THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 19– THE TURNING POINT

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

————————–OBEROI MANSION, MUMBAI, MAHARASTRA

Jhanvi picked up the phone to call Omkara but she didn’t call…
Gauri ‘’Maaji, why are you not dialing’’
Jhanvi ‘’I will go and meet Om, he will be much happy by this’’
Jhanvi left towards Oberoi Industries

——————-OMAKARA’S CABIN , OBEROI INDUSTRIES

Jhanvi knocked the door of Om’s cabin and heard a voice ‘’Come in ‘’
She stepped in and Om lifted his head to look who has come……..he stood in shock …and tears paved their way out……he ran to her and hugged her…….
Jhanvi too reciprocated the hug………Om cried his heart out…..Jhanvi pacified him….
Om ‘’Mom…you have forgiven me right? I am sorry mom…I am really sorry ‘’
Jhanvi ‘’no more crying Om ….i am sorry to trouble you…but I never left trust on my upbringing…and you proved me right…gauri explained me everything…I am proud of you Om…I am really proud of you’’
Om ‘’no mom…you were right I was becoming like Tej Oberoi…..your this punishment reminded me to not go in his way’’

Jhanvi ‘’Om ….today I will say something which I could not say during all these days……before being your mother I am a woman and I cannot allow my bahu to go through the same pain…so I had to do this…you need to respect every relation you make else you will lose your roots’’
Om’’ I will always remember this mom…thank you so much’’ he hugged her again…..
Om ‘’are you happy now mom…..everything is getting sorted now…Mr.Tej Oberoi has also apologised to you…I hope he keeps up his promise’’
Jhanvi ‘’I am happy he is changing for good but forgiving him is not so easy for me…..it will take time Om …. i just patched up with him , because everyone needs a chance…….so let’s wait to see whether he changed really or not’’

Om ‘’I was also thinking the same …..’’
Tej was coming to meet Om and stopped listening to Om and Jhanvi’s conversation
Jhanvi ‘’you know what Om …I will completely forgive Tej and accept him happily on the day he brings back Shivaay and Anika with respect and gives them their place in Oberoi house…till then I will be just Jhanvi not Jhanvi Tej Singh Oberoi’’
Om ‘’ if that day occurs I will accept him as my father wholeheartedly and will call him ‘’PAPA’’ instead of Mr.Tej……..i really wish…I really wish that day comes’’

Tej listened to their conversation and left from there…….their conversation was ringing in his ears…….
Jhanvi ‘’I want to talk to Shivaay once and thank him……infact I want to apologise on behalf of Tej too…it’s the minimum I can do’’
Om ‘’mom, I will make you talk in the evening…….infact we all will talk to him and I promise… you will see him too…we make a video call…by the way Dadi and Prinku are with him..i think Gauri must have said this but still I wanted to share this happiness with you……..sorry mom now I need to rush to resolve the workers issue..it’s urgent’’ he bent to take blessings from Jhanvi…..
Jhanvi blessed him and kissed his forehead and wished him all the best…………

———–Om resolved the workers issue by using the 1 & 2 nd points of business said by Shivaay ……..Rudra and Shakthi were successful in signing the MoU with the newly formed states..soon they started up their business……Tej & Mr. Gogoi started the Restaurant business amicably..the restaurant was branded as ‘’GOBE’’…..Shivaay passed on his ideas to Gogoi and Tej listening to his ideas was getting even more doubtful as he knew it was similar to the way Shivaay dealt….however he brushed away his thoughts……….Oberoi Industries was getting back to it’s original form from the state of destruction………Dadi and Prinku came back to their home……..

Prinku was being welcomed warmly by Tej and Jhanvi……Tej’s family was getting stronger…however nothing changed for Shakthi and Pinky…….Shakthi was happy for Tej , but he was missing Shivaay terribly and was constantluy searching for Kamini…Pinky lost all hopes …it was getting much for her and she couldn’t bear the punishment anymore….3 months passed by and Om, Rudra, Jhanvi, Sumo , Gauri , Dadi, Prinku regularly spoke to Shivaay and Anika without letting Pinky, Tej and Shakthi known………………..

———————3 MONTHS LATER, KALYANI VILLA, Shillong, Meghalaya

Anika ‘’shivaay , get up, fast, you promised to come with me today’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika let me sleep’’
Anika ‘’ohh God this used to be my dialogue and now this Bhagad billa is doing what I used to and I am doing what he used to’’
Anika brought a bucket of water and splashed it on Shivaay……….

Shivaay ‘’what the wuck ‘’ he screamed
Mahi and Sahil rushed towards their room and were laughing seeing Shivaay’s state…….Anika held her waist and saw him angrily
Shivaay ‘’Anika is this the way to wake some one up’’
Sahil ‘’Jiju, thank her she threw fresh water had she been more angry she would have thrown mud water…ha ha ha ha’’
Shivaay ‘’actually you are right…i…I will go and get freshened up’’ he got up remembering his previous encounters
Mahi ‘’Anika you are …you are really impossible..you seriously did this…’’

Anika ‘’yes…you know what… Water has an important role to play in our lives because it all started with throwing water’’
Sahil ‘’Please Anika didi don’t start your water story again…..’’
Anika ‘’okay fine..i am leaving…come down for breakfast …then I need to rush for my work …and today your jiju will help me in my work’’
Mahi ‘’Shivaay …helping…you…that too in your event management company…….sounds crazy’’
Anika ‘’hmmm…he should..why does it sound crazy ? didn’t I help you in your work ?’’
Mahi ‘’off course yes …but how did he agree…’’
Anika ‘’he will… if I say…after all I am his only wife ‘’ she spoke while twirling her loose hair……..
Shivaay cleared his throat to bring Anika to normalcy……
Sahil ‘’ohh God …I forgot to do my homework….i can’t eat now…I will first complete my homework and then rush to school else my teacher will kill me with her looks’’

Shivaay ‘’is she so hot’’
Anika ‘’why do you want to know she is hot or not…kya irada hain aapka?’’
Shivaay ‘’someone is jealous …great…but…don’t misunderstand me Anika…I thought if she is hot then I will get her married to Mahi…Sahil’s problem will be solved and you will have a friend to accompany you and I will be saved from helping you’’
Sahil and Shivaay gave hifi to each other

Mahi spilled the water from his mouth after listening to Shivaay’s words…….
Sahil ‘’that’s a great idea Jiju..’’ he turned towards Mahi and said ‘’Mahi jiju…please marry her…you know she is the most irritating lady…a bit aged too…and she wears glasses…her eyes are small like ants and …..‘’
Anika ‘’stop it Sahil…you should respect your teachers and what’s this way of speaking about teacher’’

Sahil ‘’sorry Anika didi..i was just describing her as I want Mahi jiju to know how she looks’’
Mahi folded his hands and said ‘’Sahil…mere pyare sahil…please don’t describe any more..i can understand how hot she is ..and now I am leaving…’’ he ran from there……..
Anika , Shivaay and Sahil sat there….While Sahil was doing homework Anika fed him breakfast…Shivaay was smiling happily seeing them and he remembered OmRu ……
Mahi came and picked up sahil to drop to school and said he will meet Shivaay at S.A.M.S……..
Anika turned to go and Shivaay pulled her hands and made her sit in his lap……….
Anika ‘’Shivaay leave me…someone will see us’’

Shivaay ‘’Anika no one will see …no one is there in house…it’s time to…. ‘’
Anika ‘’cheapde kahike’’
Shivaay ‘’ohh Doubt kumari …stop your thoughts there…I was about to say that it’s time to make you eat breakfast and you were thinking…’’
Anika shied
Shivaay ‘’you were thinking I am going to romance with you? Not bad Anika…not bad at all…so shall I fulfil what you were thinking’’

Anika ‘’no thank you…Romantic Singh’’
Shivaay fed her the breakfast and they both got readied and locked the house and were about to leave…….when Shivaay received a call
Shivaay ‘’Hello Mahi, what happened …why did you call?’’
Mahi ‘’Shivaay, come down to office there is something important waiting for you’’
Anika looked at him
Shivaay ‘’something important…but what?’’
Mahi ‘’Letter’’
Shivaay ‘’Mahi will you say clearly’’

Mahi ‘’it’s something important so you both come down to S.A.M.S first’’ he ended the call
Shivaay ‘’okay’’
Anika ‘’what happened Shivaay?’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika I donno… we have got an letter and Mahi asked us reach S.A.M.S first’’
Anika ‘’fine we will go there’’
Shivaay ‘’but your work’’

Anika ‘’we have time Shivaay, I will manage, but let’s go to S.A.M.S now’’
Mahi POV ‘’Shivaay has achieved so much and this letter is an additional mark for his achievements…but will Shivaay accept and agree…I don’t think so…how to convince him…can Anika do so….this will make his reputation brighter and make him stand out among others……I wish he accepts this’’
Shivaay and Anika reached S.A.M.S and they stepped into Mahi’s cabin…….Mahi was in deep thoughts
Shivaay ‘’Mahi..are you okay?’’
Mahi came out of his thoughts and said
Mahi ‘’Shivaay we need to go to Mumbai’’
Shivaay looked at Anika and said ‘’what are you saying?’’
Mahi handed over the Letter………Shivaay opened it tensely………..
It read as
‘’
Dear Mr.Shivaay,
As you might be aware that, we have decided to organise the much awaited conference about the futuristic business model for all the restaurateurs …we are this writing this letter to bring to your notice that the date has been finalised…it would be held on next Monday in GOBE INTERNATIONAL RESTAURANT Pvt.Ltd, Mumbai , India…….. this conference would see all the best and leading restaurateurs from India as well as various parts of world…..we see this as an great opportunity to put Indian food and hospitality once again on the global platform as well as to increase our reach to different parts of world….….

We have got confirmation from the food and agriculture ministry office that Mumbai Food and agriculture minister would inaugurate the ceremony…..
we were in quest to who would lead the conference…….so our committee members have travelled throughout India and recommended few names of persons who were the best to lead this conference and I am glad to inform you that your name was also there …

So we thought of validating all the candidates without their notice for the same…..from past three months our various committee members have been visiting your restaurant as guests and without your notice had been validating you, as well as other competing restaurateurs on basis of service, food, ambience, hospitality, achievements and other aspects………

We are glad to inform that
After a lot of discussion and voting we have choosen YOU , Mr.Shivaay to lead the conference….we will be honoured if you would agree with us….
As we have less time we request you to respond to us as soon as possible……This will give an opportunity to showcase your talent on international level and would benefit for your future endeavours…based on your response we would send the invite to all the members attending the conference…..
Awaiting your response eagerly !!!

Director,
Indian International Restaurateurs Organisation,
Mumbai, India

‘’

Shivaay and Anika completed reading ………Shivaay looked tensed and Anika smiled……..Mahi was also happy but he understood the fix in which Shivaay was going through………..
Anika looked at both of them and took the letter ………she then got what was worrying him……..and she became sad…….
Anika went to Shivaay and spoke
Anika ‘’Shivaay so what have you decided ?’’

Shivaay looked at her ‘’Anika you know I cannot go there…it’s not possible for me and the reason you know very well’’
Anika ‘’this time you are going Shivaay, and I want you to go…till when will you hide..today or tomorrow Tej uncle will come to know about you…you have to face Pinky aunty and Shakthi uncle too….’’
Shivaay ‘’I will try not to go there until I can avoid the situations….. I don’t care about any business …..with whatever I have I am satisfied…I have you both and Sahil with me…’’
Anika ‘’then what about your happiness’’

Shivaay ‘’I am happy who said I am not?’’
Anika ‘’I know you are happy with us… but , you too know you will be completely happy when you are with your family…remember three months ago when OmRu left how you broke down…remember what you said…you said you want them to stay with you forever…when Dadi and Prinku were leaving you tried your maximum to stop them…Shivaay your soul is there …there… with your family with whom you grew up …so you must go…face them……’’

Shivaay was looking at her………
Mahi ‘’Shivaay …Anika is right…I donno whether to say this or not…but Pinky ji has also suffered a lot till now…’’
Shivaay stood up in anger …
Mahi ‘’please Shivaay listen to me once’’

Shivaay ‘’no…not a word about her …what she did was something no woman can ever think of doing…for that I will not forgive her’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay…Pinky aunty ji has suffered a lot till now…I know she did wrong but when you have asked Om to make peace with Tej uncle …then I think you must make peace with Pinky aunty too’’
Shivaay ‘’you are saying this Anika?’’

Anika ‘’yes, I am saying this …you are not going to Mumbai for two reasons…one because of Tej uncle and second because of Pinky aunty ji……..i will not talk about Tej uncle today because we got to know he is changing for good…but Pinky aunty’s state is worst ..no one cares for her…you don’t care, shakthi uncle doesn’t care…she did a mistake and she did it because of her love for you….and for that mistake you have punished her for an year and three months …but you forgot she brought you up …today whatever you are you owe a major share to her ….and this even you cannot deny……’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika please ..i don’t want to listen all these’’
Anika ‘’why because these are truth’s…listen Shivaay that day you gave a long snake type, what is that called ‘’ she looked towards Mahi…

Mahi kept a question mark face
Shivaay ‘’Anaconda’’
Anika ‘’haa wahi …that day you gave Anaconda type lecture about the mistakes committed by all of us to Om and today you are not following your own words….this is wrong…’’
Shivaay was in thoughts as he knew what Anika was saying is correct , his mood was getting disturbed , Anika tried to speak but
Shivaay got irritated and screamed ‘’ok fine …I will go…but on two conditions’’
AniHi ‘’what?’’

Shivaay ‘’I have to face bade papa as this conference is in his Hotel , but you both…remember you both will not ask me to meet my bought up parents and second we will not go to Oberoi mansion till we are in Mumbai……if you agree I will else we will not discuss about this further…’’
Anika and Mahi winked at each other and said ‘’YES…Conditions Accepted’’
Shivaay looked at them suspiciously and all three hugged smilingly…………

Precap : The Clash

So this was the nineteenth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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74 Comments
  1. Oh wow!!! The exciting part starts… ??Damn eager to read the next part now.. Super epi..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sam …thanks a lot…next episode very soon

  2. Arwa Qutubuddin

    I think it was the best one i have ever read so plz keep it up and ya i want to suggest that i want more obros scenes if you can do it and happiness is must needed so plz try if you can
    I m a shivika fan so little mean about them

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arwa Qutubuddin…you will get more Obro scenes in the coming episodes…as i said many times i cannot forcefully include any scenes …everything will go on with the flow…..i understand Shivika scenes are in demand ……i will try my best to match your expectations…thanks a lot again for the suggestions……..

  3. Nida

    Woooooo …. i just loved it you don’t have any idea how much i am waiting for your updates nowadays .. I can’t even wait …this is terribly awesome ?? waiting for the next press conference

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nida…..thats’ so nice of you to say such amazing words for me and this FF…i will post the next part very soon…i promise everyday an episode will be posted without fail till the end of this FF…however busy i might be……Press conference is a bit far …..before that something else is coming up which you will get to know in next episode…eagerly waiting for your reaction on the next episode as and when you read

  4. Nithu

    loved it

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nithu…

  5. Arwa Qutubuddin

    I think it was the best one i have ever read so plz keep it up and ya i want to suggest that i want more obros scenes if you can do it and happiness is must needed so plz try if you can
    I m a shivika fan so little mean about them
    Hope u don’t feel something negative in this comment waiting for next update

    1. VHM

      Hey thanks again…and no i didn’t find anything negative…suggestions are always welcome and it will definitely help me improve my writing skills and cater the expectations of readers too…

  6. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dii…. Anaconda type lecture is so funny… Lots of love and care dii…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nikita…he he thank you…lots of love and care to you too

  7. BAVATHARINI BABU

    It’s really Awesome di, I just loved it.
    Now I just want to tell you something that I never read a story book second time, even though if it’s my favorite but your ff changed me. I really dunno how many times i have read your ff and it’s simply awesome.

    1. VHM

      Hey Bavatharini babu….this is such a huge compliment for me…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…you made my day….

  8. amazing episode…… please post next part as soon as possible
    I really cant wait for next episode…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aishwarya…next part i guess it’s inthe portal already…i will wait for the reaction from you

  9. AWESOME SUPERB???

    VHM you are a AMAZING writer keep it up?????

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF…thanks a lot

  10. Haridhra

    This part was nice ka… N Shivika romance was epic , so waiting 4 next epi..?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Haridhra…thanks a lot…next part in the portal

  11. Dhar

    A perfect episode with a pinch of humour, loved it yaar, plzzzz do post the next update ASAP ?????????

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dhar…thanks a lot…next part up in the portal ..i can see it

  12. Ashwinee

    finally everything is going on track and even i liked that anaconda part , now waiting for THE CLASH di.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashwinee…yeah clash is on cards …next part you will know what clash i am referring to

      1. Ashwinee

        I got to know di.!!!

      2. VHM

        Superr…so happy and satisfied or not ?

  13. Alekhika20

    Amazing pary

    1. VHM

      Thanks a lot Alekhika…i am wondering whether you will ever write beyond two words for me…i am really trying hard dear…but you are strict teacher …but i will not give up too….

      1. VHM

        Ohh i just saw your opinion in previous episode and i was pinching myself…you posted one more line and i was smiling, jumping and my husband was watching me like whta had happened to me..i am saying truth…thank you so much this was the best thing that happened to me today…so thanks again

  14. Oh wow yaar awesome… Excited for the next episode…… Post it soon dear

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya…next aprt up in the portal…i am also awaiting your response

  15. Amazing episode di ?..
    I’m eagerly waiting for the next chapter since the precap is quite interesting….
    Or I should say the most awaited moment….
    And you mentioned the letter like a pro?
    Post soon di ?….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sofiya…next episode up in the portal…awee thank you for specifying about the letter ..i am so happy

  16. Arthi

    Finally they are heading towards Mumbai……I hope nothing turns upside down…….want to know what will be Tej reaction……….and sry didi couldn’t comment on last part…….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arthi for posting your opinion…yes they are heading towards Mumbai now…let’s see what’s in store for all of us…even i have no preplanned thoughts….no worries dear i can understand the schedules might have been tight …so never mind…

  17. Niriha

    Fabulous di…..sahil,mahi ,shivay scene was awesome eagerly waiting for next part di I’m very excited to read next part

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha…awee i am glad you liked it…next part up in the portal

  18. Fabulous di. Post next ASAP.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much dwet….next part up in the portal

  19. Its a mindblowing update
    loved the way AniHi made Shiv understand
    want to know MaIka’s khurafhaati plan
    update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi…yah you would come to know their plan in next episodes…next part up in the portal

  20. Awesome akka chala chala bagundi waiting for the next..

    1. VHM

      Thank you talli…next part already upload ayyindi…so happy reading…

  21. Hi vhm …. this is the one of the best version of ishqbaaz ff I have ever read. Especially last three episodes…. you give us a new angle to the story…. fantabulous…… Waiting for the next episode…..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Katz….thanks a lot…actually i am literally short of words to thank you…the way you are encouraging me to do good work is commendable…keep supporting me so that i can end the FF in a way that readers will remember the FF if not me……..

  22. Navz

    Asusual lines frm me..superb part dii..loved d way anika and mahi tried to convince shivay.shivay’s conditions are expected ..wanna see wat gonna happen!!
    Last two days i couldnt comment more.
    My wishes and love is travelling to u..take good care of them???gn dii.

    1. VHM

      hey Chotii….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am glad you are liking the plot and the way every charcyer is dealing with other…no problem dear , i understand it happens because of your schedules…so never mind and loads of luck , best wishes and love to you too chotii

  23. Amazing di….post soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…next part up in the portal

  24. Was totally speechless while reading this update. Fantabulous… Looking forward to next part…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much fffan1234….thanks a lot…next part up in the portal

  25. Wow!!!!! Harika di(i hope u don’t mind) it’s Superbb!!! As usual….. Luvit… Eagerly waiting 4 nxt one….

    1. VHM

      Hey Banita..no i don’t mind…thanks a lot dear…next part in the portal …waiting for your reaction

  26. Amayaa

    After complete 1 week
    I m able to comment on my 1 of de favourite ff
    So get ready for de longesttttttttttttt comment ever received after all
    Amayaa is commenting after so many stressful days so it must be a long one
    Thank God I m reading all de previous parts all together otherwise
    Waiting for a whole day to know about PRECAP fully my gangaram was surely been done
    From de MISSION GAURI OMKARA to the TURNING POINT every episode is just WOW
    U justified every character well
    Now it’s time to discover new appreciating words because these words couldn’t justified its awesomeness
    But still I m using repeated words once again to disclose my overwhelming feelings
    AWESOME FABULOUS AMAZING EXCELLENT OUTSTANDING LOVELY SUPERB NICE FANTASTIC COOL ………………. THESE KINDS OF WORDS R IN NEED MUCH …………………
    I can’t forget to mention those beautiful words
    WINDOW BREAKING DOOR BREAKING ROOF BREAKING FLOOR BREAKING FLAT BREAKING ND FINALLY. ………………..BUILDING BREAKING ……………….

    Now let’s discuss about de past episodes
    The moments which pleased me much are :-
    1. Rikara confession
    2. Rumya kiss part
    3. S.A.M. ‘s complete help without any help
    4. Oberoi ‘s unison
    5. Saas bahu heart touching convo
    6. Tej ‘s p.o.v.
    7. Anihi sweet talk
    8. Office convo
    9. FIL DIL convo
    10. Shahil ‘s teacher description
    11. Nd at last off course Shivika moments

    All nd all loved de entire ff nd this all points r de most lovable points
    But these r very few among all
    I can’t mention all of them

    U R de one of my bestest ff writer / author who always left me speechless
    This all is de effect of speechlessness only
    Think if I post such a longgggggg comment in this condition then what will happen when I started speeching

    Well I must say
    I missed u nd ur ff so much that I can’t even explain
    Pkj family nd this ff
    I come here today only because of this two

    Luuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuu nd ur ff both
    ???????…………………………………………………???????

    Now tell me 1 thing
    Missed me nd my comments or not on ur ff
    Miss nahi bhi kiya hoga phir bhi kahogi miss kiya hai
    So leave it

    Okkkkkkkk okkkkkkkkk bye it’s become toooooo long
    THANK U SO MUCH DI FOR CONTINOUS SHARING OF LINKS
    CONTINUE THIS PROCESS
    WE’LL MEET AT NEXT WEEKEND
    UNTIL THEN BYE ND WHENEVER MISS ME ( I know I know it is not gonna happen but still saying ) LOOK AT MY THIS COMMENT
    U WILL REMEMBER ME ND MY SPEECHLESS COMMENTS

    ONCE AGAIN SAYING
    BUT WHAT TO DO I HAVE TO
    All de episodes break de records of its just previous episode

    1. VHM

      Hey my Chirpy Amayaa….i am so happy to see you back …my super amazing pretty queen……

      Thank you so much Amayaa for this extra long comment to compensate for the days you missed to be with me in this journey…….
      I know you wouldn’t believe even if i say i missed you…but let me prove you……..

      Before this episode was updated in the portal, Viviktha pinged me….i wrote to her that I was terribly missing Viviktha , you and Nita ….you can ask her whether i said it or not…..secondly, if i don’t remember you i wouldn’t have very strictly pinged you the links of all episodes without fail everyday……..so i hope you trust me that i missed you a lot…..

      and now the most important part ……….

      THANK YOU SO MUCH TO THE POWER OF INFINITY for the awesome words , analysis and opinions you posted in this beautiful comment…….if at all i meet you anytime by any chance i am going to gift you something very special from my side ….

      Thank you darling…keep

      1. VHM

        Keep smiling and all the best for your studies too

  27. Wow interesting thing coming up n update was awesome di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Madhuani…thanks a lot

  28. Woww…it’s awesome as usual…the way u r going towards the story is just amazing…nd the last part was also very nice…i always eagerly wait for the next part….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Zaveesha…thanks a lot…..i am so happy most of the readers are finding this FF interesting…it’s an awesome feeling to read such lines…thank you so much again…next part up in the portal

  29. Gayathri.visu

    Good morning di. This time also I m very late hai na di….. But this is my 4th attempt for to comment! Slow network n stupid phone.

    Excellent part di. After reading Jhanvi-Om’s convo I m very happy…! And I must admit, Tej also loves/likes Shivaay, but he can’t see his success bcz for him his sons future is important! So let’s wait for upcoming parts, what really Tej feels about Shivaay?

    Yahoo!! Meghalaya…… Shivika cute fight, Sahil’s that description, Mahi’s reaction…..I m soo happy di. And that letter, wonderful explanation di!! Finally Shivaay is coming back to Mumbai! Eagerly waiting for that CLASH!!!

    (And I want to say, I m really sorry di, if my comments are hurt u. That time also u r worried for my missing but what did I do, I m hurt u with my words. Sorry di, I really don’t want to hurt u. But plz don’t use those words again.)

    Take care di n I will also take care myself….. Bye di! Have a nice day……

    1. VHM

      Good afternoon Gayathri,

      ha ha ha no worries…thank you so much dear…Tej’s version is correct in his own way…i am not trying to get biased or make only one character a hero…though this FF relies on Shivika jodi mostly but i am trying to give equal stand for others too…in next episodes you will understand what i mean…

      Yeah Meghalaya was missed by many readers , i am happy that readers have accepted Meghalaya version happily…it was evident oin most of the opinions they posted…so i hadto include it but not deviating from the story line up…

      CLASH in up in the portal eagerly waiting for your reaction on that………

      which comments are you talking about? in my view and as far as i remember you have never hurt me…ohh ya when you were late once ..i was just worried for you and it’s natural right if someone who is so regular and dear gets going missed then worry is automatic and i promised that day that i will not use that word again so don’t think much about it…everything is good …

      loads of best wishes dear and take care as always…have a nice day …

  30. You rocked once again.Superb. ……VHM dear…….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arpita…thanks a lot…

  31. Aashi26

    Awesome……finally everything sorted between jhanvi and om….hope to see shivaay in OM soon…..waiting for ur next update eagerly didi…..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi26…yes everything sorted between Om and Jhanvi…Shivaay will be in Mumbai very soon but Shivaay in OM will it be possible …let’s see …as i have not preplanned about that…next update in portal already

      1. Aashi26

        What’s this didi…u forgot me I’m ur little sis aashi…i registered yesterday only….

      2. VHM

        I didn’t dear…off course you are my lil sis…

  32. Awesome….
    Shivika r adorable….
    Shivika, Maahi & Saahil scene was cute….
    waiting fr d face-off….It’s going to b interesting….
    post soon… 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot for the lines you wrote…face off soon…next part in the portal

  33. THIS WAS ALSO BEST MOM-SON PATCH-UP SHIVAY-ANIKA PANI WALI LADAI AND NOW WAITING FOR PART 20 SHIVAY TO VISIT MUMBAI HOPE SO TEJ WILL BRING SHIVAY BACK TO OBEROI MANSION WITH THE SAME RESPECT OF THE GREAT SHIVAY SINGH OBEROI PLZ POST AS SOON AS POSSIBLE

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shona…thanks a lot for letting me know that Jhanvi-om patch up was liked by you….yes Shivaay will be in Mumbai but will he be back to OM and if yes who will bring him back is again a question mark …and the answer even i don’t know……as i ahve not yet planned about that…keep reading and supporting me as i promise i will make my best to give you a worth reading episodes…….

  34. Jerry_36

    Hey Harika di !! This is outstanding. Your efforts in writing are always impressive. Shivika water fight? And the patch up?. Lovely. Post soon di. You are awesome❤

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Jerry…your comments /opinions are so wonderful that sometimes you make me fly in sky tearing apart the clouds to reach the sun ……love you loads …and you are wonderful person dear…thanks a lot………

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