PLEASE DON’T GO FROM ME….SHIVIKA &PRIVEER LOVE STORY (EPISODE 5)

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Hey guyzz this is Maria again with my ff .Hope you all liked my last episode.If no pls let me know I will make changes accordingly …. Hey Shruthika …I still remember one of ur comment ….expose this cheapdi Tia….your wish will be fulfilled within this episode or next….I still remember all my readers comment who have commented in my ff from character sketch till this episode… so I will be taking full efforts to fulfil my readers wish….It’s a Promise

TODAY’S DIALOGUE

Insaan artist kab banta hai?
Jab dard uske bardasht me bahar ho tab jakar wo
kabhi Shayari khabi Tasweer to kabhi boot banke
chalakta hai.jo dard dilo ko pyaara hota hai wo dard
dilo me rehta hai.keemat hai us aansu ki jo aankho
me hai

Hope you all like this idea …..

If you forgot story of last episode or didn’t read don’t worry here’s the link :

Episode 4

Recap: Prinku calling Ranveer as her husband……Shivika expose Tia…….Om wakes up and finds Svetlana near him………..Soumya returns to OM as rudy’s wife

Episode 5

Pinky enters Tia’s room .She was shocked to find Tia drinking)

Pinky: Tia………..

Tia was shocked to see Pinky there ,in shock bottle fells from her hand .She stood up( in shocked she jumped off from bed)

Tia: Mom woh actually …….

Pinky: Don’t u know Tia drinking during pregnancy is not good…Then y did u do this…..It will affect my heir…..

Tia: No mom, actually I was not knowing this…..

Suddenly shivaay enters the room

Shivaay: Tia shouldn’t drink ………That only is applicable when she is pregnant….but now there is no problem in consuming alcohol ….Right Tia…(with a smirk)

Pinky: What r u saying Shivaay r u in ur sense……..She going to give us heir & u are telling she is not pregnant…

Tia: Why r u saying like this Baby………I’m going to become mother of ur child & u r doubting on me …..I didn’t expect this from u shivaay(she started to shed crocodile tears)

Pinky: That cheap middle class girl must have field ur hears …..that’s why ur saying like this…

Shivaay: Stop it mom, the girl which u r calling middle class cheap girl is my Wife…..and I will not hear anything against her ……..not even from u

Pinky: O my mataa Shivaay…..u started to back answer….That too to ur Mom ….This is all because of Anika …where is she I will not Leave her…

(shivaay stops Pinky from going out by pulling her hand)

Shivaay: Before going out just hear wat I’m going to tell…( he calls Anika)

Anika enters the room holding a laptop & Tia’s phone

Tia: How dare u anika….u stole my phone……

Pinky: just wait Tia we will first listen to wat shivaay wants to tell then we will handle this girl( eyeing anika)

Shivaay: Mom……just listen to me (he asks Anika to closes the door as he didn’t wanted to involve other family members as they were already in tension because of Prinku’s condition)

Shivaay plays a video in laptop

Pinky was shocked to see Tia romancing Robin (for them robin was tia’s brother) and kissing.She calls Robin as Dushyant and hubby etc.
Pinky tells O my mataa…..video continues…..It shows how Tia mixed glass pieces in sugar……then telling Mrs.Kapoor to kill Anika…..And the most important confession that she is not pregnant ……and also wants to destroy OM( but Svetlana ,romi & tia being sisters truth was not revealed yet in my ff )

Pinky gave a tight slap in Tia’s face she even dragged Tia out of OM and even asked Shivaay to call police …….Police came there and arrested Tia and even went to Kapoor’s house to arrest Mrs.Kapoor in attempting to kill Anika

(but everything was done very fast as shivaay didn’t wanted other members to know about it)

Pinky comes to Shivaay

Pinky: Sorry beta…..I was not able to see her truth even though she was doing this in front of my eyes….(but shivaay just ignored her)…..I was mad after hearing my heir is coming …….I just …..(She was not able to complete her sentence due to guilt)

Shivaay: Mom, u need to say sorry to Anika not me… she was one was who suffered…Even after hearing all ur scolding she is standing here …supporting u …I’m sure that she will forgive you….

Pinky had tears on her had eyes she went near anika

Pinky: I’m sorry beta forgive me ….. Please forgive me for what I did…..i did a big mistake in believing Tia …..And badmouthed against my Heera Bahu…. I’m really sorry Anika (she folds her hands to say sorry)

Anika: No aunty (she holds pinky’s hands) don’t fold ur hands .Elders shouldn’t fold their hands in front of youngers instead it should raise to give blessings

(She bend downs and takes Pinky’s blessings ….pinky’s tears started to flow)

Pinky: Don’t call me aunty …..I’m ur mother in law so call me pinky moms….

Shivika: Ok mom

(Anika and pinky looks at Shivaay in surprise, but shivaay gives them wat wala look)

Pinky: Why u said ok shivaay………?

Shivaay: Anika will call u moms….yes na Anika ….

(Anika starts to blush Pinky notices this)

Pinky: Oh look shivaay….u made by Heera Bahu tomatoes…(u know pinky’s English na)

Anika again started to blush …..Pinky takes Shivaay and Anika to Prinku’s room

Their smile goes after seeing Prinku’s condition

Flash back (Dialogue which was muted btw doctor and shivaay)

Doctor: Mr shivaay….Priyanka have tried to suicide…

Shivaay: Wat?

Doctor: I didn’t tell it in the room as everyone was already tensed ….

Shivaay: But doctor she was lying unconscious in bed & there was no sign of attempting suicide ………

Doctor: But I found this bottle in her hand……..(it was some drug )

Shivaay: This is ………..

Doctor: yes Mr.shivaay its high dose drug ……These are usually banged in India …Don’t know from where she got this….

Shivaay: Will she be fine?

Doctor: This drug have many side effects it can completely erases ones memory and also can lead to death …..But in Prinku’s condition she is save from death but there are chances for memory lose … Just take proper care of her

Shivaay: Thank u doctor……

Shivaay (in mind): From where did Prinku got this high dose drugs……..)

FLASHBACK ENDS……..

MORNING

AT A HOTEL

A room is shown (tadaa…………….)

Om is shown sleeping ………….he wakes up holding his head……….he is shocked to see Svetlana sleeping next to him……..They were in an awkward condition……..He tried to remember what happened yesterday but he was not able to do so…..He felt dizzy and slept again………Someone takes photo of this……….

AT OM

Shivaay wakes up but does not find Anika near him. He was literally surprised as Anika never wakes up early (remember Shivaay calling Anika kumbakarini)

He moved towards washroom. He entered the washroom slowly he closes the door (but lock was not proper).

Anika entered the room ,and found Shivaay was not there (in room)so decided to take a quick bath .She took her dress and towel ……walked towards washroom….She opened the door & entered the washroom ………There was a curtain in btw shower and wash so she couldn’t see Shivaay …..She closed the door….she slowly started to undress herself but heard the sound of shower…. she was shocked and covered herself……. She tried to go out but Door was not opening she again tried to open but no use ……..Suddenly she felt two wet hands in her stomach ……..she was shocked to see Shivaay…….

Anika: Shivaay …actually ….I wasn’t knowing u was inside…

Shivaay: oh really………

Anika: if u was bathing y can’t u close the door

Shivaay: ur blaming me as if I have done it purposefully…….Be positive Anika its gods decision that we need to bath together…………

Anika: Did you say something……..bath……..we …….together…

Shivaay: Yep……..Why need to waste water ……..U know In Mumbai there is scarcity of water (I just wrote yaar don’t take it seriously I have no idea of water in Mumbai)
so if we bath together then water will be saved ….

Anika: We…..together……. bathing. Never, by the way if we to are bathing together then how will the full city be freed from scarcity..

Shivaay: You wanna know……

(He pulls Anika towards him. He slowly on the shower….water started to come for shower…..Anika is now fully drenched in water ….Shivaay slowly started to undress her…….they have a hot romantic bath(I’m not writing in detail as there’s shortage in time)

Shivaay: See Anika, water is evaporating………

Anika: What??

Shivaay: U didn’t understand………..

Anika: No

Shivaay: due to our romantic bath temperature increased leading to evaporation of water .This water will reach clouds, then rain will come, thus reducing water scarcity…

Anika: Was it joke shivaay…. now u have proved that ur a more dumb than my sweet devar Rudy ….He tells more sensible jokes than u

Shivaay made puppy face .Anika just kissed Shivaay then there was a sudden change in his expression his face showed that he wanted more ….Anika was going to kiss Shivaay but there was a knock in door….. (Pinky was standing outside washroom)

Pinky: Are u ready beta?

Shivika: Yes mom, I will come now

(Pinky was expecting anwer from Anika, but both Shivaay and Anika answered .she understood that they were doing romance)

Pinky: Continue wathever u were doing ……….

Shivika (they felt embarrassed, they understood that Pinky understood that they were romancing, so they replied in embarrassed voice): Yes Mom

Pinky giggled and went from there…

Anika again tries to open the door but was not able to do so . Shivaay also tried finally they opened the door…

Anika pushes Shivaay out of washroom as she wanted to change her clothes…

Anika came out wearing a beautiful Saree. Shivaay was left mouth opened to see his wife wearing Saree …she was looking so hot….Anika signed him to close his mouth …..Shivaay closed his mouth…She ask Shivaay to change his clothes …She goes to closet and selects a nice suit for Shivaay which was matching with her saree..she gives it to shivaay and pushes him into the washroom and asks him to change fast…….Shivaay comes out wearing suit. They both holds their hand together and walks out of their room.

AT PRINKU’S ROOM

Prinku regained conscious but still she didn’t remembered anything…..Shivika entered her room and enquired her about her health…She answers in a positive way…
Shivaay calls the doctor and tells him about prinku’s condition .He tells something to Shivaay which is muted………..

AT HALL

All gathered in hall except Rudy,Om & Prinku.

Shivaay tells them about Tia and also about Pinky’s realization

All of a sudden …Everyone look towards the entrance

They were shocked to find Soumya in a full bride attireamd Rudy in a grooms…

Rudy tells them how he went to soumya’s Home to tell his feeling and found that Soumya was going to marry Reyhann. He proposed Soumya in front of everyone and even asked forgiveness. Soumya accepted his apology and married in same mandap……

Everyone was shocked but they were also happy as Rudy found his Ishqbaaz.

Suddenly ACP comes to the Mansion

ACP: hello Mr.Shivaay…Hope ur sister regained conscious…as I need to meet her its urgent

Shivaay:U may meet her pls don’t give her any stress.

ACP: Ok Mr. Oberoi

He goes towards Prinku’s and found that she was in deep thoughts.He interrupted her thoughts by saying Hello

RAnveer: Hello, Mr. Oberoi

Prinku(who was confused): Hello

Ranveer: Do u remember me?

Prinku : Yes ,How will I forget u. Even I forget who I am …..I will never forget who u r……….

Ranveer: Who am I ?

Prinku: Ur Ocean, Bitter in outside but beautiful for inside.
Ur Onion, when we go deeper inside u we find nothing
And for me ur god, equal to lord Shiva
My husband……………..

Ranveer was shocked to hear it……………His eyes widened………..Shivaay who was standing behind also hears this he got volt current .Anika & all members were also surprised to hear this

Prinku: Can we go home……….They are not allowing me to move ….Pls take me from here….otherwise I will die…….

Shivaay & all family members looked at eachother……Ranveer was shocked as Prinku doesn’t remember any of the tortures he did with her…

Screen faces at his shocked face

Precap:- Ranveer Shifts to OM…Soumya and rudy have a superb nyt………Shivika searches for Om and finds him Unconscious

Sorry guyzz I wasn’t getting any plot.
Sorry PRIVEER fans i wasn’t getting to write so i just cut shorted their scenes ,But from next episode don’t worry more of their love and realiztion is coming and I have planned for a mega twist ,Maybe it would be interesting ,
But sorry for today’s episode even I felt full episode was too bad .I wasn’t in a mood to write .Next time I will try to improve .Sorry once again .. I too felt it boring…If any suggestion to plot pls comment ……There’s a shortage in ideas…Pls do help me
Oh i forgot sorry kunal fans and Rumya fans I wasn’t able to write their part properly I will make sure that time i will do it sincerely PINKY PROMISE

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36 Comments
  1. Awesome

    1. Maria

      Thanku soo much

  2. Shrutika

    Thanks for fulfilling the wish! Nice episode dear?

    1. Maria

      🙂 I hope i have reached to ur expectation…..Thanku soo much for commenting……
      Any more wishes..just comment or reply…… i wish i could fullfil them if its based on my ff

  3. Awesome epi… loved shivika scenes….

    1. Maria

      Thanku ur for ur support ……Hoping to write more of their scenes

  4. Akshaya

    Oh bête ki. that was great

    1. Maria

      Thanku Akshaya………

  5. Sairan

    Great episode

    1. Maria

      Thanku Sairan

  6. Lisaaa

    Awesome

    1. Maria

      Thanku Lisaaa

  7. Awesome

    1. Maria

      Thanku Rashi for commenting in all my episodes……Thanku soo much

  8. Vincy

    nice episode

    1. Maria

      Thanku Vincy………Thanku for commenting in all episodes…….Hoping to keep up till ur expectations

  9. Awesome…

    1. Maria

      Thnaku Shivika

  10. It is awesome dear…. Waiting for the next update

    1. Maria

      Thanku nikitha next episode will be posted soon………hope u will like it

  11. Hey…njanum oru malayalee aanu….epi adipoli ayirinnu…

    1. Maria

      Thanku Bhavana………next episodeum adipoli aakan shremikam………

    1. Maria

      thanku stutii

  12. Awesome

    1. Maria

      Thanku so much

  13. Neha_Pheonix

    It wasn’t boring…it was filled with humor, masti, romance,confession and what not….hahaha It was fun..I have followed this since episode 1…Sry I am commenting for the first time …

  14. Lalitha

    Its awesome dear… Waiting fr the next

    1. Maria

      Thanku Lalitha ……….It will be updated soon….thinking for a plot

  15. Maria

    Its ok yaar……Thanku soo much for taking efforts to comment………I never thought this episode will be interesting…..Thanks for informing me……..if all ur supports and Prayers are there then i think i will be able to write more interesting episodes……Once again thanking u Neha

  16. Maria

    Thank u readers for inspiring me i will try my best to improve next time i won’t disappoint any Fans ……of KUNAL,NAKUUL,LEENESH,CHANDU,NEHA , ANAND& SUBHA…..Hoping for best & once again thanking all reader including silent readers…………. Don’t woory i won’t complain if u won’t comment just keep me and my ff in ur memory always………..

  17. Superb episode…

    1. Maria

      Thanku Ankita

  18. TanviThakur

    Wow Maria it was an awesome episode……Loved it yaar……I have followed this episode 1……but couldn’t comment ……i even didn’t mention it u yesterday whn we met that i used to read ur ff …….hehe….i thought to give u a surprise by commenting……..Wah yaar ur writing so good….If u wrote like this in ur exams ……….in which level would u have reached(just joking)……continue writing…….all the best……ur sweet friend Tanvi.:)

    1. Maria

      Tanvi is that u…………….I never expected you………U used to read my ff…Y u did not tell..Oh surprise….but it was shock for……met u after 5 long years…..and now u gave me another shock ……U are impossible yaar …..i will contact u personally……:P

      1. TanviThakur

        Contact karneme no probs but tum ho….god janne kya karne wali ho …..pls maarna mat…hey yaar….Tumhari other readers will be thinking that we r mad or wat r we talking about ,so instead of replying in here pls call……..there lots to tell u…missed u sooooooooooooo much

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