Phir se (swasan) Episode 1


Bandra, Mumbai. Time: 11pm
Watching the densely populated buzzing city through her cold eyes she stood at the balcony of her room leaning on to the magnificently carved wooden support with a glass of vodka. Her face reflected no emotions. Usually this city is called the city of dreams but for her, IPS officer Swara Singhania, who never ran away from her challenges, this city was a nice hideout. It kept her safe and away from those people whom she once loved dearly. Yes… once she loved them… her love was limitless…. Unconditional…..beyond limits……..but what she got in return was distrust, betrayal and what not… she got everything which she never expected from anyone…..not even from her worst enemies…..

ah…no…Swara Gadodia who lived in the city of Kolkata 4 years back was a very lovely, lively, bubbly, chirpy and what not? She was everything that was positive. She was a quanta of positive energy. And as we explain that theory of photo electricity she imparted that positivity to every single person she met but never lost any part of it by herself. Her energy was something which never perished even if she shared it with a million people. It stayed inside her intact………. That’s why everyone found her smiling even during the worst days of her life. Her family – dad, mom, ragini aka her lado, dadi and dadaji shifted from Delhi to Kolkata when she was 13. Kolkata was different from Delhi in many respects. For normal girls it wouldn’t be so easy to adjust with new life, new place and new people. But she was Swara. This transplantation was not hard for her. She adjusted. She got mixed up with the boom of Kolkata in just 2 or 3 days. Money was the problem then. In Delhi they got whatever they wanted.

After shifting to Kolkata, a young Swara realized that now they- she and her little sister Ragini – should reduce their demands. Then she couldn’t find the reason behind it for she was so young to understand such problems. More or less she understood one thing – they must reduce their demands. Conditions Her parents never told her about their financial crisis. She herself noticed that. Shekhar Gadodia, who always took flights to Kolkata now brought them to their city by train. Nobody was waiting for them outside the railway station in the latest model of Benz or BMW. They had to take a taxi. Their new home was not at all huge like their mansion in Delhi. It was situated in a middle class colony. For middle class people it was a huge space. But for swara at first it looked like hut. But later she recalled her dida saying “A huge building doesn’t make home, Shona. Home is the place where u find your whole family together”. And she had her whole family here. She realized that this is her HOME. Sounds so blissful……..

She was dragged out of her thoughts by a phone call. Rishi. The screen displayed the name of the caller. Wiping the lone tear that escaped her eyes while thinking about her estranged family she attended the call in a cheerful tone.

“Hello Rishi, any news?”

“Yes Shona. They are here. In Mumbai” Rishabh Singhania’s deep, rich, cheerful voice reached her ears.

Huh……. She sighed…. This person was the drug which kept her going during the last 4 years. Without him, his soothing voice, she would have died or would have ended up in some mental asylum.

“Shona?? Are you there?????” his voice full of concern poured in.

“Yup Rishi. I’m here. Tell me.” She said

“Where is Chutki? She slept?”

“Yes. She slept.”

“Thank God. Now that she is asleep you can come here na? Ah…..What am I saying? No… Just rush Shona…. Today is the end. We are going to end this case by today. And for that, u need to be there with us… NOW…. So come fast to the abandoned shipyard.. we are also reaching there…our team is waiting for their Sherni to take the lead. I told u this case is gonna end with an encounter and here it is. We didn’t disturb u during planning and plotting just because u have a child to handle. Now that she is asleep, time for u to join the action front. Enough of my speech. Now rush Shona rush… safely..hanging up…meet u at the war front” with that the line went dead.

Here is the first installment of Phir se. tell me. What do u think about me as a writer? how is my style? did you guys like it? Or I’m wasting your time? Silent readers also pls comment. It feels good to see somebody appreciating you.. so i need your comments. tell me your opinion about my story and my writing style. good or bad. both are welcome. but pls do comment. tell me what did you guys like the most (if there is something like that) in the Intro and the first installment of Phir se. waiting for ur lovely comments……

Credit to: Niveditha


    • Niveditha

      i will post on alternate days dear. though my bachelor’s is over i still have to study for my masters’ entrance. but i promise i’ll try to make ever chapter worth the time you spend reading them. thanks for the comment.

  1. Hi Niveditha.! I m a silent reader..I usually don’t comment… But aftr reading u r story… Suddenly I got an urge to comment..! Its BEAUTIFULLY AWESOM…!

    • Niveditha

      Oh that’s so sweet of you dear. you really made my day dear. keep reading and keep commenting.

  2. ushna

    hi Niveditha ! please continue dear. Your writing style is very good. Hope to see your next update soon.

    • Niveditha

      oh. thank u so much for this comment. i’m really feeling overwhelmed. keep reading and commenting dear.

    • Niveditha

      thanks Ruhi dear. Keep reading and don’t forget to give me ur valuable opinions via ur lovely comments.

  3. Vini

    It is amazing,I am not a regular reader though I write an ff,but ur title ,though it is short caught attention n I read completely,this start is awesome,your narration style is really nice, good writer you are,keep going,you will rock,I am sure,and plot also seems to be different n interesting.

    • Niveditha

      oh Vini u r also a writer? nice. well….. so now that’s really a fortune. u r reading my fiction. oh i’m so happy….
      yup the title is short. but it has got something in it which is very closely related to our story. and thank you. keep reading and encouraging me. once again thank you.

    • Niveditha

      thank you so much saumya. oh….. i’m not an awesome writer dear. i’ve seen so many infact brilliant writers here. but still if u say that i’m a good writer, then i’m contented. keep reading and keep commenting…

  4. Ammulu

    hi yer …ur story good.. I m also fan of swasan plz make cool n romantic story… but ragani was little sister..? I can’t I acpt ? u can change r not dat ur wish yer.. all best to u..keep rocking…

    • Niveditha

      thanks for the comment Ammulu..(Err… i guess that is ur real name.) Its indeed romantic. but cool.. i don’t know.. the track which i have in mind is a bit serious. but don’t worry romance and nok jhoks will be there. and about ragini she is her little sister in my ff. sorry for that. i cant change the story line all of a sudden. sorry if i’m hurting u. anyways i’m happy that u gave ur valuable comment dear. once again thanks for the comment.
      lets see what i have in store for u all. have little patience. keep reading and keep commenting..

    • Nivi

      Thank u.u really are a sweetheart.
      Daily updates?? Hmm.. Sorry. But I can’t. Will surely post on alternate days. And I promise that I will try my level best to match your expectations. Keep commenting.

    • Nivi

      Thank you so much. So u guys like my writing style?? Oh I’m feeling sooooo good. Not happy. But something more than that. I never thought I’d get so many readers. Keep reading and do comment….

  5. Nive...

    hey Niveditha… I’m also nivedhita… but its just my second name… 😀 😀 happy to see you… It was really nice epi dear… pls continue yaar… 🙂 🙂

    • Nivi

      Wow Niveditha so nice to meet u here. By the way I’ll tell u a secret. Niveditha is my pen name. Whenever I write something I use this name. I Love this name as my friend suggested it. In my college also for other students Niveditha is a mystery. Will reveal my real name at the end of this ff.
      And I’m glad that u liked the plot. Keep reading and do comment

      • Nive...

        Hey nivi.. thanks dr… so sweet of you… by the by I too reveal you one secret… I have two names… but this name is not any mystery… 😉 😉 everyone knows me by this name but my sis only addressed me by nive… So I Love this name… 😀 😀 ok ok I will stop here… did you posted ur nxt epi..?

    • Nivi

      hey Rithu, u r the writer of ‘devil and angel’ right? if not pls forgive me.
      will continue soon dear. keep reading.

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