Path of love (ek adhuri daastan) TWINJ OS BY LOVER.


Hii guys. kaise ho? Thik hai naa.

Miss kiya mujhe ??

Maine bhi bahut kiya…

Hum Agar Aapse Mil Nahi Paaye,
To Esha Nahin Ki Aap Humein Yaad Nahin Aaye,
Mana Ki Jahaan Ke Sab Rishtey Nibahaye Nahin Jaate,
Par Jo Bas Jate Hai Dil Mein Wo Bhulaye Nahin Jaate….

I missed you all….

A big villa is shown in which there is lots of people ,guests are seen entering from the gate having gift in their hands.

(I guess yaha party ho rahi hai aur humein nhi bulaya. So bad. But koi nahi hum to binn bulaye bhi aa jate hai jaise abhi aaye.??)

Next scene,

A chocolate flavour barbie cake is placed in the centre of the hall and peoples were standing as a circle around the cake. And impatiently waiting for someone. Just then a cutteee little girl of wearing a white colour barbie frock enters. She is looking like an angel i.e. the most beautiful angel.

As she enters everyone eyes automatically starts went towards her. And she smiled to them in return.

When someone call her…
SO: Princess , come here let’s cut the cake. Everyone is waiting for you only.
Angel: Yes papa I am coming.

Girl went to her Papa and they went towards the cake.

Girl blows the candle, makes a wish then cuts the cake and feed it to everyone of her family. While everyone screams happy birthday to you Twinkle…

(Guys the girl is Twinkle who is celebrating her party without us. So bad.)

After cake cutting ceremony guests start to come towards her to wish or gift her.

She is taking their blessings so happily. When her dad makes her meet to his friend and his son.

Boy: Happy birthday Twinkle Twinkle little star…
Twi: Thank you mmm… Wait I don’t know your name???.
Boy: Sorry I forget to introduce I am Kunj.

As he said this her father calls her and she went to her. While Kunj also went to his father.

And Kunj tells him that he forget to gift her. His father replied its OK.

And they both left from there….

Days passed by and now its 15 years .

In these fifteen years everything has changed Rt and manohar had become each other rival. Now they both don’t even look at each other. Both Twinkle and Kunj have grown up.

But one thing that hasn’t change is twinkle and kunj till now they haven’t conversed with each other that too when they both are in same college. They don’t talk with each other till now. Even they both want it to happen but both are not ready for first talk from their side.

Both of them don’t know anything about their father’s rivalry till now.

Everyone is busy in doing arrangements for the annual fest but our silent love birds are engrossed in their own thoughts. They were least interested in their works as they both are busy in taking each other glance but making sure that anyone don’t get to know about it. They were smiling in their own thoughts. The love they shared for each other is clearly seen their eyes. Its not new they daily used to do the same.

Annual Fest

The hall is decorated beautifully with white and reb balloons , dim lights of blue-green-yellow-red-purple colours were hanged. Everything is going on perfect.

Many dance and programs happen. People are seen enjoying it. Now host announces,

“The last and most awaited performance of the evening.”

Lights go off and a light reflects a man at centre of stage. He starts to sing,

nai jeena,
tere baajo
nai jeena,
nai jeena
nai jeena tere baajo
nai jeena,
nai jeena

mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji……..

tu ki jaane pyar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji

(Now the man is revealed and he is none other than Kunj.)

Haey tu ki jaane pyar mera
mein karaan intezar tera….

tu dil tu yun jaan meri
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji

(Twinkle is standing just in front of stage. She looked at him and they both share an eyelock for the first time while he continues.)

mere dil vich re ke mere
dil da haal na jaane
tere baajo kaleyan be ke
ronde nain numane….

jeena mera Haaye
marna mera naal tere si
kar aetibar mera…..

mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji……

And he stops singing and…….

Kunj: Guys today I want to say some lines in front of you all I hope you will like it..

“Yun to khamosh rehte hai aankhen,

Agar padh sako to bahut kuch kehti hai aankhen,

Lekin Kaise kahu kya kehti hai aankhen,

Sayad dil ki baaton ko baayan karti hai aankhen…”

Thank you. Twinkle is just smiling after listening to Kunj words.

At night same day,

Kunj is doing his work when his phone rings. He received the call and said hello but no response is coming from other side. He smiled because of this. When his phone ring twice and this time he is not speaking anything.

Caller: Hello, Kunj are you there?
Kunj: no response.
Caller: Hello Hello……..
Kunj: Yaa Twi….nk…..le…..

But this time their talk get abrupt due to network problem.

After sometime Kunj phone beep.

Messenger: hii Kunj.

Kunj: hello.

Messenger: Twinkle here.

Kunj: ?.

Twinkle: you really sings so well and your shary really touched my heart.

Kunj: Thank you and I have to say that you’re good at giving compliments.

Twinkle: We knew each other since childhood but we never talk.

Kunj: My Bad luck.

Twinkle: So…

Kunj: don’t be formal tell directly what you want.

Twinkle: Can we meet?

Kunj: Ok . Tomorrow at 5:00 pm.

Twinkle: ?.Bye.

Kunj: Bye.

Next morning,

Twinkle and Kunj both wakes thinking about each other having a 440 volt smile on their face.

They both went to get read ready in their own room respectively.

Sometime later Rt called Twinkle and Manohar called Kunj immediately at their respective office.

They reached there. And Rt and Manohar both ask them to sit.

I want to tell you one thing from many days. You remember that girl/boy whom you meets in birthday party some years back.

K & T: yes Dad. Kunj/Twinkle right?

Mano & Rt : Haa whatever his/her name I don’t care. I called you here to tell you that you have to make her/him to fall in love with you to fulfill my revenge from that cheap RT/Manohar.
We don’t have any tie with them but I want you to do this. Only then my promise which I made to my self will became true. I will destroy their life fully.

T & K: But Dad love can neither be created nor be destroyed. Please forget about all this as it provide us nothing except pain.

Rt and Manohar: Stop giving your lectures and don’t try to do anything except my knowledge. Otherwise I will kill them.

Twinkle & Kunj: Ok. I promise I will the side of truth.
Both Self talk: I promise I will not let anyone to hurt you Kunj / Twinkle. I will tell you everything tonight.

Next scene,

They both get ready and have mixed feelings happy and sad. They leave in their car.

They both reached their at same time. Suddenly it starts to rain. They both were moving towards each other looking into each other eyes.

They were just few more foots away from each other when a car coming on that way ,losses its balance. And……
Both Twinkle and Kunj met with accident and they both have fall in the ground.

They were in immense pain but they know its only the way to live together. As world never understand their love.

Twinkle: Ku….nj…… I l…love y….you..

Kunj: I lo….ve you too…. Twi…..nk…le…

They both hold each other hand and take their last breathe.

Next scene,

Two angels are shown in heaven having their hands in hands. Both are looking so cutteee together.

T&K : No matter what but we are together at last.
And they both smile.


Every story has a beginning……
But some stories never have their end… !!!

Guys some love stories are beyond life and death. They are immortal. This type of love stories are found in infinity. There are many who can live together but so less to die together.

So guys do tell do you like the story? I am sorry to waste your time as I know its not up to your expectations.

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  1. Mishaseher

    you know what?it was from the song chal wahan gaty hain,right?yes because it is all the same story and it was really ausome
    i was just imaginning twinj
    love it

    1. Haa some parts not all. Thank you for liking it.

  2. Sameera

    Awww lover bilkul b miss nai kiya tumhe
    In fact bhtt zyada miss kiya
    Wow when I read the title i was seriously so happy
    Story was amzing yaar ….it’s like chal waha jaate hai ????
    Loved it throughout
    Shayari yaar amzing marvelous??
    So sad twinj ???
    Do write more like this yaar ??

    1. Thank you so much dii and love you. And you write much better than me though I don’t comment but I read it all.

  3. Sad ending ??????????????????????❤?????

    1. Every story can’t have a happy ending dear. Thank you.

  4. Zuha Fatima

    Beautiful and heart-touching Love Story! I agree with ur thoughts that when love is true then even death cant seperate 2 lovers ?

    Stay blessed…
    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂


    1. Thank you and love you.

  5. it is the same story of aasman ke paare but the song is changed nicely written

    1. Thank you dear but I don’t know what are you telling?? Aasman ke paare.

  6. Chiku

    Meri lover aagayi wapaaaaassss yeheeheeeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?????????????????????????
    Missed u honey.
    I am happy u posted an os.
    It’s awesome.
    Its ssooo heart touching.
    Loved it
    Kitna cute likhti hai
    Lovueeeeeeeeee uuuuuu lover?❤️❤️

    1. Thank you dear I am glad you like it and main gayi kab thi? Saare ffs padhe hai Maine including yours.

  7. SidMin

    Loved it you said it right some stories are beyond death they are immortal No one can destroy them
    Loved the OS Lover
    Love you 🙂

    1. Thank you dear and love you too.

  8. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Lover Yaar main toh tumhari lover ban chuki hun …..I mean yaar kya khaati hai ..mujhe bhi batade ……itne secrets bhi mat rakh….
    Loved it the message u convay was really very true …..
    Twinj relation is actually immortal ……
    Tumhe pataa haina ………………………………………………
    Kya nahi pataa
    Yahi ki Tumne mera dil churaa liya hai …hmmmm…..
    Loved it to the core …..

    1. Thank you and sonch rahi hu aaj bata hi deti hun ki mein kya khatti hu actually naa mein
      Sab ka pyara sa comment khatti hun waise aab mujhe apna jyada dhyan rakhna hoga pucho kyo?
      Wo actually tumhara dil hamare pass hai so i have to take care of it. Right? Bye

  9. nice and cute

    1. Thank you.

  10. Baby

    lover ki bacchi …………
    haan haan sry sry
    bt mein kun sry bolu
    isse tu bura kheti hai
    yr i luvd it 2 d infinity
    haan sad ending thi emotional thi par bhot pyaari thi bilkul teri tra
    or teri shayris i jst m in luv wid dem
    muje truly kbhi sharyis psnd nhi thi bt jbse
    mein tujse milun hn naa bhen i srsly luv dem
    u r amazing n very cute
    luv u

    1. Thank you so much. Love you.

  11. Amazing yaar!! U guys make me feel soo good!! Thank u

    1. Thank you dear.

  12. Awesome os.. really loved it.. keep writing more 🙂 🙂

    1. Thank you so much.

  13. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing emotional sad os….loved it

    1. Thank you dear.

  14. Ranabulbul

    Yr lover
    Ops sorry survi
    Koi itna rulata hai kya han
    Itna emotional tha and the best part was that it has pinch of Chal wha jate hain
    But u r truely a amazing writer with great shairi

    1. Thank you so much dear. Your comment really meant a lot. Love you.

  15. lover…u r back in bang wid ur os…
    it is true tht true love is immortal…loved it n ur shayari are always best 2 read…love u…

    1. Thank you so much dear. Love you too.

  16. Kritika14

    i missed you so much x so happy to see you back 🙂 the os, was just so good, i loved it! keep writing more.

    1. Thank you so much dear. Love you.

  17. Kruti

    Bola tha na sabko pasand aayega……kahamakha keh rahi thi sad hai kisi ko accha nahi lagega and blah blah blah

    Maine toh pehle hi keh diya amazing hai
    I so loved it

    Love u ??

    1. Thank you so much dear. Love you.

  18. nice story
    rivalry is only on the earth not in the heaven

    1. Thank you.

  19. Shruthis

    awww awesome :*

    1. Thank you dii.

  20. Awesome….:*:*:*:*:*

    1. Thank you.

  21. Ria

    Lover, it was amazing.

    1. Thank you ria

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