat HiiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰

  4. Balamirra

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    hi alina,
    nice to meet u
    its so nice when new people write more os about shraman.
    i am really loving it
    keep it up dude
    u rock
    keep writing more..
    love to read your os
    YB (balamirra)

  5. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Alina !!!!!
    It was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome awwwwwedorable yar 😍😍😍😍😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😘😘😍😘😘😍😘😘😍😘
    While reading this I was like awestruck 😍😍😍😘😍😘😍
    Nd I can’t believe this is ur very frst attempt …. btw nice attempt .. m impressed by ur writing skills πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ˜Š
    Keep writing ..
    Take care 😊😊😊

  6. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Hey alina…
    It was wonderful sweety…
    Just d first line of ur story left me in splitsπŸ˜‚
    Otherwise it was damn good..
    Keep writing..
    Love u
    Take care.
    πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

    • Alina

      |Author

      Haaww seriously u are saying this..i m so sooo happy..i can’t believe an excellent writer is complimenting me.. πŸ˜…πŸ˜… Thanks alooottt dear..
      Luv u..

  7. Aishani Purkayastha

    Hii Alina dii…😘
    I am also a silent reader like you and don’t comment much…. But this OS of yours… Was written and executed soo beautifully that I couldn’t stop!! You are a very good writer!!! You are very talented and creative!!πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ Keep writing like this!!!

    • Alina

      |Author

      Ooh thanks Aish.. Love to hear this yaar!! U made my day dear.. Nd us pls read and comment on everyone’s ff n os…this talent I got from all the authors Whose name I mentioned above..☝So keep commenting on all…

  8. Niharikamalhotra

    |Registered Member

    @Aluna..hello ms.Alina…
    Do u know any kittu…??m same Di…
    Well any intellectual has said…bade logo se khade home baat karni chahiye….please believe me….m standing now…n u need a standing ovation… Just brilliant…
    Ms.Alina,u nailed it…just killed it…
    1.#rohit…..ravan😈😈(sorry)
    2.hmn..haan….nice convo..
    3.confession.. Brilliant…
    Yup,I know u r missing me..sorry didu…
    N “PLEASE FORGIVE ME”.. nice title….
    Well..as m a typical shayari..n part time poet…
    So…
    First…Di,I really love#koi deewana kehta Hai..poem of Dr.Kumar vishwaas…(AAP)..
    So…
    For u..
    KPI DEEWANA KEHTA HAI..
    KOI PAGAL SAMAJHTA HAI..
    MAGAR DI KE OS KI..
    KIMAAT YE Pg SAMAJHTA HAI..
    TU MUJHSE DOOR KAISI HAI
    MAI TUJHSE DOOR KAISA HOON..
    YE TERA DIL SAMAJHTA HAI..
    YA MERA DIL SAMAJHTA HAI…

    NOW…MY SHAYARI…
    YAAD AATI HAI AAPKO..
    HAMARI BHI..
    YAAD AATI HAI HAME AAPKI BHI..
    YAAD AATI HAI AAPKO HAMARI BHI..
    YAAD AATI HAI HAME AAPKI BHI …
    IN YAADO KA SILSILA YU HI CHALTA RAHEGA…
    DIII…
    IN YAADO KA SILSILA YU HI CHALTA RAHEGA..
    TO ISILIYE HAME JARA YAAD KAR LIJIYE..
    WARNA PHIR YE RISHTA AAM HO JAYEGA..
    MILNE HUM AAPSE JAROOR AAYENGE(2)..
    TAB TAK HAMARA INTZAAR…KAR LIJIYEGA
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    .
    .
    YU LIKHNE KO TO HAR KOI LIKHTA HAI…
    HUM BHI JARA…IS SOKH KO RAKHTE HAI…
    PAR HAR KOI AAP JAISA NAHI LIKH SAKTA..
    BILKUL USSI TARAH JIS TARAH…
    PHOOL TO BHT HOTE HAI..
    PAR UNME GULAAG SA KOI NI HO SAKTA..
    AAP GULAAB SI MEHAK RAKHTI HAI..
    HUM EK PATTA HI SAHI…
    PAR JIS TARAH DI AAPNE KHUSHBUU FAILAYI…
    USKE SAAMNE HAMARE PAAS KOI SHAYARI HI NAHI…
    JUST LOVED THIS…
    Di,awesome blossom…
    Well ,m proud of my Didi….
    Loveeee uuuuuuu…
    Please keep writing like this..sorry for being late..well,belated congratulations…
    Keep it up…well
    .I would like to say…#der aaye durust aaye…
    For u Di…
    Hattsoffffffff…
    Yr kittu..
    Lots of love..
    Take good care of yourself Di..
    Bye.

    • Alina

      |Author

      Kittu Meri kittu.. Tm ayi Wahi boht hai..i was missing u alot.. U know tmhara comment dekhkr mere face pe ek bara sa smile as gya..love u n ur Shayri..Or ye Kya mai phool tm patta no kittu it’s your bhool.. U r phool..i m not making u fool English wala.. Haha
      By seriously kittu u made my day.. One more thing kittu my birthday is coming to bhooli to nhi na.. Agr bhul gyi to Mai tmhe remind kra doongi
      Love you..
      U too take care
      Bye

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