Pehli nazar mein kaisa jaadu kar diya…. twinj os

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Hiiiiiiiiiii darlossss so long na srrry beat me yrrrr bt was bzee and nw also bzee bt posted cos received soooo many requests and pms sk hw can I deny…
But yess listen guys I have no time stoll I posyed but if I lk not get 24+COMMENTS I m nt gonna post so pls guys commnt its soo long so pls one word commnt also can work….
And ya it was one shot but became sooo long so I made it three shots………

Jasmin
Sohi
Sidmin
Sushmitha
Presha
U were nt able to guess me bt no problem….

Priya23(mia)
My sweettttttttttttt
My water lilyyyyyyyyy
My queennnnnnn
Golden soul of heart
My Queen
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Sach mein u r reallly amazing yrrrr really itni sweet hau na tu my water lily dekh tune mujhe sabse pehle pehchana snd u said tujhe koi hint ki bhi zarurat nahi thi tu kyun itni swttttuuuu hai love u jaaan yrrr tu itni swt hai maine terw liye shayari likhi hai frst try ever in my life but mere pass na bilkul bhi time nahi hai os dene ka bhi nahi tha so isiliye msin wo shatari kabhi aur dungi ab is os ko bhi teri requests ke baad de rahi hun tujhe manaΒ  nahi kar sakti na

Baby
Meri jaan meri cupcake meri swty meri ice candy love u yrrrrrrr tu toh meri sab kuch hai I knw agar tujhe pehle nahi kehti ki mat commnt karna toh sab guess kar lete isiliye mana kia tja srry sryy I knew tu commnt krna chahti thi haina par maafi dede srry dekh main aj kych zyada maafian maang rahi hun an haina bt kya karun tujhe toh pataa hi hai na chal chod maine tere liye apni jaan ke liye bhi shayari likhi hai gr frst tine par wo bhi main abhi anhi pist karungi ab to u read my is and agar thoda sa bhi acha laga toh commnt kar dena

Purvi128
Hey maine bhi tujhe boht bada wala mishhhh kia dera and ty fr recognizing me by my wrting style and ya of course I m bigggggg fan of kaira dear….

Twinjfan.tamanna
Hangg purvi ne apko help ka na koi ne dear I m ishu only and ty fr liking intro y awas full of suspense aftrall rMya ki suspense queen hun na avha srry bt u knw na I lo e emotional and suspenseful stries…..

Adeeba_zain
Adeebu haang u r rt I m ur ushu only tu guys fr recognizimg me lv u

Ramya
Tera guess sahi hai dweetest queen love u missed u

Aanya_pandey
Koi prblm nahi if u late u recognized me that means a lot

Ok so now os………

A voice:Mama papa
A girl eternally beautiful cuteeee and adorable in looks in her mid twenties
Comes down running through stairs screaming Mama papaaaa

She comes and hugs her mom from backk

She is non other than twinkle singhania………

Twi:good morning misha singhania ur meri the great twinkle singhania ki mom…(twi of bold shyless nature)

So misha singhania(parul chauhan) is twi mom
Kaisi hain ap misha ji

….
Misha chuckles a bit…

Twi is back hugging her mom….

Misha:hey gm mera bacha aj itni jaldi uth gaye ye jaadu kaise hua hann…
She patted her cheeks whike twi was bavmck hugging her

Twi:kuch nahi misha ji socha aj ek naya adventure karte hain!!!!!!

A person pulls twi ears…

She leaves her mom and says:ouuuu ouuu pops pos leave leace plss leave ou ouuu

So he is twinkle’s dad manish singhania(sachin tyagi)…

Manish:twi ki bachi ek to tu apni mom ko unke name se bulana band kar main tujhe roz kehta hun and yssss wat adventure u were talking about hann!!!!! Pls dont tell aj tune koi or naya siyappa karna hai…..

Twi:manish ji baithiye zara
(Look guys how bold shyless carefree adventorous girl she is)
Pehle toh humein pata hai ki ap misha srrryyy srry hamari mom se boht pyaar akrte hain and u think only u can say her misha ji hainaaa hannn haannn bolo bolo

Misha blushes…
Misha : twi tu na boht shaitan ho rahi hai hum tere mom dad hain u cannot talk like dis…

Twi:chill mom u both always say na we all are freinds kyun boliye (towards manish) pops urfff misha ji ke hubby….

Manish was blushing lil
Twi saw dis…..

Twi:omg pops ek baat batao yaar why u always blush listening momzeee ka name hmmmm aoke samne toh khadi hain yehhh

Manish:tu theher ja twinkle ki bachi tu boht shaitan hoti ja rahi hai tu ruk ja

Twi:dad abhi meri koi bachi mahi hui hai koi nahi jab hogi apse hi milvauungi sabse pehle…..

Manish:twinkle now I m serious dun say like dis look I love u my bacha and gave u full freedom bt u dont talk like dis… and sits on sofa nearby…..

Twi:hawww my superhero got upset sorrry superhero I ll not say dis again never ever sorty dad sorry and she goes to him ans sit near him….

He cunninhly smiles and caight hold of her annd starts tickling her….

Twi:ahhhhhh papa popss leave dis is cheating u black mailed me hawww koi nahi dad ab dekhna I ll call u by name which ….

Misha:twi nooo pls dun call him by dat name only I can call.l him cutuuuu…
Bites her tongue….

Twi stands uo as manish loses her caught of twinkle…

Twi starts laughing holding her stomach

Twi:hahaa haaaahhaaaa dekha pops I amde ur day… karo karo dono blush waise papaa ap dono ki pove story hai badi kamall ki I mean LIVE AT FIRST SIGHT hua kise tha…

Man:coming out from dream world
Twi ki bachi apne mom dad se koi aise poochta hai kya han b…….

He stops as he listens a voice…..

Voice of a girl whos also an eternal excellent beautyyyy purely innocent shy girl….

Voice:papa ap toh ye natak mat hi karo ki apse aisi baatein na puchein and all wiase bhii twi di is like dis ur frnd na nvr shy always remains a frnd of u both so why u r acting as u are her strict dad which u r not… so bata do na…

Twi:shivii my sis good morning shivi….
So girl is shivangi singhania (shivangi joshi)twinkke’s lil sis……
Of 19 yrssss…

She comes and guves hifi to twinkle…
Both girls chuckkes seeing blushing mom dad….

Shivii:look di how dey are blushing….

Hahaaahaaa haaaaa haa
Both burst out in laughter………..

Manish and misha embarrassed

Misha:manish apne na ladkiyon ko zyada bigaad rakha hai drkho toh kaise zubaan lada rahi hain…

Mani:misha ji yeh meri princesses hain bata dijiye inhe ji ye puch raahi hain…

Misha shocked!!!!!!!!

Twi:look shivii look mom dad ko name se bulati ahin and dad ji ji karke wah kya pyar hai heheee

Both again gives a hi five to each oder…..

Misha:girls bas karo uts over now bas karo….

Both controlling der laugh:ok mom but again burst out alugjing hehee

Now four of dem started alughing and ….

Maish:girls tum mahi amnogi na

Twi and shivi:nopseeee

A voice from behind
Kya nahi manogi????????????

Manish:baby……. wat a surprise

Misha:baby wow really a surprise …

At the ebtrance a girl a gorgeous sweetest most beautiful and awesome girl in mid twenties was standing holding a traveller bad and standing by crossing one leg against other….

She ia wearing black and white sneakers with balck yop white shotsss…….

Twi and shivi runs to her…… and hugs her….

Twi:baby my cupcake my jaan meri damu my baby hwz u wat a surprisw tu kab ayi australia se tu to parson ane wali thi….

Shivi:damu di wat a surprise I m sooo happy

So girl is damyanti aggarwal(played by meri cupcake meri jaan meri damu meri ice candy cutee love u)

All call her baby and twi calls her cupcake….

She goes towards manish and misha and hug them both together den twi and shivi comes der too….

They all had a great hug…

Damu:mosa g masi g namaste…

Manish:hey baby I m not mossa g and all yeh mat kajo I m wat!! Tell

Damu:oh srry u r cool na so no mosa g ok dost

Man:yeah and smiles…

And I m ur frnd says misha

Ok misha mausi

Mom call me mom tu hi bulale yeh dono jhallian to mujhe mere nam se hi bilati rehti hain

Twi and shuvi:chill mishu darling hamari sweetie mishuu

Misha : twi zyada ho gya na ok ab bata aj kis bichare par danger hai aftr all u r going to do a new adventire in ur college pls iss baar no siyappa

Twi:chill yrr u know na I m nt doing any siyappas

Manish:yeh delho lier sabse badi jhoothi tu roz koi na koi adventure karke ati hai college mein or wo jo uska victim hota hai mijhe toh uske liye srry feel hoti hai…

Cm baby lets sit…

Dey all sit on sofa….

Misha:u know baby kal yeh college se ate wakt do ladkon ko peet ayi

Baby:misha mom its normal kia hoga un ladkon ne kuch waise tell me ap sab batao ki twinkle ki shaadi nahi karni kya itni badi ho gayi hai ab iski college is also ending…

Misha:yeh tu issi se pooch.. I daily say her par nahi madam wamts to live life on her own terms……

Twi:cuppy tu kya shaadi shaadi kar rahi hai u know na abhi jab tak mujhe bji mom dad ki love story ki tarah koi nahi mil jaat hw wipl I marry hmm

Manish:rehne de baby yeh nahi manegi isse behas mein na koi jeeta hai na koi jeetega…..
Wause twi challenge karrein…

Twi:wat u mean popssss

Manish:dekh I never put any restrictions on u but tu toh sab ladkon ko peet ati hai if even smone stares u tujge pata nahi sacha pyar kab milega I give u chaleenge of 10 days if u ll find ur true love in des days den ok oderwise I ll see sm good boy fr u

Twi:pata hai mujhe iss challenge ko only I will win cos agar na bhi mila toh bhi I m nt going to marry and u ll not force me par koi nahi u want to chall me pops so challenge accepted ur princess will win now I m going to college bye …..
By the way dad ap or mom ko bhi PEHLI NAZAR mein pyar hua tha na while u both were doing ur business course in vollege great love story of urs I hope mujhe bhi mil jaaye…

Misha:dekh twi if u ll nt win kuch toh karna padega and she winks …..

(Look giys dey all are jst like frnds wid mom dad)

She hugs her mom dad and shivi and holds baby’s hand saying baby cm today in my college fest is der so I ll make u meet my frnds meri jaan…. meri sisooo

And sbe rums taking her…

Misha:are twinki breakfast

Twi:mom canteen

Misha:wait twinkle baby mst be tired use rest akrne de

Baby:no misha ma I m ok I ll go wid dis jhalli kya pata aj kusi ki jaan bach jaye nahi toh yeh kisi ko toh peet hi degi…..

Dey all laugh while twinkle makes faces and leaves running while baby runs after her…

Baby:twinkle sun na

Twinkle was running she reaches outer gateway of her house and as she opens it dhoooo bhoooom

Twi fell down but waot nt on floor over a boy In his mid twenties….

A handsome fair boy with black hair and hazel nutty eyes which are enoughh to kill crores of people….

A handsome boy with perfect body and abs with finely toned body wearing a simple white t shirt and denim blue jean with sneakers enough to kill anyone……

He was on floor and twi above him….

Baby:twi (she stops seeing dem and smiles)
Gaya yeh ladka aj isne twi taneja ko touch akr lia na….

Twinkle was engrossed in him while dat boy in her….

Twinkle was wearing a black crop top and a short skirt of peach colour….

Dat boy had his hands over her waist ….
He tucked twinkle’s hair behind her ear…..

Twinkle was not reacting but just looking at him….

Baby was shocked….her mouth was opened……
Shivi came and becsme shocked tooooo

Shibi:spoke softly baby di yrh twi di ko kya hua ….

While der both were lying in smae positionnnn

Song plays…
PEHLI NAZAR MEIN … female version

That boy was tryong to lift twi and get up bt twi was not in her senses…..

He saw here and der nad saw baby and shivi….
Boy:help plss…..

Shivi:ya sure…

Dey both run and pat twi bt no response….

Baby screams in her ear den twi vomes in her senses and sensing awkwardneas tries to get up bt again due to sm jerk sbe fell on him and his grip on her uncovered waist tightens….

Baby helps her to get upppp

Twi feels so awkward but she s blushing too blushing like hell keeping her face down….

Boy:hey wat the hell girl why u were not getting up… (while rubbing off mud from his t shirt and jeans)
U soo flheavy uuuff

Twi was still blushing and no reaction…

Both baby and shivi were helllll shockeddddd

Dey jerked her a bit…

twi: wat!!! I m heavy no I m not see…

Boy:ooo pls u r

Twi:as u think I know I m not…
By d way who r u pehle toh kabhi mahi dekha yahan….

Kunj:why shld I tell u???

Twi:(undrr her breath) rude but cute…

Kunj (towards shivi and baby):hi pretty girls I m kunj goenka and I was searching for singhania mansion… this is singhania mansion na!!!!!

Shivi: ys hello ysss its singhania mansion I m singhania daughter and she is twinkle di my big sis

Kunj:oh watevr leave her u tell me are u only giving room on rent na?? For pg I read ad in nwspaper…

Shivi:its first time yss we r giving frst time cos my mom thought der s loneliness in house so ya we ll give u r as pg????

Kunj: ys pretty girl

Shivi:cm inside plss u can talk to mom dad

Twi pov
Soo cute rude tha he ignored me twinkle singjania jisko kabhi kisi ne ignore nahi kai he ignored me bt anyhow why m I feeling jappy by meeting him amine usse kucj nahi kaha wen he touched me and spoke rude to me why?????
Bt pls babaji isko papa pg rakh lein pls
Bt why I m conceened do I like him???

Baby: twi heh kya hua tujhe u dun reacted wen he touched u warna toh u always beat every guy if dey stare j also and he spoke rude to u hw can it be I mean tere peecje saarra college actually saare amritsar ke ladke hain and he ignored u hw can it be!!!!!?????? I m shocked u also dun said anything wen he ignored u tujhe kya hua…..

Twi:pata nahi yaar bt his eyes his eyes had some magic….
His touch made me crazy which I never felt from any oder boys slight touch…

His eyes were appearing as an endless ocean in which I wnated to sink
(Main doobna chahti hun uski samandar jaisi gehri aakhin mein)

Dey both wemt towards car and baby starts driving car as twi was lost …

Twi :(GUYS READ DIS PROPERLY)

uske baal maine aj tak aise baal nahi dekhe…
Uski eyess dey were melting me wo mujhe pighla rahi thi aur usmein sama jasne ko keh rahi thi
(His eyes were saying me to be his part)

His nose was carved perfectly ….

His cologne made me mad totally I felt like dying in dat cologne

His touch was softest I ever felt
I felt completed by his touch

His lips wat should I say…..

His lips were forcing me to touch dem by mine his lips made me go crazy for him….

Baby was shocked and her mouth was left opened
While twi was smiling thinking of himmm

Twi continues…
His photo is pasted in my heart I can never forget him I am ready to listen anything against me from him
I felt dat he is my heartbeat …
I never felt such before I feellll I m in LOVE wid his hair ….
In LOVE wid his eyes , his cologne, his touch, his lips and him

Yssss I m in love wid dat kunj goenka…
Its LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ya its lo e obly ysss its love and she bcomes sooo happpyy

Baby:are u sure its lo e or infatuation

Twi:no its not infatuation I m not attracted by him I m jst craving for him I m felling for hom I m felling in love wid him I m sure…….

Bt dun tell to anyone cos I wanna test ur wrds ki its jst a mere infatuation I tjink its love bt still I ll check I hope he is nw our pg…

Dey reach college …

All boys start staring twi as she looked so hot…

One boy commented hot bt twinkle paid no heed amd smiling in her thots went inside …

AllΒ  were shocked….

Dey went towards canteen and

A voice:twinkleeeee

Twi:hi priyaaaaaaaaaa
Priya I m soo happyyy I m sooi happy and she swirls her…

Priya (played by my priya urf mia)was confused

Priya:kya ho gya daring girl u soo happy!!!!

Twi:see priya shes my sis cousin sis my cuppy jaan baby urf damyu
And baby shes my water lily my jaan priya….

Priya and baby says hi to eo

Priya said
why u soo happy??

Twi:i m In love yeahhh

Priya was shocked as welll

Wat???? A voice from back…..

Twi:purvi my oreo hwz u yss its true
Hi presha u also der
Ooo u also der ramya my swt queen
Hi aanya hi sohi hi tamanna hi adeeba hw r u all yss its true hiys bt keep quiet abhi I have to be confirmed.
.

Dey all say ok and den went to do feat preps…..

Whole day twi was thinking of kunj…..
Her freinds noticed her and were shocked to see thei bold carefree twinkle chitpy twi calm and jjust smiling thinkimg her own thoughts……..

Fest preps over amd fest was over too

Twi aftr fest was soo excited to go home amd meet the person whom she and her accepted as her live her life…

Twi drove wid baby quickly to her home…..

Twi ran to her room and bolted d door….

Baby thot to guve her space and went to shivi bt she dun told her anything as twi siad and she knew shivi will not remain quiet….

Twi went and started dancing in room she took her teddy and imagined it as kunj and started yo dance wid it….

She opened her wardrobe and start taking out all her clothes chosing wat to wear now as she wanted to look best in front of kunj….

She was taking all clothes trying dem and then again throwing dem on bed………

Her whole wardrobe emtied in a second and her bed was seen nower bt her vlothes found a new wardrobe dat was her bed…..

She was so much confused….

She was a doing fashion designimg vourse last yr and was best student bt nw she was congused qat to wear evem frm her own designed pieces….

She called priya…
Priya was also one of best fashion designer student in her college ans her bestie her water lily too

Twi:hi water lily…

Priya:boliye masam ab kya hua

Twi:priya I am confused

Priya was shocked

Priya:wat the great twinkle singhania is confuse haha dos is new u nvr think dis much kya hua

Twi:kya pehnun main

Priya:amy party today mujge bhi jaana hai??

Twi:nahiiiiiiiiiiiii party nahi bas aise hi ghar pe pehnne hain in frnt of him

Priya : twi u r changed u never thought abt ur clothes ever bt why now?????

Twi:pls priya jst tell me yrrr I dun knw wats happening wid me???

Priya:ok ok twi ok tu khush teh I ll tell u qat to wear u remember once we wemt shopping???

Twi:hmm age bol jaldiiiii

Priya:tu pagal ho gayi hai

Twi:haan ho gaui hun tu bol

Priya:phir wo jo dress wahan se li thi wohi oehen le tu it ll be nic ek baar bhi anhi pehni hai ya phir wo dress jo mai e tujhe design karke di thi

Twi:ty I ll wear dress which u gave me tyyyyy sooo much bye muahhhhhh

Twi fumbled vlothes on bed and found dat dress
Ty priya sooo much

She goes and changes d dress

Aftr two mis she comes out wearing beautiful casual bt adorable s*xy clothes
..

Guys it ll be formal moder wear as she has to wear at home only na

Shes wearing a hot pink colour sleeveless top and shots if black colour making her look s*xy….

She comes oyt and stands in front of mirror…
And applies some kajal and lip gloss and does a pout in frnt of mirror………

She ooens her footwear rack and takes out a flat roping sandals…. of black colour….

She wears den and ties der strings upto her knees…

She is looking sooo hot…

She smiles and comes out of her room and goes to misha her mom….

Bt she cannot find her…

Twi:wer is mom ?? Mom misha dear kahan ho?????

Shivi:di ap pagal ho gaye ho mom toh offuce gayi hain raat ko ayengi apko pata toh hai wo apna office miss nahi karti and dad bhi office gaye hain….

Twi:oh yaaa yaa srry
Waiss shivu wo jo mr rude goenka aya tha as a pg wo usko ralh lia kya???

Twi pov
I dun want to say him rude kya karti srry my kunj……

Shivi
Di u love him!!!!!

Twi shocked
Twi:no shivu who said no not at all
Twi pov
Ysssss I love him like madly crazily bt shivu hw she knws!!!!!!! Baby

Twi looks at baby…
Baby makes srry face

Shivu:meri baby du ki taraf aise mat dekho she us best unhone mujhe vataya di ap muje bata deye I ll nt tell to anyone…

Baby:srry twinki

Twi:no prblm jaan bt ab kisi ko na batana and shivi wo hai kahan
(Smiles)

Shivi shocked too
Shivu:baby di shes nt my twinki di shes changed
Waise di meri unke sath kaafi achi bonding ho gaui hai mom ne unhe wo wala room dia hai jst ape room ke sath wala ab khush……
And I call him kunj bhayia he s sooo nic

Twi:I hope mere saath bhi acha ho wo subah he was being vry rude……

Shivi pls darling ek baar intro karva de……

Shivi:di ok bt ek cond….

Twi:hmm wat!!!

Shivi:(bit slowly and stopping stopping she said) mujh.. I mean mujh.. e apke apke new wale earrings chahiye wo black and golden wale in which der is diamond in between for just one day plsssssssss di plssssssss

Twi:ok ab chal

Baby shuvi shocked
Baby:jo twinkle kisi ko apni cheez ko hath bhi nahi kagane deti thi she is giving her fav earrings….
Its rt LOVE REMAKES A PERSON..
.

Twi:chalo jaldi (dragging shivi and baby)

Shivi:oh hi di ruko chalo chalo yeh kha jayegi humein nahi toh…..

Dey run upstairs and went to his room and daw dT he was not der but his things were der I mean his things which were packed in boxes as he have not settled yet…….
Room was although fr pg bt was beautiful and big enough……………………

(Are itne rich hain room bhi acha hi hoga na)

Twi:khan hai wohhh

Shivi:dun knw ….

Baby:(screams) der der

Twi:(happily) wer wrr

Baby:look terrace door open lets gooooo

Twi baby and shivi runs towards terrace but shivi amd baby after seeing wats going on der returns while twinkle stood hiding behind the terrace door looks wat was hoing on der shocked….

She had mixed expression. ….
Ends on her dis face….

RECAP:SPECIAL SHOCK…...

IT was ONE SHOTS VERY LONG ONE SO DECIDED TO POST IN THREE SHOTS………
Do comment guys sooooo longgg nd took so time to write so mst get 24+commnts oderwise I m nt gonna post as I was bzee bt on ur requests I posted….
Tc love u all bye…

Paavu (ishu)

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33 Comments
  1. SidMin23

    Paavu
    It was nice and interesting and kunj one look change twinkle completely. And love twinkle family’s moment do post soon just want to know the reason of why they been shock and it make special shock

    1. Paavu

      Ty so much dat u lo ed it I ll post soon

  2. Akanksha

    Hey..it was very nice..eagerly waiting for the next one, post it asap….

    1. Paavu

      Ty dear soo much fr liking it

  3. Hiiiii ishu????…well amazing os…I loved each n every part of it…n their family bond was so good……bt precap SPECIAL SHOCK????…I m scared….well d os z really fab!!!!..well let me introduce myself I m Sweta n I m in 10th…..n i m ur one slicent reader bt as u demanded +24 commented otherwise u ll nt post the next part….so for dat only I commented…so nw accept my request plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part soon….n long epi lyk dis epi k…….I m hell excited for it…….n dear thank u so much for dis beautifully written os……do post the next part soon….I ll b waiting….all dis hearts for u for the long update???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????…..k by dnt forget topost the next part soon….lov u jaan?????????????

    1. Paavu

      Omggg soo many shock dis is the biggest shock my silentreader commnted dis means a lot…..
      a
      lot to me really ty soo much dear ty sooo much muahhhhh srry cant post soon na ab karungi aj

  4. Ritzi

    Tooooooooooooooooooooooo interesting! Damn the ts is so attracting …can’t wait for the next shot pls pls post it soon

    1. Paavu

      Omggg ritzi u commnted I ll die fr surr really I cant believe u liked my writing and u commnted ty soo much love u

  5. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous epi

  6. Presha

    Hey paavu it was indeed awesome i just loved it to core
    Plz post ur ff soon

    1. Presha

      Nd this ts also plz plz

  7. SidMin

    ?????? Sorry … yaar could not identify you . …
    Loved the episode it was awesome …. Too good …. have no words .. Kunj was cute and rude ….
    Love you post soon ❀

    1. Paavu

      Np sidmin np no srry ok koi nahi ty fr liking d epi

  8. Purvi128

    Hi Ishu … jaan,sweetie … tu toh chaa gayi yar …
    It was so awesome .. me kya bokun yaar …! Literally it was fab..
    Loved it to core … plsssss post soon ..!!, plss jaldi kerna me wait nahi ker sakti tu ne suspense mein dal diya hai … jaldi post ker …
    Or apna f bhi plssssss .. me kab se wait ker rahi hun …. plsss
    Love u lots…??????????? meri sweetie

    1. Paavu

      Hi purvi my oreo jaan ty waise vhaa toh tu jaati hai hum toh aise hi bas hain and really ty soo much fr liking it ff bhi ok I ll try and give love u muahhh happy teddy day

  9. Hey my ishu is back wid a super blast os yrrr loved it my jaan my chocolate…and ya post ur ff soon…
    post aoon…
    luv u…
    bye..

  10. Fabulous ishu I loved it to the core and I’m waiting for the special shock post soon ???

  11. hey.it was very nice
    post soon

  12. Asna

    Awesome yr very very awesome… do post next asap…

  13. It was awsome
    plz post soon

  14. SiyappaQUEEN

    Amazing os dear. Do post soon.
    Love you… ???

  15. Sohi

    Fabulous and cute

  16. RUTU.....

    Fantastic and interesting os dear

  17. Baby

    My jaan my baby my muffin my love I mean haan my sista wala love my bestiiee……..ohhhh god sch mein words r less to decribe u to name u…..u r d bestest sweetest n r only mine…….

    Awwwww……shoooo cute n adorable n lovely m speechless sooo cute bond wid d parents n den including me Australia haan…..n shorts n sneakers n crop top hahaa…..ohhh god soch ke hi m getting sooo happy kash mein itni patli ho jaun kash mein Australia jaa paun hayee…..sch mein yaar………..

    Kya bolun d bonding was too good frnds n clg fest whole day thinking bout kunj……n over all…..twinkle describing kunj his eyes his lips his hair his abbs his clothes his every..single damn thimg was beautiful. …..

    As always m in luv wid ur dis stry too…..

    Cant wait for d spcl shock…..
    Post nxt part asap πŸ˜€
    πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    Love u soooooooo mch jaan…… :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :*

    M sooo srriiee for dis small comment bt pc kaharab hai n u know dat……

    Luv u muffin :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :*

  18. Simiyy

    Hey Paavu
    It’s good to see your writing after a long time
    I really enjoyed it
    post soon
    loads of love

    1. Paavu

      Hry simu its excellent to see ur commnt aftr long time tyyyyy so muvh dear and ty fr enjoying it

  19. Mia12

    Awwwwwwww,,☺☺☺☺,,, ishuuuuuuuu,,,,,,, my innocentttt queen,?????,, my swettttttt sista,,????,, my sunflower,,?????,, I love u,,❀ ❀❀❀,, I love u till the end,,❀❀❀ ❀,,, I love shooooo much,,????? ur shooooooo swttttt ki puch mat,,, or omgggg,,?????? tum itne kese swttttt hosakti ho yarr,,?????,, ur the best,,??????,, ur the shinning armor of my eye’s,,❄❄❄❄❄❄❄❄,, as I said earlier,,????,,,, now m lacking of words to describe ur evetything,,,?????now m shooooooooo much shoooooiiiiii 4 cmnting shoooooo late,,????????? or kan bhi pakad to hu,,,?????? le or tuje pata hai os read karne ke bad mene cmnt or tha,,,????? and bhtttt hour’s later mene check kia to dekha ki wo cmnt post nai hua,,??????, I was left shooooo much upset coz of that,,?????,,,, and I didn have much time to and sooo bz also,,????,, but u knw na tere ff ya os pe long cmnt kiye bina mera man nai lagta,,?????,, then fir cmnt karne lagi coz no metter happened ???? agar tere ff pe muje bar bar cmnt karne pare ???? I have no pblm with it till my full life,,?????,,coz ur my jaan, my swttttt sista,????? and tere liye kuch bhi my innocent queen,,,,☺☺☺ and OS toh was justttttttt rapchik,,,???? bole to akdam dhaaassuuuu,,,???? I love this to the core,??????????????????????????????????????????????,,,, Love their family bond it was jastttt fantastic,,,,???????? and oh god tw boldness was toh,,,?????and omgg even she bit every boys,,????she is shoo dangerous yarr,?????and kunj’s rudeness,,,?????? love their frndly bond it was SUPERBBBB,,,????? And a big thank you jaan 4 including me also ur FABULOUS writing,, ????? which m not deserve,,,???? I m very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very happyyyy ki bata nai sakti????? love you jaan,,,, my sissi,,☺☺☺shooooooo much,,,❀❀❀❀❀❀ plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz now post ur ff also my jaan i m waiting 4 it desperately,,,,
    LOVE YOU SHOO MUCH,,,,❀❀❀❀❀❀ My innocent queen,,,,??????,,, Muaaahh,,,??? Muaaahh,,,??? Muaaahh,??? Muaaahh,,,???

    1. Paavu

      Haye rabba pfiya jaam why u sooo swt??? Bata yrr meri cute si water lily ti itna long cmmnt karti hai na I love dis thing I really lo e dis and ya dun ask srry vrry ok koi ma commmnt latr ho gya toh tu nahi bhi karti na toh bhi mujhe pata lag jaata u read it and ya srry toh I shld ask kitni mean hun na main itno late hun sryyy ro all
      and ya I lo ed ur line ki tune mere liye long commnt krna acha lagta hai and ff lifefime omg u love me dis much I love u more dan dat HAPPY TEDDY DAY DEAR LOve u dekh ab main tere jitna long commnt nahi kar sakti bt I tried myah muah

  20. Aanya_pandey

    This was so so so so cute paavu.. twinkle ?? she is soo cute..

  21. Ramya

    Ishuuuuuu my suspense queen my lovely queen
    I was shocked when I read it tumne mujhe add kiyaa isme
    Hayes meri jaanu mai bata nahi sakti hu ki kitna kush hu mai no words jaanu Sachi no worda
    Kitna pyaari ho yaar love u love u sooo sooo mucchhh
    Muahhh
    Aur episode me baare mai
    I think meri suspense queen janti hongi
    Ofcourse amazing awesome loved each n every part
    Zyada lamba nahi likh paungi comment
    But jaanu u made myy day
    I’m siooo sooooo happy janu
    Love u a lot
    Muahhh
    Keep smiling
    Aur ek bohat zyada tight wala hug

    1. Ramya

      Aur apne aap ko add kyu nahi kiya ??

    2. Paavu

      Are swt queen tyy sooo much ty doooo sooo much mylolli love u dear kaise nahi add karti tujhe tu yo meri jaanu hai amd ya I dun felt like khud ko add krna do I dun

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