THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 26 –FURTHER REVELATIONS AND TWIST IN EVENT

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
FIRST OF ALL THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE TREMENDOUS RESPONSE …….I WILL COME UP WITH FEW MORE EPISODES AND WILL JOIN ALL THE LOOSE ENDS TO END THE FF ON A GOOD NOTE…AS I DON’T WANT TO DRAG IT UNNECESSARILY ……….THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN TO EACH AND EVERY READER WHO POSTED THEIR OPINION ON LAST EPISODE..IT WAS INDEED SPECIAL SILVER JUBIEE FOR ME!!!!

Recap : Oberoi’s reuinion

Rudra ‘’Papa …I still have some doubt?’’
Tej ‘’Yes Rudra?’’
Rudra ‘’how did you all trap Kamini and Ranveer ?’’
Shivaay ‘’yes bade Papa …how did you and Papa get involved in all this?’’
Tej ‘’What do you think I got involved only at Ohri’s …’’
ShivOmRuHi and AniGaMya looked on ….
Tej ‘’okay I Understood let me explain’’

Tej’s Narration :

Tej ‘’

Om few months before when our business was at loss , you said that you wouldn’t take care of me…..that was the moment I realised how is it to be without a family and without their support during difficult times…….
After Om and Rudra came back and started supporting me …I felt I need to get them back and look upto them forever……….i was most surprised when Shakthi came forward to give away his share to save me..even after so I did so much bad with him for years……that was when I decided to find the truth…
The day when Om, Rudra, Shakthi left for home I was passing by the conference room…I was surprised to see the same business points I told Shivaay during his first day of office , on the board in conference room……my doubt started then…I thought whether Shivaay was involved in this , but I brushed off …… while returning home the same day I thought that if Shivaay helps me I wouldn’t accept his help as I was sticking to my ideologies of NKK……..but my heart definitely changed for Om and Jhanvi….. ‘’
OmRu looked at each other and then looked at ShivHi………Shivaay nodded them to be quiet………Tej Continued
Tej ‘’
Later after I apologised Om and Jhanvi …….. Pinky’s words and Shakthi’s face haunted me the whole night…I thought I should pay back Shakthi and try to find Shivaay’s truth…but how was the question…..
I was remembering previous incidents…….
An year ago when I asked Shivaay to leave from the home I remembered Pinky asserting that Shivaay was her child …which made me understand Pinky’s belief of Shivaay being her own son an oberoi………..Shakthi initially resisted but later on went silent for quite a while…….i couldn’t understand why was he not resisting further……….
After that too when Shivaay said that had Pinky not conspired against Anika , he would have fought with entire world to prove his identity, so I thought Shivaay also believed he was an Oberoi ……..but Shakthi still remained silent as if he was in thoughts……….
After all the arguments between everyone Shakthi then said a sentence ….which was constantly ringing in my ears till today morning , until truth was out and that sentence was
‘’ Shakthi ‘’fine I understand Shivaay , you cannot trust your mother, but you can trust your father…even if you feel you are not Pinky’s son you are still my son, my blood is running in you, I will prove this…just give me sometime…I will prove this trust me’’ ”
This sentence was making me think again and again that I am missing something……
It was then I remembered that 34 years back Roop’s call of Shakthi’s affair with Kamini during business trip………
All my puzzle pieces were linking up with one another………i was thinking of some major conspiracy from then on…….
I decided to speak with Shakthi……..but business work’s took priority then……….
Later the next day when I was coming to meet Om for some work I heard Jhanvi’s and Om’s convo that they would forgive me and accept me if I bring Shivaay back ……..
With these thoughts I went to have a talk with Mr.Gogoi for some work, and during discussions the way he was giving me suggestions and the way he was doing discussion was again hinting me towards Shivaay’s involvement….. ‘’
Shivaay’s eyes were twinkling with pride………..and Mahi, Om, Rudra smiled ……but all four changed their expressions……..
Tej continued ‘’
Day by day my doubts were getting higher and higher and my heart was asking for shivaay to come home back and join us as our family……..but I knew him…I knew Shivaay wouldn’t come back until I or someone prove’s him to be an Oberoi…….i again thought of speaking to Shakthi ………
It was then I got the invite for IIRO and I found Shivaay’s name in the invitation card………I went to check on whether he was our Shivaay or not ……I was thinking and wishing for him to be ur Shivaay and my wish turned true……..
I met Shivaay at Zodiac but I saw Mahi, Anika and Sahil too…so I thought Mahi was with Shivaay., and my brain started working on a plan then.…
The same night , I spoke to shakthi and raised my boubts…Shakthi assured me that he was almost sure he didn’t have any physical relation with Kamini….so there was no chance of Shivaay-Mahi being his and Kamini’s son ….I assured him that we both will bring out Shivaay’s birth truth ……..Shakthi was extremely happy and I was also happy to see my younger brother happy………..
As luck favoured Om and Rudra came to me to set up a mini interview…so I purposely asked them whether they are going to take Shivaay’s interview ……….and the response from them was positive……..
My plan was to meet Shivaay and make him accept to let Mahi come out in public to bring Kamini and Ranveer out…..but again Om and Rudra surprised me and took Mahi’s interview and I was very happy because I need not to do anything……
After Mahi’s interview I saw Mahi and Ranveer talking….I also got to know they were going to meet Mahi at Ohri’s in two hours……i was about to enter and meet Mahi when Mahi left suddenly ……so I dropped the idea of meeting Mahi and I followed Ranveer ..i got to know where both of them were hiding since an year …I eves dropped and got to know they planned Mahi’s kidnap…….
I immediately called Shakthi and asked him to be alert …I then asked our security to arrange trackers and alert Police ……..
As decided Mahi and Kamini met in Ohri’s ….i asked a server at the restaurant to give tracker to Mahi hiding it under lid of water glass….
Then I messaged Mahi that Kamini and Ranveer have planned to kidnap him and he must go with them to get the truth of Shivaay…I asked him not to worry as Shakthi and I would follow him and I would keep track of him..i asked him to take the tracker which will be under the lid of water glass……..thankfully Mahi did the same without Kamini and Ranveer’s notice…… ‘’
Mahi ‘’yes, I got the message and after I read I was looking at AnikaOmRu …I was about to forward the message but Kamini started speaking and Ranveer observing , so I had no chance to inform you guys and everything got messed up…I am so sorry Anika Bhabhi…’’
Anik ‘’it’s okay Mahi…you are safe that’s more important’’ she spoke and looked angrily at Shivaay……
Tej continued ………..
Tej ‘’
Shakthi was behind Ohri’s left entrance and was fitted with Tracker and Microphone….
Everything was going as per plan…but What was unexpected was they have seen me and Ranveer pushed me ,I was hurt and lost the track of them as my tracker, mobile and Bluetooth were broken after I fell down………I was hurt ….but when I turned back I was surprised to see Khanna and Ranveer unconscious……i was wondering whether someone else has kidnapped Mahi, Kamini ……I tried to inform Shakthi and Mahi but I remembered my phone was broken….… yet I was determined not to leave them…..so I followed Kamini in a hurry….i followed them as fast I could ..but it was late then..Kamini took Mahi and Shakthi inside and goons have already tied them and were waiting outside for next orders from Kamini……Kamini took Mahi’s and Shakthi’s mobile and threw it away….luckily Shakthi’s Mobile fell in sand and wasn’t damaged…..i took Shakthi’s mobile and When I opened a message popped up……..Shakthi left a message asking me to inform Shivaay, Om, Anika and Rudra to come here as he will be confronting Kamini and instigating her so that she will spill the truth…….
I tried Om and Rudra’s mobile but all in vain………Shivaay also didn’t pick the call….but when I dialled Anika’s number someone from om/rudra/Shivaay picked the call and I asked all of them to reach Godown near Good luck Chawl……….
I later on alerted Police and asked them to silently do their work of tackling Goons…….by the time ShivOmRu came Police tackled goons without noise……..
Later on you know how Shakthi and Mahi have brought out the truth…..
‘’
Tej completed………
Om, Rudra, Shivaay, Anika, Gauri, Sumo, Mahi were smiling………Tej and Shakthi couldn’t understand anything……
Tej ‘’why are you all smiling’’
Rudra ‘’Papa same pinch…aap sach mein hamare papa hi ho ….aap badal nahi gaye ‘’
ShivOmHi ‘’Shut up Rudra’’
Tej ‘’what? Kya bol rahe ho Rudra’’
Om ‘’Kuch nahi Papa…..i will explain…………actually we too made almost a same plan of bringing out Mahi infront of the media in order to bring out Kamini and Ranveer….so our thoughts matched….but the difference was we didn’t want to involve shivaay and you wanted to involve shivaay ‘’
Shivaay ‘’yeah…had you all involved me then we might have tackled more precisely’’
Anika ‘’you would have not accepted…………’’ she stopped
Shivaay ‘’complete the line Anika…you were saying something’’
Anika didn’t respond…….He looked at her and signalled her to speak , but she didn’t bother…….he understood she was annoyed with him, and that pinched and hurt him all the more…..
Tej ‘’ohh is it….but when did you decide’’
Rudra ‘’not we this idea was by Anika Bhabhi and we just made this plan’’
Shakthi came and hugged Anika and said ‘’Thank you so much Beta……we are really lucky to have got you as our daughter…I am so proud of you’’
Anika smiled happily
Shakthi ‘’but when did you meet Anika and Shivaay’’
Dadi ‘’Shakthi that’s a long story….i will explain later…now we must go home and make arrangements to welcome Shivaay, Anika, Mahi and Sahil…so let’s go’’
Shivaay ‘’but dadi, we are staying in hotel and we need to go back after the conference’’
Tej ‘’what going back…am not going to send you anywhere’’
Mahi ‘’but our business is set up in shillong and we…….‘’
Tej ‘’we will decide it later…first come home and we will discuss everything later…I have decided to relax not decided to stop finalising decisions…understood’’
Everyone smiled and left to Oberoi mansion…….after they reached …….ShivAni MaHil were looking the Mansion with sparkling eyes from outside…everyone had their share of memories attached…..
Khanna brought a bouquet and handed it over to Anika………
Anika ‘’Khanna ji …why are you giving me ?’’
Khanna ‘’Anika mam…I have a personal request…for the first time in my entire service I am asking anything from anyone from ths house…will you fulfil my request mam…please’’
Anika ‘’you need not request Khanna ji…just let me know..if it’s in my hand …I will definitely fulfill’’
Khanna ‘’I am an employee here but I have no siblings in real life…will you tie me Rakhi every year Anika mam? ‘’
ShivOmRuHi were shocked listening to Khanna’s request and Anika was all the way smiling happily…..
Gauri ‘’Khanna ji why only Anika di, I sumo and Anika di all will tie rakhi to you’’ she turned towards Anika and Sumo and spoke ‘’am I saying correct ?’’
Anika ‘’yes Khanna ji …but we have a condition…if you want us to be your sister then stop calling ‘’JI’’ after taking our names…so no madam or Ji…agree or not’’
Khanna smiled and nodded and thanked them……
Shivaay ‘’ab tho Khanna ko bahut izzat deni padegi OmRu…saale sahib jo ban gaye charo ke ‘’
Except Anika everyone smiled …Sahil stepped in between and went to Khanna and said ‘’you will also be brother to them but remember I am the first priority else I will not share my sisters as your sisters…….’’
Khanna promised him ……..
By then Pinky and Jhanvi were ready with Arthi thali and materials………..they did Arthi of all four and everyone stepped in ……..
Shivaay Anika Mahi felt very emotional seeing OM after almost an year they were just looking everywhere and smiling……..after sometime Shivaay left for his room while Anika took Sahil to his room and OmRu showed Mahi his room………
Shivaay waited for Anika in his room …….Anika entered and laid on bed ……….
Shivaay ‘’Anika are you okay? Why are you lying on bed? Shall I call doctor’’
Anika didn’t respond
Shivaay ‘’Anika… i…I …I am sorry…..i didn’t want to hurt you…I was very much tensed for Mahi and spoke some real harsh words to you…I am really sorry…….please don’t be annoyed and pease don’t stop talking to me …you know I cannot bear this’’
Anika cried silently and she didn’t wish to speak…she slowly slipped into sleep……..
Shivaay sighed and left from room……….he was very sad that his happiness was still incomplete…..
Next three days passed by happily and ShivOmRuHi had some real happy Obro moments, kitchen moments ……AniGaMya too bonded well and Anika had felt some connection with Gauri……..Only thing that continued was Anika wasn’t in talking terms with Shivaay……..
Shivaay tried his level best to make Anika speak to him but as he started attempting she used to either sleep or walk off in pretext of some work…….Shivaay’s all attempts were failing………..
Finally the much awaited Monday arrived , the day for which they all came from Shillong to Mumbai………
Everyone left for GOBE International…the ceremony started and Shivaay took the proceedings quite well…….after Minister inaugurated…..GUEST OF HONOR T.V.BAJAJ came and spoke ……
Shivaay was looking at him all the way ……T.V.Bajaj also gave attention to Shivaay in between………till the event’s in day completed T.V.BAJAJ stayed back…..
After the event when everyone were leaving for lunch…Mr.Bajaj met Tej and Shakthi…they were speaking something ……
Shivaay and Mr.Gogoi too met and were talking while laughing and smiling in between…….Tej noticed this and frowned his eyebrows …but then continued to talk to Mr.Bajaj…….
Later Shivaay excused himself and was walking while Mr.Chabbra came infront of him…….
Mr.CHABBRA and Shivaay came face to face now ……..
Mr.Chabbra was about to leave when Shivaay stopped him …….
Mr.Chabbra ‘’Yes Mr.Shivaay …why did you stop me ?’’
Shivaay ‘’Actually I wanted to speak to you regarding past incidents’’
Mr.Chabbra ‘’I am not interested Mr.Shivaay, you did what you wanted and I am in no mood to recall all those’’
Seeing Shivaay and Mr.Chabbra’s face off Tej excused himself from Mr.Chabbra and came there………. Also Shakthi, Om, Rudra, Mahi came to them
Mr.Chabbra looked at all of them and spoke ‘’Look I am not interested in speaking anything to anyone of you…so it’s better we don’t create a scene ‘’
A voice came from behind ‘’But I want to speak today’’
Everyone looked towards the voice……It was PRIYANKA !!!

Precap : A SURPRISE PROPOSAL… !!!

So this was the twenty sixth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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75 Comments
  1. Pooma

    hi didi your ff is awesome i m new in commenting but ur ff is my inspiration

    1. VHM

      Welcome Poorna ….Thank you so much for posting your first comment on this FF and this episode…i hope you would continue to do so for the left over few more episodes …thanks a lot again

  2. Pooma

    hi didi your ff is awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much dear

  3. Pooma

    hi didi your ff is awesome aur oberoi union was the best

    1. VHM

      I am sorry i misspell your name….thank you so much POOMA….

  4. Pooma

    your ff is awesome aur oberoi union was the best

    1. VHM

      Glad to know that you loved the Oberoi union

  5. Superb akka chala chala bagundi..and thank u so much for your msg in fb yes akka u r correct I am a classical dancer akka…??pls… Post asap pls…

    1. VHM

      Thank you enduku talli…i must thank you for your patience ….i am so happy to know that you are classical dancer..more power to you dear

      1. Nithu

        omm di………i dnt know ur telugite……nenu kuda telugu ammayi…………..chala happy ga undi……nuvvu telugu ammayi ani telusu koni………..epi matram……chala ante chala ante bagundi……………

      2. VHM

        Yes Nithu i am from Andhra Pradesh and Telangana….me too so happy to know you are also Telugite…thank you nanna nee compliments choosi chala happy ga feel ayyanu

  6. Wow yaar it was awesome… Loved it…. If u can’t drag tis ff then u can come with another ff na….. I am waiting for the next one…. Post it as soon as possible

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya…i know this part was not upto the mark ..but trust me even i wish i cannot drag …coming to this part this episode was important to be portrayed like this…next episodes will be based on this episode…..

  7. Congrats for your 26 episode….so happy for you

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much…thanks a lot

  8. Shraddha-DBO

    It was awsum…..
    Loved all family moments?

    Waiting for some couple romances

    1. VHM

      Hey Shraddha-DBO …thank you so much dear….couple moments on cards definitely…but will have to lay the foundation rather than forcibly putting up the episodes… which i will be doing in upcoming episodes…

      ALL THE BEST TO YOU FOR YOUR OS COMPETITION

  9. VHM dear, you rocked once again….. khannaji annika didi ka bhai…wow…that part is soo nice..

    I love it…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arpita…thanks a lot…yeah he will have a big role to play in upcoming episodes …
      Thanks again …

  10. Rasika

    Nice… ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Rasika

  11. ow yaar it was awesome… Loved it…. If u can’t drag tis ff then u can come with another ff na….. I am waiting for the next one…. Post it as soon as possible
    Congrats for your 26 episode….so happy for you

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shona …..what a coincidence yours and Sagithya’s are almost same…so i would repeat my lines to you as i wrote for sagithya…

      i know this part was not upto the mark ..but trust me even i wish i cannot drag …coming to this part this episode was important to be portrayed like this…next episodes will be based on this episode…..

      Thank you so much…thanks a lot

  12. JhanviPatel

    Hello diii u nailed it again…. I am in love with your ff crazily… From morning I am desperate to read your ff… And about this part… I am really impress by your story line and the way to explain each and every situation… The sences of anishivmahisahil entry in om after one year, anika’s ignorances towards shivaay, shivaay efforts to talk with his ladylove… Are just running through my eyes… I was feeling that I was present there at that place.. thanks a lot diii… Superb u are just awesome… Tooo gooodddd waiting for next part… Plzzz post as soon as possible… ?????

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Jhanvi …personally i didn’t liked this episode but this was very much required for upcoming episodes …so i will try to make it more interesting before ending this FF in few episodes…

      I am so glad to know you were imagining the scenes …awee so sweet of you to say so…thank you so much once again

  13. Niriha

    Awesome di….fabulous update Loved it ?????tej also thought that same plan wow lovely and di plz pair mahi with someone I want to see his partner it’s my request..give more family moments eagerly waiting for next part update soon di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha…personally i didn’t like the episode…but glad to know you liked it…thank you for supporting me …but this episode was very mucb required as a foundation for upcoming episodes….next part very soon dear

  14. It was awesome
    Continue
    Nice story

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Xyz….thanks a lot…

  15. Pritika

    awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pritika…

  16. Dhar

    I have nothing more to say , u know what i always get speechless when i read ur ff , u write like water in the perfect flow , thanku thanku for giving us such a wonderful gift

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dhar…personally i didn’t like this episode but i had to write this as this will lay foundation for upcoming closure ….will try to make this much more interesting…thank you so much for your patience and support……thanks a lot as i am the one who must thank you to a great extent for the awesome words

  17. Ashwinee

    As always, you nailed it di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashwinee…no dear this episode i didn’t nail it…i will try to make it more interesting from next episodes……

  18. That was a superb update. Loved it. Looking forward to the new twist…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much fffan1234…thanks a lot

  19. Awesome di. Loved it. ? ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much dwet…thanks a lot

  20. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dii…. Eagerly waiting for the next update… You can come with its sequel…. With further improvement in your plot… It is my suggestion….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nikita….i know this episode is not upto the mark but all i can say is keep the trust intact as this episode is a base or to say foundation for the next few episodes with a major track and finally the conclusion…sorry to disappoint you…but i will keep your suggestion in mind…..thanks again dear…….

  21. Pls do continue with ffs. Your ff is inspiring. Don’t feel bad even u do not get comments. I am sure there are many silent readers like me who enjoy your ff lot. Even though I don’t comment but I am a daily costumer of ur ff. So do include my comment in our every epi. Your imagination is just adorable awwwww. Post next epi asap.?

    1. VHM

      Welcome Smile…thank you so much for posting your opinion on the episode…thanks a lot for the encouraging words…i am glad you liked the FF…though would iclude your comment in every episode to come but will be glad to read your comment when posted …no hard and fast rule that you do it as i can completely understand schedules…thanks again

    1. VHM

      thank you once again dear

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much san

  22. Awesome…..Khidkitod Update…. 😉
    Loved d family moments….
    Khanna & Anika scene was sweet….
    Anika ignoring Shivaay is justified….
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot…yeah anika time running now…next part very soon

  23. Navz

    Yeah…hurray…anika is not talking wid sri sri sri kanji ankhawali billuji ..who always thinks that he can only show tadi..diii…loved this act of anika.
    What a great explanation by tej…raamudu manchi baaludu type lo jarigindantha chakkaga cheppesadu tej uncle..
    Khanna…BIL of shivomru…now they treat them well for pakka ..if not anikagaurisaumya will show their power.hahahaha
    Now i think priyanka will propose for marriage with dev..????…50-50 chances ..
    Haa dii…enjoying at grandma’s house with cousins.
    Diii….this pinky ponky irritating me like anything…huhhhh.
    Gn dii..luv u a lots.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii,

      Thank you so much for the awesome lines…thank you for highlighting the scenes that you liked …good good enjoy with your grandparents on my behalf too…i miss my grandparents so much ….well i am so happy for you…my namaskarams to them!!!

      Luv you too dear…..hope you ahve such splendid time through out your life

  24. Navz

    I commented abt pinky ponky of ib serial..irritating lady.

    1. VHM

      Ha ha ha …i am not watching these days…just reading the updates and leaving…i cannot stand her

  25. Madhuani

    Awesome di…
    Finally of united.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Madhuani…thanks a lot

  26. Alekhika20

    Superb update
    The family moments were so lovely

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…it’s again a time to jump ..second time to see two line opinion by you…despite of being a very bad episode from me…thanks a lot dear …you made my day

  27. Amazingggg….. Update di… As usual u nailed it…. Khannaji ko vi ab behan mil gaya…. Lol…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…lol…he has something very important coming up….i promise you will be happy to read it

  28. Firstly big congratulations for lottt of appreciation in the form of comments on the previous episode…ur fan following is increasing di…
    Nd talking about today’s episode it good as usual..waiting for shivika reunion…u r connecting every dots very precisely…
    Take ur time di nd came back with nd episode full of fun bromance romance nd happy family moments…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Zaveesha for the tremondous support…yes last episode i didn’t expect so many comments it was such a nice feeling all thanks to all readers including you…

      well coming to this episode i repeat i know this is not perfect and i too personally didn’t like but trust me this is just the foundation for upcoming tracks and then you will get connected why i wrote this….

      Keep supporting me…and i will keep your suggestion in mind….

  29. Amazingggg….. Update di… As usual u nailed it… khannaji ko vi ab behen milgaya…. Lol…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita..ha ha ha Khanna ki behnein……lol

  30. Arthi

    Asusal di…..out of words……and Anika now became taadibaaz ha ha….and loves this post…..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arthi…thanks a lot…yes Tadibaaz Anika is back to churn Shivaay

  31. Katz

    Hi vhm… you are amazing as always, with lots of twists… Waiting for the next episode… and thanks for encouraging me…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Katz…thanks a lot…yes few twists ahead and this FF will end…this episode is the foundation for upcoming twists….you were superb dear i have said truth in your ff episode

  32. Haridhra

    U Rocked it … But sad for Shivika n I knw everything will get fine so plz post next one Asap ka.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Haridhra-the author…next part very soon

  33. Awesome khidkitod update di??……
    Atlast the whole family is together ?…
    Khanna and Anisomri scene was too good…
    Shivika and SaHi entering Oberoi Mansion was a very emotional scene…
    Anika angry with billuji….
    Hope everything will be fine soon..

    And di as always you rocked…?
    Post soon di??……

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sofiya…i knew this part was not upto the readers expectations but i will try to make it more interesting from next part…and in few episodes this FF will end on a very good note

  34. Jerry_36

    Wow di. The episode is fabulous. Congratulations for your previous response from the readers. I hope you get much more love 🙂
    I loved everything. You are an amazing writer❤

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Vedika…yeah last episode was unbelievable for me …i seriously didnot expect so much of response …all thanks to every reader of this FF including you….more love to me and you as well…as your writing is much awesome dear…..thanks a lot once again dear

  35. Gayathri.visu

    Sooooooooooooo sorry di!
    I m not busy or have any another problem! But don’t know how I miss this part. From morning I m searching ur ff in TU page, but I can’t find it. Now I reading this part in my TU account bcz of ur links. Soooo sorry di.

    WOW!! My most awaited, 5th part di. So my telepathy is worked…..yippeeee!! Rudra’s little dialogue is good. Khannaji-Anika part really emotional!

    So I wanna stop here di. First I thought to comment next part but I promise u na, thats why I m commenting this part di(only little comment). Bcz I don’t want disappoint u di.

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