Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 31)

Hi guys!!! Finally, able to type the next part… How were your Diwali celebrations????
Sorry for the delay… I am dedicating this episode to all my awesome readers!!! Special dedication: Archi

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Recap:
~Neha’s sasural~
Ranvir breaks Neha’s fast…
Neha: Ranvir… I want to discuss something with you…
Ranvir: What is it Neha?
Neha: Ranvir… I…
Ranvir: Go on… Why hesitating so much?
Neha: Ranvir… I want to start working….

Ranvir: Work? Why suddenly?
Neha: ~feels slightly awkward~ Well… I always wanted to achieve something… ~turns away~ I want to create an identity for myself… I have always felt that Bhai got everything… I have always been identified as Dev’s sister… I wish to be known as Neha….
Ranvir: ~turning Neha towards him~ If that’s what you want, go ahead… I am with you… I know you have that ability in you…
Neha: But I am not as educated as my Bhai…. I want to work, but don’t know whether I will get…
Ranvir: ~cups Neha’s face~ Remember what you felt about learning English? You were frustrated and angry… But once you began learning, there was no stopping you… I agree that initially it will be tough… But, you will get used to it… Before clinching your job, you need to attend interviews… I will groom you on how to clear interviews successfully…

From dressing to common questions that can be asked, I’ll train you…
Neha: ~looking grateful~ Really Ranvir? I am so grateful…
Ranvir: Hey… I am not doing any favour… I need a return payment for my services…
Neha: Payment? What kind of payment? ~smiling softly~
Ranvir: ~pulls Neha close; hugs her~ I need kheer prepared by my lovely wife…. Only then I will…

Neha: ~hugs Ranvir~ Done!
Ranvir: Neha… Please tell ma, once before you apply… That way you can take her blessings too…
Neha: I will Ranvir… ~smiles~
Ranvir smiles…
Neha goes out… ~Neha’s pov~ I am sorry Ranvir… I had to lie… I promise to work hard and support you… If not every other expense, I can at least manage my expenses…
~Hall~
Neha: Mummyji…
Neha’s sasuma: Haan Neha?

~Devakshi Home~
Sona: Dev!!! What’s the surprise?
Dev: Open your eyes now…
Sona: ~opening her eyes wide~ What’s this? Tickets?
Dev: ~hugs from behind~ Yup… It’s honeymoon package… Paris…
Sona: Paris!!! How did you know that I loved Paris as honeymoon destination? I didn’t tell you… ~looks surprised and excited~
Dev: ~scratches his head slightly~ Well, I cheated there… I called Elena to find out…
Sona: ~laughs slightly~ Not bad Mr. Obodhro!!! How long have you planned for?
Dev: 10-15 days… Elena told me that much… I have even applied for our visas…
Sona: Awesome!!! Thank you so much Dev!!! When are, we leaving?
Dev: Haven’t planned yet… Let us decide once the visas come… Okay?
Sona: Okay Mr. Dikshit!!! I am so happy!!! Awww… Mr. Obodhro is so caring…
Dev: ~frowns~ Ms. Bose… Even now I am Obodhro?
Sona: It’s Mrs. Dikshit for you… ~hugs Dev~
Rabi: ~coughing slightly~ See, I told you that she doesn’t miss us anymore… She has her saiyyan now…
Devakshi move away; feeling embarrassed…
Sharan: You are right bro…
Sona: Sharan! Rabi!! What are you both doing here?
Sharan: We thought you will be missing us and decided to come… Here, came and realized that you are enjoying a lot… ~pouts~
Sona: Hey!!! It’s nothing like that… I do miss you all!!!!
Dev: ~winks at Rabi and Sharan; gasps~ Iska matlab… You feel that I don’t love or care enough about you…. You miss your brothers…. ~looks down~
Sona: ~looking exasperated~ Dev!!!! Tum bhi!!!! ~looks angry~
Dev, Sharan and Rabi start laughing…
Sona: ~huffs~ You!!!!

Rabi: Sorry di… ~hugs Sona~
Sharan: Hey!!! Me too… Group hug time!!! ~also hugs Sona~
Sona: ~smiles~ I feel so happy!!! ~stomach growls~ And hungry as well ~looks sheepish~
Rabi: Awww my dear sis… Looks like my sis was starving all day… Jijaji, where’s the food? She’s so hungry…
Dev tries telling…
Sharan: So, unfair that our sis is fasting… No rules for jijaji….
Sona: Awww… Please don’t pull his leg… He’s also on fast… For me…
Dev: ~nods as stomach growls~ Very hungry… Let’s eat… Please
Sharan and Rabi look at each other surprised…
Sharan: Wah!! Superb! This is called love…

Rabi: ~throws arm around Dev~ I am so proud of you jijaji… But are you sure you want lambi aayu of our Sona… Will be very difficult to manage… ~smiles mischievous~
Dev: ~mock thinks~ I didn’t even think about it!!! Oops…
Sona: ~gasps~ Rabi!! Dev!!!
Sharan, Dev and Rabi laugh again…
Sharan: Achcha, we will leave now… We brought few gifts… Here’s for you both… ~hands small boxes~
Dev: Thank you so much…
Sharan and Rabi: Bye!!!
Sona: ~feels emotional~ Bye…
Sharan and Rabi leave…
Sona: ~pulls Dev’s ear~ What was that?
Dev: Sona!!! Ouch… Sorry… I was just having fun…
Sona: ~twists some more~ So bad… Mr. Obodhro!!!
Ishwari: ~coming out; looks shocked~ Dev… Sona… What are you both doing here? The fast has been broken na? Shouldn’t you both be inside for dinner?
Sona releases Dev’s ear…
Dev: Ma… We were just coming…
Devakshi enter the home feeling sheepish…
Ishwari shakes her head…

~Dining room~
Everyone sit and Sona starts serving…
Ria: Yummy… The food smells so amazing…
Nikki: Yes… I feel so hungry… I can a whole person now…

Mamaji: ~laughing~ Eat na… Arey Sona bahu, sit down… Start eating…
Sona: Ji Mamaji…. ~sees Ishwari~ Ma… Please sit down… I will serve…
Ishwari enters and sits… Sona starts serving…
Finally, Sona sits to eat…
Dev: Mamaji… Ma… We have planned to go on our honeymoon… Paris ~looks slightly nervous~
Ishwari: Honeymoon?
Ria and Nikki: PARIS!!!!!
GKB (Radha Rani): Waise Parys? Yeh kahan pe aata hai? Assam ke paas? People keep weird names there…
Mamaji: Radha… Paris, Assam ke paas nahi hai… Videsh… Out of Bharat… That’s amazing Dev beta… When are, you planning to?
Dev: Will decide as soon as the visas come Mamaji… Had applied 20 days ago… It should come any moment now…

Ishwari: ~looks uncomfortable~ For how many days?
Dev: About 10-15 days? You should ask Sona… She has planned a huge list of things…
Ishwari: ~looks at Sona~ So Sona decided this trip?
Dev: Nahi ma… I gave Sona a surprise! Elena told me about Sona’s dream… I thought why not fulfil it?
Sona looks at Dev gratefully and feels proud…
GKB (Radha Rani): 15 days? ~looks at Ishwari~ Par jiji se pooche bagair? How can you do that? How can you take decision on your own? And Sona has a huge list of things – matlab you will ask Sona and decide everything?
Dev: Wo…
Mamaji: Radha!!! It’s honeymoon trip… Newlyweds go on the trip… Dev will obviously look for wife’s approval na? Sona has to go with him… Not me, you and Ishwari… Dev beta, you don’t take tension… Just plan for the trip… Okay?
Dev: Ji Mamaji… Ma, tu teek hai na…. I wanted to surprise Sona… So, kept it a secret…
Ishwari: ~nods uncomfortable~ It’s alright… ~Ishwari’s pov~ Dev decided everything… How can he stay away from me for such a long period? Maybe he didn’t think of it… I will talk to him, then he will understand…
Nikki: Bhaiyya…. Bhabhi… We want loads of things from Paris… Bhaiyya I am going to give you a huge list…

Ria: Not just you… Even I will…
Dev: No problem… Whatever, you want write and give… We will get them all… Perhaps, give it to Sona… She knows about girl’s fashion more than me…
Sona: ~smiles~ Yes… Otherwise, you will have to adjust with dull and boring colours like grey…
Nikki: No way… Bhabhi, you have to do shopping for us… Waise, we are very happy to see this side of bhaiyya…
Ria: Ya… He never used to go for shopping… Attend business meetings and come home straight…
Dev: ~smiles~ Waise, we have to go for shopping before we leave for our honeymoon… I will take off for couple of days…

Sona: ~nods~ Teek hai… Not just for Ria and Nikki… We will get gifts for everyone… ~smiles brightly~
GKB looks pleased…
Soon everyone finish their dinner and leave to their respective rooms…

~Ishwari room~
Ishwari paces around; feeling tensed… ~Ishwari’s pov~ First the vrat… Now this… My Dev is deciding everything on his own… Has he forgotten me? Am I not very important for him anymore? How shall I find out?
Ishwari feels nervous…

~Neha’s sasural~
Neha: Mummyji…
Neha’s sasuma: Haan Neha?
Neha: Mummyji… I want to start working… Find a job…
Neha’s sasuma: Job? Achanak?
Neha: Ji mummyji… I want to create an identity for myself… Khud ke pehchaan… ~looks down~
Neha’s sasuma: Did you speak to Ranvir? What did he tell?
Neha: Haan mummyji… He has no issues…
Neha’s sasuma: Then how can we have issues with that? Go… Find a good job and start working…
Neha: ~feeling relieved; bends to take blessings~ Thank you, mummyji…
Neha’s sasuma: Arey re… No touching my feet… You are my beti… ~lifts her~ I want you to succeed in your job… My aashirwaad is with you…
Neha smiles

~Elsewhere~
X goes through the photos and papers….
~X’s pov~ How are you Mr. Dev Dikshit? Are you enjoying your married life? Looks like you are planning your honeymoon…. Go ahead Mr. Dev Dikshit… Enjoy your vacation…
And when you come back for Diwali…. You will get a big dhamaka… Boom!!!! ~laughs crazily~ ~starts humming Gumnaam hai koi~

Yay!!! Devakshi going on honeymoon!!! Will Ishwari let them?
X was silent all these days… What is he planning now?
What will happen next?
Comments please!!!

41 comments

  1. Niki645

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    Amazing Kalpana di!!!!!!
    I am waiting for the honeymoon part…😃
    U know, the way u write I feel as if i am seeing everything in front of my eyes!!!!
    Awesome!!!!!
    Post next part asap😘😃

  2. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Hey Kalpana di!
    Woaaah! The episode was incredible! Loved it to the core!
    Each and every scene was sooo cute today! Of course, leaving the scenes where Ishwari was😂😂😂
    I can’t help but admire Neha in your writings! She seems to be so sensible and mature enough to understand the issues being faces by her house and willingly wants to help out, unlike her character in the real series, who simply wants to get rid of the troubles and run out!
    So, it seems like Ishwari is yet again a bit too possessive in he matter if letting her Son out without her…🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
    But, as to what I believe, your ff is full of positivity and thus, Dev and Sonakshi should be able to leave for their honeymoon, hopefully…🙂🙂🙂
    Hmmmm….but who is this ‘X’???🤔🤔🤔🤔 Seems like I’ve gotta wait to learn about that for now…
    Do try to post really soon!
    Love ya!<3😘😘😘😘😘

    • Kalpana

      |Author

      Hi Anshita 🙂 Thank you so much dear… It takes time for the possessiveness to reduce dear… Yes, i love to keep it positive… The problems might come… But it should get resolved…. X… You will soon get to know 😉 Working on the next part!! Will post as early as possible…

  3. Maleeha

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    Kalpana…..it was superb and awesome episode……❤👍💖💟💗💋😍💘💞💕💋👍❤😊😘😋👍💘💟……..amazing……I’m loving this neha….intelligent and smart…..😘❤😍😍………but the question of the episode is…..Will ishwari let devakshi go…?????😅😊…….and the devakshi and sharabi….scene was funny and awesome…..💖💗💋💓😜😋❤😘💕💞❤😍💟💘👍

  4. Manya

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    Awesomeeeeeeeeee❤️💘😋💝😋💓💖💞💕💗💗😍😘💟❤️💖💓💝💞💖💖💟💘❤️😘💞💗💞💖❤️😋💝💘❤️😋😘😘💕💞😍
    Di can u plzzzzzzzzzzzz kill this Ishwari😜Plzzzzzz X should kill him😝If not in the Serial we can kill her in ur ff😂
    Post soon💖
    Love love💕

  5. Ria

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    Heya Kalpana di,
    The episode was marvellous! I loved it so much. So many questions popping up in my head at the moment. Who’s Mr. X and what’s he gonna do? Will Ishwari let DevAkshi go for honeymoon? I’ll be eagerly waiting. Hope you can post soon.

    Loads of love.❤

  6. Archi

    Hi Kalpana, to what do I owe the special mention?

    The story is going great. Why short? I am guessing because of festivals. I am looking forward to finding out what happens to the honeymoon trip in your take. In the original, Ishwari and Neha spoiled everything. And who is the X? Very curious.

    • Kalpana

      |Author

      As an amazing reader, you do deserve special mention 🙂 Yup, due to festivals, the episode was 6-7 pages long… Usually, it’s about 11-13… Typing the next episode… Will post as early as possible 🙂

  7. Heshine

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    Wow…..its really….amazing…..😍😘😙who is the X and please reveal him soon….and their honeymoon trip….😉😉😁……please post the next on as soon as possible sis……😍😘😙💞💟💝

  8. Erika

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    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi excited for the honeymoon epi pl. end the suspense soon and pl. reveal that who is this X and pl. haan this time no stopping devakshi’s honeymoon pl. dear as this ishwari is always behind devakshi’s happiness anyways comming back to the epi fabulous epi update asap……

  9. Neena

    Serial vantha mari honeymoon trip sudhapidathinga pls awesome epi show more rabi nikki sharan rhea scenes super
    I am a silent reader..

  10. Krish

    I think the way you write, you can write for the real show. And advice the show makers. Kudos to you. I really enjoy reading it. Nice .

  11. Nikki

    Hi! Kalpana Di! I just luv ur writing always💝💓……
    I don’t know how u make every one as a FAN fr ur writing💓💗💖……
    I just want to know the secret?
    Plz bathav Na!
    I like thr sensitive ad loving Neha!👸
    I just hope that it doesn’t bcm as serial,
    Ths devakshi wl go to honeymoon.
    Hope’s, I wish them as advance
    “HAPPY honeymoon, hope’s u make that as thoda lumbi epi.plz!plz!💖💗💓💝………

  12. Erina

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    Wow i’m proud to hve writter like u my swtheart…. How lovingly u portraying all d character in ur ff….. Wooooow hats of to ur thought nd lovely writting skill…… Nd i don’t even bother for that

  13. Erina

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    Wow i’m proud to hve writter like u my swtheart…. How lovingly u portraying all d character in ur ff….. Wooooow hats of to ur thought nd lovely writting skill…… Nd i don’t even bother for that mr.x bcse i love u nd trust u…… So i’m relaxed bcse u r writter of this awesome ff….
    Love u swtheart kali….. ND seriously post soon i’m eager to read ur next epi……
    With loads of love to my kali 💞💖💞😘😘😘😘😘😍😄😄😊

  14. Junee

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    Dear dear Kali once again u always live upto my expectations! Your positivity and grace both just bewilder me! It makes me wonder that you must. E a wonderful soul who can transform the negative characters to positive! Neha has been portrayed so well and frankly speaking we would have expected her ( in the serial)to be as sensitive as your Neha!
    Ishwari too is a balanced version and we don’t feel repulsive as we do in the serial!
    I just wish that u keep giving such wonderful stories and the Makers should seriously consider going thru this!!
    Thank u my dear for making me smile and enjoy as I read it!!
    GIVE US MORE PLz DEAR KALI!!!!

  15. Junee

    |Registered Member

    Kali thanks a lot for providing the link as I always eagerly wait for your stories!
    As for ” x” am curious but positive becoz u must have thought of am amazing treat for us!!! I am confident about it!👍👍😊😊

    • Kalpana

      |Author

      HI Archi!!! Sorry for the dealy…. Was juggling office n house work… Have uploaded the next episode… Will be available soon after the moderation! Thank you so much for your patience sweetie…

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