pehali nazar (episode 6)

Hello every one thanks for the support ..this is last shot ……
Till now…anika and shivay meet each other after the year leap, and anika gives divorce papers….
Shivay gets hurt…..

Shot 6
Anika makes shivay eat the food ….and shivay all through which see her……
Anika ask him to show his hand as she needs to change the bangage…..shiivay says its ok …anika ask him to show….
Shivay stands and tries to move….
Anika turns him…
Anika: i knew u would have pain, but without changing it might get infected…give ur hand….
Anika tries to hold, where shivay keeps on leaving the hold….

Anika : i asked u to show….she sees him like a diane…
Shivay who saw her in full load of anger shows his hand…as anika unwraps the gauze he almost closed his eyes and see her now and then…
Anika: smiles and says: itna dhar hai tho kyn kaanj se ladai karthi ho…….app na ek number ki billu ho….bahar itna tadi aur ander dharpoak…..she smiles and says ya its finished..
Shivay see her…and ask her to leave as its late night…they both see each other..where anika breaks the silence saying bye…

Shivay sees her leaving and goes to his room….
He tries to remove the jacket….he feels the terrible pain…..
Anika who went till the entrance come back to take the clutch…..
She see him suffering….while opening the button….he gets tired of doing this slowly
Anika keeps the clutch there and goes in…and opens the button….

Anika: cant u call me if u are not able to do…..this much ego may back fire u….i don’t know when u are going to learn certain things…and this world still has things which shivay singh oberoi cant do…so dont over estimate urself…..
As She says she opens the jacket and make him wear his kurta….she senses shivay staring him…and
Anika: y are u staring at me now…

Shivay blinks his eyes and tears roll on….
anika: what happened…is that paining a lot…..she sees his hand
shivay suddenly hugs anika and tears outpour….anika gets stunned by the sudden gesture….stands still…where aftersome time she to reciprocate to wards him…he looks her face and smile at her and kiss her on the forehead……anika too melts with the gesture….he sees anika closing her eyes…he breaks hug and shout with pain….
anika comes out of the moment …and feels shy…. mild tear comes corner of her eyes…..she turns and sees the water is empty….so she takes the jug and runs towards the kitchen…shivay notice this…….she opens the fridge door….and smiles with a shy….
anika: what happened to me…he simply hugged me and i forgot every thing….. this love is one crap…..my ego asks me to punish him….but my heart want to be with him….

she sees the time…and takes the water and moves towards the room
shivay: to himself::: iska matlab …i am still there in her heart…but she is not accepting….no …it cant be true….she is about to accept pranesh proposal…..no she didnt accept…..no she was about accept….no i am in her heart..thats y she came here….even when we are at the logger heads…then y she cried now….i saw the tears in her eyes…how it can be….i dont no what to assume….
shivay out of pain reliver effect sleeps thinking all this….anika comes to his room and see him sleeping with out the pillow….she makes him sleep in postion…as she does he turns and sleeps to wards. Her….anika see him…and heart beat raises…she caresses his hair ….. she sense the way she is melting towards him…she runs outside…….
night
anika house
pranesh: what ur decision anika
anika: about what
pranesh: u knew what i am taking about…so dont do any drama, plz come out of ur ego and accept shivay….he his good at heart…and he needs u in his life
anika: ya he needs me to make his guilt right…not for love….wo apni galthi sutharna chathi hai thats all he didnt love me…..

pranesh: are u mad to say like this…u saw what did he was today….wo pyar kartha hai thume….ok anika its ur life and ur decision…so pls take some time to decide…but decision should be positive …i am leaving……
anika thinks about all the happening….and says kya wo sach mein muje pyar……as she says she takes out her mangal sutra….and see…..and smile….mm …..she sleeps holding it………
its morning
anika wears the mangal surtra……and sees herself in the mirror …..sahil comments on her attire…and anika stares at him…..
anika comes to the villa and see s the bag out side…… she goes inside………and stands still seeing shivay

tia was holding shivay hand and while shivay was seeing anika………anika sees them….tia turns to see anika….
tia comes and thanks anika for helping shivay…yesterday
tia: actually i couldnt stay at home hearing this news so i came….she holds shivay now and then….
she ask shivay to have his breakfast as its getting late for departure…..anika looks on….

she asks anika about her presence and anika says she just came to see him…..she pats anika…and as she turns she purposefully hits the envelope and it falls down…
tia takes it and says: anika actually i forgot to thank u for what u did to me…..so here is our shaddi ka card…
anika startled hearing shaddi…
tia: a shaddi , actually i am waiting for date…but i hope by next month we will be having our d day…anyway i selected 3 template….and how is this….
shivay see anika…anika too see shivay and anika says ever thing is beautiful…as she says she closes her mangal sutra with duppata…….shivay notices this……..
anika : ok take care i am leaving……she turns to leave giving a plain look towards shivay…..

tia calls and ask shivay to give some thing…shivay hesitates and tia gets it from his hand and gives …here is ur papers…..and shivay baby sighned it …..anika sees the affidavit of divorce…and looks shivay.
Anika holds the paper tightly and leave the villa with plain look…..as she rides her bike ….tears roll on and reaches her home…she shuts the door and starts crying …….
After a while…..
Anika starts packing things….
Pranesh comes and see her… he gets worried seeing anika in this condition…he call to the villa and learns that shivay and tia left to Mumbai……
Pranesh tries to console anika but she became much reluctant to accept…..
Next 1 week…she makes arrange ment for sahils school and she leaves to the delhi regarding the new assignment given to her…..
Delhi
She gets up she the photo…. i accept that i can not move on in my life….i cannot accept any one else……and i am not fit enought to accept any other failure…. i am happy that u are moving and ur are getting ur love back…..i am happy for u billuji…….aur mein apke samne kabhi nahi avungi……
She prepares every thing and starts the presentation ….delegates like the idea and approve it .

She greets every one… manager comes and says ur proposal is waiting for the final approval and our new chairman is on the way….he will be seeing it tomo and all the best ….
She sits in her room and talks to sahil…she says about the work…..pranesh ask about her health…she says she is ok…..
Anika comes out and see the time its past 8.
She goes to takes the dinner in the lawn….she sees some party over there…..waiter says its welcome party for the new chair man…..she sees everyone enjoying…..and turns…..

She stops by hearing the voice….its billujis….wo yaha kya…..
Shivay greets every one and says he will introduce ur new ceo tomo…and she will be taking care of this hospitality industry from tomo…..she tries to see him…she sees a girl standing next to him…and find it to be tia…but she did nt see her face…
She ask about the new ceo….the manager says mostly it might be his wife / girl friend…as it is rumoured in that way…he also says the chairman is quite brilliant in positioning the persons…..she says yes he is quite smart….she leaves…..
Its morning
She gets ready
A waitress come and give the packet and a note…..
She sees a sari and note….

“ u are asked to wear this as its the dress code here esp..before the chairman
And ur time is 10.05
-ceo”
She sees the sari…..and remembers of the similar sari which dadi gave her to the party……
Anika: i think my whole destiny is back firing on me by name of shivay and tia…i dont know how am i going to face them…but i dont have any other choice left over…..so anika..be cautious….jithna jaldi ho sake finish kar….and just leave this place…..u know u cant face billuji for more time……
She takes the deep breath and wears the costume given by the waitres….subconciously she wears the kangan also….
She sees the time its past 9:55
She opens the door, and comes out with the folder and labtop….she walks towards the conference room….
its 10:00
secretary ask her to sit inside as sir will be there at 10:05…she enters to see every one already assembled…she sits in the assigned place and see that shivay place is just opposite in that rectangular table….she see every one and swallows….door opens…
shivay enter the room with secretary….every one greets and he doesn’t look at anika…she sees for tia to enter but she didnt find her…..
anika all the way taking breaths and see him…he is quite usual and is concentrated in meeting…..
anika looking at the file , as shivay gets up and walks around…..she senses him coming near and doesn’t look at him…shivay near anika …. light gets switched off and power point presentation with the picture of new ceo is being showed…..
anika closes her eyes …..shviay says she is mrs shivay singh oberoi…….and every one clap and light s power on……
anika who was closing the eyes opens mildly …she gets shocked to see every one staring at her…and turns to see shivay standing next to her……
she sees her face in pp as new ceo….she turns to see shivay….before she could react….shivay holds anika over shoulder…and introduces her as anika shivay singh oberoi…..ur new ceo
he ends the meeting and moves to his room…..anika sees everyone greeting her and stands still….anika comes out the shock and goes to wards his room….
she opens and sees/stares him
shivay: kya hua…
anika: what happening here….
shivay:jo thumne deka …wahi hua….and smile…
anika: y are u keep on playing with my feeling…..as she says shivay locks the door and hugs her from behind…..anika shouts leave me…..i am not ur play toy…..leave
shivay: thume chodne keliye hei sab mein nahi kiya…..aur thume kya laga…u will run and i will stay away from u…..
anika: app tho tia se shadi karne wali thi….card be set hogaya…..
shivay: did i say that……

anika: wo tia ne
shivay: then ask tia …y are u asking me….
anika comes out of his cluctes and says…wo divorce papers….
shivay: wo thum ne ready kiya mein nahi…actually na …bagwaan thuje akkal kam diya hai…thats y this much confusion….
anika: are u calling me fool…
shivay turns anika and pulls her close…he sidelines the hair in her face..mmm….i asked u to come with me …u threw divorce papers…and next day u came …but left as tia showed the marriage cards….cant u just ask me about the issue….u decided and u left……
anika: u were silent

shivay: from the day u left oberoi mansion …i searched u and found u were in bopal….but dadi wanted me to stay away from u……u know i even dont know when u became my life……everyday i get up with a hope that u will return by urself …..,,it was pain full…..which neither can i share nor digest …..i want u to be happy so i didnt come to meet u……when i saw u in my villa … i lost my control..and all this happened….but u didnt realise any thing….so u are the fool….
anika who was holding him tightly till now reminces of his guilt and moves away……
anika: i knew that u are just want ed to correct ur fault….appni galthi sutharna chati ho….

shivay takes her again with in his arms again …now bit more closer……
shivay: konsi galthi…mein tho galthi ki hi nahi…..mein sirf shaddi kiya…..divorce papers mein dho baar thu ne sigh kiya…mein nahi.. who left the house with out the word…its u….i came searching u….i did only one fault …mein thume pyar kiya …..shivay smirks looking at her…
anika stares him…he ask y are u staring……
anika smiles at him…kya sach mein app mujse……
shivay : tujse….
anika….mujse….ok y u signed the papers …and tia with cards……she keeps on saying this that…..
shivay shouts chup jo ja……kita saval karogi……now i understand what fault did i do….i should have kidnapped u…i waited for u …and u are shouting at me…..
anika: wat am i shouting….u did all the things and u are scolding me….u think oberoi can do any thing …no they cant do anything..they are brainless..
shivay: me brainless

anika and shivay starts fighting……
Rudra and om comes out of the another room and shouts stop…..
Shivika turns to see them…..
Omru: we thought u both are joining after a long t
ime so thoda romance dekne kno melaga…par thum dono hamesha jagdthe rehathe ho…..
Leave the way we are leaving….after which u both can start fighting again…..
Shivika see them….
AND GUYS I THINK WE SHOULD ALSO LEAVE THEM ALONE AS THEY ARE GONNA CONTINUE THIER FIGHT……
Its been 7 months…
Anika: its jr billu…
Shivay: no jr anika….
Anika: no jr billu…..
Shivay makes her sit and says….jr anika ayega aur muje support karega,…..dekna… wo thume datege….

Anika: mein ne kaha na jr billu…..and he will take ur place……
They both see eachother….with a load of hatred , anger, and love……..
Hope u guys enjoyed pehali nazer……thanks for commenting….and supporting….. i hope u like this….and plz do comment……….and give ur suggestion regarding my story…….actually i feel i am bit monotonous so plz suggest my mistakes which i do while i am presenting…..
Thanks for reading
Samukta……

23 comments

  1. Tulasi

    |Registered Member

    Awww samukta…..thts such a sweet ending…….very nyc…….i luvd d surprise ……shivay introducng her as ceo..as mrs.sso……suprbbbb……happy diwali dear….😍😍

  2. Vaishali BBZ

    Samukta it was wonderful, I have read both the ff’s which u have written on ishqbaaz and I want to read more ff’s on shivika by u.. Pls write an another ff.. Eagerly waiting for ur next ff..
    Lots of love to you.. 😊😊

  3. Sat

    |Registered Member

    Samyukta dear, sorry for not commenting all these. Jut didn’t get time to do so
    Please forgive me if you can
    Really your storyline is quite different and you have portrayed it very well within 7 episodes,
    Your ff really thrilled me, i read all which I didn’t read just now, Really you are worth appreciating
    You are a great story writer, just in love with your story
    The starting was perfect and the story progressed so well
    Really I loved all the scenes
    Today I liked the scene annika wearing mangal sutra and coming before and he observe her. That was so emotional😭😭
    And that scene when shivaay hugs annika and annika melts towards him was simply superb
    And when shivaay announces the new CEO of the branch as his Mrs annika shivaay Singh oberoi was the best scene if the day😘😘😘
    And finally their romance at last, I don’t have words to express Yar. Just loved it to the core😍😍😍
    And ha, that o tu scene was quite funny😂😂😂
    And finally shivika cute fight over their upcoming should was mind blowing😂😂😂
    Over all I am really awestruck a wrong your writing skills.
    Hope you come up with another ff or an is.
    Please just waiting for your literary art
    And please forgive me for the late and long comment😃😃😃

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