Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 27)

Hi guys!!! For all DEVAKSHI fans, this episode shall be very special!!!
I am dedicating this episode to all my awesome readers!!!

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Recap:
Dev: ~slowly comes and hugs her from behind~ How about I help you in removing these jewellery and then… ~gets slightly nervous~ then…
Sona: ~blushes~ Dev…
Dev: ~slowly turns her towards him; lifts her face~ Tonight, we shall become Devakshi forever…
Dev leans in…
Sona smiles mischievously; pushes him and runs away…
Dev: Sona!!! ~chases her~ ~Tu mujh mein mujhse zyada hai plays in the background~
Sona runs to the other side of the bed; Dev finally manages to catch her; lifts her bridal style and drops her on the bed…
Sona gazes at him, feeling slightly curious; slightly nervous…
Dev: ~slowly sitting beside her; pulling close and gazing intense~ Mrs Dikshit… You are not escaping from me today…
Sona: ~gulps~ Dev…
~In lamhon ke damaan mein – From Jodha Akbar plays in the background~
Dev slowly removes her earrings and then her maati; Sona shivers in his touch…
Sona: Dev….
Dev: Sssshhh… ~places finger on her lips~ Do you know that moon is very jealous of you?
Sona: ~gazes down~ Why?
Dev: ~lifts her face~ Because your beauty surpasses that of moon’s… Chand mein toh phir bhi daag hai… Lekin meri Sona… Bedaag…
Sona: Dev!!! ~blushes~
Dev: ~smiles; gazes intense~ Sona… ~leans in close and kisses her forehead; then her eyes, cheeks~
Sona closes her eyes and gulps…
Dev finally kisses her…
It’s like the whole world stopped at that moment… Like a thread soaked in oil (baati) burns and burns on contact with fire; their passion has finally been ignited by their fire… The fire of their love…. And it’ll continue to burn…. Forever…
Both lost in love… Their patience finally succeeded….
Dev and Sona finally became one body; one soul… In true terms Devakshi…

~Ishwari’s room~
Ishwari feels restless and gets up…
~Ishwari’s pov~ Is Bhabhi right? Has Dev changed? Nahi nahi… It’s not like that… He came at once when he knew that I fainted… But he didn’t insist to sleep here for the night… He told that he wanted me to sleep… But… Why didn’t he stay? Ishwari, it’s their suhaagraat… So what? I am his ma… I should be his priority…
What if he can’t come here… I will go to his room… I am sure he’ll be very worried about me…
~gets up and walks to the door~
Mamaji: ~enters~ Arey Ishwari… Where are you going now? Our bahurani told you to rest… ~pulls her arm; makes her sit on the bed~
Ishwari: Par Bhaiyya… Wo Dev… I want to see him… He’ll be worried…
Mamaji: Ishwari… Bhul gayi? Aaj uska suhaagraat hai… Let him be with his wife… It’s not nice to disturb them again and again… Subah mil lena…
Ishwari: Bhaiyya… Shaadi hi toh hua hai… He’s still my son… Bachcha hai…
Mamaji: Ishwari, Dev isn’t a kid anymore… He’s grown up now… He’s married now… Give him little space… Besides, I am there to take care of you… Chalo so jao… No thinking…
~Mamaji’s pov~ Why do I feel that Ishwari hasn’t accepted this marriage yet? Does she still have reservations against Sona? Aisa nahi ho sakta… Maybe I just misunderstood…
Ishwari: Teek hai Bhaiyya… ~rests~ ~Ishwari’s pov~ I know Bhaiyya that he’s married and I should give space… Lekin… Kahin yeh todi si doori, mujhe mere Dev se hamesha hamesha ke liye door na karde…

~Next day~
~Dev’s room~
Dev wakes up; sees Sona sleeping… Dev smiles and closes his eyes…
Sona wakes up; sees Dev… blushes softly and touches his cheek…
Dev: Mrs Khargosh… See, I told you… You can’t resist my dashing and handsome looks… ~opens his eyes; gazes intense~
Sona: ~looks shocked~ Dev!!! You are awake….
Dev: ~pushes her hair behind her ear~ Hey beautiful… Good morning…
Sona: Good morning Mr. Pati Dev… Good that you are awake… Come on, let’s get ready… It’s my first rasoi today…
Dev: ~wraps arms around her~ Who said that I am letting you go now? Sona, let’s stay here all day… Like this… I am loving it…
Sona: Dev!! ~blushes suddenly~ How can we? Don’t you have office?
Dev: Mrs. Khargosh… You are forgetting that I am the owner and boss… I can go anytime I want… I can even skip… ~nuzzles close to Sona~
Sona: ~shakes her head~ But I have to go na… I have to get ready… Pehli rasoi… I have to cook today… I am so nervous… What if, I don’t prepare well?
Dev: Sona, even if you give me poison, I’ll eat happily…
Sona: Dev!!!! Tum bhi na…
Dev: Don’t worry Sona… ~cups her face~ I have total faith in you… You will cook so amazingly well… But you can only do that when you can move from here…
Sona: Dev… Please let me go… ~battles her eyes~
Dev: Okay… On one condition…
Sona: What condition?
Dev: ~taps his finger on his cheek~ A good morning kiss from my darling wife…
Sona: ~gasps~ Dev!!!!
Dev: Soch lo… Or u will be here locked in my arms, for the rest of the day…
Sona: ~blushes softly; kisses his cheek~ Now?
Dev: ~pouts~ Okay… ~releases Sona~
Sona: Awww… I’ll get ready… Then you can too…
Dev nods sadly…

~Hall~
Ishwari: Kichu, did you keep all the items needed for Sona’s first rasoi?
Kichu: Ji malkin…
Ishwari: Where’s Sona and Dev? It’s late… They didn’t come down yet…
GKB (Radha Rani): Ab se aisa hi hoga jiji… Aaji deri hui… Kal…
Ishwari: Bhabhi… ~feeling uncomfortable~ I will go and check…

~Dev’s room~
Sona opens the door; then realizes something and goes back…
Sona stands in front of mirror and is about to apply sindoor…
Dev: ~comes from behind and hugs~ Wait… ~takes sindoor from the box and applies~ Now, perfect!
Sona smiles brightly
Dev hugs her close; kisses her neck…
Sona: ~shivers slightly~ Dev, chalo… It’s getting late…
Dev: Hmmm… ~turns her; hugs her tight~ Okay… Be ready in the evening… We are going out on a long drive and a dinner…
Sona: Okay Mr. Pati Dev!!!
Ishwari enters; sees Devakshi together and looks shocked…
Devakshi still lost in their world…
GKB comes there; watches Devakshi and coughs slightly ~GKB’s pov~ Bechari jiji…
Devakshi move away from each other…
Dev: Ma… Mami… You both… We were coming down… Hai na Sona?
Sona: Haan… Haan…
Ishwari: ~masking her anger and shock~ Sona, today is your pehli rasoi… I expected you to be there by 7 am… It’s 8 am already… ~Ishwari’s pov~ Does that mean my Dev has forgotten that I fainted last night? Doesn’t he care about my health? All for this girl?
Sona: Sorry ma… Chaliye… ~signs Dev with her eyes – kind of “see, all because of you”
Dev: ~smiles~ Ma, I’ll come down soon… And Sona, don’t forget to check ma’s BP…. Send me message later… I’ll inform Dr. Sinha to check her today…
Sona nods…
Ishwari: Chalo Sona… ~Ishwari’s pov~ My son does remember…
Sona follows Ishwari and GKB…

~Kitchen~
Ishwari: Sona… Pehli rasoi is very important ritual… Worship this stove and start cooking… Prepare something sweet…
Sona: Ji ma…
Ishwari: Yaad rahein… You are not just a nutritionist… You are a bahu here… So, whatever you prepare, don’t focus too much on being healthy… Remember the last time? I hope now you know what was the mistake…
Sona: ~remembers learning halwa from Ishwari~ Ji ma…
Ishwari nods and leaves
GKB (Radha Rani) ~whispers to Ishwari~ Arey jiji… I am sure she can’t cook… See, she will fail easily…
Ishwari: Bhabhi… ~Ishwari’s pov~ Let me see… What can she prepare…
Ishwari and GKB leave
Sona prays in front of the stove
Dev comes down and stands near kitchen entrance and watches Sona…
Sona lifts her head and sees Dev standing…
Dev gives her a thumbs up…
Sona nods; smiling nervously and starts making halwa… ~Sona’s pov~ Should I less sugar or more? If I add more, it’ll become unhealthy… But if I add less sugar, then it’ll taste bad… ~remembers Dev tasting her halwa last time~ Kya karoon?
Dev goes and sits in the dining room; waiting for Sona…

~GKB’s room~
GKB: ~calls someone~ Hello? It’s me… Remember I called yesterday? Yes… I need it by 12 noon today… Gadbad nahi honi chahiye… Okay bye…
GKB smiles to herself… ~GKB’s pov~ Ab aayega maza…

What will happen next???
Will Sona pass her pehli rasoi exam perfectly? Or will she get scolded?
What’s GKB planning?
This was little short episode!!!
Comments please!!!

31 comments

  1. Erika

    |Registered Member

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi it was short but fantastic loveable i loved devakshi romance… hey don’t tell me that gkb is planing to bring fish pl. update asap and i hope sona passes in her 1st rasoi so end the suspense soon and update asap

  2. Erina

    |Registered Member

    Truely commendable…. I always type lenghty comments bcse i can’t control my feeling but i’m trying now…. With love Erina

  3. Archi

    A grade work but too short. I would have given you A+ if it was longer :). Sorry, kidding. Please post next one (and longer) soon.

  4. Junee

    |Registered Member

    Brilliant, just mind blowing!!!!
    I will read it again before i go to sleep its like listening to a fairytale being read out! Wonderful Kali ! I wish i could have a lovely story like this every night!!!😊😊😊

  5. Maleeha

    |Registered Member

    superb one…….I’m not saying anything to ishwari and gkb bcoz unhain kon sa farq parna hai ……….dheet hain dono😂😂🔫……well everyone, everything was perfect…….🎀😍😍👍😘💞❤😍😂🎀💞💖😭💋💘😘

  6. Tessie

    |Registered Member

    Truly appreciated.. not only devakshi part but even the one of ishwari and mamajis conversation was like i felt true wish the romance part of suhagrat was the same like urs. One of my frnd suggested me this ff m realy glad to find the best n just what i wanted .. looking forward to get a big update. 😍😘 thank you once again.

  7. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Kalpana (di),
    I’m completely new to this page. I just started reading your ff from the previous pert and it was really good. I love the way you write.

    Well, would you mind giving me a short recap of what happened before. Sorry if I bothered you.

    Also, I’m writing a ff called – Our Dark Past Love. You can try it out if you want.

    Loads of love.💞

    • Kalpana

      |Author

      Hi Ria!!! Welcome to my page… U can check the previous parts by clicking the link in the beginning…
      Long story short, my ff started after Dev and Sona broke up… Sona doesn’t really lose hope in her love; Dev gets motivated by his uncle n Neha to realize n claim Sona’s love… He’s given a list of punishments by Bose family for a month and manages to win their hearts
      Ishwari accepted only for Deb’s sake…
      Devakshi marriage happens…
      What happens next… U have to find out…
      And yes I’ve introduced 3 characters; cousin bros of Sona – Sharan (Shravan Reddy), a lawyer – likes Ria; Rabi (Ravi Dubey), detective; likes Nikki… Sidhanto (Sidhant Gupta); a police officer…
      Read from beginning if u can…
      Thank you so much!!! Welcome once again…

  8. Yashfeen

    |Registered Member

    Truly amazing…I jst hope sona passes her frst rasoi n a nutritionist shud nt overcome a bahu…n prepare osum halwa..n seriously subah ja k ishwari ne unhe disturb kr dia..aesa koi krta hai kya..n GKB bhi pahuch gai…again privacy naam ki cheez hi ni hai…mamaji hi bs ek samajhdar hai..
    Well..waiting fr d nxt..

  9. Juhi

    Wao Di (May I call u?)!!!!
    Devakshi romance was truly engrossing one…😍😍😍😍😍
    And Mamaji rocked 😉 Pisswari shocked 😮😮
    Pata hai Di, Jab bhi main us Pisswari ki “crocodile’s smile” dekhti hoon to I fill like ki mai uska munh tod doon 👊👊
    Hamesha nigal jati hai bichari Sona ko 😢😢
    Hey Di maine ek poem likhke post ki hai TU ke updates page me. It’s this way…

    CVs ne show ka kabada kr diya yaar
    Bichari Sona,
    Stop yaar Rona Dhona,
    Agar chahti ho Dev ke sath rehna,
    Pisswari ke plans se bachna,
    Tumhe hi hoga ladna,
    Stop maanna
    In all oldies ka kekna,
    Seekho bichare devdas ko tym dena,
    Cz ham Fans chahte hain ;
    Sweet Devakshi moments dekhna,
    4 this Dev tumhe bhi padega thoda sudharna
    Padega stop karna
    Hamesha Pisswari pe believe rakhna
    Mrs khargosh,
    U R a brave and intelligent girl na
    Puja vuja hota rahega slowly slowly
    stop this much darna
    Jab Pisswari ki shadi hui
    Vo bhi nhi thi perfect itna
    Tum ko hone bolti hai jitna
    Aur Dev,
    Start Sona pr real me vishwas karna,
    Aur Pisswari;
    Tum bhi apne had me rahna,
    Khatri aayega na,
    To Ur dimag will come to its thikana ,
    Lastly CVs ;
    Stop itna melodrama ,
    And show us some happy romantic scenes varna,
    Ham bhi band kr sakte hain ye show dekhna|
    😆😆😆😆😂😂😉😉😉
    Tell me no howzzit…..

    AndAnd Mamaji was BANG ONNNN..👊👊👊👏👏👌👌
    And apne kya suspense banaya hai…
    I M so so so excited about Sona’s results ovio in cooking 🍲🍲
    Let’s see
    Bahuria Lali🍛🍜🍲 vs Nutrition🍎🍏🍊
    And think Di ki agar Pisswari MCQ vala exam de rhi hoti toh vo toh 1st Q. me hi atki rahti..m
    Kitni confuse rahti hai. .😞😞😞
    Pisswari ke khane ke dant ek dikhane ke dusre…
    Kai baar toh mujhe GKB Pisswari se better lagti hai (👠👞👟 allowed )
    Cz vo poori duniya se jhoot bolti hai pr at least SHE’S TRUE TO HER OWN’S SELF. ..
    Pisswari to khud se hi jhoot bolti rahti hai toh ham usse Dev ya Sona se sach bolna kaise expect kr sakte hain? 😡
    Anyways Di mujhe aur batein karni thi pr post bahut bada ho gaya hai (almost episode ke size ka…😅😅)
    Agar aapko tym mile tabhi poora padna….😶
    AOAur episode BEHAD achha tha..
    Felt like koi fairy tale padke suna rha hai. ..
    Aur Di vo.. Horror story ke bare me kuch socha? ?😓
    No hurry..take ur own tym pr kuch na kuch bata dena na..Thoda bahot. …😅😅
    Pls na..
    Don’t take tension about it but post next one soon
    Waiting for it eagerly
    Luv u loads and Double of it for Ur awsm episodes. ..💜💜💜💜

    • Kalpana

      |Author

      Check in the previous episode dear… Have given a plot there… A skeleton plot… Horror details u can add… Or v both can think…

    • Erina

      |Registered Member

      Awesomeeeee poem dear. Seriously it was amazing nd now i’m also saying that u r awesome in poem.. Do write this type of stress free poem. Sorry i’m commenting bcse i can’t control my feeling 😂😉😉😜😛

    • Erika

      |Registered Member

      hey juhi yaar it is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee poem itna acha kaise likhti ho mujhe bhi baato yaar too good u write so well that i was not able to control my feelings for your fantastic fabulous poem

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