Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 33.2)


Hi guys!!! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! No internet at all… So, had to keep on postponing the work… Hope everyone remembers me ~wink~ ~wink~

All Parts here

Dev: I love you Mrs. Dikshit…
Sona: I love you too Mr. Dikshit…
Dev: Now let’s go!
Sona: Yup… Paris, the city of love… We are coming…

Day 1
Devakshi quickly have their breakfast and start their journey around the city…
Dev: ~feeling peaceful; pulls Sona close and throws arm on her shoulder~ So Mrs. Khargosh… Where are, we going first? Have you decided?
Sona: ~cuddles to Dev~ Firstly, we will visit Love locks bridge… We can’t lock any of the love locks now, but it’s a beautiful bridge… We can admire the waters…
Dev: ~looks surprised~ Love locks bridge is one of the famous attractions of Paris… Why can’t we lock the love locks anymore?
Sona: Well, apparently, the locks have become so heavy; that there was a danger that the bridge would collapse. So, Paris officials decided to remove the locks last year… And now they are making the bridge wall, more “lock proof”. I mean no grills to lock… Do you know last year, they had removed 45 tonnes of padlocks?
Dev: ~whistles~ Wow… That’s surprising…. But that’s okay… We can always look around… Or we can even go back to our cosy room ~winks at Sona~
Sona: ~pats his chest~ No going to room this fast… First, we will start with the Love Locks bridge… Then we will go to Notre Dame Cathedral… Okay?
Dev: That’s wonderful… ~kisses Sona’s hair~ Then, since we travelled so far, we will retire early… Tomorrow, we will visit other places… Okay? ~gives puppy dog look~
Sona: ~pulls Dev’s ear~ Retire early? Ek dom badmaash! No problem… But one night, there will be night tour of Paris!
Dev: Night tour?
Sona: Yup… Before we go back, we should see the City of Love as City of Lights!!! I have booked tickets for night tour for two hours…
Dev: ~hugs Sona~ Okay wifey! As you say… So, 10 days and minimum 2 places each day… Excellent plan Mrs. Khargosh!
Sona: ~smiles~ Let’s start then… Wait…. ~rushes; takes her handbag and puts video cam in~ We will record every place we visit; except where it is prohibited of course… That way, our family will see Paris tour too… What say my pati Dev?
Dev: Excellent idea, wifey…. Let’s go!
Devakshi walk towards the metro station and board it…

Pont de l’Archevêché – Love Locks Bridge!
Devakshi reach the bridge and slowly walk to the bridge.
Dev: ~whistles slowly~ The place is so clean… No locks at all!
Sona: Yeah, sad… But what to do? The bridge almost collapsed due to the weight of locks… Hey, we can do something. How about we close our eyes, make a wish and blow it to the river?
Dev: Not a bad idea Ms. Bose!
Sona: it’s Mrs Dikshit for you! ~pulls Dev’s ear and smiles~
Sona walks over to the bridge railing and closes her eyes ~Sona’s pov~ I wish this moment lasts forever! I don’t have a lock to lock away our love… But I have a big wish… Please ensure that we love each other like this for eternity… I wish that we grow old together… I also wish that we always support each other irrespective of the situation
Dev steps close; wraps around Sona and closes his eyes. ~Dev’s pov~ Grant all her wishes… I just want us to grow old together; watching our kids grow…
Sona blows her wish and opens her eyes…. Dev does the same…
Devakshi smile at each other; both thinking “You will never know what I asked for”
Sona: ~recording the whole view; then talks to the camera~ We are here at the Pont de l’Archevêché aka Love Locks Bridge!!!
Dev: ~peeping from side~ Minus the love locks… ~smiles brightly~
Sona: Such a beautiful view… What can be a better place than starting here? Our next visit shall be Notre Dame!!!
Devakshi slowly leave the place and walk towards Notre Dame Cathedral…

~Notre Dame Cathedral~
Devakshi visit the cathedral and look around… Recording everything….
Sona: ~looks excited~ Dev, look there… Those gargoyles!!! I always wanted to see them… I still remember the book – The Hunchback of Notre Dame.
Dev: Gargoyles… They look very weird and horrible… Mrs. Khargosh, you have such a handsome husband… All you wanted to watch was the gargoyles????
Sona: ~smiles~ Nahi my pati Dev… You know these gargoyles were built as water spouts to prevent damage to the building by deflecting rainwater from the sides of the building. But, later they built drain pipes and these became just ornamental figures.
Dev: Wow… ~hugs Sona~ Looks like my wife has done complete detailed study!
Sona: Of course, Mr. Dikshit ~smiles brightly~
Dev: Let’s eat now… I am very hungry!!!!
Sona: Let’s go….
Outside the cathedral; in little distance; there’s a lone man playing guitar (for money). People drop few coins in the box in front of him…
Sona: Look! ~points the guy; pulls Dev’s arm~ Chalo… ~turns off the videocam~
Dev: Sonakshi!!!!
Sona: ~ checks her mobile; to the guitar guy~ Excusez-moi! Nous aimerions danser ici. (Shall we dance here?) Pardonne mon francais… (Forgive my French)
Guitar guy: ~smiles~ Please…
Dev looks clueless… Sona starts playing Nashe si chad gayi on her mobile and starts dancing…. Dev smiles and joins her…
Soon, a huge crowd gathers there; watching Devakshi dancing and some record their dance…. The guitar guy places his box on the other side… The crowd cheer them loud…
Devakshi dance happily and once the song ends; they stop and bow to the crowd… The crowd drop huge amount of currency notes and coins in the box and leave happily…
Dev takes the box and hands it to the guitar guy.
Guitar guy: MERCI!!! MERCI-BEAUCOUP!!! ~bows to them~
Dev: Don’t mention ~smiles brightly~
Sona: Au revoir!!!
Sona grabs Dev’s arm and both walk away happily…
Dev: ~kissing Sona’s hair~ Every day is a special day with you Sona… I have never danced this way before.
Sona: This is just the beginning Mr. Dikshit!!! Now, let’s eat!!!
Devakshi walk towards Mon Vieil Ami, a vegetarian restaurant.

~Devakshi Home~
Ishwari sits in Devakshi’s room; touches Dev’s photo…
Mamaji: ~enters~ Arey Kachori! You are here? I have searched everywhere at home… And you are here…
Ishwari: Bhaiyya… Pata hai, when Dev was small; he refused to go on a school trip… Because, he didn’t want to stay without me… But today…. Has my Dev changed bhaiyya? Am I really not important for him?
Mamaji: ~sits, holds Ishwari’s hand~ Kachori…Our Dev is all grown up… He isn’t the small kid… He’s married now… he has certain duties towards our bahu rani too… Right? Give little space to the kids, Ishwari… Let them grow… Ishwari, you got married and left. But, do you what our ma did, after I got married? When I got married, she slowly started involving herself in more of pooja paat… Whenver I had problems, she used to guide me… But far… She used to participate in our joys… But, would still maintain distance… I never understood… One day, I went and asked her “Ma, why are you going away? Why don’t you take care of me, like you used to? Am I not your Laddoo anymore? Do you know what ma said?
Ishwari: ~looking curious~ What did she tell?
Mamaji: Ma smiled and told “Arey Laddoo, you are my gol, matol Laddoo… For every mother, her kid will always be a baby… I asked her “Why this distance then?” Ma again smiled and told “Dekh Laddoo, you are married now… You have a beautiful wife… Haan, she is more demanding than a regular wife; but still… You are grown up now… How long will I take decisions for you? It is high time that you take decisions for yourself; for our house… Decide with your wife… If I don’t move away now, you will never be independent… Achcha, now I am alive and say I can take care of you… I am growing old… One day, I will die… Then how will you take care of yourself and your family?
I was silent… Ma continued “You know, when seeds of the tree fall directly under a huge tree, they don’t grow properly… Because, they are constantly protected by the big tree… The big tree takes away all the sunlight… Though, it protects the small saplings, the small saplings have to be moved away for better growth… Yes, it would be painful… But it is needed… Remember this my Laddoo… One day, even you will be of my age… Know when to be there for your kids and when to maintain distance… That way, everyone will be happy”
She smiled and went away… Kachori, that day, I didn’t grasp the meaning behind her words. Today, when I see your conflict, I understand what ma told… Kachori, we will not be there forever around Dev… Don’t you think, he should learn to be independent? And see, we have a strong bahurani. Hai ke nahi?
Ishwari: Ma, was right bhaiyya… What to do, Dev has always been precious for me… I feel he’s still a small child… Letting him go away from me… How will he be there without me?
Mamaji: But if you, out of your insecurity and dependence, try separating him from his wife; he might come back to you… But slowly, he will feel compelled to stay and not out of love… An obligation sort… That way Dev will go away from you emotionally… Do you want that?
~Ishwari’s pov~
Ishwari: Dev, come… Sit beside me…
Dev: Par ma… Wo Sona…
Ishwari: ~looks upset~ Is Sona only important? Don’t you love me?
Dev: ~reluctantly~ Okay…
Sona: Dev, I know you don’t have time for me at all… Everyone treats I am going away forever… Stay with your ma! ~Sona walks out~
Dev: ~gets up~ Sona! Sona! Don’t go away! ~tries walking to the door~
Ishwari: Dev… Everything will be alright… You come here…
Dev: NAHI!!! Ma… Because of you, my wife; my love has gone away from my life… Hamesha hamesha ke liye… Only because of you! Why did you do it ma?
Ishwari: I… I didn’t do anything… How can you blame me?
Dev: You got me married…. But you never let me spend time with my wife… It’s always about you; duties and responsibilities toward family… I am forever a machine catering to all of your needs… See, I couldn’t take care of my Sona’s happiness! You and mami always taunted and treated her like she was an outsider… Today, she’s gone… Now are you happy?
Dev walks out…
Ishwari: Dev! Dev! Rukh ja beta…
(Imagination ends~
Ishwari: Dev! Dev! Rukh ja beta… Rukho… Please don’t go…
Mamaji: Kachori! Are you alright?
Ishwari: ~slowly realizing~ Bhaiyya… Wo…Dev…
Mamaji: See, soch ke tumare ye haal hai… What if it had happened for real?
Ishwari: Nahi bhaiyya… It can’t happen… He can’t go away from me…
Mamaji: Then, slowly try understanding the young hearts… Look, they are married now… Don’t you feel that they need time and space? They need to understand each other and stay together for rest of the life… This is the time when a foundation of trust is built… If you don’t give them that space, their relationship will not be that strong… And our Dev will suffer the most… How will he choose between ma and wife? Make it easy for him…
Ishwari: I understand bhaiyya… It’s very difficult… But, I will remember what our ma told… It’s not easy; but I’ll try my best…. ~smiles~
Mamaji smiles…

~Some office~
Neha walks out; looking grim…
~Neha’s pov~
Neha: Are you sure ma’am? I can handle all the tasks. I promise to work hard.
Interviewer: I am really sorry Neha… You don’t have the qualifications we are looking for… Try next time….
Neha: Okay ma’am…
Neha sits on the park bench… ~Neha’s pov~ Wish ma had let me study too… I feel so useless now… I feel so disheartened…. ~thinks of Sona’s words~ “Don’t give up” You are right Bhabhi… I can’t give up so easy… I will attend as many interviews as possible. I will get the job. This is just the beginning.
Neha grabs her file; walks smiling to herself…
Someone sees Neha with binoculars and records everything.

~Nikki’s College~
Nikki’s friend: Hey Nikki! The exam time table is on the notice board… It’s starting after Diwali!
Nikki: What???? Oh no… How will I manage???? Bhabhi is out of station!!! I study better when she helps…. Especially, maths and history! Perhaps will ask Elena di…. My bhabhi’s cousin…
Nikki’s friend: That’s sad… At least, you have someone to help you out… I don’t have anyone to depend on…
Nikki: Don’t worry… I will do something…
Nikki’s friend nods her head and they both walk away…
Someone sees Nikki and her friend with binoculars and records everything.

~In the evening~
Manager: Neeta (Rhea), give this suitcase to Mr. Malhotra of Finance Department. Don’t delay…
Neeta (Rhea): Okay sir…
An employee observes this closely…

~Night around 10~
Vicky waits for everyone leave to leave the office…
Security guard: ~enters~ Sir, are you going to stay back?
Vicky: Yes…. You stay outside and don’t disturb. I need to work on these ~shows his table~
Security guard nods and leaves…
Vicky waits till the guard leaves and slips out of his cabin. Quickly enters Dev’s cabin and starts looking around ~in his bluetooth~ Yes, I am in… Will tell once the task is finished.
Vicky starts searching the shelf.

Devakshi return to the room after a stroll (India is ahead by 4 hours and 30 minutes).
Sona goes in to freshen up… Dev smiles thinking about the day…
Sona: ~coming out~ Dev, go freshen up… We will call ma… Then, we can have dinner na?
Dev: Definitely! ~goes in~
Sona quickly changes into a beautiful dress and gets ready…
Dev comes out and looks mesmerized seeing Sona…
Sona: Shall we call ma now?
Dev stands speechless…
Sona: Dev… ~waves hand~
Dev: Huh? What did you tell now?
Sona: ~smiles~ Ma? Shouldn’t we call ma now?
Dev: Oh ya…. ~still looks dazed~
Sona: Dev! Ki korcho tumi!!!! Ek dum budhu ram… I will only call… ~takes phone from Dev’s hand and video calls Nikki~
~On Call~
Nikki: Hi Bhabhi!!! How are you? How’s Paris? Did you see Eiffel Tower? What did you eat? Did you go on shopping? How’s bhaiyya? How…
Sona: Are rey… Nikki! Calm down… We saw love locks bridge and Notre Dame Cathedral today… Tomorrow, we are planning to visit art galleries and maybe Louvre museum too…
Nikki: Wow Bhabhi!!!! I am so excited!!! Where’s bhaiyya?
Dev: ~suddenly jerking~ Nikki! How are you? How’s ma?
Sona: Haan Nikki, call ma na…
Nikki: Sure! Ma!!!! ~Nikki pulls Ishwari to her room~ Ma, see bhaiyya and Bhabhi…
Ishwari: Dev… Sona… How are you? Did you eat?
Dev: Ma! We missed you all so much… Especially you… Hain na Sona?
Sona: Haan ma… How are you? Did you take your meds? I hope you aren’t straining.
Ishwari: I am fine beta… I took the meds… What about your food there?
Dev: Ma, don’t worry… Sona has made a list of vegetarian hotels and ensures that all our meals are only vegetarian. In fact, she hasn’t touched any non-veg food…
Sona: Ma… You don’t worry… I will ensure that Dev gets good and tasty vegetarian dishes.
Ishwari: Thank you, beta… You too eat well… And take care of yourself too…
Dev: ~smiles~ Ma… We are going to have dinner now… Shall we call tomorrow?
Ishwari: Teek hai Dev… Eat and sleep well… Okay?
Dev: Ji ma…
~Call ends~
Dev: I missed ma so much… Now, I feel so happy….
Sona: Haan… Even I was missing the family… ~Sona’s pov~ For the first time, ma asked whether I ate and asked to take care of myself… Is she slowly accepting me? ~jerks~ Shall we go out for dinner now?
Dev: ~gazes at Sona lovingly; pulls her close~ Dinner? Should we? How can someone look so gorgeous? Are you planning to kill me with your beauty?
Sona: ~blushes; composes~ Dev! That’s so cheesy!!!!
Dev: No I am serious… ~pulls her even close~ It should be made illegal to look so beautiful… I really don’t want to step out of our room now…
Sona: But… Aren’t you hungry?
Dev: Achcha baba… We will eat and come back quickly… Chalein Ms. Bose?
Sona: ~smiles~ Let’s go…. And it’s Mrs. Dikshit for you…
Dev laughs as Sona smiles…
Devakshi go out for dinner…

~After an hour~
~Hotel Room~
Dev: ~unlocks the room; enters~ That was an amazing dinner… Very happy…
Sona: ~follows Dev~ Right!!! Now, we can quickly change and retire for the night… Tomorrow, we have loads to see and so many places to roam…
Dev: ~locks the door; walks slowly towards Sona~ Retire? So soon? Mrs. Khargosh, we are on our honeymoon… Do you think I will let you escape here? At home, you always have so many excuses – kabhi ma… Toh kabhi ghar ke kaam… Now, none of your excuses shall work…
Sona: ~gulps~ Dev… ~steps back~
Dev: ~steps closer~ Yes Sona…
Sona quickly moves to the other side of the bed…
Dev: Sona!
Sona: Catch me if you can Mr. Dikshit…
Dev chases Sona; finally manages to grab her….
Dev pushes Sona over the bed; looking mischievous falls over her…
Sona: Dev!
Dev: ~places finger on her mouth~ Sssshhh…
Dev, slowly removes her earrings… Sona blushes at Dev’s touch…
Dev lifts Sona’s chin and gazes intense… Dev leans in slowly…
And they didn’t sleep that night….

And that was Day 1 at Paris… Looks like our honeymoon couple loved it…. What will happen next?

Instead of two parts, I have decided to post a detailed honeymoon of Devakshi… Say two or three more parts… What do you guys feel?
Comments please!!!!

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    Was waiting for it frm a long time…… Thank God u came back…..loved the episode?????????……. But please post next part asap…….

    1. Kalpana

      Thank you so much dearie ?? Working on the next part!!!!

  2. Awesome episode dear.
    As ur wish. Well written….post the next episode soon.

    1. Kalpana

      Yup working on the same ?? Will pay as early as possible

  3. Varsha94

    It was great.. I mean u learnt about Paris before posting or u already knew.. I mean in anyways v get to know alot.. Thanks alot in that way.. It was very beautiful.. I wish I could c how sona looked.. But yeah KUDOS…to ur writing ??????❤

    1. Kalpana

      I knew a Lil about Paris… From reading The Da Vinci Code…. I have never been to Paris ???? Me doing research for this ff ? I wish that my readers feel that they’re at Paris along with Devakshi ? Or ladies with Dev aka Shaheen n guys with Sona aka Erica ??

  4. I was missing your story kalpana. Awesome job. Post next one sooner.

    1. Kalpana

      Sorry dear… Research took time. Will try posting early this time…

  5. Angel20

    Did you really research everything or you knew it? I mean hats off to you yaar! You are seriously a brilliant writer! The way you describe everything is just perfect!

    Loved mamaji today, he explained Ishwari so smartly and glad that she is trying to change! But still waiting for the mystery! What’s Vicky up to?

    Post the next part soon!! Eagerly waiting for it!

    With Love

    1. Kalpana

      I knew a Lil about Paris… From reading The Da Vinci Code…. I have never been to Paris ???? Me doing research for this ff ? I wish that my readers feel that they’re at Paris along with Devakshi ? Or ladies with Dev aka Shaheer n guys with Sona aka Erica ??

  6. Erina

    Awesome work my kali nd wow not only dev but I’m also speechless after seeing ur effort .. Seriously I can’t express what I’m feeling now .. Only I wounder how can u write so awesome… Yup I know to entertain us u hve done vry tough job so hats of to u swtheart nd thankyou too ?????????.
    U know I really missed u nd ur ff very badly nd thank god u made ur entry nd I’m dead after seeing ur work … Haha hve u planned to kill me by ur writing . I should be made illegal to write so beautiful? ? ????☺?
    Coming to u howz u now ????? R u fine ????
    With tons nd trucks of love ????????❤?????????

    1. Kalpana

      Awwwww.. Thank you so much dear ? I am fine now… Feeling so much better… All the comments make me so happy…

  7. A perfect episode..

    1. Kalpana

      Thank you so much dear!!!!

  8. Superb, marvellous, fantastic, fabulous and so on……?????????????…….. Ur ff is seriously a masterpiece…..it feels like we r watching a serial…..the way u explained the places in Paris…..is surely a huge thing…… Hats of to u….??????…..I think u should have write the serial….. All the things are so well placed….. I’m loving it….❤❤❤
    The honeymoon trip was surely the best…… The information u gave…..and then devakshi….talks and admiring eo…..?? mamaji explaining ishwari……of course that was ur awesome thoughts……but how mamaji explained that……that was amazing…. Every dialogue feels real….. Then the way ishwari talked to sona….showed that……she’s getting something on her mind…… Neha is also a breath of fresh air in ur ff but in serial…..she’s disgusting….. I can’t even tolerate her…..? Vicky is being suspicious….what was he doing in devs office????…..who is observing NRN activities…….????? A lot of questions….and Many more….. So post the next one soon…..as I’m eagerly waiting……

    1. Kalpana

      Awwww… Thank you Maleeha 🙂 Working on the next one…

  9. Erika

    finally u updated loved the epi and mamaji made ishwari understand soo well waiting for the next one update asap and the epi was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee fab Vicky is suspicious kuch toh gadbad hai

    1. Kalpana

      Thank you Erika 🙂 🙂

  10. Manya

    Finally u r back!!!!missed u so much
    Episode was Awesomeeeeeeeeee as always❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
    The amount of ur research is awesome and Di from now on u shall tell me which word u want me to translate ok???so tell me
    Can they visit le louvre and La tour Eiffiel tomorrow
    And ya the city of lights is called la ville lumière!!!!
    Post soon
    Love love❤️❤️❤️
    Do check my wall??????

    1. Kalpana

      Ayushi 🙂 I am excited to be back here too 🙂 I missed my readers here 🙂 Have planned so many different places for Devakshi :)I will keep it as authentic as possible 🙂 And will take ur help for sure 🙂

  11. Kalpana di!! It’s sooo good to have you back! Had been missing you and your FF so badly! But, mind me, this episode could compensate for all those days of waiting. This episode truly was marvellous! Spectacular indeed! Each and every detail provided by you was beautifully given out and I simply couldn’t help but wish that the same had happened on the serial too. DevAkshi’s romantic and sweet talks, Mamaji’s words and everything else was splendid! Only thing is, that I’ve been screwed up with so many questions now. Who has been monitoring Nikki, Rhea and Neha? What is Vicky up to, after all? Uggghhh! I’m am really so puzzled. Please do try to post the next one really soon, if you can manage to do so.
    Loads and tons of love,

    1. Kalpana

      Thank you Anshita 🙂 🙂 It’s a suspense 🙂 🙂 Working on the next one dearie 🙂

  12. That was amazing. Loved it. Missed ur ff a lot. That mamajee and ishu conversation was very apt just as I want mamajee to do in our serial also. Post soon. ????

    1. Kalpana

      Thank you dolly 🙂

  13. Junee

    Lovely Kali you teminded of my memories in Paris! But your love story is so well woven with the right balances! Its a good idea to take them thru various places in Paris for the next 2 episodes! Champ de leise, Eiffle tower, musey dorsey, louvre, orangerie and definitely a Hot chocolate at Angelina! Cruise thru Seine. Yes the love lock bRidge has removed those locks but i clamped one there and threw it into the Seine! Fond memories! Kali superbly woven story! I will read it again tomorrow! ThNks for giving us these little pleasures!!!
    All the best dear

    1. Kalpana

      Thank you so much Junee 🙂 I will include all the places you suggested 🙂 🙂

      1. Junee

        ? done sweetie!

  14. Niki645

    I was missing u so much di!!!!
    Episode was fabulous ??????????????
    Post next one soon?????

    1. Kalpana

      Thank you so much sweetie 🙂

  15. Niccc episode dear was waiting for it ŕrm such a long time

    plz updated it as soon as possible

    1. Kalpana

      Thank you Mahi 🙂

  16. Rockzzzzzz

    The episode was awesome….
    but tell me one thing have u visited Paris anytime…or just for the episode u have done this much of research,if so then hats off to ur efforts!!!
    post soon

    1. Kalpana

      Never honey… Haven’t stepped outside India 🙂 I have read the Da Vinci Code and watched lil of Paris in the movie of the same name… Pure research for this ff 🙂 Taking myself and my awesome readers on a trip to Paris 🙂

      1. Junee

        Very well done Kali? You did it beautifully!

      2. Rockzzzzzz

        Really while reading i was feeling as if i am in Paris…great job???

  17. Ria

    Hey di,
    The update was brilliant. Like others, even I had the same question. Did you know everything about Paris or did you just research about it. Whatever you did, the descriptions were at their best. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I’d be looking forward to more of the love story that has been planned by you in Paris.

    Loads of love?

    1. Kalpana

      Pure research sweetie… Only lil inspiration from Da Vinci Code book and movie 🙂 Thank you so much sweetie!!!!

  18. Heshine

    Hey Kalpana di….!!how r u …!? Hope u r gud. !!and yeah….!!we could understand u r lil busy….so no need to ask sorry..!!fa updating quite late….!!!but this episode is such fantabulous….!!!I really missed u and ur ff….!!!this have really put my wait to a end….!!!???????it was such fantabulous….!!!I couldn’t imagine how awesome it was….!!authentic indeed….!!!I really loved the way the story is moving…..!!!?????so update asap….!!!
    And yeah….!!!devakshi’s moments were juz stupendous…..its splendid…!!?????????????oh we would be so joyous if it would have happened in real serial…nah…!?!?????and yeah cv’s should get the idea from u….!!bcas u write such awesome….!!!it’s really marvellous….!!?❤
    I knw I’m restating it again…but I should do this …..no harm in saying the truth nah…!!!!u r juz an awesome writer….!!!??? I really loved ur writing skills….!!!have u researched abt Paris or u hve been there…..I think…..I do visited the place….!!if not it wouldn’t be such real….!!!and yeah…!!mamaji is such awesome….he handled ishwari and made her to give way fa our devakshi’s romance…..!!haha…!!??
    And yeah…!!pls do update asap…..waiting eagerly fa the next epi….!!! I juz cant wait anymore…..!!!so di pls updte soon..!!i knw im sounding too desperate…!!!but I don’t mind fa it to read such awesome….story…really I don’t mind…!!!!????and yeah….take care…

    1. Kalpana

      I am fine dear!!! I wish that they had shown in the real serial… Thank you much for your lovely comments 🙂 🙂 Purely research 😀

  19. Sonadi

    I have been waiting for this . It is really good. I think you should apply for a job in the real serial team of writers..
    It will be more exciting to see you writing in the actual serial. Looking forward eagerly for the next one.

    1. Kalpana

      Thank you so much Sonadi… I love reading your comments in the serial updates 🙂 You explain everything so beautiful….

      1. Sonadi

        You are welcome

  20. Junee

    Kali some suggestions:
    In Paris as u walk along the road u find carts selling crepes which are badically pancakes some sweet some savoury and freshly made! Its famous! Crepes are a must and so is a visit to Mont marte u find the artists painting over there! Its on a hill top where a ropeway is there to take u from the road or a bus service is there too! But Mont marte is the seat for painters and artists and place for intellectuals to freak out specially writers and thinkers!

    1. Kalpana

      I always wanted to eat Crepes 🙂 Perfect, now i have couple of ideas 😀

      1. Junee

        ??all the best!! Looking forward to your story!!

      2. Crepes are not pancakes. They are more like dosas (thin). Pancakes are like uttapam. I love crepes – especially savory kind. One time in California I found a great crepery where they had about 20 different kinds of crepes and I only ate the savory ones while my kids went crazy over the sweet kind. I am sure in big cities in India you can find the crepes. Great for breakfast. Good luck! Post soon.

  21. Junee

    Indeed crepes are thinner but the constituents are similar to pancake and yes pancakes are thicker! Crepes are similar to bengali ” patishapta’ which we have it with gud snd they have it with maple syrup but always loved the ones with the chocolate sauce and strawberry ?

  22. Awsm episode Di…luved it???
    Fall Fractured right hand
    So lately read this..
    Typing with left hand
    And thus small comment??
    Post nxt soon

    1. Kalpana

      OMG!!!!! Are you okay???? Missed you so much here…. Me working on the next part…. Get well soon…

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