Paths nishan ek pathiaar 7th October 2016 update

This is a new beginning of mine,I have written many fan fictions one shots shot stories and so on…so I thought of writing a tely serial……

Its completely different from the other serials which launched in all channels….the main plot that we find is regarding usual saas bahu drama,revenge,and so on…so let’s think about a new serial which leads with a struggle of a girl who is bounded to make each ends……

She is not a super woman or super girl unlike other serial artists…she is just a simple traditional girl…..her struggles started when her father passed away leaving her with all responsibility of her family which includes Dada dadi dida maa brothers sisters and all…..

She is working as a copyrighter on BIRDSONG…..once her time in office is over..she drives auto rickshaw(@night)…she don’t let her family to have burden….. Even though she loves modern lives..she prefers to be simple…

The story gets a twist when 2 man enters in her life…..

The story then further deals with this all……

And I promise I will never make u mood off……

And one more thing is that,

Plz suggest me some actors actress for this all….

Characters:

Shivani\deepali(choose one):central character…… Age 21…..she is simple and humble…she easily trusts others…..that’s only her weakness…she can do anything for her loved once….if anyone asked her help,even though she
didn’t have money,she will surely help them somehow…..

Arjun\ritik\ranveer:main lead…successfull businessman bit arrogant…..BT knows how to deal with all kind of people……age:28

Karan\sahil\sidharth\chavan:parallel lead..age(25)an architect by profession…

Supporting cast

Ap/sujatha/vasundara:mother of main lead….(male)

Dp\lal prasad\rajith:father of main lead(male)

Ranjana\rivani\lancha:mother of parallel lead(male)

Kamal\ankhush\raj:father of parallel lead(male)

Dhamini\shobha\sumi\tejaswi:mother of central character

Rest:

Kavitha,kavya pari:sisters of main lead(female)

Swarag,ayush:brother of main lead(female)

So I hope u guys will surely help me out…..

So keep smiling always my dears……

This is ur salluzz signing out….

Episode 1

Scene :1

A narration sound is heard

Gods own country:KERELA
(BG is shown with all beautiful places in kerela)BT still some are under the hands of evil(shows some slums,wastes dumping on road)when everyone goes on praising this state as gods own country,were is he????

Another one:he is still here only, bt not with high class people BT with his devotees…..he loves to test his devotees unlike others who just want god for their own benefits…..

Narration1:is there anyone who can ask for others benefits..no never, no one will think of others even though its their family members…they all are busy with their own works….when anything happenes to anyone,rest don’t even look at them,how many people have died like that…..just because of being late to take to hospital..

Narration:its all as gods will….one day u will gets to know about true devotions my child…..

The narration is being held at dev lokh….Indra is narrating this to his wife indrani and their child……

Scene 2

A girl of age 17 is seen walking just like a lifeless body….her beautiful eyes are seen,which is like neela paani of samandar….but the shines have left from her eyes..now its just a object to see others…..there were no tears left on her eyes….

She is going forward and reaches a cliff…..

Her back is facing us….

Her long hairs which is scattered over her face….

(Dress she wore)

She closes her eyes….

Flashback is seen

A big haveli which is filled with lights(laksham deepam samarpanam)

A song is played at background

(Karthika raavin )

Many children are running over corridors…..

A man of 50 comes there

A Lady too comes

Lady:why are u doing this all….its not good to spent money like this..one we will suffer a lot of loss..

Man:nothing will happen to me…lord kubera is with me..I have my children with me….I have already thought a lot about my child’s future…….

Lady:I m really scared…..

Man gets a call

Man:hello…what????

He holds his chest and falls down….

All comes running….

In hospital

Dr:it was an attack….we have less time……

All are shocked

Man:take care of my child….she will…

He couldn’t say further as his soul moves away with lord yama……

Lady calls someone

Lady(with trembling voice)moleee(beta)

Girl:maa….ntha patiye(what happened)

Lady:baba….WO…

Girl:maa….either speak in malayalam or Hindi….me and baba have already warned u naa

(Only voice)

Lady by gathering some courage

Lady:achchan eni varilla (father won’t come)

Girl:kyun…where is he

Lady:with lord yama

Girl phone falls down

Girl takes it back

Girl:maa…wh…what d..did u..ssay…

Lady breaks down into crying…..

Lady:come home beta…..

Girl:babaaaaaaaa

Flashback ends

She is still screaming…

As its a cliff echo is heard…..

She cries

FLASHBACK

After somedays

Girl gives away all the properties except that haveli to the people who was cheated by her father(it will be revealed later)

Girl:maa….just this haveli more..nothing else Is left with us

Lady stands silent…..

Dada:beta….we can’t sell this haveli…its of ur fathers dream to see all his family under one roof

Girl:whatever situation comes..I will never sell this haveli…

Dadi:where will we get rest of the money…..its over 5 lakhs…..

Girl:I have some money left in my account….I will take that…..

Dada:what will we do after that

Girl:I don’t knw Dada…I’m feeling very weak

Dada:what will we do after that

Girl:I don’t knw Dada…I’m feeling very weak

Dadi:u should not feel weak…..u r the only one who can fulfill ur fathers wish

Girl nodes……

Girl:maa…at least talk with us…don’t keep silence maa……..

She falls down and cries

Dadi:Betaaaa

The time they hear noice from outside

Girl rushes there’s

Man:ur father have done a business with mee too..now its at loss..so I need my money back…..

Girl:sir..plz give us some time…I promise I will give ur money without a single penny less

Men:I will give u 24 hours…by that time I need 10 lakh rupees else I will take u with me

The family stood shocked

He leaves……

Girl falls as thud

Dadi:its better to die other than hearing all these….when ur father was alive,no one dared to speak a word against him.. BT now see

Girl:we are at fault dadi….I will pay him money…. I will come

She leaves……

She goes to bank

Manager:ur money is safe with us…BT it needs 1 week time….

Girl:can u give some money as advance

Manager:sorry…for that ur father should come here

Girl:he is no more…plz

Manager:then bring death certificate

Girl:sir plz…

Manager:we don’t KNW whether u r his daughter or not…so come with all papers next time…

The girl helplessly moves out…

FLASHBACK ENDS

A lady comes in heavy cost car…she probably comes for sight seeing…

She sees her……

Businesswomen: is she trying to do suicide..oh god…she looks young at age..what may led her to do suicide….may be some affair..she might be cheated by anyone…..eh bagwan,what all these…….its better to stay in Kolkata only…. So that I don’t want to see all these…..

Driver:madom,save her naa…

Businesswoman: how can I

Driver:u both are women…so she may tell her problem….u r a NGO owner also naa

Businesswomen: ohh…I will see

The women walks towards the cliff…….

Women:betaaaaa…….

The girl turns back…..

Precap:the women gives her money and ask her to face the world instead of being coward…4 years leap……

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