Hi guys!!! Finally, able to type the next part⦠How were your Diwali celebrations????
Sorry for the delay… I am dedicating this episode to all my awesome readers!!! Special dedication: Archi
Recap:
~Nehaβs sasural~
Ranvir breaks Nehaβs fastβ¦
Neha: Ranvirβ¦ I want to discuss something with youβ¦
Ranvir: What is it Neha?
Neha: Ranvirβ¦ Iβ¦
Ranvir: Go on⦠Why hesitating so much?
Neha: Ranvirβ¦ I want to start workingβ¦.
Ranvir: Work? Why suddenly?
Neha: ~feels slightly awkward~ Wellβ¦ I always wanted to achieve somethingβ¦ ~turns away~ I want to create an identity for myselfβ¦ I have always felt that Bhai got everythingβ¦ I have always been identified as Devβs sisterβ¦ I wish to be known as Nehaβ¦.
Ranvir: ~turning Neha towards him~ If thatβs what you want, go aheadβ¦ I am with youβ¦ I know you have that ability in youβ¦
Neha: But I am not as educated as my Bhaiβ¦. I want to work, but donβt know whether I will getβ¦
Ranvir: ~cups Nehaβs face~ Remember what you felt about learning English? You were frustrated and angryβ¦ But once you began learning, there was no stopping youβ¦ I agree that initially it will be toughβ¦ But, you will get used to itβ¦ Before clinching your job, you need to attend interviewsβ¦ I will groom you on how to clear interviews successfullyβ¦
From dressing to common questions that can be asked, Iβll train youβ¦
Neha: ~looking grateful~ Really Ranvir? I am so gratefulβ¦
Ranvir: Heyβ¦ I am not doing any favourβ¦ I need a return payment for my servicesβ¦
Neha: Payment? What kind of payment? ~smiling softly~
Ranvir: ~pulls Neha close; hugs her~ I need kheer prepared by my lovely wifeβ¦. Only then I willβ¦
Neha: ~hugs Ranvir~ Done!
Ranvir: Nehaβ¦ Please tell ma, once before you applyβ¦ That way you can take her blessings tooβ¦
Neha: I will Ranvir⦠~smiles~
Ranvir smilesβ¦
Neha goes outβ¦ ~Nehaβs pov~ I am sorry Ranvirβ¦ I had to lieβ¦ I promise to work hard and support youβ¦ If not every other expense, I can at least manage my expensesβ¦
~Hall~
Neha: Mummyjiβ¦
Nehaβs sasuma: Haan Neha?
~Devakshi Home~
Sona: Dev!!! Whatβs the surprise?
Dev: Open your eyes nowβ¦
Sona: ~opening her eyes wide~ Whatβs this? Tickets?
Dev: ~hugs from behind~ Yupβ¦ Itβs honeymoon packageβ¦ Parisβ¦
Sona: Paris!!! How did you know that I loved Paris as honeymoon destination? I didnβt tell youβ¦ ~looks surprised and excited~
Dev: ~scratches his head slightly~ Well, I cheated thereβ¦ I called Elena to find outβ¦
Sona: ~laughs slightly~ Not bad Mr. Obodhro!!! How long have you planned for?
Dev: 10-15 daysβ¦ Elena told me that muchβ¦ I have even applied for our visasβ¦
Sona: Awesome!!! Thank you so much Dev!!! When are, we leaving?
Dev: Havenβt planned yetβ¦ Let us decide once the visas comeβ¦ Okay?
Sona: Okay Mr. Dikshit!!! I am so happy!!! Awwwβ¦ Mr. Obodhro is so caringβ¦
Dev: ~frowns~ Ms. Bose⦠Even now I am Obodhro?
Sona: Itβs Mrs. Dikshit for youβ¦ ~hugs Dev~
Rabi: ~coughing slightly~ See, I told you that she doesnβt miss us anymoreβ¦ She has her saiyyan nowβ¦
Devakshi move away; feeling embarrassedβ¦
Sharan: You are right broβ¦
Sona: Sharan! Rabi!! What are you both doing here?
Sharan: We thought you will be missing us and decided to come⦠Here, came and realized that you are enjoying a lot⦠~pouts~
Sona: Hey!!! Itβs nothing like thatβ¦ I do miss you all!!!!
Dev: ~winks at Rabi and Sharan; gasps~ Iska matlabβ¦ You feel that I donβt love or care enough about youβ¦. You miss your brothersβ¦. ~looks down~
Sona: ~looking exasperated~ Dev!!!! Tum bhi!!!! ~looks angry~
Dev, Sharan and Rabi start laughingβ¦
Sona: ~huffs~ You!!!!
Rabi: Sorry di⦠~hugs Sona~
Sharan: Hey!!! Me too⦠Group hug time!!! ~also hugs Sona~
Sona: ~smiles~ I feel so happy!!! ~stomach growls~ And hungry as well ~looks sheepish~
Rabi: Awww my dear sisβ¦ Looks like my sis was starving all dayβ¦ Jijaji, whereβs the food? Sheβs so hungryβ¦
Dev tries tellingβ¦
Sharan: So, unfair that our sis is fastingβ¦ No rules for jijajiβ¦.
Sona: Awwwβ¦ Please donβt pull his legβ¦ Heβs also on fast… For meβ¦
Dev: ~nods as stomach growls~ Very hungryβ¦ Letβs eatβ¦ Please
Sharan and Rabi look at each other surprisedβ¦
Sharan: Wah!! Superb! This is called loveβ¦
Rabi: ~throws arm around Dev~ I am so proud of you jijaji⦠But are you sure you want lambi aayu of our Sona⦠Will be very difficult to manage⦠~smiles mischievous~
Dev: ~mock thinks~ I didnβt even think about it!!! Oopsβ¦
Sona: ~gasps~ Rabi!! Dev!!!
Sharan, Dev and Rabi laugh againβ¦
Sharan: Achcha, we will leave nowβ¦ We brought few giftsβ¦ Hereβs for you bothβ¦ ~hands small boxes~
Dev: Thank you so muchβ¦
Sharan and Rabi: Bye!!!
Sona: ~feels emotional~ Byeβ¦
Sharan and Rabi leaveβ¦
Sona: ~pulls Devβs ear~ What was that?
Dev: Sona!!! Ouchβ¦ Sorryβ¦ I was just having funβ¦
Sona: ~twists some more~ So bad⦠Mr. Obodhro!!!
Ishwari: ~coming out; looks shocked~ Devβ¦ Sonaβ¦ What are you both doing here? The fast has been broken na? Shouldnβt you both be inside for dinner?
Sona releases Devβs earβ¦
Dev: Maβ¦ We were just comingβ¦
Devakshi enter the home feeling sheepishβ¦
Ishwari shakes her headβ¦
~Dining room~
Everyone sit and Sona starts servingβ¦
Ria: Yummyβ¦ The food smells so amazingβ¦
Nikki: Yesβ¦ I feel so hungryβ¦ I can a whole person nowβ¦
Mamaji: ~laughing~ Eat naβ¦ Arey Sona bahu, sit downβ¦ Start eatingβ¦
Sona: Ji Mamajiβ¦. ~sees Ishwari~ Maβ¦ Please sit downβ¦ I will serveβ¦
Ishwari enters and sitsβ¦ Sona starts servingβ¦
Finally, Sona sits to eatβ¦
Dev: Mamaji⦠Ma⦠We have planned to go on our honeymoon⦠Paris ~looks slightly nervous~
Ishwari: Honeymoon?
Ria and Nikki: PARIS!!!!!
GKB (Radha Rani): Waise Parys? Yeh kahan pe aata hai? Assam ke paas? People keep weird names thereβ¦
Mamaji: Radhaβ¦ Paris, Assam ke paas nahi haiβ¦ Videshβ¦ Out of Bharatβ¦ Thatβs amazing Dev betaβ¦ When are, you planning to?
Dev: Will decide as soon as the visas come Mamajiβ¦ Had applied 20 days agoβ¦ It should come any moment nowβ¦
Ishwari: ~looks uncomfortable~ For how many days?
Dev: About 10-15 days? You should ask Sonaβ¦ She has planned a huge list of thingsβ¦
Ishwari: ~looks at Sona~ So Sona decided this trip?
Dev: Nahi maβ¦ I gave Sona a surprise! Elena told me about Sonaβs dreamβ¦ I thought why not fulfil it?
Sona looks at Dev gratefully and feels proudβ¦
GKB (Radha Rani): 15 days? ~looks at Ishwari~ Par jiji se pooche bagair? How can you do that? How can you take decision on your own? And Sona has a huge list of things β matlab you will ask Sona and decide everything?
Dev: Woβ¦
Mamaji: Radha!!! Itβs honeymoon tripβ¦ Newlyweds go on the tripβ¦ Dev will obviously look for wifeβs approval na? Sona has to go with himβ¦ Not me, you and Ishwariβ¦ Dev beta, you donβt take tensionβ¦ Just plan for the tripβ¦ Okay?
Dev: Ji Mamajiβ¦ Ma, tu teek hai naβ¦. I wanted to surprise Sonaβ¦ So, kept it a secretβ¦
Ishwari: ~nods uncomfortable~ Itβs alrightβ¦ ~Ishwariβs pov~ Dev decided everythingβ¦ How can he stay away from me for such a long period? Maybe he didnβt think of itβ¦ I will talk to him, then he will understandβ¦
Nikki: Bhaiyyaβ¦. Bhabhiβ¦ We want loads of things from Parisβ¦ Bhaiyya I am going to give you a huge listβ¦
Ria: Not just youβ¦ Even I willβ¦
Dev: No problem… Whatever, you want write and giveβ¦ We will get them allβ¦ Perhaps, give it to Sonaβ¦ She knows about girlβs fashion more than meβ¦
Sona: ~smiles~ Yesβ¦ Otherwise, you will have to adjust with dull and boring colours like grey…
Nikki: No wayβ¦ Bhabhi, you have to do shopping for usβ¦ Waise, we are very happy to see this side of bhaiyyaβ¦
Ria: Yaβ¦ He never used to go for shoppingβ¦ Attend business meetings and come home straightβ¦
Dev: ~smiles~ Waise, we have to go for shopping before we leave for our honeymoonβ¦ I will take off for couple of daysβ¦
Sona: ~nods~ Teek hai⦠Not just for Ria and Nikki⦠We will get gifts for everyone⦠~smiles brightly~
GKB looks pleasedβ¦
Soon everyone finish their dinner and leave to their respective roomsβ¦
~Ishwari room~
Ishwari paces around; feeling tensedβ¦ ~Ishwariβs pov~ First the vratβ¦ Now thisβ¦ My Dev is deciding everything on his ownβ¦ Has he forgotten me? Am I not very important for him anymore? How shall I find out?
Ishwari feels nervousβ¦
~Nehaβs sasural~
Neha: Mummyjiβ¦
Nehaβs sasuma: Haan Neha?
Neha: Mummyjiβ¦ I want to start workingβ¦ Find a jobβ¦
Nehaβs sasuma: Job? Achanak?
Neha: Ji mummyji⦠I want to create an identity for myself⦠Khud ke pehchaan⦠~looks down~
Nehaβs sasuma: Did you speak to Ranvir? What did he tell?
Neha: Haan mummyjiβ¦ He has no issuesβ¦
Nehaβs sasuma: Then how can we have issues with that? Goβ¦ Find a good job and start workingβ¦
Neha: ~feeling relieved; bends to take blessings~ Thank you, mummyjiβ¦
Nehaβs sasuma: Arey reβ¦ No touching my feetβ¦ You are my betiβ¦ ~lifts her~ I want you to succeed in your jobβ¦ My aashirwaad is with youβ¦
Neha smiles
~Elsewhere~
X goes through the photos and papersβ¦.
~Xβs pov~ How are you Mr. Dev Dikshit? Are you enjoying your married life? Looks like you are planning your honeymoonβ¦. Go ahead Mr. Dev Dikshitβ¦ Enjoy your vacationβ¦
And when you come back for Diwaliβ¦. You will get a big dhamakaβ¦ Boom!!!! ~laughs crazily~ ~starts humming Gumnaam hai koi~
Yay!!! Devakshi going on honeymoon!!! Will Ishwari let them?
X was silent all these days⦠What is he planning now?
What will happen next?
Comments please!!!
41 Comments
Amazing Kalpana di!!!!!!
I am waiting for the honeymoon part…?
U know, the way u write I feel as if i am seeing everything in front of my eyes!!!!
Awesome!!!!!
Post next part asap??
Thank you so much sweetie π Working on the next part π
Hey Kalpana di!
Woaaah! The episode was incredible! Loved it to the core!
Each and every scene was sooo cute today! Of course, leaving the scenes where Ishwari was???
I can’t help but admire Neha in your writings! She seems to be so sensible and mature enough to understand the issues being faces by her house and willingly wants to help out, unlike her character in the real series, who simply wants to get rid of the troubles and run out!
So, it seems like Ishwari is yet again a bit too possessive in he matter if letting her Son out without her…?????
But, as to what I believe, your ff is full of positivity and thus, Dev and Sonakshi should be able to leave for their honeymoon, hopefully…???
Hmmmm….but who is this ‘X’??????? Seems like I’ve gotta wait to learn about that for now…
Do try to post really soon!
Love ya!<3?????
Hi Anshita π Thank you so much dear… It takes time for the possessiveness to reduce dear… Yes, i love to keep it positive… The problems might come… But it should get resolved…. X… You will soon get to know π Working on the next part!! Will post as early as possible…
Kalpana…..it was superb and awesome episode……β€???????????β€??????……..amazing……I’m loving this neha….intelligent and smart…..?β€??………but the question of the episode is…..Will ishwari let devakshi go…???????…….and the devakshi and sharabi….scene was funny and awesome…..??????β€???β€????
Thank you Maleeha π Working on the next part π Will post as early as possible π
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeβ€οΈ?????????????β€οΈ????????β€οΈ?????β€οΈ???β€οΈ??????
Di can u plzzzzzzzzzzzz kill this Ishwari?Plzzzzzz X should kill him?If not in the Serial we can kill her in ur ff?
Post soon?
Love love?
Lol π No dear π Can’t bump her off like that π Working on the next part.., Will post as early as possible π
Heya Kalpana di,
The episode was marvellous! I loved it so much. So many questions popping up in my head at the moment. Who’s Mr. X and what’s he gonna do? Will Ishwari let DevAkshi go for honeymoon? I’ll be eagerly waiting. Hope you can post soon.
Loads of love.β€
Thank you so much Ria π Yup, i am typing…. Will post as early possible π
Hi Kalpana, to what do I owe the special mention?
The story is going great. Why short? I am guessing because of festivals. I am looking forward to finding out what happens to the honeymoon trip in your take. In the original, Ishwari and Neha spoiled everything. And who is the X? Very curious.
As an amazing reader, you do deserve special mention π Yup, due to festivals, the episode was 6-7 pages long… Usually, it’s about 11-13… Typing the next episode… Will post as early as possible π
Wow…..its really….amazing…..???who is the X and please reveal him soon….and their honeymoon trip….???……please post the next on as soon as possible sis……??????
Thank you so much π π Working on it dearie… Will post as early as possible…
Offo, now whoz dis X?? I don’t like him..always after our Devakshi..anyways, awesome episode
Thank you Aaru π
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi excited for the honeymoon epi pl. end the suspense soon and pl. reveal that who is this X and pl. haan this time no stopping devakshi’s honeymoon pl. dear as this ishwari is always behind devakshi’s happiness anyways comming back to the epi fabulous epi update asap……
Sure Erika π Working on the same… Thank you so much π
Thank you Erika π Yup working on the next episode…. Will post as early as possible…
Awesome one. Loved it so much. And why does X always sing gumnam hai koi. ????
Thank you Dolly π Listen to the song dear π It’s so haunting…
Serial vantha mari honeymoon trip sudhapidathinga pls awesome epi show more rabi nikki sharan rhea scenes super
I am a silent reader..
Kandippa sodhpa maatein π π Thank you so much π
I am a silent reader. sooooooperb episode I just luv it.
Thank you so much Shilpa π Working on the next part π Will post as early as possible π
It was amazing…waiting for the suspense to open and hope that in this dev and sona will go for honeymoon….post soon
Thank you so much dear!!!
I think the way you write, you can write for the real show. And advice the show makers. Kudos to you. I really enjoy reading it. Nice .
Thank you so much Krish π π That means a lot to me π
Awesome episode dear excited for next episode
Thank you Princess π
Hi! Kalpana Di! I just luv ur writing always??β¦β¦
I don’t know how u make every one as a FAN fr ur writing???β¦β¦
I just want to know the secret?
Plz bathav Na!
I like thr sensitive ad loving Neha!?
I just hope that it doesn’t bcm as serial,
Ths devakshi wl go to honeymoon.
Hope’s, I wish them as advance
“HAPPY honeymoon, hope’s u make that as thoda lumbi epi.plz!plz!????β¦β¦β¦
Thank you Nikki π It’s a secret π π I am working on it dear π
Wow i’m proud to hve writter like u my swtheart…. How lovingly u portraying all d character in ur ff….. Wooooow hats of to ur thought nd lovely writting skill…… Nd i don’t even bother for that
Wow i’m proud to hve writter like u my swtheart…. How lovingly u portraying all d character in ur ff….. Wooooow hats of to ur thought nd lovely writting skill…… Nd i don’t even bother for that mr.x bcse i love u nd trust u…… So i’m relaxed bcse u r writter of this awesome ff….
Love u swtheart kali….. ND seriously post soon i’m eager to read ur next epi……
With loads of love to my kali ????????????
Thank you Erina π π
Dear dear Kali once again u always live upto my expectations! Your positivity and grace both just bewilder me! It makes me wonder that you must. E a wonderful soul who can transform the negative characters to positive! Neha has been portrayed so well and frankly speaking we would have expected her ( in the serial)to be as sensitive as your Neha!
Ishwari too is a balanced version and we don’t feel repulsive as we do in the serial!
I just wish that u keep giving such wonderful stories and the Makers should seriously consider going thru this!!
Thank u my dear for making me smile and enjoy as I read it!!
GIVE US MORE PLz DEAR KALI!!!!
Thank you Junee π π Sorry for the delays… have uploaded the next episode… Will be available soon…
Kali thanks a lot for providing the link as I always eagerly wait for your stories!
As for ” x” am curious but positive becoz u must have thought of am amazing treat for us!!! I am confident about it!????
Waiting for the next part. Please post soon.
HI Archi!!! Sorry for the dealy…. Was juggling office n house work… Have uploaded the next episode… Will be available soon after the moderation! Thank you so much for your patience sweetie…