Pkj club in pkj mansion (CHAPTER 1)



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Aastha : yumm yumm!!! dishes r so tasty ?
Isn’t it everyone ?
Lax : Ask Amayaa nd Vishu
They can judge it de best ?

Focus shifted to those two poor girl ??
Girl 1 : 18
Girl 2 : 19
Girl 1 : 20
( Understand urself who can they be )

Archu : How sweet they r na ?
Anu : Who gave their share of food to others ?
Gayu : in 1 go ?
Rani : Nd above that doing sits up too ?
Liji : Where do we find such persons ?
Kanfi : We have two girls like that what’s de need to find more?

Vishu : 33
Amayaa : 51
Vishu : 67

Nivi : Do properly babes ?
Nilash : U both silly girls forgot counting too ?

Amayaa : 99
Vishu : 100
Amayaa : 101

Vishu nd Amayaa sit on de floor ??
Aastha : Have ur share of share girls ?
Anu , Liji , Archu , Rani , Chavi ( The five pandavs ) : Happy lunch ?
Amayaa : So much injustice with this little girl ?
Vishu : U r not alone Ammu
Here I m to accompany u ?



Amayaa : So guys here we r to make charges stick to their correct position ?
Shab : Let’s do it ?
Vivikhta : Means ????
Akriti : No idea girls ?
Surbhi : I m thinking how to classify pkj nd on which basis ?

Kanfi : On de basis of location ???
Arpita : Kashmir?vs. Kanyakumari ☺
Kiki : On de basis of age
Annie : Chota bheem? vs. Chacha Chodhary ?
Meenu : On de basis of likes
Pushpa : Cation⬅vs. Anion ➡

Liji : Anion ????
Shab : The ion which revolves around sweet nature of Anikaa ?
Lax : Cation ????
Shurbhi : The ion which revolves around catty eyes of Shivu ?

Riddhi : Nd What’s for my Ommi ?
Maahi : poor my Omki always left behind ?
Riddhi : He is my Ommi ?
Maahi : He is my Omki ?

Pushpa : Hiii I m belong to cation ?
Arpita : Hllo I m from anion?
Pushpa : Friends ???☺
Arpita : Best friends ?

Vivikhta : So guyss now it’s proved which our physics teacher teaches is correctly right ??
Amayaa : Like charges repel each other while unlike charges attract each other ??

Junior Khannu : Madams I got a message from guard few peoples r coming to pkj mansion?
Archu , Rani : okkkk okkkk we’ll see ?
Anu : Let’s go ?
Liji : Whom they may be ?
Nivi : Any guesses?
Lax : May be obros esp. Ommi right Riddhi ?
Riddhi : No hopes girlsss ?
Aastha : Let’s see who r they ?

Everyone go to de main entrance gate nd find none ??
Swathi : What’s this JK ????? ?
Kanfi : No one here ?
Liji : Oyye !!! Who shouted on my junior khannu ?
Anu : Ya Ya never try to do so in presence of Liji?
Surbhi : In absence too ?

Then only a scooty with de highest speed seems coming near them ?
All de pairs of eyes look in one direction nd be numb ?
Gayu : What is this girls ????
Anu : No idea ☺
Nilash : Then get an idea sir ji ?
Rani : Look forward?
Archu : Don’t shout girls ?
Nivi : It may create a rift ?
Lax : But who cares ?
Aastha : Girls pinch me ?
Vivikhta : Okayyy ?
Amayaa : As u say rockstar ?

Vivikhta nd Amayaa together pinched hard
Nivi : Ouch Ouch Ouch ?
Lax : Aau Aau Aau ?
Nivi nd lax : What’s this ?
Nilash nd Annie : It’s called pinch dears ?
Archu : Guysss look who r before us nd give some preference them too ?
Liji : Otherwise de gr8 business tycoon will feel bad?

There on a yellow scooty a girl?who is looking stunning was sitting on de front nd a handsome guyyy ?back to her cuddling her
They r one nd only SHIVIKA ?
Then a sound came from back of someone’s falling ?
Everyone moves back nd they in 1 go : Pushpa ?
PKJ members get worried nd getting try to wake her up
Pushpa get conscious ?
Pushpa : Shivay ☺
Shivay : Here I m pushpa ….. only for u ?
Surbhi , Shab , Annie : Really ?
Shivay : For u all girls ?
Anika : Flirting with my Billu before me
OKKKkk u all permitted ??
Shivay : So where r my sisters ????

Lax : Lo shuru ho gai PHULON KA TARO KA ?
Aastha coming forward nd by pulling ammu : We r here Shivay bhaiya ?
Shivay : My shield nd my weapon?
Anika : Anyone else
Shivay is all set to sing de song for his sisters ?
Left others : No no-one left ?
Swathi : We all r pagal here but they r our captain?
Kanfi : Who wants to be a SISTER of u in dis universe ?
Lax : Now please do mercy on us ?
Get ur weapon back ?

Amayaa : Come let’s meet with them
They r de 1 who r eager to meet u ?
TU friends forever , Nikita , Zaveesha , Alekhika, Shraddha , AB , Snehal , Ananya , Banita , UF , Shagun , Sagithya , Chaithu , Sulu ,
Shivay : Oooo wow so what’s up guyyssss
All get unconsciousness ??
Amayaa : Today is de day of unconsciousity ?
All get conscious one by one nd started enjoying ?
Aastha : Is de OBEROI group of industry have some stock shock bhaiya ( asked de worried sissy )?
Shivay : Nope ?

Archu : Is all de damn luxury cars of Oberoi got vanished together?
Shivay : Off course not ?
Harika : Did THE GREAT SHIVAY SINGH OBEROI wanna enjoy champa ride ?
Rani : Or did that great guyyy lost any bet ?
Anika : Harika’s point with slight change nd
Rani ‘s change with slight point ?
Liji : Change with slight point? ????
Anika : Whatever ?

Anika : Guysss this is not an end
Many peoples r yet to come ?
Then they hear some noice of bullock ?
Everyone is going towards de entrance nd Riddhi, Maahi first to go ?

Dharaam Dharaam ??
Everyone came nd saw two girlsss unconscious ?
Amayaa : Is today any day of unconsciousness ?
Surbhi : It seems so ?
Shab : Who wanna next ?
Nivi : If I try then also I’ll not ?
Please someone teach me this creativeness ?

They all look forward
A bullockcart is shown ?
A smart guyyy? on de riding seat nd a beautiful girl?on de cart
That’s one nd only RIKARA?

Om : Did u enjoyed patni parmeshwar?
Gauri : yup ?
Nivi : Om So sweet of u always talk with her like this only ?
Om : Ur wish my command madam ?
Lax : Awwww ?
Shivay : Is not this word used so many times in a day ?
Lax : Learn something from ur younger bro ?
Aastha : Lax u r forgetting he is de king of romance ( Shield mode is on ) ?
Amayaa : Nd have de largest no. of hugs nd handkisses till today ( Weapon get ready )?
Archu : Ooo Hllo that r not sufficient ?
Mouni : We r waiting for becoming red due to blush don’t know from how many century ?
Anu : Anika this blush lesson is for u too darling ?
Anika : Okkkk okkkk guys but where is Rudra ?
He didn’t came yet ( Responsible bhabhi asked )

Amayaa nd her monkey gang?went to pick someone
Gauri : Does we have to stand here only ?
Arpita : This is our rituals to stand on de gate ?
Nilash : Can anyone pay attention to these two unconscious girl ?
Harika : Take them to de hall ?
Om : Lemme help u ?

Om in middle giving support to Riddhi nd Maahi
They get conscious but seeing themselves in Om’s so near again went to de dreamy land ❤❤
Here it comes de dramebaaz of Oberois?with
dramebaaz of pkj ?
One nd only Rudra ?
Nivi comes forward
Nivi : So U Ru now i m gonna file complain against u with de law 999 ?
Rudra : y r u sounding like Bhavya ?
Ammu : U know bhaiya she is her favourite ?
Vishu : Favourite ??? ?
Nivi : Ammu according to de latest report of F.A.L.T.U. University if u tharase a girl like this u urself may gonna bear de consequences ??
Nd u Ru baby y de hell u gave that lady witch place in OM nd in ur life ?
Amayaa : Di only ladies can be a witch then y lady witch ??
Everyone except Oberois : Shut up Ammu?
Rudra in shivom ‘s ear : R they copying us or we copying them ??


Amayaa holding Liji nd Anu : I m all set to hold u both as precisely u duo too gonna fall ?
Nivi holding watergun nd aiming : Don’t need to bid bye to anyone no-one like u here ?

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  1. Nikita_jai29

    It is mind blowing dear…. I am getting conscious now

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u niki di
      All de one who commented on prev. episode ‘s name is written at last
      That’s why
      Nd it already became too long
      So adjust in it
      Next one will have dialogue of urs


    Dear Amayaa
    Thank You For Making My Entry.But Agar Iss Main RuVya Hai Tho Mujhe PKJ Mansion Main Nahi Rehna.I Want RuMya.Agar Bhavya Iss Main Hogi Tho Koi Problem Nahi,But Please Make RuMya Couple.Mujhe ShivOmRu And ShivIka,OmRi,RuMya,AniRiYa Ki Saath Ek Scene Dena Okay And Ya Dialogue Bhi??
    God Job Amayaa???Keep It Up?

    Take Care?

    1. Amayaa


      Welcome dr …..Nd be relaxed ….. It’s not a story of any couple ……
      So no Ruvya or Rumya ….. it’s just a fictional meet of pkj nd Oberois
      Here we can chat with them nd convey our feelings …….
      Tumne last para Mark nahi kiya
      Nivi di was asking Ru to leave bhavya …..
      Nd de next part will have a lot of drama nd mainly ur wish will gonna fulfil

      Isme bhavya hogi zarror but wah khud roegi mai yaha kyon hu
      Oookkk done next part have ur dialogue too


  3. I’m in cation club omgggg ??????
    Kya funny ff that yaar u just nailed it Ammu completely I loved it mainly I’m. Shouting really @shivaay truee I would have done the same if it was me ??u know me ri8

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u Shab
      I m glad kisi ko to sahi laga
      I know all my close friends nd sisies very well in which u r de one
      But I m not that close to them
      I only know how much I LoveD them

      But leave all this
      Luv uu madrassan ?? as always as them whatever happen

  4. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u so Much dr
      I m pleased that u liked it ??

  5. Shraddha-DBO

    Amazing, yaar thanks for giving me a chance to see Shivika?
    Ya even I became unconscious, waiting for next entry?

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u nd welcome both
      Thanks for reading it nd welcome for that thank u which u said
      Hahahahha sorry shra for making unconscious u but I added u few at de end just thought to make entry of them who gave their precious time to my ff
      Nd de part was already became too long that’s why
      But if chance next part will publish then u have definitely dialogues too ☺☺☺ Thanks again

      1. Shraddha-DBO

        Just love u Amaya, u r too cute???

  6. Hahaaha…..Amaaya it was so funny??? ……amazing write up dear….bt next give me too an entry….m also a chotu sa member of this grp??….

    Btw….it was awsum???

    1. Amayaa

      Oooo sure aayushi
      If I write de next part it will have u too
      Nd thank u for reading it. …..
      Nd no-one has more or less impo member
      U r as equal as me

      Thank u again ???

  7. AnuluvsIB

    Ammu… jhok as entry in scooty and cart!! Ek dum mast!!
    Tosay nivis dialogs were bang on…! Faltu universities stats report and asking om to be sweet to Gauri!! Lol.. sooo nivi..

    Oye!! Who is coming via chopper???! Me m liji unconscious??! ???? can’t wait ?????

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u Anu di ???
      See how well I know everyone but failed to get that same love from others but it’s OKKKkk
      Leave it

      It’s mystery
      Will reveal in de next part if I could able to write it in words nd have de enough patience nd courage to post it
      Nd till then think who can he be whom seeing u nd Liji di may gonna fall nd if u get it keep secrete

      1. AnuluvsIB

        Oi! Tell me who isn’t giving u enuf love! Ek jhaamp me deewar pe sata denge!

  8. AnuluvsIB

    And Pushpa felling unconscious.. also ridhi vs Maahi my om my om ????

    1. Riddhima

      Anu …

      My om .only mine …

  9. Riddhima

    Amu …
    I am unconscious when my om is next to me … How is this possible …. And
    Amu I though only shivomru ???? is coming ….
    I liked you and vishu’s sit ups haha ??????????? lol …high level …

    He is my om ???? …Mahi ??????

    Shut up amu was high light ..and Rudy’s final dialogue was the final touch …

    On the whole very hilarious and awesome one .. Keep going …

    Waiting for the next one …. Amu …

    1. Amayaa

      Oooo sorry yaar
      But don’t worry next one will have ur nd ur Ommi convo
      So it’s a gift na
      Shivomru + Aniri
      Nd next part will have a lot +++

      Thank u di …….. ???……. Luv u

      That will be think later ???…….

      1. Riddhima

        Amu .,…

        Waiting yaar ….


  10. Archisha

    I know I am not that but I will will consider myself Archu only as it is my nick name??. Sorry Archiya di but we can do share a character na ??. Just kidding. It was awesome ?

    1. Amayaa

      So cool u r
      Thank u dr junior ARCHU for liking it
      Nd ask Senior ARCHU to fulfil ur wish ……I can’t do anything in btw

  11. Anitaaa3

    Very nice ff Amaya

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u Annie ???
      I hope u liked that one word dialogue of urs REALLY de most

      1. Anitaaa3

        Ya liked very much..Can you make my as Anita??

  12. Kiki

    Hahaha Amu….
    Khidhkitod update. …. ???
    Waiting for the next update ya.. update soon

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u dr kiki
      When de next part will get update. …..Or updated or not…..I too don’t know
      but hope for de best

  13. First a bigg thnk u 4 add me pkj mension dr…. Nd a tight bigggg hugg to my dr frnds nd sweet siss….
    Awww!!! Ammu u me made unconscious…..Btw if shivika came like this infront me i’m surely unconscious….
    Are yr kya khidkitode entry dia hain tumne SHIVIKA nd OMRI ka….
    Seriously SHUT UP AMMU….
    Chopper main kon aaraha hain kahni khannaji toh nahi….

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u dr banny ( Hope u don’t have any prob. in banny )
      A hug to u too
      U r de 1st to be happy with ur unconsciousness
      Anyone can be that ???
      Darwajator entry to abhi baaki hai
      Hahahahaha i already made my mouth shut

      It’s mystery dr think think but if u get it then keep as secrete

      1. Aastha_Reddy

        Hey I already renamed Banita as Bunny. (bhaiyya tadi style).

      2. Ammu dr i don’t think in my life any of my frnds call me banita…
        Neither my scl clg frnd nor here…. Asthu di already renamed me as bunny…. I think main apna naam hi change kr deti hun….

      3. Btw i think bunny is sound good then banita….

  14. Amaaya…superb dear.I really enjoyed.If I really met my shivika this was my reaction turn to unconscious..especially when my shivaay bhaiya stand infort of me
    Like it sooo much waiting for next chap wish i become consious.AMMU…. I want to take selfie with my bhaiyaa

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u Sulu
      Hahaha but don’t worry I will get u out of ur unconsciousness
      Nd ur bhaiya too
      So me nd Astha di is not only crazy about our bhaiya
      Off course
      Indirectly u gave me a brilliant idea
      THANK YOU ?????

      1. Ammu…. he is my bhaiya also.It’s my one of the dream to meet him but their is no hope.But happy i meet him in ur ff.And ammu its secret while taking selfie plz make me stand near i mean beside my bhaiya if astha knows she will fire me(just 4 a fun)
        Plz update next epi very soon dear…….

  15. Aastha_Reddy

    NAMASKARAM….(I am copy cat with sarcasm)!!!!
    I am on duty mam. I saw it but then my battery ..I mean mobile ka death hogaya. but seriously I need some my type dialogue not this chipku cheesy dialogue. #Shield mode on Aastha.
    God save my Shivaay bhaiyya’s precious ear from this AIR channel.
    Ishqbaazon ki sawaari…Ishqbaaz ki safar…

    1. Amayaa

      If u r a penny more then I m not a penny less ( just stole this line from SB’s one of de comments )
      That’s better my client . It’s oookkk no prob. I was not expecting ur comment like I was with rest of pkj
      So it’s a wonderful gift for me
      Omg see this girl …… had so many dialogues of her but now she wants her type dialogue
      Here many peoples r asking to give a single dialogue too but she
      Nd from when he becomes YOUR BHAIYA only
      Pkj ki sawari. …… Pkj ka safar …….

      1. Aastha_Reddy

        OK meri Maa…”OUR” SHIVAAY BHAIYYA. Now Happy??? You have portrayed others role so well but mine all cheesy so only I complained. Haq hai mera.
        #Takkar ke sisterbaazi.

  16. LAX

    Hats off to your hard work darling. Distributing the dialogues, use of emoji n all were perfect.
    I had a good laugh. It was fun read.
    CATion matlab Bagad Billa ion n Anion means Annika ion..!! Waah.
    Shield mode on..!! Lol..!! ??
    Pushpa fainting was the best part.
    Amaaya n her vanar Sena tho cha gaye Guru..!!

    Sorry to comment late. It slipped from my mind actually. Cheer up now. Hugs to you ?‍❤‍??‍❤‍? Please do go for the next part.

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u didu …..ur comment means a lot di …..
      First that 2 words THANK U was due to my red red angry tomato face
      ( imagine urself )
      My only wish is to make u all laugh heartedly
      Yup de new club it is ….. I know i know in which club u r
      The pretty pout anion club
      Hahahahaha Ya for me too that was an epic
      Hugs to u too didu

  17. Kanfi

    Aamu yr just fabulous???
    I was laughing throughout…??
    Xctly sso ko bhai kon bnayega??
    N that Ru’s dialogue we r copying then or they are copying us??
    N hats off to u…khud ki ff me khud ko hi troll kr rhi ho??
    Mzaaaa agya…
    All the best for next

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u Kanfi
      SSO ko Bhai kon banaega …….Only me nd Aastha di r such pagals
      Don’t laugh
      U too r de one but not in this category
      Off course they r copying us

      That’s why I m from pkj
      Thank u again ??

  18. Zaveesha

    Wowwww I meet SSO…thank u soo much amaya…it was amazing…now I’m consious…

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u zavee
      Get conscious get conscious

  19. Swathi..

    Hey ammu yeh ho kya raha hai? Sab pkj unconscious??? Agar sabko Aisa behosh karogi toh kaise chalega? Tumhe hi sab kuch karna padega aage. Doctor Ko rakho next episode mein pkj Mansion keliye ek special doctor dhundke Lana waiting for next chapter amaya. And those Rudy’s dailogs ??? keep writing like this ammu.

  20. Nilash

    Amayaa mere ff me mera hi itna kam dialogue??? ???? Saddy Singh Oberoi bana diya tune mujhe
    Chal koi na aur sabko bhi to mauka milna chahiye
    Didi-Jiju ki entry Khidkitod
    Gauri didi-Om jiju ki entry Bullock carttod
    Waahhh kya nirmaan kiya hai mere ff ka
    Ab jaldi se dusra part likhna shuru kar warna………..
    Fill in the blanks
    Sabne itna achha comment kiya hai sorry for my boring comment
    And deals apart Sorry kal kuch zyada tang kar rhi thi tujhe please uske liye maaf kar Dena I was just kidding that you also know but phir bhi.
    Love you?????
    Amazing journey

  21. hehe..super amaya…??

    1. Amayaa

      Thank u Ros ???

  22. Radhika.k

    Hi amayaa!!!First time covo n first time comment on ur FF!!!
    FF was superb,mind-blowing n well-written dear!!!
    Loved the khidkithod starting…….Punishment in the dining hall….samne khana hai….n ur unable to eat…..
    Asthu dii toh ek dum maza le rahi……Sheild mode needed more….
    Cation or anion?????well, i am on the cation side….
    Riddhi n maahi fighting omki mera hai……..two correct ppl u have chosen!!!
    Pushpa n arpita’s frndship was nice…..
    Loved shivika’s entry in champa(scooty),rikara’s entry in bullock cart….bichara rudy ka bhi koi acha entry ho jata……….but aate hi nivi going n asking abt her fav.bhavya……hehehe…..i knw how much she hates that “green wali aankhen” ladki!!
    PHULON KA TAR………again was lol!!!
    PKJ mein sab behosh………besides loving their resp.fav actors…….u had mentioned abt shivay as bhaiya……that was nice!!!
    But i loved pushpa’s unconscious scene all the more……………behosh hui,got up n then started flirting…….I loved lax’s performance also…
    Sach mein i love this pkj group!!
    U guys r awesome!!
    Post the next part soon……

    1. Amayaa

      Hllo radhika !!! Ya first time but don’t worry it will not become de last time THANK U dr for reading nd appreciating my ff
      Hmmm samne khanna but can’t eat is de worst thing ever nd that too when u r so hungry
      Oooo so u r cation ( wink wink )
      Ya they r like them …… deewani of Ommi
      Champa ride nd bullock visit ??? I thought to give Ru too a proper entry but unable to think that
      Along with her we too hate her de most but she has de right to scold her de most
      Awwwwww so sweet of u
      I will try to do so asap
      Nd Ya #pkjlovesib ??

  23. TUFriendsForever

    I am a cationnnnn even though I hate science first time liked the concept of cation n anion.Ohh godddd studious girl ha.Opposites attract Ohh goddd
    This one made me laugh till my stomach started aching ????? Ohhh godddd
    Food scene Ohh goddd bichari author.oh my maata of yourself
    Kanfi di u seem the intelligent here too???
    N Shaba ki bacchi Naan Ella epilayum comment pannuvean
    Shivika’s entry awesomeeee
    Literally Pushpa di fainted??? i always find her posting nakuul pic on her wall
    I am a biggggg fan of nakuul mera Bhai ????? kanfi di all can’t make him bhai but I already did.
    Shield mode was just awesomeee
    N all fainting for there fav actors
    Riff in mahi part was too good.those fighting??? n then I loved the fainting more.I found many flirting Shivaay wah wahhh
    Really good use of awww n blush lesson
    Good entry of shivika in champa n rikara in bullock cart.I thought Rudra will have a great entry.but it was good too.
    Nivi adoring her fav bhavya that was sooo good ????
    I really liked the way u made the use of emoji’s sooo good
    So for that all these R for u
    ??????☕️???????????????????????? but don’t lick your lappy or phone????
    N I met nakul ohhhh godddd I was literally rubbing my eyes whether I am seeing correct or wrong n I pinched myself like u guys did.The pinch thing was too goo.
    N last shut up superbbbbbb
    No body is copying no one.
    We all R part of IB Na without us there is no show.
    Nice one
    Post the next one asap
    Keep writing n keep making us laugh like this

  24. Gayathri.visu

    Ammu babyyyyyyyyyyy…….! Trust me dear this is fourth time, I m reading this part! Yest full night I cried. But today again ur ff makes me laugh! Thank u soooooooo much Ammu baby for making me laugh….(bone crushing hug to u dear)
    OMM!!! What do u done with our PKJ?? All
    are unconscious….! And esp I loved Pushpa, Riddhi n PKJ’s Omkaraji’s unconscious state……lol! And Riddhi’s expressions……oh god! And Arpita n Push’s friendship….awww! Anu, Liji di, Rani di, Chavi di, Archu di….Panchapandavas of PKJ, well said dear! Rikara’s entry… seriously Bullock Cart…..yaar u r too….3 4 5……much crazy! Ash(Nilu)’s dialogue…”can anyone pay……..” n Harika di’s ans, perfect timing yaar! SSO’s siso club is in full form…..ha ha ha! And finally Nivi’s scolding session….correct questions! Even I too have dialogues….yayyyyy! Anion n Cation…..Ammu baby, u proved that u r a very good science student!! Sorry for very late comment dear. Waiting for next part Ammuuuuuu!!!

    1. Amayaa

      Awwww that’s so sweet gayu di
      Y did u cried that day
      Study pressure or work load …… don’t cry di from next time
      Nd i m glad that this ff is able to make u laugh whole heartedly
      Nd heyyyyy leave me otherwise my bone will crushed down
      Hahahhaha Ya most of them r but u not so feel relax
      ????Ya that was really a hillarious part
      Ya friendship btw opposite charges
      Thank u thank u overall di
      Sorry for even more late reply
      I will upload as soon as I can

      1. Gayathri.visu

        Due to some study pressure I cried a lot dear, but next time I won’t….ok!! And don’t worry I won’t crush ur bones….so chill…hehehe! Yeah, u r right….I didn’t faint..! Btw, forgot to mention…emoji’s are perfect! Khidkitod perfect!!! And last SHUT UP AMMU…..HEHEHEHEHEHE, highlight dialogue!!

  25. Surbhi Sharma

    Woww . Kitna makhan lagayi apne app pe ha . Koi nahi .
    Waiting for next . Encounter . ???don’t tell me it’s with water gun . ???
    Jaldi post karna .pleej .

    1. Amayaa

      Buttering to banti hai Shubbu
      Hahahahaha wait for it
      With water gun
      Okkkk I’ll think about it
      #water gun #revolver #ur favourite’s head
      I’ll try my best to post as soon as possible

  26. Vivikhta

    So……finally read the2 parts….
    Woooaaah Amayaaaaaaa
    This is me…..r u planning on sending me to the asylum right now?
    Yaar abhi mai pagal ghoshit ho jaane ke liye bahut choti..but wait,who am i kidding here……mai to already paagal hoon…tabhi to is sweet, awesome, funny wonderful beautiful cute hilarious khidkitod darwazatod chhat tod ghartod funnybone-tod amazing cool superb excellent outstanding badhiya dhamakedaar grand uplifting relaxing stress buster mast humorous playful entertaining jolly cleverly written fantastic extraordinary exceptional ff mei mai hoon…(aur adjectives nahi hai mere paas??)

    Yaar pichle part me mere paas dialogs nahi the..and i was half ready to attack u..jk….(just kidding)..but u totes made up with this part…hum dono sach me partner in crime hai na?
    Bechaari nivi di aur lax di…..unse kehna dawaiyan khaale…bahut zyada tez hi hum doono ne nahi pinch kiya?!?
    I wud so do this in real life…aur waah..waah..u ssly understand every tu member so well..
    All the dialogs were bang bang and spot on…aur aaj ki highlight to definitely Nivi di hain..F.A.L.T.U. university????
    Unhone hum sab ke man ki baat cheen li..bhavya..hun…aur waiseNilash di sahi thi..shaitaan hi ho tum…matlab apne ff me apni hi tarafdaari?
    Saari limelight cheen li….Aur tumhari..sorry, sorry, humari vnar sena ne kya mast entry ki..matlab Rudy’s last dialog was damn creative ingenious and awesoem..It was out of thus,na,out of this universe..
    And shut up Ammu was too cute and nice…
    Tu bilkul Ru ki tarah baat kar rahi thi..
    And haan…aaj to din hi behoshi ka tha…
    Everyone fainted..but kaun nahi faint karega if The aweosme and insanely handsome SSO is in front of your eyes..and ssly..sso ko brother kaun banayega..tere jaise pagal…ha ha ..
    And mahi di and riddhi di’s tiff over omie was om..sautanbaaz…but its the good kind..
    Evry part was awesome….
    And anika is such a coool wifey..apne pati ko apne saamne hi flirt karne ki izzazat de rahi thi…Pushpa di willb indebted to her forever..
    All in all it was aweosme..a roller coaster ride i tell more exciting and thrilling than that….
    And haan..waise never took u for such a studiius girl haan?(wink wink)
    Cat ion and anion..waah waah.Waise that physucs teacher dialog u gave me is so me..
    Fun fact about myself: i am a damn studious person…i mean i am inclined towards friends and classmates call me a nerd??and walking talking dictionary cum encyclopedia…
    so these kinda dialogs r so mee..
    !atlab we have invissibel never even told u and still u gave me my kind of dialog..
    Anyways..ab mere standards se bhi ye comment bahut lamba ho gaya hai…kyuki mai likhti chali jaa rhai hoon..whatever i write isn’t enuf to praise this ff..i have no waqt tera expression ye hoga????
    No words…ha ha ..itna likh daala aur ab ye paagal keh rahi hai no words..
    Aur haan..abhi maine teri wall dekhi..GOD..10 CGPA!!
    Congooooo..i kniw am latr..but still…..all the best for your future..

    Love,Vivkhta aka Fm 92.6??
    P.S. I can guess who is coming next part….and i warn u..gangaram karne wala aa raha hai..tho along with liji di and anu di..i want dialogs too huh..#mahimaniacs
    #hardcore ..aaj mere pass dialogs the..lekin jitne ek AIR part 2 ke paas hone chahiye utne dil mange moooooree..
    I want top class interactions with ma..oh sorry suspense..suspense.
    Warna…..warning of a true blue pkj and mahimaniac..
    P.P.S. Amu..sorryfor being late..but hope this loong coment makes up for it..and hey..down to bilkulmat feel karna..and as u said in hangy…if tune is ff ko discontinue karne ki sochi bhi na, to teri gangaram karoongi..seedha kochin se delhi aayegi meri chamki…batari hoon..han…u r an amazing writer..yaad rakhiyo…

  27. Amayaa

    Vivu all de replies after this impo notice
    R u became totally crazy while writing dis comment
    I m very well known aware from where we belong RADIO CHANNELS
    But ur comment is more looking like an OS
    Ya Ya I know u r all set to prove urself a crazy mental insane girl

    Step by step reply on ur comment
    So u read de 1st part now. …whoaaaa Vivikhta
    Ya it all pre planned baby now u have to shift from Cochin to Agra
    Ur name get registered soon there
    Heyyyyyy u miss madam whoever u r already an official pagal
    Nd that’s de reason of ur membership in dis ff
    I m not gonna use all ur above mentioned adjectives again so understand urself

    Madam jab Maine last part likha tha to Aapka koi atta patta nahi tha
    Vo to mai itni gr8 hu ki aapko add kar liya
    ( I m expecting a chamki here )
    Off course that’s we r – crime partner
    Hahahahhahhah that’s a hilarious part ……Poor NIVIdon nd DIDU
    I didn’t understand every TU member but I well known understand every PkJ member
    Nd i know what’s expression will be of whom nd who do what in dis situation. ……
    Ya we all hate bhavya but Nivi di does most so that is for her
    Nd what do u wanna say I M KINDA A SHAITAAN
    So for ur kind info THAT’S I M ??
    Aur nahi to kya Amayaa wanna something biggggg
    Bilkul FF mera , LABOUR meri , BRAIN mera
    To focus teri hogi ?? if I m de head of de gang then u r tail
    The two pole of de magnet
    Dekh le Maine apni bhi kam pappu nahi banai
    Sitsup , shut up nd many more
    Mai Ru hi to hu pkj ki
    Unconsciousness day that was …….
    Ek 8th stand. Student ab mere bhaiya se flirt karegi. … poor bhabhi. …..
    Pagal vo to official hu ….Ya a super rift btw two deewani ….
    Yup yup she is a way more cool but only for pkj nd esp. Pushpa di
    Not for that nagini / yuckini
    Hahaha pushpa di flattered over her now too
    Thank u thank u ( coughing nd clearing de throat )
    Don’t wink much …… Cochin is in India only … need of any kinda visa or passport
    Nd i never visit Cochin too so it’s my heartily wish to travel there
    It will take no time for me to come there nd if nd only if I supposed to be come then u urself thought what will gonna happen with u
    So miss BIG FM be aware ( an open challenge )
    I know u very well vivu ……. u r a studious student nd that’s why I gave that dialo to u
    Nd there is no many diff. in us nd esp. In talking flawlessly nd study
    I m like that too
    Nd special mention of physics because I like physics a lot
    Nd de reason of my closeness towards physics is my first love ever my maths ……. physics is full of maths that’s why being a medical student my phy. Is not poor like majorious medi. Students
    I chosed medical as my career but Maths will always in my heart nd brain …….. OKKKkk OKKKkk much more description is given ……

    Nd i have an invisible connection with all of u …..???
    THANK U ……. 10CGPA. …….

    Love,Amayaa aka AIR
    P.s. Shut ur mouth up #Maahimaniacs
    Nd leave de courtesy for de next part …..otherwise all de excitement go in vain …..
    OKKKkk I’ll think about dialo giving to u with him ……
    But not sure ???
    I’ll gonna murder u miss whatever??….remember u r BIG FM
    y r u hell bent 2 take my name
    Here only I m AIR …… warning. ….. don’t repeat from next time ??
    Warning from de sis of SHIVAY SINGH OBEROI

    P.P.s. double triple maked up it ….
    Nd sorry from my side too to reply late …..
    Weekend classes u know ??…
    Nd baby that was just de part of my innocence …… is it possible that Amayaa felt bad……kuch bhi. ….
    OKKKkk OKKKkk I’ll not drop it suddenly nd give it a proper ending
    Thank u thank u ??

    Now this is like a reply of AIR to de comment of FM
    If u r a penny more than I m not a penny less ( from SB one of comments which I like de most ) …..
    Luvvv uuuu KARNIKA ???

  28. HII Amaaya
    m very late commt.kasie baati ki keya ff likh tum
    so beautiful,wonderful
    poor shivaay bhiya shabko behosh kar

    1. Amayaa

      Ya bechare San behosh ho gaye

  29. Sorry sorry very late commt year.nose pakdar ka mafi magtho.

    1. Amayaa

      Hllo AB
      It’s oookkk u read it nd that is enough for me
      Hug 2 u 2 nd u 2 take care of urself too

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