Pave your way to love : (DEVAKSHI AND SHRAMAN) Chapter 1

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Lets start..

Scene 1:
A guy is shown sitting on a sofa. He is reading something. A cup of coffee is placed on the side table. He turns the pages of magazine and nods… “Hmmm….India has improved a lot in terms of business, so many new faces….” says he. Suddenly a knock is heard at the door… “shravan baba…apki coffee…”
“thanks kaka…” smiles our shravan….
“how much more will u drink??” said the servant
Shravan smiles and says… “its the last one…”
(so here we are…with our first character, shravan malholtra….he had returned from London just few days ago. Well he has no intentions of staying in India, bt he has come here to meet his family…specially his father..Ramnath Malhotra…)
Shravan reads the business magazine with a great zeal nd zest until his eyes locates a picture on it. The face of the person was very familiar and shravan couldn’t remember where he had seen him. He looks for his name. Then right at the corner was an article about the person with his name printed in bold “DEV DIXIT”. Shravan thinks….

FLASH BACK:
Two boys are standing in front of Big Ben. One of them says… “ finally the day has arrived when I have to leave…” “so what…” says the other…
“shravan…i came here just for my degree..bt I never thought I would get a friend like u…”
“dev meri zindagi mein..friendship ek aisi chiz hain..jiski jaga meine sabko nehi di..jisko diya tha usne to mujhe dhoka diya…bt I knw u r diff..nd I knw our frndshp is diff…it will last forever..”
“hope so..see u soon…as a great lawyer..”
“even i will be waiting to see my friend’s name on top list of Indian business men…”
Flash back ends
Shravan smiles remembering this….

Shravan’s P.O.V.
Dev dixit ….my old friend, i have been so eager to meet u since last few years…u have evolved so much…everybody didn’t give me the same position as u gave me as ur friend…I ll surely meet u…I didn’t expect that London se wapis an eke baad mujhe itana bada surprise milega..bt its good…
Scene shifts to suman’s room…
Sumo’s P.O.V: (she was standing in front of the window)
Maa…papa is duniya mein ap dono ke baad ek nanau hi hain..jo mujhe samajhte hain….par aapki beti ne kisiko samajh ne mein Galati kar di…. i have been regretting for this since last 10 years…bt couldn’t do anything. Shravan…I knw u are angry..nd its quite natural…bt i promise I will pacify u…we will surely become frnds again….plzzzz plzzz plzzz bhagwabji…shravan ka gussa kam karne mein meri madat kijiyega….bt what to do now…us khadoos se toh baat nehi kar sakti….idea!! pushu….yes i will call pushkar!!
She calls pushkar…
Push: arey wah..sumo rani ka call..wah!! wah!!
Sumo: shut up!! Meri baat suno….
Push: yes madam…
Sumo: shravan aas pass hain kya??
Push: oho….toh aapko unki pari hain..mein bhi..bewakoof..yeh samajh baitha kit u mujhe call kar rhi hain..
Sumo: yaar pushkar..pakao mat…i wanna know how is his mood…did he say smthing??
Push: yup..bohut kuch…
Sumo: (excited) kya??
Push: not about u but…
Sumo: oooo duffer..
Push: relax sumo..if something happens I will tell u..bt u tell me one thing..won’t u meet bhaiya??
Sumo: yeah…. I will…but
Push: what but ?? u have to face him….
“chhotey….chhotey….”
Push: achha sun..bhaiya is calling..ttyl…bye..
Sumo: sun to…b-y-e-e
Sumo sits down quietly….

NEXT MORNING:
A huge building is shown….
Inside several people are working…. a pretty, slim , tall nd absolutely beautiful girl…walks up to a cabin…
“ahhh tina..Mr. obo…i mean Mr. Dixit is here??” says she.
The lady sitting on the cabin replies: “oh..Dr. Bose…I was waiting for u…here are the reports..”
The girl is revealed to be sona…
Sona: oh thanks..bt i need to talk to Mr. Dixit..
Tina: sorry ..sir is busy in a meeting….
Sona: okay … (she is interrupted by a call )
Tina: one min..dr. bose..hello..yeah..umm okay..send him……sorry..aap kuch keh rehi thi..??
Sona: yeah I said I will wait…
Tina: okay…
Sona sits on the sofa…suddenly a man enters the cabin..he was tall, handsome and charming..just like a prince…yeah it was shravan..
Tina: yes sir….
Shr: hi..myself shravan malhotra….mein mr dixit ka purana fnd hu..actually unke office ka address mila so …
Tina: okay sir…bt sir toh meeting mein hain so u….have to wait..
Shr: okay…sure..
He goes nd sits beside sona…
Sona looks at him..she murmurs.. “mr. Obhodro ka frnd?? Unse kaun dosti kar na chahe ga??”
Shr: sorry?? Did u say something??
Sona: ummm no…
Shr: bt I heard something….
Sona: may be aap k kaan baj rhe hain..
Shr: hmm kaan baj sakte hain..par ankhein dhoka nehi de sakti…
Sona: excuse me??
Shr: m a lawyer and i can make out by looking at faces that who is lying nd who isn’t….
Sona gets tensed…
Shr: relax..just kidding…btw m shravan malhotra. Dev dixit’s old friend…
Sona: okay..m sonakshi bose, mein mr. Dixit ki mom ki nutritionist hu…
Shr: oh i see…bengali??
Sona: yeah…
Shr: toh miss sonakshi..whats the meaning the OBHODRO??
Sona: toh aapne suna??
He smiles…

Sona gives her common dialogue “sona tumi akta boka….”
Shr: again Bengali??
Sona: sorry..m such a stupid i mean…actually obhodro means rude…un mannered..!! mr. Dixit is very ill mannered….oh god how to explain…i was wondering how u became his frnd…??
Shr: really dev aur rude?? I don’t believe this….
Sona stands up…she began showing actions… “ yeah..do u think m lying?? He is very very rude…ekdom khadoos….(see look at shravan) kya hua..
Shravan signs…sona turns back to see dev standing..
SCREEN FREEZES

PRECAP: devakshi cute nok jhok…shraman meeting after 10 years

How was it guys??
I hope u liked it..feel free to xpress ur views…nd plzz comment…love u all thank u nd stay blessed..

Credit to: tara

21 comments

  1. Shatakshi

    Hey Tara I m Shatakshi from tei page…n yeah ur ff was osum as always…. Plzzz update next asap…??

  2. oh so u r d same tara nice to read ur new ff also
    actually i like ur ff vm so ……..
    ur episode was good carryyyy on .

    • actually i like ur ff of tei also infact i like all d tei ff but bcoz of laziness i dint reply
      * it doesnt appear on my cmnt..

      • tara

        that’s really a pleasure for me…I feel very special when I read comments like this…thank u so much..

  3. Sandy

    When are you going to post the next chapter Tara?
    Ur ff is really good. U know I was reading another ff n it started making no sense after 4-5 episodes. U have taken a lot of effort to explain everything, n it’s not only making sense but is interesting too! Plz post more often.

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