PLEASE DON’T GO FROM ME….SHIVIKA & PRIVEER LOVE STORY (EPISODE 9)

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Hey guyzz…This is Maria again with my ff…Hope u all liked last episode…Sorry for last update…I was not really well yaar…Sorry…Thank soo much for all ru comments and love….Fingers crossed hoping it will continue….So here continues my ff……..

TODAY’S DIALOGUE

Ishq Lamhe karte hai yaadein barso ko mil jati hai…..

If you forgot story of last episode or didn’t read don’t worry here’s the link:
Episode 8

Recap: Gauri and Omkara’s past revealed……..Prinku says sorry to Ranveer & Ranveer kisses her……..A villain in Rumya’s life…..Shivika relation in danger

Episode 9

AT HOSPITAL

Om become conscious ….He slowly opens his eyes…He saw all of them looking at him…All are having tears in their eyes…Jhanvi hugged him

Jhanvi: Om r u 5n now….I was so worried for u ….Y can’t u drive properly..If anything happen to u then I will (she was about to say die…both tej and Om shuts her mouth)

Om: Mom r u mad…where will I go leaving my family…This was just a small accident…..

Jhanvi: U r calling me mad….just see ur condition…Head injury….Leg fracture…hand fracture……& What more….& ur calling me Mad I’m r mom Om…I will have pain when u get hurt..

(Om wipes her tears with the other hand which is not injured…)

Om: Mom…Y are u crying…it over…Just look I’m perfectly 5n …

Rudy: Maa…If u want I & Om can play football infront of u…Come on Om lets football…

(Everyone look towards Rudy (everyone gave rudy a (He will never change) look)

Soumya: U really think Om bhaiya can play football with u rudy…

Rudy: Yes…Now only Om told na he is fine…Yes na Om

Om: Hmmm……

Rudy: Did u see that somu…He said he want to play..

Soumya: Duffer…..woh bhaiya wanted to console Mom…Y are u always taking meaning of words literally

Rudy: When did I take the meaning of words literally…I don’t now to read literature properly then u r telling that I’m taking meanings literally (he makes puppy face)

Soumya: U will never change………Literally u only think the most basic or original meaning of a word or expression…Om bhaiya said he is 5n just to console mom…Not because is really fine…Duffer rudy (she smiles at him)

Rudy: Oh………… I thought he became really 5n…

(Everyone look at somu and rudy…It was the first in history Rudy understood something which was explained to him)..

Jhanvi: Rudy u understood what just now Soumya told to u?

Rudy: Yes……..

Om: Mom…I think…Soumya must have come to rudy’s life early………if she came before Rudy would have passed in all his exams without copying…(he giggles)

Rudy: Oh hello…Long hair creature…I don’t want to become like u who runs behind girls in college

Om: I ran behind girls oh really…..Rudy

Rudy: Not girls but a girl…remember a girl, who u usually spoke about that time…I still remember her name……it was…

Om: Gauri……(he had a sad face while saying this)

Rudy: Yeah it was Gauri…(he remembers something)

Rudy: Om I think this gauri(name) will not leave u..

Om: y?

Rudy: The girl who helped u …..her name was also Gauri……..

Om: Gauri… Did she tell her full name?

Rudy: Is this an application form that she will tell her full name…
But still she told something…………(thinking)

Anika: Gauri Sharma…….

Om: what Gauri sharma?

Anika: Do u know her?

Om nodded no…(Om was thinking something)

Rudy: Om …..
(Om came out of this thoughts)

Om: yes…
Rudy: R u 5n …I found u lost….u were thinking about Gauri na…Naughty boy…

Om: Hmmm…..

Rudy: bhabhi om toh Gaya? He is still thinking about her…

Doctor and nurse came for checkup…

Doctor:How r u feeling Mr.oberoi?

Om: 5n…When will I be able to go home?

Doctor: maybe after 2 -3 weeks..

Om: what?….y so long? ..Mom I need to complete my orders…Tell to him

Jhanvi: Doc is saying right ..I think u should rest Om………

Om: Mom…Pls….Rudy at least u tell?

Rudy: I think u should stay here…so that ur Gauri will be able to see u (he laughs)

Om: I’m serious Rudy….I need to complete my orders..

Rudy: When did I say ur were joking…If ur serious then u should be in hospital only….(holding his laugh)

Om: Once I get fine …I will see u Rudy….

Rudy: Y then now itself see me..

Om was about to get up but due to his weakness he again falls back to bed …due to pain Om cried (he did not cry a small ”Ahaa” sound was heard )
Rudy was not able to see his brother in pain.He holds Om and makes his lie properly…there was tears in his eyes….

Rudy: sorry…Om I didn’t knew this would have happened ….(holding his years)

Om wipes Rudy’s tears and hugs him with one hand……They have a bro moment (hey guys one is missing from the scene its it yeah its none other than shivaay)

Next Morning

AT OM

Anika: where is this shivaay ? How many times I called him but still no answer..(with worried face)

Pinky:What happened beta …Y r u looking worried.. Shivaay is also missing since morning…

Anika: Not since morning Mom…But from yesterday he is missing…Don’t know where he went …he didn’t inform anyone…

Pinky: He will come Anika….don’t take stress….I think u should rest….U didn’t sleep yesterday…go sleep now…

Anika: No mummyji…Let shivaay come after that I will go and rest…

Pinky: Anika ur not well ….go take rest….

(she takes Anika to room & makes her lie on bed and leaves….

Anika makes sure that Pinky left…she then again takes her phone and dials Shivaay’s no….No response was there….tears were falling from her eyes..

Shivaay entered the room…He saw Anika crying…He rushes to her

Shivaay: Anika r u 5n? Y r u crying?

Anika: Where were u shivaay…how many times I called u ….y u were not picking up the calls….

Shivaay: Anika clam down…Im here na then y r u crying…

Anika: do u know wat I have gone through…I fe…..(She was about to say something but she fainted)

Shivaay: Anika….Anika…open ur eyes..(he pats in her cheecks but no response was there)

(he takes her to bed and makes her lie properly…He covers her with blanket and calls doctor)

AT RANVEER’S ROOM

Ranveer was changing his shirt….Prinku entered his room…without knocking…

Ranveer was shocked to see Prinku…he covers himself…

Ranveer: Prinku wat r u doing here (there was no response)

Ranveer: I’m asking u something Mr.Oberoi…(No response)

He comes closer to her and moves his hands in front of her still no response…

He decided to change his clothes first then will do something…He strips off his shirt & he was about to remove his pants….This was when prinku came back to senses (Prinku was not in her senses, when she entered his room (reason will be revealed later))

(Note:- Don’t use logic while reading the above scenes .I know it’s not possible in real life, but this is reel life guyzz…here anything can happen)

Prinku (closing her eyes): Ranveer can’t u close the door while changing…

Ranveer was shocked seeing Prinku….He went near her slowly pulled her towards the door and closed it (Prinku was out…Ranveer was inside)

He changed his clothes…and started to go outside in order to avoid questions…

He was stopped by Prinku…Prinku was about to say something, but she was stopped by Ranveer…

Ranveer: Prinku it’s not like wat u think…

Prinku: What did I think

Ranveer: U was about to say about what happened now na….

Prinku: No…

Ranveer: no? Then what u was going to say….

Prinku: Woh actually I’m sorry…..

Ranveer: FOR?

AT SHIVAAY’S ROOM

Doc is checking Anika….

Shivaay: is she 5n doctor?

Doc: Yes, she perfectly fine…

Shivaay: Then y she didn’t gain conscious…..

Doc: It’s just because of the medicines…she will wake up after sometimes…

Shivaay goes and sits near Anika…

Doc: If she again faints or does puking …inform me…

Shivaay: What? Is she really fine Doctor.

Doc: I’m not sure Mr Oberoi ….Ur wife is pregnant…I need to do some tests then I will conform it ….I’m not able to conform it as she is really weak now so …I will do tests tomorrow …Bring her to hospital

Shivaay was @ cloud 9 after hearing Anika is pregnant…Tears come from eyes… (There was a joy of fatherhood n his eyes)

He kissed in Anika’s forehead…Anika slowly opened her eyes. Shivaay hugged her…Anika had no idea about wat is happening….but still she reciprocated the hug..

Anika: Shivaay wat happened… r u crying?

Shivaay nodded nothing…….

Anika: Nothing happened then y r crying soo badly…

Shivaay (he hugged her): Anika ur going to become a mother

Anika (tears were flowing from her eyes): Is it true……Shivaay

Shivaay: No……I was joking……..(her expressions changed)

Anika: u were making fun of my feelings shivaay….I will not leave u..(She was going to jump off from the bed but Shivaay holds her…

Shivaay: R u mad Anika?

Anika: No…..

Shivaay: Then y were u going to jump from the bed?

Anika: I was not going to do high jump…I was just going to get off from the bed…whats the big deal in that Shivaay…

Shivaay: Anika If u do something in hurry then it will affect my baby

Anika: Now where did this Baby came from…Oh maybe ur Tia came back (he giggles)

Shivaay: Stop it Anika….I was saying about our baby..

Anika: Our baby…where is our baby?

Shivaay: In our stomach…

Anika: wat?

Shivaay: Ur r really going to become mom…

Anika: R u again joking shivaay

Shivaay first nodded yes then no…

Anika: Shivaay…….(in angry tone)

Shivaay: reports will come tomorrow…

They hugged each other

(Svetlana heard all their conversation…she called RoTia & informed her them something which is muted)

AT PRINKU’S ROOM

Prinku: Woh yesterday I really didn’t say sorry that’s y I came here to say sorry..

Ranveer: Woh……….Its ok prinku

Prinku: Did u really forgive me?

Ranveer: U did not do any crime na…thn y shouldn’t I forgive u?

Prinku: Woh I …

She was not able to say anything…she got panic attack…she was breathing heavily…Ranveer was shocked to see her like that…
She was again trying to say something….Ranveer didn’t get any idea…He placed his lips with her…She slowly clamed down…She fainted …He carried her to her room and made her to lie in her bed…he covered her with blanket…closed the door and went from there…

Precap:- Villan is revealed (Rumya’s life)… Anika meets Gauri…….A shock for Shivaay…..Prinku is drugged by someone in the family…

Hey guys…sorry for the late update…I’m Planning an episode in which
Soumya’s past and Om’s and gauri’s relations truth will be revealed..What’s ur opinion…Tommorow or today it will be published…Name will be” PLEASE DON’T GO FROM ME (REVELATION SPECIAL EPISODE)”…
Some parts I could not reveal through this so i decided to write another continuation with same but all the revealitions will be done..Do supprt me by reading that too)
Its just like a spin-off but will be having same story…but revealtions like Somu’s past,Gaukara’s past etc will be revealed

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29 Comments
  1. Sairan

    Awsomee.. Fantastic..Plz reveal the suspense soon

    1. Maria

      Thanku sairan ..soon it will be revealed

  2. Vincy

    Nice episode

    1. Maria

      Thanku Vincy…………..thanku 4 all ur comments

  3. Liya

    Rudra is Rudra??he was hilarious loved the obro moment and the way soumya make Rudy understand??something is cooking in Svetlana’s mind against shivika..there is a smell of misunderstanding track,its a guess! Priveer??are bit confusing!

    1. Maria

      Enikum thonni….Priveer is bit confusing…What to do even i don’t heave any about it

  4. Polichu..

    1. Maria

      Thanku Bhavana….thanku 4 all ur comments…

    1. Maria

      Thanku Setu

  5. Superb….

    1. Maria

      Thanku Shivika

  6. Awesome dear….

    1. Maria

      Thanku nikithajai…I’m hoping that u liked the episodes…as u were the one who suggested about Omkara’s and Rumya’s love story…I don’t know ….wheter i could reach till ur expectation…but still I’m trying…Once again thanku 4 ur wonderful idea

  7. Lisaaa

    Awesome

    1. Maria

      Thanku Lisa for ur support

  8. Amazing epi

    1. Maria

      Thanku Lilly for ur comment

  9. Awesome

    1. Maria

      Thanku RASHI for all ur comments

  10. Shrutika

    Fantastic!

    1. Maria

      Thanku Shrutika for ur supprt…..

  11. Mrunal

    loved it…
    superb epi

    1. Maria

      Thanku soo much Mrunal for commenting….Hoping to do best in coming episodes…If any suggestions do send..

  12. Gayathri.visu

    Hai, Maria. This is very very interesting and cute epi…. Rumya part is so cute! Omru convo is funny and emotional….. I m happy for Shivika scenes!! But Preveer scenes are confusing.. I cant wait dear…. Post next part today itself Maria. Please……
    PS- I didn’t comment on ur prev chapter. My exams are going on, so I m busy. After 2 days my exams are completed and after that I will comment regularly. In ur prev chap I m feeling sad for Om… Naughty Shivaay… And haan, u can call me Gayathri.

    1. Maria

      Thanku Gayathri…Even I’m confused about Priveer…Im having no idea about wat im writing….Its just my luck …..Thanku for ur comments….Even my exams are going to start …Next month full i’m busy….Will miss all of u…

      1. Gayathri.visu

        I will miss u dear…..

  13. TanviThakur

    Hi Maria….Its been so long that I have commented in ur ff…but I used to read all ur episode…It was superb…Priveer scenes are really bit confusing…Shivika’s relation in next level its a good news….But i don’t think it will happen so soon….There will be some plans going in ur mind I’m 101% sure about that…uR REVEALITION part is coming…That’s something new….I haven’t seen any ff with such a twist…For revealing Om’s and gauri’s relation…ur writing ….Its something new…Wishing u all the best for ur exams & FF…Will surely miss u

    1. Maria

      Yeah ………….Thanku soo much for ur supprt Tanvi….Its something new…with the ff…There will be other ff part will will do revealition…I have some plans about it not sure whether it will work…I will also miss u guyzz

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