THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 32 – SCATTERRED PIECES OF PUZZLE TO JOIN

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Anika tries to open the gifts but she hears Gauri’s scream ‘’Maa’’………she rushes outside to see Gauri hugging her mother……….
Anika sees Gauri’s mother and greets her and takes her blessings…..later all the family members come and welcome her with open hands….Gauri introduces all the family members…..they all leave to give space to Gauri …
Anika feels sad for herself as she doesn’t know her Parents and turns to go to her room….Gauri brings her to her mother and made her sat beside her.
Gauri ‘’Anika di…she is your mom too…..’’
Gauri’s Mom ‘’yes …Gauri said everything about you…how to thank you and Shivaay beta …you have set Gauri’s life on track…’’
Anika ‘’No maaji…don’t thank me…we did nothing , they were destined to be together….’’
Gauri ‘’Maa come we will go inside …you take rest ‘’
Gauri Mom ‘’aree no beta…I am fine…’’
Anika ‘’yes maaji…gauri is right…don’t worry we both will stay beside you and talk to you’’
They took her inside while Mr.Bajaj along with Shreya stepped in…………

Shivaay sees them both and welcomes them…he calls Anika and she too comes there welcomes Mr.Bajaj and Shreya , Anika takes Shreya with her while all other elders sit back and chat…..
Shivaay was eagerly waiting for Om and Rudra was helping Mahi in getting ready………
No guests were invited as they wanted it to be a quiet family affair……..
Mr.Chabbra and family, Mr.Gogoi were the only invitees along with special guest being Khanna….
Mr.Chabbra arrived with the family…..Mr.Gogoi informed he would be late as a sudden work popped up in between…………..

Everything was set ready for the function to start Mahi and Shreya were seated on the sofa and they were looking beautiful…..Shivaay held Anika ‘s hand and was not leaving her for a moment…..Rudra too held Sumo lovingly……..everyone were happy………
Jhanvi ‘’Gauri…where is your mom?’’
Gauri ‘’I will bring her …she is not keeping good health so she was actually taking rest’’
Jhanvi ‘’that’s fine..if she wants to rest allow her…..’’
Gauri ‘’I will check her ‘’ …Gauri left and came back…….
Pinky ‘’shall we start the rasam’’
Mr.Bajaj ‘’as you say’’
Shreya ‘’aunty ji shall we wait for sometime?’’
Pinky ‘’why? Is there any problem?’’
Shreya ‘’woh actually Om bhayya is not here and Khanna bhayya too’’
Tej ‘’Khanna bhayya? Who is that?’’
Anika ‘’our security chief Khanna…….’’
Tej ‘’really he is your brother?’’
Gauri ‘’haan papa ji…he is our brother …I mean we made him our brother so……..’’
Shakthi ‘’that’s great…so ShivOmRuHi has a jija-saala now’’
Every laughed
Pinky ‘’ok we will wait…till then have some snacks’’
Om ‘’why to wait we are here’’
Om and Khanna smiled …so did Shivaay………
Shivaay questioned Om through Signs….om responded everything fine and bought the man in the function…….
Gauri ‘’Phufa ji aap? Yaha?’’
He didn’t speak anything as he was scared……….
Chabbra was shocked to see that man…….
Chabbra went to him and held his collar and said ‘’You…how dare you come here?’’
Shivaay ‘’Mr.Chabbra do you know this man?’’
Chabbra ‘’yes……how can I forget him…………Shivaay I will tell you everything later ..but send him out of here and handover him to police’’
Everyone were shocked …….

Hearing Mr.chabbra’s over the top voice and the ongoing mess Gauri’s mother came out……….
She was shocked to see MR.Bajaj…….
Gauri’s mom turned towards Mr.Bajaj and said ‘’You……you here?’’
Now ShivOmRuHi were shocked that Gauri’s ,mom identified Mr.Bajaj….
Gauri ‘’maa …why are you asking like this? He is Shreya’s dada ji…Mr.T.V.Bajaj’’
Gauri’s mom was sweating she was about to say something but she kept mum…….she just smiled

Pinky ‘’Om take that man away…’’
Gauri ‘’but he is my phufa ji’’
Gauri’s mom ‘’Gauri, you must listen to what your saas says’’
Gauri and Anika looked puzzled…….
Om took him to a room and locked from outside…he ensured security surrounds him on all sides…..
Roka started and rituals were performed………
Everyone blessed the couple …the IB gang danced to the tunes of Bole choodiyan Bole kangna…..
After the dance MahiYa sat and everyone went to gift the couple one by one…….Shivaay asked Anika to get the gifts from their room…..
Anika came back………
Shivaay made Sahil sit and gifted him the photoframe which he promised the day before……..
Also Anika and Shivaay gave Mahi the other photoframe so that he can gift it to Shreya……
Shivaay Anika gifted Mahi and Shreya an expensive car and diamond jewellery much to the status of Oberois……
Sahil opened the photo frame and was very happy…he went to Everyone to show it……finally it reached Gauri’s mom………she looked at it and stood up from her seat………
Gauri’s Mom looked at Sahil and asked ‘’who are they?’’
Sahil ‘’Aunty ji ye mere mummy papa hain’’
Gauri’s mom ‘’where are they now?’’
Anika ‘’maa ji they are no more’’
Gauri’s mom was crying…………Gauri controlled her……..
Gauri ‘’maa why are you crying? Do you know them?’’
Gauri’s maa ‘’yes I know them very well…I know them and I am feeling bad that they are no more’’
Shivaay ‘’what ?’’
Gauri’s maa ‘’Shivaay beta I will explain once the function ends’’
Shivaay obliged……..

Meanwhile Mahi gifted Shreya the photoframe and asked her to open it……….she too opened…….
Everyone were seeing…It reached Anika ……..
Anika was shocked …….seeing Anika shocked Gauri came to her and asked what happened to her…..Anika showed her the photo and was unable to speak…….Gauri looked at it…….she too was shocked……..
Anika and Gauri had tears in their eyes……..
ShivOm ‘’why are you both crying seeing the picture’’
Anika hugged Shivaay …he caressed her……..
Anika ‘’Shivaay this is me in this photo…the big girl is me…yes it is me…’’ she cried………..
Gauri was even more shocked ‘’ Anika dii …the middle girl is me……..’’
Anika ‘’what? that means you are chutki…my sister chutki’’she hugged Gauri tightly and they both cried……
Everyone were getting shocked with sudden turn of events in the house and no one was able to figure out what was happening……Shreya was dumbstruck …….Mahi shaked her and she came into senses …….

Shreya ran to Anika and Gauri and said ‘’The smallest one is me…..Didi it’s me …yes …these are my parents…I mean our parents…that means’’
Anika ‘’that means if this picture is true and my understanding is correct….we all are sisters……..yes we all are sisters…real sisters………….’’ They hugged each other tightly……
ShivOmRuHi and Soumya were seeing them shockingly…they were having tears of happiness and were smiling …….on other side…..still it was unbelievable for them as to how……
Gauri bought her mom and asked her to look ………..
Gauri’s mom looked at other photo frame and was even more shocked ……….
Now everyone’s patience was being tested………and everyone were confused……….they asked Gauri’s mom to tell the truth………
THE PHOTOFRAME HAD THREE GIRL CHILDREN AND A COUPLE…………..
(Gauri’s maa – GM)
Gauri’s mom ‘’The lady in the picture is my sister……..yes she is my sister Chaya……..’’
Mr.Bajaj ‘’Chaya…wife of my son Ravi…Ravindra Bajaj’’
GM she turned towards Mr.Bajaj and said giving him the photframe and spoke
Gauri’s mom ‘’Mr.Bajaj sometime before I was shocked to see you because I knew my sister married your son……….and you did not accept the marriage…….so your son and my sister both left your house and stayed far away……even I didn’t know where they were staying……and I knew neither you did ..because after their marriage you disowned them and never looked back for them…’’

Mr.Bajaj looked at the photoframe with tears and collapsed on chair…he was unconscious……..
Anika and Shreya helped him to bring back consciousness……..while Gauri held her mom tightly……
Mr.Bajaj ‘’Shivaay these are those two kids (apart from Shreya) whom I joined in Hope orphanage …I picked them up from near the temple and joined them in orphanage…yes …yes …I still remember the faces…and I can’t be wrong’’
Gauri tunred towards her mom and asked
Gauri ‘’but then why am I in this picture? You are my mom..then how can I be with Anika didi and Shreya in that picture?’’
Gauri’s maa ‘’I don’t know…….. but the truth is what your buaa used to say…we adopted you…I mean your bauji…my husband adopted you and bought you as we had no kids of our own’’
Gauri was shaken up…..and so was Anika……….everything was getting complicated………
Shivaay asked everyone to relax and asked to bring Gauri’s phufa to the room…he asked Khanna to bring both the ladies from old house…….
Gauri’s phufa was brought to the living room…….and was held by security persons…….
Khanna came back in ten minutes with the ladies and made them stand beside Gauri’s phufa………
AniHil ‘’bandari buaa aap?’’
Gauri ‘’bua ji aap?’’
Mr.Bajaj ‘’do you know these two ladies Anika and Gauri’’
Anika and Gauri said yes and told him about Sundai bua and Gauri’s bua along with Gauri’s phufa ji……
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(Gauri’s bua (GB) –Gauri’s Phufa (GP ) -Sundari bua (SB) –all three together referred as Evil trio)
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Shreya ‘’but why are you asking about them Dada ji? Do you know them too ?’’
Shivaay ‘’I will explain about this’’
Anika looked on ………..

————–NARRATION BY SHIVAAY
Shivaay ‘’
Day before yesterday when we went to drop Shreya …I and Om saw SB, GB coming out of Mr.Bajaj’s house….we both were shocked…I have never seen GB before but Om identified both of them………. as he has seen GB in bareily and SB at your house, ………………..
When we went inside Bajaj Villa, Mr.Bajaj’s condition was not so good…we somehow managed to bring him to normal…
Later Rudra took Shreya in pretext of seeing Bajaj villa and Mr.Bajaj revealed that these two ladies have come to blackmail Mr.Bajaj that they will kill his granddaughters if he has not offered money…..
Mr.Bajaj denied of having any granddaughters except Shreya … but these two said that his son had three children and all three kids are alive…
Both of them were residing in Oberoi Mansion as Bahu’s……….and if he doesn’t give the amount they asked…. they will not take a back step in killing both of them and letting them against him……..
Mr.Bajaj asked them about proofs…they said that they know his son died in a car accident and he bought up his another granddaughter…they described their son and what all he did after the accident …Mr.Bajaj was convinced………
The moment Mr.Bajaj said this… our thoughts reached about You and Gauri and we were anticipating that you both were the ones they are referring to and you might be sisters and granddaughters of Mr.Bajaj…however we wanted to confirm this with proofs…….
Mr.Bajaj too was in same thoughts that Anika and Gauri are the ones they were referring to and asked us to find the truth out and save you both from getting harmed…we promised to take care of everything………..
I, Om and Rudra took help of Khanna in tracing them…initially Khanna couldn’t find them ….Om suggested that since we were not taking interest in Sahil’s old house we should check it …and fortunately we found them next to Sahil’s house which was unused….
From then on we have been pressurising them to tell us the truth but they were adamant…however GB has spilled in flow that her husband knows the truth apart from them…so today Om went to bareily and brought him here’’

————–NARRATION BY SHIVAAY ENDS

GM ‘’Old house next to Sahil’s house ? ‘’ she said
Rudra ‘’yes Maaji…old house next to Sahil’s house…do you know that?’’
GM nodded saying ‘’YES’’……..looking at GP and GB……..
ShivOmRuHi were shocked……..so were SaumAniGaYa listening to GM

Shivaay turned towards Evil trio and said
Shivaay ‘’now it’s time you reveal the truth else ‘’
GB ‘’else what will you do?’’
Mr.Chabbra ‘’Else I will send your husband to jail on kidnapping charges and selling girls to rich and for supporting him you both will also face punishment‘’
GP was scared to hell……….so were GB and SB………..
Rudra ‘’Kidnapping and selling girls to rich? Mr.Chabbra now what is this?’’
Mr.Chabbra ‘’ I know him…… many years before when he tried to kidnap one of my friends daughter and sell her…the police caught him…however he escaped…from then his face is imprinted on my mind…I can never forget the trauma my friend went through only because of this idiot and if you want I can call my friend and let him give the statement to Police’’
Shivaay and Oberois looked at him in thorough anger……
Shivaay ‘’now would you say the truth about the Mr.Bajaj’s granddaughters or shall I kill you here itself’’ he screamed…..
Whole Oberoi mansion was echoing Shivaay’s scream……..
GP was scared and said ‘’I will tell the truth….please I don’t want to go back to jail’’
Om ‘’then what are you waiting for…speak out fast’’
GP ‘’THE THREE GIRLS IN THIS PICTURE ARE GRANDAUGHTER’S OF MR.BAJAJ….ONE OF THEM IS GUARI BUT OTHER BIG CHILD I DON’T KNOW WHO TOOK HER AND WHERE IS SHE NOW’’
SB was looking on and smirked…Shivaay noticed it…..but he thought of dealing her later…..
Shivaay ‘’Now tell me from the beginning what happened and don’t you dare to lie ‘’
He signalled Khanna who placed Camera to record :

—————-NARRATION OF PAST INCIDENTS BY GAURI’S PHUFA :

GP Started ‘’
As Chabbra saheb said …I used to kidnap girls and sell them to rich men for money…I went to jail many times but came out because I never used to leave any proofs……
Once I kidnapped Chabbar saheb’s friend‘s daughter and was caught…I was jailed but I escaped from the prison and decided to do a final sale Of girl child , make money sufficient enough for a good life and leave this kidnapping once for all……my wife that is GB knew about all this as we all were staying together….
I returned to my BIL’s house in Mumbai , it was time when my BIL (Brother-in-law) and his wife (Gauri’s mother) were discussing about Chaya and Ravindra Bajaj returning to India……Ravindra Bajaj the only son of Mr.Tarun Virendra Bajaj………and only heir of Bajaj Empire……..
My BIL was to go to Airport and bring them home …….i knew that they haven’t seen each after their marriage…they did not know who their kids were and how they looked…….
It was a mere coincidence that I offered to pick them up from airport….being busy of daily work my BIL asked me to go ahead and bring them home…….
I waited for them at the airport with a placard so that they identify me…when I saw them they were having 3 children that too 3 girl children…I saw my wish coming true…I immediately made up my plan to take away those children…I called my partners in crime , my 2 friends and they were waiting for me at a decided location….
I received them and while bringing I stopped the car exactly where my friends were waiting …we snatched all the three kids and pushed Ravi saheb and Chaya ji into the car locked it from outside and lit fire to the car…..and started running away from there……but to our bad luck another car came behind and hit my friend who was holding the youngest kid.. she was approximately 3 years old…….my other friend and I ran away leaving that 3-year kid and my friend to their own destiny…….
————–NARRATION BY GP PAUSED
Mahi came and slapped Gauri’s Phufa (GP ) really hard …….he fell down with one thrash…….
ShivOmRu came and stopped Mahi though they felt he deserved all this……..
Om looked at Gauri but she didn’t say anything……..

Mr.Bajaj spoke then……..
—————–NARRATION BY MR.BAJAJ
Mr.Bajaj ‘’
Someone informed the Police about the car accident and police started investigating……..
After Police came and investigated they found that the dead bodies were that of my Son Ravi and his Wife Chaya…….
I completed the formalities and Police informed me that a three year old girl was found beside the accident spot with a small bag……….
The baby girl wore a locket and in it were the pictures of Ravindra and Chaya…….however Police did many tests before handing over Shreya and confirming she was the daughter of Ravi and Chaya……that is how I got my granddaughter….i took her with me and as I didn’t know what her actual name was I named her as Shreya and brought her up……I tried to ask her about Ravi and Chaya but she was too small to answer anything..infact leave answering she was too small to remember anything……
‘’
—————-NARRATION BY MR.BAJAJ ENDS
Shivaay ‘’but Mr.Bajaj ..how come you never saw this picture that Shreya has till today? ‘’
Mr.Bajaj ‘’Shivaay I was in guilt to not accept my son’s love …had I did that……… today my son and all my granddaughters would have been with me …….after I lost my son and DIL …Shreya was too small to be handled…my staff took care of her …also because of the accident happening before her eyes for many years she didn’t come to me …she used to hide away from me …..i didn’t want to trouble her…so I used to work whole day and I used to come back home after Shreya slept…..i just took care that she has all the facilities to lead a luxurious life…a life that my son had to enjoy… ..i never cared about anything else….being a man I couldn’t do anything beyond that…….Shreya too has never shown me this Pic…had she …..then Anika and Gauri would have been by my side long ago….but trust me I always used to see my son in Shreya……and she had been the support of my life…..’’
Shivaay turned towards GP and said ‘’THEN WHAT HAPPENED’’

———————–NARRATION BY GP CONTINUED
GP ‘’
Later we decided to hide the kids for sometime until police and case settled …so we hid them in an underground……no light …no water..no food…we kept them starving as our only motto was to sell them ….
When my BIL and GM asked us about Chaya’s family I said that they did not arrive at all…….they believed me blindly thinking Chaya might have changed her plan of coming…but my wife didn’t believe me….so I said that I killed both the elders and her kids are with me…I was shocked when my wife said that she knew everything as she followed me and saw everything…she tried to know where the kids were but I never said her as I didn’t want my plan to fail………later she too stopped insisting me……….
We kept both the girls like that for 10 days …. the elder girl was quite discomfortable with darkness and she used to shout for her sister …we were scared that her screams might alert someone…so we decided to keep them far away…when we separated them the elder girl was taking only one name ‘’ Chutki ‘’… but we were least bothered…….
10 days later when everything was slowly settling ….i spoke to one of my client about those kids…our client asked me to leave them near Temple and leave …….his men will pick them up and money will be given in person to me next day……I did the same……..
I didn’t know what and how it happened but my BIL saw me leaving the kids at temple… to my luck he didn’t see their faces..…I ran away making some excuses and he was behind me…..he held me and asked me many questions about both the kids…..i gave some weird reasons…….though he was not satisfied he tried to believe me….we both came back and when we saw the kids were not found……I thought that they have been taken by my client……..

————–NARRATION BY GP PAUSED
Khanna was very much angered by the confession and he came forward to thrash GP hard…but AniGa stopped him and asked him to relax as they would punish him for their deeds……
Mr.Bajaj spoke then……..

—————–NARRATION BY MR.BAJAJ

Mr.Bajaj ‘’
It was the tenth day after the death of my son , so as a part of ritual I went to temple near Hope orphanage to feed food to the poor……….that is when I saw two little girls one 7 year old and one 5 year old near the temple…….they were very much sunken, as if they hadn’t food and water for many days…hair distorted, eyes shallow and sunk and both were seeming like dying …….i found their state very bad …………so then and there I decided to join them in orphanage…….fortunately HOPE ORPHANGE was very much near by and so I joined them there and payed the amount……..
‘’
—————-NARRATION BY MR.BAJAJ ENDS

Precap : Rest of revelation – A final nail on the Coffin !!!

I DON’T KNOW HOW YOU FELT AFTER READING THIS …SORRY GUYS IF YOU ARE DISAPPOINTED…… BUT I DIDN’T WANT TO BRING ANY NEW PERSON INTO PICTURE TO JOIN THE DOTS…I THOUGHT OF REVEALING ONLY WITH THE PERSONS WE KNOW AND HAVE SEEN IN IB …ONLY NEW ENTRY I TRIED TO USE IS CHARACTER OF SHREYA…AND IN MAXIMUM THREE TO FOUR EPISODES THIS FF WILL DEFINITELY END……

So this was the thirty second part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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56 Comments
  1. Wow.. So much planning and plottings?awesome episode!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot…

  2. Kajol

    Superb I guessed right before shreya anika r sisters..and my mind is going crazy due to so much revelations in 1 update but that is what i wanted..

    1. VHM

      Hey Kajol thank you for posting your opinion..yes your guess was absolutely right…bingo…i thought of dividing this into two parts but then i don’t want to prolong the number of episodes…sorry for the long long update…and thank you for bearing with me

  3. Ahaana

    ?????????????????????????
    end mat karo naaa plzzz

    1. VHM

      Hey Ahaana…thank you so much for the support dear…end tho hona hi hain…abhi itne din tak le aana hi bahut ho gaya tha mere liye…so …koi baat nahi thode din break ke baad kuch aur likhne bhetoongi…kya kehthe ho ? :-p

      1. Ahaana

        okieeeeesss?

  4. Sagithya

    Wow it was awesome…. The Revelation was mind blowing…..I didn’t​ expect Anika n Shreya n gauri be sister… But u rocked again… Giving a surprise…. Loved it yaar…. waiting for more past Revelation…. Excited for the next part…post it as soon as possible

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot…yeah next episode just uploaded …hope it get posted by the end of the day

  5. Awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Charitha

  6. Jerry_36

    Awesome di
    Loving it more and more
    And yess, after ending it, do come up with a new one.
    Awesome writer *I know its needless to say* still great job di.
    Love yaa. Post soon?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Vedika…thanks a lot…an awesome writer if gives a compliment then you know the other person receiving the compliment doesn’t understand how to react…right now my state is such…thanks a lot dear…and as usual your recent episode was overloaded with awesomeness…love you sooooooooooo much…next episode very soon

  7. Alekhika20

    Superb update,atlast the scattered puzzle is solved

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…i don’t know what else i have achieved during this one month but i can definitely say a strict person has melted down to give longer opinion about the episodes of mine…thanks a lot dear…thank you so much

  8. Pritika

    So much plotting, so much things to revealed, such a wonderful episode
    Thanks for giving us a awesome content to read, what a brilliant writer u r , really hats off to ur writing, congratulations for ur this FF and all the best for ur coming FF’s and OS’s.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pritika..thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to say such wonderful lines….thank you ..thank you once again

  9. Nithu

    akka……………enta bagundo telsa nek…………..ib kanna ne ff 1000 times bagundi…………..

    1. VHM

      Thank you mohitha…thanks a lot nanna…neeku nacchindi kada …so nenu happy…awee so sweet of you chinna

  10. amazing episode…… please post next part as soon as possible really cant wait to read it……
    u know what I was really waiting for this part like what revelation might be but this would be something like all our patience was worth it…. it was really awesome…. u made me speechless…..
    I will request u one thing that after revelation please give some romantic moments of all four couples…..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aishwarya……next episode just uploaded…thank you so much for such wonderful lines and thank you for keeping patience and trust on me….yes there will be some nice moments of all the couples which will mark the end of this FF

  11. U r AWESOME SUPERB AMAZING EXCELLENT FANTASTIC FABULOUS what not di!!!!! Revelation was tooo socking…. I can’t even imagine such type of revelation …

    1. VHM

      Thank you…thank you…thank you…thank you…thank you so much Banita…what more can i say …thanks a lot

  12. Superb update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Komal…

  13. Awesome episode…… Plz don’t end this

    1. VHM

      thanks again…this ff will end in few more episodes..as there is no much content left to write..i am slowly closing all the uneven ends …..sorry to disappoint you on this dear but whenever i get some new thought i promise to comeback…but why are we talking of end here…there are some nice Obro and cute moments between couples lined up…

  14. Awesome akka chala bagundi just loved it akka superb waiting for the next post asap akka……… love u? take care akka.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much talli….chala happy neeku nacchindani telusukuni…fb lo peddaga kanipinchatam ledhu nuvvu?

  15. Sairan

    Ohh goddd Episode it was it was so long you know I started yesterday and I just completed it right now amazing superb are you a detective what do you watch some detective series the way you have joined the points with each other its commendable exceptional

    1. VHM

      Hey Sairan…sorry for such a long episode…i know i have tested everyones patience…actually i didnot want to prolong number of episodes so thought of making all the major revelations in one episode and the minor revelations in next episode…well after the revelations i will write short updates ……thank you so much for the compliment ……..

  16. Fffan1234

    Wow that was mindboggling khidakitod revelation of the truth. Are Sahil’s parents related to this?

    Looking forward to next part

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Fffan1234….well that’s what will be revealed in next episode ….next update very soon…….

  17. Navz

    Dii…..???? Wowwww…assalu intha ela oohinchav …..great dii.
    The way u unfolded all twists and situations and u didnt leave any loophole unlike cvs.
    Truly i only expected anika and gauri to be sisters but the way shreya was also added in was just superb.
    Luved it a lot dii.and luv u .byee dii.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotiii,

      Next episode nee kosam..kacchitham ga chaduvu and nenu nee comment gurinchi wait chesthanu….

      Love you too dear…love you loads

  18. Dhar

    Awesome episode dii ??but plz don’t end this ff ?i really want u to continue

    1. VHM

      Hey Dhar…thank you so much for the lines dear…i have almost closed all the lose ends dear so if i continue then it would seem to be dragging…i will come up with any OS or FF if i get a good concept in my brain…but still there is time for this FF to end…….and i hope you will continue to support me the same way till the end ……

  19. Awesome…..
    So Anika , Gauri & Shreya r sisters…….
    Felt really bad for Anika & gauri….
    So much of plotting…..Wonderfully written….
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. VHM

      Hey Shivika…….

      Thank you so much dear…yeah lot of plotting …well if had not joined all these then atleast for me this wouldn’t have been perfect…i was satisfied with the revelation till now and i hope all of you too….
      Thank you so much once again………
      Next update very soon

  20. Ashwinee

    Di…. I’m speechless. That’s it .

    1. VHM

      Hey Ashwinee…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…….love you so much

  21. So much plotting, so much things to revealed, such a wonderful episode
    Truly i only expected Anika and Gauri to be sisters but the way Shreya was also added in was just superb.
    Superb my thinking was right Shreya & Anika are sisters & Gauri is also their sister
    So Shreya Anika & Gauri are granddaughters of Mr. T.V. Bajaj
    The two ladies were Anika’s aunt & Gauri’s aunt
    Gauri was adopted by her mom
    Mr. Bajaj’s son & DIL were killed by Gauri’s uncle
    Gauri’s mom & Mr. Bajaj’s DIL were sisters
    This much was revelation in this part right remaining will be in next part right

    1. VHM

      Hey Shona…

      Thank you so much for the awesome analysis …yes dear your thinking was absolutely right….
      and yes dear till now whatever you have written is revealed…..

      Next update very soon as i have uploaded it and waiting for it to get posted

  22. Gayathri.visu

    Good afternoon di!
    Unexpected part di! From the beginning to ending each n every step is perfect! GM n AniRi emotional scenes, MahiYa’s engagement, gift scenes, shocking faces, revelation scenes, sisters reunion, Shivaay n Mahi, Khannaji’s anger……full part is perfect di. So now Khannaji is a brother of 4sisters! But why u didn’t bring Mr. Gogoi in these scenes di? Eagerly waiting for next part di.

    I KNEW IT!! So my guess is correct di…. AniRiYa are sisters! Yay!!! But I didn’t expect Mr. Chabbra n GF scene di. So next bandari bua n GM(that house secret) side story! Awesome di…..

    Bye di…. Take care n Keep smiling!!

    1. VHM

      Good evening Gayathri,

      Thank you so much dear….i am glad to know all the points you wrote were liked by you…yep i said Khanna will play a significant role in upcoming left over episodes …so it will happen so…
      Read the next episode end and you will have your answer about Mr.Gogoi ……..

      Next episode very soon dear…yes i said right your telepathy worked……ha ha ha i had to use to bind the situations…afterall it’s a fiction and we have liberty…….what say?

      By the way …i sent a FB friend request did you receive?

      Love you and take care

  23. Awesome di.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dwet…

  24. Nikita_jai29

    You are superbbbbbb dii…. Mind blowing imagination… Awesome plotting….. Hats off to your writing skills dii…

    1. VHM

      Aweeee …thank you so much Nikita….thanks a lot for those awesome words dear…..my bestie love you loads dear

  25. Niriha

    Awesome di mind blowing..shocking revelation I thought gauri and anika both only sisters but shreya also their sister I didn’t expected this fabulous twist loved it waiting for next part update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha…..thanks a lot…yeah almost every revelation is made…only small revelation is left and that will be done in next episode

  26. Arthi

    This was awesome….and the revelations were out of words…..and u know di u connected all the dots clearly and u made a perfect figure out of it …just loved it…..just loved…….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arthi….thanks a lot….thank you for such awesome lines

  27. Aashi26

    Yes didi u have disappointed me…by calling me Aashi26 instead of aashi…why are u being so formal didi…well coming to the story I’m speechless by the shocking revelations
    Post next one AS SOON AS POSSIBLE PLEASE….

    1. VHM

      Hey Aashi…sorry to disappoint you but the fact is i found two to three Aashi’s in TU page and who often post their opinion ..so to have a clear understanding of who is who…. i wrote your name as such………..

      Thank you so much dear for the compliments …… and next part i uploaded long back waiting for it to get posted on TU page

  28. Anu16

    Wow a long one, took quite a while to read but it was worth it… so AniRiYa r sisters… the update was systematic n well written… ur writing skills r fabulous… no doubts r left…it was just like real ib…
    But now the plot has come to an end, unfortunately… it had to one day….but plz dont stop writing…. Want to read more from u di… waiting for next…

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