Piya rangrezz (a hate to love story) epi 20

HEY GUYS…THNK U FOR ALL UR COMMENTS…

HI SHANAYA…LISTEN TO ME…SABA POSTED SWASAN FF BUT ONLY UPTO EPI 16 AND SHE STOPPED WRITING…SHE LEFT EVEN BEFORE THE MID OF STORY…AND I M WRITING THE STORY ON MY OWN…AS FOR SWASAN FF WHICH U R TALKING ABOUT WAS A STORY TAKEN FROM NOVEL AND IT IS ALSO FROM THE SAME NOVEL BUT WITH A LITTLE CHANGES…AND EVEN IT IS A HOLLYWOOD MOVIE STORY…WHICH I HAVE READ AND WATCHED…ITS UPTO U THAT U FIND IT WORTHY OR NOT AS I AM WRITING ON MY OWN….WISH SABA WOULDNT HAVE STOPPED THEN U WOULDNT HAVE COMPLAINED…IF U R NOT LIKING IT I WONT FORCE U TO READ OR COMMENT BUT AT LEAST U HAVE NO RIGHT TO BASH …. KINDLY FORGIVE ME IF IT HURT YIU BUT I HAD TO CLEAR UR MISUNDERSTANDING…….

RECAP: sher finds that shraddha knows his truth

TODAY:

shraddha goes to room and panicks
shraddha:damn u shraddha,,,what was the need to open ur mouth?but wts my fault…he just tricked me…ahan,,,wt do i do?
she goes to bed and pretends to sleep
after half an hour sher comes there and she still is pretending .
shraddha thinks he will again be rude but instead sher sits by her side,holds her hand and kisses her forehead
sher:open ur eyes i know u are awake
shraddha opens her eyes
sher half leans on bed and shraddha hugs him and he caresses her hair

shraddha:i thought u would be angry on me
sher;no i m not
shraddha:really?
sher:hmm
shraddha:and akira
sher:shraddha…if u wanted to know about my past then u should have asked me
shraddha:u were already so tensed so…
sher:its not fair shraddha…u r my wife u should have asked me…
shraddha:did u ever give me a wife’s right?
sher:wt do u mean?i give everything to u shraddha
shraddha:no sher…i still feel incomplete bcz i want u
sher:shraddha ….i m hollow man,,,i cant give u anything
shraddha keeps her finger on his lips
shraddha:sshhh….will u give me some promises?
sher:what?

shraddha:promise me that u will nver leave me…promise me that u will stay with me till the end just the way u r….promise me no other woman will take place in ur life except me….promise me that…

sher sees shraddha’s tears and becomes emotional and before she could say further he places his lips on hers and kisses her immensely and she too responds back

they depart
sher:al promises accepted
shraddha hugs him
shraddha holds his hand and starts playing with his fingers

YEH MOH MOH K DHAAGE
TERI UNGLIYON SE JA ULJHE
KOI H TOH NA LAGE
KIS TRHA GIRHA YE SULJHE
HAI ROM ROM IK TARA
JO BADLAUN MEIN SE GUZRE

YE MOH MOH K DHAGE
REI UNGLIYON SE JA ULJHE
KOI TOH TOH NA LAGE
KIS TRHA GIRHA YE SULJHE……

sher kisses her fingers and feels them and shraddha shuts her eyes.they have an eyelock.sher keeps his other hand on her waist and shraddha kisses him on cheek by one side cupping his face and sher shuts his eyes.he makes her lie properly and caresses her cheek and smiles.he romances her neck and bits it hard and she moans his name which drives him crazy and both make love by tucking themselves under blanket…..

next day both wake up and sher sees shraddha
sher thinks:again u made me lose my control….the more i try to keep distance the more i have ur hangover…

two days pass

at morning sher tells shraddha about the party
shraddha:ok
sher:what happened
shraddha:family?
sher:i have informed ur parents
shraddha:can i call someone too
sher:who?
shraddha:ur mom and mama ji
sher looks at her
sher:why
shradha:why can i?after all i m ur wife and i have a right too
sher smiles
sher:fine
#shraddha:really?
sher:yes
shraddha higs him
sher thinks:i know they will not come….they know i will lose my control if it happens…
sher leaves

at afternoon akira knocks at door
akira:shraddha i need help
shraddha:yeah?
akira:sher is not talking to me since two days as i told u his truth…oh God its been two days…wht do i do?
shraddha gives her water
shraddha:dont worry i will talk to him
akira:i know he wont agree,,,he is very egoistic and ziddi guy…
akira gives back the glass…….
akiraL:so he has to come now

shraddha:who?
akira:rony…
shraddha:rony?who is he
akira:my son…
shraddha is shocked
shraddha:u have a son?

akira:yes he is actually our son…rony is son of mine and sher

shraddha is hell shocked and drops the glass on floor….

next epi: shraddha is beaten

Credit to: angel

24 comments

  1. Shanaya

    Well she has completed her story.. but not on telly updates.. she has her own page named diaries for fantasy

  2. Shanaya

    But the ending of saba’s fanfiction is sad and painfull… i hope you are going to end it on a sweet note..

  3. Shanaya

    And one more thing… am reading this story again only bcoz of sher and shradha.. such a sweet couple ?

  4. Sam

    Hi… I like your ff but I also see that this is similar to Swasan path hate to love…. But I know that your views are different….. I hope you will make it more interesting….. And I think Rony is pet given by Sher to Akira … I like the plot of your ff… But I have read whole story of Swasan and at the end Sanskar committed suicide and Swara was pregnant with Sanskar’s child.. She got to know about her pregnancy after his death… I want to see sher and Sraddha’s parenthood…. I hope you will fulfil my wish…. I want to see happy ending with family……

  5. nanhi

    Amazing episode angel plz update soon.
    A little bit shocked that akira and sher’s son omg what will happened to sherdha 🙁
    Anyways the story is getting more more interesting waiting for next episode.

  6. Episode is nice…Shanaya nd Sam plz don’t say like this Angel is a very good ff writer no one can beat her….I think both of u r wrong yes may be some similarities are there but not accurate… Angel write it on her own not copied from others.

  7. aditi syam

    awesome yaar no words tos ay nd cn u plzzzz tell me which movie this is adapted plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  8. Prerana

    Mind blowing episode… ??
    OMG akiras n sher’s son… ??
    N why is shraddha beaten n by whom? Cant wait for the next episode.. Plz try to update it soon… As u did today thanks for updating so soon di… Plz try to update the next episode tomorrow

  9. Jazz

    Hello Angel…how are you..? Long time since we talked..!
    Well coming to the episode…I love the song…MERI MOH MOH KE DHAAGE..and ya the episode was really interesting,the twist and turns in this fan fiction keep me glued to it..can’t wait for the next one..!! Good Job..
    And do you watch Mann Mayal..?

  10. What a interesting track
    OMG. . . . . Akira & sher has son
    I can’t imagine this character with sher singh but very interesting & entertaining ff, story
    Love it . . . . . .
    By the way fantastic episode
    I hope you will update next episode very soon
    Can’t wait for next episode ?
    Please update next episode

  11. Mehreen islam

    Angle u r driving me crazy so many truth about sher how come he has a son????mind blank…plz update ur next ff soon dying to know the truth.

  12. what!!!!!!!!!!! sher has a boy baby !!!!!! sooooooo much shocked!!!!!!!!!

    sorry I didn’t comment in ur last ff …czs I was burning with fever …..sooooooo soooo sorry…

  13. RUMI

    the episode is very very very very very very nice. this ff has touched my heart. angel didi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tell me the name of the movie or the novel.

  14. Sam

    Angel ? dear I am sorry ?… If I have hurt you but trust me I never meant to hurt u…. I don’t say that you are copying…. I really appreciate your imagination and writing skills… I really love your ff .. I just want to say that I feel like it is similar to that ff … But you are different and your ff is different… I hope that you will understand my feelings… And Riya I am not wrong I said what is truth… I don’t want to hurt anyone… If I have hurt anyone of you by my comment…plz forgive me… And Angel ? baby plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon.. Can’t wait more…. Love you ? and stay blessed…

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