THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 23 – THE UNFORTUNATE TURN OF EVENTS

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Om ran towards the parking but by then Tej left, Anika panicked thinking about the upcoming consequences and above all the impact on the relation between her and Shivaay……..Rudra held his head in dismay….

Anika ‘’Rudra take Khanna ji and Ranveer to hospital and keep an eye on Ranveer’’
Anika ‘’om we must inform Shivaay ‘’

Om looked at her in disbelief……
Anika ‘’whatever it might be…whoever it might have done…I don’t want to hide it from Shivaay…so first let me inform him…whatever happens I am ready to take punishment…but I will inform ..this is important’’
Om looked at her and she was teary eyed……he came to her and put his hands on her shoulders and assured her that everything will be all right………
Om called Sumo and asked her to go to Zodiac and then called Gauri and asked her to come to Ohri’s……

Anika took her phone and with shivering hands called Shivaay……
Shivaay ‘’Hello….Anika’’
Anika ‘’hel..hello…Shivaay’’ she cried

Shivaay was scared
Shivaay ‘’Anika…why are you crying? Is everything alright?’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay….woh …Mahi….Mahi ‘’ she cried

Shivaay ‘’I am getting tensed Anika…what happened to mahi ?’’
Anika ‘’Mahi is …Mahi is …’’ she cried

Om snatched the phone from Anika’s hand as she was crying terribly……..
Shivaay ‘’hello Anika…Anika are you listening’’
Om ‘’Shivaay…’’
Shivaay ‘’Om…what happened …tell me clearly’’

Om ‘’Shivaay …relax….come down as fast as possible to Ohri’s we are here…’’
Shivaay ‘’what happened will you tell me first? Why do you want me to come there?’’
Om ‘’Shivaay…something major happened so please come …I cannot explain in call….’’
Shivaay ‘’okay I am coming……..no…wait….Sahil is alone’’
Om ‘’ I have messaged Sumo…she is near by…she is coming there and she will take care of Sahil’’
Shivaay ‘’fine I am coming there’’

Shivaay informed Sahil that he will back and sumo will be with him…….he was about to leave when Sumo entered…Shivaay patted Sumo and drove to Ohri’s
Shivaay went near Anika …she was crying terribly out of fear of how is Mahi and how will Shivaay react…..

Shivaay ‘’anika …tell me clearly what happened? Why were you crying taking Mahi’s name? where is Mahi?’’
Om ‘’Shivaay I will let you know everything’’
Om explained everything to Shivaay and Shivaay stood up in anger……
Anika looked at him …she too stood up and
Anika ‘’Shivaay…please listen to me’’

Shivaay ‘’Shut up……..just shut up………have you lost sense……what were you thinking while planning all this……..can’t you stay normal without taking any risks..…..i warned you not to do anything about reuniting me with my family…why don’t you understand …are you happy now? Just speak out damn it?’’ he screamed
Anika bent her head down

Om ‘’Shivaay …Anika Bhabhi is not at fault…everything was going as per plan…but’’
Shivaay ‘’but what …did you get what you wanted? No and above all that you have put Mahi’s life in danger……you all know that Kamini and Ranveer…what they did to us , me, Anika , Prinku everyone in our family and still you choose to take this risk…why …Om, I can understand Anika’s deeds..she will do what she wants…only what she wants…doesn’t care about me, what I say, why I say …. but I can never expect you to do this…..’’

Anika ‘’I am sorry Shivaay…my intention was to return your happiness….i didn’t expect this’’
Shivaay ‘’you must be sorry….now listen Anika …if anything happens ..even a scratch happens to mahi you will face the same fate as Om’s choti maa is facing now …I will never forgive you……so pray that he should be safe’’

Anika collapsed listening Shivaay’s words …..Shivaay saw her falling but didn’t move…….Om went to her and picked her and made her sit…..Shivaay didn’t react….Anika was looking at Shivaay all the while with tears flowing…..
Om ‘’you cannot do this with Bhabhi…she was trying to give you happiness and you are getting angry over her’’

Shivaay ‘’Om what and why she has done is something I am not interested to know now…first we have to search Mahi…and then we can assess who is right and who is wrong……for that first we need to go to Khanna and ask him what he saw before getting unconscious’’
Om ‘’ok fine …let’s go…..’’
Shivaay sat in the car , followed by Om but Anika didn’t move……Shivaay saw her angrily……..
Om ‘’Bhabhi …come we will go and start our search……….’’

Anika didn’t respond…….only words that rang in her ears were Shivaay’s warning that he will give her same fate as he has given to Pinky…….
Om ‘’bhabhi …..why aren’t you speaking anything…come Bhabhi …don’t you want to find Mahi ? ‘’
Anika sat still not a word came out of her mouth…no tears too…she was sitting lifeless…….Om was now getting scared seeing Anika’s state…….Shivaay frustratingly got down…….Om was shaking Anika but she didn’t respond….Om looked at Shivaay and Shivaay turned his head other side……
Shivaay ‘’Om …if she is not interested leave her here…we must go …….’’
Om ‘’how can you be so angry on her?’’
Shivaay ‘’I am not angry…I am distraught…..and now I cannot think anything except Mahi’s safety…’’
Gauri reached there…..

Om ‘’gauri take care of Bhabhi…we are going to meet Khanna at the hospital …’’
Gauri ‘’but what happened to her?’’
Om ‘’might be she is in shock…ensure she gets fine and keep updating me’’
Gauri held Anika and Om and Shivaay left from there towards Hospital……..

—————-CITY HOSPITAL
Shivaay and Om met Rudra at the hospital…he was outside the room waiting for Khanna and ranveer to get consciousness….
Shivaay ‘’Rudra Khanna woke up?’’
Rudra ‘’no…I am waiting here …they are still unconscious’’

Om ‘’what did doctors say?’’
Rudra ‘’nothing to worry …they are under the impact of chloroform…will wake up in few minutes’’
Shivaay ‘’thank God…let me go and check……’’
Shivaay stepped in to see only Khanna in the room…..OmRu looked at each other with shock…..
Shivaay ‘’wasn’t Ranveer in the same room?’’

Rudra ‘’bhayya he was here …I saw him he was in this room’’
Shivaay ‘’then where is he now Rudra?’’
Rudra ‘’trust me bhayya I was waiting outside and didn’t take off my eyes from the room even once’’
Om ‘’Shivaay window is open…that means…’’

Shivaay ‘’that means he flew from the window’’
Rudra ‘’what will we do now……’’
Shivaay ‘’we have to wait for Khanna to wake up…because now he is the only one who can tell us exactly what happened’’
Om was in thoughts……..

Om ‘’khanna is not the only one who knows what happened…there was someone else who knows what happened…’’
Shivaay ‘’what do you mean? Who is other?’’

Om ‘’Mr. Tej Singh Oberoi’’
Rudra ‘’bhayya please don’t bring him into this …I know you don’t like him but now he is changing …he cannot get involved in all this’’
Shivaay ‘’exactly …why will bade papa do this?’’
Om ‘’I don’t know the reason but I saw him leaving in his car exactly after Mahi and Kamini disappeared’’
Shivaay ‘’Om say everything clearly…it’s about Mahi and I cannot take any chance and leave any clue’’

Om ‘’when Kamini dragged Mahi out …and Mahi walked …..we three also got up to follow…but Anika Bhabhi fell down..and Rudra and I first addressed to Anika Bhabhi and later came out……after coming out we saw Khanna and Ranveer lying unconscious…..we were looking for them everywhere but in vain…that’s when I saw Mr.Tej leaving in his car from the parking….’’
Shivaay ‘’wait …you said Anika fell down…but how?’’

Rudra ‘’she fell as she got hit by a chair …I think she didn’t see in hurry and hit the chair and fell down’’
Om ‘’no Rudra…the chair was placed in between the way……while usually Ohri’s staff take care to set the chairs in their respective places as soon as their guests leave…Ohri’s is known for their strict service and maintenance……’’
Shivaay ‘’this means somebody was following you or keeping an eye on you…..and to take away Mahi they did this’’

Om ‘’who else Shivaay…it’s Mr.Tej…….he never wants you to come back to oberoi mansion…’’ Om turned towards Rudra and said
Om ‘’Rudra do you remember yesterday night he specifically asked us whether we are going to take interview of Shivaay……’’ he continued

Om ‘’that’s not only the case Shivaay…as soon as the interview of Mahi got telecasted he left OM, Gauri messaged me…so we had to leave hurriedly from GOBE …all these …all these point that he is the one behind Mahi’s kidnap…….still do you both have any doubts?’’
Rudra couldn’t believe his father would stoop to this level…even Shivaay was listening to Om shocked…

Rudra ‘’this time I will confront papa and ask him why he is behind Shivaay bhayya…why he doesn’t want Shivaay bhayya to reunite with us…..’’
Shivaay ‘’no…no Rudra…you will not do anything of that sort….i can understand his fears…and as a father his fears are right…so don’t question him…we will find Mahi in our own way’’
Rudra ‘’no bhayya…this time he has to answer…if he doesn’t want to accept you it’s fine…but why to kidnap Mahi bhayya …he shouldn’t have done this…..he shouldn’t have done’’
Shivaay ‘’relax Rudra…I am saying right …I don’t think Bade papa is involved…let’s wait for Khanna to wake up …then we can decide’’

Khanna by the time was getting conscious……..ShivOmRu ran to him and Shivaay sat beside him…….
Khanna ‘’Shivaay sir’’
Shivaay ‘’Khanna’’ and Shivaay hugged Khanna..the second time…….
Khanna reciprocated and had tears …so did Shivaay…Shivaay wiped his tears and
Shivaay ‘’Khanna don’t try to move so much…how are you now? ‘’
Khanna ‘’Shivaay sir …I am fine……but don’t worry sir …I am really okay’’
Shivaay ‘’Khanna I need your help…will you help me’’

Khanna’’you need to order sir …not request…’’ he looked towards OmRu and spoke
Khanna ‘’Om sir …I am sorry …I was doing my duty but someone closed my nose for few seconds and I went unconscious…’’
Om ‘’that’s okay Khanna..i understand’’
Shivaay ‘’khanna now please remember what happened before you fell unconscious…because Mahi is kidnapped’’

Khanna ‘’Sir…when they both left ..i followed …they took left turn from Ohri’s and as i was about to go behind them…someone from my behind closed my nose for few seconds…I tried to resist and turned ..i am not sure but I think I saw Tej sir standing behind at some distance as if he was writhing in pain and later I don’t know what happened’’
Om ‘’I said Shivaay…it’s Mr.Tej behind all this…now I will go and confront him to bring Mahi…’’
Shivaay ‘’no Om Bade papa is innocent’’
Om ‘’you are believing Mr.Tej even now’’

Shivaay ‘’yes , I have a reason to do so….’’
Rudra ‘’what reason bhayya ?’’
Shivaay ‘’Khanna said Mahi and Kamini ji turned towards left of Ohri’s and Om said bade papa left from parking……am I right?’’
Om ‘’yes………’’

Shivaay ‘’Om …parking area is on the right of Ohri’s and if bade papa had done this Kamini and Mahi would have turned right not left…even if we assume he is behind all this, then he would have left immediately after kidnapping them , not waited till you all come out and then leave getting noticed by you ………so it means someone else is behind this…..but who ?’’
Om and Rudra were also thinking , while Om’s thoughts turned towards Anika…..
Om ‘’ you guys think what to do …while I call Gauri to know about Bhabhi’’
He saw his mobile had no signals…so he stepped out of the room……..he was about to dial Gauri’s number when his phone ringed…..

Om ‘’gauri, I was about to call you, …how is bhabhi’’
Gauri ‘’Om I am trying to reach you since long time, but you were not reachable……thank God atleast the call got connected now….listen to me carefully Om …..I am in city hospital…Anika Bhabhi is not talking or responding…she is behaving as if she lost her life…she is not responding Om , I tried a lot but then I got scared and so I had to bring her to hospital ‘’
Om ‘’what ? where are you now? I mean which floor which room ?’’ he screamed……
Shivaay and Rudra rushed out…..and brought him in…….
Shivaay looked at Om worriedly

Rudra ‘’what happened O?’’
Om ‘’Anika Bhabhi…….he sat with a thud’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika?’’
Om looked at him teary eyed
Shivaay was now even more worried ……..

Shivaay ‘’what happened to Anika ? speak out Om…where is she and how is she?’’
Om ‘’she is here in this hospital…she is not responding…she is in shock and lying in trauma..doctors are treating her.……’’
Shivaay ‘’what? this can’t happen…. Tell me Om all this is a lie…..’’
Om ‘’this happened because of you Shivaay…all because of you……..you have reacted so bad and with so much anger that she thought she lost you …..you didn’t even care to lift her up when she collapsed and this was enough for her to get ensured that she lost your togetherness and got into trauma……’’
Shivaay ‘’no this can’t be…tell me where is she…’’ he screamed…..

Om ‘’second floor room no 206’’
Shivaay ran towards Anika without stopping and colliding with everyone and everything that came in his way……..
Gauri saw him and tried to stop but he entered the room…….

Shivaay saw Anika lying still…she was breathing with her eyes open , had no movement, no reaction , she was still ..….Doctors were trying to bring her back from shock …but all their attempts were going in vain…..Shivaay was feeling as if he was losing the battle…one side Mahi in trouble and other side Anika ‘s trauma………..he hit his fist to the wall in distress…….
Om Ru reached there…….and held Shivaay……..Shivaay wiped his tears and said to Om Ru……..
Shivaay ‘’Om …we must find Mahi first’’

Om ‘’have you gone mad…you need to stay with Anika Bhabhi now…she needs you now…we both will bring Mahi….’’
Shivaay ‘’I must find Mahi to bring Anika back to normal….she wanted to give me my happiness , my family,….. by proving I am an oberoi and if I prove that for her she will be back…now I will fight for my identity only to get her back..…I know her…I know her happiness lies in my happiness and if I am happy she will be back ..back to me as my Anika…’’
Om Ru hugged Shivaay …Shivaay reciprocated with tight hug……….

They all wiped their tears and set out to find Mahi……while leaving
Shivaay ‘’Gauri stay here and keep taking care of my Anika…she is my life …my happiness…my strength …my everything…without her I am also dead ………so please take care of her’’
Gauri ‘’jiju…I will …just be back with Mahi jiju soon….’’ Gauri handed over Anika’s mobile to Shivaay…..
Shivaay took Anika’s mobile and placed it in his pocket…………

Om ‘’Gauri keep me updated’’
Shivaay wiped his tears and with utmost confidence left from there setting his hair in usual style……..
They were driving towards Ohri’s to find clue from the place of Incident……Khanna also joined them…..
They reached Ohri’s and Shivaay observed everything keenly……..he sat back thinking…….
Shivaay tried to assess ……….and finally after sometime spoke……..

Shivaay ‘’if I am not wrong as expected Ranveer and Kamini have planned all this before hand ………’’
Om ‘’What? But Kamini herself also disappeared and Ranveer was unconscious’’
Shivaay ‘’No…….i am expecting something of this sort to happen …….
1. Kamini wantedly as per their plan dragged Mahi out……

2. Ranveer followed……
3. You said Mahi turned towards you all and by that Ranveer also turned back…..
4. It was okay as you hid down, but did you see Ohri’s interiors are decorated with Mirrors……..so ranveer might have seen you all and Khanna in mirror….
5. To stop you from coming he might have pulled a chair and placed it on the way……
6. Since your eyes are on them , his assessment was either you or Anika or Rudra might get hit by it and fall down…that gives him time to complete his work……

7. I guess bade papa was in the lobby area of Ohri’s …..it was obvious for any person who keeps an eye to turn back being unnoticed , Bade papa might have also turned his back…..Ranveer might have taken advantage of this and should have either pushed , jerked, collided or injured bade papa……else why did bade papa take time to leave from there….
8. Later he might have given chloroform to Khanna and since bade papa was going to get up he acted as if he was also given chloroform…….so that he can be out of suspicion….
‘’

Rudra ‘’God perfect plan…and we couldn’t imagine his brain’’
Shivaay ‘’Every Perfect plan has a loophole and he too left a loophole’’
Om ‘’what do you mean?’’
Shivaay ‘’by running away from Hospital, he gave us a major signal of being involved in all this had he been here I wouldn’t have ever suspected Kamini and Ranveer and thought about someone else……that’s the reason Om I did not believe Bade papa was involved right from the beginning………’’
Shivaay ‘’Khanna…track Ranveer …….he must not slip out of our hands’’

Soon after that Khanna left towards some place in his vehicle tracking Ranveer……
Shivaay wanted to talk to staff who attended Tej….he was moving inside the hotel when he received a call to Anika’s mobile…..

He lifted the call and listened with frowned eyebrows …he was shocked ……..and in anger was about to throw her mobile to break when Om held his hand and stopped………
Om ‘’Shivaay …whose call is it’’
Shivaay looked in anger towards Om and Rudra………’’It’s Bade Papa’s ’’…………

WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY ZAVEESHA / TANZEELA …..WISHES ON BEHALF OF ALL THE READERS OF THIS FF AND THIS EPISODE TO YOU ON YOUR SPECIAL DAY

Precap : Truth is finally out !!!

So this was the twenty third part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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85 Comments
  1. Awesome, amazing ,fabulous di. Plz post next ASAP. ??

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much DWET….thanks a lot…next episode i have to edit it…it will take time but per day an episode is guaranteed…..

  2. Dhar

    Omg so much of happenings in a single episode, plzz plzz do post the next episode ASAP

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dhar…yes i put lot of happenings in single episode….next episode under editing stage….so will take time but as i said i promise to post one episode every day till this FF gets completed

  3. Very nice i think tej will help them please update soon ?????

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Komal ….let’s see what’s in store for us…i haven’t yet decided how to mould Tej’s character …hope however i mould his character you all will like it

  4. I’m literally shocked and surprised….??Thanks a lot dear Harika di…i don’t know what to say… I’m feeling very very happy….glad that u saw comment on astha di ff and mention me in ur ff… I’m feeling very blessed to be here on TU…i was surprised seeing my name and the msg…Thanks a lot…??

    1. VHM

      i am glad to know you felt happy…birthdays are always special …making someone feel special on their special day is also a special feeling …so for a special person like you this is a special surprise……you are always welcome dear……

      1. Thanks for so special special special feelings… feeling too blessed…

  5. Anujohnson

    OMG you will again kill ms by this suspense..post next part ASAP

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Anu…so enetering into OS competition…all the best dear

      1. Anujohnson

        Thank you di!!!! Do you know Malayalam???? If yes then me too Chechi..I am a malayalee..

      2. VHM

        Hey Anu….i donno Malayalam …i am a Telugite from Andhrapradesh and Telangana

  6. Rasika

    Woww a khidkitod episode [in Anika’s language ] Awsm …post next epi asap

    1. VHM

      Thank you for your khidkitodh opinion Rasika….thanks a lot…next episode i will try to write it as soon as possible …and then upload it as soon as possible…

  7. Niriha

    O my god di unexpected twist wow awesome very interesting di loved it but feeling bad for anika I hope all will be settled here after and shivay is really a smart singh oberoi the way he got to know ranveer and kamini plan was awesome eagerly waiting for next part di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha….i am so happy mainly because after reading your opinion i am getting a feeling like i am making readers involved in the story…that’s something every writer would first wish for…i hope i am not wrong n getting this opinion……next part very soon , as i am still writing the track and editing it parallelly

  8. Nd about the episode is was as awesome and fabulous as always… I’m very very happy ND don’t know what to say…again thank u soo much… Without knowing me soo much you dedicate a episode for me..so sweet of u… I was waiting for my friends wishes but unfortunately they have not wished me till now..well everytime they foget…but no worry..ur wish made my day…love u…?????all my best wishes r with u di..???

    1. VHM

      Thanks a lot Zaveesha…no need to thank so much…had i known personally i would have bought a gift for you…but i know you through TU so thought to wish you through the episode…..friends are friends right…it’s okay if they forget to wish you on your birthday what is most important is they should not forget you for what you as a person are…OMG i am speaking a lot today….

      WISH YOU TOO lkOADS OF LUCK, HEALTH, WEALTH AND PROSPERITY…MAY YOU CELEBRATE MANY MORE SUCH WONDERFUL BIRTHDAYS

      1. Aww so sweet of u…
        Yeah frndz r very special…I am not angry on them as I know them very well…not wishing me bday will not effect our frndship…my frndz r my world and my life…
        Ndd again a last thanks for ur wishes…

    2. Gayathri.visu

      Hi Zaveesha.
      I know its very late but still I want to say something, HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR…. MAY GOD BLESS U DEAR.. HOPE U ENJOYED UR DAY! KEEP SMILING…. TAKE CARE DEAR.

      1. Hi…no problem dear..Thanks a ton for ur wishes…
        My wishes r also with u…

  9. Awesome episode akka suspence tattukolekapothunnanu waiting for the next pls….asap..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much talli…..next episode varaku wait cheyali…please endukante next episode inka ready avvaledhu…in process ee inka

  10. Fantabulous di…
    I expected something of this sort as per your precap.
    But couldn’t get the last part,I mean is tej really involved in all this.
    Post next soon.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Madhuani….is Tej really involved …right now i was writing his scenes so i will reveal his original character in next episode probably…..cannot confirm now

  11. Di 1 question is pricking me continuously n so I’m asking u sorry for this but I couldn’t resist myself from doing so.
    CAN SOMEONE LOVE A PERSON TO THIS EXTENT THAT THEIR LIFE IS DEPENDENT ON THEM?
    I hope u get what I mean

    1. VHM

      Hey Madhuani…..

      First let me answer you in accordance with real life…….i really donno the answer for this if the relation is between a boy friend and girl friend, a husband and wife……but i definitely know the answer when it comes to mother and kid and/or father and kid…..

      If you ask me personally MY FATHER LOVES ME SO MUCH THAT HIS HEARTBEAT SLOWS DOWN IMMENSLY IF I DON’T TALK TO HIM FOR A SINGLE DAY…….BY THE WAY HE IS HEART PATIENT …SO YOU CAN ASSESS THE OUTCOME !!!

      Coming to fiction specifically Shivaay and Anika……..as per what we have seen in real IB , Whenever Shivaay is in some problem Anika gets to know or whenever Anika is in some problem Shivaay gets to know……in this episode i have used the same logic……it just shows how much Anika is in love with Shivaay without ever confessing her love to him ….it’s just to show Anika’s love indirectly for Shivaay…….and in the same episode i have shown Shivaay’s belief on his love Anika that she will come back when he fulfills her happiness to get his identity and family back……that’s why he left her unattended and went to search for Mahi…..

      Keeping all this aside….Love is such a feeling which can’t be explained it needs to be felt…and how much you love will decide your dependency ……

      too long a post …i hope i am clear or to say i could attempt to clarify your doubt

      1. Thank you di.
        For explaining me this in such a way
        I truly got what u wanted to explain.
        Yeah my doubt got clarified.

  12. Nida

    What i have read just now is beyond words…. you are just incredibly awesome i guess no one take your place what u have made in my heart ❤️….. when u just update it and if i don’t comments on it i fell like some important part that of my life is remaining… and when i does i just get soo much peace ✌️

    1. VHM

      Hey thank you so much Nida…please don’t give my place to anyone…not even to YOUR SHIVAAY ….truly speaking i will not feel like uploading a shot until i see your opinion posted…i get the much needed strength to post the next episode only after reading your opinion…from the way you write your comment i can understand to what extent you have liked the episode …….and i don’t get tired saying you are the first friend i have made outside whom i have never seen ,never met and don’t know anything about…it’s just a beautiful friendship based on the way we post opinions to each other and so it’s very special ……….

  13. Wonderful episode….so interesting?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much for the Honeylicious comment dear Honey…thanks a lot

  14. omg! omg! u r killing me with lot of suspense.
    mind blowing and good going

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ramya…suspense will end tomorrow…please bear with me for today…thanks a lot again

  15. OMG!!!!! I don’t know I ur thinking is outstanding…….It’s really good……Can’t able to wait for next part

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ayissha….my thinking is not so outstandind dear…i a just a normal writer …next part tomorrow definitely..

  16. Katz

    Superb yaar… great going …. iam all confused what is tej doing there?… what will happen to anika… Waiting for the result as nervous as hell….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Katz….thanks a lot….most of your questions will be answered in tomorrow’s episode …i hope i can satisfy the expectations of readers from this FF….now i am nervous about the verdict after i post next episode ….big test as i am gonna portray the truth …and hope you all will like it………

  17. Ashwinee

    Seriously di this update is not less than an action+adventure movie. You just nailed it . And many more happy returns of the day zaveesha / tanzeela

    1. VHM

      Awee… thank you so much Ashwinee…i hope i didn’t miss any logic in writing the scenes…thanks a lot once again for the awesome compliment.

    2. Thanks a lot dear…

  18. Hiii dii…. How are you…
    Your writing skills is awesome dii…. I loved your updates…. It is superbbbbbb… Shivika ka pyar… Unbelievable…..
    And at least please forgive me…. Maine aapko mothers day wish nhi kiye or aap os competition m second aaye uske liye congrats nhi kiye..
    Mere mind se ye sab skip ho gya tha…

    1. VHM

      Hey Nikita…
      Trust me while coming from my class i was remembering you….and then i saw your opinion…i was excited……..

      I am doing good dear…how are you ?

      Thank you so much Nikita..i know you like mysteries and i am like writing the same…once i settle the raita that has failainged …Shivika ka pyaar will reach peaks….

      Well i was not second i was fifth in OS competition…..thank you for the wishes…Thank you for the mother’s day wishes too….no problem dear i know your wishes will always be with me.

      How’s Varanasi and how are you ?

    2. Hi r u from Varanasi??…
      I’m also from Varanasi…

  19. Nitestar

    Awesome episode…fantastic plot…pls post next part soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nitestar…thanks a lot…next episode work going on…will post an episode everyday till the completion….

  20. Wow dear today’s episode was fantastic awesome mind blowing…. Ur great…. Exciting for the next part… Post it soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya….thanks a lot…no dear i am not at all great …it’s just your support …next shot work going on….will post an episode everyday till completion

  21. Awesome…..
    Full of Emotions…Felt really bad for Anika….
    Hope everything gets settled soon….
    Waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot…Anika’s further track is also not decided ….hope everything settles in best possible way else i know chameli’s are sure to be thrown on me

  22. I don’t want to say more, only one question. Can you update the next part today? If not When will you update tomorrow?

    1. VHM

      Thank you for posting your opinion Shivika….
      Answering your question is a bit difficult at this time, as i am writing the episode currently and trying to make it more acceptable ….

      But for sure before 12:30 PM IST ..that’s before tomorrow afternoon 12:30 i will upload and then whenever admin makes it available in the portal is not in my hands…..

  23. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot….3 words to 2 words…Sinusoidal wave falling phase

  24. Haridhra

    Amazingly written ka…. Hats off to u r brain how can u think n coordinate so well n perfect … Post next Asap ka.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Haridhra aka author Haridhra……thanks a lot dear…i hope i will coordinate the shot also properly

      1. Haridhra

        I too hope so ka … It’s taking lot of time I not able shape the story properly .. N Tnq so much that’s a sweet compliment..?

  25. Really mind blowing episode……uff yeh suspense…..can’t wait for the update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Komal…….suspense revealed in next shot….i am uploading the next part now

  26. That was a khidkitod episode. Lived it. Am looking forward to next part

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much fffann1234………thanks a lot…next shot i am uploading now

  27. Amazing update just beyond words….???

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Muskan…thanks a lot

  28. Nithu

    di im just out of words…………need to find new words from dictionary to praise you

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nithu….thanks a lot…if you find new words to praise me from dictionary then help me finding new words to thank you from the same dictionary…love you loads dear….

  29. Hie awesome
    post soon
    waiting for next update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Harshita…thanks a lot…i am uploading next shot now

  30. Gayathri.visu

    Hi di. I know u r waiting for my comment! But I m really very upset. Thats why this much late. But trust me di after reading this part I felt bit relaxed.

    OUTSTANDING N MINDBLOWING part di. Shivika’s love each other is beyond words!! And Shivaay’s those points…HATS OFF TO U DI!! Eagerly waiting for next part di. If my

    And about book, I m damn serious and I hope one day I will get ur hard copy di!!

    Take care n bye di!! Love u soooooo much di….

    1. Gayathri.visu

      *If my guess is right, I m very happy. But its not right then I m very happy di.

    2. VHM

      Hi Gayathri,

      All good? i donno why were you upset but every time takes away all tensions …so have patience…

      Thank you for letting me know by reading this episode you felt lite…thank you so much for those awesome words too…

      I hope i fulfill your wish …….

      Your guess might turn right if you are thinking the same as i am planning to write….

      Take care, bye and love you tooo darling…keep smiling

  31. Wow di!!!!! as always AMAZING update…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita……..thanks a lot…i will be uploading next shot now…so by tomorrow morning i think it will be in portal

  32. Awesome episode di?…
    Post soon ?.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sofiya…thanks alot…..yeah next shot i am uploading now…it will be very soon in portal…

  33. VHM dear, sooo sry for not commenting your previous page..
    But as always it is khidkitod. ..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arpita ……no worries dear…..it happens and i can understand busy schedules…….thanks a lot again dear…..

  34. Aashi26

    Again didi you blew up my mind….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi……..thanks a lot

  35. Navz

    Dii…uffffffff…dimma thirigipoindi naaku…(cinematic style) haha…nijanga assalu kamini ranveer plan highlight ante motham daaniki counter plan anni raasini nuvvu …noo words to describe..the way u r writing ..planning all sequences..mind blowing…THE BEST i shld say.
    Assalu nenu 2 parts kalipi 24 th may update lo comment cheddam anukunna..kaani intha supeeb part chadivaka agaaleka ikkada comment chesa…assalu entha nachindante naaku anni telugu words vastunnay comment cheyyadaniki..excellent.

    1. VHM

      Hey chotii,,

      Asalu intha pogidesthunaventi ? naaku antha scene ledhamma chotii….ha ha ha plan counterplan edi preplanned kadhu ala marcha anthe…..Thank you so much chelli……thanks a lot…nuvvu happy kada …adi annitikante important…..

      thank you chala opikaga rendu episodes ki nee opinion post chesinanduku…….so i hope vacche episodes kuda neeku nacchuthayani anukuntuna…….kada mana basha lo manam matladukunte asalu aa kickke verappa …aah.aaaa

  36. Jerry_36

    Sorry, sorry, sorry, bacche ki love jaan kya?, I am extremely sorry di. You know I am falling in love with your writing skills. You are exceptionally awesome and a wonderful didi.
    The episode was amazing as usual. Omg, shivaay behaved so cold with anika, feeling so bad for her. Hope she recovers soon. And the way you wrote is too good *impressed*
    Keep writing. Love you❤

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Jerry…you took your time out of busy schedules and read the episode then posted your opinion too…love you too vedika…..

  37. first of all WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY ZAVEESHA / TANZEELA and this episode was good i mean very good but hope Tej is not behind Mahi’s kidnap i felt bed for Anika the way Shivaay behaved with Anika now waiting to know the truth

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shona..thanks a lot…i am sorry for posting my response so late…but by now i am sure you got to know everything

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