THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 4 – AN IMPORTANT DISCUSSION

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Precap : Shivaay wakes up Anika showing the time…Anika tricks Shivaay and get’s into the bathroom…Shivaay comes closer to her …Anika escapes his proximity…all four drive towards the award function and on their way Shivika remembers their cute fight in the jungle ……

Present situation : Shivaay driving towards Award ceremony venue

Shivaay was driving and Anika was still looking at him and blushing….Shivaay then understood what she was thinking…he winked at her and she hit on his hand nervously……
Finally they entered the venue …all the three were feeling proud …………as the food for the party was supplied by S.A.M.S restaurant and the event management was being done by Anika……….Mahi did the job of checking everything and giving necessary instructions so that everything went on smooth………
Sahil ‘’good job all of you…I am happy…’’
AniShiMa together said ‘’Thank you sir ‘’
Finally they were welcomed by the rest corporates…….all the big wigs of the state also flew in…….the event commenced …everyone congratulated Shivaay and praised his hardworking nature…….Finally the bank manager also spoke and Shivaay requested the CM that he would be happy if he gets the award from his (CM’s) and the manager who helped him on the first day…….finally the award was presented to Shivaay………….Anika and Mahi had tears of happiness….Anika side-hugged Mahi happily and Sahil too joined….Shivaay too saw them and felt really happy…….

After the award was given guests were chitchatting with each other when one Mr.Gogoi came to Shivaay who was standing with his family members ………..
Mr.Gogoi ‘’Mr.Shivaay I would like to have a word with you’’
Shivaay ‘’yeah Sure’’
Mr.Gogoi ‘’I am planning to set up a 7 –star hotel in Delhi and Mumbai…I would be pleased if you join in a partnership with me….if you say yes then we will discuss rest of business details in the following week’’
Shivaay looked towards Anika and Mahi and they were numb ….
Mr.Gogoi ‘’what happened ? I am primarily located only in the North-Eastern states and this will be my first venture in Delhi and Mumbai so I thought if you would join then your expertise and my experience would make wonders’’
Shivaay ‘’thank you for the offer Mr.Gogoi but my answer is NO…..i will not be able to join you…please don’t mind…I have personal problems so this venture cannot be taken up by me’’
Mr.Gogoi ‘’no problem…but if ever you have a change in your decision then my proposal will be open for you’’
Shivaay ‘’So kind of you…Thank you’’

The function ended and All four of them came back to house…..all the way while driving Shivaay did not utter a single word…even though Mahi and Sahil tried to make him speak, he preferred to be silent ….After they reached home, Shivaay left to his room directly being in thoughts…Anika , Mahi and Sahil looked at him and decided not to disturb him as they knew he would need sometime for himself alone……

Shivaay sits on the bed and remembers the incidents of leaving Mumbai……..

—————————————–IN Oberoi mansion , MUMBAI—————————————–

Omkara goes to Rudra’s room ………
Om ‘’what are you upto Rudra?’’
Rudra ‘’nothing much O bhayya..how come you are here at this time?’’
Om ‘’why can’t I come to meet you…today is Sunday no office so I thought to have a word with you’’
Rudra ‘’you can come anytime bhayya…you are the only one left for me in this house now’’ he cried while hugging Om
Om ‘’don’t cry Rudra….what’s happening in business these days? Why was Mr.Tej oberoi so angry ? ‘’
Rudra ‘’ohh so you came to know about business’’
Om ‘’Yes, what did you expect?’’
Rudra ‘’I thought you came to talk about Shivaay’’
Om ‘’Who Shivaay? I don’t know any Shivaay? ‘’
Rudra ‘’how can you say this O bhayya? He is our brother…he always loved us…he took care of us…he stood by us…he fought for us….he bought us up instead of our parents…’’
Om ‘’and he who left us for his insensible anger…right…Rudra…’’
Rudra ‘’his anger was justified O bhayya’’
Om ‘’no not completely…if his anger was justified then he would have not left us….anyways I just came to talk to you about you, your life, your business’’
Rudra fake smiled ‘’my life…it’s going..yeah it’s going on…everything is normal…business was never my cup of tea…I thought to help chote papa and from then everything changed …..but I am still managing my way…donno when we will sink but till that time I will try to manage’’
Om smiled ‘’you have grown up Rudra…very big…you became responsible too…then ?
Rudra ‘’ then ..why did you stop? Complete your question bhayya’’
Om ‘’then why did Soumya leave you? What happened between you both?’’
Rudra ‘’nothing much O bhayya…we weren’t compatible…she left’’
Om ‘’she left or you asked her to go away?’’
Rudra frowned his eyebrows
Om ‘’it’s okay if you don’t want to talk about this…but I just wanted you to be happy…atleast you to be happy’’
Rudra ‘’who said you that I asked her to leave?’’
Om ‘’that’s not important Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’no o bhayya..that’s very important…did you meet Sumo..i mean soumya?’’
Om ‘’yes Rudra I met her two days before…. when I went on for a business meeting……..she is here..in Mumbai….she is working as RJ in one of the prime radio stations…I accidentally met her in the hotel where the meeting took place and got all these details’’
Rudra ‘’ohh okay…good for her…she is working…so she must be happy in her own space’’
Om ‘’Don’t you wish to meet her?’’
Rudra ‘’no..i don’t want to’’
Om ‘’fine then…as you wish…but if you change your mind …she is staying in Flat no: 603, Rainbow apartments, versova’’
Rudra ‘’ohh…but I have no interest in meeting her…we are done forever bhayya’’
Om ‘’as you think Rudra…it’s all in your thinking…’’
Rudra ‘’what do you mean? ‘’
Om ‘’jab dil dimaag ke beech ho behes, dil ki hi suno, kyun ki dil hamesha kar deta hain aisa kuch khaas, jo mita de har dooriyan aur bada de nazdeekiyan’’
Rudra hugs Om again and says ‘’after a long time I am seeing my old O bhayya again…thank you’’
Om ‘’chal don’t get senti…I felt nice after talking to you…I think we should speak our heart out like this often…take care……….’’
Rudra ‘’Bhayya wait’’
Om ‘’yes Rudra…anything else?’’
Rudra ‘’please sit here for a while bhayya’’
Om obliges and sits on the couch…
Om ’’Yes Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’I know you wouldn’t like what I am going to speak now… also I am much younger to you too…but still I want to speak my heart today’’
Om ‘’ go ahead Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’O bhayya…why do you hate Gauri Bhabhi so much…whatever happened was not her fault…I mean she did her duty of a housewife by coming here…she never expected anything from you…rather she became your best friend Chulbul….then why do you hate her….i have never seen hatred in your eyes for anyone except for Gauri Bhabhi and papa’’
Om ‘’I don’t think I need to answer you…’’
Rudra ‘’if not as your brother answer me as your well-wisher bhayya’’
Om ‘’I hate Mr.Tej Oberoi and Gauri to the core because they are alike in every matter…in breaking house of another woman…I just hate them and can never forgive them…this is what I can say’’
Rudra ‘’Gauri Bhabhi breaking another woman’s house? What do you mean bhayya? Over this one year I have seen her trying to join the house with utmost patience…my heart somehow is not able to believe this’’
Om ‘’you are still innocent Rudra so you see good in everything…..but truth is what I said’’
Rudra ‘’but you can at least try to find out her side of the story bhayya…it need not be always correct with what you see or think’’
Om smiled and said ‘’anyways forget about her…her existence in this house never matters…I will leave now as I have much work to handle’’
Rudra ‘’okay bhayya…sure’’
Rudra sits down and reminisces all the conversation between him and Om…….he stops at Soumya’s point…..
He remembers the day of their break-up

————–In Om’s room—————-

Om also remembers the past incidents that revealed Chulbul as Gauri and then whatever happened ….

Precap : Rudra’s Past

So this was the Fourth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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58 Comments
  1. awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Saina….

  2. Awesome. Loved Omru talks

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Nitika…i thought this will be the boring episode of my FF …

  3. Aastha_Reddy

    Hope they will be back soon together..If Astha is an emotional girl..she would have cried today….
    Very good input of emotions and confrontation in between OmRu. ..I wish kaash mein bhi itna emotional story likh paati…. mujhse kabhi bhi naa hopayega …

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Astha garu……thank you for the compliment dear…. but to be honest i can never write humor as you do….never ever in my lifetime and i can bet on this

  4. Rithik

    Vhm i love your ff but i love only shivika please post shivika part soon and must say your ff awsome

    1. VHM

      heya Rithik…i too love Shivika jodi ..but this particular FF will involve other jodi’s too…but Shivika will definitely be the center of attraction…i will bring their side of story very soon

      1. Rithik

        Thankyou for shivika

  5. Awsome update VHM….

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Banita….

  6. Nida

    Feeling bad for shivaay….??? but feeling like to hug ? you

    1. VHM

      Awee …don’t worry Nida…all four oberois are rock solid…i will not spill anymore beans…and a big hug to you too

  7. Amazing….. waiting for next…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lilly…will update soon

  8. Awsome…..

    1. VHM

      thank you so much San

  9. Navz

    Very emtional episode dii…eagerly waiting for d next part
    Ill comment more on d next part..plzz update as soon as possible dii..waiting for rumya’s past.

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Chotii…i understood all your emotions, so message long or small doesn’t matter…will update very soon

  10. VHM dear, superb emotional episode. .post next part soon.but you know what. Your ff Inseparable shots ka hangover abhi bhi mere sar pe he…you are really a good writter.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arpita…i can’t belive THE INSEPARABLES hang over is still over you…that’s an awesome compliment for me… thanks a lot Arpita once again

  11. Awesome didi.waiting 4 omri, rumya’s reunion and shivika’s come back 2 OM. also Mahi and sahil

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Parvathi…yes one by one everything about past will be revealed…why what how will also get revealed…but you have to wait for a bit to know that

  12. Amazing one yaara! A bit emotional too..
    I feel really bad for shivaay… Cant wait to find out what had happened… Update nxt one asap!

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Bhavanaa…i didn’t have any hope that readers will like this episode but you all made me prove my hope wrong and i am so glad about it….will upload it as soon as possible

  13. Niriha

    Awesome…very emotional epi dear waiting for next update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha…will upload it soon

  14. Very interesting….Waiting for next part

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Ayissha…sometime more and then the wait will be over

  15. Superb and emotional part. Loving it…

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Fffan1234…i am glad you are liking it

  16. Awesome

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Vishnusri

  17. Awesome….
    It was so heartwarming…
    Hope that d Obros get back together soon…
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Shivika…after sometime everything will be revealed till then please bear the suspense and surprise element

  18. Gayathri.visu

    Good afternoon di!! Very emotional part…. Shivaay has a deep pain….feeling bad for him. Omru convo is emotional! In their convo I can understand one thing that Rudra is completely ignores Sowmya n Om hates Gauri from the core of his heart….! Also Om is in angry with Shivaay!? What happened to them??
    Precap…di why u mentioned RUDRA’S PAST not RUMYA’S PAST??? Waiting for next part di…
    Have a nice day n keep smiling di…….

    1. VHM

      Good afternoon Gayathri…yes Shivaay will be in pain to miss his brothers and sister…Om hates Gauri why in the upcoming part…Rudra ignores soumya why in the next part…and i did not mention RUMYA’s past because there is other side of story coming up…lots of things to be disclosed part by part so you have to wait and read…hope you would like it

  19. Awesome episode…each nd every emotions are written very precisely…. u r an awesome writer dear…all the very very best for ur future….

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Zaveesha…thanks a lot for all the awesome comments

  20. Shivikaanshi

    Aswm diii….u r v v good writer…☺☺☺☺

    1. VHM

      awee thank you so much Shivikaanshi…am i a good writer? i don’t think so little sis…i am yet learning to write different kind of FF’s….thank you for the compliment dear

  21. Anu16

    Loved it…. want to know rudra’s past soon…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Anu…yes will upload it very soon

  22. Amayaa

    VHM di. …….. now I get my answer ……… u r really planning to kill us……… di such a short update ………. not fair. ………..
    If u continue doing this sautela vyavhaar with me then next time u will get my comment from heaven or hell. ………
    I m so curious to know de past nd u r continuously increasing de suspense. ……….
    BY de way. …… last time u said that de next part will be boring. ………
    Is this seems boring to u ……….. kuch bhi ………. it is VHM ‘S FFtor episode. …….. emotions r also needed which is already present in ur FF. ………. so post de next one soon otherwise u know very well what will gonna happen. ……….??

    1. VHM

      heyaa my chirpy Amayaa…sorry darling i am down with fever so am not able to upload longer episodes …i will try to do so…thank you for the awespme comments..yes i felt that this episode is the most boring one..but you all proved me worng…thank you for thta…and i know very well what will happen if i don’t upload the next shot soon…my Chirpy Amayaa will not spare me…

  23. Awesome di………and why om reacted like that after hearing shivay’s name I feel.bad for the obros and I wish they all to be together soon……

    1. VHM

      thank yopu so much Arthi…trust me this FF will have a happy ending as i don’t like unhappy or sad endings…even if i want to write so i cannot…everything will get revealed

  24. Alekhika20

    Asum updt

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika20…….waiting for your response on next part that’s already in the portal……..

  25. AMkideewani

    Superb dear, sorry for late comment❤

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much CrazygirlS.P …thanks a lot and don’t be sorry as it never matters whether you are early or late in responding…what matters is you took sometime of yours to post your comments and that too for me …which is always special for me

  26. Anujohnson

    Awesome!!!!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Anu…as usual a much required boost from you

  27. Jerry_36

    Such a emotional episode. Lovely. You left me speechless di☺

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Jerry……i never expected such a response for this episode …i really felkt this was the most boring episode …but you all proved me wrong…so thank you for that…i am delighted that it made you emotional….thanks again dear

  28. Nita D

    episode 1
    wow…..what an awesome start….shivaay as handsome as ever….but what are they doing in Meghalaya????? n why doesnt he want himself to be known OBEROI…..? Sahil ofcourse, but mahi is also with them.

    And OM, everything has changed….Tej n Shakti are not on talking terms…pinky’s condition….OMG…..also Saumya has left….and even prinku is not there…
    such an interesting start it is…..

    Episode 2
    ShivOmRu are inseperable…ek hi kahani ke 3 hisse…..how can he stay without them…..”he typed many times but always backed off”…..a short line but it rally touched me……Shivika scene in the begining was very sweet…
    The best thing about this episode was ShivikaMaHil’s journey…..thats the best thing i like about you di…i have read some ffs or ss where Anika or shivaay (or maybe both) left the house and after few months or years they are well known and have wealth and everything but nobody has showed the stuggle behind it….you were the first one to show that….from a small stall to chain on restaurants is not a easy job….i love u for this….
    and the way Shivaay handled the issue at the bank, really showed what a gem of a businessman he is….
    when your passion becomes your work, then thats the best job ever….

    about OM toh i dont know what to say…..so many misunderstandings are there….eagerly waiting to read how u solve them all…..

    1. VHM

      Hey Nita …finally you are back and that too with a bang…so happy to read your analysis.,..i missed this so much………well you have your answers all in the portal and the links i have pinged you too…so i will wait for you to complete reading till the latest episode and then see your response……..at the time of this message the latest episode is episode no 18…i hope you enjoy reading…thank you so much dear and this i mean by my heart

  29. Nita D

    Episode 3
    Chor Chor…..haha. Again Shivika nok jhok was cute……
    This Pinky…….really…..?
    Shivika car n forest scene was much like IB but with your touch……
    overall a full-on Shivika episode…..

    Episode -4
    Award ceremony went very smoothly but this Mr Gogoi seems interesting person….but Shivaay seemed reluctant to start business in the delhi n mumbai…so something really serious must have happened….and 1yr….thats too much a big time….n my guess is that its something to Shivaay-Mahi truth n maybe shivaay is illegitimate….lets see….
    Also today for the first time OmRu expressed their side of Shivaay leaving….and omru talk is also very nicely written…..i love it…..and it so very much realistic as well…..
    super excited to read the next part….

    PS: i have read all the parts one by one and then commented

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