Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 33.1)

Hi guys!!! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Phew was buried in office workload… Such a huge gap…. Hope everyone remembers the story… Now, I am back to my ff  This episode is dedicated to all the Devakshi Fans!!! I am posting honeymoon special in two parts!
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Recap:
Sona feeling relieved; goes to pack…
Mamaji: Ishwari… What was that?
Ishwari: Bhaiyya… Why did you convince him? I mean… I
Mamaji: Ishwari…. I already told you… Dev is grown up now… He’s married… He needs to spend time with his wife… See, soon after marriage, he has started working… Sona beti too is taking care of the house… if Dev doesn’t take leave now and enjoy; he can never do that again…
Ishwari: Par bhaiyya…
Mamaji: He has entire life to fulfil the duties… He has only fulfilled duties all his life… Please let him enjoy his life Kachori… I request you…
Mamaji goes away…
Ishwari looks upset…

~Devakshi room~
Sona sits and starts packing…. ~Sona’s pov~ Now, the clothes have been packed… ~thinks of Ishwari~ Looks like ma doesn’t want us to go… It’s only for few days… Why is she so uncomfortable? Isn’t it natural to go on honeymoon after marriage? Why is she so possessive? I am not here to snatch Dev away from her… ~shakes her head~
Slowly gathers the pamphlets and places on the bed…

~Evening~
Ishwari paces around the hall; waiting for Dev…
Dev enters…
Ishwari: Dev… I wanted to talk to you…
Dev: Ma… What happened? Sab teek hai?
Ishwari: It’s regarding Vicky’s job….
Dev: Ma… Don’t take tension… I told you na… Will come back from honeymoon and train him personally…
Ishwari: ~looking miffed~ Dev! Is your honeymoon more important than your brother’s future? Bhabhi feels that we are not very serious about Vicky’s future…
GKB comes there; looks surprised ~GKB’s pov~ I told jiji only once…. ~smiles~ Matlab, jiji is shooting by keeping rifle on my shoulder… Vicky ke liye, yeh aasan hoga… Let me see the tamasha…
Dev: Ma… Why are you so angry? ~feels slightly confused~ Don’t worry… My flight is tomorrow night… Tomorrow morning, I’ll take Vicky with me to the office… Will ask Sharma to start his training… I will come back and give him next round of training… Please calm down….
Ma, let me freshen up…. ~Dev’s pov~ Why Vicky is in such a hurry? Till now, he wasn’t keen…
Ishwari: Hmmm…. Teek hai… ~goes away~ ~Ishwari’s pov~ I try telling him so much, yet he doesn’t drop the plan of going on honeymoon…

~Devakshi room~
Sona fetters around…. “Oh god, where did I keep the lists? Ugh!!! I will go crazy ~sees the messy room~
Dev enters; looks surprised and sees Sona tensed…
Dev: ~hugging Sona from behind~ Oho… What is going on?
Sona: ~twists herself free~ Dev! You are finally home!!!!! See, I have so much packing to do!!! You came home so late…
Dev: ~holding his ears~ I am sorry… Why looking so flustered Mrs. Khargosh?
Sona: ~suddenly realizes~ Oh god… Where did I keep those lists? Nikki would feel bad… ~walks around; clutching head~
Dev: ~pulls Sona~ Sona… Calm down… Why so tensed??
Sona: Dev! You aren’t understanding! I misp….
Dev cuts her off; kissing her…
Sona feels shocked; sighs and kisses him back….
Dev slowly releases her reluctantly; Sona blushes…
Sona: Dev…
Dev: ~pulls her close; fondles her cheek~ Sona… Calm down… Wait… ~brings her handbag; digs in~ See, here it is… You kept it “safe” remember?
Sona: ~hits her forehead~ Silly me… How can I forget that?
Dev: See, you have such a smart hubby! I saw you keeping it there…
Sona: ~shaking her head~ Go… Freshen up… I will get water for you…
Dev: ~smiles~ Okay Ms. Bose… ~pulls her cheek~
Sona: It’s Mrs. Dikshit for you… ~smiles~
Dev goes away
Sona shakes her head; gets water for Dev…
Dev comes and takes water from Sona…
Sona: Dev… What time is the flight tomorrow?
Dev: Midnight… Air France… Non-stop flight… Leaves at 1.25 AM…
Sona: 1.25 AM?? When will it reach?
Dev: By 6.15 AM ~smiles brightly~ It’s 9 hours plus flight Ms. Khargosh…
Sona: Then, skip the office tomorrow na Dev… We will finish the packing…
Dev: ~scratches his head~ Sona… Tomorrow, I have to go to office… But don’t worry, I will come home early…
Sona: Office? Dev tumi…
Dev: Sorry Sona… Ma wants me to ensure that Vicky gets his job asap…
Sona: Vicky’s job? I thought you said that you will work on his job, once we come back…
Dev: ~sits worried~ Even I planned that way… But ma is insisting that Vicky should join… I have decided to take him tomorrow… Will brief him a little and ask Sharma to take care of basic training… By the time we come back, he’ll be done with basic training… And I can concentrate on further training later…
Sona: ~nods~ It is weird though… It’s alright Dev… But don’t forget to leave early… Or…
Dev: ~places finger on her lips~ Mrs. Dikshit… It’s our honeymoon…. Duniya idhar se udhar kyun na ho jaaye… I am not skipping it… This is Dev Dikshit’s promise….
Sona smiles
Ishwari listens to this; feels shocked…

~Ishwari’s room~
Ishwari sits sad ~Ishwari’s pov~ It means that my son wouldn’t cancel his trip. Not even for me. Will he stay happily for 15 days, without me? I can’t even request him to stay back on my health pretense…. Bhaiyya made him promise… What if I tell Neha? Will she able to influence Dev? ~calls Neha~

~Devakshi room~
Dev: Shall we go and have dinner now?
Sona: Haan! Definitely!!
Sona gets a call…
Sona: Dev, you go ahead… I will answer the call and come…
Dev nods and leaves…
~On call~
Sona: Hello Neha!
Neha: How are you Bhabhi?
Sona: I am very good Neha? Hey, have you started applying for jobs?
Neha: Starting tomorrow… Guess what Bhabhi? Ranveer helped me so much… He trained me on how to attend interviews; how to face the questions etc.
Sona: ~felling happy~ That’s excellent!!! I am so happy Neha… Apply soon!!!
Neha: Ya Bhabhi… Bhabhi…
Sona: Ya Neha…
Neha: Are you and bhai going on honeymoon? Paris? Ma was telling… You didn’t tell me…
Sona: Oh, no!!! Neha… I wanted to keep it as a surprise for you… I have planned a huge surprise for you, Ranveer and all of your family members…
Neha: What surprise Bhabhi?
Sona: It’s a surprise… You will know once we return!!!
Neha: ~laughs~ Okay Bhabhi… Now I actually feel like Nikki… Curious and impatient… Happy journey Bhabhi!
Sona: Thank you Neha…
Neha: Bhabhi, will call you later…
Sona: Sure! Good night Neha…
Neha: Good night Bhabhi! ~cuts the call~
Sona smiles…

~Neha’s sasural~
Neha cuts the call…
~Neha’s pov~ Bhabhi wanted to give me and Ranveer a surprise? Ma was simply worried… I think ma isn’t able to let go Bhai on the trip… Well, I know I haven’t been on honeymoon… But that doesn’t mean that I will stop him from having his share of happiness… Once if I start working, I will get salary… Then, will ask Ranveer to contribute half… Then we can go on our honeymoon… Paris na sahi… Panvel tak toh jaa sakte hai na… ~smiles happily~

~Next day Morning~
Dev gets ready in hurry….
~Vicky’s room~
GKB (Radha Rani): Vicky! Wake up… Get ready…
Vicky: ~pulls the bedsheet~ Ma… Sone de na…
GKB (Radha Rani): Vicky!!!! Dev is taking you to office today…
Vicky: ~gets up quickly~ WHAT? But I thought, it will be after he comes back from his stupid honeymoon…
GKB (Radha Rani): Arey this is Bhabhi’s kamaal! Get ready soon…
Vicky: Okay ma… I will get ready now… ~Vicky’s pov~ This is wonderful…. Will Dev cancel his honeymoon?

~Hall~
Ishwari comes out…
Dev: Ma… I am leaving now… It’s getting late… Where’s Vicky?
Ishwari: Dev… Why are you hurrying so much? Have breakfast and leave na… Vicky will come down by then…
Dev: Nahi ma… I have to leave early and come home early… Flight is at 1.25 AM… Midnight… I won’t get proper sleep… If I come home early, I can take rest…
Mamaji enters…
Ishwari: ~feels upset; composes herself~ Dev… Why can’t you take morning flight? In case, you need to work on Vicky’s job, you can postpone your trip for few days, right?
Mamaji shakes his head; Sona comes with lunch boxes and water; Kichu brings two juice glasses…
Dev: Ma… Come; sit here… ~makes Ishwari sit~ Ma, international flights usually leave at midnight… And I can’t postpone this trip ma… First, we have already received our visas… Second, Sona has so many dreams… I can’t disappoint her… I promised… Remember?
Sona smiles ~Sona’s pov~ Wah my pati Dev…. I don’t know how you do this… All these little things make me fall in love with you all over again…
Ishwari: ~keeps wooden expression~ Yes… I remember…
Dev: ~holds Ishwari’s hands~ Don’t worry about Vicky’s job ma… I will ask Sharma to take care of basic training… By the time I come back, he will be trained fully in basics… I can give him further training… Don’t worry…
Vicky: ~comes down~ Bhai, I am ready…
Dev: Excellent… Let’s leave…
Sona: Wait… Dev, here’s the lunch boxes for both of you… And please drink this fresh juice before you leave…
Dev: ~smiles; takes his lunch box~ Thank you… ~drinks the juice~
Vicky: ~makes weird face; drinks juice~ Bhabhi, I don’t need lunch box… I will have something outside…
Sona nods…
Ria: Bhabhi, I will take the box… You are so wonderful!
Nikki: For me??? ~pouts~
Sona: ~smiles~ Awww… Don’t feel sad; you will get your box when you leave…
Nikki: Yay!!!
Dev smiles brightly; nods and leaves with Vicky…
Ria: I will leave in sometime… ~goes in~
Sona: I will go and finish my packing…
Mamaji: Haan bahurani… Go ahead
Sona goes in…
Mamaji: Kachori… Phir se? Ishwari… See our Dev is happy… Don’t you feel happy seeing Dev happy?
Ishwari: ~feels emotional~ Haan bhaiyya…
Mamaji: Then relax…
Ishwari sighs and nods…

~Dev’s office~
Dev: Come Vicky… This is my cabin and that’s Tina, my assistant’s cabin…
Sharma: Sir, did you call me?
Dev: Yes, Vivek Sharma… This is my younger brother Vicky… Vicky, this is senior Trainer here…
Vicky shakes hand with Sharma…
Dev: Vicky, you have a seat here… I will call you soon… Sharma, you come with me…
Vicky: Ji bhai… ~Vicky’s pov~ I think it’s time to call…
~Dev’s cabin~
Dev: Sharma, I want you to give Vicky all the basic training…
Sharma: Okay sir… Is he starting as intern?
Dev: Huh… No… I am planning to give him a position at work… As a manager…
Sharma: ~looks surprised~ Does he have prior experience?
Dev: Actually, no… That’s why, I am insisting you to give him basic training… I have taken leave for couple of weeks… Once I am back, I will give him intensive training… You start straightaway… ~calls Tina~
Sharma: Okay sir… ~leaves the room~
Tina: Sir…
Dev: Type offer letter… Vicky… I mean Vikram Vashisht… For the position of Sales Manager. The offer letter terms and conditions, you know it pretty well. Even the package remains the same.
Tina: ~looks surprised~ Okay sir… I will ~leaves the room~
Dev thinks of Sona ~Dev’s pov~ Can’t wait to leave on our honeymoon…

~Outside Dev’s cabin~
Sharma: Vicky… Sir… Please come with me… For the next couple of weeks, I will be training you…
Vicky: ~nods~ Is Bhai going to be there too?
Sharma: No… He’s on leave for the couple of weeks… Once he comes back, he will take care…
Vicky: Alright… Please go ahead; I will follow you… Have to make a call…
Sharma: ~nods~ Down the corridor, turn left… That’s where is my cabin…
Vicky: Okay… Will come there…
Sharma leaves…
Vicky: ~over the call~ Hello… I am finally in Dev’s company… Our plan will succeed sooner than we thought… Dev won’t be there for the couple of weeks… ~cuts the call~ Ab hoga asli khel… Mere pyaare bhai… ~laughs crazy~

~Evening~
Dev rushes home… Vicky follows Dev…
GKB (Radha Rani): Aa gaya mera beta… How was your first day? Bahut kaam tha?
Vicky: Nahi ma… Pehle kaam seekunga na…
Mamaji: Radha… It was his first day!
GKB (Radha Rani): Phir bhi… I am so proud of my beta… Heera hai… Nazar toh utarloon…
Ishwari: ~comes out~ Dev, you are home…
Dev: Haan ma… Where’s Sona? I will go and help her… She’s been doing everything alone… Ma, we will leave by 8…
Ishwari: Teek hai beta…
Dev nods and goes to his room…

~Devakshi room~
Sona: ~to herself~ Clothes check; jewellery check; tickets check; passports check; ~scratches her head with pen~
Dev steps silently; hugs Sona from behind…
Dev: I am home Mrs. Khargosh…
Sona: Finally, I thought I’ll be going on my honeymoon alone like Kangana in Queen…
Dev: ~turns Sona towards him~ No way… Wait, will freshen up and we will leave by 8.
Sona: 8? Okay Mr. Obodhro…. Get ready soon…
Dev: All the packing done?
Sona: Haan… I have packed yours too…
Dev: ~holding Sona’s cheeks~ You are the best wife in the whole universe!
Sona: ~smiles~ Go now… Or we will be late…
Dev: Yes, madam!
Dev goes in and gets ready

~At the airport~
Devakshi reach the airport; wait in the lounge.
Announcement: Passengers of AF 225 are requested to gather at Terminal T3. The flight shall leave as scheduled. Thank you.
Sona: ~jumps in her chair~ Dev chalo… Let’s go to the terminal…
Dev smiles seeing Sona’s excitement…
Sona: Dev… Chalo…
Dev: Achcha baba… Come on…
Devakshi board the flight…

~In the flight~
Pilot: Ladies and gentlemen. This is your pilot Captain Gurvinder Singh along with co-pilot Pierre Dubois. The AF 225 non-stop flight Delhi to Paris is ready for take-off. The weather outside is pleasant with the temperature of 18 Degrees Celsius. Enjoy your ride.
Bonjour mesdames et messieurs. C’est votre copilote Pierre Dubois avec le capitaine Gurvinder Singh. Le vol sans escale AF 225 Delhi vers Paris est prêt pour le décollage. Le temps dehors est agréable avec la température de 18 degrés Celsius. Profitez de votre promenade.
The air hostesses start demonstrating the safety instructions…
Sona ~looks excited~ Dev!!! We are going to Paris!!!
Dev: ~looks tired; smiles~ Haan Sona… Let’s sleep now…
Sona: But, I don’t feel sleepy! I am too excited…
Dev: Mrs. Khargosh… See, it’s past 1 am…
Sona: ~suddenly realizes~ Ookkay… Will try sleeping…
Dev: Good night wifey… ~Dev’s pov~ When excited, Sona is as cute as a kid…
Devakshi slowly fall asleep…

~9 hours 15 minutes later~
Pilot: Good morning, Ladies and gentlemen. The AF 225 Non-stop flight Delhi to Paris has arrived at Paris. The weather outside is sunny at 9 Degrees Celsius. Hope you all had a pleasant ride – This is Captain Gurvinder Singh along with Pierre Dubois signing off…
Bonjour mesdames et messieurs. Le vol AF 225 sans escale de Delhi à Paris est arrivé à Paris. Le temps dehors est ensoleillé à 9 degrés Celsius. J’espère que vous avez tous eu un tour agréable – C’est copilote Pierre Dubois avec le capitaine Gurvinder Singh au revoir !
Sona looks out excited!
Sona: Dev! Get up!!!! Wake up!!! We are at Paris now!!!
Dev wakes up slowly…
Soon Devakshi come to the airport; collect their luggage…
Sona takes first step outside the airport; smiles brightly…
Sona: ~to herself~ Paris! Here we come!!! Dev!!! We are here! Finally, here! ~jumps excited~
Dev smiles brightly…
Dev: Sona, do you know that Indian time is 4 hours 30 minutes ahead of France time?
Sona: ~smiles~ I know my pati Dev… Let’s go to our hotel?
Dev: Sure, Madame! ~shows his hand~ Taxi! ~taxi arrives~ Le 123 Sebastopol – Astotel
Taxi guy: Oui monsieur (Yes sir)! Une aide pour les bagages, monsieur ? (Any help needed for luggage, sir ?)
Dev: Oui (Yes)!
Taxi guy steps out and helps with the luggage.
Sona: ~smiles~ Wow Dev! You do know French… Merci monsieur (Thank you sir)
Dev: ~smiles~ Well, I know a little… To interact with foreign clients, I had to learn to few important words and phrases.
Sona: Awesome!
Soon they reach the hotel.

~Hotel Le 123 Sebastopol – Astotel~
Dev: Hi! The honeymoon suite… Booked in name of Mrs. And Mr. Dikshit?
Front Desk (Receptionist): Oui monsieur! ~checks in the computer~ Yes! Thank you for choosing us. Hope you do have a wonderful stay here.
Soon a hotel employee arrives and takes the luggage.
Devakshi follow the boy; smiling to each other.

~Honeymoon suite~
The hotel help places the luggage and goes away smiling.
Sona: ~looks around~ Such a beautiful room… ~checks around~
~Door knocks~
Dev: Yes, come in
Hotel employee: Sir, we have our best compliments from our hotel for the honeymoon couple. Congratulations! Please enjoy your stay ~places a basket with champagne bottle; a basket full of L’Occitane skin care products; macarons and chocolates~
Dev: Merci beaucoup… ~gives him tips~
The hotel employee smiles and leaves.
Sona: ~checks the gifts~ Wow!!! Such an amazing service!!! And the bed!!! Excellent!!! I am so loving this!
Dev: Yes… Guess I should call Tina and thank her for booking this place.
Sona: Hmmm… Go ahead… I will go freshen up… ~opens the bags; takes clothes and goes in~ ~Sona’s pov~ Ya right… Tina’s selection… Hmph…
Dev: ~looks confused~ Did I tell something wrong? ~calls Tina~

~On Call~
Dev: Good morning Tina…
Tina: Good morning Sir! Have you reached?
Dev: Yes… Thank you so much for booking this honeymoon suite. Good selection.
Tina: Sir, I did book the place, but it was ma’am’s selection.
Dev: ~looks shocked~ What??? You mean Sona?
Tina: Yes, sir… She selected and requested me to book the place. Luckily, I could manage.
Dev: Okay… Did Vicky arrive for training?
Tina: Yes, sir…
Dev: Okay will call later… ~cuts the call~
~Dev’s pov~ Oh no… That’s why Sona became upset… Stupid Dev… You managed to make her upset on the first day itself… I should make her smile ~takes the chocolate~
Sona comes out after sometime…
Dev: ~hugs her from behind~ I am sorry… I didn’t know that you selected… Forgive me please…
Sona: Now got to know? ~pouts~ Go freshen up first…
Dev: No… Not till you forgive me… Here, Open your mouth!
Sona: ~resists; finally opens mouth~ What is it?
Dev: ~feeds her the chocolate~ I am sorry Ms. Bose…
Sona: ~eats; smiles~ It’s Mrs. Dikshit for you ~grabs the chocolate; feeds Dev~ Now go… Freshen up…
Dev: Yes, madam! ~salutes Sona and goes inside~
Sona: ~shakes her head~ Dev… Ek dum pagol…
After sometime Dev comes out…
Sona: Dev, shall we call home and inform?
Dev: Yes, Sona… Let me… ~calls Ishwari; puts on loud speaker~ Ma… Good morning… ~Sona intervenes~ Ma!! We have reached the hotel safely. ~Dev smiles; continues~ Now we are taking rest. Soon we will be going out for breakfast… We might go sightseeing later. We will call once we come back to the room. Okay? Ji ma… Inform everyone… Bye… ~cuts the call~
Sona: ~sees the time~ Dev, let’s have our breakfast and then go sightseeing.
Dev: Alright…. ~suddenly worries~ Let me check if there are any vegetarian hotels nearby… Do you want to have non-vegetarian food? After marriage, you haven’t had any… ~looks worried~
Sona: Dev… ~hugs him~ Relax, I am not craving for non-vegetarian food now… Actually, I am not a hard core non-vegetarian… And guess what there’s a vegetarian hotel… 10 mins walk from here… Indian… BollyNan. You can find all north Indian dishes…
Dev: ~looks surprised~ Really?
Sona: Yup… Why do you think I selected this hotel? And there’s metro station nearby… We can take that… I think it covers all the major places… Or we can always take Uber… Your choi..
Dev cuts her talk and kisses deeply
Sona feels shocked and kisses back…
Dev releases reluctantly. Sona looks light headed; feels knees going weak and wobbles… Sona looks on dazed
Dev: Sona ~grabs her; snaps finger~ Did I ever tell you that you are the best wife in the whole universe? ~hugs her tight~
Sona: ~snaps out; smiles brightly~ Only once or twice…
Dev: I love you Mrs. Dikshit…
Sona: I love you too Mr. Dikshit…
Dev: Now let’s go!
Sona: Yup… Paris, the city of love… We are coming…

Yay!!! Devakshi in Paris!!!!
What are they going to do in Paris now?
What’s Vicky’s plan?
Stay tuned for the next part!!!
(P.S. Forgive if I made any mistake in French… Used Google Translate)

43 comments

  1. Archi

    Finally! I had been waiting for this. Please post next one soon. About Google translate – I have tried it with Hindi and English and it did a terrible job. Completely messed up the sentence structure. I don’t know French so can’t comment on that. Otherwise, as usual, no words.

  2. Maleeha

    |Registered Member

    Splendid Job indeed…..💘💖💓💖💕❤😍💟👍💗💟❤💘💓💋……it’s really a masterpiece….❤💓💕💋💞😘😍……loving it more and more….💓❤……ishwari….or gkb se koi umeed nhi hai……but neha here is 💖💗💟💓💖💕 ……Amazing one dear…..💓💞😍😘💕❤

  3. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey di,
    The episode was just amazing. Well, idk French so, no idea of the language!!😉 Moreover, I’m loving this honeymoon track, but really worried about what’s being conspired against DevAkshi😢 I guess Vicky has been planning with Mr. X.

    Well, erm.. hope you get to post sooner this time. I’d be waiting.

    Loads of love❤

  4. Heshine

    |Registered Member

    Hey Kalpana di.. !!!😍😍😘😙😗😘😍😙😘the epi was fantabulous.. . ….!!!!oh… I juz couldn’t ne feeling.. !!!such crazy.. !!!u juz nailed it….. !!!!😍😍😘😗💞💓💟💝Awwwwwwwwwww. . . ……..!!!!I couldn’t resist… Saying this …..!!!definitely…. U r such an amazing….AUTHOR………!!!! U r really… 💞💟💓💞💝💓💛💟💘💞lovable…..!!!he could u write….so tremendously… I couldn’t imagine…..💟💟💓💞oh…!!!☺😊i loved each and every way u wrote….!!!its flawless…..!!!!juz majestic.. !!!!!!!!😗😙😗😘😙😗😘u juz made it phenomenal…..!!!superb … Sissy.. !!!awesome….I juz don’t have more words to explain…..my joy…..!!!😍😘😙😑☺☺😊u staggered me…..!!!really.. !!I should say… !!!and u juz made ths ff as a real serial…..each and everything….!!!announcements in both eng and French….!!!!😃was lovely… And Dev speaking in French….!!!!!oh… U have looked into everything…… !!!!and thought of leaving no mistakes….!!!was great…..and adorable…..!!!!oh.. I juz couldn’t do ths if I would be in ur place….!!! Really….!!!😑😑😑😍😚😛😛😝😋im very happy.. ..!!! Now…and pls do update the next one soon….and à nouveau I’ episode était tel genial. …….!!!!😛😋😝😜😘😙😍😗😘
    Love…. Love…. 💞💟💓
    Heshine…💞💟💓

  5. Manya

    |Registered Member

    Kya bolu??U never leave words di❤️😘❣💓💕😍💟💞💗💖😋💝❤️💝😋💖💗💗😉
    Dev babu’s character must be like this in the serial!!!❤️❤️
    Di 1:25am ki flight ke liye 8:00bje kyon nikle thoda jaldi nhi hogaya ya phir Delhi ke traffic ke baare mein soch Kar jaldi nikle😝#another pj by me😜
    Aap bilkul wahi karte Ho joh serial mein Hona chahiye❤️❤️Love u for that
    Aapko French Aati hai??bcoz translator bahut Kharab translation karta hai
    Post soooooooooon❤️❤️Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    Love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love
    ❤️💕💗💖😍😋😉❣😘😘💞💝💟💘💞💞💝💝💝💓❤️❤️

    • Kalpana

      |Author

      Ayushi, traffic yes… It would take one hour plus? International boarding means you have to be there two hours early na… So thought 🙂 I wish they had shown this way in the serial… Agar budget ki problem hai, toh kulu, manal, darjeeling ya ooty bol dete… They could’ve gone easily….

      I know little words in French… Like oui… non… Merci beaucoup… Sil vous plait…
      I wish i could learn French and Spanish…

      • Manya

        |Registered Member

        Then u should start learning it or i will teach u both😘i knkw ftench and my sister knows Spanish so i will teach u one word each day
        French
        Trés bien-very good
        Pronunciation-tree beeyan
        Spanish
        Peru-dog
        Peiru 😘
        Au revoir-bye in french
        O ravua

  6. Junee

    |Registered Member

    Kali, excellent! This is what we wanted from the serial! Wanted Dev’s character to be groomed this way! Well done dear! I too know very little french like Dev! Merci beaucoup!!!

  7. Erika

    |Registered Member

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update dear and finally devakshi have reached paris perfect storyline i think the writer of krpkab must read this ff and of course follow it as u r the best dear any ways loved the episode to the core and lots of love and big hugs to u dear………………………………………. update asap no words to say more dear so i m speechless dear

  8. Niki645

    |Registered Member

    Kalpana di!!!!!! Too good!!
    At last DevAkshi on their honeymoon without problem🙏🏻🙏🏻
    And the way Dev promised👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
    And this entire episode was amazing!!
    Lots of love❤️❤️😘

  9. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Kalpana di!!! This was amazing!
    It’s so hard to believe DevAkshi are finally there! In paris! Yaaaayyy!
    I sooo badly love Dev’s character here!!!
    Loads of love!<3
    P.S.- I'd recently written this OS on DevAkshi called 'NIGHT-TIME'. Please do have a look at it, if time permits!

  10. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Awesome as always. I don’t know how you manage to write such beautiful episodes. Really amazing, loved it so so much! And I somewhat understand French because I have learnt the basics. Everything was just perfect! Post the next one soon. Eagerly waiting.

    Loads of love
    Maria

  11. Rockzzzzzz

    |Registered Member

    Could it be better than this…of course not…it was amazing,cute awesome,beautiful..😊😍😍😍😁😁😄😄😚😚…loved it😍…..god knows what this vicky is planning??….hope i get to know soon…plz post soon…😊

  12. Juhi

    It was ummmmaaaaa….😙😙
    Kinda episode really …
    Luved it to the core..
    Did I tell you u’r is the best version of krpkab ever??
    Perhaps 30 or 31 times…😆😆😆😅😅
    But believe me jitne baar boloon kam hai and I actually mean it…👈👈
    And Di really I was missing u’r ff so so so much. …
    And everyday na ..everyday I was returning to TU page searching for it.
    Anyways. … the episode was gr8 specially jo Pisswari ke munh par char panch jhapad har do do ghanton padte hain na vo dekh kr to Dil garden garden kar ho jata hai…💐💐
    And jab Dev ne Tina ki baat ki tab Sona ke expressions dekh kr (I say dekh cz I can actually visualize ur episodes) I felt Sona is jealous 🔥🔥
    But then jab aage pada tab laga How silly I m and a biiiiiiggg… idiotic grin on my chehra. ..😅😅😅
    Seriously aap hamare har expectations ko galat sabit kr dete ho and give us something beyond our imagination leaving us dumbstruck 😮😮😮😅😅☺☺☺
    And Di acording 2 me u shud give more of Devakshi MASTI during sightseeing sprinkled with romance cz that typical romantic honeymoon can be seen everywhere but “Out Of Clichè” kinda ff is the specialty of my dear dear Kalpana Di…
    And U can end honeymoon week in 2-2n half episodes. ..
    And in Vicky and villian track also u can give some hints to Sona during sightseeing like someone spying them or anyone clashing with them and falling of something which will give them some premonitions about something bad waiting 4 them…Or u can add Ranveer and Bose bros also here like letting them know a bit and trying to tell Devakshi and lack of signal etc etc…

    Sorry maine bahut bol diya
    Out Of excitement u know…
    Use my suggestions if u wish or do as ur planning but anyways I’m die hard fan of ur ff….
    Luv u Kalpi Di and try to post thooo..da jaldi na…😅😅

    Sorry again 4 posting another ff here…
    Read it if u get time or else jst
    “THIS FF LIKE ALL PREVIOUS IS JST FANTABULOUS “☺☺☺

    • Kalpana

      |Author

      Awww… Thank you Juhi 🙂 I so look forward to your comments 🙂 Yup working on it… There are so many beautiful places in Paris 🙂 So, it’s taking time… I want all Devakshi fans to smile in happiness 🙂

  13. Erina

    What to say seriously I’m speechless but this tym for two reasons first as always by ur epi my kali swtheart nd😘😘 secondly for my super late comment sorrrryyyyy 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 swtheart 😭😭. but i was out of station thats why not commented ..😔😔
    Coming to ur epi mai kya kahun mjhe nhi pta bas itna hi keh skti hun muskurane ki wajah tm ho gun gunane ki vajah tm ho … 😊😉😍😍😘😘😘bcse krpkab ne to gussa aur Tulane ko jaise kasam hi khaa rkha h …. Post soon kali waiting for ur next epi ….
    With love to my kali 😍😍😘😘😘💞💞💝💗💟💖💕
    Ur erina I hope u remeber m .. 😜😜

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