Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 13)

Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 13)
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Recap:
~Sona’s home~
Bejoy: Ha, finally! The ODIs have started! India vs New Zealand! Dev, remember till the match finishes you are not moving from here… Okay?
Dev: Okay uncle… ~smiles brightly~
Sourav: This is going to be exciting!
Sona watches them ~Sona’s pov~ Dev… This is going to be a real challenge for you! You will see soon~
Bejoy: Come on… Hit a four! Yes… That’s a four
Dev watches TV, suddenly gazes at Sona watching him; smiles at her and moves slightly to the right…
TV shows India 4-1

Bejoy: WHAT!! A wicket already!!! ~turns towards Dev~ DEV! You moved? I told you not to move! Sit in your original position and no moving!
Dev looks shocked and moves quickly…
Sona: Uh oh!!!!
Dev tries sitting still… But who can escape itchy sensation? Dev feels itchy right in the edge of the nose and proceeds to scratch…
Bejoy: And that’s a six ~sees Dev~ Dev beta, superb! Please keep scratching like that… We need more sixes…
Dev: But now I don’t have any itchy sensation…. ~looks confused~
Sourav: ~whispers to Dev~ Do as he says… Or it’d be bad…
Dev starts scratching and slowly stretches his legs…

Bejoy: Oh no! A wicket… ~sees Dev again~ Dev… Sit in original position and keep scratching…
Sona hits her head… Elena watches everything…
Elena: Uncle, here’s something for you to eat ~gives him namkeen~ Sees Dev and signs him to get up~
Dev looking relieved, quickly gets up; lifting his leg
Bejoy: And Kohli hits century!!! ~sees Dev~ Perfect beta!!! Maintain this position!
Dev: ~standing on one leg, looks shocked~ Okay… ~Dev’s pov~ This is just crazy!!!! This is the toughest thing ever!
Sona: Baba! How can you relate Dev’s movements to the match progress!! It’s unfair…
Bejoy: Shona beta, that’s how India won world cup… Now shush…
Finally, the match ends with India winning by 3 runs…
Bejoy: See, I told you!
Dev: Congrats uncle!!!

Bejoy: ~feels happy~ Call me baba! We will sit tomorrow like this again!
Dev smiles nervously at Sona…

~Sona’s home – Kitchen~
Sona: Ma, I want to request you something….
Asha: Haan Sona… What is it?
Sona: Ma, I want to learn cooking… At least a little…
Asha: ~looking surprised~ Sure beta… Why this decision? Baba told na… You needn’t change yourself for any guy…
Dev is about to enter kitchen

Sona: I know ma… Still… Dev is doing so much to win our trusts… I always knew he can do it… But didn’t expect him to do much… I know he’ll finish his punishments… I don’t know if he will tell Ishwari aunty about us… But, I want to win his mom’s trust too…
Dev smiles… ~Dev’s pov~ My Sona… ~feels emotional~ I will ensure that I’ll help you in winning my ma’s trust…
Asha: ~smiles~ Okay, first we will start with making dough for roti… Take atta and add water… Knead to make the dough… Okay?
Sona: ~takes flour and water~ Okay ma…

Asha: Arey arey… Don’t add so much water! How will you knead this now? Add less water Sona…
Sona: Sorry ma… ~takes fresh flour and water~
Sona sprinkles water this time
Asha: ~shakes her head~ Sona!! That’s too less… Sona, do one thing… Learn some other day… Today, I’ll do… Okay?
Sona goes out sad… Dev gazes and follows…

~Sona’s room~
Sona: ~feeling sad~ ~Sona’s pov~ How will I impress her if I can even make a roti? Forget about roti, I can’t even knead dough…
Dev: ~coves her eyes from behind and whispers~ Ms. Bose, I have a surprise for you… Do you want to see?
Sona: ~gulps~ Mr. Dikshit… What are you doing here? What surprise?
Dev: Stretch your arms please Ms. Bose… No opening your eyes!
Sona: ~stretches her arms slowly~ What is it Mr. Dikshit? ~feels something cold~
Dev: Now open…

Sona: ~sees beautiful glass bangles~ This is pretty Dev… I mean Mr. Dikshit… ~smiles brightly and shakes her hand~ Such a beautiful khanak… Thank you Dev! I mean Mr. Dikshit! But… This is strange… You have always purchased most expensive gifts… How come such simple one this time?
Dev: So my Sona really loves expensive gifts but acted as if she was angry at me for spending so much on her ~gazes mischievously~
Sona: ~red in face~ Mr. Dikshit, I didn’t mean that way… I mean…

Dev: I know Ms. Bose… I loved those bangles… It was so beautiful… I could only think of you… The lady who was selling it, needed money to educate her son… I offered to buy the entire collection of bangles and gave her lot more than she was selling them for… But she declined… She only took what the actual worth was… Actually, der se hi sahi, I understood what self-respect is…
~pulls her hand and kisses softly~ I was wrong by the way… Your hands have made them more beautiful…
Sona: ~blushes~ Dev… Now that’s too much!
Dev: ~pulls her close~ And that’s the truth Sonakshi…
Dev and Sona lost in each other’s eyes
Elena comes in and coughs slightly

Dev and Sona move apart
Dev: I think I should leave now…
Elena: Tomorrow, come early… Dev babu, we are going on a shopping spree
Dev shakes his head… Sona laughs…

~Dev’s home~
Ishwari: Bhabhi, I am going to the temple now… Will come back soon…
GKB (Radha Rani): Is waqt? Sab teek hai na jiji?
Ishwari: Haan… Haan… I had forgotten to collect list from panditji for the havan… If I go collect now, will save time tomorrow…
GKB (Radha Rani): Teek hai jiji ~GKB’s pov~ This is the right time! Jiji, wait a second… It is so dark outside… Zamana bahut kharab hai… Why don’t you call Dev? Find out where he is, and go with him…

Ishwari: You are right… Will call him… ~ tries couple of times~ Bhabhi, phone is switched off… Maybe his phone’s battery is low and got switched off…
GKB (Radha Rani): Koi baat nahi jiji… Call him at office na… Anyhow, he’ll be there at office…
Ishwari: ~calls office landline~ Hello, I am Dev’s mother speaking… Can I speak to my son? What? Okay… no problem… ~keeps the phone down~
GKB (Radha Rani): What happened jiji? ~GKB’s pov~ Ab hoga asli tamasha…
Ishwari: Bhabhi, it was security guy… He was telling that Dev left like always, at 5 pm and nobody there at office…
GKB (Radha Rani): But Dev was telling he has loads of office work… Then after 5, where’s he going daily?
Ishwari sits down thinking…

Dev arrives just then… Feeling all happy…
Ishwari: Dev!
Dev: Arey Ma… How are you? How was your day? I am so hungry… Will you serve me dinner? I will go freshen up..
Ishwari: I am fine beta… Dev… Is everything okay? I tried calling you… Your mobile switched off and called office, they told you left at 5… If you are daily leaving at 5, why so much delay in coming home? What is going on beta? Everything fine?
Dev: ~stands startled~ Ma…
Gasp!!! What will happen next????

I am so sorry for the delay guys!!! Had a mini writer’s block….
Comments please!!!!

27 comments

  1. Archi

    No ned to apologize for writer’s block. Even the best of the writers go through it a few times in their careers. This was, as always, awesome episode!

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