A Perfect husband twinj os

A girl is continuously crying and praying….
Tw (crying vigorously) : no bhai no…. Please don’t beat me… Please… Choti Mom please don’t beat me…
Anita : look tomorrow is your wedding… Get ready….
Cherry : yaa… We sell you to Mr. Manohar sarna…. (smirks) and his son kunj sarna will marry you tomorrow….
Tw is shocked…. : no no bhai pls…. I don’t wanna marry now…
Cherry slaps her hard…. : don’t dare to say like this…. Ok???
Both ma beta left the room… A young lady is watching all this at the door with teary eyes…. As soon as they left…. That lady comes and hugs her….

Tw : bhabi…. Please stop this…. You know na my study…
Lady (maya) : sssshhhh…. I will talk to your bhai….
Raj (from down stairs) : maya darling where are you…. Come here….
Now let me introduce….
Twinkle : Raminder Taneja and Leela taneja’s one and only daughter…. Very bubbly( when her mother was alive then)… Her mother died when she was 15 years old…. After one year her father married to a woman(Anita)…. When she 17+ her father also died….
Anita : step mother of tw…. Greedy selfish… Most bad woman… Hates tw like hell….
Cherry : step brother of swara…. Not actually step brother… He is anita’s son…. Not Rt’s….like his mother….
Maya : a poor girl…. Cherry forcefully married her…. Loves her like a psycho…. She is very good…. Love Tw….

Maya helps tw in her medical study….
She knows that cherry loves her like hell…. So she use this opportunity and ask money for her study…. Like this she helps tw…. But can’t save her from their beating and torture…. Anita took tw’s whole property in her name and now both are rulings in taneja group of company….
Here in another place….
A guy ‘ Papa how can I marry a girl without knowing her… Huh how cheap his brother…. Knowing our weak point he throw such a cheap condition….
Man : Kunj… Look the land which is on his name was our…. My father sold that for my study…. My mother love that land… She thought to make a hospital there for poor people…. I want that land at any cost….
Yuvraj : or bhai…. We want to give him money more than it’s original price but they…. But they want money as well as demanding to make you marry with his sister….
Manohar (folding hand) : please beta…. Please maan ja…
Kunj sighs…. : ok….
At night….
Kunj’s room….
Mahi (Uv’s wife… Best friend of kunj)and Uv come there and sit either sides of him
M : kunj… What kind of wife you want….
K : why you ask this things now???
M : no no tell na…
K : the girl should be combination of ma and you (Mahi)…. She should care for me like my mother and will be a best friend like you… And also loves me more than anything in this world…. And Han obviously will love my family take care of them….
U : hmm… Bt what about her profession??
K : hmm… A doctor….
M : why you are a doctor that’s why???
K : obviously yaar…. Look at you both…. Mahi is designer of our company and Uv is MD…. I know you both do romance in office…. I also….
Uv laughs….

M : ok modern or traditional….
K : combo….
M : ok and nature???
U : obviously calm yaar…. Look at bhai Calm and peaceful person….
M : yaa yaa….
K : but now no need of this ok…. Go leave me alone….
M : please yaar… Tomorrow is your wedding….
K : huh…. Wedding??? Chal bhag…..
Kunj felt sad and Yuhi also gets sad for this….
Next day….
Maya is making tw ready…. Both are crying….
M : i am sorry Tw…. I am sorry….
Tw : it’s OK bhabi… Bhabi today is my last exam of 3rd year final…. Bhabi I want to give that….
M : i know but I can’t help….
Both cries hugging each other….
Cherry and Anita comes there both compose themselves….
C : i will miss you Tw…. I can’t torture you na….
Tw cries….
C : i want that u always cry like this…. That’s why I make you marry his son…. Husband is best surgeon and wife not even hs pass (they don’t know about tw’s reading)….
A (hold her cheek roughly) : i am sure they will get out you…. But never dare to come here … Ok??
The she left her with jerk….
Tw looks at watch 6 am…. 11 am is her exam…. She cries remember that….
Here in kalima ‘s Temple….
Maya is holding Tw…. She is looking down. She is looking very cute and beautiful in bridal attire…. Kunj is standing in front of her…. As she is Punjabi she is in Punjabi bridal attire…. She looks at her watch 7 am….
K : wo Mr taneja…. How far she studied???
C (smirks) : wo kunj…. Actually she was very bad in study…. She is not even hs passed….
Maya and Tw is wiping…. Kunj closes his fist and looks angrily at her then his father….
U(whispered) : relax bhai…..

K : what relax…. I am doctor and my wife…. Not even hs passed…. Huh….
He goes to Manohar (M.S)….
K : Papa think once again please….
M.S : i already took my decision now sit there (point to mandap)
Twink got married…. Twiya cries hugging each other….
Anirry(Anita+cherry) (fake tears) : take care beta….
Tw just nodes.. Kunj was fuming in anger looking at all this… So he stood beside her with cold irritated face…he can’t go anywhere because of that gat bandhan….
K : Papa… Please can we go…. I have lots of cases…
Tw looks at him…. And bent down her head….
Suddenly Tw looks at her watch 10 am…. She again starts cry….

All sits in car Yuhi nd Twinj at one car…. M.S U.S nd bebe(B.s) in one….
Twinj on back sit…. Uv in driver sit and Mahi in passenger seat….
Tw is continuously looking at her watch…. They start there driving…. Suddenly she gets to Know they are from Amritsar….
Tw (in mind) :oh god…. I can’t even see my college…. What will I do…. If I say them about my exam…. Will they let me give my exam….
All are silent…. As they quiet upset about Tw’s qualifications…. Kunj is resting his head on back seat and Mahi is seeing outside the car…. Uv is driving silently…. M.S’s car is quite far from them….
Tw again sees her watch it’s 10: 30….
Tw (top of her voice) : stop the car please….
All looks at her with jerk…. Uv stops the car with jerk…
M : what happened??? Any problem??? Vomiting problem???
Tw (cries) : no no…. Listen…. Today is my last exam of 3rd year final…. Please let me give my exam…. Please…
She folds her hand and cries….
All are shocked….

U : but…. But…. Your brother told….
Tw : please…. I will explain you all later…. Please let me give my exam…. Please…. I will never ask anything in my life…. Please…. (cries)
K (comes in sense) : which… Which college??? And what’s the time of reporting???
Tw (sobs) : Kolkata medical college…. Exam will start from 11…
Kunj looks at his watch…. 10:40…..
K (irritated) : can’t you tell this earlier…. Uv gari bhaga….
Tw still now crying….
Uv takes u turn they are far from medical college….
M.S’s car reach near them…. They amused to see them taken u turn….
He calls Mahi….
M.S : Mahi what’s this??
M : please Just follow us we will tell you later….
K : will you please stop crying…. (swara was still crying)…. Where is your admit card???
Tw stops crying…. She takes out a big file from her side bag (guys side bag is not a fancy one… It’s big)…
From that she takes out her admit card…. She was unable to close it in one day…. She was about to put her admit card in between her lips…. Kunj snatch that….
K : are you mad??? Pura lipstick bottle apni lips mein dal li and holding this there???
Tw : sorry….

They reached there 10:55….
Twinj gets down from the car…. An old lady and a old man was standing near college gate…. Both are shocked to see her like this…. They rushes to her….
O.M : Tw what is this….
O.L : leave that Mr malik … Let’s go for exam….
Tw nodes and about to go…. She feels someone is pulling her from behind… She looks… Their gat bandhan…. Kunj was about to open them….
Tw : nooo….
Tw runs and takes kunj’s dupatta from him and hold that in her hand and runs inside with Mr malik (principal) and gouri (his assistant come wife….)
Mean time M.S comes there…. All three are shocked after listening all this….
After 4 hours….

In this 4 hours…. Many things happen…. Kunj takes her file and checks her results and all… All sf(sarna family) is shocked… Mr malik call them in his office…. They tells about her condition in her home … About Maya and all…. Kunj fumes.
in anger…Kunj told mr malik to transfer Tw from Calcutta medical college to Amritsar medical college…
Tw comes out. She has no friends as she come there only for study and after study she hurriedly went home before Anita and Cherry came from office… All looks at her and starts gossip…. She ignores them and goes to main gate… She sees her family…. Kunj comes forward…. Mr malik and gauri bless her in the way… But didn’t say anything…. Tw cries while hugging them… Kunj comes and takes her…. Both sits…. No one utter any words…. This time Mahi sits with Tw… She looks at her with teary eyes and also lovingly…. Kunj starts driving and Uv sits beside him…
U : bhabi how was your paper??
Tw just nodes in positive….
They reach Amritsar,sm(sarna mansion)…. They did all nessesary rituals…. It’s afternoon…. All are tired after 2 day journey….. In car…. But it’s 1st night of twinj… So Yuhi decorate their room while they are doing all rituals…. Kunk gets an emergency so he went his personal nursing home…

At night….
Tw comes their room… Kunj is still in hospital… Tw sits on bed as she is soo tired…. Tw sleeps in sitting position….

Next morning….
Tw wakes up. She sees herself in bed with perfect position of sleep and also sees Kunj is sleeping in couch…. She felt bad…

She goes to washroom and wears a red saree… She finds no one is wake in the whole house…. She opens main door And sees newspapers and milk packet…. Tw takes them and goes to kitchen…. It’s her daily routine in Taneja mansion…. She prepares breakfast of puri and vegetables and also kheer in sweet…. She sees the clock it’s 8….she woke at 6….she goes to temple (house temple)… Clean that and decorate that…. It’s 8:30…
Tw (in mind) : every one is so lazy here… What to do??? Should I start puja!??
Tw : kanah Ji you are hungry right??? But what to do???
Actually all are tired…. B.S wakes up and sees the time….
B.S : oh god 8…
She rushes to washroom here mahi nd Usha in same position…. Both comes at hall 8:30…. Both didn’t notice Tw in Temple…
B : mahi beta you go and clean the temple Nd usha take the np nd milk nd cme to the kitchen.I will make bf
M : ok ma…
U-haa bebe
All leaves….
She surprised to see bf already made…. Mahi also sees temple is cleaned… Mahi can’t find Tw as she went bring flower from garden…. She also didn’t notice cz she went garden through the door which is beside the temple….
B.S comes to Mahi….

B: bf is already made???
M : and temple….
Us- nd the milk packet
At that time Tw enter in the temple… With flowers…. Mahi sees her…. All three understood who did all this…. B.S comes near her and cares her hair…. 1st tw gets afraid but then she sees her eyes which is fill with affection and motherly love…. Tw’s eyes fills with tears…. B.S hugs her… Mahi makes pout… B.S signs her to come so she also hug both Tw and B.S…. They break the hug.
Us : don’t cry… From now I Am your mamma…
Tw (whispered) : mamma…
M: and I am your sweet and beautiful sister

Tw smiles… Both hugs…
Tw starts bhajan ‘ radhe krishna ki jyot alokik’
Men of the house wakes up due to this melodious voice….
All come down… All praises Tw for her cooking skills… Tw feels happy… But Kunj didn’t say anything…. He finishes his bf and left for nursing home…. Tw sees this but said nothing….
Mahi takes leave from office Uv and M.S goes to office….
Lunch time….
All men come for lunch…. All are eagerly waiting for Kunj except Tw…. They all know kunj has gone to Amritsar medical college for Tw’s transfer and all…. As soon as he comes Kunj assures them through eyes…. All gets happy and see Tw who is arranging table…. She don’t know anything about it…. All sits…. Twihi serves….
K : Tw…. Sit and finish your lunch…. We have to go somewhere….
Tw looks at him with blank expression….

K : what??? Any thing written in my face?? Sit and take your lunch….
Mahi makes her sit with Kunj…
She complete her lunch silently…. While all are smiling… Tw goes to room and finds a simple pink and silver color salwar…. She takes this…. Kunj come there….
K : Tw go and change???
Tw : this dress for me??
K : no…. For neighbor aunty…. Go and give her…
Tw goes to washroom for change …. Kunj mesmerized see her in that dress with open hair. ….but composes….
K : chale???
Tw nodes…. But…
K : one minute….
Tw looks at him…. Kunj takes her near dressing table…. Then tie her back dori…. Tw feels something in her stomach(of course butterflies yaar)…. Then Kunk takes vermillion and mangal sutra…. And make her wear them….

K : hmm now perfect…. Let’s go….
Tw just smile….

After 30 min….
Tw surprised to see the name board… ‘Amritsar medical college’…. But she thinks… Kunj is a doctor so…. He has some work….
Both goes to principal office….
She comes to know she will complete her study here…. She smiles with teary eyes….
Principal : hmm… Tw Mr malik is my friend…. U are topper of cmc (Calcutta medical college)…. But u have to give exam…. So day after tomorrow is your entrance exam…. Okay??
Tw just nodes…. Kunj smiles and shake hands with principal….
Outside the college…. Tw hugs Kunj suddenly….(first hug)
Tw : thank you….
Kunj’s heart beat increase…. He slowly puts his hand on her back….
Tw departs…. She looks down…
Tw : sorry….
Kunj : you have to work hard… To
day I will help you….
Tw nodes…
At sm….(sarna mansion)
All comes to know about her exam…. B.S and Usha didn’t let her do any work…. Tw was reading whole evening…. She has so many problems regarding her study….
At night 9 pm….
M.S and Uv is discussing something…. B.s,usha nd mahi r making dinner…Tw is reading in the hall…. She is reading while walking around the hall…. She left her hair open …. She is wearing a shalwar…. As the dupatta was irritating her she keep it in sofa…. So she was walking all around the hall…. She is so happy getting this much loving family…. Suddenly she bumped on a wall… (she thinks that)…. But it’s Kunj…. She widen her eyes…. She realized that she is without her dupatta…. She rush and takes her dupatta…. Kunj chuckles….
In dinning table… Bebe nd Usha r not letting her eat with her hands….. Tw denied but none listen to her.. M.S nd usha treating her pampering like her own parents…. Mahi a lovable sister and Uv??? He becomes perfect best friend of her….
At night….
Kunj comes in the room and sees Tw sitting on floor with her books…
K : hey why you sitting on floor??? It’s a king size bed…. Look there is a couch also….
Tw : wo… In Kolkata I used to study on floor like this only… Soo…
Kunj sighs….
K : but now u will study there… Come….
He himself pick up the book and sits on couch…. Tw sighs and sits beside her… Both start reading… Tw clears her doubt…. Kunj is a very good teacher…. Tw is yawning… Seeing this….
K : enough for today… Go and sleep….
Tw : no no… I am OK…
K : i said na go…
Tw nodes and sleeps on bed… After sometime kunj Also sleeps on couch….

Next morning….
Tw sees kunj sleeping on couch… She feels sad….
Tw (in mind) : why he is sleeping on the couch?? Does’nt he consider me as his wife….
She goes bathroom….. The whole day Tw just prepare for the exam… B.S is not letting her do any work…. She was just reading reading and reading….
At night after dinner….

Twinj room….
Twinj reading…. Kunj was telling something to Tw…. Suddenly he feels a wait on her shoulder…. He sees Tw has fallen in to deep sleep… Kunj smiles…. He tries to wake her up but she wrapped her arms around his waist…. Kunj sighs and close the books and let his body rest on couch…. Tw is sleeping on his chest…. He cares her hair and kiss there… He closed his eyes…. And takes a deep breath then fall in to asleep….

Next morning…. No no midnight…. I mean 4:30…. (it’s midnight for me guys)….
Tw wakes up with a jerk….
Tw : maaaa….

She is sweating badly… Kunj also gets up for her shouting and also jerk….
Tw is breathing heavily….
K : Tw what happened???
Tw : i… I…. Will…. I… Will fail…
Meantime all sf comes there…
B.S : it’s a bad dream…. Nothing else…
Tw : i can’t write anything…
She starts crying……
K (now irritated… Scolds) : stop it Te…. You are not a kid… That You are crying after a bl**dy nightmare….
Us:kunj😠😠 apna din bhul gaya? U also cried lyk thiz.

Kunj widen her eyes…
U : han bhai… You tho sees nightmares in school exam also… Huh…
Kunj glares him…
U : you know bhabi. … Bhai k sapne itne ajeeb the…. He saw that a goat is eating his exam paper… So he kick the goat…. 😂😂😂😂😂and he kicked me in his sleep.😡😡
from then I told mom that I will not share room with him….
Twihi nd uv starts laughing…. Everyone gets happy…. Kunj starts to beat uv….

M :uv u never told this to me.
U :jaan tht i told u na remember?
Tw (in a teasing manner) : ohh jaaaaaan
Nw it was twinj’s tym to laugh while uv stands
K-very good tw u uv proved tht u r my wife…..nd gives a side hug.
Both exchange awkward looks to eo.Nd everyone left then again everyone slept for some time except Tw….she was reading….

After exam…..
Tw comes out from college with a worried face….
K : everything OK??
Tw nodes yes then no then yes then no….
K : stop…. Ufff…. What’s the problem….
Tw : nothing…
K : then why are you worried…
Tw : don’t know….
K : aaaauuuurrrrgghh…. U girls…. Now sit here….

Next day… At lunch time… Kunj will come with result…. Tw is sitting on chair in kitchen…. B.S is continously telling her to go…. But she is in deep thought… All come except Kunj …. All are worried for her results… Kunj comes with a serious face….
Us: Kunj… What happened???
K : Tw…. Tw…. Come out….
Tw jerk in her place… She slowly comes out of kitchen….
K : how was your exam yesterday?? (serious voice)…
Tw starts crying : i am sorry… I know I failed….i am sorry…
All gets sad…. M.S goes to Her….
M.S : why are you crying???
Tw : i can’t pass the exam…
K : who said that???
Tw and all looks at him….
Kunj comes near her and pats her cheek.. You will go college from tomorrow…
All gets happy…. Uv picks up her and made a round… All laugh..
At night…. Tw was sitting on floor taking her album with her parents and was crying…
Kunj enters and gets worried to see that…
K : Tw what happened???
Tw wipes her tears : no… Nothing…
Kunj sits beside her… Is this your family album…???
Tw excitedly starts to show her and her parents pic…. Tells her about her bubbliness… Naughtiness…. Kunj sighs…
K : you will get back your everything soon…
Tw cries remember her parents death also cherry’s torture… Kunj closes his fist…

Next day at college…
Tw gets to know that she will work as junior doctor under Kunj….
Twinj starts working…. Tw assist him very well…
Time goes….
Tw starts to love Kunj like hell… But Kunj… He always mentained distance… Acted as good teacher guide… Helps her…
Tw gets back his bubbly nature…. As she is younger in sf… All pampered her a lot except Kunj…. Tw craved for his love….
This like one year passed…
Tw got 2nd position in 4th year… Kunj decided to send her abroad for further study…
At evening…
It’s Tw’s result out day…. All are happy about her results….Kunj comes with a packet….Tw sees him lovingly…
K : Tw pack your bags…. Day after tomorrow is your flight for USA…
M : oh god…. After one year you both are going to honeymoon???
Tw starts blushing but after listening Kunj’s word her face turns pale…
K : mahi stop it… Only she is going USA for 2 years further study…
All gets happy…. Tw sits numb…. All are enjoying….laughing…

At night….
Kunj is doing something in laptop… Tw is arranging her bed with pale face…
K : Tw come here sit beside me….
Tw silently goes….
Kunj show her about her college campus teacher… Tw has no concentration in that but still listening with teary eyes….after completing…. Kunj gifts her a fountain pen….
K : Tw this is for your 1st success….
Tw starts crying…. She hugs him….

Tw : Kunj ji (ajeeb lag raha hai na just lev it) I don’t wanna go…. I will listen everything… I will not do any prank with you and Mahi di…. I will eat everything…. How could I live there with out mamma Papa uv bhai mahi di and and u… Please don’t send me….
Kunj departs her….
K : Tw it’s your future… So you have to go… Only 2 years na…
Tw : only 2 years??? It’s only 2 years for you but for me it’s a vast 2 years….
K (strictly) : don’t be stubborn…. Go and sleep and let me sleep also….
Tw sees him with teary eyes…. And silently went to sleep…
2 days gone… All notice Tw is so sad….Uv tried to cheer her but all in vain.
It’s evening… 9 pm is her flight….
Kunj comes in the room… Tw is getting ready with teary eyes in front of dressing table… Kunj sees this they have an eye lock in the mirror…. Kunj comes near her… He ties the back dori of her kurti and adjust the dupatta properly…. Then he applied vermillion and also make her wear the mangal sutra….
Tw turns and hugs him…. She starts crying…. Kunj tries to depart her but she tighten her grip…. So he keep quiet….
Tw : please kunj Ji…. How can I live without you…. I love you Kunj Ji…..
Kunj closes his eyes…. And push her gently…. He takes tw’s bag….
Tw : don’t you love me sanskar Ji….
Kunj stops at the door but then walks out wid teary eyes which is not seen by Tw nd clears it…. Tw compose herself…. And moves out….
All go with her… But before going airport…. All goes to see the sight of the land for which twinj tied in a relationship….
B.S : Tw it’s your and Kunj’s hospital…. You both will take care of this when you come….
Tw looks down with teary eyes….
M.S : when you come after 2 years…. You will find it ready…. The day you arrive will be the day of inauguration….
Tw nodes… She was looking at kunj…. But kunj was looking at everyone except her….
All bids bye with teary eyes…. Twihi hugs and cry a lot…. Tw wanted to hug Kunj but she can’t…. She goes little far…. (Sajnave plays)Then runs and Jumps on Kunj…. Hugs him….
Tw : please Kunj Ji….
Kunj departs her and takes her to main gate…. At main gate he kisses her forehead…. And turn back and move to sf wid teared eye bt doesnt shw it… Tw sees him several times turning back but Kunj didn’t turn back…. Tw left….
After 2 years…..

The next day tw is going to cme to india

In USA.
Tw is dancing wid a shirt.
Then a girl enters.
Tw : chinki tommorow i am going to meet him.
C : whom?
Tw : u fool,kunj ji.
C : kunj JI?
Tw : ya ji? Y?wht hppned?
C : first tym i m hearing a girl call her husband ji?
Twinkle : go girl..nd smiles nd again starts dancing wid the shirt hving a big smile on her face.

Tw :i m cming for u kunj.

In India

Twinj room
Kunj has practically emptied the cupboard on the bed.
K :which one shud i put?
Uv cms there.
U : bhai wht hppned to ur room?luks sme hurricane hit it.
K :i didnt knw which shirt to wear.
U : wear any shirt y does it matter?
K :u fool tw is coming tommo….
U :oh….bhabhi is cming tomorrow thts y (teasing tone)
K :aise kuch nhi u cm help me. Tell which to wear.
At last yunj decide one shirt..
On the otherside
B.S is running here and there… Instructing everyone…. The sm is looking just a newly Wedding mansion….all are hanging around….
Today 12 am will Tw arrive…. Tomorrow is inauguration of hospital…. Mahi is carrying her one year old son abhi….
M : mom… Mom… It’s on 9 am… Tw will come at 12 am at night….
In this 2 years Tw just talk with kunj through Skype…. Kunj is just instructed her about her study nothing else…. In this years Tw’s feelings grew stronger….. She loves Kunj more than anything…. But she thinks Kunj doesn’t love her….
At night….
Men of the sf is waiting at airport.. Tw comes… and Uv hugs her…. Kunj just starring at her… Nothing has changed same eyes same face same rosy lips.. But yaa she is looking more beautiful than before… Tw comes to him…. Kunj just open the door…. Tw sits.
K (thinks) : until i fulfill my promise i will nt shw my feelings to u
all come back to sm….
Tw is soo happy after returning home…. But she is so tired….
Tw sleeps on bed in a second… Next morning she again gets sad seeing Kunj sleeping at couch…. She thinks she can’t punish him by this unwanted relationship so she thought to talk with him and give him Divorce….
At new nursing home site…. MS cuts the ribbon…. MS shows Tw her cabin…. She is happy but somehow sad inside….
All gather in the hall…. Suddenly Tw froze in her face…. She is shocked to see cherryand anita in front of her…. Kunj hand over her 2 files….
Tw read this…. In first file there is some proof of Rt’s murder…. Yes her father was killed by cherry and Anita…. Tw slaps them hard….

Tw : why you both made me orphan….
She slaps them again and again…. Until Kunj departs her from them…. Tw cries…. She runs and sits in car and drive back to sm…. She cries hugging her pillow….
All comes… B.S and Mahi tries to go to her but Kunj stops her….
K : let her cry mom….
At night Tw open the door…. B.S nd Usha cares her face…. She sees the 2nd file…. She got her company back….

Tw tells MS that she want to give 50% to her Maya bhabi…. MS nodes…. At night Tw eats very little… After insisting a lot by the 3 ladies….
She again comes and sleeps….

Next morning….
Tw wakes up and looks at couch… Kunj was not there…. Suddenly she feels someone pulls her…. Tw falls on bed no no…. Falls in Kunj’s tight embrace…. Tw widen her eyes…. And sees him blankly….
K (closed eyes) : why you always woke up so early…. Sleep….
He tighten his grip and takes her more in his embrace…. Tw is still starring him blankly….
K : i know I am very Handsome…. But now sleep and let me also sleep….
He buries his face in her shoulder… Which make her come back in to sense….
Tw : aaaaah…
She shouts…. Kunj immediately close her mouth…
K : why are you shouting??? (no response)speak….
Tw sign him to take his hand… Kunj remove it….

Tw (innocently) : what are you doing here???
Kunj halfly top of Tw… Holding her by waist with one hand and by other hand he is taking support for rising himself from bed…
K : well I think it’s also my room… My bed… And…
Tw : and….
Kynj comes close her ears….
K (deep nd sensual tone) : and you are my beautiful cute wife….
Tw turns in to crimson red….
K : so I should be here na???
Tw : but before you slept at couch and also…
K : i promised my self that 1st I will establish you in your life and return your property then only I touch you….
Tw’s eyes fills with tears…

Tw : Kunj j….
Kunj close her mouth….
K : Kunj…. Only Kunj….
Tw nodes…
Te hugs him… Tw loose his balance…. He fall on Tw….
Tw : thank you Kunj.. Thank you for everything….
Kunj smiles and hugs her tightly….
K : you asked me that I love you or not…. But Tw I loved you from the 1st day when I come to know about your struggle… But I can’t give you answer… You don’t know how much it was paining when you went to USA…. But I stayed strong for You….but now I have no barrier….
He departs from Tw…
K (smiles naughtily) : soo….
Tw : so???
Kunj smashed his rough lips with her soft rosy lips.They kissed each other passionately yet hungrily…. Kunj comes top of her fully and they consumate their marriage…. After 1 year they are blessed wid daughter shanaya kunj sarna nd they happily lived ever after.

The End.

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Hey all
This is ur Aidhu here.
Yhis is the third tym i am uploading this os. Last 2 tyms it didnt cm in the Tu pg i didnt get a rejection mail nd it was more thn 24 hrs.
Then i thought 1 last tym i will try otherwise i will quit TU.
I hope this Os reached u all.
Actually this was swasan os. Being a diehard fan of SidMin i thought hw wud it be? Nd i gound it great so i thought to just change the names nd give u

Concept Credit: Sawsana.S
Not full credit give sm to me also i altered ut a bit wid sm dialoges.

Nd i need a suggestion/advice from u all.
I wanted to cont 1 ff shud i?

FF Details:

Writer- Aarti
FF Name-An unconditional love twinj and virika.
Summary Of Story-Virika r in the same college nd luv eo bt didnt tell eo bt will soon conffese. Twinj meet eo as they both came to the same college as Virika for admission for first year. Sm cute nhok-jhok btwn them. Kyra who luved Viren when cm to knw abt virika’s tries to take revenge by bribing the principal for nt giving kunj admisdion. Tw fights wid the princpal for kunj’s admission. Mahi who had fell for kunj cms to the princ. Office shw the video of Kyra bribing the princ nd gets kunj’s admision. Then next day kunj forgets his notebook bt tw gives her notebook nd gets out the cl.rm as ordered by the teacher. Two seniors eve-teasing her nd takes nd rapes her.(alternation will be there over here wen i write abt the fact). Kunj saves her nd agrees to marry her. Flashback is shown usha nd leela r neighbours. Virika nd Twinj r childhood friends.kunj used to take of Tw as if he was her husband. Flashback is shwn. Soon Twinj realises their feelings for eo nd confesses it to eo. Mahi wen cm to knw abt it makes a plan wid Kyra to separate Virika. Atlast Twinj prove it wrong. Soon virika’s marriage was also fixed . Both sarna nd vadhera family go for a pinic. In a dhabba waiter mixes up the orders bt mistake. Twika bhang effect. Twinj romance. Tw ruins the romance wid a prank.
Precap:tw’s manao kunj mission.

Alterations(tht i will make):
• Tw was nt raped.
•will add one more couple VirMan.(virika bina VirMan ajeeb lgta hai mujko)
•Lil more virika scenes(as the old writer didnt pay much attention to them)(nt to critisize her)
°Nothing else

Characters-

Jeevika Vadhera: a cute innocent and a bubbly girl. She loves her family a lot. Sister of Twinkle Vadhera

Twinkle Vadhera: a full Punjabi pataka. She is a bit childish but too cute. Younger Sister of jeevika Vadhera.

Leela Vadhera: Mother of Jeevika and Twinkle

RT Vadhera: Father of Jeevika and Twinkle.

Viren Sarna: A handsome good looking guy . He has a huge female following . Brother of Kunj sarna

Kunj Sarna: A smart Dashing guy . Following the footsteps of his big brother Viren. He loves his brother a lot.

Usha Sarna: Mother of Viren and Kunj Sarna

Manohar Sarna: Father of Viren and Kunj.

The characters will be further added!

So tell me shud i cont this FF.
I really want to cont this FF.
PLS TELL UR SUGGESTIONS IN THE COMMENTS BOX👇👇👇👇

If i qm writing this FF i will be writing alternatively btwn both my FF

My current FF’s ep u will get it tommorow

84 comments

  1. Malhotrarochika

    Wowwww!!!! Such an awesome story….awwwwww twinj ki yaad dila di……keep it up!!!!! Vvvvvvv amazing….

  2. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    What a amazing OS Aish… Loved it…
    It was tooooooooooooo cute… Plz do keep writing more OS….
    Awesome…
    Love u 😆

  3. SidVee

    Wowowowowowow.. superb awesome amazing mind blowing.. really loved it.. kunj (sid) is always perfect😍😍.. this is one of the best os I’ve read.. 💞

  4. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Omg di
    It was so cute amazing Marvellous Tremendous I don’t have words for it
    Superb
    Loved it
    Mind blowing
    N yaa plz continue your new ff of twinj n virika

  5. dreamer..arundhati

    Aishu..im simply speechless. ?..my gosh…such a beautiful os…olz do write more. ?.luv u. ?.and sorry for not replying on ur comment

  6. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Finally u came
    I know u might be wondering why am I reacting so much but u know since many days I was thinking about ur twinj n virika ff by I didn’t remember the name n the writer too…
    Plzzz continue it…I really loved that ff

  7. manu

    Wowwww di loved it superb os plz do write ff also will obe to read it and sry can’t comment in ffs actaually my sis is having net pack and she gives me just for five min so in 1 or 2 days I just opened nd save it for offline reading yr u all r going very good shamz di ur os was just fantastic and jisha di congratulations loved it superb now also aftr doing so much drama mu sis gave me so writing as fast as I can ok now bye and aishwarya di plz write a ff also waiting for it love u all and happy rakhshabandhan to all my friends

      • manu

        No di I don’t take screenshots when I open the ffs there is a symbol of three vertical.dots and there it is a option of save for ofline reading and it get saved to save pages by that

  8. AYESHA KHANUM

    amazing awsome fabulous mind blowing episode what to say ur such a beautiful writer amazing os

  9. shikha

    this is really a very cute os
    loved Twinj a lot
    Kunj is such a good husband hats off to you to write that much good effort by Kunj for her studies
    and the FF you are saying is one of my favorite story on TU
    please continue it and all the alterations you made are also nice as I wanted virika more in that ff
    m really very thankful to you if you continue that ff as m a very big fan of virika and missing them very much

    • Thnx sikha
      I will cont tht ff. I was hving this idea from a long tym. Bt nw only i told ull my wish to cont tht ff as it has an amazing story nd i waited for practically 4 months just in case the writer cms back.
      As nobody is writing I am gonna write tht ff.

  10. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Like seriously as soon as i read the 1st line i didn’t want to stop reading!! N im not lying yaar really!
    Seriously this os is now one of my fav! Like i still can’t get over it … I enjoyed so much that i was so angry when i saw happily ever after …😂 sorry i meant the end…😂
    Seriously i loved it .. I hope u come up with more of these stories 🙂

  11. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Though it was an altered one it was toooooo good
    Im seriously speechless
    Surely continue writing such stuff

    And if u want u surely can continue the ff
    I would b more than happy to read it

  12. Jaanu

    Waaw !!! This was tooooooo gud !! He’s really a perfect husband and u R really a perfect writer .. And this OS literally stole my heart .. Coming to the other ff My only two fav serials which I didn’t miss an episode and I still watch is Ehmmbh and TEI . If u R writing a ff on it how could I miss ?? Keep going n entertain me 😂😂

    • Sme here my only 2 fav serial r EHMMBH ND TEI(old wala).
      I dint miss even 1 epi of both of them.
      Even i still watch both of the show’s old eps. Nd i think i will surely entertain u.
      Tysm Jaanu

  13. Baby

    |Registered Member

    omgggggggggggg aishwariya it was u r amazing
    speechless
    i mean wen i read it i was amazed den was very eager to no who rote it
    i jst scrolled down n saw it was u yr
    fabulous sch mein
    osm i mean yah read many gr8 os bt dis was 1 of dem yr
    luvd it 2 d core
    n yah mayb u shuld ryt dat ff bt wntd to ask if dat ff is ended bt dat rtr who use to ryt dat ff
    as i no unconditional love was rtn by shonnaa n missing her madly bt dere was no virman in dat ff doews some1 no where is shonna
    n y u lft me speechless jst a big wala smile was playing on my face aftr reading dis os
    srsly luvd it

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