THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 6 – RUDRA’s PAST

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Precap : Rudra’s fight with Soumya revealed……Om was remembering his past and he came out of thoughts when he heard a scream in Oberoi mansion………

—————IN SHILLONG, MEGHALAYA

Shivaay was all alone in his room, closing his eyes and with one hand on his forehead closing part of his eyes……he went back to that day when he and Anika consummated their marriage in Jungle….
They woke up the next morning and realised what has happened…they couldn’t face each other for a while but composed themselves….
Shivaay ‘’ Anika…’’
Anika ‘’ha..yea..yes…Shivaay’’
Shivaay ‘’what happened? Are you embarrassed for what had happened yesterday night?’’
Anika ‘’no..not at all….hy…why would I get embarrassed? Nothing like that’’
Shivaay ‘’so you enjoyed’’
Anika was blushing ‘’Stop it Shivaay…I am feeling shy’’
Shivaay ‘’but I enjoyed very much…’’ he pulled her close ‘’thank you….yesterday’s night was the most memorable night for me’’
Anika ‘’for me too…but I wouldn’t thank you…because now by every means we are husband and wife…and someone said there should be no thank you’s and sorry’s between husband and wife’’.
Shivaay locked his lips again with Anika’s and after their intense liplock
Shivaay ‘’I think we should…we should ‘’
Anika looked at him
Shivaay ‘’we should go back home…everyone must be worried’’
Anika nodded her head in agreement……..They both held each others hands and started walking till they got lift and found Anika’s champa…Anika drove while Shivaay sat behind…finally they reached the Oberoi Mansion……

Pinky was eagerly waiting for them to arrive……she saw them coming …she smiled ……….
Pinky ‘’Shivaay where were you? And why are you looking tired? Didn’t you sleep yesterday night?’’
Anika held her head down feeling shy….
Shivaay ‘’mom..mom…please can we talk later…I have much more things to do now’’
Pinky ‘’Shivaay wait a moment…I have some surprise for you’’
Shivaay ‘’what surprise?’’
Pinky ‘’some Nayantara has come to meet you’’
Shivaay shockingly said ‘’what? Where is she?’’
Pinky ‘’in the hall…look there…there she is’’
Anika looked at Shivaay with a questioned face…shivaay looked at herin shock while Pinky smirked……..
Shivaay ‘’Anika you go inside and get freshened up…so go’’
Anika ‘’shivaay…please …it’s ok…I can bear any sort of truth…so let me stay here’’
Shivaay went towards Nayantara……..
Nayantara ‘’ohh …so you are Shivaay Singh Oberoi…you asked me to call you…but I came here’’
Shivaay ‘’yeah but you could have informed me you are coming here…by the way please sit down’’
Pinky ‘’shivaay who is she?’’
Shivaay ‘’mom…let me speak to her first…have patience’’
Nayantara ‘’but why did you want to meet me?’’
Shivaay ‘’what’s your profession…I mean I got to know you are a singer…you sing in temples right?’’
Nayantara smiled no infact she laughed
Nayantara ‘’do you all rich people speak like you donno anything or do you act…by any means do I look as a singer in temple’’
Shivaay then noticed her…….

Nayantara was a delicate looking lady …..she had this curly long hairs , she wore a sleeveless black blouse and her saree uncovered her navel…shivaay felt embrassed to look further
Shivaay ‘’I did not understand..what do you want to say’’
Nayantara ‘’first tell me why were you looking for me..you have such a beautiful wife so I don’t understand why do you want me’’
Shivaay ‘’excuse me…I was searching for you to make you meet your daughter Anika’’ he turned towards Anika and brought her to his side and said ‘’she …she is your daughter Anika…’’
Nayantara ‘’what ..she is my daughter…ohh okay…I have many more…some died some got killed in my womb …she might be one of them…….’’
Anika was into tears and Shivaay stood up from his seat…………by then all the Oberoi family members gathered ……….
Shivaay ‘’what are you saying? How can a mother not identify her daughter and say such words?’’
Nayantara ‘’what’s wrong in this? In my profession this is normal…I might have given birth to her and my madam would have taken her away…so I don’t or to say I can’t identify her’’
Shivaay ‘’in your profession? What do you mean by in your profession? What’s your profession?’’
Nayantara ‘’prostitution..i am a pr*stitute…I sing and dance in bar and after that I sleep…I think you understood’’
Shivaay ‘’enough …this can’t be true…there is definitely some…definitely some misunderstanding’’
By then Anika already collapsed in chair…….tears were unstoppable……she was silently but vigourously crying…….
Shivaay looked at Anika………
Shivaay ‘’Anika ..i am sure there is some big misunderstanding…this can’t be truth’’
Nayantara ‘’this can be the truth…I once became pregnant…not sure because of whom …I remember I delivered a baby too..but when I came into senses the baby wasn’t with me…I think..your wife may be..’’
Shivaay ‘’enough…not a word more’’
Pinky ‘’ohh my mata Shivaay…so this is Anika’s birth truth…I can’t believe this….i always said you…that this girl is not suitable to be your wife…she doesn’t come from a good family, she doesn’t know who her father is….she is a pr*stitute’s daughter and her mother even doesn’t know who her father is….and you are trying to say she is oberoi’s elder bahu……….’’
Shivaay had no answer……
Pinky ‘’even now if you fight with me I will throw her out of this house…she has a bad blood …she is illegitimate…a pr*stitute child is also a pr*stitute……who knows with whom all this girl has already slept before reaching you’’
Anika lost her patience by then…and after hearing the last words she sprang up from her seat and shouted
Anika ‘’enough aunty ji…enough’’
Everyone was shocked to see her as such
Anika ‘’I have heard enough and I stayed silent because I respect you as mother of Shivaay and as you are elder…..but that doesn’t mean you will point my character…I have not given anyone such right’’
Pinky ‘’what wrong did I say that you are shouting at me…you are a pr*stitute’s child and you are also the same’’
Anika ‘’no…’’ she shouted
Anika ‘’did you see me doing prostitution? You are alleging me right…fine …now I will ask you something..your son and I stay in the same room…so since he is with me is he sleeping with a pr*stitute too? Do you have answer’’
Pinky slapped Anika

Dadi ‘’pinky what are you doing? Is this the way to behave with the daughter-in-law of this house?’’
Pinky ‘’daughter-in-law…who this characterless illegitimate gal…even my fotware will not accept her…me accepting is very far’’
Om ‘’choti maa …you cannot allege like this’’
Rudra ‘’yes choti maa …there is definitely some big misunderstanding’’
Pinky ‘’I knew you will find fault with me…but I haven’t done anything…your Shivaay bhayya has only did this…I am just saying the truth again what we all have learnt just now…and this truth will never change’’
Om ‘’truth will never change but if it’s a lire it will not take much time to show it’s true colour’’
Pinky looked at him in shock…..
Rudra went to Shivaay and said ‘’bhayya please speak something…why are you not saying anything?’’
Anika touched her cheeks where pinky slapped her and turning towards Pinky
Anika smiled while tears flowing and said ‘’when it’s about your son you felt insulted but when it’s about me you think I will silently listen and accept whatever you say…I am clean…and I know that I am clean…I don’t have to prove that to you…I never wanted to know about my parents because they left me when I needed them…I fought my entire life and I can fight my remaining life…but if you point at my character I will not bear…I will also forget I am talking to my husband’s mother or an elder…it’s better you understand this as soon as possible’’
‘’ Anika’’ Shivaay screamed
Anika turned towards Shivaay and spoke
Anika ‘’Shivaay…now you might be happy…I always asked you that don’t dig my past as our future will be finished but you did not listen and today we both are standing at the edge of this relationship…I don’t know what your decision is but I have made up mind ‘’
Shivaay looked at her with frowned eyebrows
Anika ‘’before you ask me to leave you…I made up mind to leave you…till sometime before I thought I was the most luckiest wife to get a husband like you..but I regret that feeling…he who digs her wives past just to get her insulted can never be a good husband………never…this relationship has no meaning at all now…..’’
Pinky ‘’don’t blame my son for anything …he tried to know your parents to give you happiness of a family but he never expected that you would turn out to be like this’’
Shivaay ‘’mom…please…let me think…still I cant believe this is the truth’’
Pinky ‘’Shivaay you are my heera beta with golden heart…but at times your have to see the truth with eyes of a crystal…and whatever you heard now is the truth’’
Shivaay was heartbroken he could feel the pain of losing Anika and he couldn’t still believe that it is truth…he was not ready to agree this as truth and tfor the first time he prayed to God for himself to clear his confusion…….
That was when Pinky’s phone rang………Om saw the mobile ringing and picked up to give it to Pinky ….He saw the contact ‘’HOPE ORPHANAGE ‘’ from where the ring was coming…
Om got suspicious and picked the call
THE CALLER ‘’ Madam ji …I still need some more money to keep my mouth shut…otherwise I will let your son the GREAT SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI know that you asked me to say him about that pr*stitute Nayantara being Anika’s mother ..which you know is absolute lie….let me know when should I come….’’
He called Prinku and whispered in her ears to speak in the call as Pinky and ask the caller to reach Oberoi mansion in ten minutes…….Prinku did the same…….Om winked at Rudra…….Prinku too smirked…….
THE CALLER ‘’Sure madam..i will be in ten minutes…thank you…I didn’t expect you will agree so soon’’
Om asked Rudra towards him and explained him everything..Rudra was angry on Pinky…Om calmed him and asked to waste ten more minutes till the lady came there……
Rudra went towards Anika and said
Rudra ‘’bhabhi…how can you leave so easily…it’s okay…if you don’t know who your afther is but you can always conform if she is your mother or not’’
Anika looked at him surprisingly…Rudra smiled while Shivaay came to him and said
Shivaay ‘’Rudra what do you mean?’’
Om ‘’he means why don’t we get the DNA tests of Anika Bhabhi and Nayantara ji done? Everything will be clear…and if the DNA tests matches you both can decide or as choti maa said she can send Bhabhi away from this house’’
Pinky stumbled and said ‘’NO…why ? why do we need to confirm ..when this lady accepted Anika as her daughter…Shivaay you wouldn’t do any such thing’’
Shivaay ‘’mom, I think OmRu are right…I will also get releaved ‘’
Anika ‘’I don’t want any such thing…I have no more patience to bear this drama’’
Rudra ‘’bhabhi are you scared’’ he winked at her and signalled her to be calm
Shivaay ‘’Anika even I cannot trust this truth believe me…you have done so much for me…you beared so much for me…I know you are angry with me for what has happened but still I request you…please for the last time get this tests done…’’
Anika ‘’and if result matches what will you be going to do…tell me…what will you do…you will ask me to leave…and then I should leave…I don’t want to get this done Shivaay…please…let me go’’
Om ‘’Shivaay ..i will explain Bhabhi…trust me…I will explain her..’’saying this he took her to one corner and spilled her the truth…Anika was more shocked and couldn’t believe what Pinky did…she started feeling bad for Shivaay and felt guilty for speaking so rudely to him…..
Om ‘’Bhabhi you have to just act for somemore time…let the lady come..we will bring the truth out’’
Anika agreed

Anika ‘’Fine Shivaay…I am ready to get this test done..call the doctor…but what if the DNA doesn’t match…’’
Pinky ‘’how will it not match? ‘’
Rudra ‘’I will make sure choti maa…I will personally go with the doctor and wait in the hospital as long as the tests are done…everything before my eyes chotimaa so that no cheating is done’’
Shivaay ‘’yes Rudra…this is your responsibility’’
Pinky ‘’Shivaay Rudra is still a kid…let me do that job’’
Shakthi ‘’You will stay away from this…this is my son’s life and I cannot trust you’’
Pinky by then was scared to core..she signalled Nayantara to do something
Nayantara ‘’but why all these drama..send my daughter with me…I don’t need anything else…I will also try to start a new life with her…spend the time that I missed with her…’’
Anika ‘’maaji…let me also trust this fact that you are my mother…so if the result is positive I will be doing seva of you rest of my life…I am not ashamed of your profession…you earn your living by this…’’
Nayantara looked at her in disbelief when the manager of the Orphanage stepped in……
Pinky was shocked to see her………..
Shivaay ‘’why are you here at this time?’’ he asked surprisingly looking at the manager
Manager ‘’your mom called me’’
Shivaay ‘’my mom..but how do you know my mom?’’
Pinky ‘’actually woh…I called her to thank her for helping you identifying Anika’s mother’’
Shivaay ‘’but how did you know that she was the one who helped me’’
Pinky ‘’Shivaay why are you asking me so many questions? Are you suspecting me?’’
Shivaay ‘’no mom..but I need to know..this is important for me’’
Pinky ‘’woh…woh…’’
Om ‘’boliye choti maa…rukh kyun gaye’’
Rudra ‘’O why are you irritating choti maa let’s ask the guest ‘’ he made his intelligent wala sign
Shivaay ‘’why did my mom call you here? And don’t dare to lie…you donno to what level I can go to get the truth’’ he screamed at the manager
The manager ‘’sir woh…woh..’’
Shivaay ‘’come on speak out’’
The manager ‘’your mom has asked me to come here to give me money’’
Shakthi ‘’money? For what?’’
Pinky was sweating and was scared to core…she was just thinking as to how would Shivaay react after knowing the truth…..
The manager ‘’sir, because I did her work’’
Shivaay ‘’now tell me the whole truth before asking…else I will call the cops right here’’
The manager ‘’sir your mother asked me to call you and say that I investigated about your wife Anika and found about her mother…she also asked me to inform you that her mothers name is Nayantaraa and she resides in the Red-light region of Mumbai….i just did the same…..for doing so she gave me rs 20 lakhs…’’
Everyone in the oberoi mansion stood still as if they heard some unbelievable story….
Shivaay looked angrily at Pinky so did OmRu and Shakthi…….but before that dadi came forward and slapped Pinky
Dadi ‘’I never thought such a day will come where I will have to raise hand on you…I am now ashamed of calling you my daughter-in-law…you did many wrong things…I always forgave you…but this time you did an unforgivable mistake…you fell so low that I wish you were never the daughter-in-law of mine…shame on you’’
OmRu held Dadi and made her rest on the chair….
Shakthi ‘’what did you get by doing all this? What did you think will happen when all this will come out…shivaay will praise you …I will accept this…you are so shameless that you pointed at the character of a girl…you never thought that you were maligning her character infront of everyone…for once even I believed that Anika is that ladies daughter…imagine if someone has done the same with this house’s daughter…with Prinku..how would you feel? Do you have any answer ?’’ he shouted at Pinky……
Pinky bent her head and was crying
Om ‘’Sorry Choti maa but we had to do this…this manager she called to blackmail you for money…unfortunately instead of you I picked the call and got to know this truth…so with the help of Prinku I asked her to come here…we knew Shivaay would get doubt by seeing her…we can bear anything Chotimaa but nothing against Shivaay and Anika Bhabhi…we cannot bear if anyone insults either of them whether it’s outsiders or house members’’
Pinky looked at Om shockingly……..
Shivaay moved towards Pinky but Anika stopped Shivaay and signalled him not to say anything….Shivaay looked at her in disbelief…..Pinky observed this and was aghast…
Shivaay ‘’Anika I am really very sorry’’ he said while tears ran out of his eyes and voice choked
Anika ‘’I am also sorry Shivaay to behave rudely with you without knowing truth…’’
Shivaay ‘’No Anika…I knew the NKK always mattered to me…but how couldn’t I see the truth…how could I believe this lady without trying to find out the truth….my mistake is not unforgivable but still I beg you…please …please forgive me…I swear I …I didn’t know that my mom…my own mom has conspired all this..i am sorry Anika’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay please don’t say so…I understand your condition…and please…please don’t cry …I cannot see you so…I always want my pati parmeshwar to be the tadibaaz bhagad billa SSO’’
Shivaay smiled with tears……….he hugged Anika saying ‘’sorry’’
Anika reciprocated the hug…everyone except Pinky smiled …
Rudra ‘’not fair bhayya…we also should join’’
Shivaay called Om, Prinku, Rudra, Soumya to join the hug……..they hugged while tears of happiness flowed through everyones eyes………
Shivaay called Police and filed a complaint against the manager and Nayantara…Police arrested them for blackmailing and cheating……….
Pinky ‘’Shivaay….mujhse kuch nahi kahoge’’
Shivaay didn’t even look at Pinky and turned his face in anger and started moving from there
Pinky ‘’Shivaay maine jo bhi kiya tere liye kiya…mein tujhe khona nahi chahthi Shivaay…tum mujhse aise bina baat kiye nahi jaa sakta…Shivaay kuch bol na …chahe mujhe daant…chahe mujhe aur koi saza de par mujhse rooth ke mat jaa…’’
(Shivaay whatever I have done is for ypou…I didn’t want to lose you…you cannot go without talking to me..shivaay say something…if you want scold me..give me any other punishment but please don’t be annoyed with me )
Shivaay was not interested to listen to Pinky …he held Anika’s hand tight and
Shivaay ‘’come Anika..let’s go inside’’
When he heard a voice ‘’NOT SO SOON SHIVAAY’’
Everyone looked towards the voice………

Precap : The Actual Reason

SORRY MY CHIRPY AMAYAA FOR DISSAPPOINTING YOU WITH THE LAST EPISODE

So this was the Sixth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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64 Comments
  1. Sairan

    Superbbbb awsomee fantastic lovely marvellous.. really Sorryyy for late comment Actually I just read the episodes in a one good Abhi..ur just Exceptional..made me speechless and less of words.. amazingggggg

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sairan…before i comment further…where is your update? i have been eagerly waiting…and if you have already posted it then can you please send me the link……

      Coming to this FF…this was just a thought that passed my mind and i started penning it down…nothing exceptional dear…but thank you so much for the compliments

      1. Sairan

        Actually na vhm my exams are going on..Kal history ka ppr Hai ????
        So bas tym SA nahi mil rha ki episode thoda finishing etc kr Pau..to I’ll post a bit later..like around 1 June coz last exam is on 31 may..sorry for the delay ?

      2. VHM

        No worries Sairan…take your time…i wasn’t aware that it’s exam time for you…Education comes first than everything else…so all the best for your exams…i am sure you are going to rock them…will wait till June first week till you are done with exams and come out of the exam stress………no need to say Sorry……..

  2. awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aisha…

  3. Ahaana

    Plzz writer.ban jao naa serial ki.plzz.. request yrr… ?… nothing more i can say … seriously i m left speechless yaa phir no words left in my dictionary which can describe its khoobsurati

    1. VHM

      awee thank you so much Ahaana…mujhe likhna bahut pasand hain isliye aise likh rahi hoon…serial ka writer banne ka talent shayad abhi mujh mein nahi hain…..thank you so much dear once again for such beautiful words……

  4. Amayaa

    Di u know what u r really very sweet
    Today u don’t need to thankkkk us for responding on dis part or for liking this part
    But we need to thank u for giving us such a beautiful part
    The last episode I didn’t like it much. ………. Nd this episode I love it
    I told this before also
    But still I need to say this again nd again
    This episode again breaks de records of previous parts
    This is de best part of whole ff
    With all de emotions present in a single episode. ………..
    But de thing which I loved most is de last hug of Obros including Anika Somya Prinku before de exit from OBEROI mansion
    Nd de insult of yellow sari vali aunty. ……………
    But NOT SO SOON SHIVAY scares me
    What will gonna happen now ? May be something related with Maahi.
    What will be de actual reason. ………….do one thing please tell ur chirpy Amayaa secretly otherwise by thinking deeply my gangaram surely gonna happen. …………

    Thank u loads di for mentioning my name nd give a note for me ……….
    I m in cloud 9 now ………….??……….
    This episode is my favourite with many reasons
    INCLUDING OF MY NAME IS ONE OF THEM

    1. VHM

      Am i really my chirpy Amayaa…you know you are a very sweet and sensible girl…stay like this always ..this makes you unique…

      Thank you for all those beautiful words you wrote for me…yeah i was scared when i read your previous comment and was quite nervous when i uploaded this part…but thank God i am relaxed now…you did like this episode and that’s the best thing for me…

      when i did disappoint you i had to apologize , and i thought the best way is to publicly do it rather than pinging you a private message….

      I am also on Cloud 9 now……yuppieeee ….thank you so much dear

  5. Mehakchalag

    Awesme..Too good.Pinky ki toh chop ho gyi.I hate her so much.I loved it from bottom of my heart.

    1. VHM

      thank you so much mehak…i like the name Mehak…it’s a very beautiful name…thank you so much once again dear

      1. Mehakchalag

        thank u ..

  6. Nida

    ?????????????????????? extremely great and well thought ?…. i just loved it soooooo muchhh…. u have no idea ? how much i am waiting for the next part ….

    1. VHM

      heyy Nida…i have a surprise planned for you at the end of this FF…so keep reading ….thank you soooooooooo much dear for your as usual awesome support via your comments…..your comment is a stress buster for me…and i really mean this from my heart…. i will upload the next shot in sometime from now

  7. OMG!!! VHM dear this is just Fantabulous…
    Loved it to the core!! And now how will I sleep..You left it at suspence..
    Cant wait to know…plz plz plz update today itself…

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Bhavana…sleep well because after you wake up you would be rwady to read the next shot of this FF…..i will upload today itself…i promise

  8. It should be Mahi. When will you update next part. I can’t wait. It’s really fabulous.

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Shivika…may be Mahi may not be Mahi…let’s wait and watch….will upload the next shot today

  9. Awesome…
    Omru r d bst devars….
    Pinky ki OMM ho gayi….
    waiting fr d nxt.. 🙂

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Shivika…yeah true OmRu are the best Devars….i didn’t want to drag this Pinky’s drama as it would be in serial…so ended it very quickly in one single episode

  10. Awesome, fantastic, fabulous, great, superb, jitne bhi praising words he na all are dedicated to you….
    Ekdum dhinchak type??????
    Nice post next part soon.

    1. VHM

      awee Arpita…thank you, thank you, thank you, ……till infinity…….thanks a lot…will post next episode today

  11. Dhar

    I think it’s mahi awesome episode ?? plzz post the next update ASAP ?

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Dhar…might be Mahi might not be Mahi…have to wait till next shot…will upload it in sometime from now

  12. Navz

    ???????i proudly announce that my harika dii is d best writer who can pen down any expression like suspense,comedy,romance,emotional anything in very sensible and interesting way.
    Dii..really its not any apple polish or exaggeration ..truly emtional episode and way u use every charachter is awesome.
    The most loved part is when anika stood up against pinky and gave THE PERFECT answer to that lady.???
    My rudy and om are again in to action to help their dearest bhabi.
    Om’s dailogue that they cant see any outsider or insider insulting their bhaiyaa and bhabi and rudra as always asking for dbo moment??
    And the way shivay had just left with his wife without even turning towards that lady is superb.
    Today i really felt this episode soo just perfect that i spoke many things without taking the word of brake..haha
    Asusual my dailogue is ready for u…”waiting for next part dii..”??
    Ee roju konchem ekkuve matldesa..sry..hehe.
    With lots of love ur chotii is signing off..bye dii

    1. Navz u know Telugu aa even I know Telugu.i am from Hyderabad where are u from

      1. Navz

        Hiiii Sri…I am from Vizag.gud to know that there are many Telugu people here.???

      2. VHM

        Thank you so much Chotii…..the loopholes in the real Ib are being cashed by me in my FF …that’s the only secret…….i am glad you are liking this FF…OmRu are superbb …i particularly like them when they help Shivaay or Anika ……but these days we hardly get to see them…….next episode i have just uploaded …waiting for it to get published…..even i am a Telugite…so same pinch Sri and Chotii

  13. Sorry di I could not comment as I was on my vacation but I read all of them just now they were great super amazing excellent and many more ☺☺☺☺ no words to describe your ff di actually I talked too much I think ??

    1. VHM

      No worries Sri…emi parvaledhu……you have posted your opinion…and that;s the best part…i am glad you are liking this…it feels really good when you talk … so go on and on…i can listen to your talks continuously……….

  14. Day to day episodes are really surprising, Bringing more twist…..Very nice story ??

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Ayissha…thanks a lot dear

  15. Shivikaanshi

    Brrriiillliiiiaaannnnttt diiiii???pinky ki toh o my mata hi hogai?????awsm di….

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Shivikaanshi……..Pinky ki real IB mein OMM kab hogi pata nahi isliye maine mere ff mein jaldi kar diya…lol…thank you so much dear ………..

  16. Jerry_36

    Literally no words. Hatts off.
    Everything was beautiful?

    1. VHM

      Awee thank you so much Jerry aka Vedika…am i right your actual name is Vedika right? thanks a lot dear…glad to get compliments from an outstanding author like you

  17. Niriha

    Awesome….very interesting eagerly waiting for next update soon

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Niriha……..i have just uploaded the next episode hope it gets published soon then on i will wait eagerly for your opinions to be posted

  18. Superb diiiii ???? waiting for the next
    Diiii where r u from????

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Vishnusri….next part i uploaded just now so in sometime i guess it will in the portal…..

      basically from Andhrapradesh& Telangana states in India, currently residing in Belgium, Europe

  19. Alekhika20

    Asum update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika20…your one word opinion always make me feel happy…thanks a lot

  20. Gayathri.visu

    Hiiiii di. How r u?? Hope u r much better now……!

    For me this is OUTSTANDING part di…! My most awaited scene…Shivaay’s past n TRUE FACE OF STUPID PINKY PONKY IN FRONT OF SHIVAAY! Yippeeee…… Really great that u r make Anika is strong infront of that stupid.

    NOT SO SOON SHIVAAY! Who is he/she???
    Is the person is Mahi or Tej??? Very scary di. Eagerly waiting for next part…

    TAKE CARE URSELF DI…….

    1. VHM

      Heyy Gaythri…feeling much better now……

      Thank you so much Gayathri……yeah Shivaay had to come out of Anika’s NKK and Pinky true face has to come out…so completed both points in a single episode…couldn’t dare to drag this more……

      NOT SO SOON may be from one of them…somemore time as i have uploaded the next part, you will get to know once it is in portal…

      Will surely take care of myself…thank you so much dear..and Take care of yourself too

  21. Anujohnson

    Its awesome!!!!

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Anu…it’s always a pleasure to read your comment

  22. Superb….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lilly…i am so glad to learn that you liked this Episode

  23. AMkideewani

    Amazing

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dear…thanks a lot

  24. Ooo mee too from andhrapradesh di I am from Nellore????

    1. VHM

      yuppieee..same pinch then..you , me, Navz, Sri from AP that’s a unique union……what say

  25. Anu16

    Wow…. ur updates have an awesome speed… I was fabulous…. finally pinki truth out without much dragging… but now their is a new twist now…hope the serial alsends the track in he same way ending all mysteries…. anyways post soon…

    1. VHM

      heyy thank you so much Anu….yes i make sure every day an episode is posted if i start an FF/SS …this makes it easy for the readers to connect to the continuity…..twists have always been my best friends in my every write up …what to do yaar…aadat se majboor…….thank you dear and hope i would see your opinion posted on the upcoming episodes too….thanks again

  26. Hahaha avuna akka??? same pinch ap lo ekkada nuvvu perigavu akka????? Nenu nellore lo puttanu periganu?

    1. VHM

      nenu Hyd lo puttanu Rajahmundry, Vijaywada, Hyderbad lo periganu

  27. Super awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you soi much fffan1234..

  28. Nita D

    High voltage drama episode this was……
    Pinky…….
    Can a mother do such thing ever…..snatch her sons happiness from him…..i know Pinky was insecure of Anika (i still wonder does this really happen. i mean so much of insecurity) but still, proving her to be a pr*stitute’s daughter is really ____________ (cant find such a bad word)…..and when Anika took stand for herself Pinky is shouting on her…..and this Nayantara has no shame…..i mean which women will like doing such a thing….they generally do it under pressure and she is making fun of all of them.
    ——————————————————————–
    Glad that Om Picked up the phone and he immediately handled it very well…if he had blurted out the truth right then , then they would have left with no proofs…..and the next best thing was they told Anika everything…..n didnt tell Shivaay (cause i don’t think he would have believed them without proofs)
    Vase i loved the whole dialouge of Anika when she says what if DNA matches……
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    But thank God (or thanks to you) that Pinky’s truth came out so soon….i suppose they are dragging it in the show…..
    I loved everybody’s reaction to it…..but Shivaay’s was the best….
    Shivika talk was wow….. :heart_eyes: :heart_eyes:

    matlab aur bhi kuch naki hai…..

    chalo going to read that…..

    1. Nita D

      I meant ??
      Don’t know why it came written as heart eyes

      1. VHM

        Thank you so much dear for the great analysis as usual…so happy to see you back…i don’t get tired saying how happy i am to get you back on TU…thanks a lot

      2. Nita D

        Thank you so much for the love u have given me di…..I always regretted not having an elder sibling. But when I talk to u I really feel like talking to my di

      3. Nita D

        And plz check your mail as well

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