Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 6)

Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 6)
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GKB (Radha Rani): See… Jiji we all are there for him… Now sleep peacefully… ~GKB’s pov~ Thank god… Stupid Bengalan… Because of her I had to praise Ishwari’s parenting…
GKB walks out and looks shocked….
Ria is looking suspiciously at GKB…
GKB (Radha Rani): Arre Ria beti… What are you doing here? Trying to kill me by scaring? I am so young to die!
Ria: Nahi mami… I saw lights being on in ma’s room… So thought of checking…. How come you didn’t sleep mami?
GKB (Radha Rani): Isn’t this my house too? Should I ask jiji’s permission? I’ll go and ask her! ~Tries going to

Ishwari’s room~
Ria: Nahi nahi mami… You are misunderstanding me… I was concerned about ma… That’s all… I am sorry…
GKB (Radha Rani): I wanted to fill my jug with water… Saw lights being switched on in jiji’s room… So came! Nowadays, I can’t do anything good here…
Ria: Really? I will check ma…
GKB (Radha Rani): Are re… Wait… Look just now jiji slept! Want to disturb her? Talk to her tomorrow…
Ria: Okay no problem
GKB walks away…
Ria goes to her room

~Ria’s pov~ “See, Sona is so chalu… Dev kicked her out… But she’s trying to come here using you…” Mami… What does she have against Sona di? Ma has always been protective and slightly possessive about bhaiyya yes and hence her being slightly insecure makes sense… But why ma is so scared? Guess, ma would’ve been little insecure… But Mami would’ve increased it a lot by her comments… She used to do that with Neha di… At this point, I have to focus on getting bhaiyya’s happiness back… Today’s evening was evident…

Next day
Janmashtami day

~Dev’s home~
Ishwari: Kichu, all the preparations done? Where are the flowers? Is pooja’s thaal ready? I have to go mandir! Ask other servants to decorate the house by then….
Kichu: Ji malkin!
Ishwari: Aur haan, pack the sweets too… ~Ishwari’s pov~ Oh god… So much of work! Have to come back and do pooja… But first let me check on my Dev…

~Dev’s room~
Ishwari: Dev… Dev? Bed’s empty? Where did he go? Maybe, to bathe? ~Looks around~ Dev?
Dev comes back from balcony…
Dev: Ji ma… Sorry, I was on an important call…
Ishwari: Dev? Why are you all dressed up? The doctor told you to take rest na?
Dev: Work is work ma… I need to continue… You never stopped working when you were sick… I won’t either…
Ishwari: I am proud of you, beta… Will you drop me at the temple?
Dev: Okay ma… Come… I will tell the driver to pick u up later…
Dev slowly limps out… Ishwari looks at him and feels sad…

~Nikki’s room~
Nikki: Ria di… We should start our mission today! Let’s call Neha di home…
Ria: No… She’s married… if we keep calling her here, they might feel bad…
Nikki: Then we can visit her place! Let’s ask ma come…
Nikki and Ria come down…
Dev is climbing down the stairs slowly…
Nikki: Bhaiyya! Shouldn’t you be resting?
Dev: It’s alright… I am fine… Early morning, both of you got ready?
Ria: Bhaiyya, today you declared leave for all the employees… Any urgent work? Should I come to office?
Dev: Actually, I have meetings elsewhere… So… going out…
Nikki: Achcha ma, me Ria di planned to visit Neha di’s home… We will give her sweets for janmashtami…
Ishwari: But it isn’t proper… Going there without informing!
Mama and mami come down…
Mamaji: Don’t worry Ishwari… I have informed them… I will accompany them both…
GKB (Radha Rani): Hai hai… How come you didn’t tell me?
Mamaji: Go with Ishwari… She’s going to the temple alone…
GKB (Radha Rani): Achcha teek hai teek hai… ~GKB’s pov~ Now he has started hiding things from me! Anyhow, you will come home… Will see then!

~Neha’s home~
Neha’s mother in law: Come in … Come in… Happy janmashtami! We are so happy to see you all… Wow Nikki and Ria are looking so beautiful…
Nikki: Thank you, aunty! Here are the sweets… Ma sent especially for jiju! Don’t let Neha di eat them all…
Neha: That’s not fair… See mummyji… Ma loves him more than me!!! ~ Pouts~
Neha’s mother in law: It’s okay… You are my laadli… I will give you more sweets!!!
Neha: Yay!!!
Ria, Nikki and Mamaji smile
Neha’s mother in law: Good, you girls go spend time with Neha… I will look after Neha’s mamaji
Nikki: ~Pulls Neha’s arm~ Come di… We want to discuss so much with you!

~Neha’s room~
Neha: How come you guys are here?
Nikki: Why? Can’t we come to meet our jiju? Thought, anyhow we are meeting jiju… We will meet you… ~Nikki fans herself with her hand~
Neha looks angry
Ria: Nikki… Mazak, masti baad mein… First, let’s discuss why we came here… We can’t sit here all day… Sonner we begin, the better for bro…
Nikkki: Haan haan
Neha: Ria, what’s the matter?
Ria: Neha di… You know Dev bhaiyya broke up with Sona di… He did because he didn’t want to risk ma’s life… But he’s not okay di… He’s pretending that everything is normal… But he’s all broken from inside…
Nikki: Haan di… I didn’t think how serious it was, till last evening…
Neha: What happened last evening? Is everything okay?
Nikki: Remember our new family photo? It slipped out of bro’s hands… While trying to pick up the same, he has wounds in right hand… He even got hurt in one foot…
Neha: What? Is bhai fine? But that’s an accident…
Ria: Ya… But, looks like it happened because he was in deep thoughts… Pieces of glass were still stuck to the wounds and bandaged tightly – no reaction from bhaiyya… Even doctor commented on that… When mami told something about Sona di… He exploded… Don’t insult her…
Nikki: Bro always thought of our happiness first… Always has sacrificed… That’s why we want to give him his happiness…

But at the same time, we want to convince ma… She doesn’t know… We have to make her understand… Sona di is a nice girl… She will take care of bro nicely…

Neha: Hmmm… Big problem indeed ~Neha’s pov~ Nikki and Ria… How to tell you both… Ek nadaan aur nasamajh insaan ko phir bhi samja sakte hai… Lekin agar koi jaan buchkar nadaan aur nasamajh banana chahe, hum lakh koshish karlein… Hum kabhi kamiyabh nahi ho sakte! How to tell you both… Mom doesn’t hate Sona… If some other girl comes, even then it will be the same… Ma can’t share Dev bhai with any girl…
Ria: Neha di… Where are you lost?
Neha: Ya… I was just thinking… I understand… But what about ma’s health? What if she falls sick again?
Ria: That’s why we hesitated… But after seeing bhaiyya yesterday… We want to do something by which sanp bhi mar jaye aur laathi bhi na toote!
Nikki: And we need to hurry… Sona di might assume that bro doesn’t need her anymore and might move on… She loves our bro a real lot… But if her family insists, she might…
Neha: I don’t know guys…
Nikki: Neha di, we are not married yet… But you fee in love and married the guy of your choice… Don’t you think bro too deserves it? Have you ever imagined your life without jiju? Think, that’s what bro and Sona di are going through…
I cried so much when I saw siddu baby had to go away from his love in Hasee toh Phasee and almost married someone else! So painful it is!!!
Neha: Siddu baby?
Nikki: Siddharth Malhotra di!!!
Neha: Nikki!!! That’s a movie…. This is the real life…
Nikki: So what di? Whatever happens in real life, that’s what they show!!! Neha di… Let’s help Dev bhaiyya… Mission Devakshi!

Neha: ~Neha’s pov~ What if ma had or bro hadn’t allowed me to marry Ranvir? Can I be without Ranbir? What if I had to move on? Never… I couldn’t have found someone better than Ranvir… The very thought scares me… I can never see him with some other girl… Ranvir is mine… Only mine… Nikki… You are right… I can’t even imagine what bro is undergoing now… I am in!
Ria: Awesome!!! Now we have to plan…
Neha: I have an idea… But we have to include my family too… I mean my mom in law and Ranvir…
Ria: Is it needed? Can’t we do by ourselves?
Ranvir comes in
Ranvir: Mom told that my fave saalis have come… Here you are! What are you girls planning?? Won’t you tell me? What’s the idea you talking about Neha?
Neha smiles seeing Ranvir and goes to him… Whispers everything in his ear…
Ranvir: Woah… Itna kuch ho gaya! What’s the idea?
Neha again whispers to him…. Ranvir smiles…
Ranvir: I am so proud of you Neha! You are thinking so much for your bro… I am with you… Willl do anything for you! I promise…
Neha: Thank you Ranvir! Go and call everyone here ~Neha’s pov Ranvir… I am sorry… I have always thrown tantrums… Yet you take so much care of me… I don’t want to lose you ever…
Ranvir leaves happily…
Ria: Neha di!!! What’s the idea and what’s going on here?
Nikki: Batao na di…
Everyone rush in… Including Mamaji…
Neha: ~smiles brightly~ Let’s plan now!

Everyone sit around Neha and she explains…
Mamaji: Perfect!!! This is the best plan… Now I’ll go and call Sona! We need to tell her too…
Neha: Mamaji, don’t reveal her the entire plan… Just ask her to wait….
Ria: That’s right… Okay everyone… We will leave now!! You guys discuss and inform over the phone…
Ria, Nikki and Mamaji leave

~Sona’s home~
Asha: Sona, Elena… Everything ready… Did you guys get ready?
Sona: Ya ma… Coming wait…
Sona glances herself in the mirror and realizes that she has worn the same saree she worn for Neha’s wedding at Dev’s home… She then sees the gajra on the table… Sona remembers Dev holding her in his room
~Past~

~Sona’s pov~
Dev hugs from her behind…
Sona: Kya kar rahe ho… Koi aa jaayega
Dev: Subah se apni pictures bhej rahi ho… ~Turns her towards him~ Teek se dekhne toh do… ~Stares at her~
Sona: Kya dekhne doon… Aisa kya hai dekhne mein… Mujhse ye typical wala romance nahi hota…
Dev continues staring
Sona: Kya hua, teek toh lag raha hai na? Meri face pe kuch hai? ~Sees the mirror~ Kya hai?
Dev: Sab kuch… Mera sab kuch hai is chehre pe…
Sona smiles
Dev: Lekin ek cheez ki kami hai…
Sona: Kis cheez ki kami?
Dev: Tumne kaha tha na Neha se… Mujhe bahut achcha laga… K tume thayar hona hai, sajna hai toh sab ke liye nahi… Ranvir ke liye sajo… Agar usk diya hua kuch pahenogi, toh use apni lagogi…
Achchi toh lag rahi …Lekin meri apni nahi lag rahi… Isiliye…
Dev takes out gajra…
Sona: Gajra?

Dev: Maine online search kiya. Ke tumne mujhe bataya ke Main Bengali traditional pehen ke aa rahi hoon, toh uske saath kya pehen the hain?Toh mujhe ye mila..
Sona: Toh aap mere liye traditional Bengali gajra laye hain…
Dev: Lo pehno ab…
Sona: Nahi…
Dev: Kyun?
Sona: Kyunki aap pehenaoge… Chalo pehenao… ~turns~
Dev: Arre lekin… Mujhe nahi aata… gajra pehenana… Kaisa pehena the hai?
Sona: Toh aap yeh bhi search karle lete na… How to wear a gajra… Agar mein ye pehoongi toh, toh aap pehenayenge! Chalo pehenao…
Dev: Okay…Okay… ~Takes the phone and gives~ Hold
Dev watches the video… Makes her wear it
Asha: Sona!
Sona jerks suddenly… Touches the gajra…

~Sona’s pov~ Ab kiske liye sajun Dev? Where did those moments go? Ek pal mein, main apni se parayi ho gayi… Aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala… ~Tears fall~
Elena: Sona, where are you lost? Come fast… We need to go…
Sona: ~wiping her eyes~ Ya let’s leave…
Rithvik comes
Rithvik: Hello! Celebrating janmashtami? I will join too!!
Elena: Hey Rithvik! Looking good ~whispers to Sona~ “He’s looking like a cartoon in that…
Bejoy: Sure son… Come on
Sona just looks at him… ~Sona’s pov~ God please show some sign… What should I do? Whom should I ask about what to do?
The Bose family go out for Janmashtami celebrations along with Rithvik…
Celebrating without me?
Someone calls from behind…
Sona turns…
Sona: Sumo!!!
Suman (Ek Duje Ke Vaaste) smiles brightly!

~Dev’s car~
Dev: Driver, take left and stop…
Driver: Okay sir…
Dev is close to Sona’s place
~Dev’s pov~ Wish I can catch a glimpse of my Sona
~Sona’s mohalla~
Sona hugs Sumo…
Sumo: Chef Suman brings you some of the best dishes from our catering house!
Sona: Thank you dear! As usual, you won’t accept any money from me…
Sumo: Never! Did you charge for prescribing diet plan for my nanaji?
Sona: How will I? He’s like my nanaji too!
Sumo: That makes you my sis… How will I charge you? ~Sees Rithvik and whispers~ BTW, who’s this namuna?
Sona: He’s Rithvik… Rithvik, this is my best friend Sumo Aka Suman…
Rithvik: Hello Suman! Nice to meet you ~turns towards Asha ~Pata hai aunty? My parents and relatives used to call me makhan chor… I was even a champion in the handi competition…
Elena: Makhan chor makes sense… Handi competition winner? No way…
Rithvik: I’ll participate today… This moment and show…
Sona looks lost… Sumo observes her…
Elena: Sona, come on… We will make sure that he doesn’t… Let’s throw water!
Sona: Mujhe nahi khelni…
Elena: Please Sona!
Rithvik: See, she knows I will win easily… Good Sona
Dev comes there
Sona: ~smiles softly~ Achcha, let’s see if you will! ~Grabs a bucket~ Sumo, come on…
Dev sees this… Clenches his fist hard… Blood starts oozing
Sona, Elena and Sumo pour water on the guys… Rithvik wins… But the group falls…
Sona shakes her head laughing and starts walking away…
Someone pulls her suddenly…

~At the temple~
Ishwari: Bhabhi… Nice darshan… Feeling peaceful! Now we can go back…
GKB (Radha Rani): Haan jiji… Very nice darshan! ~GKB’s pov~ This is the best time… Jiji, did you buy something special for Kanhaji? Panditji was telling someone there… if you offer cow made in gold and then gift it to close relative say parents or bhaiyya-bhabhi, all the problems will get resolved… Our Dev will get best girl… Whomsoever you choose…
Ishwari: Really? I didn’t listen… Aapke muh mein ghee shakkar… I will do that Bhabhi… We will buy near our home…
GKB (Radha Rani): ~feels happy inside~ Teek hai jiji…
Ishwari: Let’s buy few vegetables too
Ishwari and GKB (Radha Rani) walk further…
GKB (Radha Rani): Jiji, see there… isn’t that our car? What’s it doing here? Dev sent? But why is it standing so far? Let’s go and see…

~Sona’s mohalla~
Sona: What kind of nonsense? How dare you pull me?
Sona gazes angrily…
Sona: ~Gasp~ Dev? What are you doing here? What’s the meaning of this?
Dev: Wanted to see my Sona… Guess you are very happy…
Sona: it’s Dr. Bose… Well you wanted me to get out of your life… I am trying my best to move on…
Dev: How can you move on so easy Sona?
Sona: Please Dev… Don’t make this hard for me… Let go off me…
Dev releases her… Looks away in pain… Starts walking away, limping slightly…
Sumo searches and sees them together
Sona feels something on her arm and checks…
Sona: Blood! ~runs towards Dev, grabs his arm~ Dev! You are bleeding!!! ~makes him sit on the ground~
Sona ~sees Sumo~ Sumo, get the first aid box… It’s near TV… Go fast…
Sumo: Yes… Wait… Take this water bottle
Sona: Thanks… ~Removes Dev’s bandage~ “Dev, tumi ekdum impossible.. Why can’t you be more careful? ~washes his hand~
Dev flinches…
Sumo gets the first aid box…

Ishwari and GKB (Radha Rani) come there…
Ishwari: Driver, what are you doing here? Did Dev send you for us? Why are you waiting here so far from the temple?
Driver: Nahi malkin… I am waiting for Dev saab…
Ishwari looks around
Ishwari: Yahan? Where’s he?
GKB (Radha Rani): Jiji, wahan dekhiye
Sona applies medicine… Couple of tears fall over his wounds Sona…
Dev: ~Looks at her and wipes her tears away~ I am fine Sona…
Sona: ~finishes putting bandage~ I don’t know how this happened… Please be careful Dev… I mean Mr. Dikshit… Bye… Chalo Sumo…
Sona walks away… Dev smiles
Dev gets up and kisses his hand…
~Dev’s pov~ I got your answer Sona…
Ishwari looks shocked

~Sona’s home~
Sumo: What was that Sona? You love him so much… Why did you fight with him? Why do you want to move on?
Sona: Because of him… He neither can accept me due to his mom, nor let me go… I want to move on… But unable to… Dil hai ke manta nahi…
Sumo: I understand that well Sona… I don’t love the one I am getting married to… The one I love… Can’t marry him…
Sona: I wish there’s a way… By which everyone can be happy..
Suddenly Sona’s phone rings…
Sona: Hello?

What will happen next? Stay tuned!!!
Comments please!!!!

23 comments

  1. krish

    hmm… don’t want to think or predict….just wanted dev sona to be devakshi…..and am not in a good mood..and pls get them united soon….and that gkb pov irritates to core…..and liked that sumo conv for sona….rather than elena….

  2. Manya

    |Registered Member

    No words 😍❤️💘💕😘😍❤️💘💕❤️😍💕💘😊😘😍😍😍❤️💕💕😘😘💘I think u should be the writer of krpkab 💕😁post soon

  3. Sumi1998

    |Registered Member

    It was really nice episode
    N one thing sorry if I hurt you but pls only write on krpkab n pls don’t include edvk
    Sorry hope you understand

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